[X]Action Plan: Let the Sealing flow
Word Count:<300
  • Buy 1 FP (-10XP)
  • Sealing:
    • SC test Rocket Boots with MARS.
      • Multiple RBs simultaneously
      • Atypical locations (elbows, palms, etc.)
    • SC SSA: MS8.1 Anchoring. Full prep
    • Prime SSA: Reusable Rocket Boots. Full prep
      • Improve the seal until it challenges stagnation
      • Aim for six uses, and then boost the bonus as much as possible
    • Non-SSA SC
      • Full prep 4FSoP
      • Research and use Dampeners.
      • Substitution, Cold Seal, Electrocution, Twin Repulsion
      • Abort difficult seals. Don't risk failure.
  • Meet with Mari and Kei to discuss the Mio situation
    • Hazou fears that she is planning on leaving the Goketsu and leaking their secrets
      • She plans to claim abuse and flee to the KEI
      • How can we stop this from happening?
        • This might establish a precedent that could cause a civil war between the Clans and the KEI
      • Could Jin and Haru gently nudge her away from this course of action?
      • Should we take her to visit the Rift and tell her our plans to resurrect her sister?
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Still needs another scene, but I figured I'd toss this out there while the iron is still hot, so to speak. Ping me here or on Discord if you have suggestions/improvements

Setup a multidisciplinary metallurgy research group to research greater quantity of iron and steel at higher quality(Blacksmith, skyslider alumni, scholar, etc).
 
"Water," Kyo said. "People say it's an inferior element to Fire, but it combines mass and flexibility in a way no other element can approach."

"Any cool stuff you can do with it?"

"Taijutsu enhancement and protection from missiles," Jin said. "The former is a family secret and the latter is from the library. I am currently waiting for a compatible mobility technique to come up on the ninjutsu exchange."
Alright, so we see Jin give away these two in this chapter (see below), but he never mentions the KEI technique that we have to decide on. Does that mean that it's not a water technique? Do we know loosely what it does? It'll be a lot easier to wave it off if it's nothing special, but if it's actually pretty good we may have to consider it…
Jin reached into his bag and slowly drew forth a scroll, placing it on the table between them. "This is the ninjutsu taught to me by my uncle, taught to him by his father, taught to him by his sister. It is a secret of my family. Therefore, it is yours to take."
"Now, the second ninjutsu I learned was from the library. That too, either I or Noburi will prepare a copy of. The final one was from the KEI's exchange. Naturally, your order applies to that one as well. However, as you are well aware, as a part of the exchange, I took an oath that I would not share the ninjutsu without confirmation and tribute to the creator, and that I would not share the ninjutsu with any clan. I am loath to break my word, but I am aware that as a clan ninja, I must follow orders. Naturally, I prepared this."
 
Our relationship with Jin is far more important than a shiny technique.
Agreed, just asking for due diligence. My preference would be to tell Jin to disregard that order, ideally in a way that shows him we respect his commitment to keeping his word instead of that we don't want to bother with the KEI's reprisal.

Maybe we should recommend that Jin consider teaching the jutsu to KEI ninja, as Haru recommended. It was a good idea, and it would go a long way to show that we both value the KEI and are actually considering/implementing the suggestions our adoptees give us.
You could have any clan ninja with KEI jutsu join the exchange, but only on the teaching side. That way, the techniques continue to be taught to the KEI population, and they don't become a clan secret."
 
So. What just are we doing with skysliders? Did it ever get used in war? It's probably under development and I have no idea how Asuma would use it.

If it's sitting around for a long time, maybe it's time to make it an income stream while we're still iterating on the design. Or maybe the team's stuck in a rut working on the same design.
 
Plan makers, this chapter could we try getting some weapons testing done? With MARS, we've had the ability to make stationary artillery for a while now.

Storage seals, skywalkers, 5sb, and a cast of Earth shaping is all you need to replicate heavy aircraft weaponry.

