Isn't Sasori part of the "Good enough" Thinker clan? If what he's doing now is working I don't think he would bother trying to improve the setup (IE, he can already do research, I'm doubtful he'll try to move it with that in mind.)
I largely agree and scrubbing our notes of moving the Rift was to avoid giving him the idea. But still, if he does move it, we have options.
 
He can literally see chakra. I assume large concentrations of chakra looks very bright to him, and runes contain lots of chakra.

If we're setting up in they sky above and he happens to glance up? He's gonna wonder what the bright spot is.

Now this is mitigated by distance and intelligence, if we can observe him sleeping. Then we can set up runes knowing we're not likely to be interrupted.
Not really? It's on the order of 60 CP per rune; that's about as much as a moderately expensive technique. Do you think he can see jutsu from a mile away? Or chakra beasts? Besides, I was under the impression that we were pretty sure he doesn't run his Sharingan all the time, because it costs chakra and he has limited reserves.
 
Not really? It's on the order of 60 CP per rune; that's about as much as a moderately expensive technique. Do you think he can see jutsu from a mile away? Or chakra beasts? Besides, I was under the impression that we were pretty sure he doesn't run his Sharingan all the time, because it costs chakra and he has limited reserves.
60CP is more than any chakra beast we have records of. It's a lot of chakra to be outside of a ninja.

The only thing brighter would be full the internal reserves of a ninja, but I don't think the Sharingan can see inside of objects.... I think it should show at a great distance. Especially as pure non-elemental chakra.

He might not use his Sharingan constantly and like I said, he certainly doesn't while he's sleeping. But I think there's a good chance he does perimeter sweeps with thr Sharingan every couple hours.

Now again, if he's regular about it we can exploit that and set up between sweeps, but not without observation runes.
 
60CP is more than any chakra beast we have records of. It's a lot of chakra to be outside of a ninja.

The only thing brighter would be full the internal reserves of a ninja, but I don't think the Sharingan can see inside of objects.... I think it should show at a great distance. Especially as pure non-elemental chakra.

He might not use his Sharingan constantly and like I said, he certainly doesn't while he's sleeping. But I think there's a good chance he does perimeter sweeps with thr Sharingan every couple hours.

Now again, if he's regular about it we can exploit that and set up between sweeps, but not without observation runes.
The chakra in a rune is inside a rune. Why is that different from chakra in a ninja being inside a ninja? (I was under the impression that the Sharingan could see people's chakra systems, but I'm wondering what's going on in your head here.)

Also, point of order, it's not more than any chakra beast we have records of. The Wakahisa koi are chakra beasts and host way more than that much chakra, in sufficiently large schools.

Edit: Also, we don't know and have no particular reason to suppose that the Sharingan's chakra sight actually works like sight in clear air, in that bright things are visible at great distances with inverse-square falloff. It could be like detecting the field from an electric dipole and have inverse-cube falloff; there could be significant scattering or noise (e.g. from environmental chakra) that makes the effective range less than the requisite mile.
 
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The chakra in a rune is inside a rune. Why is that different from chakra in a ninja being inside a ninja? (I was under the impression that the Sharingan could see people's chakra systems, but I'm wondering what's going on in your head here.)

Also, point of order, it's not more than any chakra beast we have records of. The Wakahisa koi are chakra beasts and host way more than that much chakra, in sufficiently large schools.
Any chakra beast not specifically bred to contain huge amounts of chakra :Hazoulook

Runes are transparent crystal for one. The Sharingan is stopped by things not being transparent I guess? It does seem weird that it can't see through stuff when it sees chakra but IDK.

Although we could work under heavy fabric cloaks? That's not a bad idea now that I consider.
 
A nuke only satisfies condition 2 if our timing and intelligence are good. If it just explodes while it's sitting there then it doesn't look like a random failure and Goketsu 'WMD' Hazo is high up the list of suspects.

Do non-Leaf Shinobi actually know that Hazou can make WMDs? Superchillers were covered up and only Naruto / Oro know about runes. To Itachi et al he's just a very creative paper sealer, right? Most lethal Hazou invention they know about is skyslicers.
 
