Modified this plan, it was suggested that the bit about figuring out salt production was uselessly vague. That was a good point, so it's been taken out. Also inserted a suggestion that we consult the rest of the clan about the Uchiha offer for their opinions.

just a suggestion, add Noburi and Akane to the Mari section, maybe Kagome, and to check up on Tsunade on the land clearing section, she's probably going to give us interesting insights.

Yeah...I ended up cutting almost everything from the old plan to make room for the Mari discussion. It would be a mite unfair for such major changes to happen...so I just made another plan.

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[X] Action Plan: Mari's Deal
Timeline: Immediately after Chapter 271.
  • Discuss the Hagoromo & Uchiha deals with Mari.
    • Uchiha deal:
      • What's the fallout from our Leaf allies/Mist?
      • We want visitation rights for the kids, have an out for the girls that stop giving consent, and are concerned about losing IN to the Uchiha. How willing are the Uchiha to budge and what will it cost?
    • Otherwise, the deals seem acceptable. Make sure to keep things quiet so Hiashi doesn't spring a counteroffer on us.
  • The Mari situation:
    • Thoughts:
      • TLitF's exact mechanics and her eye color changing appear to be related. Whenever she's used TLitF in the past, her eyes changed (grey to blue to green).
      • Since her 'recovery', her eyes've changed color rapidly: green to brown to purple to green.
      • TLitF's 'price' has been implied to negatively affect her mind. Could it be related to her recovery?
    • Tomorrow morning, discuss with Noburi & Akane (high-security room).
      • Akane: What happened in Leaf while we were gone? Anything related to Mari?
      • Fill them in fully, including our thoughts and private conversations with Mari.
        • Note: TLitF might get us killbox'd. Don't spread the information around.
      • Ask their thoughts. Surely she isn't acting against our interests, but you're worried she's running some self-sacrificial ploy...unless TLitF makes her temporarily sociopathic? You're unsure; did she act a bit off after Tea?
  • Fill Akane in on land-clearing, as per our note.
    • Include discussion on finding buyers; ways to improve the land, such as irrigation; as well as possible profits, like from chakra monster parts and lumber.
    • Ask her to offer Tsunade ~25% profit if she'll help with legal/political problems.
  • Send invitations for later this week:
    • Shikamaru: Discuss Nara rebuilding/construction assistance.
    • Team Nakano & Jinno: Make them retainers
  • Continue scribing Skywalkers in our spare time.

Just to understand correctly, are accepting the deal without saying anything to Naruto/The rest of the clan? No clan meeting about it?
 
...How do we feel about requiring all of the adopted civilians to be required to find a husband, love interest, or partner otherwise to help take care of their children?

e: Oh, nm, civvie children born don't stay with us. Weird.
 
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That's... not really true. It can be pretty hard to realize someone's about to have a psychotic break, and ignoring that it doesn't require intelligence, just a modicum of sense.
Oh, sure, psychotic breaks can be very difficult to predict. Like earthquakes. That's why, if you have a bunch of people around who are trained and equipped to deal out lethal violence, you should have security systems in place, fail-safes, Plans B, and C, and D.

If you live in California, you live in a building that's designed to withstand earthquakes. If you live in a Clan Compound, you ought to be living in a place that's designed to put down insane violent warrior-wizards very quickly. If it's not designed to do that, someone was Not Clever.
 
Oh, I believe that they're going to try. The deal itself proves that they're willing to sacrifice a lot of pride on the altar of the restoration of their clan. However, emotionally, the kids will be a constant, visible reminder of their humiliation. You can make an effort to keep that sentiment hidden, but it'll manifest itself one way or another. In any case, I don't believe the kids will have a very happy childhood, even putting aside being separated from their biological parents.

They are already humiliated. After all they kowtow to that stuck up bastard, Hiashi, everyday for their survival.
 
Oh, sure, psychotic breaks can be very difficult to predict. Like earthquakes. That's why, if you have a bunch of people around who are trained and equipped to deal out lethal violence, you should have security systems in place, fail-safes, Plans B, and C, and D.

If you live in California, you live in a building that's designed to withstand earthquakes. If you live in a Clan Compound, you ought to be living in a place that's designed to put down insane violent warrior-wizards very quickly. If it's not designed to do that, someone was Not Clever.

