[X] Action Plan: Nagi Island 2: Electric Boogaloo
[X] Action Plan: Keiko is Bait Again
Suggestions:
  • As part of the rumours, suggest that there's a high price to pay for using the superweapon, such as it requiring a number of high-chakra individuals to willingly sacrifice themselves, which is why it's our last resort. Also, maybe its effect is a wide-area mind-affecting spell, something akin to quisling tyrant's? (I mean, as long as we're plagiarizing Akatsuki...)
  • It'd be good if there was an explanation for the convenient timing of the rumour about the superweapon surfacing just as it became relevant. Not sure how. Have some drunk Leaf ninja complain about being used as ritual fodder in a too public a place? Something like this.
  • Coordinate with Takahashi to make it more convincing. Have him make a move that clearly only makes sense if he's confident we'll win, for example. Commit some valuable resource, or burn a bridge with a pro-Azai faction, etc.
 
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I somehow deleted my initial posting. I don't like SV's system of posting - having textboxes autopopulate in multiple tabs is annoying.
Suggestions:
  • It'd be good if there was an explanation for the convenient timing of the rumour about the superweapon surfacing just as it became relevant. Not sure how. Have some drunk Leaf ninja complain about being used as ritual fodder in a too public a place? Something like this.
  • Coordinate with Takahashi to make it more convincing. Have him make a move that clearly only makes sense if he's confident we'll win, for example. Commit some valuable resource, or burn a bridge with a pro-Azai faction, etc.
I've implemented both of these to some extent. I couldn't think of a good way to make it sound like a desperate last attempt, so I didn't do that.

For anyone else who doesn't know names, Azai Shusuke is the High Priest. I've used Shusuke because it saves me words and I'm right up against the line.

Edit: it seems this plan is unlikely to win. I think that the core idea is solid, and it's a consultative plan, so concerns about anything other than burning time don't feel relevant - Mari et. al. have ample opportunity to tell us we're nuts. I think we need a big swing - Isan is not going well. If we can't come up with something that plays to our strengths (I think this plan does) then the High Priest doesn't have to do anything other than continue to smugly exist for us to fail.

[X] Action plan: Keiko is Bait Again

Word count: >399
  • Offscreen:
    • Yoshida
      • Deliver Nara-written contract.
    • Gasai
      • Appears largely unaffiliated thus far. See if there's foom for diplomacy.
      • They're the taijutsu clan. Leaf has taijutsu masters: Tsunade is the obvious example, but Lee is Gai's heir, and Gai was famous.
  • Team meeting
    • Shusuke must go. Our faction could seize power in his absence.
    • We can't be too aggressive, unprovoked. So we need to bait him into attacking us.
      • If we can weather the blow, then we can take control of the narrative and fight back.
    • Proposal: we convince Shusuke we're enacting a Summoning-related sealing ritual which will result in his death/deposition.
      • It draws on Keiko/Leaf's knowledge of Summoning (we have many Summoners) and Hazo/Kagome's knowledge of sealing.
        • This is why Keiko was reluctant to talk about the BotG/Condor Summoner: both are related.
      • The ritual is already in motion and will require dramatic action on his part to stop. Spin it so it requires his direct intervention or at least clan Azai.
        • This forces a hasty/unplanned move on his part.
      • The ritual is specifically linked to Ui and the holy month.
        • This explains the convenient timing/why we didn't enact it before now.
      • The ritual requires significant seals/resources.
        • Actually, bringing in supplies from Nara/Goketsu to help us survive Shusuke's attack.
      • What's the ritual? Trapping Isan on the Seventh Path? Turning the High Priest into a Condor? Demon summoning?
      • Immediately after he retaliates…
        • We demonstrate that this was completely innocuous - a curious Leaf tradition wildly misconstrued by a paranoid, bloodthirsty autocrat.
          • Takahashi is the expert on Summoning and the Yoshida are the experts on sealing. Both will confirm this.
        • We demand, at the very least, a public apology and reparations for an assault on Ui's hier. Otherwise, this unprovoked assault may lead to war with Leaf.
          • Goals are reputational damage and justification to go on the offensive.
    • If this passes a sanity check, start laying groundwork.
      • Build sealing array in woods - this dovetails w/chakra beast hunts.
      • Have our allies act like they're confident we'll succeed/Shusuke nearing irrelevancy.
      • Have Mari begin to spread rumours.
        • Justification: as the ritual nears completion it's harder to hide, and we're getting cocky about people finding out.
        • Target Shusuke's people with the rumours so they appear trustworthy.
    • If it fails the sanity check, is the core idea of a disinformation campaign to trick Shusuke into overcommitting otherwise viable?
 
