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Marked for Death: A Rational Naruto Quest

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eaglejarl said:
In other news....

Behold: The Rules​

Rules for MEW are not in there, nor are the ones for your new tournament jutsu. Those are still TBD, but we didn't want to hold the rules themselves just for that.

This is the official release; they'll undoubtedly evolve more as time goes on, but this is it for now. I'll update post #2 to have this link, and we'll be deleting any other extant versions in order to prevent confusion. If you have some weird reason for wanting those, save a copy now or they'll vanish tomorrow.
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HAZOU: I dont have the clearance to view this sir.

JIRAIYA: Huh. Guess not.
 
Oh question, is there a discord for this quest? I've seen some mentions about discord on the thread but I haven't seen a link yet.
 
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Chapter 223: What Could Have Been (Google Translate AU)
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    I am certain that Google Translate will make a hilarious update even more hilarious then.
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    Chapter 217B: Life, Strange, Spectacular


    11 am on November 27


    Tanzaku Gai is the center of civilization long before the creation of Leaf and oversees the farmers of the land since the brave lord Daimyo rode negotiations with the permission to build a castle within the terrible Aburame Clan territory I vowed to do. Aburame has been substituted for their protection. Along with the depression and flow of both Ninja and civilians, power seat was transferred from Nagasaki Castle, but the reputation of the safety and business of the castle town has constantly stopped growing. Until the era of the village, it was the largest city in the eastern mainland and stayed at more than half of all the stories set in Fire Country.


    Today's story is still still, its very genre is yet to be determined. Love prayed for love affair, even tore up with romantic comedy. Her life seemed to be not that much, which means her incompetence meant that she did not strike a melodrama or any further situation. For this, Tenten's invitation and Shiori's unplanned facilitation will be the first day of Kei.


    Because Mr. Mali could not use it, Katsura was doing research using sugar spoiled in the morning. Strange timing almost guided her to doubt conspiracy, but because of the fact that Akane could not know that she had a girlfriend.


    Still, if Katsura can not believe Icha Icha's wisdom, 30: Harem Lord Haraguro's diary, when is it now?


    She and Ten Ten used the speed of the ninja to minimize the number of days spent on the trip and then changed to the traditional women's clothing that had been struggling to survive quickly at the pace of walking.


    The result was worth it. Certainly, Kei had a blue clothing at midnight that was not imaginative, arguing that Professor Mari enhanced her feminine mystery. Katsura is keenly realized that she had a mysterious way of women. Still, it was the most fascinating winter clothes she had in hand.


    Tenten, on the other hand ... Kei learned that Tenten did not spend money on things that were not practical. This meant that the collector owned a weapon of masterpiece to be paused. But a poor expelled orphan With that knowledge in mind, when you saw Tenten coming on the first day in Red Cheongsam made of winter yarn that was supposed to be specially imported from thunder country, recently Assume the average cost for frost and hot spring tariff ninja escort, of course, consider the cost of dye and craftsmanship and the impact of the season on profit margin, assume the average cost of a ninja escort ... Occasionally, consumption of luxury luxury goods can be talked more than words.


    So, it was obvious that I could dazzle. Until she noticed Tenten, she was aware that she was changing her mood. She soon strummed her eyes on her face from Tenten's exquisite posture clothes. Meanwhile, Tenten detained himself for gratitude smile with her excellent social grace.


    The question about what to do now ... The person who wants to spend time with her, even if it is not Ami, is undergoing political concern, or who has mutual ties forged with blood and flame Keeping at least new in experience, Kei can destroy at least some of the less profitable proposals in the literature. No kind of dance hall was a problem. Kei did not dance. It was the same as hot springs. Kei metaphorically literally could not handle naked Tenten. Because inviting Ten Ten to take the state and using her was not the purpose of Kei (according to a female erotica artist, the natural result of joint alcohol consumption was that it was "mistake"), She also appealed for the end of something social disaster forever. For all the sins of the world, it was not worthy of drunk Kei.


    Discard this proposal and some worse things (she began to know why Jiraiya's relationship never lasted), Kei lost something. The rest of the options still remain, but how about having a meal at the barbecue and watching private sports games, poetry collections and famous markets? All of these were obviously a place of temptation of prime, not wanting to tempt Tenten, I did not want to tempt Tenten today, I had to choose. Help Marii without Sei.

    Kei prayed that this first day was not the last one.


    - o –​


    Also on November 27 November 27 a.m.


    "It's like this, Shikamaru!"


    I was here! Finally here! It is officially "an attractive tour of Tanzak · Guy, which is particularly suitable for instances of two people who spend the day together to promote mutual knowledge and familiarity in anticipation of the possibility of a long-term relationship" Even if it was, "(I did not know when I was poetry, but as a result of the introduction of Shikamar into this disaster, Goketsu was suffering.)


    Soon, she was repaid for all the effort. In the morning universe she found a traveler's magazine describing Tanzaku Gai in the Nara library and she bought it in place of my favorite green kimono which I died someday in the process of practicing for the Shima Maru tea ceremony She was unable to deflect herself from "multipurpose" gray and black, but she could have convinced her to transform it into a rounded hair and a hakama, at least like his stick more Manly coloration For the same reason not to mention the crest of Nara, of course, it is essential for anyone not to recognize it, to notice the fact that they were day and to start troublesome questions The main reason is that it is fragile anyhow and the main reason why Shikamar did not care about it, but still


    "Do you have to be crazy about that? Recalling that we are simulating two particularly crazy individuals who spend the day together to promote mutual knowledge and familiarity placed on the basis of potential long-term relationships please. If you keep bouncing like the Akiyoshi stimulant chimpanzee, the simulation is not accurate. "


    " What was the comparison between me and Shikamaru? "


    " I am pleased to help with my social affairs


    Do not forget it Do not forget it, please move now Apparently the fountain of Nishikawa garden is outside this world "


    " Fountain? "Chiopal awaited the gold star mentally, but Shikamaru It was a little exciting. "I think there is a more troublesome way in the morning"


    - Katsura can not deny that Nishiura garden is beautiful. It was an inspirational choice of Tenten and Kei considered this issue but she had read about her value as a date spot in a typical classroom. She is an ideal teacher, Mr. Jinchurichri, who lent me to Akane recently. What a curious coincidence.


    Their original interest is in the famous fountain of Gardens, shaped like a portrait of the Godians, and heretical worship is prohibited in the era of the village which revealed the will of fire, fortunately the history Art work after making a generous donation unrelated to the Hokage Hokage office. However, the space around the fountain was already crowded, neither Kei nor Tenten considered worthy of unavoidable fluctuations and noisy chattering. Fortunately, there were other options.


    The experience of Kei's previous hedge mids was trying desperately to persuade passers-by. This is because her two adopted brothers were in the process of having sex behind the bush. The bar was not set high. Her and Ten Ten created clothes of exploration, trying to explore the unknown maze, while at the same time competing in the fatal game of Spy vs Spy, not being designed to not provide any mobility, the disabled There is an inaccessibility of weapons, a natural prohibition of physical contact, and an injunction order not to distress other visitors ... too much. Ultimately, Kei won by the cunning means of using Tobikomi's candy (unconsciously transferred to the kimono sleeve) as a hidden missile weapon. Perhaps she will be too strict with that guy.


