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I've got to go help my neighbor with some yardwork, so here're my brief thoughts:
  1. Akane and Hazou shouldn't be together right now, and if we want them to be then we need to put in a lot of legwork if we don't want it to end in tears.
  2. We should help Ami, if only for Keiko's sake.
  3. If we do go help Ami, Keiko will be around those who neglected/abused her. She'll need our help.
  4. Mari might know more info about what's going on.
  5. We should still check in on Honoka, if only a quick question to Kagome. I don't want to leave this thread untouched for too long,
  6. Let's get EJ his damned beach episode. With demonic axes, Yuno, Haru being confused, Noburi laughing, Kagome keeping watch, Mari having downtime, and Hazou drafting up some lists for leisure.
 
And then there was the question of her calling it Phase One. What kind of plan would take bringing peace and prosperity to a sizeable chunk of a world as a setup stage, and how would it benefit Ami personally? That second part could prove crucial. Ami wasn't a summoner, and was not qualified to take any of the available scrolls by virtue of being a foreigner. Keiko was, but surely Ami wouldn't turn half a world upside down just to help her? Surely?
I think some of Keiko's internal moral conflict over being the Pangolin summoner must have gotten across to Ami, somehow.

It sounds like the perfect solution to the moral problem of Pangolin Conquest.

Let's get EJ his damned beach episode. With demonic axes, Yuno, Haru being confused, Noburi laughing, Kagome keeping watch, Mari having downtime, and Hazou drafting up some lists for leisure.
Time for Hazo to make a beachwear design rating list, to complement his mental list of underwear.
 
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Hm, I wonder if Ami consciously sacrificed her powerbase back in Mist in favor of KEI, by essentially giving Ren time to get her bearings and regain control. In that case, this would be a show of power by Ren. I doubt Ami's life is actually in danger - killing her gets a significant chunk of Leaf really angry, and Ren is basically dead in the water as a Kage without the alliance working out. I suspect what Ren is trying to do is to bring Ami to heel and weaken her powerbase in Leaf as well, now that Mist is under control.

In that context, Ami coincidentally getting arrested while making a pitch to Hazou, whom Ren obviously cares for (if only because she obviously cares for Hana) would be an obvious attempt to get us to intercede. Not to save her life - I'm confident she knows that is not in jeopardy - but to let her come back to Leaf reasonably quickly. Her message to Keiko would be another way to put pressure on Hazou, force him to act.

I think we should do it and call things even between us. Unfortunately, simply sending a letter to the Mizukage is out of the question due to treason. So, what we need to do is talk to Naruto, have him push the thing through. Hopefully he wants Ami back as well. If not, Nara are our next best bet. Not sure what the third choice is.
 
I think we should do it and call things even between us. Unfortunately, simply sending a letter to the Mizukage is out of the question due to treason. So, what we need to do is talk to Naruto, have him push the thing through.

You say this, but all I am imagining is this:

HAZOU: Naruto, remember when I asked you to loom behind me while I wanted to blackm- talk to the Hokage?

NARUTO: How could I forget.

HAZOU: Great! I need you to come to Mist with me and do the same with their Kage.

NARUTO: ...

HAZOU: I swear, I usually learn from my mistakes. Give me my last twenty-sixth chance?
 
You say this, but all I am imagining is this:

HAZOU: Naruto, remember when I asked you to loom behind me while I wanted to blackm- talk to the Hokage?

NARUTO: How could I forget.

HAZOU: Great! I need you to come to Mist with me and do the same with their Kage.

NARUTO: ...

HAZOU: I swear, I usually learn from my mistakes. Give me my last twenty-sixth chance?
NARUTO: ... I thought you were on your 25th chance.

HAZOU: ...

NARUTO: *Rasengan*
 
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OMAKE: Sasuke's Legacy
Hazou despised having to turn Keiko away. He was in no real position to help Ami, if she even needed help, and he had no explanation with which to console Keiko. He promised to dedicate resources to finding out what Mist had brewing, but until Hazou's situation cooled down, he was unfortunately still on thin ice with Asuma, and couldn't afford a slip up. Keiko had left him shortly thereafter, utterly calm, which was of course panic inducing to Hazou. He knew that she knew that he would try his best, nonetheless, which let him breathe just a bit easier.