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Public humiliation/loss of face?
Can you change this to 'public apology/loss of face' and put it at the top of the list? I think this should be our primary angle in the scheme, forcing Azai to publicly concede clout to us to weaken the political sway of his faction and strengthen the sway of ours. (and public humiliation sounds like we want to put him in the stocks or something, rather than force him to say in front of everyone that he was stupid and wrong)
 
Can you change this to 'public apology/loss of face' and put it at the top of the list? I think this should be our primary angle in the scheme, forcing Azai to publicly concede clout to us to weaken the political sway of his faction and strengthen the sway of ours. (and public humiliation sounds like we want to put him in the stocks or something, rather than force him to say in front of everyone that he was stupid and wrong)
Done.
 
[X] Action plan: Keiko is Bait Again

I'm happy enough with it to support it as well as my own now.

edit: given the concerns listed below I am withdrawing support for this direction of plan for this cycle, until further deliberation can be done to make sure whether or not it's viable.
 
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[] Action plan (Isan): Paperwork is Fun
Word count: 293

Prep:
  • Consult with Isan team, Asuma, Takahashi, Inoue, and Ami.
  • Feign submission to Azai Shusuke.
  • Create an exhaustive and annoying script and enough red-tape for the healing of Isan villagers to be highly annoyed...with the high Priest. It should also pay respect to the high priest excessively.
    • This is an act of penance from the summoner to the high priest.
    • Create verbal traps too tricky for Azai to simply handwave away.
    • Finish off with a post-interactive survey.
      • Include a pre-interactive survey for extra damage.
    • People should be ask the High-Priest for permission to see Noburi before they even take the first survey. They need to bother him.
Action plan:

Keiko and Snowflake have already given a false impression of what it's like for the Pangolin summoner to be poisoned. Make it look like someone from the Azai faction did it this time.
  • Snowflake needs to be seen buying and eating some type of food publicly, bonus points if it's based on a recommendation from a Azai patrolman.
  • Panda should be her companion.
  • Snowflake should have a hidden vile up her sleeve full of blood. The deception is...she's coughing up blood in her palm.
  • Have Panda flee to get Noburi.
  • He should act as he did last time.
  • Noburi should then question Panda about if he fed Keiko something again.
  • Snowflake should be coughing and say a dramatic line before releasing herself.
  • Noburi should inform the team before they retreat back to their lodgings.
  • They need to look like they are on full guard. Takahashi be the only one who should visit. (He needs to sell the deception)

Contingencies:
  • Make sure to gas-light Azai and his support
  • Lean on local allies
  • Stock up on weapons and seals
 
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[X] Action Plan: Nagi Island 2: Electric Boogaloo
[X] Action plan: Keiko is Bait Again
Mm, I feel that both of these plans leave too much of the implementation up to the NPCs. The most tricky part of the plan, I think, is feeding Azai the information about the supposed superweapon. It'd need to be, simultaneously:
  • Coming from a credible source, as to warrant investigation.
  • Be sufficiently detailed to encapsulate the "immediate threat" and the "look for these oddities" parts.
  • The information source would need to have plausible reason to divulge that specific information at this specific time. Obvious failure modes here are making it look like our OPSEC is implausibly leaky, and making it suspiciously lucky that this information is turning up just as we're getting ready to use the weapon.
And both plans fold all of these details up into "spread rumours". Where are these rumours coming from?

I'll see if I have any ideas after taking a nap. For now,
[X] Interlude
[X] Interlude: Skyslider Team
 
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[X] Action plan: Keiko is Bait Again
Would you mind adding a "sanity check with [blah]" just to be safe? I know that the sanity check is implied with the whole "team meeting" part, but I'd rather be safe than sorry. Better to be, potentially, redundant than to accidentally miss something. Given that the Isan arc is currently reaching its climax, I think that we should prioritize specificity over potential XP gains from brevity.

[X] Action plan: Keiko is Bait Again
 
[X] Interlude: Skyslider Team

@FaintlySorcerous @Inferno Vulpix Whatever we end up doing to trick Shusuke into attacking, it absolutely has to be something we can claim wasn't dangerous AND something the average ninja knows isn't dangerous. A Sealing/Summoning Array as was proposed earlier is something Azai is going to claim was "dangerous if completed but we stopped it before it was", and most people in Isan aren't going to tell the difference. Obvious exceptions are going to be the actual experts in the field like Takakashi and Yoshida, who are our tentative allies but it'll be fucking hella risky to basically lean on them so hard, especially since Shusuke can just as easily claim they're working with us (and it'd be true, too!).

My suggestion: Orochimaru once turned one of Jiraiya's made-when-drunk seals into an abstract pattern by arranging and repeating them in interesting ways. The Mori Clan is known to have abstract architecture and make haoris with fractal symbols, courtesy of Mori Genzou. Perhaps we could combine the general concept, and create abstract art out of seals he's copied down, then bring them to Isan as gifts. They would have to be genuinely harmless (so no chakra ink!), but be plausibly seal-y enough to warrant threat when combined with the rumors, and be ridiculous enough (like, say, things that when folded the right way produce a snowflake or something) that when explained can't possibly be a nefarious design, even to the reasonably paranoid ninja.

