Right, so my take on the deal. In no particular order.

1. It's absolutely a breeding program. Not as abhorrent as what Jiraiya theorized for Mist, but the purpose is fairly clear. The Uchiha need to grow a new generation of ninja, and are heavily bottlenecked by the adoption/marriage restrictions. This is one way for them to get around these restrictions. It's pretty amazing how desperate they are, to agree to such a deal. One thought that comes to mind, is that this probably isn't going to be a harmonious relationship between clans, given what it's built on. At minimum, they have to feel humiliated by the arrangement, while the Goketsu will be very uncomfortable or creeped out. That is not a good foundation for an alliance.

2. Sad as it may be to admit, consent is probably not an issue. We can guard against coercion from the Uchiha side by being very clear that there will be no negative consequences for girls who refuse - and they're out clan members, so we get to decide this. However, I expect that enough of them will truly, genuinely want this. Putting aside the status increase from bearing the child of a ninja, and the fact that they do their duty in restoring the Uchiha this way, Hazou is handsome, charismatic, and soon to be incredibly rich. He's the head of a council clan, a sealing prodigy, and a very strong combatant in his own right. Insofar as ninja deathworld standards go, he's as desirable as they come. I doubt we'll be short on volunteers when the time comes.

3. The kids' fate is a major issue, and probably the main negative when it comes to the deal's utility. Even assuming they'll be treated well by the Uchiha side, which is strongly doubt given the circumstances, I imagine they'll be carrying the shame of being the result of Uchiha women whoring themselves out to the Goketsu, which is how anyone negatively inclined is going to interpret the situation. And it's likely that they'll put most of the blame on Hazou, because that's just how people work.

4. All in all though, I don't think we'd really be doing any worse than the setting's average in accepting the deal. Similar things surely happen on a regular basis, if on a smaller scale, and if the Uchiha are willing to do this, then they eventually will with a different partner. I don't think we'll make the world any worse by accepting, which is a bar we've failed to clear in the past.

5. However, my view is that we need to do better than "not worse" and "what everyone else is doing". This deal is going to have heavy hidden costs. It goes against our ideals in the manner in which it reduces people to objects - and against Hazou's ideals, if you consider how angry he was this update at the Nara's remark about ninja dying without impacting their mission. It will weigh heavily on Hazou, with his strong beliefs about the sacredness of family, and his idealism will suffer for having accepted. It will definitely impact our reputation - not necessarily within the population at large, who already believe the Goketsu to be sexual deviants, but amongst our peers, the other clan heads and heirs, who will easily see this deal for what it is, and probably view it as disgusting. And finally, I think it will poison both clans for decades to come. Nobody is going to walk out of this feeling happy, and I strongly doubt we'll be able to integrate the Uchiha adoptees smoothly.

In the end, that's a no from me. The primary reason being that this goes strongly against our ideals, and I consider ideals to be very important. And I don't see a way to modify the arrangement in such a way as to remove this problem. And unfortunately, I don't think there's a way for the Uchiha to solve their problem without going through with something similar. A really unfortunate situation, all in all.
 
The QMs have stated on multiple occasions that they are willing to let us win or lose if we figure out a way to to do so, regardless of how much conflict it provides.
I'm not really seeing the conflict here. It's a narrative. And the narrative can end. We can make decisions bad enough that it ends with defeat. We can make decisions good enough that it ends with victory (whatever that means). But once we've won or lost, it will end. Because then the story would be boring.

"And Hazo lay in his grave and rotted. Then he lay in his grave and rotted some more."

or:

"Hazo sat on his throne and contemplated the beautiful world he had built. Such a beautiful world! Nothing dangerous, no poverty or sickness or violence. A really beautiful world."
 
Modified this plan, it was suggested that the bit about figuring out salt production was uselessly vague. That was a good point, so it's been taken out. Also inserted a suggestion that we consult the rest of the clan about the Uchiha offer for their opinions.

This plan is deliberately written in the more relaxed style that EagleJarl suggested last cycle instead of the usual extremely efficient style. Suggestions welcome.

