I mean Hazou switches from "Genius social planner that can outplay Social-Specs" to "Idiot child incapable without a backbone" and from "Super genius with iron focus on every single detail in the room in the span of a second on something that happened X years ago" to "I just forgot to tell you half a dozen things, also, why am i here exactly?".
Honestly, the best way for a diagnosis to Hazou is "He's Hazou", "Out contamination" or "everything and nothing depending on the time of the day".

I wonder if at this point Asuma just chalks these inconsistenties up to the Great Seal just really fucking Hazou's shit up.

Resulting in Hazou just being weird like that.

Personally at this point I look at Naruto's wariness about Hazou and think "Ok yeah that's fair"
 
Everything within a 0.75 mile radius is completely obliterated and a crater is dug into the ground, ranging from 'massive' in sand or loam to 'modest' on stone.

Everything within a 1.5 mile radius is destroyed. Concrete buildings are leveled, trees are demolished, etc.

Every living thing within a 12 mile radius is killed through a combination of wind, cryogenic flood, breathing cold air causing the water in your lungs to freeze into lots of tiny sharp ice crystals that will shred your alveoli like grapes on a grater, etc.
Working on getting a better intuition of this. Questions to the room. If the inner 1.5 mile radius blows all liquid outward, how thick of a 'puddle' does EM nuke make out to 12 miles? How much does the flood slow down covering the last miles? How much warmer is the liquid on the outer edge that has had the longest to warm up?
 
If when Hazō tried diluted Akimichi stimulants, it had put him to sleep, we could be more certain about the tongue-in-cheek diagnosis.
IIRC, when he and Shika did diluted Akimichi Stimulants together, Shika got an energy bump, but Hazou was just left horrified at how it made his heart rate/chakra coils feel.

(Insert: Kronk_It's_All_Coming_Together_Meme)
 
Working on getting a better intuition of this. Questions to the room. If the inner 1.5 mile radius blows all liquid outward, how thick of a 'puddle' does EM nuke make out to 12 miles? How much does the flood slow down covering the last miles? How much warmer is the liquid on the outer edge that has had the longest to warm up?
The last is easy, there's liquid at all, it's at the boiling point of liquid N2/O2.

Your other questions are a little hard to parse. Are you asking how fast the flood propagates? When it reaches 12 miles it's in a steady state where the liquid is evaporating as fast as the EM effect is making more.

I imagine the liquid air is quite deep (tens of meters) at the epicenter and much shallower toward the edges.
 
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Well we don't know yet whether he is apprentice. Tsunade might just invite him to hospital more times first to see if she gets impressed enough

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Next time we go near/look at great seal. Should ask shika/kei for safety procedures
 
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Catching up on some thread stuff:

This seems like a world ending level of sealing failure, or at least life-ending. Endlessly replicating beads that consume flesh and are attracted to people in some manner. But for a prompt appearance extra-dimensional war toads it sounds like it would have completely gotten out of control in an insurmountable manner within a few more minutes.

How bad was that roll?!
IIRC the primary roll was in the low 90s. There was another roll for the number of secondary failures, then one roll for each of the secondaries. With that many sealing failures, it shouldn't be much of a surprise that there's some really awful stuff.

Kei: explains every permutation for how things can go horribly wrong

Hazo: ... wow Kei, I never thought of any of that, it shames me to say.

Kei, relieved: I'm glad I could be of assistance, Hazo, meager as it is.

Hazo, to himself, as he leaves sanity-checking proximity: I should bring back Nagato first. God. What an idiot. Why didn't I think of that?
This is hilarious. Take +1 XP to a PC of your choice, chosen by 1d4 if you don't pick within 24 hours.

A couple of topics spring to mind after the Kei conversation. I don't know if her solution was good or not because I didn't think about that part. My read-through of that chapter was with the "character emotions" lens since that's my priority, not "practical solutions" lens. That said, let's assume she had a better solution. If so, there's a weird thing for me in terms of gameplay in that she'd be offering a new solution on her own instead of optimizing our ideas...

About Narrative & Meta Stuff: Kei says "hey, you should've come to me because I could've created an alternate solution for you to consider". If Kei gave us that option at that time though, that's the QMs basically giving us good answers to the problem. If that would've worked then that's fine, but I feel like the meta and atmosphere of the quest changes if we're given solutions freely. Especially if we're allowed to keep doing that. The situation will eventually have to change so we can't keep using the "Ask an Expert" lifeline (ex. in a combat crisis, the party is forcibly split by mechanisms we're not allowed to interrupt like with the caves. For social problems, Kei or Mari end up acting erratically so it's less comfortable to just ask them). Otherwise we'd just keep doing that.

