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Marked for Death: A Rational Naruto Quest

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Kiba said:
I hate adding last minute details before the deadline. Look at what happened last time.
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Well the issue last time is that we had to edit the actual plan which changed its execution somewhat (because of confusing wording)

Here we can get around that by putting the above suggestion block up in front. Yay modularization.

Honestly I don't really care at all about the execution of points in Step 0 since the cover story is the obvious cover story and the moving underground thing should honestly be solvable in character within a few seconds.

Pinging the onlooking horde though, do you guys see any problems here?
 
As long as these are suggestion blocks I'm good with it. Hopefully this being prompted so late will be taken into consideration.

MMKII said:
In the form of a meager cost of chakra,say 5CP from both Shino and Kiba
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Cariyaga said:
I'll add that either before I pass out again or as soon as someone else agrees to it.

If it didn't have all the notes of a last-second-flub, I'd consider asking Shino to pop a few high scorers' henges.
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I wouldn't specify the amount of CP there. Just say to ask for some chakra or something. Akimichi gave a fairly good amount of chakra for his buy in.
 
MMKII said:
  • Hazou will quickly ask Team Kurenai for a buy in , in exchange for information about the plan (as much information as you told Team Asuma)
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I don't know whether or not that ship sailed already but lets not break more OPSEC on EM if possible. Just tell her we have a way to heat up certain areas and that's that.
 
Cariyaga said:
[X] Action Plan: Huh? Didn't We Do This Already?

Goals: Get the majority of the people here drunk without getting caught. Reduce the non-Leaf high ranking teams point scores. Get lots of points for Team Uplift.

Means:
  1. Quickly tie up some loose ends (this does not need to be in a scene)
    • Hazou will quickly ask Team Kurenai for a buy in, in exchange for information about the plan (as much information as you told Team Asuma)
      • You don't have time for haggling so its take it or leave it (the exchange below is reasonable)
      • If they agree, then quickly explain details (of what Hazou plans to do re: tipserators, not the whole thing) while you get the buy in.
      • Chakra buy-in from Shino and Kiba
      • Hinata can help us scout out the grounds quickly with the Byakugan and suggest optimal travel path for Hazou underground to the necessary spot under the mansion.
      • If they don't agree, oh well.
    • Hazou will quickly debrief Keiko (maybe Shikamaru too;with orders to tell everyone else after he leaves) on a possible cover story
      • We noticed the heat, determined it was some form of attack and grouped up for safety.
        • If I return before proctors then I was here all along.
        • If I return after proctors then I left to go scout out the situation
  2. Use the Tipserator to get a bunch of ninja drunk. Don't get caught.
    • Hazou will use Hiding Like a Mole to move under the porch near where the people are gathered, toward the back so he doesn't get caught, followed by using the tipserator
      • Do not release Hiding Like a Mole: Instead, immediately sink back underground the moment the tipserator goes off, taking the tipserator with Hazou.
      • This should also make the tipserator look less like a cone.
    • While this is going on, Hazou is to wear a grey cloth over his face as camouflage against the darkness under the porch, keeping his eyes as close to closed as he can. Remove this before returning to STL.
  3. Return to Super Team Leaf.
    • Return to the marquee from underground. Hazou emerges at a well-concealed location (using an FP if necessary for there to be one) partially as-before to check that STL is by themselves, before returning to them underground to rejoin them.
    • Find out the results of the operation
      • Assumedly, Hinata is taking a peek to ascertain who won the bets made.
    • Suggest that the teams cooperate by sharing names of high scoring non-Leaf teams by sharing information. Targets of particular interest are Team Downfall, Team Mugiwara, those that Hazou gave intel on from the Oyabun before, and any other team that other members of STL want dealt with.
      • Hazou suggests sharing those particular teams' names with any cliques that have formed. He has one in mind.
        • This information will, of course, be bartered with the cliques and shared back with STL given opportunity.
    • Express a general willingness to work together with the other teams to maximize point gain for STL. The better Leaf does in general, the more powerful Leaf appears.
  4. Continue the event, enacting various plots and schemes. Check these with Keiko and Noburi, and STL if they judge it necessary. Do whichever of these are judged most profitable/least risky -- not all of them.
    • Try to avoid being anywhere alone except break rooms; stay within earshot of teammates.
    • Write down lists detailing relevant information of the teams you want sabotaged prepared. Only release this through Bonku if someone else does something similar, otherwise it'll be a race to to the bottom that benefits the low-scoring teams.
      • Alternately, we could start rumors through Bonku of high-scorers being ninja.
    • Use sweat to determine who's a ninja and who isn't.
      • The genin probably don't have much experience with alcohol, additionally.
    • Chat up the drunk ninja -- those that aren't seemingly-violent -- and make good on not being drunk to get intel from them: names, village, team name, and secret IDs, both theirs and that they know of.
    • Start a matchmaking service of some kind. With ninja identities already exposed, people might be more willing to take up this offer. A member of Team Uplift will ask "who are you looking for", though not their own role (which can likely be sussed out anyways), and direct people together, under a guarantee that the info won't leave your team. Net potential gain is 45 points for parties matched with this, and 10 points for each match for every member of Team Uplift. Consider using break rooms for the information exchanges.
    • Pretend to be disguised proctors looking for the perpetrators, convince drunken ninja to give half-words, secret identities, and other event-related personal details.
Contingencies:
  • If someone starts something before we let off the tipserator:
    • Observe if given the chance, if it seems like it would be dangerous to release the tipserator, don't do so, just abort the mission.
  • If things go south and it turns into a proper clusterfuck of pre-retcon proportions
    • When returning to STL, point out that he told Shikamaru about the idea and he had no objections then.
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How's it look?
 
