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Really? Aside from one three-or-four line exchange that I can think of, I would say that it's been remarkably cooperative. Maybe I missed some stuff.
Well, I did walk in just as you told someone to go fuck themselves... Anyway, Discord moves too fast for me. Can't easily go back to see what people were talking about in the lead up, can't think of how to respond with some thought, can't hold people accountable for what they might have said a day ago...Really? Aside from one three-or-four line exchange that I can think of, I would say that it's been remarkably cooperative. Maybe I missed some stuff.
I mean there have been other plans, but in this one Oneiros really doesn't seem to be to blame. I'd go so far as to say that nobody would have caught this 'mistake' even in the days where voter participation was multiples of what it is now. And that slipping up on Noburi's bloodline was a much more obvious mistake that would have been easier to catch than this.I'll admit some frustration with the current update, but I also recognize that it is in-line with the plan and in-character for all those involved. Further, I also recognize that I have been disconnected from the quest for about a week and half, and thus, have not contributed towards planmaking for these last two voting cycles. Whatever frustration I may have is, ultimately, undercut by the sheer fact that I did not lend my voice to the outcome. Perhaps the results might've been different, perhaps not, but I didn't contribute, so the point is moot.
I do think that it's a little much to place all of the blame on Oneiros's head. She's contributed many good plans to the story (the Minami Conversation, namely, was a theoretically perfect plan that Hazou-the-character was too childish/socially-inadept to accomplish in full). Furthermore, it seems that those who voted for it and those who were active within the voting cycle did not notice the issue, either. Please note, this is not a condemnation of yourself, or for those who were active --I, after all, am guilty of inaction. I am merely making the observation that there is blame to be shared (including myself), and not just one person.
I would propose that we all take half an hour to cool down, and return to this thread with level heads. We're a great community, and we're better than this. Behaving in such a way does a disservice to yourself, to this community, and the overall story that has been crafted by the hard-won efforts of our wonderful QMs. If I am overreaching and stepping beyond my place, then I apologize, but I hate to see this community (that welcomed me with open arms, patience, and a compassion that brings me awe) dogpiling on someone so vehemently.
This is not our way.
Cannai shrugged. "Then my work is done. You understand your error and no more need be said. You are not outcast, Cantelope, nor are you bound or in any way restricted. You are an adult dog and you have all the rights of an adult. Make whatever bargains you wish with anyone you wish, including our summoner."
How did the Conclave go?
- Relay Ami's idea for ensuring safe passage.
- Important territories for travel: Leopard or Hyena, and Cat.
OffScreen
- Contract a Dog willing to stay at Noburi's embassy with the other summons, so Hazou can be deployed and refilled when he heals
You don't currently have one on the way. No one you talked to was even remotely willing to entertain the idea.
Consider that what you're asking goes like this:
You: Hey, Fred, would you mind giving me your phone number and then walking to Belize?
Fred: Um...what, person that I met two minutes ago? You know that I live in Boston, right?
You: Sure. Why?
Fred: It's hundreds or maybe thousands of miles -- not sure which since our maps are terrible. Also, I think there's a mountain range in the way.
You: Okay, and...?
Fred: I'm a redhead and Mexico is very hostile to redheads. They might kill me.
You: Okay, and...?
Fred: Uh-huh. And why exactly do you want me to do this?
You: So I can use you as a communication relay. When I want to talk to someone in Belize I'll call your phone and you find the person that I want to talk to and give them the phone.
Fred: Assume I was willing to do this. How long would I have to stay?
You: Indefinitely. Until it's convenient for me that you're not there anymore.
Fred: Man, why couldn't it have just be Jehovah's Witnesses knocking?
(NB: 'Boston' and 'Belize' are randomly chosen and not representative of the actual distances on the Seventh Path.)
Meet with Canteloupe and Cantilever about visiting Pangolin. Benefits:
- Seeing new sights, meeting other Summon Clans and hearing their stories.