That sort of thing is not so helpful against someone intimately familiar with said procedure and defenses, and who is a good deal stronger than the rest of the clan.
 
...should we meet with the clan? I'm OK with scheduling a meeting with the rest of them, even if I don't personally agree. Like for YES, Hugs for NO.
Give a tentative agreement with conditions to Mari, though, even if you're going to put it off. For all that she's making us paranoid, she is clearly working hard towards goals that seem aligned with ours; I'd feel bad about being unappreciative of the result of her efforts.

Actually, maybe start off by thanking her?
 
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If you live in a Clan Compound, you ought to be living in a place that's designed to put down insane violent warrior-wizards very quickly. If it's not designed to do that, someone was Not Clever.
.....I mean, you're not wrong but how exactly would you even go about doing something like that?
 
That sort of thing is not so helpful against someone intimately familiar with said procedure and defenses, and who is a good deal stronger than the rest of the clan.
That's why you have to be clever to do it properly.
.....I mean, you're not wrong but how exactly would you even go about doing something like that?

Offhand and ideally, I would want some form of constant surveillance (which is the easy part for Clan Sharingan), multiple defense teams with overlapping responsibilities, Clan Command having a clear knowledge of the capabilities of every ninja in the clan and to have worked out specific counters in advance. These are just my offhand musings, but it seems like avoiding an Uchiha Massacre or anything like it is important enough that Clans in that world would really put some thought into it.
 
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Yes, I also object to child soldiers. That's going to be a hard thing to change, but it's something to change if we get to the point that we can. A better system could keep them in training for longer, and even probably improve survival rates once they do go out in the field thanks to the extra years of training. It could also give them a broader education for a few more years before moving on to combat focused ninja stuff. That would likely result in other dividends.

If I recall correctly the present low ages were a result of dire wartime necessity and continued on for long enough that they became accepted as normal practice even after the pressing survival need for soldiers was no longer there.
Well, we know from (at least) the Grandmaster F interlude that chakra control and development has to be started early. If we assume that the start date for the Academy is unwise to change then we have children becoming superhumans at 12 years old. At that point, where they've learned all the basic ninja skills and can be trusted to train on their own or receive training from friends/family/mentors/etc., there isn't all that much point in public schooling anymore[1]​

So what do you do with hordes of 12-year old superhumans, if more school is a bust? Well, like with other trades the easy answer is to get started learning how to do your job, which in this case is using your superhuman skills to do missions. This is your D-ranks, perfectly safe and non-combat missions to give ninja an entrypoint to the ninja life without actually turning them into child soldiers. However, the biggest problem with keeping Genin doing only D-ranks for 6 years is that Genin hate D-ranks and want to go do C-ranks and do other cool things with their superpowers that actually matter.

However, at that point if you let the Genin go out beyond Konoha and do things like kill chakra beasts, you have to ask where you cross the line from 'letting the Genin do productive and meaningful things with their powers that they enjoy doing' to 'child soldiers'. Is it the kind of mission, if you send them into enemy territory or against other ninja? Is it the risk of the mission, when a Genin is risking their life in a given engagement? Is it the enthusiasm of the Genin, if external pressures and limited choices make them take up missions they aren't actually enthusiastic about? Some combination of the three?

I don't think the answer to this is as easy as extending Academy graduation date to 18 instead of 12, or cooping up Genin in Konoha doing D-ranks for 6 years after graduation. I think if our goal was to 'minimize trauma, especially for children' then we would want to raise requirements in general to take missions so ninjas are less likely to die on them, as well as gating missions against other humans behind a certain age as well as capability. And in fact, when the world stops being on fire I think I'll support something like that. Right now though, recent battles have resulted in an exceptional lack of ninja manpower, and I don't think Konoha can justify raising mission requirements because then important missions would just not get done. Maybe when we finally herd the Elemental Cats into lasting peace and a united front against chakra beasts we'll be able to afford to make villages ensure the ninja they send out can actually do the job.