1.Create a skytower
2. Dump a couple thousand pounds of stone out of storage seals
3. Earthshape the stone into a cannon shape with a nearly airtight projectile
4. 5sb the cannon
6. Arm the cannon with MARS and a thousand explosives of choice
7. Run away or hide behind a barrier seal, fire!
8. -1 dragon/Pantsā
 
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Plan makers, this chapter could we try getting some weapons testing done? With MARS, we've had the ability to make stationary artillery for a while now.

Storage seals, skywalkers, 5sb, and a cast of Earth shaping is all you need to replicate heavy aircraft weaponry.

1.Create a skytower
2. Dump a couple thousand pounds of stone out of storage seals
3. Earthshape the stone into a cannon shape with a nearly airtight projectile
4. 5sb the cannon
6. Arm the cannon with MARS and a thousand explosives of choice
7. Run away or hide behind a barrier seal, fire!
8. -1 dragon/Pantsā
I have vague recollections of the MARS trigger delays making it so the first explosion destroyed the other seals without setting them off.
 
I have vague recollections of the MARS trigger delays making it so the first explosion destroyed the other seals without setting them off.
What? They should all be going off at the same time. Mars can do ten iterations in a round.

Iterations 1-9 are just more MARS, while iteration 10 is all explosives.

When we use Mars in combat we alternate the triggers because we want some things to happen sequentially, but there's no reason it *needs* to happen like that
 
What? They should all be going off at the same time. Mars can do ten iterations in a round.
You did indeed, and it's called the ARS (Activation Relay Seal). You pair it to another seal and when you trigger the ARS the other seal will be triggered. You also invented the MARS (Multiple ARS), which can activate two seals at once. One of those seals can be another ARS or MARS, so it's possible to chain as many seals together as you like, at least in theory. Sadly, there is a tiny but non-zero delay between when the (M)ARS activates and when the other seal activates, which means you can't stack infinite number of explosives since earlier explosives in the chain would destroy all the subsequent seals that hadn't triggered yet.
 
@eaglejarl does this seem actively boring? I like to think that sitting down and talking with Yuno is a conversation with stakes, and discussing Mio with Kei and Mari can either be left offscreen ("you communicated your concerns: they think that bringing someone unstable onto the necromancy project is insane, that she'd break any oath you had her swear if she went back to the KEI, and that neither the Nara nor the Yamanaka would be willing take her. They'll work on her, as she doesn't seem to like you.") or it's actually going to be interesting.

[X] Action Plan: Mending Fences
Word count: <300 (287)
  • Buy 1 FP (-10XP)
  • Sealing:
    • SC test Rocket Boots with MARS.
      • Multiple RBs simultaneously.
      • Atypical locations (elbows, palms, etc.).
    • SC SSA: MS8.1 Anchoring. Full prep.
    • Prime SSA: Reusable Rocket Boots. Full prep.
      • Improve the seal until it challenges stagnation.
      • Goal: six uses, then boost bonus as much as possible.
    • Non-SSA SC.
      • Full prep 4FSoP.
      • Research and use Dampeners.
      • Substitution, Cold Seal, Electrocution, Twin Repulsion.
      • Abort difficult seals. Don't risk failure.
  • Yuno, Noburi:
    • Optimize w/Mari, Kei, Noburi, Ami.
    • Hazo's sorry. Last time, he was off-balance/worried and should've be clearer/more direct.
    • Hazo believes:
      • Murdering innocents is wrong.
      • Jashin exists/favours Hazo.
      • He needs Hidan's favour.
      • Hazo prioritizes Uplift.
        • He doesn't want balance.
        • He wants Birth/Life/Humanity to win, conclusively.
        • His relationship with Jashin is largely transactional, not based on shared morals.
    • Let that settle.
    • The worry came from fear - not of, but for Yuno.
      • Death causes pain/suffering - everyone has families/dreams.
      • Jashinism could crush Yuno's kindness/loving nature.
      • Hidan's alone - no family, children, real friends.
    • Hazo wants every child to grow up happy and safe - hence, Uplift.
    • What does Yuno want? What legacy does she want to leave?
    • Genuinely solicit/consider Yuno's beliefs/values.
  • Offscreen (?)
    • Jin:
      • Don't sign the order.
      • Thank him for explaining.
      • What can we do to help him and others bring things like this to us sooner?
    • Mari and Kei:
      • Debrief re: Mio.
      • She might kill herself.
        • "Leaving a clan alive is impossible, so I won't."
      • Hazo's suggested solutions:
        • Bring her in on necromancy.
        • Release her to the Yamanaka, Nara, or even the KEI with an oath not to share Goketsu jutsu.
        • Get through to her somehow.
          • We didn't grieve her sister like Akane, she didn't grieve Akane like her sister.
          • We're just a convenient target for her rage (misplaced grief).
 