- Influencing the world at the Conclave, and influencing Clans. Are there any nicer Pangolins?
- Inform them that Hokage is willing to pay for this
I'm not sure if she has a small amount of it or not, honestly. Good point that this doesn't fully rule out environment. We need more data.Do we actually know (OOC) that Shiori doesn't have the Nara intelligence/laziness at all or does she just have it less? I can't quite remember from her viewpoint interlude.
Also, we can't be completely sure that it's not environmental just because Shiori and others like her don't have it. It might well be that the Nara have a number of branch families that are deliberately kept from those abilities so as to keep their productivity and energy.
That's why we need more information on their internal politics. We don't really know who has power within the Hyuga, or how much each person/group has. Heck, for all we know Motokazu counts as an elder because of ninja life expectancy and the Collapse killing off all of the previous ones. It would be helpful to know exactly what the situation is, because there may be something we can do to influence them. But we won't know if there is anything, or what it might be, until we have that information.I don't think just the elders would have the effect you're hoping for, people like Hyuuga Motokazu would need to go as well, everyone who can stop Hinata because they're stronger than her.
I'm not sure if she has a small amount of it or not, honestly. Good point that this doesn't fully rule out environment. We need more data.
That's why we need more information on their internal politics. We don't really know who has power within the Hyuga, or how much each person/group has. Heck, for all we know Motokazu counts as an elder because of ninja life expectancy and the Collapse killing off all of the previous ones. It would be helpful to know exactly what the situation is, because there may be something we can do to influence them. But we won't know if there is anything, or what it might be, until we have that information.
You don't currently have one on the way. No one you talked to was even remotely willing to entertain the idea.
Consider that what you're asking goes like this:
You: Hey, Fred, would you mind giving me your phone number and then walking to Belize?
Fred: Um...what, person that I met two minutes ago? You know that I live in Boston, right?
You: Sure. Why?
Fred: It's hundreds or maybe thousands of miles -- not sure which since our maps are terrible. Also, I think there's a mountain range in the way.
You: Okay, and...?
Fred: I'm a redhead and Mexico is very hostile to redheads. They might kill me.
You: Okay, and...?
Fred: Uh-huh. And why exactly do you want me to do this?
You: So I can use you as a communication relay. When I want to talk to someone in Belize I'll call your phone and you find the person that I want to talk to and give them the phone.
Fred: Assume I was willing to do this. How long would I have to stay?
You: Indefinitely. Until it's convenient for me that you're not there anymore.
Fred: Man, why couldn't it have just be Jehovah's Witnesses knocking?
"You will not meddle in the politics of this Path without speaking to me. You will especially never again go behind my tail in an attempt to send my pack to foreign nations."
I think that another lesson (if not the lesson) is that from here on out, we treat linking in plans with the same caution that someone who wishes to remain alive treats sealing research. The issue isn't that we didn't catch this, period - it's that we caught it and didn't include it in the linked plan.Ahhh, hell. I feel certain I would've caught it if I'd paid even the slightest bit of attention to anything except Ami.
I think the real lesson here is that it isn't such a good idea to do two updates' worth of planmaking in one voting cycle.
It was quite the party. Hazzah for calm and civil discussion!There's some discussion about this in the Discord right now, actually.
We presented arguments such that there is a non-zero chance of either a retcon of some variety or a softening of Cannai's reaction when we next speak to him.
There were a few other arguments as well, the most convincing of which is that Cannai is Hazō's primary point of contact for the dogs and that it would be pretty OOC for Hazō to not ask him for advice on who to talk to. Or that Cannai wouldn't notice when Hazō repeatedly talked to members of Cannai's immediate pack about this. Or that….We presented arguments such that there is a non-zero chance of either a retcon of some variety or a softening of Cannai's reaction when we next speak to him.
(Specifically - because we previously approached Dogs to be representatives at the Conclave, either Mari would have heard us talk about international politics and gone 'whoa, you keep fucking that one up - slow down, go back to square one, tell me everything' and then pointed out 'you need to check with Cannai first' or that in our conversations about the Conclave with Cannai, we would have mentioned wanting a representative there, and he would have given us clear instructions about how to make that happen/not happen.)
