I really hate to say this guy's, but the fact that they're all from the same town doesn't change the worth of their lives.

The argument is that even though they deserve to live, by no fault of their own their continued existence will lead to *everyones* death.


That logic holds even if we don't like it, unless we have better arguments.

The argument I would have made is that the killing is completely pointless if the information ever gets out by other means, and Isan has had 200 years for at least one person to go missing and for their jutsu to end up in some other villages utility jutsu library.


That being said, plot points that we didn't follow up on earlier were going to kill them anyways - a sealmaster of any discipline who no longer maintains his tools? The clock was ticking.


My problem is, I think rock *knows*, and was working on slowly killing Isan via bleeding their patrols, which is WAY MORE DENIABLE.

No way to know prior to the ooc info this chapter, but I would be completely unsurprised if Rock was gleefully raising EM in the background to use on Leaf. Would be very poetic.
If Nara future predictions and logic were so foolproof, Leaf would be the peaceful despots of the continent right now. The fact that they aren't means the logic is not some Path to Victory or visions of the future; they are predictions made by biased humans that are not impregnable. The fact that shikamaru is attempting to hide behind the "objective truth of math" is abhorrent and makes me suspect many of the things he has done prior to this.
 
We obeyed the hierarchy of Leaf's military dictatorship and once the Hokage, our supreme commander, informed us of his intended actions we did nothing to stop him.

That sounds like we were following orders in most every way that matters to me 🤷‍♀️
We did do stuff to stop him; we explicitly attempted to make arguments against the use of EM Nukes.

You can argue, given that Asuma is an order of magnitude more powerful than us and any attempt to dissuade him via force would be pointless, that we did the literal best that we possibly could.
 
the music for today's; And so the snow covers a village that was hidden by Mountains for generations

I cannot stress Hazō NEEDs to having (second) missing-nin arc but to do this I think we need to prepare first, seals specifically for it and of course do it during the exams after all we can have a big speech about why you are doing this

Also this is definitely see something like this unlocking the
Mangekyō iron nerve as this is like suicide to ideals this is against everything Hazō stands for if you ask me this here would be the perfect opportunity what power you would get well something that has to do with being able to stop other people's actions I'm making it that his own actions can't affect things
Iris-Iven-Ibis threw 1 100-faced dice. Reason: Mangekyō Total: 53
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In spite of (because of?) how horrifying that was, this chapter was an exceptionally fun read. I especially liked the buildup and wistful villain monologue. Could almost hear the somber orchestra in the background.
 
We did do stuff to stop him; we explicitly attempted to make arguments against the use of EM Nukes.

You can argue, given that Asuma is an order of magnitude more powerful than us and any attempt to dissuade him via force would be pointless, that we did the literal best that we possibly could.
There's also the fact that Hazou wasn't read in on any of the progress reports concerning anti-EM measures. Makes me question how much the EM council really weighed into his decision vs Shikamaru.
 
Funny enough, I'd make the argument that Leaf, not Isan needs to be wiped out for the good of the world. You know...given that they're the only ones using this civilization-threatening nuke.
 
Despite the horror that was pretty awesome. The juxtaposition of a party and a local apocalypse is pretty dope

Also as upset as people are about Isan getting wiped out, I kind of agree with Shikamaru. If there were another viable way to suppress EM nuke then I'd support it over nuking Isan but tbh we really didn't have a good answer to preventing the apocalypse. IN MY OPINION, moral victory means nothing when it results in everyone dying.

As upsetting as it is that Uplift are the ones who came upon the nuke, Shikamaru is not wrong that someone else would've found it once Isan started handing it out, and ultimately I think it's better that it was discovered.
 
Funny enough, I'd make the argument that Leaf, not Isan needs to be wiped out for the good of the world. You know...given that they're the only ones using this civilization-threatening nuke.
There's definitely a values argument to be made there. These lives need to be protected regardless of the cost, for all lives are worthwhile. Hazō is the only person in that room who believes that.
 
Hazō has made substantial progress on the Directional Explosive seal. He thinks he's around halfway done. Hazō thinks this seal is chūnin-level difficulty, and that he could finish it much faster without prep days.
that he is a little more than halfway done with directional explosives.
Is that right Paper? Hazou went from "around halfway done" to "a little more than halfway done" with one research roll?
 
Despite the horror that was pretty awesome. The juxtaposition of a party and a local apocalypse is pretty dope

Also as upset as people are about Isan getting wiped out, I kind of agree with Shikamaru. If there were another viable way to suppress EM nuke then I'd support it over nuking Isan but tbh we really didn't have a good answer to preventing the apocalypse. IN MY OPINION, moral victory means nothing when it results in everyone dying.

