"Final" version of the plan. By which I mean I incorporated some of @Left-Hand Mutant's suggestions (please make explicit suggestions as well as forking in the future?) and made sure it stays under wordcount.

I'll be awake a few hours before the close of voting. I'm very unlikely to add anything at this point, but if you want me to remove something, please tag me and make your case.
[X] Action Plan: The Dawn of the Final Day
Word count: <400
  • Duration: 24 hours.
  • Mari, Kei, Ami, Naruto. (Ideally, offscreen/flashbacks.)
    • Bribe the Kurusu to immediately declare support for Naruto.
    • Shikamaru's deal:
      • Pros:
        • We need strong Hokage support for the Dragons and Rift. (Explain why Itachi wanted dimensionalism.)
        • Clear conditions for Choza's vote.
      • Con:
        • Weakens Naruto's chances.
        • Could be part of a larger scheme.
      • We lean yes.
    • Kurenai:
      • She potentially has sway, and Naruto would lead Leaf against the Akatsuki.
      • Would someone (Mari?) meeting with her be useful, or just alienate establishment Sarutobi?
    • Hinata:
      • Our meeting was cryptic. If she did something last-minute what would it be?
    • Could/should Naruto duel Ritsuo and Choza simultaneously?
    • Discuss and fine-tune (e.g., specific numbers) everything below.
  • Meta: our Naruto pitch. He's…
    • …strong, smart, well-trained, and a flexible forward thinker.
    • …capable of personally standing up to Orochimaru/S-rankers.
    • …respected by everyone from the KEI to traditionalists.
    • …well-suited to the bureaucratic requirements of the role (Shadow Clones).
  • Tsunade:
    • Tone: no nonsense, to the point.
    • The Rift is an existential threat.
      • Iron fist, velvet glove (Choza) won't work on AMITY/the Akatsuki. Ritsuo would be disastrous. We think Naruto's the best choice for what's coming.
      • Make our Naruto pitch (above).
    • Unconditionally offer dampener seals and Arachnid-silk bandages to Leaf General.
    • For her vote, offer up to 30% of our cash reserves, then repeat our Naruto mic-drop moment. Explain we have a steady supply we'll use to crash Lightning's market with the Hyuuga. Offer half our profits for a year.
  • Shino:
    • Tone: respectful, relaxed.
    • Is Kurenai okay? We're interested politically and compassionately. We're familiar with grief, albeit on a different scale.
    • Make our Naruto pitch.
      • Does he have concerns about Naruto? Can we address or offset them?
  • Choza:
    • Tone: Well-mannered. Respectful and honest. Think before speaking.
    • You appreciate him reaching out. You've neglected your relationship with the Akimichi.
      • We want to remedy that. Could we visit their kitchens at some point? We feed many, but it's food, not cuisine.
    • We both want to see Leaf safe, prosperous, and happy. We want thatto define our relationship, not our different social values. Ino says we have plenty in common. Ask for a stump speech. Listen.
      • How would he handle the Dragons? AMITY? The Akatsuki?
    • If he were suddenly Lord Goketsu, what would he do?
      • Not just our vote, but generally. We're new at this, and we've made many mistakes.
      • He's an experienced leader. We'd value his perspective.
 
[X] Action Plan: The Dawn of the Final Day
@FaintlySorcerous I'd like to make the dampener/bandage offer the first thing on the list to make it clear there's no strings attached. I'm unsure about the amount you're offering Tsunade- we already offered 40%(?) for the Kurusu vote and pledged blank-check support to Naruto. Even if so far he hasn't thought of anything, I'd rather not get caught with our pants down after promising 70% to other stuff. I'm less certain about that one, though. If anyone else can confirm/deny my memory of us committing to 40%, that'd help.

The lore dump happens. There is a big divide between what players expected it to be and what QMs delivered.
When Asuma said he would try and get an Isanese loremaster, he was clear that he wouldn't risk the main goal for this. I understand this to mean that patrol genin were the targets they could grab without breaking opsec. I don't think there was any OOC or IC error on our part other than perhaps a little expectation management. The censoring is fairly clearly due to someone's IC influence. Personally, I'm unsurprised but a little disappointed/frustrated and mostly amused at Hazo's luck in getting lore.
 
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WRT forbidden lore, the simplest solution IC for getting what we did would be that the ANBU were unable to get high ranking Isan lore custodians and so they decided to nab a genin team as a consolation prize.

