So I had a nifty sealing idea in discord the other day: heat-seeking banshee kunai.

Heat-seeking seals are a plausible invention downstream of our Light Relay seals, and toss in a Banshee seal and a MARS to sync them up you can get a complete package with no more cost from the user than an ordinary explosive kunai. Set it to 1s fuse and throw and by the time the banshee starts going off it'll be far enough away from you that it'll home in on your enemy instead.
 
We can just do it trough. Like we don't need to make or modify a new seal to it talking about new seals, can we chain link mars?
 
HAZOU: "Hey Yuno, mind if I chat with you about your violent tendencies?"
<Rapport 21 >

YUNO: "Sure, what's up?"
<Rapport 99>

HAZOU: "wait what the fuck-"
 
Thank you for your kind words! I get nervous when mine is the only plan or when there isn't a lot of discussion of it.

I'm asking for two scenes and some hopefully-background offscreen stuff. (A date with Ino is relatively low-impact (unless I've misjudged our relationship) and trying to visit Mareo is something that's happened offscreen before.) They're maybe a bit hefty but I'm hoping to play to Velorien's strengths, so it won't be too heavy a lift...?
Welcome. Being nervous is not fun. Making plans or not, your contributions always feel high value.
I don't think that Noburi would react well to our asking. It would be a grave breach of the whole 'clan secret' thing and possibly sour his relationship with his clan irreparably. I also think this came up previously and we were advised against it.

Put another way, I don't see any real benefit derived from doing it now compared to, say, a year from now, given that I don't trust us to carry out seal research on the topic of the barrels with (pardon the pun) watertight OPSEC. If it leaks that this happened, we might not have started a war but we will have damaged Mist-Leaf relations. The benefit would be...what? Noburi is doing fine right now and there's no real reason to suspect that's going to change within the next few months in a manner we could have impacted given knowledge of the seals.
Noburi's opinion on this has evolved as the family grew closer. Literally threatened to reverse engineer the seals in front of a Wakahisa when that one ambassador came by. Yasuji. Might need to research new barrels sooner if there are problems with 2CP SC. Mimic the tiniest part of the bloodline possible to let some kind of downgraded barrel keep clones alive long enough to train.
 
Noburi's opinion on this has evolved as the family grew closer. Literally threatened to reverse engineer the seals in front of a Wakahisa when that one ambassador came by. Yasuji. Might need to research new barrels sooner if there are problems with 2CP SC. Mimic the tiniest part of the bloodline possible to let some kind of downgraded barrel keep clones alive long enough to train.
His willingness to jeopardize the deal he got, which guarantees that he gets barrel maintenance including new seal designs, is an unknown. I don't personally expect it to be high for a variety of reasons, but I will grant that it's unknown as opposed to textually low.

I think that the best time for Hazo to memorize the seal would be a year or so from now, or whenever we're getting to a point where it might fade imminently. Then, he can memorize the new seal that Noburi gets and see if reverse-engineering is possible.

(This assumes that the 'memorize seals' part of the bloodline is a secret and they don't take measures to stymie Hazo from reverse-engineering it using his particular skills.)

I don't think that the 2 CP SCs are going to have problems - he has a chakra pool and it'll divide. I'd hope that the QMs wouldn't have let us invest all that time and effort for a nonstarter. The real question is how we convince Asuma to teach a 4th/5th (depending on whether or not you count Kei) member of our clan SC, but I'm not anticipating that being overly difficult if we make the argument that we need administrative support (we do, desperately) and that the clone would do a lot of training MedKnow (which it would) which might get us some top cover from Tsunade.
 
You know I think the funniest thing about this quest is that despite Tenten being so important to Kei in this quest, I'm fairly sure she somehow has even less screentime then in canon Naruto.
 
The real question is how we convince Asuma to teach a 4th/5th (depending on whether or not you count Kei) member of our clan SC, but I'm not anticipating that being overly difficult if we make the argument that we need administrative support (we do, desperately) and that the clone would do a lot of training MedKnow (which it would) which might get us some top cover from Tsunade.
Makes sense to talk to Asuma about multiple issues at once. Get SC for Noburi, Kagome. They can escape to the 7th Path to prevent secrets leaking. Strong power boost for Noburi if clones can use barrels. Kagome proved a floor on opsec skills by successfully becoming a summoner. Better to focus on benefits to Asuma than to us. How is AMITY going? Talk about Ami. If everything goes well what will her status in Konoha be? How long until she gets approved for secrets like SC? Is her relationship with Naruto concerning? Not that we are neutral. How is Naruto progressing? How many years until he is kage?
 
Could he always make his own barrel seals, or is that the result of being taught through trade? I recall him being pretty scared of having to rely on his clan when his barrel eventually wore out.
He could always do it. Why? Because we didn't think it through as to where the barrels came from so we arbitrarily mentioned seals in them, then I wrote him building himself a new barrel when the one he had was destroyed, then players said "hang on, how is he making seals?", and we said "uhhh... Well... Eh, it's a bloodline, we don't gotta explain nothin'."

Stanzas 7, 8, 9, 10 (out of 16 in total, the center 4 stanzas), begin with PWIF, which is an 18 letter alphabetic shift to spell HOAX.
That is very cool. For the record, this particular case is a complete accident. The poems are not in any way a hoax.
 
So I had a nifty sealing idea in discord the other day: heat-seeking banshee kunai.