Still, no matter how hard he thought, it was a problem he couldn't solve today. By this point in the evening, Hazou had become resolved not to solve any problems. It was the first day he hadn't performed much work in... well, maybe ever? There was something awfully foreboding about that…

Late that night, Hazou rolled about in his bed, unknowable questions haunting his mind. Warm, wet air wafted through his room. Hazou generally had his window open if the heat wasn't too unbearable. He could always put some of his sealed ice in the buckets he had throughout his room if he got too hot. Akane was more than happy to provide him with the ice when he asked. Speaking of Akane… No, he refused to solve any problems at this moment. He'd come too far today. He tried counting chakra sheep, and just as he'd dozed off…

A silhouette shrouded in moonlight sat ninja-like on his windowsill, making no attempt to mask his presence. Hazou didn't dare move as he ascertained his current scenario. He hadn't been killed immediately, which was a good start… Was it really that easy for anyone to approach the Goketsu compound whenever they felt like it? Kagome would be kicking himself for weeks to come.

The figure did not move, but it spoke in a low, male voice. "I know you're awake, Goketsu Hazou. You have information that interests me. I heard you met my brother, Uchiha Itachi." Sasuke's eyes flared red in the dark. Was he seriously using his Sharingan to make himself look cooler? The worst part was, it was working.

Hazou didn't move a muscle, but he asked gently, "Uchiha Sasuke? I'll gladly answer any questions you might have. If-"

Sasuke interrupted him. "Excellent. You will be at the Uchiha compound tomorrow, at the crack of dawn. Do not make me wait."

Hazou debated whether he should validate this power dynamic Sasuke was already trying to create, and he opted not to fight it for the time being.

"Understood."

Sasuke blinked away.


o-o-o-o​




Not feeling quite rested, Hazou made his way to the clan house Sasuke resided within early in the morning. He left a note before he headed out, just so his family would know where to look for him if something happened.

He ran over the potential conversations in his mind, attempting to fabricate a mental flowchart. Would Sasuke be furious about Hazou's encounter with Sasuke's fateful rival? Would he be pleased that he told Itachi off? Sasuke didn't exactly sound pleased last night, but Hazou had heard he rarely ever did. He was kicking himself over never asking Naruto what Sasuke was really like. That information could potentially save his life right now.

He arrived at dawn, as Sasuke requested. Hazou knocked once, and the door swung open for him immediately. Sasuke sat at a table, with a chair across from him. Hazou was surprised to see how bare much of the walls of Sasuke's household were. Perhaps the old decor held painful memories for him. Sasuke's servants flitted about, preparing breakfast and tea.

"Sit," Sasuke said, not very politely. His Sharingan were active.

Hazou cleared his throat. "Lord Uchiha, I would be grateful to be treated as more than another of your servants. I am willing to cooperate with your interests, but I have my own pride."

Sasuke nodded. "Sit," he repeated, in exactly the same tone.

Hazou sighed and took the seat across from Sasuke.

After the teapot was placed on the table, Sasuke poured a cup for him without even looking at the teapot or the teacup, placing the drink before Hazou.

"So. I hear you met Itachi of the Sharingan. You sent a message to the man single handedly responsible for the genocide of the most powerful clan in Konoha, asking for his help in defending Konoha, and he sought you out."

Hazou steeled his body with the Iron Nerve, before realizing Sasuke could probably see him doing it. Not wanting to hesitate, Hazou answered, "That's what I was led to believe, yes. In my mind, that's exactly what happened, but I've been informed that-"

Sasuke held up a hand. "You don't have to worry about pretenses with me. I know Itachi didn't genjutsu you. I will not break the facade the village is maintaining, but I would prefer if we ignored it for now." He gestured for Hazou to continue.