    "Hey, baby. How are you and we are throwing away this despicable community and have a good time?"


    Oh, an incompetent pickup artist eating a young lady at a cafe. Keiichi is popular as it was almost excited to experience it for himself. The reality was not disappointed.


    "You and me", Kay said coldly. "A man who can not distinguish between a subject and an object pronoun has no business trying to tempt me."


    "Hu?


    "If you are on the market for a romantic partner that is not the strongest, you must first know the ability to count with your fingers, not to constrain your sandals, the ability to pronounce three or more words first-hand I need to pass a good proficiency test I do not need breaks or temporary clues so I believe that you and I do not have anything to say to each other. "


    Tenten snorted.


    A shiny specimen of pickup artist cr scored his head.


    "Are you making fun of me?"


    "Do not pour a bucket of water into the ocean Well, do you want to leave it, I want another thing on the orifice that is not intended for purpose Should I move to a more direct communication means, such as using one extra chopstick to eradicate you while inserting it? It is handmade dexterity unless it is an interesting exercise for me You must be an experience to change your life for you. "


    When she reaches the box of chopsticks, it is obvious that his accomplices will look more intelligent than Ameba, but in the ears Whispered something and whispered.


    The first person overlooked Katsura. She broke the first chopsticks chopsticks.


    "Twisted, I am here!"


    An accomplice who has an excellent vocabulary but had poor survival instincts lay on Tenten. Prior to opening his mouth he gave him the appearance of a mild sour insult like the one left for miserable insects. It was a partial tightening of the eyes indicating that this condition was unstable that promoted this acting from instrumental to art, and she changed her mind at all times and changed him to a two dimensional paste It may change. Kei saw herself falling in love again.


    If there was something, this escaped faster than Kei. Perhaps she and Tenten could compete with it again.


    It is strange that literature has led her to believe that such encounters are met with intimidation. At that time, it was aggressively tasty.


    "Please check it!" - Inoue, "It was strange," the poet said the two men grew as if all the heinous ghosts of Preta Path were as if they were as if as if they were Looking down at looking down,


    Shikamar sadly said, "The world is strange to imagine." "I did not mind."


    "To tell you that we are paying off, we just realized that we are missing something very important: mutual knowledge arranged on the basis of potential long-term relationships And to promote familiarity, in the case of two individuals who spend the day together, everyone knows that men must treat ladies for lunch!


    I am your word I think that I think that I have witnessed the expulsion of devastating elements that hinder my diet so the café next to the street attracts my attention. "


    However, Mendoi's cafe It was not very easy to clean up.


    "It seems that you were too optimistic, Shikamaru," she said breathtakingly, but in a logical word it said three words that can not be the same sentences. I felt like touching amber rubbed with cloth to Nara.


    "Hey, hot one" Yakuza's small fried shoves towards her, "How about dropping a pig here and playing with some real men?"


    He began reaching for her shoulder It was.


    Three civilians out of them, there is no visible battle training. Grasp the wrist and elbow, twist, catch up with the movement of the body, disable or kill with one strike. The other two are stunned long enough for Shikamaru to finish the hand seal before running or asking for help. But how to get that first strike without causing the scene or risking breaking her kimono?


    "Assistant," Shikamaru is more lively voice than usual, "Which of these bodies is suitable for human experiments?"


    The hands of the gang stopped in the air.


    Shiori flashed and made a show to show them up and down. "In the middle, the other two need to be recycled for the parts, should we be able to take them to a place without a witness first?"


    "I'm sorry I just wanted to let my uncle I remembered that I need to cook. "


    " It's fun! "Shiori saw their rapid retreat, said. "Can I find some sexual predators and start over again? I am trying to get all sorts of ideas!"


    Shikamar made a pretense to her sideways. "Sensitive Nara List 47"


    "If you are the only activity you are thinking about Aiko Mitani, I will get permission from Nara-senpai before doing it." "But you are not really advanced Nara, we act as two boys who spend the day together to promote mutual understanding and familiarity arranged on the basis of potential long-term relationships We are supposed to be equal "We allow it to be restricted by rules for rules.


    Shikamaru was not impressed with the communication of either level.


    "Item 48"


    "If the activity you are considering is only for Mitarashi Anko, leave it alone." "Wait, really?"


    "We have a list of her favorite bars Clansmen is forbidden to do social experiments for their own safety."


    "Spoilsport"


    His mouth is full of chicken, instead of Sh, Ikamaru signed and in principle the natural law is quoted. It can be reinterpreted, but I can never deny it.


    The "World Weapons Lost" exhibition in the western wing of the -o-Shikiri Museum was attractive. It was characterized by ancient weapons that are difficult to handle from ancient times and rare weapons that are used only in small villages of distant lands. The entrance fee soared. Kei guessed that the keeper would not inconvenience the higher-ranking visitors like himself, but in a wonderful new experience she would pay Tenten and the two with just a small change I made it. She will get used to this and hopefully it will do.


    Tenten, who was dissatisfied with being paid, compensated by providing her service as a guide to Kei. She knew that she was using an amazing number of weapons properly, and gladly imitated the stance and technique to maximize efficiency and invalidate and kill the enemy. Most of the other visitors fled in a few minutes, but perhaps a quarter applauded at an appropriate interval and watched. When she ran out of the contents of the exhibition, Tenten was actually shining from the unfamiliar gratitude feeling. And Kei struggled to make security staff worthwhile.


    Shiyoshi had technical funds to draw as an assistant of Shikamaru, but when there was a big crash in it, eventually it required an official investigation of the day. It was a very convenient choice for the Kiyosato Museum of Art, as there were quiet words in the ear of the right hand to ensure free entrance for the museum's largest sponsor heir.


    The exhibition "The result of natural philosophy" by Toba was worth the admission fee that he did not pay. Certainly, Shikamaru said the packed chakra beast was more than responsible as a sponsor with more than "embarrassing Garimo Flee of an unimaginably sewn part of animals" (Fortunately, Shiori Motivation I was able to delay him until I ran out of money). But more importantly, he took into consideration sketches of plant physiology and animal physiology of Nara child tree itself. Also, it is an element of hundreds of years ago that could predict the movement of the moon and star just by the interaction of the physical part, it is interesting like the hollow replica of Kiko Mechanism which did not understand its operating principle There were some antiques (of course, the original was safely within the depth of the vault of Nara).


    This exhibition is surprisingly popular, and since the trends of visitors were seen at an early stage, Shishi's work is reflected. It may have been worth exploring west wings, but if you want to use the top floor seat with the famous Night Ship Restaurant, it was too late to spend too much time.


    The preference of -o-Kei and Tenten to avoid the crowds continued to serve them well. While the uncleaned masses contested the luxurious second floor seat, the two girls were not staring at each other in a rare moment, looking at the lightning-style meditation garden window outside the ship at night, downstairs Sitting together in a quiet area of. This place was another recommendation from Tenten's, but Kei knew it from a thrilling scroll keeper, a comfortable and insightful exploration of human relations (she recently lent to Akane). Another coincidence. Or was Kei easily questioning before rejecting blasphemy, did he just read too many novels?


