Yeah, I agree. The point of these ideas isn't that I think they're all reasonable good ideas, but that I want to explore as many directions as possible to see what shakes out. For instance, given how little we know about Pure Lands lore, "there exists a chakra oasis and Jashin guides Hazou to it" sounds surprisingly plausible to me, and might be a good way to let the quest meaningfully continue without outright rolling back the death.

I expect, once we move on to choosing options we like most, that I might rank them all by factors like "how contrived is it" and "how enjoyable does this seem" and "how much of the impact of this chapter is retained". In my head, the ideal option is pretty close to that scenario, if it's compatible with MfD Pure Lands worldbuilding.
Yeah, the most realistic option is "Hazou goes to the afterlife, what do you do now?". Personally, though, unless Hazou manages to somehow get out within like a year we're all dead anyway due to Mari leaking EM Nukes to the wider ninja world and the entire EN turns into a flattened, frozen hellscape unsuitable to life, and Hazou can't gather enough resources to survive. Which I think is the best reason to do a retcon such that Hazou doesn't get biobombed.

I'm still in favor of "Snowflake, desperate to save Hazou from Orochimaru's bioseal, realizes that it doesn't matter if Hazou dies so long as he is brought back immediately afterwards, and kills Hazou while the rift is still open so that he can emerge free of his bioseal" for this reason.
 
so orochimaru just ended the world?, what stops mari from leaking the 3d seals and super chillers?
 
Hazō started to move, but he was too slow. Orochimaru snapped his fingers and
...seemingly nothing happened. "When you were designing the remote trigger for that killswitch," said Hazo's shadow clone, "how did you plan to overcome the chakra diffusion problem? I mean, the instance of me with functional bioseals is at least a hundred times further away than I've ever managed to stretch a MARS chain."
 
Yeah, the most realistic option is "Hazou goes to the afterlife, what do you do now?". Personally, though, unless Hazou manages to somehow get out within like a year we're all dead anyway due to Mari leaking EM Nukes to the wider ninja world and the entire EN turns into a flattened, frozen hellscape unsuitable to life, and Hazou can't gather enough resources to survive. Which I think is the best reason to do a retcon such that Hazou doesn't get biobombed.

I'm still in favor of "Snowflake, desperate to save Hazou from Orochimaru's bioseal, realizes that it doesn't matter if Hazou dies so long as he is brought back immediately afterwards, and kills Hazou while the rift is still open so that he can emerge free of his bioseal" for this reason.
Truthfully I expect that within 6 months there would be a runic failure sufficient to render the planet inhospitable to all known forms of life. If it even still existed as a single object.
 
Yeah, the most realistic option is "Hazou goes to the afterlife, what do you do now?". Personally, though, unless Hazou manages to somehow get out within like a year we're all dead anyway due to Mari leaking EM Nukes to the wider ninja world and the entire EN turns into a flattened, frozen hellscape unsuitable to life, and Hazou can't gather enough resources to survive. Which I think is the best reason to do a retcon such that Hazou doesn't get biobombed.

I'm still in favor of "Snowflake, desperate to save Hazou from Orochimaru's bioseal, realizes that it doesn't matter if Hazou dies so long as he is brought back immediately afterwards, and kills Hazou while the rift is still open so that he can emerge free of his bioseal" for this reason.
Removing the Bioseal doesn't actually work for that, because Oro can just punch through Hazou's skull with just as much impunity. The seals just made it utterly trivial.

If Oro is to leave Hazou alive with his current mindset, he needs to think he isn't. That Hazou is actually already dead.
 
And if we had learned this information in advance, then removing the bioseal is just a quick Tsunade surgery away. Or, at worst, a quick suicide and then walk-out-of-the-rift away. Maybe. Not sure about that one.
Orochimaru stated that the coil removal could be performed by a trained surgeon assuming no complications from Iron Nerve. After the surgery he admitted there were complications from the Iron Nerve. And that says nothing about the intentional kill switch that we know he has put in place now, which would be tamper resistant. I see no hope of Tsunade's biosealing skill overcoming Orochimaru's here.

The suicide to clear bioseals is dubious at best, but we could probably roll with it if that ends up being a chosen rollback pathway for the players.

@eaglejarl @Velorien @Paperclipped I am curious to know what Kagome was doing during this time frame, for purposes of considering rollback pathways. That is, if you were open to revealing that OOC. I understand if you want to keep it concealed.
 