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I, Lord Gōketsu Hazō, order Gōketsu Jin to share all techniques learned in the KEI ninjutsu exchange for the betterment of the clan.
This should be obvious, but don't sign the damned thing.

Note that this is written as an order to turn over only KEI jutsu, to spark maximum outrage if revealed.
If we sign it, Jin intends to immediately turn this note over to the KEI, and we'd have enormous issues on our hands.

And it'd be pretty understandable for him to do so tbh. He'd be making public the true information that Hazou ordered him to betray a promise to a dead friend/mentor, and may be undermining the KEI jutsu exchange.
If this was any other clan, the hivemind would be decisively on Jin's side here.

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@Sir Stompy @other planmakers
Please add a version of the following note to your plans.

[X] Do not sign the order. Thank Jin for explaining himself, and clarify that we do not want to give orders that would make him an oathbreaker, or leave him feeling like he betrayed himself or a fellow leaf-nin. Burn the stupid note, apologize for putting him in that position, and very gently admonish him for not talking to us earlier. He's our family, and we want to do right by him.
 
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@Sir Stompy @other planmakers
Please add a version of the following note to your plans.

[X] Do not sign the order. Thank Jin for explaining himself, and clarify that we do not want to give orders that would make him an oathbreaker, or leave him feeling like he betrayed himself or a fellow leaf-nin. Burn the stupid note, apologize for putting him in that position, and very gently admonish him for not talking to us earlier. He's our family, and we want to do right by him.

Phrased as +72 words. kept it fairly long to ensure we get it right. I'm sure better wordsmiths could improve on both wordcount while maintaining clarity
  • Do not sign the order.
    • Thank Jin for explaining himself. clarify that we do not want to make him an oathbreaker, or to violate the trust of his comrades.
    • Burn the stupid note
      • Apologize for putting him in that position
      • Very gently admonish him for not talking to us earlier. He's our family, and we want to do right by him.
      • While we're at it, is there anything else you'd like to talk about?
 
I'm not sure that this actually goes against what I'm saying? There being a non-zero delay between a given Mars activating and the seal it's activating means that you can't stuff an arbitrarily high number of explosives in a wad and expect it to work, you can't have explosives as part of the chain; they need to all be on the same layer of the stack.

"Infinite explosives ball" would be an endless Mars chain with each Mars connecting to one Mars and one explosive. I'm suggesting a chain of 9 MARS-MARS, which results in a total of 256 MARS, each connected to two explosives for a total of 512 simultaneous explosions.


If the delay between MARS seals activating is *inconsistent* then this shouldn't work, but that's not the constraints we have afaik.
 