    The final destinations of -o-Kei and Tenten were different from the other destinations. Here, Tanaka and Daejeok promised their love after six long boat joke. Here, Mikako and Rise reunited with a space-time after the seal failure. Here, Minori beat the Akatsuki at last in order to win the love of Hazuki. For an ignorant person, this place was a lover's hill named hypocritical just. At the beginning, passion and determination (sometimes hidden trap arrangement) was a sacred place to constantly win the sadistic fate.


    It was a very dangerous place for the two girls who do not want to discover their relationship. A couple came to see the sunset together. My friends did not. Kay knew this. She also knew that her reasons to encourage danger were well suspicious. In the secrets and loneliness surrounded by trees that provide privacy, what public declaration can you make declarations tens of kilometers away from the house that may mean something to someone? Still for Kei and Tenten this was a meaningful act. Ascension lovers' hills were communicated in whispering voice, but contrary to the hostile and unclear world, their statements were that the love was as true as anything else


    . I say that they did not do their feelings became completely blind. Tenten suggested, Kei optimized. If necessary, Kei doubted her adultery and Tenten came here by participating in her for emotional support in case of potential confrontation. Everyone who knows about involvement in chicamar may be the cause of the problem if anyone knows her, but it may confuse strangers long enough to make a dreadful escape unknown.


    Of course, they were unable to accept despite clear instructions from literature. They do not sit together, nor have the grass moist yet with the recent rain. Still, as long as the inevitable fear of Kay allowed, they stood side by side and were waiting for the sun to set.


    - Lover's Hill. In the heart of Shiori, exactly that name hit a chord. It is a perfect coffin until the perfect day. Shikamaru can not resist that magic. They saw the sunset together and eventually burned a spark in him and gradually blown into a powerful flame. It certainly can not be indifferent to the power of love in such a concentrated form.


    "Shima Maru intends to miss the setting sun!" Shiro raised his voice and lifted his hands back on his back. (Yes, she was able to take her hand, but he was too tired, not making an effort to argue).


    "I pledge that the sunset is almost the same no matter where it is, except for some meteorological exceptions, it is a colorful color with a calm color, but it is repeated with the attraction of the mass market in mind I have rather a good book. "


    " Does your soul feel romance? "


    " It was supposed to be incorrect at birth, as it was superseded by additional doses of rationality There is no danger of an alphabetical reference system. "


    This is the reason why she loved him. Even if he was a wet blanket, it was said quite often.


    Despite his dissatisfaction, he did not protest when he pulled him over the hill - only to see the two silhouettes in what the journal was portrayed as the ideal place.


    "I think we are already occupied, I think we will have to find another place."


    She has seen it before her departure last time. You know that one of the people is familiar. Should she go there and just check in that case? Or should she prioritize their rights so that she does not get confused?


    "The lack of curiosity killed the cat", said the traditional Nara. She climbed the last few steps, Shikamaru lasted.


    Gōketsu and Tenten turned by noise.


    During some striking seconds, her and her rivals were just staring at each other. And those unfiltered reactions harmonized.


    "You are on a date?"


    The fog cascaded across the mist heart. Courteous indifference. A seemingly irrational decision. ...all.


    You are collapsing the basic building experience. It is so rare that I interrupt the end of the discussion as you taste it. Meanwhile, Gokets looked at her at fear. She opened her mouth as if to explain something or excuse, but once again looking at Shima Maru, she could only say that she was asking for space for instantaneous death.


    What was this? Shiori could not get her head around it. She initially thought that the snake is the ultimate sexual deviant. Then she asked whether she draws many conclusions from the limited data after being enveloped in mystery. A few seconds ago, she probably noticed that she might have been wrong. But the truth remains in this realization ...


    "But you are both girls! You are told what you do? How can you do what - why? It was.


    But before she offers something to approach the answer ...


    "Shiori. Are we on a date?"


    Oh, after all.


    All three were staring at her all. The gokkets were expressing the realization of the dawn. I could not read Tenten. She had never seen him before.


    She is likely to tell a lie. She tells a lie. She confesses her feelings I was not ready. It was supposed to be more basic. She was trying to get enough of Shikamaru's love or at least to guarantee some positive response. She studied the practicality of the family side and was trying to see what the standard was and whether she could push her so much that she had to do. She was trying to prove herself to Shikaku Lord, and more importantly to Miss Yoshino. This was not the worst scenario at all (as long as she knew, nobody was dead), it was close enough.


    But she was standing on a lover 's hill. Her beloved person, her ultimate rival, and her beloved person (seriously WTF?) Were all waiting for her reaction. No matter what she says here, it will not come back.


    "Shikamaru ... I am in love with you"


    Shikamaru took a sharp step.


    "I got crazy," he said in an empty voice of a man who reacts reflexively while higher brain functions are restarting.


    "I was always there," Shiori was not so If she can not get it all indeed, she is never aware that the world is not closer to the end I felt bold. "Not only because you are excellent, I will consider it as being given, but even if you are kind and calm and you like yourself, you do not care about others. You are a son of Shika, you have you like Nara, but even if you hide in laziness and wonderful things you still have a lot of concerns.You complain that you are complaining about your discreet way I make a big fuss in the end but always do the right thing regardless of whether someone sees it or not.I am a low-educated family that tends to be excited about things around you, I accepted myself as a family.You are rational except that in a way that has nothing to do with my pedigree, you recognize how special you are. "


    Shikamaru closed his eyes After that, Beauty open.


    "Your turn, your ass," he said. "I can say that you are going to raise something to me and will make this day even more troubling."


    "Very good" gecko lies on her impressive full height I withdrew. "Tenten and I are in a romantic relationship and the marriage between you and me is subject to taking action to honor your relationship and hinder it,"


    Shikamaru nodded.


    Officially did not officially fall in love with shikamar. Please praise the will of fire. Now Shiori needed to worry about only her personal apocalypse.


    "What do you know?" Shikamar said after a pause. "It is by no means my problem, after the wedding I will submit you the documents of the clan's policy and the appropriate documents Beyond that, leave our room as you found out As long as I do not mind what you do,


    Tenten nodded ...


    "It is accepted. "


    " Shiori, "Shikamaru said," I should be exaggerating or moving, there must be such things, but with all honesty I can not understand your feelings. I have successfully avoided romance for 14 years, but this has made me resistant to direct attacks. I appreciate the effort your confession has to deal with, but there is not much to fascinate me without my knowledge or consent, but I believe that the appropriate response in that situation to you regarding the former Thankfully, only once.


    But that is questionable. I am planning to get married to a snake, waiting for confirmation after the Tune test tournament. You understand that I am now a subtle hint, you are not going to accept your position as a concubine, you said to me many times only as a legitimately married wife, "


    Shiori said I was thinking. It's a much easier way ... but it's only for other women. She could not imagine she was a secondary member of the family forever under the thumb of another woman who was enjoying all the achievements of marriage while throwing Shiori under the table. That was most of the reasons I disliked the snake because she was not seeing and because she was a vigorous message insisting that Mr. Shi was not using anything but sex. Why now, discovering that the snake may not have any malice, there was no place for the captive in her heart. By the time Shikamar rejected her, I assume that her heart is adequate.