Of course, straddling this line is ridiculously difficult and I have no idea how to do it without leaning heavily on Yoshida/Takahashi et al.. Hence my vote.
And both plans fold all of these details up into "spread rumours". Where are these rumours coming from?
Takahashi has pointed out that Shusuke's faction is monitoring his ninja freely for signs of dissent.
 
How long would it take for noburi to teach the very basics of medic ninjutsu (more or less what akane has) ?, giving medic ninjutsu to the undesirables will give them some measure of power and help whit keiko's imagine as a bringer of positive change.
 
Action plan: Keiko is Bait Again

If I'm the High Priest, I'm sending a group composed mostly of neutral factions, with a few spies and instigators mixed in. It will never get to the "Look, they're actually innocent!" phase because people will start dying before then, with easy and obvious culprits to blame.

You know, pretty much exactly what he just did to wreck the last plan.

As for the public opinion, if nobody knows what a sealing ritual does then they can blame the team for just about anything.
 
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[X] Interlude: A Day in the Life of Isan

On the one hand, the opportunity to explore some more of this bizarre foreign nation and its obscure customs through the eyes of its ordinary people. On the other hand, the ability to better show what Mari and the rest of the team have learned about the current state of Isan, to better calibrate our future planmaking. Win-win!
 
How long would it take for noburi to teach the very basics of medic ninjutsu (more or less what akane has) ?, giving medic ninjutsu to the undesirables will give them some measure of power and help whit keiko's imagine as a bringer of positive change.
Definitely would take more than a day.

I think personally, we should try and ask help from local allies to subvert Isan socially. Folks like Azai probably hate large congregation of large folks. I think Game night is the perfect place to do our dirty work.

What do you think of my plan?
 
Definitely would take more than a day.

I think personally, we should try and ask help from local allies to subvert Isan socially. Folks like Azai probably hate large congregation of large folks. I think Game night is the perfect place to do our dirty work.

What do you think of my plan?
I am truly lost whit Isan, everything we have done but speaking to the two clan heads has lead us to lose face whit the people, and face us what allows the team to be there in the first place.
 
I am truly lost whit Isan, everything we have done but speaking to the two clan heads has lead us to lose face whit the people, and face us what allows the team to be there in the first place.
Arikada is probably working something for us in the background. Maybe we need more proof to make sure he's on board? The SSSSS is Azai's first foreign support.
 
If I'm the High Priest, I'm sending a group composed mostly of neutral factions, with a few spies and instigators mixed in. It will never get to the "Look, they're actually innocent!" phase because people will start dying before then, with easy and obvious culprits to blame.

You know, pretty much exactly what he just did to wreck the last plan.
Which last plan? I'm not sure what you're referencing. Dinner? I wouldn't really count that as a plan.
As for the public opinion, if nobody knows what a sealing ritual does then they can blame the team for just about anything.
If Takahashi and the Yoshida both back us up, then the general public will believe what we want. They're smart people who can handle themselves.
 
[X] Interlude: A Day in the Life of Isan
[X] Interlude

Which last plan? I'm not sure what you're referencing. Dinner? I wouldn't really count that as a plan.

He means the hunt, part of the group had an Inoue, one Azai, one Gasai and two Murasaki ninja (one of them died). If his attack force is a mix of a lot of other clans then we have to be non-lethal or they dislike/hate us even more.

We were already told that the Kannagi want to get back in his good graces, so they might have some of them. Both of Takahashi's children are also missing, maybe they also turned into High priest loyalists?

Azai can just tell the other clans that we are doing something secretive in the woods and building some "superweapon" close to their home isn't going to make a bunch of xenophobic people like us. Azai's propaganda is pretty much about us causing harm to Isan.

And what's going to be the offical excuse for the ritual anyway? If it's not actually dangerous why are we secretive about it? Why aren't we showing it to all of Isan? "It's a suprise! And now we can't do it anymore!" sounds pretty suspicious.

We are on thin ice with everyone that isn't Takahashi or Yoshida and those two also have wounded ninja because of the hunt.

Clan stuff:

Maybe just being direct with Kannagi helps? Yeah his son died at the hunt and that's terrible, but we could argue that this shouldn't influence his political position. Azai unmade the council and he lost his new position, they were considered a young clan before that. So thanks to the High priest he is an unimportant clan head, in a minor village in an unimportant country. (Somebody should just tell him that a bit nicer, grieving father and all that).

