That omake was really great :)
It set up the premise really well and bowled me over with its smooth delivery. Buff!Sasuke and Buff!Hazou One True Cousins for life.
Delightful.


The Chinese invented a system of writing that specifies neither the pronunciation nor the meaning? And the Japanese voluntarily adopted it?
You'd think it would be a mess, but in practice it works quite elegantly. It's kind of like greek and latin roots in english, but with every word consistently using either a greek (ancient japanese) or latin (ancient chinese) root without random french/german/saxon/whatever bits shoved in somewhere as english does.

"Written as X; read as Y" ("X to kaite, Y to yomu") is a linguistic trope that plays with the mechanics of the Japanese language. I first encountered it in the romcom anime Seto no Hanayome (somewhat unimaginatively localised as "My Bride is a Mermaid"). The mermaid mafia clan (I love anime) has the motto "Written as 'ninkyo' [chivalrous spirit]; read as 'ningyo' [mermaid]!" The relevant characters are briefly shown onscreen, with dramatic animation, every time someone says it.
I've heard really great things about that anime, and now I've heard another.
 
[X] Action Plan: Operation Tele(Micro)scope


  • Share the concept of FOOM with Akane, in high-security conditions.
    • Convey both the kind of benefits she could gain from it and the importance of keeping it secret.
      • It'd be very bad if someone like Orochimaru learned of it.
  • Game night
    • Have a casual game night. Make sure to invite Sasuke and other peers.
    • Have a fun and relaxed time.


Give Mari the telescope project
  • Overall goal: Acquire the expertise on making telescope.
    • Presumably by adopting telescope craftsmen and their family.
  • Incidentally also expand the merchant spy network to aid in the search.
  • A budget to Incentivize people for information.
    • Also reward people for useful tips in general.
Give optics/glassworkers the other project:
  • Kabuto got eyewear that correct his vision, right? Optics craftsmen may be locals.
    • Adopt/invest and work with them as necessary.
    • The Aburame Clan are known glassworkers, and they made non-optical eyewear. Maybe collaboration is possible?
  • Objective: Replicate a working telescope. Buy telescopes for them if available.
  • Reward them for success/progress/effort. Also reward them for any incidental useful innovations.
  • Project continues until success or Mari achieved her goal.

Feedback?
 
Didn't someone want to do some forays into learning chemistry/alchemy? I remember saying that would require glass alembics and test tubes, but if we're going to look into glassmaking anyway... why not? If nothing else, it'll be a resource that we can have to throw towards medical advancement. Personally, I'm still kinda hoping to introduce inoculations and prosthesis into MfD.

You could add a line "Objective: recreate research alembics"
 
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[X] Action Plan: Blossoms delicately floating on a stream
Timeline: Until Noburi finishes summoner training
  • Timeline: Until Noburi finishes summoner training
    • Share the concept of FOOM with Akane, in high-security conditions.
      • Convey both the kind of benefits she could gain and the importance of keeping it secret.
        • It'd be bad if someone like Orochimaru learned of it.
    • Summoning
      • Discuss with the clan: Medium OPSEC
      • Since Noburi is completing his training, Hazou wants to discuss 7th path plans
        • With Noburi's bloodline, a chakra farm on the 7th path could let us refuel a summoner anytime
          • Remember the 5th event? We could have that, with more summons, without drainable Human Path targets, at any time.
          • Jiraiya said that draining summons could be deadly. We should be safe.
          • Asuma and Jiraiya mentioned Ma & Pa, you might want to track them down for advice.
        • Which summoners can we trade the trick to?
          • Neji just completed his training. We can build relationships with the Hyuuga (or make them dependent)
          • Asuma
            • Hazou would like to tell him directly. Jiraiya said this was an "ace-in-the-hole", but Asuma's goodwill may be more valuable than Clan Secrets
          • Other new Summoners will train concurrently with Hazou
            • Can we make sure the scrolls goes to us/ally, by promising to empower them with this?
              • Akane/Haru
              • Sasuke, who might appreciate our help?
              • ISC?
              • Kei?
        • Summon trade network
          • Without considering the Human Path, the inverse works, so we can test it with 7th path clans.
          • This would give us more income, and build bonds between summon clans and summoners.
    • Once Noburi finishes his training:
      • We can make the signing a family event.
      • Otherwise, request that he summon Toads that want to meet Jiraiya's family, when he's ready.
      • Ask Noburi to message the Dogs Hazo's intent of becoming a summoner.
    • Keiko's birthday prep
      • Commission someone to create a manga starring a Keiko expy
    • Check on projects.
 
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[X] Action Plan: Operation Tele(Micro)scope

Timeskip Noburi finished training.
  • Share the concept of FOOM with Akane, in high-security conditions.
    • Convey both the kind of benefits she could gain from it and the importance of keeping it secret.
      • It'd be very bad if someone like Orochimaru learned of it.
  • Game night
    • Have a casual game night. Make sure to invite Sasuke and other peers.
    • Have a fun and relaxed time.