I perceive a balance in my head about game balance here. On the left, you have "Think for Yourselves, Players". On the right you have "Rational Simulation + Do Whatever is Optimal". We will naturally tend to the right because that's optimal. The experts will usually be smarter than us when it comes to details or socials because they live in that world 24/7 and we don't - that's their field of strength, not ours. Also, Kei is just straight up smarter than us, and is written by QMs who are really flippin' smart. That said, if we keep using Ask an Expert, things will change so we can't do this as much because that's not fun. Eventually we'll be forced left side of this scale. Currently I feel like we didn't talk to Kei in so long about anything story-changing. We stayed really heavily on the left side of the scale meta-wise with her. Frustrated, Kei says "Use Me!" When we talk to her, she gives a wholeeeee bunch of free information about what'll happen with necromancy. This pushes things back to the right side of scale to incentivize us to use "Ask an Expert" again. If we do that too much, though...

I don't recall reading this topic because I skim discussion when I'm away, but I'm sure this has been a topic of discussion many times. Please bear with me though, because I don't know the answer everyone decided on and I want to know what it is. Consider the following situation:

1) Crisis occurs. The best idea as the leader is to say "Mari, Kei. My goal in navigating this crisis is to have X outcome. Thoughts on best solutions to get there?" Even if you have your own solution, this is the smartest thing to do first because crowd-thinking is good and Kei in particular is really smart. This outsources the thinking component to the QMs. Obviously this is bad for a quest.

Looking at the phrasing always being thrown around though, I see Kei is usually referred to as a Plan Optimizer. I'm guessing what happened is early into the quest, this problem became apparent so the gameplay idea became "Players comes up with long-term ideas, Kei/Mari (QMs) point out what could go wrong, Players decide what to change or whether to persist." This balance is probably always re-adjusting. If this is the meta that's fine, however in this context Kei saying "Let me come up with alternate ideas" felt weird. Was what Kei said legit from a gameplay perspective? If we asked her back then, would she have offered this plan? (Again, no comments on whether the plan works or not).

And a more general question. When this discussion occurred before (because I'm sure it has), what was the conclusion about "Ask an Expert"?

Disclaimer: I don't post often so I'm an unknown. CCnJ on my thoughts for context: This quest is awesome, the players are amazing, the QMs are fantastic. I'm an idiot so bear with me, this is a genuine question about game balance. How does "Ask an Expect" work?

About Kei and Player Rapport with the MfD Cast: IRL, I use the concept of rapport a lot. I think it applies very well to stories, too. One of my strongest metrics I use to decide how much I like a character is "How did this character make me feel?" Once I feel sufficiently positive about a character a rapport is established, and then I'm invested in them through thick-and-thin. If they start acting negatively, a good rapport shields that and I'll look past it because they're in my monkey-sphere. If someone makes you feel too bad for too long, then rapport breaks and you decide "why bother". Without rapport, the positives of a character become muted and the negatives become enhanced (often unfairly so).

I notice from reading posts that people seem to have different levels of rapport with Kei. Given her personality, I can absolutely see why opinions on her might vary. My own opinion on her was fluctuating on a strong back-and-forth throughout this chapter.

I current am feeling really positively inclined towards her. With all of her context and history, the way I ended up perceiving her at the end of this chapter was our sister saying "Please just talk to me more! I'm feeling hurt and maybe I'm fucking up too and if I am sorry. Let's be a stronger pair again!" She didn't come off as too unreasonable, just hurt and wanting to talk more. And she really gave off vibes that she's unequivocally on our side, no bullshit.

Course, the big problem is Mari. The toxic Mari-Kei relationship is what was fucking up everything. My stance on it is that Kei should at the least, be civil. Quit the negativity and learn to manage that internal Emotional Damage™. When you're feeling hurt, just say that you're feeling hurt but don't be an asshole about it. I think Mari was doing fine in that respect (unless that's just my Mari bias).

For the sake of fun, I'm going to share my un-asked for current rapport levels with characters as a reader. I wonder which of my opinions differ from the majority, and in what direction? Hazou doesn't count for obvious reasons.

Noburi: High rapport. I feel like we neglect him in terms of seeing him in plans, which makes me feel guilty. Despite that, every time we do see him it's like he doesn't give a fuck about that. He's always stable and chill. It got called out in this update that he's the guy that's genuinely just never causing any headaches. It's kind of funny because he was always starting shit at the beginning of the quest. I feel relaxed when I see him on-screen.