Do non-Leaf Shinobi actually know that Hazou can make WMDs? Superchillers were covered up and only Naruto / Oro know about runes. To Itachi et al he's just a very creative paper sealer, right? Most lethal Hazou invention they know about is skyslicers.
I think skyslicers and skywalkers are all that the general public knows about. Knowledge about (Hazou's role in the creation of) skygliders was kept to Hazou's civilian engineering team and Asuma, personally. EM Nuke was also an Asuma-exclusive, although Kei and Shikamaru were also in on that.

However, Ami seemed to assume that Hazou was going to whip out a war-ending WMD back during Leaf's war with Rock at any point. Whether or not this assumption of competence was shared by the wider public, I'm not sure.
 
Do non-Leaf Shinobi actually know that Hazou can make WMDs? Superchillers were covered up and only Naruto / Oro know about runes. To Itachi et al he's just a very creative paper sealer, right? Most lethal Hazou invention they know about is skyslicers.
He's creative enough to create Skywalkers and Skyslicers, which Itachi attributes to having led to Nagato and Kakuzu's deaths. If Itachi gets wind of a massive explosive happening at the rift site, he's going to put Hazou at or near the top of the list, because Itachi knows a) Hazou is currently doing shit against Akatsuki, to the point where he went missing-nin to do it; b) Hazou has the reputation of being a guy who can do that shit; and c) Hazou is one of very few people who cares enough about the rift's location and therefore its significance - nobody else cares enough to burn a WMD on the place.

tl;dr Hazou has the motive, knowledge, and (historical) reputation to have plausibly nuke'd the rift site.
 
He's creative enough to create Skywalkers and Skyslicers, which Itachi attributes to having led to Nagato and Kakuzu's deaths. If Itachi gets wind of a massive explosive happening at the rift site, he's going to put Hazou at or near the top of the list, because Itachi knows a) Hazou is currently doing shit against Akatsuki, to the point where he went missing-nin to do it; b) Hazou has the reputation of being a guy who can do that shit; and c) Hazou is one of very few people who cares enough about the rift's location and therefore its significance - nobody else cares enough to burn a WMD on the place.

tl;dr Hazou has the motive, knowledge, and (historical) reputation to have plausibly nuke'd the rift site.

Not to mention that the Goketsu Clan combat SOP heavily relies on explosive tags.

Maybe, after the battle, we could bury the exploded topsoil/foliage deep underground, using earthshaping, and then use our seals/runes to fake a sealing failure? Make it look like one of the mooks decided to poke the Rift in such a way that caused it to decay in a spectacular manner?
 
[X] Cancel Microrift rune, but do something else. (Finish Ninja Radar, use other DoB track for Explosiver, research Banshee Lovers on non-DoB track)
 
... We should see if we can invent some weapons system which would take the Ninja-Radar Rune's outputs (locations of all ninja within 10 miles) and automatically initiate strikes on those locations.

An automatic RER targeting setup is the minimal viable product. It would greatly decrease the number of RERs we'll need for striking O'Uzu: the difference between "saturation bombing" and "precision bombing". In addition, it would likely ensure that nobody would be able to escape, or remain unnoticed: we wouldn't rely on Team Uplift's faulty senses that can't even see through e. g. forest canopy, we would rely on chakra-based targeting (which may be downright impossible to spoof).

If we can make the control-system feedback loops tight enough (i. e., the speed with which the system changes targeting solutions in response to the targets' movement), this should even take care of Akatsuki members flying up to us.

This setup would also then continuously keep us safe from any Akatsuki members attempting to launch a counterattack while we're doing whatever it is we're doing with the rift. If they manage to escape the initial strike, they wouldn't be able to return without risking being instagibbed:
  • The weapon sees chakra, which they may not be able to suppress at all.
  • Even if they have an esoteric invisibility-in-the-chakra-spectrum technique, they wouldn't immediately know that this weapon works this way. They may not want to risk it.
  • The weapon would have a very wide AoE, likely way beyond even Akatsuki members' attack range (since they're at the mercy of the chakra diffusion principle to a much greater extent than runes).
I would argue that a sufficiently scaled version of this may in fact be sufficient to give us O'Uzu, even if it has two (non-Konan) Akatsuki there. And I think we can be tentatively optimistic that neither Kisame nor Itachi's crows would be able to see 10 miles up, so we may be able to afford the lengthy process of assembling this right on top of O'Uzu. (Sufficiently fast-firing RERs might even be able to take Konan out, though I by-default expect that she's too multitudious for that.)