I'm still in favor of "Snowflake, desperate to save Hazou from Orochimaru's bioseal, realizes that it doesn't matter if Hazou dies so long as he is brought back immediately afterwards, and kills Hazou while the rift is still open so that he can emerge free of his bioseal" for this reason.
*Orochimaru snaps his fingers*

*Hazou doesn't explode*

Orochimaru: "Huh, that should've worked"

*Orochimaru obliterates Hazou with an S-rank jutsu*


The problem isn't that we have a killswitch in us, it's that we followed a Sannin into the woods when he wants us dead.
 
Orochimaru stated that the coil removal could be performed by a trained surgeon assuming no complications from Iron Nerve. After the surgery he admitted there were complications from the Iron Nerve. And that says nothing about the intentional kill switch that we know he has put in place now, which would be tamper resistant. I see no hope of Tsunade's biosealing skill overcoming Orochimaru's here.

The suicide to clear bioseals is dubious at best, but we could probably roll with it if that ends up being a chosen rollback pathway for the players.

@eaglejarl @Velorien @Paperclipped I am curious to know what Kagome was doing during this time frame, for purposes of considering rollback pathways. That is, if you were open to revealing that OOC. I understand if you want to keep it concealed.
Kagome is fairly predictable. I imagine he was preparing his own world-ending contingency.
 
also the kill-switch is completely superfluous; he could have ended hazou right there whit a punch?, why is the surgery the quest ender when oro just killing him outright at any point be equaly simulationist by that metric?
 
also the kill-switch is completely superfluous; he could have ended hazou right there whit a punch?, why is the surgery the quest ender when oro just killing him outright at any point be equaly simulationist by that metric?

It isn't, quest ender is all the way back demonstrating desire for proliferation of technology. This is just the blade falling.
 
I began to type up a response, but became sufficiently demotivated. Instead, I'm just going to be a lurker. Maybe I'll vote in the upcoming poll (currently undecided) but my engagement thereafter will likely be minimal. At best, for a bit. Luckily, my reaction seems to be an outlier.
 
also the kill-switch is completely superfluous; he could have ended hazou right there whit a punch?, why is the surgery the quest ender when oro just killing him outright at any point be equaly simulationist by that metric?
Yeah, Oro was just pontificating to express his own superiority. The surgery was irrelevant to Hazou dying here.
 
...seemingly nothing happened. "When you were designing the remote trigger for that killswitch," said Hazo's shadow clone, "how did you plan to overcome the chakra diffusion problem? I mean, the instance of me with functional bioseals is at least a hundred times further away than I've ever managed to stretch a MARS chain."
Unfortunately, Hazou's SC lack Iron Nerve, and thus move visably differently from him.
It's subtle, but snowflake noticed, and Oro has ~twice her alertness. Then again, Oro might pay little enough attention to Hazou's movements, and has a much smaller sample.

Seems weird he wouldn't verify it's Prime tho.
 
Removing the Bioseal doesn't actually work for that, because Oro can just punch through Hazou's skull with just as much impunity. The seals just made it utterly trivial.
*Orochimaru snaps his fingers*

*Hazou doesn't explode*

Orochimaru: "Huh, that should've worked"

*Orochimaru obliterates Hazou with an S-rank jutsu*


The problem isn't that we have a killswitch in us, it's that we followed a Sannin into the woods when he wants us dead.
On Discord Paper PONWOG'd Tsunade's hypothetical reaction to us telling her about the bioseal as being (paraphrased) "You did? As long as you didn't give him a reason to off you you're good. ... He has a reason to off you? Well, you're fucked then." If Kei manages to kill Hazou to remove the bioseal, Tsunade is going to want to find out why, and the ensuing conversation (taking place while the rift is presumably still-open enough to keep death from sticking to Hazou) would be enough to keep Hazou alive in the short-term, I think.
 
On Discord Paper PONWOG'd Tsunade's hypothetical reaction to us telling her about the bioseal as being (paraphrased) "You did? As long as you didn't give him a reason to off you you're good. ... He has a reason to off you? Well, you're fucked then." If Kei manages to kill Hazou to remove the bioseal, Tsunade is going to want to find out why, and the ensuing conversation (taking place while the rift is presumably still-open enough to keep death from sticking to Hazou) would be enough to keep Hazou alive in the short-term, I think.
Ah, changing the Tsunade part of the equation. Yes, I could see that working.
 