Enjou said:
As long as these are suggestion blocks I'm good with it. Hopefully this being prompted so late will be taken into consideration.




I wouldn't specify the amount of CP there. Just say to ask for some chakra or something. Akimichi gave a fairly good amount of chakra for his buy in.
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Done.

Enjou said:
Also, @Cariyaga, I'd have Keiko make the deal with Team Kurenai, not Hazou. She's better at that.
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Done.


How about now guys?
 
Cariyaga said:
Did various edits, check it over? I also added that if Hinata suggests somewhere better/safer/more secure to fire off the tipserator from, to use that instead.
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Uh, I don't like how that's worded. Maybe put a (Hazou uses his judgement to decide) after that " -OR "
 
Man I don't know about all this. I'd rather just add in the edits Velorien found necessary and be done with it. :p
 
Cariyaga said:
Man I don't know about all this. I'd rather just add in the edits Velorien found necessary and be done with it. :p
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That's literally what was done.


*I* don't see why or if he found any of those to be necessary, though.
 
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Cariyaga said:
Sorry, what did you mean by that?
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It's in the part of the plan that is basically "do this stuff". Suggestion blocks may or may not happen at QM discretion, as they're generally left to Hazou's discretion.

@Velorien, I just ask that you bear in mind that these adds were prompted very late in the process and the majority of voters haven't really had a chance to discuss or look over them.

Though I would think things like the Kurenai buy in would have happened already. Plenty of time for Keiko to have negotiated a deal while the setup was going on.
 
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If we last minute just switch to (whatever the fuck location Hinata describes) she could throw the entire thing out accidentally.


If this can't be done then I would rather we just spam [x] Lore upd
Cariyaga said:
Already did so.
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But you didn't, In 2.1 you would also have to add that in, since otherwise it just switches to what Hinata is telling us if she agreed to the deal


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CCNJ

This has gone beyond the limit of simple reasonable last minute changes. We must have more time. Please vote lore update!

Edit edit: ok now with that as a suggestion box and removal of asking Hinata for extra stuff that's fine.
 
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MMKII said:
If we last minute just switch to (whatever the fuck location Hinata describes) she could throw the entire thing out accidentally.


If this can't be done then I would rather we just spam [x] Lore upd

But you didn't, In 2.1 you would also have to add that in, since otherwise it just switches to what Hinata is telling us if she agreed to the deal
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Ah, good call.

Should I just remove asking Hinata for advice on where to fire it from, then? (God I hate being too sleepy to have an opinion on things. :p)
 
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