When Asuma said he would try and get an Isanese loremaster, he was clear that he wouldn't risk the main goal for this. I understand this to mean that patrol genin were the targets they could grab without breaking opsec.

Ah basically ninja'd
 
I'd like to make the dampener/bandage offer the first thing on the list to make it clear there's no strings attached.
I don't want her to feel like we primed her before making our pitch. I want to pitch first, and then see how she reacts. Then we can give her stuff.

If this is the wrong approach team sanity check should get it.
I'm unsure about the amount you're offering Tsunade- we already offered 40%(?) for the Kurusu vote and pledged blank-check support to Naruto.
If we tell Naruto that we can't offer him boatloads of cash because we secured Tsunade's vote, he probably won't care because her early vote wins the election.

Also we talk through the entire plan with him and I specifically request that we fine-tune specific numbers etc. with Naruto et. al. in the first section.
 
The QMs have made and repeatedly delivered on a staggering commitment to simulationism. They've also always been incredibly fair. They don't twist the story to suit what they want or find convenient.

I think the least we can do is to extend them the benefit of the doubt, and I do mean the least. Plausible explanations exist, including 'Asuma provided Shikamaru with the information pulled from the mind of the Isanese, and they mutually decided that there was nothing obviously relevant and that history would not be kind to the people who provided Goketsu Hazo with information he didn't need'.
Yes, I agree that that the QMs do quite a lot and are very dedicated to simulationism. But I think your interpretation is being uncharitable in some ways, and is also missing that what I (and other posters) are saying is that this is a breakdown of simulationism. Here is my understanding of the sequence of events and the situation as it stands:

We want lore. The line between the voting group and Hazo's motivations are (deliberately) blurry, so Hazo wants lore. We caused/ended up in a situation where we could get decent lore by pretty much a couple minutes of conversation during one of our many meetings with the Hokage. The questgoers were widely aware of this, they unanimously wanted lore, it was frequently on their minds.

Why, then, was this not reflected in the questgoers plans, and by extension Hazo's actions via the one approved OOC-IC communication channel? Because the QMs asked nicely for time to gather their spoons. That's perfectly reasonable, and so no one pushed. No one added 'ask Asuma about the lore again' to their plans, no one made compelling arguments after Asuma hypothetically turned us down, etc.

And then Asuma dies. Alright, simulation's a simulation; this happens. Much time passes, until finally we get the report now, for specifically OOC reasons; the QMs only finished it now, and they could hardly delay the entire quest until they finished it, nor did they want to nor would they enjoy doing that. Fair enough, gotta organize the spoons drawer.

And the report is incomplete. Again, a little disappointing but fair, that's why we want to ask Asuma in person, and why we would probably want to ask Asuma in person in the hypothetical where we got the report while he was alive. Of course, we can't do that now, but on occasion timey-wimey stuff crops up. The solution varies, but often we spend a fate point to declare that we actually did something in the past that we could've reasonable done, but couldn't decide to do until now (but Hazo could).

So, someone asks:
wonder if we could spend a FP so that hazou asked asuma for the name before he died.
And a QM replies:
Hazō suspects that Asuma didn't want to put certain details in print and would (might?) have been willing to fill them in verbally. It's unfortunate that the report wasn't delivered to you until after Asuma's death. Some discrete inquiries lead you to believe that the redacted information is not available anymore and likely never will be.

(OOC: Yes, your proposal is a good one. Thanks.)
That's not a literal no, but the reply responds to everything except the FP proposal. So I'm interpreting that as a 'no'.

If it turns out the QMs are, infact, okay with having us spend a FP to have retroactively talked to Asuma and gotten more information, that addresses my concerns and I no longer have any particular issue with the situation. And if indeed that's the correct interpretation, I apologize for misinterpreting it and turning this into a Thing.

But, going with the interpretation that that's a no, the next reply to this points out "Hey this seems to me like a violation of simulationism and just kinda not cool":
Asuma gathered the lore (for us!) around January 30. We asked Asuma for the lore in person on February 8. He died on March 15. This was literally one of our (and his!) top priorities and the only reason we weren't repeatedly asking for it in-character was because you told us you needed time to figure out what it was.

It feels really unfair that as a result of that we are permalocked out of the information.

And the QM reply to this is a dismissal:
I'm sorry you feel that way.
Which isn't bad. I wouldn't call it rude or unkind or anything. It's a perfectly reasonable stock response that comes up sometimes, more-or-less, whenever someone has a opinion about something but it's just a opinion - "I don't like X happened", to which the response is "I'm genuinely sorry you feel that way, but this quest is strictly simulationist, and that's how things played out".