    "Do you actually have such a credential?" Gōketsu asked her as if it had something to do with her.


    Shiri told away as her world continued to collapse around her, "I am half a branch's family blood." "My father was a commonly born seal master adopted by the family, there is no theoretical objection, only that I am worthless, there is no special talent or political value."


    . Mr. Shikamaru said, "I regret pretty, but I have to resign as my personal assistant because of a conflict of interest. I strive to reassign you to a valuable role elsewhere. "


    The world has collapsed. Nothing remains.


    Someone's voice said, "Nara is waiting." "You do not need to be in such a hurry."


    Oshio is supposed to be wrong. Her sense was angry anyway.


    "As your current situation has changed significantly, can not your feelings change, it is not unknown that a friend can be a lover with full exposure"


    Gōketsu. what.


    "I think so ... It is not technically impossible," Shikamaru said slowly. "If convenience marriage is known to be a love marriage, it will be possible to apply the same principles to unmarried people."


    Given the affection and basis as her agent, Is she trying to win your mind experimentally?


    "What ...


    I do not have anything."



    A woman who is more positive than her made att attracted her voice.


    "No, they are not really that".


    "However, Shikamaru said," I am engaged to a snake, and as a matter of your preferences, the romantic feelings of each other between us will only make things worse. "


    Nara is soft to shikamaru "I am ready to fix the battle."


    You are a good friend in the world of misery and chaos. If it brings great happiness to you, I can settle for the smaller Nara. I trust the Lord Shikaku to respond to my needs as much as possible. I am convinced that I should be opposed to Jiraiya because of irrelevant concessions if necessary.


    "Shiori was out of" what ". emergency.


    "Gokketsu, why?"


    Goketsu turned his face to the head. Her eyes are locked to Shiori with the perfect focus of sleep master.


    "Because I want the best thing for him, because someone refuses to accept the lack of talent and political value as a reason why someone should deny happiness, even a bit, not a bit.


    I was certain that he was not trying to fix it 'why'


    but lion, when the ninja mentioned in the absence of him and the snake, the barely audible sound of the kenai from which the ninja flying For the same reason that I can recognize, I acknowledged the skillfully hidden love with the voice of Shikamaru, and despite the unusual sound of the snake, she is a selfish manipulator with a cold heart I could not find it by myself to believe that I faced it, not after those words:


    "marry him", poetry Woven heard himself say. A new seed germinated from the ashes of the dead world. "If you can sacrifice your happiness for you, I think you might be tolerant to you,"


    Mr. Gockets said intensely. "Perfectly reciprocal"


    Shikamar is pointed with cleaning his throat. "Can you remind me that I have words in my own future as well?"


    All three girls watched him and waved at the same time.


    He sighed. "Is this only more troubling?" Tengen gave a sympathetic nod.


    "This is another problem," Mr. Gockets said. "Because we are all intertwined with this unwilling confusion, can we change to last name? It is troublesome to always treat you as" Nara ". And, myself, as rarely socialized, has been treated as exchangeable with five other people, as if it had a big annoyance in the fog. Please call Kenko.


    " Kenko ... Coco ... a sense of depth that two girls really did not work each other.


    Keiko caressed her eyes. "Yes, its that. Hopefully, the fact that we are standing on a lover's hill will ease the romantic hatred timing,"


    Shikamar said. "What are we standing on?"


    Tenten made a step forward. She put her hands on the shoulder of Shiori and Shikamaru. It's warmth and weight, for some reason, conveyed the feeling of welcome. After that, she gently began to head west.


    When their four people were stroked with the last light of the evening sun, Shiori discovered that she did not care about the attraction of the mass market at all.

    -o-
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    Reaction post plz.

    My personal favourite is this exchange:

    Shikamaru: "I got crazy."

    Shiori: "I was always there."​
     
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    • I just wanted to read a story. I like to read things. Why do you torture us so?

    Edit: wait, is this a repeat of a previous chapter? Double-bamboozled!

    Edit TOO: I'm suddenly reminded that 'google translate sings' is a thing and am now much less irritated.
     
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    Just when I am in bed, too. Something to look forward to tomorrow though. ᕕ(ᐛ)ᕗ
     
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    [x]Sequitur consilium

    • Jiraiya (bring Noburi):
      • Fully inform on Mari's situation: responses, Hana's involvement, history.
        • Plead not to worsen situation by rash decisions.
        • Suggest informing Mari's friends (?), Anko and Neira.
        • (Consult Keiko, Noburi, Kagome first.)
        • (Hazou's mentality: upset with Hana, struggles reconciling her actions with his love.)
      • Mist Yakuza suggestions:
        • Produce Casino Seals to sell. (Prepare: Consult Keiko on quantity.)
        • Cooperate on tournament betting and casino gambling:
          • Cheat rich foreigners in exchange for a cut (50%?).
          • Team: Hazou + Noburi/Keiko.
          • Disguise: Rich nobleman's son/children.
          • Get Mari's training + Jiraiya's tips.
        • (Provided agreement, make preparations.)
      • Kagome's birthday: Remind. Ask to come, if briefly.
    • Ask Jiraiya, Hana, Mari about tournament:
      • Rules.
      • Information: Opponents.
      • Cheating:
        • General ideas.
        • Starting with Living Roots pre-activated.
    • Mari: Keep company. Discuss light topics. Get her help with planning Kagome's birthday.
    • Kagome: Get an Akatsuki Book copy/summary.
      • Tell him about nightmares. Ask after lucky sealmaster dances.
    • Noburi: Confide in.
      • Stressful times: bizarre nightmares, family drama, politics, tournament, Akatsuki, Pangolins...
      • We're glad to have a bro like him seeing it through with us.
    • Train:
      • Ebisu.
      • Practice faking injuries across body (Iron Nerve + Seals).
        • Run by Kagome. Train under Hana.
        • Get tiny water-proof storage seals.
          • Fill with pig blood.
          • Palm with Sleight-of-Hand, release in-combat.
        • (Mechanically: quickly create Fragile Aspects.)
      • Assess efficacy of blindfighting and sound-camouflage:
        • Buy camouflaged cloaks and flashbangs/smokebombs (or test (safely!) ash/sooth macerators).
        • Wrap seals (Vibrator/Improved Vibrator, Banshee Slayer) around body.
        • Equip Tunneler's Friend.
        • Activate Living Roots, drop flashbangs/smokebombs.
    • Other:
      • Improve Vibrators per Keiko's suggestions.
        • Spend 1-2 days. Ask Kagome's help?
      • Kagome's birthday:
        • Prepare present: Book of all his teachings.
        • Invite Honoka, Aoi, Akane.
        • Remind Akane: She's welcome at the compound!
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    Velorien said:
    Shikamaru closed his eyes After that, Beauty open.