So to summarize the topics that were brought up and not immediately dismissed in no particular order (so it's written down in case someone wants to reference this later). It's odd that: this exact subject did not come up when Hazō talked to Cannai specifically about the Conclave (including a time when he asked Cannai how the Conclave was going); that Hazō did not ask the advice of Cannai, his primary point of contact for everything on the Seventh Path, for who he should talk to when we voted to find dogs; that none of the summons Hazō talked to asked whether he had gotten permission; that Hazō met a bunch of new potential summons at all without Cannai's help (how did he meet these dogs?); that Cannai only noticed now, instead of when Hazō first asked a dog (or continued asking dogs) (or just generally was told by one of the dogs Hazō asked); that Mari, upon learning that Hazō was practicing a form of international diplomacy during a sanity check, did not get worried about this and explored the topic further (this has been the cause of at least one killboxing); and that this topic never came up in any of the other, very frequent discussions with Cannai given that Hazō consistently talks to Cannai about these things and has never tried to be remotely deceptive to Cannai.
@FaintlySorcerous this is the linked plan I mentioned (the sand trip isn't the relevant part and may get scrapped due to recent events so feel free to ignore it). I wanted to bring it to your attention long before it comes up to vote because you mentioned wanting to through it "with a fine-toothed comb."Would you mind clarifiying what 'linking to it from a plan' means? I'm still new to writing plans and I haven't had that come up before. I've put an example of how I'm currently interpreting it below, but I'm not confident this is what you mean.
Also, do you have any thoughts @Velorien?
(Also, I'd love to hear any suggestions from the thread in general about this proto-plan. I think it should be something we should consider as soon as our severes heal. Both the Great Seal Appocalypse and 3D Sealing itself (shiny!) are definitely priorities of a time-sensative nature.
[ ] Future Plan: Investigating the Great Seal
- Request permission from Asuma to look for DRAGONWAR-related information in Sand
- Having him pressure the Kazekage into assisting would be enormously helpful.
- Lore/Sealmasters definitely won't help unless Kazekage briefs them on DRAGONWAR
- Probe Sand Sealmasters for information on 3D Sealing and other esoteric sealing disiplines
- Probe loremasters (including at least one from the Yodomi) for information on:
- The Sage and his companions
- The Dragons and other powerful entities sealed by the Sage
- Research 3D Sealing
- Have Noburi ask the Toads about Dragons and the Sage's companions
- Have Kagome and Kei investigate how Isan developed an entire sealing tradition from studying a single seal.
- Do you have any insights how we should reverse-engineer 3D sealing from just the Great Seal?
- Are there any major weaknesses in Isanese sealing that come from this? How might we avoid similar problems with our 3D sealing?
Ask Isolde how he originally defeated the Dragons
- Probe Mist Sealmasters and loremasters (including Tama)
- With Asuma's permission, talk to Aunt Ren and a Kurosawa Sealmaster about the Great Seal and the Dragons.
- Explain how the Iron Nerve recorded details about the z-dimension.
- Ask about Iron Nerve (worth a shot)
- Is everything that gets recorded important?
- How does it know what to record?
- How can it record aspects about the Great Seal that I never saw?
- Is there anything else I should know that would help me prevent the imminent destruction of Seventh and then Human Path?
Sorry for missing this the first time around.
That outline looks good to me, although I'll let @Velorien answer for himself. Feel free to link to it from a plan.
Does anyone have any feedback on the revamped version of the plan? It's not wordcount optimized yet because I won't be proposing it until we have healed from our Severe Consequences.
@eaglejarl @Velorien
I am a little unsure how detailed I can or should be on how to research 3D sealing. On the one hand, saying "theorize how to do 3D seals" is pretty useless and put's a lot of the work on y'all, but on the other sealing is pure technobabble and is thus too abstracted for me to outline any actual experiments. I tried to strike a middle ground here by leaving most of specifics up to Hazōpilot while still suggesting useful avenues of exploration and resources that might be helpful. Let me know if things need to be less (or, in theory, more) specific.