Kei: Mid-High rapport. Reminds me of some IRL friends/family that are great in many respects, but having narrow perspective really screws them over sometimes. She's trying her best, though, and the Hazou interactions still feel like a step in the right direction despite all the consistent mess-ups that occur along the way. Loved the feel of this last chapter, on balance. Hate her Mari interactions, though. I usually get anticipatory feelings for what's coming next when she's on screen.

Snowflake: High rapport. All the fantastic-ness of Kei with none of the Mari toxicity. I feel like every recent scene she's in is cute or makes me smile. I ship it

Mari: High rapport. She straight up mentioned torturing people and doing horrible things and I still didn't bat an eye. Something about the direction of her character arc was perfect from my perspective. I don't even know what it is, but whatever it was established a really strong rapport. As expected of the social spec, I suppose. My favourite character by a landslide. Consistently makes me feel interested or positive when she's on-screen.

Kagome: High rapport. I honestly kind of ignored him for most of the beginning and middle of the story (other than as a source of comedy with his whole... Kagome-ness), but in the latest 1/3rd of the story I felt like he shines whenever he shows up. He has those crazy uncle vibes, but that latest (non-canon?) confrontation with Ritsuo was hair-raising. So now the crazy uncle vibes are tempered with hidden badass vibes.

Akane: Low rapport. Surprisingly, I've almost never felt positive about her character. She's the bright one in theory, but in practice she's either feeling strong negative feelings, or feeling neutral-warm feelings that I suspect are a mask for her negative feelings. Her issues are never really resolved, so you know at her core she's not going to be happy. I usually don't feel anything when she's on screen. When she's depressed, I just feel sad.

Jiraiya: Medium rapport. Was definitely cool and interesting when he was around, I just think he didn't have enough time for that to develop further for me.

Yuno: High rapport. Heckin' love her after that marriage counselling chapter and the last few fights she came out to. Love every scene she's in. I love how she fights to understand a culture that's completely alien to her in such an endearing and realistic way. I also love how that's emotionally balanced with her Yuno-ness.

Orochimaru: Is rapport even allowed with this guy? He creeps me the hell out, but man is he a fantastic character. I'm always interested when he's on-screen, that's for sure. I just don't feel safe if he's getting extra screen-time, lol.

Tsunade: Medium rapport. She's cool and I'm always interested in when she's on screen, much like the other Sannin. Only limited by the screen-time because of the direction of our player choices. Unlike Orochimaru, though, I'd actually want her to get more screen time.

Ami: No rapport. It never really got established for me, but then her actions progressed as if the rapport was there which I took negatively. I probably just can't keep up with hyper-genius thinking. Historically made me feel very wary or nervous whenever she was on-screen. The last dance thing was more positive, so I guess I'm tentatively neutral there. I don't necessarily like reading her directly, but I like it when people analyze some of the little social-spec things that she does. RandomOTP often has really interesting interpretations about her.

Ino: High rapport. Her conversation topics are either positive in theme, or if conversation is heavy it's always handled with good framing. Feels stable. Tends to make me feel relaxed.

Shikamaru: Mid-High rapport. Seems like a cool guy who often just Doesn't Have Time For This Shit™. Didn't have a magic solution for the latest problem, but that's life. I appreciate the level-headedness. Makes me feel relaxed.

Asuma: Medium rapport. I actually love this guy when he's on-screen. The only reason it's Medium and not High is because I have to emotionally distance myself from him just in-case he messes with the team with this new situation. I wouldn't even blame him for doing what he thinks is best given his situation and everything. But he seems as chill as a Hokage could be, given his job. If you tell me he studied at that Fire Temple with the monks in MfD verse as he did in Kishimoto canon, I would 100% believe it. Makes me feel relaxed.

Naruto: Medium rapport. I kinda like his style even though he hates our guts half the time. I'm usually interested in what's he's thinking when he's on-screen because of his Kishimoto protagonist status, though.

Haru: High rapport. I ironically like him as a character even as he sticks to his guns of not liking us, lol. Didn't expect it, but he feels honest in his own way. Ironically training for spymaster role. Recently, I feel generally interested when he's on-screen.
Promising.

Shimura-née-Shimura.

Ami's investments? Have to run, had an appointment with looking at a summoning scroll.

Hah. Kei's nearest neighbor woes.