    "Your turn, your ass," he said. "I can say that you are going to raise something to me and will make this day even more troubling."
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    Velorien said:
    Chapter 217B: Life, Strange, Spectacular


    11 am on November 27


    Tanzaku Gai is the center of civilization long before the creation of Leaf and oversees the farmers of the land since the brave lord Daimyo rode negotiations with the permission to build a castle within the terrible Aburame Clan territory I vowed to do. Aburame has been substituted for their protection. Along with the depression and flow of both Ninja and civilians, power seat was transferred from Nagasaki Castle, but the reputation of the safety and business of the castle town has constantly stopped growing. Until the era of the village, it was the largest city in the eastern mainland and stayed at more than half of all the stories set in Fire Country.


    Today's story is still still, its very genre is yet to be determined. Love prayed for love affair, even tore up with romantic comedy. Her life seemed to be not that much, which means her incompetence meant that she did not strike a melodrama or any further situation. For this, Tenten's invitation and Shiori's unplanned facilitation will be the first day of Kei.


    Because Mr. Mali could not use it, Katsura was doing research using sugar spoiled in the morning. Strange timing almost guided her to doubt conspiracy, but because of the fact that Akane could not know that she had a girlfriend.


    Still, if Katsura can not believe Icha Icha's wisdom, 30: Harem Lord Haraguro's diary, when is it now?


    She and Ten Ten used the speed of the ninja to minimize the number of days spent on the trip and then changed to the traditional women's clothing that had been struggling to survive quickly at the pace of walking.


    The result was worth it. Certainly, Kei had a blue clothing at midnight that was not imaginative, arguing that Professor Mari enhanced her feminine mystery. Katsura is keenly realized that she had a mysterious way of women. Still, it was the most fascinating winter clothes she had in hand.


    Tenten, on the other hand ... Kei learned that Tenten did not spend money on things that were not practical. This meant that the collector owned a weapon of masterpiece to be paused. But a poor expelled orphan With that knowledge in mind, when you saw Tenten coming on the first day in Red Cheongsam made of winter yarn that was supposed to be specially imported from thunder country, recently Assume the average cost for frost and hot spring tariff ninja escort, of course, consider the cost of dye and craftsmanship and the impact of the season on profit margin, assume the average cost of a ninja escort ... Occasionally, consumption of luxury luxury goods can be talked more than words.


    So, it was obvious that I could dazzle. Until she noticed Tenten, she was aware that she was changing her mood. She soon strummed her eyes on her face from Tenten's exquisite posture clothes. Meanwhile, Tenten detained himself for gratitude smile with her excellent social grace.


    The question about what to do now ... The person who wants to spend time with her, even if it is not Ami, is undergoing political concern, or who has mutual ties forged with blood and flame Keeping at least new in experience, Kei can destroy at least some of the less profitable proposals in the literature. No kind of dance hall was a problem. Kei did not dance. It was the same as hot springs. Kei metaphorically literally could not handle naked Tenten. Because inviting Ten Ten to take the state and using her was not the purpose of Kei (according to a female erotica artist, the natural result of joint alcohol consumption was that it was "mistake"), She also appealed for the end of something social disaster forever. For all the sins of the world, it was not worthy of drunk Kei.


    Discard this proposal and some worse things (she began to know why Jiraiya's relationship never lasted), Kei lost something. The rest of the options still remain, but how about having a meal at the barbecue and watching private sports games, poetry collections and famous markets? All of these were obviously a place of temptation of prime, not wanting to tempt Tenten, I did not want to tempt Tenten today, I had to choose. Help Marii without Sei.

    Kei prayed that this first day was not the last one.


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    Also on November 27 November 27 a.m.


    "It's like this, Shikamaru!"


    I was here! Finally here! It is officially "an attractive tour of Tanzak · Guy, which is particularly suitable for instances of two people who spend the day together to promote mutual knowledge and familiarity in anticipation of the possibility of a long-term relationship" Even if it was, "(I did not know when I was poetry, but as a result of the introduction of Shikamar into this disaster, Goketsu was suffering.)


    Soon, she was repaid for all the effort. In the morning universe she found a traveler's magazine describing Tanzaku Gai in the Nara library and she bought it in place of my favorite green kimono which I died someday in the process of practicing for the Shima Maru tea ceremony She was unable to deflect herself from "multipurpose" gray and black, but she could have convinced her to transform it into a rounded hair and a hakama, at least like his stick more Manly coloration For the same reason not to mention the crest of Nara, of course, it is essential for anyone not to recognize it, to notice the fact that they were day and to start troublesome questions The main reason is that it is fragile anyhow and the main reason why Shikamar did not care about it, but still


    "Do you have to be crazy about that? Recalling that we are simulating two particularly crazy individuals who spend the day together to promote mutual knowledge and familiarity placed on the basis of potential long-term relationships please. If you keep bouncing like the Akiyoshi stimulant chimpanzee, the simulation is not accurate. "


    " What was the comparison between me and Shikamaru? "


    " I am pleased to help with my social affairs


    Do not forget it Do not forget it, please move now Apparently the fountain of Nishikawa garden is outside this world "


    " Fountain? "Chiopal awaited the gold star mentally, but Shikamaru It was a little exciting. "I think there is a more troublesome way in the morning"


    - Katsura can not deny that Nishiura garden is beautiful. It was an inspirational choice of Tenten and Kei considered this issue but she had read about her value as a date spot in a typical classroom. She is an ideal teacher, Mr. Jinchurichri, who lent me to Akane recently. What a curious coincidence.


    Their original interest is in the famous fountain of Gardens, shaped like a portrait of the Godians, and heretical worship is prohibited in the era of the village which revealed the will of fire, fortunately the history Art work after making a generous donation unrelated to the Hokage Hokage office. However, the space around the fountain was already crowded, neither Kei nor Tenten considered worthy of unavoidable fluctuations and noisy chattering. Fortunately, there were other options.


    The experience of Kei's previous hedge mids was trying desperately to persuade passers-by. This is because her two adopted brothers were in the process of having sex behind the bush. The bar was not set high. Her and Ten Ten created clothes of exploration, trying to explore the unknown maze, while at the same time competing in the fatal game of Spy vs Spy, not being designed to not provide any mobility, the disabled There is an inaccessibility of weapons, a natural prohibition of physical contact, and an injunction order not to distress other visitors ... too much. Ultimately, Kei won by the cunning means of using Tobikomi's candy (unconsciously transferred to the kimono sleeve) as a hidden missile weapon. Perhaps she will be too strict with that guy.


    "Hey, baby. How are you and we are throwing away this despicable community and have a good time?"


    Oh, an incompetent pickup artist eating a young lady at a cafe. Keiichi is popular as it was almost excited to experience it for himself. The reality was not disappointed.


    "You and me", Kay said coldly. "A man who can not distinguish between a subject and an object pronoun has no business trying to tempt me."


    "Hu?


    "If you are on the market for a romantic partner that is not the strongest, you must first know the ability to count with your fingers, not to constrain your sandals, the ability to pronounce three or more words first-hand I need to pass a good proficiency test I do not need breaks or temporary clues so I believe that you and I do not have anything to say to each other. "


    Tenten snorted.