Meanwhile Leaf respected them enough to actually marry Yuno, which legally gives her protection for the Kannagi secrets. That was also the reason why Keiko married Shikamaru instead of choosing normal clan adoption.

(And we are really way to polite to this village, besides the"Kill Azai" plans)

As for the Gasai and Inoue, we probably need to follow Takahashi's advise, the Gasai would probably a more Leaf-like clan council system to get their vote back.
 
Isan Recap
Mari has decided that, since matters are getting serious, she should make sure Hazō gets a proper bird's eye view of the situation before making the next move. Here's what she has for you:

The High Priest is planning to decide which EN village to make an alliance with. His realistic options are Mist, Cloud, and Leaf (Rock is too far, and Sand is too weak). He has expressed scepticism of Leaf because of its losses at Nagi and the Great Collapse. Yuno believed that his announcement would come somewhere near the end of the Holy Month (a time to reflect on the village's past), which has just ended.

The team are currently guests at the Kannagi estate.

Your assets

• The Takahashi, the ninjutsu specialist clan, hate the High Priest and want a Leaf alliance. They are firmly committed to your cause. Clan head Takahashi Saburō is Keiko's former summoning instructor and someone she feels loyal to. Dissidents within other clans also consider Takahashi to be a rallying point.
• The Yoshida, the sealing specialist clan, want a Leaf alliance, and will provide support when a suitable opening presents itself, but will not stick their neck out for you if it looks like you're going to lose. Clan head Yoshida Tsukiko has secretly submitted a rather one-sided alliance proposal, which Keiko intends to accept after some "fine-tuning" with the aid of the Nara.
• Among the otherwise hostile Inoue, there is a new minority faction that supports Keiko based on her perceived heroics during the failed hunt. Their views on a Leaf alliance are unknown.
• A number of Isan's outcast ninja hate the High Priest and are firmly committed to your cause.
• The craftsmen and merchants of Isan are favourably inclined towards a Leaf alliance. However, as civilians, their direct influence is limited (although Isan's civilians have much higher relative status than EN ones).

The High Priest's assets

• The Azai, the tapir specialist clan, are behind the High Priest, as he is the clan head's cousin.
• The Inoue, the loremaster clan, are behind the High Priest for religious reasons, with the exception of the minority faction mentioned above.
• The Aida, the former scroll guardian clan, are behind the High Priest as he is offering them a new purpose.
• The High Priest is publicly recognised as Isan's leader because Ui directly gives him guidance. As such, key village institutions such as its police report to the High Priest.

Other agents

• Arikada Hibiki, the biosealer from the Sacred Spiritual Seekers of the Scaly Sage, is nominally an ally of the High Priest, and implicitly one of his sources of information about the outside world. However, he also reveres Orochimaru, and Snowflake has told him that Orochimaru is now in Leaf and that her sister has a close relationship with him. Further discussion was interrupted by a quisling tyrant.
• The Kannagi, the weaponmaster specialist clan, fear the High Priest because Yuno's betrayal left them in a vulnerable position, and he could destroy them by turning public opinion against him. They would gladly be rid of him for this reason, but can't afford to take risks unless victory is certain. Yuno is a Kannagi by adoption, so her marriage provides them with ties to Leaf. Additionally, clan head Kannagi Yoshirō blames Keiko for failing to prevent his son's death in the hunt.
• The Gasai, the taijutsu specialist clan, are low on the totem pole of the High Priest's regime because he doesn't think their martial arts are a significant asset in dealing with the outside world (unlike, say, seals and ninjutsu). They may not be as loyal to him as others, although you have not confirmed their views.
• The Murasaki, the healer clan which does not have medical ninjutsu, do not have outspoken political views. Noburi proved his basic medical competence to clan heir Yabu, but went on to insult her by not letting her insult Yuno.
• There also exist lesser clans, which vary in their views.

Public Opinion

• The High Priest has been, indirectly and deniably, undermining Keiko's reputation by emphasising her lack of interest in and respect for Isanese culture and religion. After the disastrous hunt, he is also calling her capacity for leadership into question. More broadly, by shifting the emphasis in Isanese religion from Akio to Ui, he is attempting to portray the Pangolin Summoner as irrelevant to Isan's own future.
• Keiko has been using the hunts to demonstrate her commitment to Isan's welfare at her own risk, as well as her ability as a warrior. Being seen going into battle with pangolins at her side has also strengthened her association with Ui. The team as a whole have also been attempting to create an impression of Leaf's wealth and cultural advancement. They are at an advantage because they are the only EN village representatives to be able to promote their village directly right now, although they are also suspicious foreigners with a blatant agenda.
• Yuno continues to be seen as the cursed child, impeding her own abilities to promote Keiko and the Leaf alliance. Her presence in Keiko's retinue reflects badly on her, but it's a small consideration on the scale of everything else that's going on.
 
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