Also, one neglected option: even if our weapons have 1-mile range, we can assemble our weapons on a skytower 10-20 miles up, then just... let it slowly drift down over the course of days, and activate it once the ground is within range. Under some setups, this might work.

Though, of course, it's an open question regarding whether we can scale it enough. This would require:
  1. The Ninja-Radar Rune, specifically one that can refresh its readings at combat speeds.
  2. A "control system" rune/seal array, which interfaces with the Ninja-Radar Rune and controls Remote Explosive Runes.
  3. Remote Explosive Runes that fire faster and have a greater range (though not necessarily 10 miles).
The main unknown here is (2). This can of course be split into several seals/runes: an element that takes readings from the Ninja-Radar Rune and transforms them into targeting solutions, an element that rotates RERs, an element that activates RERs. I think there's a decent chance all of those may be "easy".

The next potential problem is (1): does the default NRR operate at combat speeds? If no, how hard is it to improve? Perhaps at the cost of range?

The last problem is how far we can actually scale RERs.
 
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The main unknown here is (2). This can of course be split into several seals/runes: an element that takes readings from the Ninja-Radar Rune and transforms them into targeting solutions, an element that rotates RERs, an element that activates RERs. I think there's a decent chance all of those may be "easy
This seems genuinely very hard, much harder than doing it manually with SCs.

Recall that Hazou has no idea how to do runic arrays, we could perhaps revisit that with increased PS, but I am not optimistic.
 
Even if they have an esoteric invisibility-in-the-chakra-spectrum technique, they wouldn't immediately know that this weapon works this way. They may not want to risk it.
Orochimaru said that Kisame at least can do this:
Overall, he follows a similar path as Jiraiya. Exceptional basic combat skills, backed up by best-in-class ninjutsu for every situation. His direct combat skills are among the best in Akatsuki, so I won't linger long on his combat ninjutsu – you may assume he has a technique suited to any situation. His sensory techniques particularly impressed me. He exceeds even me in that regard – he has near-theoretically perfect vision, hearing, and smell. He can separately sense water and chakra around him to a massive range, making him an exceptionally powerful blindfighter and exceedingly difficult to evade. Frustratingly, he can also avoid chakra sensing.

Otherwise, my main concern is that I suspect this system will not operate effectively at combat speeds. It would be amazing for an alpha strike (at least assuming Kisame has to actually activate his avoid-chakra-sensing and doesn't just have it on all the time), and worth looking into, but REs turn very slowly and I suspect making a seal-based system that tracks quickly enough would be very difficult. (Also, we'd need some way to make sure it didn't shoot at us, or fire an RE at our skytower or something similarly stupid.) We'd likely need multiple runes per target, even with Remote Landmine Explosivers, but that's manageable.
 
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This seems genuinely very hard, much harder than doing it manually with SCs.
... actually, that's a very good point. Just make the NRR provide a high-quality visualization, and use our ninja as the control system? Might require "training", i. e. buying stunts to use the system efficiently enough, but this is likely legitimately simpler.
Recall that Hazou has no idea how to do runic arrays,
We don't need runic "arrays" for that; as in, these mysterious things where a holistic rune effect is implemented on several rocks. We need a set of (separate) runes/seals that interface with each other. Consider a rune that creates an explosion and a rune that activates another rune when it hears a loud noise. I'm talking about this sort of "runic array" (though I note I didn't call it an "array", precisely to avoid confusion with the mysterious thing that Hazou doesn't know how to make).

Orochimaru said that Kisame at least can do this:
Good catch.
we'd need some way to make sure it didn't shoot at us
Trivial, I think. Discard the targets that are within 10 meters of the NRR.
 