    A shiny specimen of pickup artist cr scored his head.


    "Are you making fun of me?"


    "Do not pour a bucket of water into the ocean Well, do you want to leave it, I want another thing on the orifice that is not intended for purpose Should I move to a more direct communication means, such as using one extra chopstick to eradicate you while inserting it? It is handmade dexterity unless it is an interesting exercise for me You must be an experience to change your life for you. "


    When she reaches the box of chopsticks, it is obvious that his accomplices will look more intelligent than Ameba, but in the ears Whispered something and whispered.


    The first person overlooked Katsura. She broke the first chopsticks chopsticks.


    "Twisted, I am here!"


    An accomplice who has an excellent vocabulary but had poor survival instincts lay on Tenten. Prior to opening his mouth he gave him the appearance of a mild sour insult like the one left for miserable insects. It was a partial tightening of the eyes indicating that this condition was unstable that promoted this acting from instrumental to art, and she changed her mind at all times and changed him to a two dimensional paste It may change. Kei saw herself falling in love again.


    If there was something, this escaped faster than Kei. Perhaps she and Tenten could compete with it again.


    It is strange that literature has led her to believe that such encounters are met with intimidation. At that time, it was aggressively tasty.


    "Please check it!" - Inoue, "It was strange," the poet said the two men grew as if all the heinous ghosts of Preta Path were as if they were as if as if they were Looking down at looking down,


    Shikamar sadly said, "The world is strange to imagine." "I did not mind."


    "To tell you that we are paying off, we just realized that we are missing something very important: mutual knowledge arranged on the basis of potential long-term relationships And to promote familiarity, in the case of two individuals who spend the day together, everyone knows that men must treat ladies for lunch!


    I am your word I think that I think that I have witnessed the expulsion of devastating elements that hinder my diet so the café next to the street attracts my attention. "


    However, Mendoi's cafe It was not very easy to clean up.


    "It seems that you were too optimistic, Shikamaru," she said breathtakingly, but in a logical word it said three words that can not be the same sentences. I felt like touching amber rubbed with cloth to Nara.


    "Hey, hot one" Yakuza's small fried shoves towards her, "How about dropping a pig here and playing with some real men?"


    He began reaching for her shoulder It was.


    Three civilians out of them, there is no visible battle training. Grasp the wrist and elbow, twist, catch up with the movement of the body, disable or kill with one strike. The other two are stunned long enough for Shikamaru to finish the hand seal before running or asking for help. But how to get that first strike without causing the scene or risking breaking her kimono?


    "Assistant," Shikamaru is more lively voice than usual, "Which of these bodies is suitable for human experiments?"


    The hands of the gang stopped in the air.


    Shiori flashed and made a show to show them up and down. "In the middle, the other two need to be recycled for the parts, should we be able to take them to a place without a witness first?"


    "I'm sorry I just wanted to let my uncle I remembered that I need to cook. "


    " It's fun! "Shiori saw their rapid retreat, said. "Can I find some sexual predators and start over again? I am trying to get all sorts of ideas!"


    Shikamar made a pretense to her sideways. "Sensitive Nara List 47"


    "If you are the only activity you are thinking about Aiko Mitani, I will get permission from Nara-senpai before doing it." "But you are not really advanced Nara, we act as two boys who spend the day together to promote mutual understanding and familiarity arranged on the basis of potential long-term relationships We are supposed to be equal "We allow it to be restricted by rules for rules.


    Shikamaru was not impressed with the communication of either level.


    "Item 48"


    "If the activity you are considering is only for Mitarashi Anko, leave it alone." "Wait, really?"


    "We have a list of her favorite bars Clansmen is forbidden to do social experiments for their own safety."


    "Spoilsport"


    His mouth is full of chicken, instead of Sh, Ikamaru signed and in principle the natural law is quoted. It can be reinterpreted, but I can never deny it.


    The "World Weapons Lost" exhibition in the western wing of the -o-Shikiri Museum was attractive. It was characterized by ancient weapons that are difficult to handle from ancient times and rare weapons that are used only in small villages of distant lands. The entrance fee soared. Kei guessed that the keeper would not inconvenience the higher-ranking visitors like himself, but in a wonderful new experience she would pay Tenten and the two with just a small change I made it. She will get used to this and hopefully it will do.


    Tenten, who was dissatisfied with being paid, compensated by providing her service as a guide to Kei. She knew that she was using an amazing number of weapons properly, and gladly imitated the stance and technique to maximize efficiency and invalidate and kill the enemy. Most of the other visitors fled in a few minutes, but perhaps a quarter applauded at an appropriate interval and watched. When she ran out of the contents of the exhibition, Tenten was actually shining from the unfamiliar gratitude feeling. And Kei struggled to make security staff worthwhile.


    Shiyoshi had technical funds to draw as an assistant of Shikamaru, but when there was a big crash in it, eventually it required an official investigation of the day. It was a very convenient choice for the Kiyosato Museum of Art, as there were quiet words in the ear of the right hand to ensure free entrance for the museum's largest sponsor heir.


    The exhibition "The result of natural philosophy" by Toba was worth the admission fee that he did not pay. Certainly, Shikamaru said the packed chakra beast was more than responsible as a sponsor with more than "embarrassing Garimo Flee of an unimaginably sewn part of animals" (Fortunately, Shiori Motivation I was able to delay him until I ran out of money). But more importantly, he took into consideration sketches of plant physiology and animal physiology of Nara child tree itself. Also, it is an element of hundreds of years ago that could predict the movement of the moon and star just by the interaction of the physical part, it is interesting like the hollow replica of Kiko Mechanism which did not understand its operating principle There were some antiques (of course, the original was safely within the depth of the vault of Nara).


    This exhibition is surprisingly popular, and since the trends of visitors were seen at an early stage, Shishi's work is reflected. It may have been worth exploring west wings, but if you want to use the top floor seat with the famous Night Ship Restaurant, it was too late to spend too much time.


    The preference of -o-Kei and Tenten to avoid the crowds continued to serve them well. While the uncleaned masses contested the luxurious second floor seat, the two girls were not staring at each other in a rare moment, looking at the lightning-style meditation garden window outside the ship at night, downstairs Sitting together in a quiet area of. This place was another recommendation from Tenten's, but Kei knew it from a thrilling scroll keeper, a comfortable and insightful exploration of human relations (she recently lent to Akane). Another coincidence. Or was Kei easily questioning before rejecting blasphemy, did he just read too many novels?


    The final destinations of -o-Kei and Tenten were different from the other destinations. Here, Tanaka and Daejeok promised their love after six long boat joke. Here, Mikako and Rise reunited with a space-time after the seal failure. Here, Minori beat the Akatsuki at last in order to win the love of Hazuki. For an ignorant person, this place was a lover's hill named hypocritical just. At the beginning, passion and determination (sometimes hidden trap arrangement) was a sacred place to constantly win the sadistic fate.


