Interlude: Potential

It happened when Kei was returning from some errand of little significance, on a day that would otherwise have been of little significance.

"Gōketsu Keiko?"

She turned at the vaguely-familiar high-pitched voice.

"How can I help you, Hanabi?"

The little girl hesitated, then bowed deep.

"Please teach me your ways."

"My… ways?" Kei had ways? Since when had she had ways? Why had no one told her that she had ways?

Was this related to summoning, which she could not teach? Ranged combat, for which there were a thousand better instructors? Logistics and analysis, which Kei did not believe she had demonstrated before Hanabi (except perhaps while gaming)?

"I watched you shut down a raging Inuzuka with a single look," Hanabi elaborated. "I want to know how to do that too."

"Is that so?" Kei asked with amusement, beckoning for the girl to rise. "And why would you wish to learn the art?"

"Because everyone treats me like a child!" Hanabi exclaimed. "Everyone acts as if my opinions don't matter just because I lack experience, and I'm always supposed to do what I'm told even though I'm nearly ten and more intelligent than all the other children, and at least some of the tutors too. And if I say no, then they get angry and lecture me and punish me, even though they'd never think of behaving that way with another adult. And sometimes they're just plain wrong about things, but If I try to tell them, they don't even argue back, they just act as if I hadn't said anything. They wouldn't dare do that if I was like you."

Kei felt a wave of compassion for the girl, but set it aside. To allow herself to be guided by such feelings would dishonour the spirit of Hanabi's request.

"Show me," Kei said. "The art demands not only dedication but natural talent."

Hanabi glared at her. It was a respectable glare for a beginner, filled with emotion yet not lacking in focus. Doubly respectable for one hampered by the unexpressively blank Hyūga eyes.

The child displayed enough potential that Kei chose to respond with a demonstration.

She gazed into Hanabi's eyes, and allowed herself to project all of the disdain that Leaf's princess might feel on having her daily routine disrupted by an impertinent child.

Hanabi's own gaze dropped to her feet.

"I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. I shouldn't be wasting your time like this. Please excuse me!"

"Stop," Kei said before Hanabi could flee.

Hanabi stopped. She eyed Kei warily, as if expecting punishment for her insolence.

Kei made the same beckoning gesture as before, prompting Hanabi to straighten and draw herself up to her full height.

"Close your eyes."

As Hanabi stood still, Kei paced in a slow circle around her.

"This time, in your mind's eye raise up the adults who hold you in contempt. The instructors who deny your value. The other children who fail to recognise your superiority, and the entire system that refuses to acknowledge your agency and forces you to waste your potential."

Kei watched Hanabi's expression change in a most pleasing fashion.

"You fear them for the power they have over you. Do not deny that fear. Accept it as truth. Feel the fear as it flows into anger. Feel the anger as it coalesces into hatred. Feel the pain that has been inflicted upon you and the injustice with which they would crush your spirit. Everything you have endured, everything you have suppressed because you could not endure it—raise it from the depths and hold it unreleased within the iron grip of your will.

"Then, when you have drawn on all that you can, channel that darkness. Master it. Transmute its destructive chaos into frigid, implacable order and forge it into a single perfected weapon to destroy your enemies."

She came to a halt, once more in front of Hanabi.

"Now, prove that you are worthy. As in every battle, you will be given one chance and one chance only."

Hanabi's eyes opened, slowly filling with resolve.

Within a few metres of the two girls, the air grew cold enough for the change to be felt in midwinter. The sound of birdsong faded away, and the ambient chatter of passers-by receded into the distance. Civilians around them quickly recalled whatever business had brought them out onto the streets to begin with, and gave the pair a wide berth as they hurried away.

"The likes of them will not stand in my way forever," Hanabi said in an icy voice. A small but unmissable fragment of killing intent crystallised in the air and hung there for a few seconds before fading away.

The nine-year-old looked up at her shyly. "How was that?"

Kei felt her lips stretch in a dark involuntary smile.

"Come, my young apprentice. It seems you and I have much to discuss."

Yeah so here's my reaction post for this one



Whyyy?!


May I suggest to you, some sort of... symmetry in the future state of things as far as "Child apprentices" go:

Give us Sarutobi Konohamaru.

Come on... you know you want to now! Think about all those delicious antics you can write! All that interesting potential for character conflict! All those mentor failings and growth opportunities that Hazou can exhibit! All that thread discussion that will be had, as we chirp away at trying to figure out how best to teach an eight year old clan-heir-heir.

And the delicious symmetry! The contests that can be had between Keiko and Hazou, as their apprentices' rivarly is mirrored by a rivalry of masters.

Don't you want that?


Come to the dark side, @Velorien , we have rich character development.
 
Don't lie to the nice man. As Vecht's bingo book shows for the old system, it is not difficult to get near-exact values out of very few qualitative measures such as "you succeeded" or "you didn't succeed". :p
I should try to work through the math of this for Fated to Die, actually. Could be fun.