[1] The amount of time average people spend in schools has primarily increased over history. Apart from prestigious academies that scholars go to learn at, most people don't need all that much schooling for their general lives. A good part of that comes from the fact that most people can learn everything they need to know about their trade from their parents or whoever accepts them as an apprentice[2]​
[2] This applies even in ninja-land where if you're a Mori and you need to know All The Math to do your job you'll be taught Secret Clan Math Techniques by other Mori, and ditto for every other clan and the specialized things they teach their own kids. In fact, the existence of an Academy up to Genin skill level is already likely a compromise from the clans that are used to teaching their kids themselves, and mainly serves just to make sure there's a common foundation and understanding of each other for everyone to build off of.​
 
If we want to spread the movement, we need to so regardless of the children, this seems something completely unrelated to deal, that we could do without the deal, tacked on to make it more palatable.

We had to do this regardless.

The only reason this seems tacked is because as a thread we haven't actually given much thought about Hazou's children in general because this isn't something that comes up often due to the pace of the thread. And because people are understandably hesistant to plan the sex life of a teenager.

But now that the most recent update is forcing us to think about the long term and Hazou's children, it is naturally going to come up.

Heck, I wouldn't be surprised people enjoyed adopting people into the clan because adoptees are basically time skipped children we can teach our ways of Uplift anyway, eliminating both of the issues I mentioned above.
 
just a suggestion, add Noburi and Akane to the Mari section, maybe Kagome, and to check up on Tsunade on the land clearing section, she's probably going to give us interesting insights.

Added Noburi and Akane. I'm hesitant to add Kagome because he's incapable of hiding anything. He'd surely tip Mari off inadvertently.

I'm conflicted about asking Tsunade about land clearing stuff. I don't want to bother her unnecessarily, but maybe it would be alright to have Akane ask her what she thinks about the idea while she trains. Hmm.
 
In fact, the existence of an Academy up to Genin skill level is already likely a compromise from the clans that are used to teaching their kids themselves, and mainly serves just to make sure there's a common foundation and understanding of each other for everyone to build off of.
Academies are also important for training non-Clan ninja, which is a big benefit of having a Village.

(By non-Clan ninja, I mean to include orphaned survivors of otherwise extinct Clans, like Uchiha Sasuke and (I think) Uzumaki Naruto.)
 
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Oh boy. I've prompted some replies.

As a general reply I'll say that, given my impression as to the "narrativity" of the story I find it somewhat silly or disingenuous to go so far as saying it's inaccurate—let alone insulting of all things—to describe the quest as, broadly speaking, a narrative.

Apparently narrative is surprisingly loaded term around these parts, so I'll try and expand on my own understanding of what it means below.

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A narrative that can potentially end suddenly and without significant player involvement, then. I'm not saying we need a hero's journey here, but that while we're playing things are going to tend towards the interesting/interactive.

Also what @Raxner said.

>Quote, core is: "Because of the requirements of the narrative what the QMs can allow regardless of our cleverness is going to have some limits."

This is what I'm referring to when I say narrative. If you still disagree with me on that, then I would advise you to reconsider. The QMs have stated on multiple occasions that they are willing to let us win or lose if we figure out a way to to do so, regardless of how much conflict it provides. There is a certain amount of trust required for the QM-Player contract to work -- if you don't trust them when they say something like that, why bother with the quest as a whole?

Also it's quite frustrating when the QMs have represented the world as working in a certain way and people just ignore that and loudly shout that doesn't work. I had an argument a couple days ago with someone who was doing that and it was maddening

I'm not going to stand here and accuse the QMs of being underhanded dastards deceiving the thread with their lies—I don't think @TaliesinSkye is doing that either, but we'll leave that aside for now.

I will however say that in my read of the quest so far this kind of "shit, that would break everything, better stop that" reasoning has been more or less out in the open and embraced by all sides. Supersonic-substitution, henge, adopting literally everyone, the existence and nature of the merchant council. All phrased and interpreted and almost certainly genuinely meant as "rules patches" to make the world make sense/explain why it looks the way it does; also all stopping the players from being able to mash an "I Win" button if we'd instead gone with a somewhat-plausible "well I guess no one thought of that yet" answer, rather than a "no, can't do that, here's why" one that we end up with.

I'm confident that we never said "Don't do that" in the imperative tone.

I recall us saying (something to the effect of) "You can do that if you want, but events will continue without you if you do", which was a reference to, among other things and without you having any way of knowing it, the fact that Akatsuki's plan was in play. We probably also said something like "this will be really boring and I wish you wouldn't" but I'm confident that we never gave a directive on the issue.