Give Mari the telescope project
  • Overall goal: Acquire the expertise on making telescope.
    • Presumably by adopting telescope craftsmen and their family.
  • Incidentally also expand the merchant spy network to aid in the search.
  • A budget to Incentivize people for information.
    • Also reward people for useful tips in general.
Give optics/glassworkers the other project:
  • Kabuto got eyewear that correct his vision, right? Optics craftsmen may be locals.
    • Adopt/invest and work with them as necessary.
    • The Aburame Clan are known glassworkers, and they made non-optical eyewear. Maybe collaboration is possible?
  • Objective: Replicate a working telescope. Buy telescopes for them if available.
  • Reward them for success/progress/effort. Also reward them for any incidental useful innovations.
  • Project continues until success or Mari achieved her goal.
Birthday gift:
  • Commission manga about Keiko expy frantically rescuing her siblings from various perils.
added Birthday gift and timeskip.
 
Hazō took them and tentatively unfurled them one after the other. As was common with storage scrolls, the empty space in the middle of the seal bore a character that loosely indicated the contents: "Sword", for example, for a backup sword, or "water" for a barrel of drinking water. These, naturally, were labelled "^_^".
How did she do that, by the way? I'm afraid I wasn't paying enough attention to the exact mechanics of storage scrolls to know whether this is a party trick or a paradigm-upsetting feat.
 
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How did she do that, by the way? I'm afraid I wasn't paying enough attention to the exact mechanics of storage scrolls to know whether this is a party trick or a paradigm-upsetting feat.

I don't think the "label" portion of the seal is special, it's just a blank bit of parchment with the magic ink surrounding it like a forest does a glade. I'm assuming, though, that if the ink from the label extends/messes with the fuuinjutsu script, then it'll cause a sealing failure.
 
I don't think the "label" portion of the seal is special, it's just a blank bit of parchment with the magic ink surrounding it like a forest does a glade. I'm assuming, though, that if the ink from the label extends/messes with the fuuinjutsu script, then it'll cause a sealing failure.
When you store something, an image of what you stored appears in the little spot thingy on the storage scroll.
 
When you store something, an image of what you stored appears in the little spot thingy on the storage scroll.

It's quite possible Ami added the ^_^ to the label, while the label indicate content.

Didn't someone want to do some forays into learning chemistry/alchemy? I remember saying that would require glass alembics and test tubes, but if we're going to look into glassmaking anyway... why not? If nothing else, it'll be a resource that we can have to throw towards medical advancement. Personally, I'm still kinda hoping to introduce inoculations and prosthesis into MfD.

You could add a line "Objective: recreate research alembics"

I want to focus the glassworkers on the telescope project instead of dillydallying around some other projects.
 
Randomly following links on SV mostly and just wondering if there's been a reference to Ace Combat lurking around
Don't really know enough about Ace Combat to say for certain but it's been mentioned before by players:
An S-Ranker is the equivalent of a celebrity, a legend and a demigod. Everyone knows about them,they can single-handely change the culture of a their own village and their abilities could as well be divine considering how far above they compared to the rest of the ninja. Where a Jonin is admired an S-ranker is venerated.(It comes to mind Ace Combat 7 and his "Stick with trigger and you'll make it", if Jiraya do something people would follow him just because he's Jiraya)
 
Almost being executed is a disease Hazou has spread to Ami.
True, true — and entirely deliberate.

If you've been paying attention, you would know that we've been working on the Shadow Clone Singularity, and identified Ami as a potential OPSEC risk. Similarly, you should know that treason equals power.

As a matter of fact, there's a possibility for a treason-based XP singularity as well, where each new instance of treason is calculated to entangle you with more and more new institutions you could subsequently betray, your treachery ever greater, your powers ever stronger. Ami has clearly been following this model, with a truly inspired approach of personally creating the institutions relations with which she's planning to later harvest for treason XP (AMI, KEI, the Kei Clan, etc.).

But her approach was flawed. The growth rate was much slower than her calculations indicated, suggesting that something about the treasons she was committing was... off. Once Hazou came in fresh out of the killbox, and she saw he's been earning 17 XP/day, it struck her: a treason isn't complete unless you're publicly and officially convinced of it! So she went to get almost-executed in Mist, and undoubtedly earned a staggering amount of XP from the experience.

Precisely according to Hazou's plan.

You see, the Treason Singularity's main flaw is that it's dangerous. It's obviously still the correct approach to take when it's the only game in town, as not being an S-ranker for any period of time is begging to be killed anyway... However! Hazou now has access to the Shadow Clone Singularity, and it's superior in almost every way: safer, faster, more inconspicuous, with less collateral damage (twenty thousand dead forks notwithstanding). But how can he ensure Ami doesn't catch on and attempt to steal this secret? Simple: he distracts her by leaking an improvement over the inferior singularity technique she'd already been using, ensuring she'd be too focused on optimizing it and re-calibrating all her future plots to look for something qualitatively better.