Heat-seeking seals are a plausible invention downstream of our Light Relay seals, and toss in a Banshee seal and a MARS to sync them up you can get a complete package with no more cost from the user than an ordinary explosive kunai. Set it to 1s fuse and throw and by the time the banshee starts going off it'll be far enough away from you that it'll home in on your enemy instead.

Heat sensing is a seal in itself. Homing requires adjustment in flight, which would be more complicated and may require multiple seals.
 
The poems are not in any way a hoax.

Not even in this manner?

I doubt that a real civilian would have done anything to intentionally get the attention of a ninja if he could help it, but even as an apocryphal story it certainly shows the 4th's thoughts towards civilians and civilian immigration.

Perhaps not a hoax in the usual sense, but that that poem represents an exaggerated story by Minato about that encounter, and that he didn't feel completely comfortable describing it as a real event without a (ciphered) notation that it wasn't true.
 
If we wait a year what if the barrel seals have degraded enough that hazou can not download them anymore?

Or that they become harder to reverse engineer ?
 
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Fateful accident. Sneaking hoax into that poem is believable as a wink to compelled propaganda.
It's a fundamental fact of writing that one's characters end up taking up residence in one's subconscious (which why they sometimes develop in ways the author never intended). Clearly, this is a case where the character of Minato is influencing @eaglejarl's writing from the shadowy depths of his mind... but what is the message he is trying to convey (or obscure)?
 
Interlude: Minato's Poetry, Part 2
The second installment of my commission from @Twinnstars in which I was asked to write the famously bad poetry of Namikaze Minato, Fourth Hokage, the Yellow Flash. Yes, I am going to keep writing these forwards in order to emphasize that the poetry is supposed to be bad.






The Sinister Seventh Chronicle

Spin, spin, the blinding winds of autumn's day
These the winding ways of air and sky
First, second, third the times I say my wish
Neither word nor image captures my need to fly
May I ever craft a jutsu strong enough to lift
Me far above this, the quarter wheel of earth's great compass
Loft'd high and far until I turn my face down to greet the sun
Spin, spin I shall, to widdershins and deosil both alike
Weather smiling bright or yet weather raging dark and loud
Fly far shall I, and never again kneel to reflect
Upon the searing light of truth, nor never yet this, the painful weight of history
Strong First, brilliant Second, wise Third, but now a straw-filled useless Fourth
Nor the boundless gyre of times agone, this mortal world whence they're from
Twisted and tangled, its pathways trod 'til packed, hardened, beaten down upon, and the light to blackness fall
Chance or fate, a hand upraised is either greet or slay, what is wrong or right?
Fire's Will, the choice to hope, a future bright and shining white, closing, nearing and then
Blossoming. A dream to come, a hope in which to dwell, thought upon thought upon a stack
of longed-for desire. My love, my child, my teacher/hero, my village all, all my strength bent to them
A life of service is the first bargain I ask of fate, love the second, life a distant third
My life an ode shall be, a tale carved in stone and fire, to grant to youthly minds the image
Of their due, their duty, their needed deeds. Honor's strident burn is quenched by service; this my lesson to dwell upon
This morseled wisdom torn from time's grasping, greedy claws, my final words to thee: Of your high-stacked choices, keep love at top.
 
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Did you forget to make it bad? It happens to the best of us, don't worry. It's just that parts of it read like Yeats' The Second Coming, and the first four verses sound absolutely great
 
The second installment of my commission from @Twinstars in which I was asked to write the famously bad poetry of Namikaze Minato, Fourth Hokage, the Yellow Flash. Yes, I am going to keep writing these forwards in order to emphasize that the poetry is supposed to be bad.






The Sinister Seventh Chronicle

Spin, spin, the blinding winds of autumn's day
These the winding ways of air and sky
First, second, third the times I say my wish
Neither word nor image captures my need to fly
May I ever craft a jutsu strong enough to lift
Me far above this, the quarter wheel of earth's great compass
Loft'd high and far until I turn my face down to greet the sun
Spin, spin I shall, to widdershins and deosil both alike
Weather smiling bright or yet weather raging dark and loud
Fly far shall I, and never again kneel to reflect
Upon the searing light of truth, nor never yet this, the painful weight of history
Strong First, brilliant Second, wise Third, but now a straw-filled useless Fourth
Nor the boundless gyre of times agone, this mortal world whence they're from
Twisted and tangled, its pathways trod 'til packed, hardened, beaten down upon, and the light to blackness fall
Chance or fate, a hand upraised is either greet or slay, what is wrong or right?
Fire's Will, the choice to hope, a future bright and shining white, closing, nearing and then
Blossoming. A dream to come, a hope in which to dwell, thought upon thought upon a stack
of longed-for desire. My love, my child, my teacher/hero, my village all, all my strength bent to them
A life of service is the first bargain I ask of fate, love the second, life a distant third
My life an ode shall be, a tale carved in stone and fire, to grant to youthly minds the image
Of their due, their duty, their needed deeds. Honor's strident burn is quenched by service; this my lesson to dwell upon
This morseled wisdom torn from time's grasping, greedy claws, my final words to thee: Of your high-stacked choices, keep love at top.


Interesting, verses 10-12 (out of 22, so arguably the middle three) have the null cipher acrostic in ROT16 for "KID."

However, in ROT18, verses 4-7 are "FEED" and 13-16 are "FLUX."
 
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