[X] Steps Forward (277 Words)
  • Uchiha Deal - No clan would sell a bloodline, and giving away his children as political pawns doesn't sit well with Hazou. Let's ask the clan their opinions and perhaps find some other way to rebuild the Uchiha, possibly by spreading the burden over the coalition.
  • Land Clearing - Make sure the legalities are sorted, like whether they need to buy wilderness land. Look into what buyers would be willing to actually pay for farmland. Figure out how much they can actually clear with sustainable amounts of explosive seal use. Maybe ask Naruto for help? He might have enjoy it if he saw it as a skill training exercise. Maybe ask the civilian lumberjacks to sanity-checking plans. Look up some designs for farm irrigation works to make with digging/MEW, a water supply for paddy farming should add value to the land.
    • Maybe look into paper making with the suitable softwood since there's a gap in the market now? Macerators might be a big help.
  • Meetings - Agenda is that the anti-Hyuuga coalition needs to get organized so everyone's behind the scenes efforts are coordinated. Discuss paying the Hagoromo and other opportunities for the coalition to flip votes, and ways to ward off any Hyuuga efforts at flipping coalition members like offering Tsunade medical education funding.
  • Civilians - Do what we can to get them sorted. Maybe recruit some of them to help with figuring our various schemes if they have useful skills and need work.
  • Mari - Talk privately to Keiko about our concerns about Mari and ask for her analysis. Since we're asking Ami to work with Mari on politics, maybe Keiko could approach Ami about it if she could be helpful?
 
On top of that there's the issue that wasn't a mere sassy statement, it was where someone lied about my statements and then used the lies to question my integrity. Worse than being talked down to, questioning someone's integrity is a serious insult to their character. I am disappointed that the individual in question has not had the decency to recognize their error and apologize, but of course it can be difficult for people to own up to their mistakes. Even something as relatively minor as a rhetorical maneuver that crossed a line.
For what it's worth, I don't see what MMKII said that way, Noumero is on record saying he doesn't see it that way, MMKII lack of apology suggests he doesn't see it that way, and in the other discussions I've had on the topic you're the only person who seems to see it that way.

I'm not quite going to say that you're wrong to be upset about what MMKII said, people are after all free to get upset for whatever reasons they choose and I'm not going to gainsay that. What I will say is that I don't agree that MMKII ought to apologize to you and that I don't expect I would be angry in your place, and that I really do think it'd be for the best if you let it go.
 
So yes, there has indeed been a pattern of problems, but I don't believe my having the temerity to point out incivility as problematic when it occurs is itself the problem.
That wasn't the problem I was talking about. To be blunt, in my opinion the problem is that you are becoming the very source of incivility you're finding in others. You've admitted the fault in snapping at me, and I sincerely appreciate it, but your snapping at Kiba or Evenstar wasn't warranted either. My concern is that your frustration with tedious arguments and not-entirely-polite responses of some players is colouring your impressions of other, uninvolved players, leading to this: lashing out at people who did not deserve that.

Regardless, you're right that we shouldn't dwell on it while there are on-topic things to discuss.
 
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The reason we're not in lighthouse is because the QMs told us not to because it'd be boring.
I'm confident that we never said "Don't do that" in the imperative tone.

I recall us saying (something to the effect of) "You can do that if you want, but events will continue without you if you do", which was a reference to, among other things and without you having any way of knowing it, the fact that Akatsuki's plan was in play. We probably also said something like "this will be really boring and I wish you wouldn't" but I'm confident that we never gave a directive on the issue.

and against Hazou's ideals, if you consider how angry he was this update at the Nara's remark about ninja dying without impacting their mission.
Point of clarification: He was angry about the condescension regarding clanless ninja being inferior and the callousness of the "Well, good thing he died here instead of on a mission"...which may or may not be fair. It's possible that his interlocutor was simply groping for a silver lining and didn't express it well. It's also possible that his interlocutor was a complete tool with "classist bigot" as one of his Aspects.
 
Point of clarification: He was angry about the condescension regarding clanless ninja being inferior and the callousness of the "Well, good thing he died here instead of on a mission"...which may or may not be fair. It's possible that his interlocutor was simply groping for a silver lining and didn't express it well. It's also possible that his interlocutor was a complete tool with "classist bigot" as one of his Aspects.
If the former it will be deliciously ironic that Hazou is judging someone else for their Open Mouth Insert Foot aspect. :p
 
So you also would support the abolition of the current ninja system, right? I mean, your opposition seems at least partially predicated on the age factor, so to be internally consistent you must also object in the same way to child soldiers.
Yes, I also object to child soldiers. That's going to be a hard thing to change, but it's something to change if we get to the point that we can. A better system could keep them in training for longer, and even probably improve survival rates once they do go out in the field thanks to the extra years of training. It could also give them a broader education for a few more years before moving on to combat focused ninja stuff. That would likely result in other dividends.

If I recall correctly the present low ages were a result of dire wartime necessity and continued on for long enough that they became accepted as normal practice even after the pressing survival need for soldiers was no longer there.


That wasn't the problem I was talking about. To be blunt, in my opinion the problem is that you are becoming the very source of incivility you're finding in others. You've admitted the fault in snapping at me, and I sincerely appreciate it, but your snapping at Kiba or Evenstar wasn't warranted either. My concern is that your frustration with tedious arguments and not-entirely-polite responses of some players is colouring your impressions of other players, leading to this: lashing out at people who did not deserve that.