Hazou sipped his tea. It was surprisingly good. (Though the mint in it was giving him inconvenient memories at the moment.) He didn't sense a trap with Sasuke.
"Yes. I sent a letter to Uchiha Itachi, believing that if his ideals truly aligned with the Will of Fire, he would be a useful asset in defending Leaf during its most difficult time." Hazou wasn't sure whether to use the detached Uchiha name, or to separate the renegade entirely from the clan with just 'Itachi', so he opted to use the full name.

Sasuke asked, "Why did you think your letter would change his mind on that front? He's from Konoha. He already knows exactly what our ideals are. If he wanted to defend Leaf, surely he would do it anyway."

Hazou nodded. "Yes, that was another possibility. I still felt like I had to try. If the letter was all it took to get him to remember those ideals, and I didn't send it, well, it would be even stupider, wouldn't it?"

Sasuke made a "hmph" sound but didn't immediately answer, sipping at his own tea. "Why do you believe a clan murderer and sworn enemy of Leaf would want to protect it?"

"To be honest, I didn't know much about Uchiha Itachi when I wrote the letter. I had a nebulous idea about what Akatsuki was trying to accomplish, and could only assume he would share the same goal, if he ever truly believed in it."

Sasuke considered this, as servants delivered breakfast to the two of them. Scrambled eggs, bacon, pancakes. Hazou stared.

"Is there something wrong with your food?" Sasuke asked neutrally.

"No, no…" Hazou replied, unable to hide his uneasiness. There was something bizarre about watching Sasuke eating pancakes.

"I try to stock up on protein and carbs in the morning," Sasuke said, as if that explained everything.

He reluctantly dug in, and the food was, of course, delicious. Hazo flinched upon seeing Sasuke slather his eggs with ketchup. Was this some kind of mind game?

"Tell me about your conversation with Itachi," Sasuke said, between bites. This was terrible for his cool-guy image. What was Sasuke trying to convey here? Did Sasuke think so lowly of Hazou that it didn't even bother him to degrade himself in front of Hazou?

Hazou repeated the conversation as completely as he could, recreating some of it with the Iron Nerve.

Sasuke did not smile, but he gave a look of what Hazou thought was satisfaction by the end. "Yeah. That sounds about right. That man was a fanatic, even when I knew him. Back then, it was devotion to his people, and to the village. I don't think he'd even have an identity if he didn't have blind admiration."

The servants brought forth the last straw. They placed a tall glass of milk before both Hazou and Sasuke before bowing back into the kitchen.

Sasuke drained his entire glass in one go, milk stache hanging on his lips.

"Are you going to drink that?" Sasuke asked calmly. Was this a test? What could he possibly be hoping to demonstrate here? What in-

When Hazou didn't answer, Sasuke lazily flicked out ninja wire and pulled the glass into his hand near-instantly, without spilling a single drop. He gulped the entire thing down. Did Hazou pass the test?

"Do you know why I called you here today, Kurosawa? I'll give you a hint, it wasn't just about Itachi." Hazou blinked. Sasuke using his old family name was likely a clue. Hazou was still far too dumbfounded by the situation to make any kind of rational assessment.

"I can honestly say I have no idea."

"The Kurosawa are descendants of the Uchiha, are they not? I've heard snippets about your Iron Nerve, and they sound an awful lot like the powers of the Sharingan."

"They are descendants, yes." Oh gods, he wasn't going to bring up that impregnation deal again was he? Hazou really wasn't ready to have that conversation with Uchiha Sasuke.

If a poker face could look sentimental, that would be how Hazou described Sasuke's face at the moment. "I guess that makes you kind of like my cousin, right? I'm a guy who values family, Hazou. That's why Itachi is the ultimate disgrace to my heritage. He turned his back on who should matter most."

Hazou didn't entirely agree with that, but knew better than to say otherwise.

"I guess what I'm trying to say is that my quest to destroy Itachi may not end in my favor. I have to accept that defeat is a possibility, even if I do my damndest to prevent it. Denying myself isn't going to help me. If I fail, I want my family techniques to survive without me."