    It was a very dangerous place for the two girls who do not want to discover their relationship. A couple came to see the sunset together. My friends did not. Kay knew this. She also knew that her reasons to encourage danger were well suspicious. In the secrets and loneliness surrounded by trees that provide privacy, what public declaration can you make declarations tens of kilometers away from the house that may mean something to someone? Still for Kei and Tenten this was a meaningful act. Ascension lovers' hills were communicated in whispering voice, but contrary to the hostile and unclear world, their statements were that the love was as true as anything else


    . I say that they did not do their feelings became completely blind. Tenten suggested, Kei optimized. If necessary, Kei doubted her adultery and Tenten came here by participating in her for emotional support in case of potential confrontation. Everyone who knows about involvement in chicamar may be the cause of the problem if anyone knows her, but it may confuse strangers long enough to make a dreadful escape unknown.


    Of course, they were unable to accept despite clear instructions from literature. They do not sit together, nor have the grass moist yet with the recent rain. Still, as long as the inevitable fear of Kay allowed, they stood side by side and were waiting for the sun to set.


    - Lover's Hill. In the heart of Shiori, exactly that name hit a chord. It is a perfect coffin until the perfect day. Shikamaru can not resist that magic. They saw the sunset together and eventually burned a spark in him and gradually blown into a powerful flame. It certainly can not be indifferent to the power of love in such a concentrated form.


    "Shima Maru intends to miss the setting sun!" Shiro raised his voice and lifted his hands back on his back. (Yes, she was able to take her hand, but he was too tired, not making an effort to argue).


    "I pledge that the sunset is almost the same no matter where it is, except for some meteorological exceptions, it is a colorful color with a calm color, but it is repeated with the attraction of the mass market in mind I have rather a good book. "


    " Does your soul feel romance? "


    " It was supposed to be incorrect at birth, as it was superseded by additional doses of rationality There is no danger of an alphabetical reference system. "


    This is the reason why she loved him. Even if he was a wet blanket, it was said quite often.


    Despite his dissatisfaction, he did not protest when he pulled him over the hill - only to see the two silhouettes in what the journal was portrayed as the ideal place.


    "I think we are already occupied, I think we will have to find another place."


    She has seen it before her departure last time. You know that one of the people is familiar. Should she go there and just check in that case? Or should she prioritize their rights so that she does not get confused?


    "The lack of curiosity killed the cat", said the traditional Nara. She climbed the last few steps, Shikamaru lasted.


    Gōketsu and Tenten turned by noise.


    During some striking seconds, her and her rivals were just staring at each other. And those unfiltered reactions harmonized.


    "You are on a date?"


    The fog cascaded across the mist heart. Courteous indifference. A seemingly irrational decision. ...all.


    You are collapsing the basic building experience. It is so rare that I interrupt the end of the discussion as you taste it. Meanwhile, Gokets looked at her at fear. She opened her mouth as if to explain something or excuse, but once again looking at Shima Maru, she could only say that she was asking for space for instantaneous death.


    What was this? Shiori could not get her head around it. She initially thought that the snake is the ultimate sexual deviant. Then she asked whether she draws many conclusions from the limited data after being enveloped in mystery. A few seconds ago, she probably noticed that she might have been wrong. But the truth remains in this realization ...


    "But you are both girls! You are told what you do? How can you do what - why? It was.


    But before she offers something to approach the answer ...


    "Shiori. Are we on a date?"


    Oh, after all.


    All three were staring at her all. The gokkets were expressing the realization of the dawn. I could not read Tenten. She had never seen him before.


    She is likely to tell a lie. She tells a lie. She confesses her feelings I was not ready. It was supposed to be more basic. She was trying to get enough of Shikamaru's love or at least to guarantee some positive response. She studied the practicality of the family side and was trying to see what the standard was and whether she could push her so much that she had to do. She was trying to prove herself to Shikaku Lord, and more importantly to Miss Yoshino. This was not the worst scenario at all (as long as she knew, nobody was dead), it was close enough.


    But she was standing on a lover 's hill. Her beloved person, her ultimate rival, and her beloved person (seriously WTF?) Were all waiting for her reaction. No matter what she says here, it will not come back.


    "Shikamaru ... I am in love with you"


    Shikamaru took a sharp step.


    "I got crazy," he said in an empty voice of a man who reacts reflexively while higher brain functions are restarting.


    "I was always there," Shiori was not so If she can not get it all indeed, she is never aware that the world is not closer to the end I felt bold. "Not only because you are excellent, I will consider it as being given, but even if you are kind and calm and you like yourself, you do not care about others. You are a son of Shika, you have you like Nara, but even if you hide in laziness and wonderful things you still have a lot of concerns.You complain that you are complaining about your discreet way I make a big fuss in the end but always do the right thing regardless of whether someone sees it or not.I am a low-educated family that tends to be excited about things around you, I accepted myself as a family.You are rational except that in a way that has nothing to do with my pedigree, you recognize how special you are. "


    Shikamaru closed his eyes After that, Beauty open.


    "Your turn, your ass," he said. "I can say that you are going to raise something to me and will make this day even more troubling."


    "Very good" gecko lies on her impressive full height I withdrew. "Tenten and I are in a romantic relationship and the marriage between you and me is subject to taking action to honor your relationship and hinder it,"


    Shikamaru nodded.


    Officially did not officially fall in love with shikamar. Please praise the will of fire. Now Shiori needed to worry about only her personal apocalypse.


    "What do you know?" Shikamar said after a pause. "It is by no means my problem, after the wedding I will submit you the documents of the clan's policy and the appropriate documents Beyond that, leave our room as you found out As long as I do not mind what you do,


    Tenten nodded ...


    "It is accepted. "


    " Shiori, "Shikamaru said," I should be exaggerating or moving, there must be such things, but with all honesty I can not understand your feelings. I have successfully avoided romance for 14 years, but this has made me resistant to direct attacks. I appreciate the effort your confession has to deal with, but there is not much to fascinate me without my knowledge or consent, but I believe that the appropriate response in that situation to you regarding the former Thankfully, only once.


    But that is questionable. I am planning to get married to a snake, waiting for confirmation after the Tune test tournament. You understand that I am now a subtle hint, you are not going to accept your position as a concubine, you said to me many times only as a legitimately married wife, "


    Shiori said I was thinking. It's a much easier way ... but it's only for other women. She could not imagine she was a secondary member of the family forever under the thumb of another woman who was enjoying all the achievements of marriage while throwing Shiori under the table. That was most of the reasons I disliked the snake because she was not seeing and because she was a vigorous message insisting that Mr. Shi was not using anything but sex. Why now, discovering that the snake may not have any malice, there was no place for the captive in her heart. By the time Shikamar rejected her, I assume that her heart is adequate.


    "Do you actually have such a credential?" Gōketsu asked her as if it had something to do with her.


    Shiri told away as her world continued to collapse around her, "I am half a branch's family blood." "My father was a commonly born seal master adopted by the family, there is no theoretical objection, only that I am worthless, there is no special talent or political value."


    . Mr. Shikamaru said, "I regret pretty, but I have to resign as my personal assistant because of a conflict of interest. I strive to reassign you to a valuable role elsewhere. "


    The world has collapsed. Nothing remains.