Regardless, you're right that we shouldn't dwell on it while there are on-topic things to discuss.
We disagree about whether my annoyance with certain comments was justified, but I also want to drop the topic rather than arguing about it. Let's do that.
 
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Yeah...I ended up cutting almost everything from the old plan to make room for the Mari discussion. It would be a mite unfair for such major changes to happen...so I just made another plan.

Word Count: 299

[X] Action Plan: Mari's Deal
Timeline: Immediately after Chapter 271.
  • Mari:
    • Thank her for her help.
    • Discuss the Hagoromo & Uchiha deals.
      • Uchiha deal:
        • What's the fallout from our Leaf allies/Mist?
        • We have possible changes: How willing are the Uchiha to budge? What'll it cost?
          1. An out for the girls that stop giving consent.
          2. An active role in raising the kids.
          3. More spaced-out pregnancies, for the girls' safety.
          4. Some way to keep IN in the Gouketsu.
      • We tentatively agree, but want to hear the clan's thoughts before we accept. Don't sign yet!
  • The Mari situation:
    • Thoughts:
      • TLitF seems to be related to her eye color changing. Whenever she's used TLitF in the past, her eyes changed (grey to blue to green).
      • Since her 'recovery', her eyes've changed color rapidly: green to brown to purple to green.
      • TLitF's 'price' has been implied to negatively affect her mind. Could it be related to her recovery?
    • Tomorrow morning, discuss with Noburi & Akane (high-security room).
      • Akane: What happened in Leaf while we were gone? Anything related to Mari?
      • Fill them in fully, including our thoughts and private conversations with Mari.
        • Note: TLitF might get us killbox'd. Don't spread the information around.
      • Ask their thoughts. Surely she isn't acting against our interests, but you're worried she's running some self-sacrificial ploy...unless TLitF makes her temporarily sociopathic? You're unsure; did she act a bit off after Tea?
  • Fill Akane in on land-clearing, as per our note.
    • Include discussion on finding buyers; ways to improve the land, such as irrigation; as well as possible profits, like from chakra monster parts and lumber.
    • Ask her to offer Tsunade ~25% profit if she'll help with legal/political problems.
  • Send invitations for later this week:
    • Shikamaru: Discuss Nara rebuilding/construction assistance.
    • Team Nakano & Jinno: Offer them retainership.
  • Continue scribing Skywalkers in our spare time.
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3. The kids' fate is a major issue, and probably the main negative when it comes to the deal's utility. Even assuming they'll be treated well by the Uchiha side, which is strongly doubt given the circumstances, I imagine they'll be carrying the shame of being the result of Uchiha women whoring themselves out to the Goketsu, which is how anyone negatively inclined is going to interpret the situation. And it's likely that they'll put most of the blame on Hazou, because that's just how people work.

I strongly disagree with this. If anything the Uchiha are going to do their best to treat them as well as possible, because they need the numbers more than anything. You don't treat people you need badly unless you are a fool.

[X] Action Plan: Mari's Deal
 
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something to change if we get to the point that we can

I completely agree with this statement, and support doing things that are at very worst somewhat immoral (see: cheating at gambling) by the most realistic morality scale applicable to Hazo in order to obtain more power such that we have a better chance of getting to said point.

Consensual sex at OUR society's age of majority is not even CLOSE to "somewhat immoral" by any morality scale realistic for a society in which prepubescent child soldiers are normal.
 
@faflec would you mind adding that we want Gōketsu to have an active role in raising the kids? That's my dealbreaker

[] Action Plan: Mari's Deal
 
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If anything the Uchiha are going to do their best to treat them as well as possible, because they need the numbers more than anything. You don't treat people you need badly unless you are a fool.
Clever people don't generally wake up one morning to find one member of a family of warriors killing literally everyone. And succeeding almost completely.
 
Clever people don't generally wake up one morning to find one member of a family of warriors killing literally everyone. And succeeding almost completely.

That's... not really true. It can be pretty hard to realize someone's about to have a psychotic break, and ignoring that it doesn't require intelligence, just a modicum of sense. And we intend to stay involved with the kids anyway, so that should add more safety nets, though I don't expect them to be used.

The one objectionable thing I expect is they are going to push the kids that can be ninja to learn fast and hard.
 
I strongly disagree with this. If anything the Uchiha are going to do their best to treat them as well as possible, because they need the numbers more than anything. You don't treat people you need badly unless you are a fool.

Oh, I believe that they're going to try. The deal itself proves that they're willing to sacrifice a lot of pride on the altar of the restoration of their clan. However, emotionally, the kids will be a constant, visible reminder of their humiliation. You can make an effort to keep that sentiment hidden, but it'll manifest itself one way or another. In any case, I don't believe the kids will have a very happy childhood, even putting aside being separated from their biological parents.
 