Hazou blinked. Sasuke wanted to share the secrets of the Uchiha with him?!

Sasuke rose from the table slowly. "It would be my honor for you to train beside me, and to carry the proud traditions of the Uchiha, to teach my clan should I fall. Can you promise me you will do this?"

Hazou gulped. "I mean, we should probably hammer out the details on paper, but… If this is your wish, Lord Uchiha… Sasuke… then I, uh, don't see why not."

Sasuke gave him his first smile of the day. "Excellent. With what I've heard of your Iron Nerve, you should be able to memorize proper form in no time."

"Well, possibly… what kind of form are we talking here?"

"The essential exercises any good ninja should run through before learning their techniques," Sasuke replied, vigor brimming in his voice.

Oh, so stuff like breathing exercises and whatnot? Hazou supposed that would be useful for the famed Uchiha fire techniques.

Sasuke began undoing his robes.

"Um, what are you doing?" Hazou asked.

"Hazou, any good ninja must also have a living legacy, a narrative that evolves with them. Even today, Itachi is known as Itachi of the Sharingan. A master of the copy wheel eye, the destroyer of the Uchiha. I must craft a narrative of my own, a narrative stronger than his, so that Fate sides with me."

He dropped his robes, revealing a hulking form that couldn't possibly have been contained within those tiny clothes.

"I will become Sasuke of the Sharingains, and you will keep my legacy alive."

Hazou couldn't help but squeak out his answer. "So, uh, when do we start? Er, sensei?"

Sasuke gave a throaty, booming, horrifying laugh, and sat back down at the table. "Lesson one. Carb loading," Sasuke said, as his servants set another plate of pancakes before him, and before Hazou. Hazou sighed and picked up his fork.
 
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"It continues with the Pangolins. The Seventh Path is holding its breath as their victims recover and rebuild, knowing that at any second, the avalanche of retribution will begin. Loathe though they may be to admit it, the Pangolins cannot afford to devote half their strength to suppressing the Condors, who will surely rise up the second the Pangolins falter. They will need all they have and more if they wish to survive. It is not within our power to free the Pangolins and the Condors from the chains of hatred that now bind them even more firmly, but if the Pangolins join the alliance, the freed Condors will be obliged to support them by the Summon Realm code that holds alliances sacred. Then, too, there is the irony that the clan that committed to freeing them as its condition for joining is the only one they can trust not to enslave them at the end of the war, vulnerable as they are.

"Next, the Toads and the Monkeys. For them, to join the alliance is to be able to reach out and freely touch half a world, with Pangolin territory an aid rather than an obstacle. They will also finally have a complete circle around the Mara, who will have no choice left but to bow to their every whim. The price, for them, is small. When the alliance reaches four clans or more, their foes will seek the bargaining table over the battlefield.

"The Mara will be desperate to follow suit in joining, for only as members of the alliance will they avoid conquest at Toad and Monkey hands. Nor is access to half a world something to sneer at.

"Now the waterfall cascades. Turtles, Slugs, and Snakes. There is no urgency in this for them, but nor are there demerits. They have allied summoners, or will soon, and the benefits of secure peace and expansive trade are hardly to be dismissed.

"Otters. Capybara. More vulnerable on both Paths, and with the Turtles unwilling to lend their strength, they will find themselves as encircled as the Mara. What is there left for them but to join, and also reap the benefits?

"At the end of the cascade lie peace and ever-growing wealth for perhaps a third of the Summon Realm, with Leaf-friendly clans standing to gain the most.
We'll have to make sure to get every summon clan in on this really fast in order for it to work. If half the summon clans freak out at our massively expanding power block and ally with each other instead of us, it'll start looking a lot like Europe before WW1, or like NATO and the Warsaw Pact during the Cold War. At peace, but very fragilely so. And we all know how that first example ended up...

It also requires good social specialists to actually convince the clans to join instead of making their own alliance.