[ ] Future Plan: Investigating the Great Seal
Acquiring More Information
- Request permission from Asuma to look for DRAGONWAR-related information in Sand
- Having him pressure the Kazekage into assisting would be enormously helpful.
- Probe Sand Sealmasters for information on 3D Sealing and other esoteric sealing disiplines
- Probe loremasters (including at least one from the Yodomi) for information on:
- The Sage and his companions
- The Dragons and other powerful entities sealed by the Sage
- Have Noburi ask the Toads about Dragons and the Sage's companions
- Have Kagome and Kei investigate how Isan developed an entire sealing tradition from studying a single seal.
- Do you have any insights how we should reverse-engineer 3D sealing from just the Great Seal?
- Are there any major weaknesses in Isanese sealing that come from this? How might we avoid similar problems with our 3D sealing?
Ask Isolde how he originally defeated the Dragons
Researching 3D Sealing
- Probe Mist Sealmasters and loremasters (including Tama)
- With Asuma's permission, talk to Aunt Ren and a Kurosawa Sealmaster about the Great Seal and the Dragons.
- Explain how the Iron Nerve recorded details about the z-dimension.
- Ask about Iron Nerve (worth a shot)
- Is everything that gets recorded important?
- How does it know what to record?
- How can it record aspects about the Great Seal that I never saw?
- Is there anything else I should know that would help me prevent the imminent destruction of Seventh and then Human Path?
- Research how the build material affects 3D seals
- Try to identify the Great Seal's material.
- Consult with expert metallurgists and geologists
- Research what materials are capable of conducting chakra
- Ask Asuma for a full briefing on what the Tower knows about chakra metal
- Try making basic 2D seals with a chakra conductor that is not ink-based.
- Investigate whether this has been done before
- Attempt to recreate a 2D seal using earthshaping. Experiment with the shape of the "channel" (cylindrical, flat plane, etc.).
- Research how adding a third dimension affects sealing
- After theorizing from knowledge of 2D seals, try making theory from working backwards from the Great Seal
- Draw on insights from Leaf Sealmasters and Iron Nerve
- Use Isanese insights
- Use Earthshaping to try creating extremely basic 3D seals
- Focus experimentation on learning about 3D Sealing itself (leave investigating the mechanics of the Great Seal for later)
There were a few other arguments as well, the most convincing of which is that Cannai is Hazō's primary point of contact for the dogs and that it would be pretty OOC for Hazō to not ask him for advice on who to talk to. Or that Cannai wouldn't notice when Hazō repeatedly talked to members of Cannai's immediate pack about this.
Haru sighed, but he put his spoon down. "I was teamed up with a KEI guy named Matsumura Haru, okay? Nice guy. He was joking that we should make an all-Haru squad with his friend Chisaka Haru. He...he asked me a lot about what it's like being in a clan now." He cleared his throat and continued. "Anyway, we were up in Rock on a search and destroy. Basically, go from here to here"—he sketched an arc across the table with his finger—"and kill everyone you meet. Burn the farms, poison the wells. Cause as much damage as you can." His lips twisted. "Apparently, it's all about 'breaking the enemy's will to fight' and that means killing as many civilians as possible."
Every eye was wide and the entire room was silent except for Kagome-sensei's mostly-too-quiet-to-understand muttering that occasionally involved the word 'stinker'.
"I'm sorry, Haru," Mari said, rest
Haru clears his throat and shakes his head. "I used my Rocket Books to jump over the gorge, because I forgot that Matsumura didn't have them. He needed to do it the slow way: go down into the gorge, then back up on the other side." He cleared his throat again. "I remembered that he didn't have them about half a second after it was too late. I was already in midair, no way to stop, and I looked down to see what was happening. The kunai went right into his spine, probably would have killed him all by itself. Then the explosive went off and he was just chunks, everywhere."