With Shikaku gone, his apprentice Sasuke is the only one who stands any chance of seeing through Lord Gouketsu's fathomless machinations. Will Sasuke be able to succeed where his teacher failed?
 
I would like to request that the following section from the previous winning plan be included in current plans in this cycle. I pledge to vote for plans that include this section true to spirit.
  • Share the concept of FOOM with Akane, in high-security conditions.
    • Convey both the kind of benefits she could gain from it and the importance of keeping it secret.
      • It'd be very bad if someone like Orochimaru learned of it.
edit: kiba's plan has it
[X] Action Plan: Operation Tele(Micro)scope
 
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[X] Action Plan: Blossoms delicately floating on a stream
Time line: Until Noburi finishes summoner training


  • Share the concept of FOOM with Akane, in high-security conditions.
    • Convey both the kind of benefits she could gain from it and the importance of keeping it secret.
      • It'd be very bad if someone like Orochimaru learned of it.
  • Meet with Kei Haruka
    • The Goketsu look forward to a long a fruitful relationship
    • The Kei clan is most certainly deserving of the utmost respect
    • If there is anything the need from us let us know
  • Summoning discussion
    • Discuss with the clan: Medium OPSEC
    • Since Noburi is rapidly approaching completing his summoning training Hazou wants to discuss 7th path plans
      • First thanks to Noburi if we sit up a chakra farm on the 7th path we could deliver chakra to a summoner at any time
        • Remember the 5th event? That can be us all the time but even more so
        • Of course Jiraiya told us that draining summons could be deadly. So have to be extra careful to make sure Noburi is safe.
        • Noburi once you complete your summon training try to find some toad sages who can advise you. Asuma mentioned Ma & Pa toad maybe consult with them?
        • Once it's confirmed completely safe start trying to build a farm that he can drain from
      • What can we get by selling this to other summoners?
        • Neji just completed his training an
        • Asuma
          • Hazou would like to just offer it to him at any time
        • Porcupine summoner
          • Can we make sure it goes to us/ally?
          • Akane/Haru
          • Sasuke might be a valuable summoner if we made him dependent on our chakra water?
          • ISC?
          • Kei?
      • Summon trade network
        • Asuma wasn't a fan of it on the human path but we can test it on the 7th path
        • This would give us more income and increased relationships with every summoner we bring into the network
  • Misc
  • Birthday prep
    • Commission someone to create a manga starring a Kei expy

This plan have very long meeting without doing anything. Either we make a summon trade network, or not. Also, the meeting with Kei clan is pointless. They might as well get invited to gaming night. Propose a initiative or something, even minor. Like a standard dress uniform for KEI and the rest of the Konoha military.
 
[X] Action Plan: Blossoms delicately floating on a stream

I really like the name.
 
Word Count: 281
[X] Action Plan: Blossoms delicately floating on a stream
Time line: Until Noburi finishes summoner training


  • Share the concept of FOOM with Akane, in high-security conditions.
    • Convey both the kind of benefits she could gain from it and the importance of keeping it secret.
      • It'd be very bad if someone like Orochimaru learned of it.
  • Meet with Kei Haruka
    • The Goketsu look forward to a long a fruitful relationship
    • The Kei clan is most certainly deserving of the utmost respect
    • If there is anything the need from us let us know
  • Summoning discussion
    • Discuss with the clan: Medium OPSEC
    • Since Noburi is rapidly approaching completing his summoning training Hazou wants to discuss 7th path plans
      • First thanks to Noburi if we sit up a chakra farm on the 7th path we could deliver chakra to a summoner at any time
        • Remember the 5th event? That can be us all the time but even more so
        • Of course Jiraiya told us that draining summons could be deadly. So have to be extra careful to make sure Noburi is safe.
        • Noburi once you complete your summon training try to find some toad sages who can advise you. Asuma mentioned Ma & Pa toad maybe consult with them?
        • Once it's confirmed completely safe start trying to build a farm that he can drain from
      • What can we get by selling this to other summoners?
        • Neji just completed his training an
        • Asuma
          • Hazou would like to just offer it to him at any time
        • Porcupine summoner
          • Can we make sure it goes to us/ally?
          • Akane/Haru
          • Sasuke might be a valuable summoner if we made him dependent on our chakra water?
          • ISC?
          • Kei?
      • Summon trade network
        • Asuma wasn't a fan of it on the human path but we can test it on the 7th path
        • This would give us more income and increased relationships with every summoner we bring into the network
  • Misc
  • Birthday prep
    • Commission someone to create a manga starring a Kei expy
Probably will have feedback for streamlining the 7P section, but I think that if we're timeskipping to the conclusion of Noburi's summon training, a cooler scene to have than the (seemingly aimless) meeting with Kei Haruka would be meeting the Toads. I'm pretty confident they'll accept him as a summoner.
 
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