So I wouldn't fault the QM for saying that, that'd be silly. But I also wouldn't fault the players for disagreeing, and making a point that this is actually a breakdown of simulationism.

(I also wouldn't consider this a 'arguing with the QM about the facts' thing. QMs can be fallible or change their minds, and everyone is being civil here!)

To the rest of your post: I don't expect this one document to hand us all the lore on a silver platter. I don't have issue that it's a limited source, I have issue that it's more limited than it should be for OOC reasons that are being treated as IC. Also frankly it's been like a decade at this point so I don't expect any detailed lore until we get Omnikage Hazo or we die and the quest ends.
 
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We ?know? / ?think? that the animal Path is artificial
Nope. The Animal Path is not the Seventh Path. The Seventh Path is, well... The seventh Path, outside the standard Asura/Deva/Animal/Human/Naraka/Preta system.

I mean, it's possible that indeed there's fewer Paths than commonly believed, that the Seventh Path is the Animal Path or made out of its pieces after it's been destroyed or something. But I think the standard take is that they're different.
 
Nope. The Animal Path is not the Seventh Path. The Seventh Path is, well... The seventh Path, outside the standard Asura/Deva/Animal/Human/Naraka/Preta system.

I mean, it's possible that indeed there's fewer Paths than commonly believed, that the Seventh Path is the Animal Path or made out of its pieces after it's been destroyed or something. But I think the standard take is that they're different.
That said, the Animal Path could still be artificial.
 
It's also worth pointing out that the average Isanese person knows a lot more Forbidden Lore than the average Elemental Nations ninja.

Yuno was a scorned meat shield that was isolated by everyone in Isan, and had been isolated all of her life. Even so, Yuno still casually knew enough Forbidden Lore that Kei threatened to murder her right in front of Hazou-pilot's face (and the whimp didn't do anything about that, but that's a different issue).

I would say that "random Isan genin knowing Forbidden Lore" isn't the stretch that it seems to be.
 
incorporated some of @Left-Hand Mutant's suggestions (please make explicit suggestions as well as forking in the future?)
Will do.
While I really like this plan overall, two things really stick out at me.



By not having Naruto talk to Kurenai, I feel like we're trading:
(40% Kurenai votes Naruto, 10% Kurenai votes Choza, 50% slightly annoyed mystery party votes ???)
For
(40% Kurenai votes Choza, 10% Kurenai votes Naruto, 50% mystery party votes ???)

Given the current election setup, we want the Sarutobi to vote for anyone but Choza.

Suggesting Naruto talk to Kurenai gives us a much better expected outcome. I suggest we change this from "Mari" to "Mari/Naruto".



More explicitly offer to match bribes to Shino. The ISC desperately needs to beat Ritsuo in the first round of voting, and they know this. They can't afford not to make Shino a pitch/offer of some kind. Shino already favours Naruto, and we're giving him our best pitch. But we need to stop the ISC's offer from pulling him away.

I'd like to say:
"if anyone tries to buy you away, we'll match thier offer. We don't want you to have pick between What's best for the your Clan or your Village"

Instead of / in addition to:
Does he have concerns about Naruto? Can we address or offset them?
 
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Do not respond to their posts until their threadban has ended.

EDIT: Per the request of the infracted user, feel free to quote their posts.
 
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Staff Notice - Rule 5: Don't Make it Harder For Us to Do Our Jobs
@veteranMortal FaintlySorcerous is the writer of the current Action Plan being voted for in this action cycle, and is winning by a considerable margin (6 votes above the next, 7 if you include his vote). A thread-wide ban on replying to his posts, by nature, makes it a violation to comment on the current winning Action Plan, as by nature we must be replying to his posts to discuss his plan. Furthermore, his threadban removes his vote from the vote tally, and is the primary way many of us including the QMs who run this thread find these Action Plans to make suggestions or to write the updates.

Given all this, the threadban at this time is extremely disruptive to the thread and for its participants.

I will not tell you to do your job, nor am I requesting that the threadban be overturned. However, I am formally requesting that the threadban be temporarily suspended until the end of the current voting cycle (which is only a few hours anyway!), so as to minimize disruption for the entire thread.
 
Okay. New topic. Once elections are up, we should go visit Grandpa Mareo. We haven't seen him since Akane died, and I don't want our gramps thinking we don't like him anymore.

Thoughts?
 