This plan was way too big. I count eight scenes:
- Meet with Cantelope + Cantilever
- Meet with Cannai
- Celebrate Akane's birthday, which counts as 3 scenes because we've repeatedly said that birthdays are an update unto themselves
- Celebrate Akane's birthday, which counts as 3 scenes because we've repeatedly said that birthdays are an update unto themselves
- Celebrate Akane's birthday, which counts as 3 scenes because we've repeatedly said that birthdays are an update unto themselves
- Give the skyslider team a bonus and talk about waterproofing
- Train the family on flying the skysliders
- Talk to Asuma
Other than being way too big it was a decent plan; the individual pieces of it were well written and clear (except for that training one mentioned above) and you did a great job picking things that I would have enjoyed writing.
XP AWARD: 3
Brevity XP: 1
"GM had fun" XP: -5
- -5 (As I've said before, every scene over 3 is -1 XP)
Vote time! What to do now?
Voting ends on Wednesday, December 15, 2021, at 12pm London time.
He had swum through the mundanity of the sandstone, running his hands slowly and carefully along the smooth and unfamiliar mineral that comprised the Seal.
As he had feared: There were tiny cracks all throughout
Who's ready to scream in faflec and Kagome, and then dump all our XP into earth shaping? Because I can't think of a good alternative.
Why don't you think leveling Earth Shaping would work? I would think it would make a lot of sense for it to be possible to level ES super high and go around fixing the cracks one area at a time once the 7th path bosses get rid of the dragon guarding the seal. It'll take a very long time, but it's fairly straightforward as an overall concept and is still much faster than waiting to FOOM our sealing high enough to figure out an alternative solution.It wouldn't do much IMHO. My proposal would be:
-Tell Asuma
-Use it to:
A) Convince Oro to help
B) Use the Summon Boss Rush to end the war ASAP
C) Contact the other villages
D) Contact everyone we can find
E) Try to obtain the Resolve Boost technique from the Yamanaka or the Summon Clans. Literally go to the Bears,Spider,ect and explain "We need this to save the world, we're fully willing to trade for it"
F) FOOM like our lives depend on it on Resolve/Sealing. Because it does.
Why don't you think leveling Earth Shaping would work? I would think it would make a lot of sense for it to be possible to level ES super high and go around fixing the cracks one area at a time once the 7th path bosses get rid of the dragon guarding the seal. It'll take a very long time, but it's fairly straightforward as an overall concept and is still much faster than waiting to FOOM our sealing high enough to figure out an alternative solution.
Why don't you think leveling Earth Shaping would work? I would think it would make a lot of sense for it to be possible to level ES super high and go around fixing the cracks one area at a time once the 7th path bosses get rid of the dragon guarding the seal. It'll take a very long time, but it's fairly straightforward as an overall concept and is still much faster than waiting to FOOM our sealing high enough to figure out an alternative solution.
I am a centrist: I am almost certain we will need Earthshaping to fix the Great Seal but I doubt Hazou could make good use of it right now without Sealing: 80+From everything we know, seals aren't something you can just "fix", moreover, they aren't something you can fix while active while adding another material to it. It would be like using a different ink to fix a working paper seal. Especially a Sage level seal. Finally, the biggest problem in all of this is that if the Seal is fundamentally broken, then we need to recreate a Sage level Seal(or at least something similar, like safely deactivate the Great Seal, or fix the Great Seal with Sealing blackbox), and all the ES in the world is not going to help us if we don't have the Sealing needed to make it work. Basically, if Seal is broken, as problematic as it is to admit it, we need a set of skills at high level, not just one.
That said set of skill is possible or not to elevate is another problem, but the simulation does not(And should not) care about our needs. Unless your argument is that we can just "Earthshape" the seal itself, but that seems to a recipe for bad things. Manipulating an active seal would mess with Chakra in the seal and...that does not seems like a good idea.