Too young to be one of our genin, sad face.

Yuno at every baby shower. "You should name him Noburi."

But the fact is he was napping, napping at my chamber door,
On the morrow he will leave me, as my Hopes have flown before.
Quoth the Nara "Nevermore."

So many stories to astound the grand kids.

Very interested in digging into this. Problem of being a good confidante is no way of knowing from the outside. Only Shikamaru could have cut us in on how trusted Kei is or how much of her perspective was integrated in his conclusions.

Questing is cruel. Cannot go to Kei for all the answers or where is the challenge? Still better to start consulting her more from now on. Good speech. Earns respect even if Asuma pulls out all the details.

Could lead to weaker nonproliferation measures, but buys time to work on necromancy. Carefully prepared speeches like this feel more like hitting a lowered TN than opposing rolls. Blueprint for engaging with higher social opponents.

Solid maybe.

Kei Akane Mari. Use, do not use, yeah right.

Heartwarming.

Post story montage.

A+ character growth.

Important info to learn 3 years into having an older sister. Points for making it this far blind.

The Sage, eh?

Chakra farm?

Pocket Jiraiya is better than any suicide plan, but if time is running out makes sense to have plans to make the most out of dying. Get the villain monologuing.

To see the thoughts that flashed through her mind here.

Hard spot. No way to ask to be taken seriously without conceding the information was important to share. Hard to keep track of who has been told what or what rises to needing a vote to be shared.

Shadow of her parents' upbringing? Sad to have this be her first guess.

Impressive she waited so long to kick him out after the tears started. Progress.

Worse if Mari has since shared with Akane and Kagome.

Praise Jashin.

Gah.

Great section and all the parts building up to this.

Need more Pure Land lore. Filter for sources that match what we saw. So far, have thought better to think of the portal as a parasite that has stolen souls from the true afterlife.

Probably will be chakra seeking threats. Afterlife 'immune system.' Rescuing Jiraiya with one reopening is optimistic.

"Afterlife portal, Gaku!" "Yes sir, now about the finances."

Depending how fast they purify, could be more people in the Pure Lands than the EN. Protect the secret long enough, no one else has a chance.

Fun to imagine bringing back Jiraiya unconscious for OPSEC. Sneak into Tsunade's house and leave him to wake up in her bed with a hangover. No one is on board with closing the portal permanently after fishing out Jiraiya. Difficult decisions ahead.

Once it is open, might not be too hard to punch a second rift closer to home. As for Akatsuki, good cover for people we revive. Not unusual for Akatsuki to have internal struggles. Work with Asuma to secretly kill all Akatsuki members, replace them with Leaf's best departed. Hidden second hand controlling AMITY.

Would be super interesting to find Pain in the afterlife to talk to him one 'dead man' to another. But doubt he is in 'normal' circumstances.

Nice to have something we can somewhat openly work together with smart people on.

More notes for what kind of lying passes under the radar.

There should be a Nara hand sign for this. *Scholarly disagreement deferred to not ruin the moment?*

Did Shiori rebound with the Anko polycule?

Hah. Easy GED money. Hazuo, your sacrifice is remembered. So many different kinds of briefing at the Conclave.

Be careful with the love, Narrator in Noburi's room.

Yuno takes issue with that.

Wasteful. Orochimaru notes readers not getting a balanced education. "Why do you know what temperature skin melts but not about lunar spleen biles?"

Need a new research set up out of town.

The most honest kind of impressed. Is Pasafutsu from pacifist? Polemarch comes from war and leader. Hierophant comes from sacred and reveal. Something else to involve Kei in as we learn more.

"Gramps, we want to know how you figured out the mystery of the Pangolin War! Why do you keep bringing up how you never ran out of japes for Hyūga?"

Well done. Beautiful writing.
I liked the "rapport" idea and list, and reaction posts are always appreciated. You may both take +1 XP to a PC of your choice, chosen by 1d4 if you don't pick within 24 hours.

As a general note, as an author it's irritating when an NPC solves an interesting, hard problem for Hazou, but if the NPC is actually able to solve the problem, then our commitment to simulationism will usually win out and the problem will be solved. That said, others have pointed out some potential flaws in Kei's suggestions... I suppose we'll never know what might have happened.

I would pay XP in order to get a summary from the QMs on what meaningful secrets we're keeping from each family member.
Hm, it would be easy enough to do this if a list of the relevant secrets could be provided. We do a little bit of tracking of OPSEC compartments.