"Told" was not the right word for me to use. I should have said "asked" or "implied" instead. My apologies for saying that you used an imperative.

Perhaps I'm wrong, perhaps I'm misreading or misremembering or misinterpreting. But to lay out my own meaning clearly it's been my impression through years of reading (and cumulatively maybe a month or two of actively participating in) this quest that both sides of the QM screen have an interest in things being "interesting" and/or narratively satisfying; and that several decisions have been reached or at the least influenced by that interest. I was using the lighthouse as the most prominent example I could pull off the top of my head.

Things like how "let's talk to Ami, that'll be fun!" or "YOUTH!" have come about and gone have not quite been driven by the cold calculus of utility-maximizing machines and their simulationist-computer buddies, I would say. And that's okay.
 
And I still haven't caught up with the thread AND have a rule about not skipping past the discussion.

Here is a message from the past, namely, page 5989/

We can bind them to us and us to them through family. This deal is ultimately very similar to a bunch of political marriages, and those can easily be used to draw two families into a tight alliance, particularly when the kids we give them will make up a significant portion of their Ninja force (or future ninja force, for that matter).

The kids will go to live in other clan compound, the Uchiha's; the Uchiha, famous for their genjutsu abilities; the abilities that could modify your allegiance in number of ways...

If Uchiha want our kids to hate our guts, then the kids will.

Note that the spirit of the deal is that the markers will cause them to vote the way you tell them to. There is a proviso on the deal saying that they can instead abstain if they feel voting in the way you request would be a serious danger to their clan -- e.g., if it would piss the Hyūga off enough to make them actually lash out. Still, the ideal is that 1 marker = 1 vote the way you want.

I don't know why the thread assumes that Uchiha will treat the deal in good faith:

a) they can easily abstain on every marker and justify it with some plausible story that we would have little to no way to check.

b) they can brainwash our kids and turn them against us. We wouldn't be able to fend off Uchiha invading force if it will consist from our children

c) the 5 % deal (that I totally forgot about at the time of previous post) could be easily faked to give us less money by number of ways

d) imagine that it is us in the place of Uchiha. Wouldn't we want to munchkin the hell out of the deal?

Add to the above, that Mari is too optimistic about the future of the deal and I have a strong feeling that she's on drugs during that scene. I don't trust her opinion here about Uchiha becoming our branch - they have absolutely no reason to do this willingly and have too much options to turn the deal to their benefit to become the branch family involuntarily.


Just declare this info a Clan Secret. Therefore Nara cannot force her to spill the beans. It's not 100% fail-safe, but it is much better than nothing.


@eaglejarl
  • I identify as atheistic with exception of Lailoken, the only deity that listens
  • I don't identify myself with any political / ideological group
  • I disapprove of the adoption deal
  • FMPOV the deal is completely one sided and is made to benefit Uchiha and Uchiha alone. It may be a first proposal that they are willing to start the haggle with. It is still offensive and absurdly exploitable. To hell with all the moral reasoning, there is almost nothing to gain for Gouketsu in this deal, but so much to lose. Words fail to express how much I disapprove of the deal.
 
Oh, sure, psychotic breaks can be very difficult to predict. Like earthquakes. That's why, if you have a bunch of people around who are trained and equipped to deal out lethal violence, you should have security systems in place, fail-safes, Plans B, and C, and D.

If you live in California, you live in a building that's designed to withstand earthquakes. If you live in a Clan Compound, you ought to be living in a place that's designed to put down insane violent warrior-wizards very quickly. If it's not designed to do that, someone was Not Clever.

As an unrelated fun fact Kagome could likely kill all of us at a moment's notice and a large proportion of Leaf with a few minutes to prepare, if he were so inclined. The rest of the Clan could probably manage at least the "all of us" part, albeit with more/less time needed for prep depending.
 
Give a tentative agreement with conditions to Mari, though, even if you're going to put it off. For all that she's making us paranoid, she is clearly working hard towards goals that seem aligned with ours; I'd feel bad about being unappreciative of the result of her efforts.

Actually, maybe start off by thanking her?
Seems reasonable. Done.