On how to open the rift from afterlife:
Kagome mentioned how to open the rift from one side. It needs figuring out more of Minato's sealing chain, bioseals/medical ninjutsu, old fashioned paper sealing, and a willing jinchuriiki. And a way to find the rift. We can find dead experts in biosealing, medical ninjutsu, Minato himself, Hyuuga/Uchiha for location finding if Akatsuki didn't mark it when they set up the base. If they didn't place paper and ink in the base, hopefully we can improvise with skin and blood or something. The missing component is jinchuriiki. When a jinchuriiki dies a new one is made. So I highly doubt we will find one in the afterlife. But if we find enough experts, and forbidden lore knowers, maybe we can improvise something. And dead Wakahisa can be used to keep the important people alive by draining others. Although everyone being drained means we will still need influxes of freshly dead ninja for chakra. Also maybe Pain's cheating eyeballs can do something helpful in the afterlife.
Alternatively. Replace components of the above with runecrafting. Using Wakahisa transfer to buy Hazou time to level up Bones of Creation. Getting as many training ninjutsu and XP lootboxes that dead experts know to buff his XP rate. Stagnation isn't a problem, he just gets revived when dead so he can keep trying. Or death stagnation isn't a problem, sealing failures is which makes sealing domain unstagnation still a problem. Doesn't Isan have an entire clan of sealmasters? Considering they hadn't been obliterated in a sealing failure, ask them about their safety procedures.
I do wonder what happens if we try to summon a dog before someone new signs the contract.
Below is quote about Kagome saying how to open rift from one side.
Kagome shrugged helplessly. "That's the part I haven't figured out. You'd want something that could let someone open their tenketsu extra wide, and that's a bioseal. You'd need a biosealer for that...Snakeface, or his flunky. Arikada, if she's still alive. Maybe Tsunade—she's a medic and she worked alongside Jiraiya-stinker and Snakeface for years. Plus, she's got that bioseal on her forehead. Maybe she put it there, maybe Snakeface put it there back when they were working together, dunno, but if she did it then she might know enough for this. Or maybe she's got a medical ninjutsu that could do it, no bioseal required."

Kagome paused and eyed his student for a moment, checking to see that he was paying attention and not lost in the math. "Even if we could make such a seal, that's not the end of the problems. We'll need to figure out why the Fourth's seal chain gets so weird after number eight, and how to do the rest of them. We'll need to find one that creates a sufficiently durable construct, which probably means we'll need to create tools to measure construct durability. Once we have it we'll need to figure out how to get it aligned precisely enough so that the construct forms inside the rift scar. We'll need to get one of these chakra-emission-enhancement bioseals or jutsu made without losing control of the project to whoever makes it. The Fox would need to be willing to use it, to open its tenketsu so wide that the chakra blasted out like a waterfall. That could be dangerous for it, or at least painful. It might cause damage to the shell's chakra system, and the Fox would need to keep doing it until the rift opened, even if it hurt, and I see no reason why it would want to. Even if we succeeded at all of that and managed to open the rift, I don't know how long it would stay open. Based on what you said about it shrinking, it probably wouldn't last more than a day, two at the most."
 
Just speaking for myself, I would rather not roll back anything just for the sake of it (especially since i feel like realistically you would need to roll back to Oro learning runes from Hazou or he would just snap his neck lol). Doesn't mean things need to end either. Whether that's Oro fishing Hazou back out after Mari socially annihilates him into fearing the consequences of the Deadman switch, deciding to take Hazou as an involuntary apprentice, or Hazou using whatever he has stored on his person to craft a rift opener and find his own way out (hell, the rift he finds may not even lead to the human path but rather the Animal Path or something), etc. Rolling it all back just feels like it takes something away for me, idk.

No comment for rolling things back due to QMs or players not thinking of something until after the fact.
 
Oro's always had the ability to kill Hazo and run away consequence free (alertness 36 remember?) Biosealing or no. For years. The bioseal is immaterial to whether or not Oro can kill us and escape scot-free. If Hazo hadn't accepted the bioseal, the same exact outcome could have happened, on this exact same chapter, but with a knife instead! (or whatever bs Oro S-rank attack) That's the problem with introducing a pycho overpowered players into a quest. We (the playerbase) never got any real cards to play if Oro suddenly decided to one day want us dead. Hazo's been alive at Oro's pleasure for years now. Maybe the QMs say runecrafting or whatever, tipped the scales behind the scene and led to Oro killing us today. But it doesn't really matter! It's been baked into the cake for years! The QMs placed a malevolent S-rank god in our presence. It's always been the case that if Oro decides Hazo's dead, he's dead! We were basically forced to accept that Oro wasn't gonna one-shot kill us, as we were never given any real alternative.