Question for the thread:

What the hell are you even looking for in this lore dump? I'll be honest that I'm not super inclined to burn more time and energy on it, but if there were at least a list of specific questions then I would at least consider it.

@Velorien and/or @Paperclipped might be super excited about the whole thing and want to dive in, but I personally don't care that much. Also, ponwog99, the sequence went:

Hazō: Hey, I totes need this info.
Asuma, speaking off the cuff: Sure we'll dive a lore master to get that before we nuke the city.
*Planning happens*
*Asuma realizes that if he tries to send a Yamanaka into a city that's 80% ninja and contains 1/3 as many ninja as Leaf itself in order to mind dive a senior elder, the Yamanaka will almost certainly be killed or captured and the village will almost certainly be alerted, thereby probably causing the primary mission to fail*
*He considers abandoning the interrogation thing entirely because it's an unnecessary risk, but realizes that Hazō might really need this so he decides to put the entire world at increased risk so that he can grab a patrol and get you at least something*

Maybe one of the other QMs will disagree, in which case I'm happy to go along, but in my mind the idea that Asuma was ever going to be able to interrogate a senior Isanese ninja is laughable. Yes, he probably should have gotten back to you earlier about that fact but he's the Hokage and had a few other things on his mind.

Still, if there are specific questions that are going to leave people more satisfied then list them out and we'll at least consider expanding the lore dump that we put out. (Which, by the way, Paperclipped was kind enough to take full responsibility for since both Velorien and I considered it a chore and wanted to simply punt the whole thing. All the kudos to Paperclipped! His addition to the QM team had been ridiculously valuable.)


I don't want this to go on forever, so let's say that the list of questions can be compiled for the next 48 hours and then the doors close and the QMs discuss.

No promises on whether we will actually expand on the lore post.
 
Hazō: Hey, I totes need this info.
Asuma, speaking off the cuff: Sure we'll dive a lore master to get that before we nuke the city.
*Planning happens*
*Asuma realizes that if he tries to send a Yamanaka into a city that's 80% ninja and contains 1/3 as many ninja as Leaf itself in order to mind dive a senior elder, the Yamanaka will almost certainly be killed or captured and the village will almost certainly be alerted, thereby probably causing the primary mission to fail*
*He considers abandoning the interrogation thing entirely because it's an unnecessary risk, but realizes that Hazō might really need this so he decides to put the entire world at increased risk so that he can grab a patrol and get you at least something*
Yeah, I was expecting them to interrogate a loremaster and was disappointed when it was just a couple of genin, but this is a pretty good reason for that to be the case, so I'm satisfied.
 
[- ] Proto Plan Fragment: Time with Grandpa Mareo
Words: tbd

  • Meet with Mareo (visit until he remembers us)
  • Bring gift baskets with seals full of good food, delicacies, alcohols, etc.
  • Explain that we've been busy. Our girlfriend died on a mission, and we... weren't ourselves for a while. Lashing out at our family. Being snappish. We're still not back to normal, honestly.
  • We've also been dealing with the Dragons, and working on finding a path forward.
  • Visit with Mareo for a few hours. Talk about Akane, if he seems receptive. Talk about our family, and the shenanigans we get up to. Talk about Noburi's pranks, how he's growing to be a great Medic and we'll find a way to ensure his skills are recognized.
 
Aida Rin and Mochiaki could still be out there waiting to be scooped up for interrogation, you want the lore you gotta do things yourself

Still, if there are specific questions that are going to leave people more satisfied then list them out and we'll at least consider expanding the lore dump that we put out.
I was fine with what we got but if you're offering to at least consider more, then maybe I'll try to think of a few questions...
 
Still, if there are specific questions that are going to leave people more satisfied then list them out and we'll at least consider expanding the lore dump that we put out.
While I found the sparse lore unsurprising, I do have at least one additional question I'd like to hear thier answer to: (edit; I have more questions)

What is Ninshu?
Who is the the moon mother?
What is Chakra?
Did the Sage have family?
 
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What the hell are you even looking for in this lore dump?
*He considers abandoning the interrogation thing entirely because it's an unnecessary risk, but realizes that Hazō might really need this so he decides to put the entire world at increased risk so that he can grab a patrol and get you at least something*
More information on the Dragons than we already have. Given that Yuno, who was a social outcast from birth and raised/trained to be a meat shield for the other Isanese ninja, casually knew enough lore that it caused Kei to threaten murder in front of Hazou, I would raise the "average Forbidden Lore chances" among their genin by a great deal... After all, that would be like Jin casually knowing stuff about the Five. So either Yuno is special (which goes against what the narrative implies about her time in Isan), or Lore that the wider EN considers "forbidden" is merely widely known history for Isan (which is in line with what the narrative implies about her time in Isan).