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[X] Action Plan: Deals and Discussions
Timeline: Immediately after Chapter 271.
  • Mari:
    • Thank her for her help.
    • Discuss the Hagoromo & Uchiha deals.
      • Uchiha deal:
        • What's the fallout from our Leaf allies/Mist?
        • We want an active role in raising the kids, have an out for the girls that stop giving consent, and are concerned about losing IN to the Uchiha. How willing are the Uchiha to budge and what will it cost?
      • Give our tentative agreement. Make sure to keep things quiet so Hiashi doesn't spring a counteroffer on us.
  • Fill Akane in on land-clearing, as per our note.
    • Include discussion on finding buyers; ways to improve the land, like irrigation; as well as possible profits, like from chakra monster parts and lumber.
    • Ask her to offer Tsunade ~25% profit if she'll help with legal/political problems.
  • Check in on the refugees tomorrow. Make a show of friendliness and empathy.
    • Learn more about the refugees. Consider adopting/minionizing those with political connections or useful skills like carpentry.
  • Check the casualty list for people we know, like Honoka.
  • Invite Shikamaru to breakfast later this week.
    • Subject: Nara Rebuilding/Construction Assistance
  • Invite Team Nakano (and Jinno) over for lunch.
    • Ask them to bring some honeyed apples for Kagome; he'd love them.
    • Continue discussion of funding till-n-fills they take.
    • Carefully offer to put them 'on retainer': We'd pay them in seals, jutsu, teaching, etc.; they'd supply manpower for running errands, talking to people, or other stuff when we need it.
    • Let Kagome bring up Sealing teaching; he'd be their teacher, after all.
  • Afternoon clan meeting (high-security room):
    • Discuss working with the Yakuza.
      • We could sell them ice/salt, or promise assistance against their rivals.
      • Should we work with Leaf's xor Mist's Yakuza?
  • Continue scribing Skywalkers in our spare time.
  • Contingency: if encounter Ami, spend the favour as discussed.

Yeah...I ended up cutting almost everything from the old plan to make room for the Mari discussion. It would be a mite unfair for such major changes to happen...so I just made another plan.

Word Count: 298

[X] Action Plan: Mari's Deal
Timeline: Immediately after Chapter 271.
  • Mari:
    • Thank her for her help.
    • Discuss the Hagoromo & Uchiha deals.
      • Uchiha deal:
        • What's the fallout from our Leaf allies/Mist?
        • We want an active role in raising the kids, have an out for the girls that stop giving consent, and are concerned about losing IN to the Uchiha. How willing are the Uchiha to budge and what will it cost?
      • Give our tentative agreement. Make sure to keep things quiet so Hiashi doesn't spring a counteroffer on us.
  • The Mari situation:
    • Thoughts:
      • TLitF's exact mechanics and her eye color changing appear to be related. Whenever she's used TLitF in the past, her eyes changed (grey to blue to green).
      • Since her 'recovery', her eyes've changed color rapidly: green to brown to purple to green.
      • TLitF's 'price' has been implied to negatively affect her mind. Could it be related to her recovery?
    • Tomorrow morning, discuss with Noburi & Akane (high-security room).
      • Akane: What happened in Leaf while we were gone? Anything related to Mari?
      • Fill them in fully, including our thoughts and private conversations with Mari.
        • Note: TLitF might get us killbox'd. Don't spread the information around.
      • Ask their thoughts. Surely she isn't acting against our interests, but you're worried she's running some self-sacrificial ploy...unless TLitF makes her temporarily sociopathic? You're unsure; did she act a bit off after Tea?
  • Fill Akane in on land-clearing, as per our note.
    • Include discussion on finding buyers; ways to improve the land, such as irrigation; as well as possible profits, like from chakra monster parts and lumber.
    • Ask her to offer Tsunade ~25% profit if she'll help with legal/political problems.
  • Send invitations for later this week:
    • Shikamaru: Discuss Nara rebuilding/construction assistance.
    • Team Nakano & Jinno: Make them retainers
  • Continue scribing Skywalkers in our spare time.
 
3. The kids' fate is a major issue, and probably the main negative when it comes to the deal's utility. Even assuming they'll be treated well by the Uchiha side, which is strongly doubt given the circumstances, I imagine they'll be carrying the shame of being the result of Uchiha women whoring themselves out to the Goketsu, which is how anyone negatively inclined is going to interpret the situation. And it's likely that they'll put most of the blame on Hazou, because that's just how people work.