I made an edit of Hazo's sheet that visually shows the skill pyramid in another tab. Had to edit some of the named ranges, it looks like a couple of them were doubled up.
What is this for?

I don't have an exact quote, but I think it was at least 12 seals. As to a couple weeks per seal, I think we could do a some of them in 6 days, at least the first couple. Hazou's Sealing is ridiculous now. He's basically a spec jounin/essie.

The big post EJ made about Sealing mechanics is informing my thinking here. These seals might have Sealing TN 50, but since Hazou has already done a few in the chain, They could have Complexity 20 or even 10.

However, I imagine that they get longer and harder, requiring much longer research times as we ascend the chain.
The details on the first ten seals are available here. Thus far, you have no seals with actual mechanics. While Hazou's initial estimates for the seals' difficulty suggested that he could spend a month per seal, his abilities have improved much faster than the seals' difficulty has risen. At his current skill and their current complexity, he thinks he could be finishing two or three seals per week if it weren't for the damn headaches. Unfortunately, that time estimate won't hold as the further seals still seem very hard to him (though with Hazou's improved skills, none but the 9th and 10th seem outright impossible).
 
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The details on the first ten seals are available here. Thus far, you have no seals with actual mechanics. While Hazou's initial estimates for the seals' difficulty suggested that he could spend a month per seal, his abilities have improved much faster than the seals' difficulty has risen. At his current skill and their current complexity, he thinks he could be finishing two or three seals per week if it weren't for the damn headaches. Unfortunately, that time estimate won't hold as the further seals still seem very hard to him (though with Hazou's improved skills, none but the 9th and 10th seem outright impossible).
Are there more than 10 seals in the chain? How many total?
 
It didn't last time when we apprentice under Ebisu. It probably won't have any mechanical effect
Did we ever actually apprentice? I recall that we didn't and part of the reason we didn't was because he'd do sensible (in the context of a normal ninja) things like level physique and CR. To train under someone means doing what they say and training what they say to train.
 
Are there more than 10 seals in the chain? How many total?
"You said that some of them only produce chakra constructs. Sounds like you know what they do."

"Yes sir," Hazō said, nodding. "Some of them. There's thirty-one seals in the chain, with the jinchūriki seal itself making thirty-two. We have what amounts to a one-sentence explanation of eight of the first ten seals. No clue what the rest do." He fell silent, watching Asuma and struggling not to sweat.
Also, I realize now that I forgot to link in the quoted section. Oops. Fixed.
 
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Thanks, the outright impossibility of the 9th and 10th are because we haven't built veterancy with the first 8 right? I can't believe that Minoto had more than 80ish sealing. But 8 seals of veterancy would be a TN reduction of 40.

IIRC the problem seemed to be that there is another discipline mixed in. Probably medicine considering it's a bioseal, didn't the notes mention "headseal" or something similar, after all? So we'll probably need to consult Tsunade once we reach 9th and 10th.
 
Thanks, the outright impossibility of the 9th and 10th are because we haven't built veterancy with the first 8 right? I can't believe that Minoto had more than 80ish sealing. But 8 seals of veterancy would be a TN reduction of 40.
Maybe we'll get to buy a stunt at the end of the eight-seal progression - remember, Naruto's seal wasn't. We didn't download it or anything.
IIRC the problem seemed to be that there is another discipline mixed in. Probably medicine considering it's a bioseal, didn't the notes mention "headseal" or something similar, after all? So we'll probably need to consult Tsunade once we reach 9th and 10th.
We have no evidence that biosealing is involved or that Naruto's seal is a bioseal. We only know that it's a chakra construct.

Do we know anything about biosealing beyond that it involves tattoos and biology and that the practitioners generally seem to be a few handseals short of a jutsu?
 
I think it might be worth it for Hazou to start going through med notes for eventual biosealing anyway. I just hope that biosealing isn't like regular sealing, but where its a stunt and then medknow instead of calligraphy.
 
Do we know anything about biosealing beyond that it involves tattoos and biology and that the practitioners generally seem to be a few handseals short of a jutsu?
Apparently also involves bone carving, which may be useful in terms of 3D stuff. Kagome seemed to think so, at least. Also, Orochimaru seems to think this is the next best thing to building advanced bloodlines out of thin air. Only excellent sealmasters tend to try it (or is that just survivor bias?) because it meets the worst parts of jutsu hacking and seal research: weird, atrocious effects meets "can't run from it". May also be linked to Edo Tensei. Generally regarded as very creepy.
 
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