Well, actually, I should learn that math and then work through it, but still
 
Yeah so here's my reaction post for this one



Whyyy?!


May I suggest to you, some sort of... symmetry in the future state of things as far as "Child apprentices" go:

Give us Sarutobi Konohamaru.

Come on... you know you want to now! Think about all those delicious antics you can write! All that interesting potential for character conflict! All those mentor failings and growth opportunities that Hazou can exhibit! All that thread discussion that will be had, as we chirp away at trying to figure out how best to teach an eight year old clan-heir-heir.

And the delicious symmetry! The contests that can be had between Keiko and Hazou, as their apprentices' rivarly is mirrored by a rivalry of masters.

Don't you want that?


Come to the dark side, @Velorien , we have rich character development.
I foresee one problem with this. Pre-Shippūden Konohamaru is a really lousy character. At least Tenten was a blank slate, more or less.
 
I foresee one problem with this. Pre-Shippūden Konohamaru is a really lousy character. At least Tenten was a blank slate, more or less.
Bah! :p

As long as he has an axe to grind (I think his beloved grandfather was just murdered by a pile of traitors? In canon at least he has issues being recognized as an individual and not "Hiruzen's grandson" as well. ) I think we'll be able to whip him into shape.

I think he also had Ebisu as a sensei. That would be a convenient avenue for an introduction...

Your mileage may vary on plausibility of circumstances, etc etc.
 
Further problem: Hazō hasn't done anything (that Konohamaru is cleared to know about) that would make him valuable as a potential master.
 
Further problem: Hazō hasn't done anything (that Konohamaru is cleared to know about) that would make him valuable as a potential master.
He's an eight year old. If Ebisu is training with him, I think that seeing Hazou training at all would be enough for the hero worship to kick in if Hazou gave him the time of day.

e: Plus then we could tell him how we kicked ass in the Chuunin exams! And our team could correct us!

e2: Oh my god he can be in the same team as Honoka and Hanabi! It's perfect!
 
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Incidentally, I would like to make a note:

The Goketsu Keiko Fanclub will, once hearing of this apprenticeship, react in a most interesting fashion. Probably mostly definitely hilarious.
 
e2: Oh my god he can be in the same team as Honoka and Hanabi! It's perfect!

Dear sage that team would be a nightmare.

The image of their builds that comes to my mind's eye is Konohamaru and Honoka both being sealmasters, Honoka's primary stat being Crafting: Traps, and then Hanabi probably supplementing the Gentle Fist with macerators made by her teammates. And then give them ARS and have Hanabi activate hidden seal-traps to squish people from across the battlefield with her byakkugan.

It's so beautifully annoying to fight.

On a side note: I also imagine that Hazou would go all "Don't make the same mistakes I did!" on Konohamaru, and have him focus his social build on Empathy.​
 
And my axe!

Edit: what are we talking about?

Well:
Yeah so here's my reaction post for this one



Whyyy?!


May I suggest to you, some sort of... symmetry in the future state of things as far as "Child apprentices" go:

Give us Sarutobi Konohamaru.

Come on... you know you want to now! Think about all those delicious antics you can write! All that interesting potential for character conflict! All those mentor failings and growth opportunities that Hazou can exhibit! All that thread discussion that will be had, as we chirp away at trying to figure out how best to teach an eight year old clan-heir-heir.

And the delicious symmetry! The contests that can be had between Keiko and Hazou, as their apprentices' rivarly is mirrored by a rivalry of masters.

Don't you want that?


Come to the dark side, @Velorien , we have rich character development.


Very in favour of playing Darth Sidious to Konohamaru.

We're going to try to get Konohamaru as our next apprentice in a few months.

Bwah ha ha!
 
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We're going to try to get Konohamaru as our next apprentice in a few months.

Bwah ha ha!

Wait, I thought we were just trying to do something impressive that wasn't classified, so that all of Leaf thought we were awesome.

...Although I do want us to get gennin at some point. It makes no sense, and we would be terrible at it, but it would be so much fun.

EDIT: Maybe as a political alliance? Sort of like selling Hazou's hand, but less so?
 
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Wait, I thought we were just trying to do something impressive that wasn't classified, so that all of Leaf thought we were awesome.

...Although I do want us to get gennin at some point. It makes no sense, and we would be terrible at it, but it would be so much fun.
Well, yeah? We can do that too obviously.

(In fact, that would certainly help. So if there is a plan to do that it certainly has my sword!)

Although I dunno about "Whole of Konoha." Tsunade is a tough nut to crack.
 
*sigh*

Fiiiiiiiiiiine.

How do we beat Keiko then? (Given that we don't know the jutsu available to either, of course).
Through the power of chaos and absolutely unpredictable and ingenius tactics, of course.

E: and it goes without saying but: More explosives and seals than you can shake a stick at.
 
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I think Kei's main point of vulnerability is her abysmal social defence. Her Deceit and Empathy are really low, so a Deceit manouvre would have the best shot at winning this for us.
 
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