My personal expectations (in decreasing order of likelihood) were that...


  • We'd learn more, actionable, information about the Dragons we've already met, that will inform future encounters.
    • Heroic Lady Susan of the Seven Spears valiantly fought The Beautiful One with bandages wrapped around her eyes, but her Chakra Metal Mythril Spear shattered against its scales.
      • "the Beautiful Dragon has resistances to melee damage."
    • Samuel the Sunborn Sentinel fought the Shadowed One using his keen hearing, but he was skewered by a spears of solid shadow.
      • "The Dark One has an armor piercing ranged attack"

  • We'd learn more about specific Dragons yet-to-come, through similar legends.
    • "Dracus the Many once had only one head, but when Legendary Axe User Johnny Appleseed chopped it off, two more grew in its place. Johnny soon died, and the blood-stained ground sprouted apple trees under his corpse."
    • "Azathoth the Dreaming Dragon warps reality around it with its dreams. All of reality is an illusion, molded by its idle, alien fantasies."
    • "Puff the Magic Dragon causes a whirlwind storm of elemental chakra all around him."

  • More about the Great Seal, itself.
    • The Sage's Companion shifted part of the Great Seal into the Out, thereby reducing the etheric strain on the Paths that would be required to support the ontological weight of the Great Seal.
      • "That fancy SSA Stunt will come in handy, and dimensionalism veterancy will especially be handy. May want to study how storage seals dump stuff into the Out."
    • The Sage's Dude lifted riches from the ground and fashioned them into the Great Seal, for only the richest of the earth's bounty could adequately hold the Dragons at bay.
      • "hint about another infusable material for lithosealing"
    • The Sage's dudebro totally rocked at all things, and made the Great Seal like it ain't no thang. Then he warned that it would be totally not righteous to do any sealing around the Great Seal, because that would totally harsh the GS's vibe.
      • "Yeah, Hazou totally fucked over the universe by giving Seals to the Pangolins"

  • Maybe a hint about some weakness to specific Dragons.
    • "Puff the Magic Dragon causes a whirlwind storm of elemental chakra all around him, but this really Mighty Guy was able to wound it with his Taijutsu Style, 'The Youthful Spirit.' Unfortunately, his Adamantine skin could not protect him for long, and his skin melted into ooze."
      • It's vulnerable to punching, but you have to find a way to survive its permanent AoE, first.

  • Maybe a hint at some built-in weaknesses the Sage put into all of the Dragons.
    • "The Sage, ever-fearful of the return of the Tenfold Beast, sealed the Dragons away instead of destroying them. However, he knew his wardog spawn too well, and thought that they might escape their cage while he slept. Thus, he placed a weakness upon them: chakra, an invention of the Sage, was uniquely suited to slaying the Dragons if it alters the fabric of reality"
      • "Spacetime Ninjutsu deals 2x damage to Dragons if it hits," or some other weakness.
      • Probably way too much to ask for, but this was, in accordance with its placement in the list, my wildest hope.
 
None-ya.

Jokes aside, the way that the myths go, the Sage created chakra and used it to make Ninshu, which he also gave humanity. This would allow humans to bypass the qualia gap, and perfectly understand each other. Humans took chakra, and ninshu, and then discovered how to use chakra to cast ninjutsu (combat spells). Humans, being goblins, decided they liked the ability to cast fireballs more.

The hivemind currently specualates that Aura somehow relates to ninshu.


Edit: Just saw the edit, and saw that it was a question for the QMs. Sorry, my mistake
 
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None-ya.

Jokes aside, the way that the myths go, the Sage created chakra and used it to make Ninshu, which he also gave humanity. This would allow humans to bypass the qualia gap, and perfectly understand each other. Humans took chakra, and ninshu, and then discovered how to use chakra to cast ninjutsu (combat spells). Humans, being goblins, decided they liked the ability to cast fireballs more.

The hivemind currently specualates that Aura somehow relates to ninshu.
I suspect most of this (although I don't think we know why Ninshu is apparently broken).
Hazou doesn't. A few chapters ago, Itachi again refused to explain the ritual because Hazou's lore was stuck at "Ninshu? I half-remember hearing that word once."
 
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