"That's Phase One," Ami went on. "Now, this next bit's tricky, and basically flies in the way of everything that's been done anywhere ever, but I reckon we can finagle it by exploiting some of the weirder laws around summoning scrolls and contracts. To start off, we establish that, based on existing law, summoners have the right to—"
I'm guessing this second step was going to involve massive amounts of trade between clans, probably aided by the fact that a whole bunch of clans have summoners in Leaf and as such will often enjoy quick communication and logistics with each other.


Keiko was, but surely Ami wouldn't turn half a world upside down just to help her? Surely?
... Hazō, have you met Ami?

Urgent summons from the Mizukage. No time to say goodbye.

I will always love you.

Ami
Weeeeeeeee should probably show this to Mari and ask what the implications are. Because it sounds to me like either Ami is about to be executed or the hardliners won out and Mist is about to declare war on Leaf. Or both.

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If we help save Ami from execution, it would nicely pay back our debt to her.
 
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Weeeeeeeee should probably show this to Mari and ask what the implications are. Because it sounds to me like either Ami is about to be executed or the hardliners won out and Mist is about to declare war on Leaf. Or both.
Why would she go to Mist instead of missing if she were about to be executed and knew it?
I'm guessing this second step was going to involve massive amounts of trade between clans, probably aided by the fact that a whole bunch of clans have summoners in Leaf and as such will often enjoy quick communication and logistics with each other.
No, that's too small. I'm pretty sure her next steps involve leveraging the Summon Path Peace into taking over the Elemental Nations through the Summoners, or something. E. g., establish that Summoners have rights to unilaterally dictate some aspects of their Clans' policy towards the Human Realm and could tax all trade conducted through the EN, then set up some kind of agreement where Clans can't trade with each other if their Summoners' villages are at war. Now the Summoners would be incentivized to sit around making profit instead of fighting, and would oppose any attempt by their village to start a war. Next you could encourage trade between villages themselves via the Seventh Path, and make them economically codependent, and the whole thing would stick. Not sure how she personally benefits from that, though, so there are probably steps I'm missing.
 
Huh, I wonder what happened.

I'm going to be incredibly cocky and predict it's one of these:
  • Antagonistic clans are strategically adopting linchpin members of AMI in order to diminish its combat strength and internal structure.
  • A bunch of clans in Mist have started (or are threatening) a brushfire conflict that Lady Kurosawa does not approve of.
    • Probably one that undermines the benefits of annexing Hot Springs and the associated trade routes.
    • This still counts as right if it was a false flag operation that makes it look like someone else started it.
    • It also still counts if the brushfire conflict is one internal to Mist as long at it involves violence.
  • Some backers in Mist are running rogue covert ops that target merchants, traders, and civilian peasants.
  • There's some largely external threat to Mist that doesn't fit any of the above criteria.
    • If this is right, I should get no credit for it. It's basically just me saying "Fuck it, I can't simulate the entire EN".
I'd appreciate if someone pings me when we find out what. I want to see how wrong I got it.

I think that two nin who came to get Ami are her hands. This is pretty unreasonable given the priors on them being more valuable elsewhere, but it's a hunch I'm sticking to.

