There were a number of problems with this plan. Among them:
Ultimately, I believe these problems were a result of making a detail oriented plan which lacked general instructions in a situation where we didn't know the details, and didn't allow for Hazou to update on new information in the plan (esp. Hyuga calling out info, and the fog apparently already being there). To address each point from my perspective (it looks like people used my plan despite my non-participation in the voting period):
You knew you were being drained, yet you decided to hunker down under an Air Dome for 10-15 seconds (3-5 rounds) despite knowing that it is possible to drain through an Air Dome if the mist was there in the first place. I decided to be a little generous and say that Wakahisa Aiko was draining you slowly in hopes of not being noticed, meaning that you had a few rounds before everyone went toes up.
So, my impression was that the mist wasn't in the fort. Since the mist was "cresting the walls" and we were told
Note that you have somewhere between three and thirty seconds before things go seriously sideways
I assumed we had at least 3 seconds to act before the mist reached us, which, I was under the impression was enough time to put up an air dome, especially as the mist wouldn't have reached us by then. I fully agree that this strategy was bad given that the mist was apparently there in the first place. If I had known that, I would have made a different plan.
The purpose of the implosion bomb wasn't stated, but my guess is that it was intended to clear the mist away. Implosion bombs store all the air around them, but then they release it back when the implosion destroys the seal. It does cause a lot of wind, but the wind goes in and then out again and I'm not sure how much that would actually do to disperse the mist. I also wasn't sure what would happen if you tried to store air that was saturated with chakra-infused water. Would it fail completely? Store the air and leave the water behind such that the water precipitated out? Cthulhu? Something else? Furthermore, the same Mist ninja who cast the original HITM could simply do it again. With too many options and my fellow QMs unavailable, I finally decided to keep it simple and have the battlefield briefly revealed, then covered in mist again.
Again, my impression was that the fog/mist wasn't in the fort, which would have made it much more viable. Given that there *was* fog in the fort, an explosion seal would have done much better.
If you were using the implosion bomb to get a clear view, you forgot that you were inside a fortress and there were walls blocking said view. I decided to have Noburi be smart and be up on the wall when the bomb went off so that you could get a little information.
The purpose of the imposion seal was to clear the mist, at least momentarily, so we could get a clean Air Dome up.
You assumed that everyone would follow your orders. Noburi and Keiko almost certainly would, Akane definitely would, and Akane's team would probably go along with what she did. Neji would absolutely not take orders from you and his team would almost certainly follow his lead in a crisis. There was no reason for the others to follow you either, but I decided to have Shikamaru do the smart thing, recognize what was going on with the mist, and put together the fact that he could get useful information from Noburi before going into the fight. I also had him be smart enough to stop you from turtling up under the Air Dome.
That's a fair critique. I did not expect the other ninja to react as quickly as they did, and that's my fault for underestimating them. Also, given that Nara was going to just call out battlefield info from the start, that's definitely the better use of words and stuff.
You tried to use Living Roots to gather battlefield information, forgetting that it requires contact with the ground and that the moment you left your fort you were going to be water-walking in the middle of a swamp.
Right, so my impression there was that ninja were literally at our walls, and that we'd be fighting in the fort, not in the swamp. Obviously the moment we left the fort, it becomes a bad situation. Also, I'd intended on Pangolin's Communion being used for primary battlefield communication between our team, with Noburi and Keiko's extra-sensory abilities trumping our own.
Minor point: You allowed for the possibility of Keiko summoning a pangolin, although you explicitly stated that you couldn't make a valid choice on this one since you didn't know the chakra costs. What you did know, however, was that the costs are high, that Keiko's status as the Pangolin Summoner was public knowledge, that chakra was being actively drained out of everyone, and that Wakahisa can identify the approximate remaining chakra levels of anyone they are draining. Spending huge amounts of chakra while being drained is probably not wise; it would have been smarter to tell her not to summon.
I just didn't think of this.
Ultimately, I think the primary failing of the plan was that it was too strict an instruction set for what was going to happen and worked off incorrect information (Mist not being in the fort, having at least a round to put up defenses). I think a better plan would have more explicitly hedged what it said, for instance, talking over Neji when he called out information on our opponents was definitely not a good call on our part.
Anyways, I'm gonna devote my efforts this voting period to finishing my combat code rather than developing combat tactics. Hopefully I'll have something to show for it before Wednesday, and it can make the resulting battle easier for the QMs to calculate.