@faflec would you mind adding that we want Gōketsu to have an active role in raising the kids? That's my dealbreaker

[X] Action Plan: Mari's Deal
Yes.

... ... ...

By which I mean, yes I can add that, to both plans actually. *stupid faflec.response bot*​

Word Count: 299

[X] Action Plan: Deals and Discussions
Timeline: Immediately after Chapter 271.
  • Discuss the Hagoromo & Uchiha deals with Mari.
    • Uchiha deal:
      • What's the fallout from our Leaf allies/Mist?
      • We want an active role in raising the kids, have an out for the girls that stop giving consent, and are concerned about losing IN to the Uchiha. How willing are the Uchiha to budge and what will it cost?
    • Otherwise, the deals are acceptable. Make sure to keep things quiet so Hiashi doesn't spring a counteroffer on us.
  • Fill Akane in on land-clearing, as per our note.
    • Include discussion on finding buyers; ways to improve the land, such as irrigation; as well as possible profits, like from chakra monster parts and lumber.
    • Ask her to offer Tsunade ~25% profit if she'll help with legal/political problems.
  • Check in on the refugees tomorrow. Make a show of friendliness and empathy.
    • Learn more about the refugees. Consider adopting/minionizing those with political connections or useful skills like carpentry.
  • Check the casualty list for people we know, like Honoka.
  • Invite Shikamaru to breakfast later this week.
    • Subject: Nara Rebuilding/Construction Assistance
  • Invite Team Nakano (and Jinno) over for lunch.
    • Ask them to bring some honeyed apples for Kagome; he'd love them.
    • Continue discussion of funding till-n-fills they take.
    • Carefully offer to put them 'on retainer': We'd pay them in seals, jutsu, teaching, etc.; they'd supply manpower for running errands, talking to people, or other stuff when we need it.
    • Let Kagome bring up Sealing teaching; he'd be their teacher, after all.
  • Afternoon clan meeting (high-security room):
    • Discuss working with the Yakuza.
      • We could sell them ice/salt, or promise assistance against their rivals.
      • Should we work with Leaf's xor Mist's Yakuza?
  • Continue scribing Skywalkers in our spare time.
  • Contingency: if encounter Ami, spend the favour as discussed.
Yeah...I ended up cutting almost everything from the old plan to make room for the Mari discussion. It would be a mite unfair for such major changes to happen...so I just made another plan.

Word Count: 295

[X] Action Plan: Mari's Deal
Timeline: Immediately after Chapter 271.
  • Discuss the Hagoromo & Uchiha deals with Mari.
    • Uchiha deal:
      • What's the fallout from our Leaf allies/Mist?
      • We want an active role in raising the kids, have an out for the girls that stop giving consent, and are concerned about losing IN to the Uchiha. How willing are the Uchiha to budge and what will it cost?
    • Otherwise, the deals seem acceptable. Make sure to keep things quiet so Hiashi doesn't spring a counteroffer on us.
  • The Mari situation:
    • Thoughts:
      • TLitF's exact mechanics and her eye color changing appear to be related. Whenever she's used TLitF in the past, her eyes changed (grey to blue to green).
      • Since her 'recovery', her eyes've changed color rapidly: green to brown to purple to green.
      • TLitF's 'price' has been implied to negatively affect her mind. Could it be related to her recovery?
    • Tomorrow morning, discuss with Noburi & Akane (high-security room).
      • Akane: What happened in Leaf while we were gone? Anything related to Mari?
      • Fill them in fully, including our thoughts and private conversations with Mari.
        • Note: TLitF might get us killbox'd. Don't spread the information around.
      • Ask their thoughts. Surely she isn't acting against our interests, but you're worried she's running some self-sacrificial ploy...unless TLitF makes her temporarily sociopathic? You're unsure; did she act a bit off after Tea?
  • Fill Akane in on land-clearing, as per our note.
    • Include discussion on finding buyers; ways to improve the land, such as irrigation; as well as possible profits, like from chakra monster parts and lumber.
    • Ask her to offer Tsunade ~25% profit if she'll help with legal/political problems.
  • Send invitations for later this week:
    • Shikamaru: Discuss Nara rebuilding/construction assistance.
    • Team Nakano & Jinno: Make them retainers
  • Continue scribing Skywalkers in our spare time.
 
Oh, I believe that they're going to try. The deal itself proves that they're willing to sacrifice a lot of pride on the altar of the restoration of their clan. However, emotionally, the kids will be a constant, visible reminder of their humiliation. You can make an effort to keep that sentiment hidden, but it'll manifest itself one way or another. In any case, I don't believe the kids will have a very happy childhood, even putting aside being separated from their biological parents.

I see it pretty much the opposite - these kids are their future, their hopes, their dreams, their second chance.
 
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