If I'm right on that, then:
  • It's probably something to do with AMI that needs her presence.
  • It also means that it's so sensitive that the hands are the only people trusted enough to know whatever it is.
  • Ami also left immediately, which requires something big given her guilt about Keiko.
  • There's a few major political blocks in Mist that are still relevant:
    • AMI
    • Lady Kurosawa
    • Ryugamine
    • the people who are warmongers because they're idiots
    • the people who are warmongers because they've lost significant power in the new regime but are more practical about how to get it back
    • the people who are prospering under the new regime
    • the people whose world got ripped out from under them and are still a bit dumbstruck
  • We've got decent idea of those factions want, with the exception of Ryugamine, who is probably involved but is otherwise a black box.
  • It's rather likely that this is a threat to the new regime in Mist, since that's deeply tied to AMI's success in her machinations.
  • AMI and the prospering folks are prospering because they are exploiting the instability of the new regime to change long-standing social structures.
  • The idiots and the dumbstruck folk are going to be pretty clumsy in their opposition because they're idiots, and clumsy attacks on the new regime will require overwhelming force to succeed. That sort of force takes time to gather and wouldn't have led to something as urgent as this clearly is.
  • The warmongers have lost a lot of hard power since the battle of the gods, and the others never had much hard power to begin with.
  • So my expectation is that a bunch of the opposition factions have somehow come into a significant amount of soft power that they're leveraging cleverly.
  • Common pattern here is that you have a bunch of groups who agree on the overthrow of a regime without any real agreement about what to do when they win, so I expect some convergent instrumental action that would make sense in a lot of antagonistic plans.
  • It's also some action that couldn't happen without a lot of backing and which necessitates cooperation.
  • Ami is still the charismatic shelling person for AMI, she's a good politician, and she's got a bunch of authority over AMI so one of those things is probably useful to fix this.
  • I expect something that wouldn't really backfire on the perpetrators with the release of non-public information. So pretty easy to spin for the public.
  • It likely involves hurting assets that wouldn't seem important to the warmongers, but are to Ami.
 
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I'm going to go ahead and say that I'll likely vote for a plan that has us helping Ami. Not just going to Mist with the pretense of helping her, but actually looking to help her out. Dress it up as "evening the score" or "paying back a favor" if you want (though I'd argue that there are no debts between friends), I just want to help out Ami. She's an interesting character and I find myself wanting to keep her in the narrative as much as possible. I'm all for taking a plan or three to prepare and whatnot, but I'd like for our next "major" thing to be leaving for Mist to help out Ami. Of course, we can leave instructions for things to be done while we're gone (smoke/air tunnel for skygliders, report on Honoka's health waiting upon our return, a Kagome-led evaluation of our clanless sealscribes and their passions/attributes, preliminary sanitation testing, etc) so that means a lot of the more tedious stuff for the QMs to write can progress, off-screen.
 
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I'm going to go ahead and say that I'll likely vote for a plan that has us helping Ami. Not just going to Mist with the pretense of helping her, but actually looking to help her out. Dress it up as "evening the score" or "paying back a favor" if you want, I just want to help out Ami. She's an interesting character and I find myself wanting to keep her in the narrative as much as possible. I'm all for taking a plan or three to prepare and whatnot, but I'd like for our next "major" thing to be leaving for Mist to help out Ami. Of course, we can leave instructions for things to be done while we're gone (smoke/air tunnel for skygliders, report on Honoka's health waiting upon our return, a Kagome-led evaluation of our clanless sealscribes and their passions/attributes, preliminary sanitation testing, etc) so that means a lot of the more tedious stuff for the QMs to write can progress, off-screen.

I want to ask Asuma before we do any of this. I really want to get back on his good side.
 
I want to ask Asuma before we do any of this. I really want to get back on his good side.

I mean, he's already told Noburi that he'd be okay with a koi-retrieval mission --though it'd have to be under the table, for obvious diplomacy reasons. I'd be okay using that as an excuse to help Ami, rather than the inverse. Let's help Ami out, let Noburi visit his sisters, do some preliminary scouting for the koi, and actually help Ami out.

Edit: who knows, maybe Hazou can squeeze in a visit to his mother while we're there?
 
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Huh. Huh. I'm curious where the most recent Ami plot will go. Us going to Mist is still out, Keiko and Noburi going... Would be a huge target, but are an option. No matter what, we'd have to go through Asuma if we didn't want to go missing-nin.

Also, with Akane's confession, and Keiko's current state, I don't think we should just time-skip to the end, except explicitly if EJ wants that/it works into whatever relaxation bit he wanted to do, if he still wants to do it. Otherwise, there's lots for us to be doing still, like checking on Honoka, the gliders, etc

Well. That's a little worrying. Akane seems to have forgotten that her main concern was that she'd be swallowed up in Hazou's grand ambitions. There's also the fact that Hazou hasn't really done much thinking, at least "on screen," about what he wants from a relationship, as per Mari's advice. The "treat people like people" issue was a secondary problem. I mean, it was a big one, but still a secondary one. I think that time and circumstance have made Akane forget this issue, or at least forget how much of an issue that it was for her.