As upsetting as it is that Uplift are the ones who came upon the nuke, Shikamaru is not wrong that someone else would've found it once Isan started handing it out, and ultimately I think it's better that it was discovered.
Oh and Shikamaru is angsting over how easily he makes the decisions that he was literally groomed to make from birth, possibly before birth if there are secret sauce jutsu that help moms.


My read is that this is legitimately the best path forward he sees.
 
Rejoice! The timeline has grown so long that it has budded off another google doc once more. You can find the new timeline doc here:

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PLAYERS - Timeline 600+

Marked For Death: Player Timeline Part 8: Ch. 600+ Go back to Part 1 Go back to Part 2 Go back to Part 3 Go back to Part 4 Go back to Part 5 Go back to Part 6 Go back to Part 7 Dates Duration Notes Events January 27 - February 1 Most chapter events happen on January 30 Chapter 600: ...
 
They will not be expected anywhere for several months. Perhaps as much as a year will pass before their absence is noted, as their location is still secret to most other countries.
Oh, I didn't know this. This makes nuking Isan much more viable.

However, the Pangolin Summoner is not wily. She is a slave to her own conscience, and does not have the willpower to abandon an ally, even when required to save another.
Oof. He's got you pegged there, Kei.

We'll extract that information for you.
Nice! How exciting!
 
Takahashi knew his innocence, but the other villagers thought him responsible for their patrols' disappearances to chakra beasts over the past year.
Abnormal disappearances over the last year.... that's definitely a leak risk.
"kidnap and interrogate an outlying patrol" seems like a reasonable infogathering step for any number of parties who learned form spying on leaf the Isan existed, and wanted to find out more
 
So, fellas, how about those estate plans?
"If we die, force Shin to download a summoning scroll"

On a different topic:
we know that this forum thread is in the Out, and seemingly the bit of Out with most adjacency to Hazo's life(the "Zero G" failure was also about this thread)
we(Hazo + Kei) believe downloading the summoning scroll turned Hazo into a puppet for arbitrary Out entities
glimpses while downloading the scroll revealed to Hazo a timeless perspective on his own life

my best guess for "why is Hazo puppeted by Sufficient Velocity" is "downloading the scroll opened Hazo to Out-control. because the Out-perspective is timeless, it affected Hazo starting several years before he opened the scroll".

what's really interesting is this: if we get another Kurosawa to download a summoning scroll, do we get to make them an additional PC?

(edit: fixed links. also, wow, hunting those links down sucked)
 
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So, the current state of play:
  • We can still use EM against the Dragons.
  • Isan is toast and other nations are going to realize this eventually.
    • There will presumably be a coverup effort on the part of Leaf.
  • Asuma presumably had a Yamanaka jonin rustle around the brains of the Isanese and pulled out any relevant lore. It may be filtered through Shikamaru first, but we'll get some material out of this.
Like...this is not a good outcome, by any means, but Isan is pretty small and Yuno probably knew everyone. If we put our foot on the gas as far as the rift goes, we can get Nagato back and if we're sufficiently convincing? We can still achieve our goals.

We got new information in that meeting. EM OPSEC had been totally breached. Given that, I don't think it was possible to avoid this outcome given that we'd run the EM test. We weren't going to vote to believe it was a failure (it gives up too much of Akane's build and we would have never tested it again given the magnitude of the destruction) and there was nothing we could have said to convince Asuma of anything else.

This sucks. The part that was our fault was not taking sufficient precautions in testing EM. The rest of it flowed from there.

I'm worried about Kagome and Yuno. Kagome because he'll investigate, Yuno because we need to lie to her and Kei needs to lie to her.

Our paths forward are revivification and cooperating with Leaf, and revivification and cooperating with the Akatsuki. Both require revivification efforts. We can focus on the Conclave, and we can focus on revivification. We can throw ourselves into the work and try to maybe, maybe salvage some of this.
 
We did do stuff to stop him; we explicitly attempted to make arguments against the use of EM Nukes.

You can argue, given that Asuma is an order of magnitude more powerful than us and any attempt to dissuade him via force would be pointless, that we did the literal best that we possibly could.

Hazō rolled his eyes. "And if you're so close to your own promotion, what are your combat techniques? How would you take down a jōnin-level opponent? The seals I've shown publicly are already enough to kill S-rankers when used right. I'm not going to reveal the clan secret seals I hold in reserve."

I'm not saying we should have suicide bombed Asuma & those ANBU. But we recently lost one of our anchors of mental stability and have done something that no matter how you look at it is directly contrary to the ethos of the world we're trying to build. I think that's gonna have consequences.

I think that was Leaf?

That was also how I interpreted it when I was reading the chapter, but it seems like one of the remaining proliferation risks is going to be those Orochimaru cultists that left the past few months.

EDIT: formatting
 
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