I had a different read on this,

With the children being very important in rebuilding the Uchiha clan it would be irrational to not treat them well. Yes, I understand that even in a rational world people can be irrational but surely most of them would be smart enough to realize that they can't afford to mistreat them lest they decide to leave the clan (and possibly even join ours instead). Or more likely lose motivation to be the best ninja they could be because why would you do that to be the pride of the Uchiha if the Uchiha dislike you?

Not that I expect it to ever come to that because it would be in both of the clans' interests to avoid coming into conflict - which would be the case if we adopted the children back even at their behest. It also helps that Naruto and Sasuke are close so he could nudge the latter into treating the children well.

E: I probably should have finished reading to the last page before posting this but oh well. :V
 
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I don't know why the thread assumes that Uchiha will treat the deal in good faith:

a) they can easily abstain on every marker and justify it with some plausible story that we would have little to no way to check.

b) they can brainwash our kids and turn them against us. We wouldn't be able to fend off Uchiha invading force if it will consist from our children

c) the 5 % deal (that I totally forgot about at the time of previous post) could be easily faked to give us less money by number of ways

d) imagine that it is us in the place of Uchiha. Wouldn't we want to munchkin the hell out of the deal?

Add to the above, that Mari is too optimistic about the future of the deal and I have a strong feeling that she's on drugs during that scene. I don't trust her opinion here about Uchiha becoming our branch - they have absolutely no reason to do this willingly and have too much options to turn the deal to their benefit to become the branch family involuntarily.
I mainly think that the Uchiha would play it straight because of this:
And I know what you're going to say: Yes, it would be possible for them to shield income from us by shifting it away from ryō and into other categories. It's very unlikely that they will do that to any significant degree; this is an amazing deal for them, and they don't want to screw it up. Also, honor of the clan blah blah blah stuff that Uchiha take very seriously. Just the accusation that they are dealing in bad faith would be a major blow to them, so I expect they'll play it clean as the Sage's shorts.
Sure, that only explicitly applies to the economic deals, but the impression Mari gives is that the Uchiha not only would dislike being weasels about a deal, but they can't afford to since it would hurt their reputation more than weaseling would gain them, and even put the good graces that we're extending this deal to them in at risk. The Uchiha are both proud and desperate, and both of those compel them to not break the spirit of their deal.
 
The kids will go to live in other clan compound, the Uchiha's; the Uchiha, famous for their genjutsu abilities; the abilities that could modify your allegiance in number of ways...

If Uchiha want our kids to hate our guts, then the kids will.

The Uchiha. Who will probably have 5 ninja of any meaningful strength at that time, if that. The Uchiha, who are so desperate for ninja and hope of a Sharigan they are willing to lower themselves to making a deal to get kids from a mutation.

Yeah, I think you may be being slightly unreasonable about their current position.

I don't know why the thread assumes that Uchiha will treat the deal in good faith:

a) they can easily abstain on every marker and justify it with some plausible story that we would have little to no way to check.

b) they can brainwash our kids and turn them against us. We wouldn't be able to fend off Uchiha invading force if it will consist from our children

c) the 5 % deal (that I totally forgot about at the time of previous post) could be easily faked to give us less money by number of ways

d) imagine that it is us in the place of Uchiha. Wouldn't we want to munchkin the hell out of the deal?

Add to the above, that Mari is too optimistic about the future of the deal and I have a strong feeling that she's on drugs during that scene. I don't trust her opinion here about Uchiha becoming our branch - they have absolutely no reason to do this willingly and have too much options to turn the deal to their benefit to become the branch family involuntarily.

Because if they aren't in their current state - and the state they will be in for the next decade or two - they will be utterly crushed when they prove their word cannot be trusted. The Uchiha can't afford to backstab anyone right now.

a) possible, but unlikely. Why would they for things that won't threaten them? it isn't as if we aren't going to make sure we have more than enough votes anyway. We overkill.

b) Not gonna happen for the reasons I stated above.

c) They could, but again, deal breaking is a very bad idea for them.

d) Why? I'd be saying pretty much the exact same thing, except I'd be willing to have a time-sharing deal with the IN kids, to further draw the clans together.

Also please remember Naruto and Sasuke are friends, and both will be Heads of the respective clans in short order.
 
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