I, personally, worry that if Hazou rekindles a relationship with Akane, these two things will fundamentally undermine whatever hope they might have for a long term relationship. And I'm not just saying that because Akane isn't my preferred love interest for Hazou. I just think that Akane and Hazou haven't really discussed what they want out of a future together. Hazou wants to achieve Uplift and, while Akane believes in Uplift, she doesn't seem to want to be consumed by that goal.

Getting back together with Akane feels a little premature right now. If Hazou gets back with Akane at all, I think they'd first need to sit down --together and separately --and have some long, potentially awkward/painful conversations.



Well, Norburi wanted those fish, right? Time to gather our shit, leave some plans, and then go make sure Ami's back while doing some preliminary scouting for the koi. I mean, Keiko would likely want us to, anyway... though I'm not sure how that would work while also getting EJ his beach chapter. Maybe some off-screen preparation?

I don't think Akane is forgetting Akane's main feelings, nor that they're that unrelated. Though, I think we shouldn't take a stance on Hazou's feelings. I mean, the hive mind has done stuff like set up dates, but I think Hazou as a character has autonomy for this. Also, dating simulator with minors is treating dangerous ground here. I'd say let it play out, unless the QMs say they want direct input? (FWIW, I think they're cute together, and giving Akane her own scroll to set her apart and give her more personal power helps fix a few different problems, so I squeed there.)
 
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If we do try to see what's up with Ami in Mist, might check up wat lavender means in Leaf first. To ensure it has the same meaning as real life, and to see if there is additional meaning NPCs know.
 
IMPORTANT PSA: I have a marvelous scene that is too long to fit in this margin post. You're definitely going to want the chapter to stop at the end of this scene. The scene will be contiguous or near-contiguous with the end of ch344.

Good news is that since I already know what I'm writing I can probably get it out early, meaning you'll have extra time to vote in the next cycle. To this end, I'm not going to close voting this week.

@eaglejarl Is my timeskip plan sufficient for you to have fun?
Yes, it would be fine. Thanks for asking. Given the above PSA, it might or might not be necessary or desirable (or possible) to do the skip. We'll see.

And I think akane is against polygamy so couldn't date both
Note that polygamy is about marriage (1 man & 2+ women). Polyamory is about love (3+ people of whatever sex and gender)[1]. To the best of my knowledge, Akane has never once broached the subject of marriage with Hazō.

(Yes, @faflec, she raised the subject with Jiraiya. I said with Hazō. :p)

[1] Technically a dyad (two people) can be considered a degenerate case of polyamory, so it could be said that polyamory is a romantic relationship between 2+ people instead of 3+. It depends on your perspective.

Why would she go to Mist instead of missing if she were about to be executed and knew it?
This:
maybe the people who had seen the Mizukage's secret police were no longer there to say so. But everyone had their own image of what they looked like, and maybe it was like this.
 
Note that polygamy is about marriage (1 man & 2+ women).
To my knowledge, while most relevant historical examples of polygamy took the 'one man marrying two or more women' pattern, the definition of polygamy is broad enough to encapsulate any situation of one person having more than one spouse (more precisely, sometimes it's defined as per the historical pattern and is sometimes defined more broadly, and imo that means you can read it as both, or as the specific definition as a sub-definition of the broader definition). It is inherently about marriage, though, so your point still holds.
 
The Nara's sloth seem to barely affect their capabilities. And they have shadow clone to overcome them if they do. The Nara may well be the most powerful Thinker clan.

since I already know what I'm writing
To this end, I'm not going to close voting this week.
Just making sure I understand this correctly. The votes we make now will decide the winning plan after your scene (so the chapter that will be written next Thursday), right?
 
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