Before Hidan, Hazō had never needed to fight a civilian.
Wasn't Hazou one of the people going to town on the Sunset Racer, way back before Hidan?
[X]Action Plan: Let the Sealing flow
Word Count:<300
  • Buy 1 FP (-10XP)
  • Sealing:
    • SC test Rocket Boots with MARS.
      • Multiple RBs simultaneously
      • Atypical locations (elbows, palms, etc.)
    • SC SSA: MS8.1 Anchoring. Full prep
    • Prime SSA: Reusable Rocket Boots. Full prep
      • Improve the seal until it challenges stagnation
      • Aim for six uses, and then boost the bonus as much as possible
    • Non-SSA SC
      • Full prep 4FSoP
      • Research and use Dampeners.
      • Substitution, Cold Seal, Electrocution, Twin Repulsion
      • Abort difficult seals. Don't risk failure.
  • (Offscreen if desired) Meet with Mari and Kei to discuss the Mio situation
    • Hazou fears that she is planning on leaving the Goketsu and leaking their secrets
      • She plans to claim abuse and flee to the KEI
      • How can we stop this from happening?
        • This might establish a precedent that could cause a civil war between the Clans and the KEI
      • Could Jin and Haru gently nudge her away from this course of action?
      • Should we take her to visit the Rift and tell her our plans to resurrect her sister?
  • Offscreen
    • During the next lesson w/ Asuma, discuss Mio situation.
    • Create a metallurgy research group to research smelting and improved steels.
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Still needs another scene, but I figured I'd toss this out there while the iron is still hot, so to speak. Ping me here or on Discord if you have suggestions/improvements
What I want to add here (and to all other plans like this one) is a request to either Asuma or the Toad Sages (or both) to try and recreate the [bark] crystal with a dedicated TH jutsu. There are advantages to approaching either party here, but both of them should be willing to help given the direct relevance this jutsu has to the Dragonwar.

Here's a couple ways it could be phrased:
  • Show Asuma the [bark] crystal and ask him to reproduce it with TH. A supply of material like this is the last thing we need to figure out 3D Sealing.
or
  • Tell the Toad Sages about our progress on 3D Sealing. Show them the [bark] crystal and ask them to reproduce it with TH. A supply of material like this is the last thing we need to start 3D Sealing and actually begin figuring out the Great Seal.
or
  • Separately, give Asuma and the Toad Sages each one piece of the [bark] crystal, and ask each of them to reproduce it with TH. A supply of material like this is the last thing we need to figure out 3D Sealing.
The sooner we do this, the sooner we get our results back. It's likely that getting the substrate we need will be the final obstacle standing between us and 3D Sealing, even after buying the stunt, so the speed at which we do this directly affects how soon we can start 3D Sealing in earnest.

There's also the OPSEC consideration, of course: if Asuma is one of the parties we consult here, we need to make sure Orochimaru doesn't learn of our progress (the other OPSEC risks of Asuma knowing about the [bark] crystal are negligible, since this kind of information even if shared doesn't bring anyone any closer to Primordial Sealing, especially given how many harsh roadblocks the discipline has). I've talked about this before, but in short I broadly believe Asuma will agree with Hazou's concerns and estimation here, and won't have a problem with waiting until Hazou's initially explored the field before cluing Orochimaru in. To ward off against Oro-risks, I propose the following sub-bullet-point:
  • Ask Asuma to keep this secret from Orochimaru. Hazou wants to explore 3D Sealing before Orochimaru on the off chance it's so powerful Orochimaru can't be allowed to have it. Once we verify that Orochimaru won't become an existential threat with its power, it will then be safe to share our progress.
 
Phrased as +72 words. kept it fairly long to ensure we get it right. I'm sure better wordsmiths could improve on both wordcount while maintaining clarity
72 words is a big chunk of any plan; here's my hack at it. (Vote pls.)
  • Jin:
    • Don't sign the order.
    • Thank him for explaining.
    • What can we do to help him and others bring things like this to us sooner?

Tell the Toad Sages about our progress on 3D Sealing. Show them the [bark] crystal and ask them to reproduce it with TH. A supply of material like this is the last thing we need to start 3D Sealing and actually begin figuring out the Great Seal.
A sit-down with Ma and Pa where we bring them in on this and necromancy in general would be cool and probably something EJ would go for. I'll try to write a plan with it.
 
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