A year later, Oro decides to wake up and kill us, yadda, yadda. Sure whateves. But that doesn't change that fact? Like you put a S-rank villian next to us with no outs. Saying, "Ha, ha you guys died" a year later down the road doesn't really do much. (in the fun department) It's just sorta bad game design. And the QMs sorta acknowledge they don't want to do that. That's why in this chapter we're provided the whole rational on the "Reasons Why The Biosealing Wasn't Actually A Forced Decision" and everything we could have done differently. But if the QMs zoom out a little, you have to ask if we (the playerbase) were ever given any real alternative to NOT working in close contact with Oro in this quest and still winning? I would say the answer is a pretty easy no. Do you disagree?

@eaglejarl @Velorien @Paperclipped
First, we want to say that we think that taking the bioseal was a reasonable option that the players had available at the time, given the information they had. It's a risk-reward tradeoff, and this was optimal along some axes (e.g. minimizing odds of being discovered by Hidan while setting up at the rift).

That said, we disagree that Orochimaru would have been able to kill Hazou trivially without the bioseal. Prior to taking the bioseal, Hazou was reasonably paranoid around Orochimaru -- meeting only with shadow clones, keeping the Prime body away and well equipped. It would have imposed costs to keep this up for the remainder of the arc, but we don't currently think it would have been impossible. That is -- we don't think the Alertness/Athletics in the 30s meant Hazou was always going to die, since his narrative precautions can trump Orochimaru's stats.

(Aside: yes, Orochimaru could have killed Hazou without the bioseal given the specific events of the chapter, where Hazou Prime and Orochimaru were alone in the woods. With the bioseal, Hazou already couldn't survive, so we elected to at least write a more dramatic and compelling chapter. See:
The specific details of the encounter are immaterial. Once the killswitch had been implanted, even interacting with the world exclusively through shadow clones would only have delayed the inevitable until the killswitch popped, or Hazō's next bioseal upkeep appointment, or equivalent. [...] We thought it better not to prolong the situation and instead face it head-on.
In an alternate, no-bioseal universe, we wouldn't have fiat declared "Hazou Prime is going into the woods with Orochimaru" because Hazou would not be dead-but-for-the-timer)

Could Orochimaru have maybe found non-biosealed!Hazou's location and killed him? Possibly, yes. But it would be uncertain, and if Orochimaru failed, Hazou would be infinitely more paranoid and Orochimaru might never have gotten a good opportunity again. Instead, Orochimaru would continue waiting for a good opportunity. He might have killed Hazou at a later date, since without planting a bioseal and playing his hand, Orochimaru could continue to butter up Hazou, and Hazou might eventually let down his guard and interact with Orochimaru in a way that isn't mediated by miles of distance and shadow clones. However, that outcome wouldn't be certain, and would be left up to a series of player decisions, meaning there would be opportunities to decide to stay away forever, or somehow convince Orochimaru that Hazou was safe, or to arrange Orochimaru's death, or...
 
Unfortunately, Hazou's SC lack Iron Nerve, and thus move visably differently from him.
It's subtle, but snowflake noticed, and Oro has ~twice her alertness. Then again, Oro might pay little enough attention to Hazou's movements, and has a much smaller sample.
Would somebody with a functional Iron Nerve have done this?
Hazō struggled not to audibly swallow.
Seems weird he wouldn't verify it's Prime tho.
I for one am entirely willing to accept that the guy who just did a whole speech about how relentless hubris is the way to go, and humility is a deadly weakness, might have gotten a little bit sloppy around someone he thinks he's beaten.
 
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That is what he said, yes. Even now, we're still taking him at his word for things he has immense reason to lie about?
Yes, because in the world where he is lying about the coils I still don't see a viable pathway for Tsunade to save us through emergency surgery. Now that there is an explicit bioseal killswitch, how many different ways are there to make tampering with them fatal? This takes us from mednin TN to a biosealing TN, and Tsunade loses here.
 
Would somebody with a functional Iron Nerve have done this?


I for one am entirely willing to accept that the guy who just did a whole speech about how relentless hubris is the way to go, and humility is a deadly weakness, might have gotten a little bit sloppy around someone he thinks he's beaten.
I think equating sloppiness and "hubris"(at least in the sense Oro means it), isn't quite right, But fair enough.
 
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