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... actually, that's a very good point. Just make the NRR provide a high-quality visualization, and use our ninja as the control system? Might require "training", i. e. buying stunts to use the system efficiently enough, but this is likely legitimately simpler
Yes this is basically my plan, high quality observation runes for surveillance and overpowered RERs for offense, SCs man the RERs. No need for complicated targeting runes. Is limited to low dozens at most but we cannot infuse that many more runes than that in situ. This way each Hazouclone can infuse their own RER and attack very close to simultaneously.
 
Yes this is basically my plan, high quality observation runes for surveillance and overpowered RERs for offense, SCs man the RERs
I see. I'd previously failed to appreciate that your vision involved incorporating the NRR into the weapons system; I'd assumed it would just be used for initial reconnaissance. (Did I just miss the post/discussions where you outlined that? Oops.)
No need for complicated targeting runes. Is limited to low dozens at most but we cannot infuse that many runes in situ
Why not? If it's about chakra-sensing, apparently hiding from that is possible. We should spend a prep day on a rune that does it.
 
Why not? If it's about chakra-sensing, apparently hiding from that is possible. We should spend a prep day on a rune that does it.
We only have 2000 or so chakra to spend (this is assuming we don't have Leaf's support, if we do things are a lot easier) so each rune takes 50 or so and we need Nobs to have enough chakra to function. Call it a total budget of 2000 - Nobs can siphon from the team a bit.

We summon Cannai with 500 and have 1500 left for runic infusions and SC casts.

Hazou can spend 300 CP to summon 6 clones, so say he does that twice, now he can deploy 13 RERs and 5 misc runes (defensive, offensive, sensory).
I see. I'd previously failed to appreciate that your vision involved incorporating the NRR into the weapons system; I'd assumed it would just be used for initial reconnaissance. (Did I just miss the post/discussions where you outlined that? Oops.)
Why wouldn't we use it for targeting? I perhaps failed to communicate that part lol. But yes any observational runes can be used to target our RERs, Ninja-Radar is perhaps sufficient but something that provides visuals would be desirable too so we can respond to their countermeasures.
 
[X] No, go to one of Kagome's rift-sites.

On the other hand, if working with existing rifts actually just closes off the microrift research tree entirely (because why take that risk when we no longer need to?) and prevents Hazo from becoming the undisputed master of both time and space, then I'm less fine with that.
The only reason it would completely close off the research tree is if the players decide not to vote for it. And if the players are such that they wouldn't countenance the risk, then they wouldn't countenance the risk now either.

2. I don't think so. Hazo already has rift experience and veterancy doesn't seem to apply infinitely. It does seem like this is going to be a choice between micro-rifts and studying a Kagome rift for at least the medium term.
What studying a rift might teach us is how to upgrade the random microrift rune into a targeted one (the target being whatever dimension the rift we are studying is located at).
That raises a good point, for all of you voting to relocate, you plan to stay in one place until rift runes are complete, yes? That's OTOO

Rift-opener - 1 week
Rift-unanchoring - 4-6 weeks
Rift-kicker - 4-6 weeks
Rift-catcher - 6-10 weeks

So minimally 15 weeks (subjective) and on the outside 23 weeks (subjective). You guys cool with staying in one place that long? If we're gonna do that, hell, I say we research Microrift and go back to hanging out in the chakra cave. At least then we can FOOM more.
There's two alternate options. 1) We research a targeted microrift rune using whatever rift we find, which allows us to employ taylormade precautions instead of gambling on an infinite misscast table. 2) We travel in between the Kagome rifts in order to minimize the time spent at a single location.

Edit: @eaglejarl @Velorien @Paperclipped When the weird minor/benign failures that happen during research lead to living biological-ish creatures (like they have at least once) is it fair to assume that some kind of rift-event was involved?
 
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[X] Cancel Microrift rune, but do something else. (Finish Ninja Radar, use other DoB track for Explosiver, research Banshee Lovers on non-DoB track)
 
[X] Yes, push ahead with the Microrift rune

[X] No, go to one of Kagome's rift-sites.

Having a microrift-maker on hand might be useful if it turns out we're bad at moving runes and need to make a lot to practice on (instead of trekking around looking for old rifts), but they're pretty equivalent time-wise.
 