    Someone's voice said, "Nara is waiting." "You do not need to be in such a hurry."


    Oshio is supposed to be wrong. Her sense was angry anyway.


    "As your current situation has changed significantly, can not your feelings change, it is not unknown that a friend can be a lover with full exposure"


    Gōketsu. what.


    "I think so ... It is not technically impossible," Shikamaru said slowly. "If convenience marriage is known to be a love marriage, it will be possible to apply the same principles to unmarried people."


    Given the affection and basis as her agent, Is she trying to win your mind experimentally?


    "What ...


    I do not have anything."



    A woman who is more positive than her made att attracted her voice.


    "No, they are not really that".


    "However, Shikamaru said," I am engaged to a snake, and as a matter of your preferences, the romantic feelings of each other between us will only make things worse. "


    Nara is soft to shikamaru "I am ready to fix the battle."


    You are a good friend in the world of misery and chaos. If it brings great happiness to you, I can settle for the smaller Nara. I trust the Lord Shikaku to respond to my needs as much as possible. I am convinced that I should be opposed to Jiraiya because of irrelevant concessions if necessary.


    "Shiori was out of" what ". emergency.


    "Gokketsu, why?"


    Goketsu turned his face to the head. Her eyes are locked to Shiori with the perfect focus of sleep master.


    "Because I want the best thing for him, because someone refuses to accept the lack of talent and political value as a reason why someone should deny happiness, even a bit, not a bit.


    I was certain that he was not trying to fix it 'why'


    but lion, when the ninja mentioned in the absence of him and the snake, the barely audible sound of the kenai from which the ninja flying For the same reason that I can recognize, I acknowledged the skillfully hidden love with the voice of Shikamaru, and despite the unusual sound of the snake, she is a selfish manipulator with a cold heart I could not find it by myself to believe that I faced it, not after those words:


    "marry him", poetry Woven heard himself say. A new seed germinated from the ashes of the dead world. "If you can sacrifice your happiness for you, I think you might be tolerant to you,"


    Mr. Gockets said intensely. "Perfectly reciprocal"


    Shikamar is pointed with cleaning his throat. "Can you remind me that I have words in my own future as well?"


    All three girls watched him and waved at the same time.


    He sighed. "Is this only more troubling?" Tengen gave a sympathetic nod.


    "This is another problem," Mr. Gockets said. "Because we are all intertwined with this unwilling confusion, can we change to last name? It is troublesome to always treat you as" Nara ". And, myself, as rarely socialized, has been treated as exchangeable with five other people, as if it had a big annoyance in the fog. Please call Kenko.


    " Kenko ... Coco ... a sense of depth that two girls really did not work each other.


    Keiko caressed her eyes. "Yes, its that. Hopefully, the fact that we are standing on a lover's hill will ease the romantic hatred timing,"


    Shikamar said. "What are we standing on?"


    Tenten made a step forward. She put her hands on the shoulder of Shiori and Shikamaru. It's warmth and weight, for some reason, conveyed the feeling of welcome. After that, she gently began to head west.


    When their four people were stroked with the last light of the evening sun, Shiori discovered that she did not care about the attraction of the mass market at all.

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    Reaction post plz.

    My personal favourite is this exchange:

    Shikamaru: "I got crazy."

    Shiori: "I was always there."​
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    Is this what it is like for Tenten, when she tries to make words?
     
    Kiba said:
    @eaglejarl Do you have time to review the winning plan now?
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    Yep. Thanks for the nudge.

    MMKII said:
    Okay. Lets try this again. I will not be doing major edits. Copypaste as you desire.

    Do not vote for this by username, since we don't have a clear ruling on whether those votes count.

    WC:274
    [x]Sequitur consilium

    • Jiraiya (bring Noburi):
      • Fully inform on Mari's situation: responses, Hana's involvement, history.
        • Plead not to worsen situation by rash decisions.
        • Suggest informing Mari's friends (?), Anko and Neira.
        • (Consult Keiko, Noburi, Kagome first.)
        • (Hazou's mentality: upset with Hana, struggles reconciling her actions with his love.)
      • Mist Yakuza suggestions:
        • Produce Casino Seals to sell. (Prepare: Consult Keiko on quantity.)
        • Cooperate on tournament betting and casino gambling:
          • Cheat rich foreigners in exchange for a cut (50%?).
          • Team: Hazou + Noburi/Keiko.
          • Disguise: Rich nobleman's son/children.
          • Get Mari's training + Jiraiya's tips.
        • (Provided agreement, make preparations.)
      • Kagome's birthday: Remind. Ask to come, if briefly.
    • Ask Jiraiya, Hana, Mari about tournament:
      • Rules.
      • Information: Opponents.
      • Cheating:
        • General ideas.
        • Starting with Living Roots pre-activated.
    • Mari: Keep company. Discuss light topics. Get her help with planning Kagome's birthday.
    • Kagome: Get an Akatsuki Book copy/summary.
      • Tell him about nightmares. Ask after lucky sealmaster dances.
    • Noburi: Confide in.
      • Stressful times: bizarre nightmares, family drama, politics, tournament, Akatsuki, Pangolins...
      • We're glad to have a bro like him seeing it through with us.
    • Train:
      • Ebisu.
      • Practice faking injuries across body (Iron Nerve + Seals).
        • Run by Kagome. Train under Hana.
        • Get tiny water-proof storage seals.
          • Fill with pig blood.
          • Palm with Sleight-of-Hand, release in-combat.
        • (Mechanically: quickly create Fragile Aspects.)
      • Assess efficacy of blindfighting and sound-camouflage:
        • Buy camouflaged cloaks and flashbangs/smokebombs (or test (safely!) ash/sooth macerators).
        • Wrap seals (Vibrator/Improved Vibrator, Banshee Slayer) around body.
        • Equip Tunneler's Friend.
        • Activate Living Roots, drop flashbangs/smokebombs.
    • Other:
      • Improve Vibrators per Keiko's suggestions.
        • Spend 1-2 days. Ask Kagome's help?
      • Kagome's birthday:
        • Prepare present: Book of all his teachings.
        • Invite Honoka, Aoi, Akane.
        • Remind Akane: She's welcome at the compound!
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    You've gone past "concise" and into "telegraphic", to the point where I'm having trouble following it. Please chop out the entire training section and use the resulting word budget to form complete sentences elsewhere.


    To the hivemind in general: If you find yourself writing ungrammatically in order to save a few words, it's a sign that you're trying to do too much. At that point you should reduce section count, not word count.
     
    eaglejarl said:
    Yep. Thanks for the nudge.


    You've gone past "concise" and into "telegraphic", to the point where I'm having trouble following it. Please chop out the entire training section and use the resulting word budget to form complete sentences elsewhere.


    To the hivemind in general: If you find yourself writing ungrammatically in order to save a few words, it's a sign that you're trying to do too much. At that point you should reduce section count, not word count.
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    Thanks. I dont have the ability to make large edits at the moment but I'll chew it over and get to it in a couple hours.

    (Unless someone else wants to do that for me so I can just copypaste it or something. Or if @Cariyaga wants to edit/update his.)
     
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