Except, no we know it's not, see the discussion on anthropics in the chapter.
Whoops, sorry, forgot to click "post"

This is not a "QM fiat says it's not," this is a "Hazō thinks the probability of high danger is lower than previously assumed." Not something we know. What we know is that no immediately world-ending rift was produced without also being sealed or the danger otherwise defeated. For all we know a very slow killer agent appeared somewhere. One of Konoha's best researchers apparently went very close to wiping out time, according to his best guesses and calculations.
The problem with gambling potentially all life in the universe is that even an infinitesimal risk gives a pretty bad expected value.
Keep in mind, with the world in the state it is, an unattended bladehorror rift could have doomed the world, just slowly. A conservative expectation of 3 bladehorrors an hour and the rift closing by itself in a month would be over 2000 of these things, quite able to whittle down the civilian population in such a way that humanity declines inexorably before sufficient ninja resources are spent finding and killing them. There already was a moment of "the world might have ended from a rift" and we solved it. If we hadn't, odds are this would already have been some sort of game over.
 
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Can anything affect talent besides QM opinion on a plan?
ponwog90: No.

Does Hazou think a Superchiller rune shielded by a minimum-size Force Dome would withstand the force of the hypertornado?
The original mechanics that we put out said that a Force Dome was unbreakable by any force that Hazō or the team were able to verify. Yes, those mechanics were marked as tentative, but they have not been modified or retracted.

The red line should be considered a broader band than that since there's room for 5 days to be a bit less than 1,000 miles and because this isn't as precise as I would have liked. Honey, the northern islands off of Water, Haran Bay, middle to north Hot Springs, maybe southernmost Lightning, most of Rice, northern Fire, southern Iron, Waterfall, and Earth, northern Grass, most of Fang, and northwestern Wind all seem possible as far as distance goes. I leave it to the rest of the audience to winnow out which bits actually seem likely given Kagome and his backstory, or how dangerous being in any of these places for months on end studying a rift would be given which nations are after us.
I'm impressed that you're doing this and thank you for it, but I'm a little confused. Kagome said where the rifts were; Hazō made an off-the-cuff guess that it would be about 5 days travel, but he's not looking at a to-scale map, he's working off memories of medieval-quality maps. It's quite feasible that he would be wrong. Or am I misunderstanding what you were doing?

Stealing the Rift requires (IMO) three things:
  1. We can get the Rift site all to ourselves, free of prying eyes, for a reasonable period of time.
  2. One of the following:
    1. We can replace the Rift with a dummy Rift which is indistinguishable from the original Rift.
    2. We can sell the idea that the Rift closed naturally.
  3. We can pull off both of the above without implicating ourselves or Leaf.
For this to be a good option, there's a fourth criteria: we need to be >50% confident that it's going to result in faster afterlife access than other alternatives.

Can someone explain the current overall plan to me? I admit that I'm pretty clueless on it at this point, and a little confused because (to the extent that I understand it) it's not the path I personally would have chosen were I God Emperor EJ, First Among Equals of the Players. @Sir Stompy pointed out to me that I had the research plan wrong, but I am also confused about the overall plan.

Is it:

"Make defensive runes that allow us to bunker up in Leaf, then go back and stay there to do...something."

"Make defensive runes to protect Leaf and offensive runes to kill Akatsuki, drop the defensive ones off in Leaf, take the offensive ones and...something."

"Something else"?

but if all anyone is going to take away from what I'm saying is "grumble grumble Kagome dumb grumble grumble", then it's not really incentivizing me to do anything but keep the posts on those topics to "grumble grumble [Character] dummy!" while slapping the cave floor with a big rock lol.
I was going for the humor, that's all.

If a runic superheater takes effect slowly over 60 seconds like ES does, Itachi or Kisami will be able to escape via reverse summoning.
Did you mean EM or ES? (Elemental Mastery vs Earthshaping). Elemental Mastery takes place over the course of a few seconds -- one or two rounds, IIRC.
 
The problem with gambling potentially all life in the universe is that even an infinitesimal risk gives a pretty bad expected value.
To add to this, people seem to not really be considering that there is a whole category of sealing failures that are worse than Pain becoming the immortal emperor of mankind. Worse than Pain finding a way to successfully retry his ritual even.
 
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