confirmation that those crazy kids are scrubbing the shark, or whatever they call it in Leaf.
I honestly can't believe Hazo believed Ami when she said Akane was pregnant
In all fairness, I think there's a lot of anxiety around accidental pregnancies when young couple's first become active together. Doubly so when it's their first physical relationship.

I don't think Hazou actually had any seduction training, and sex ed probably isn't well taught as part of the magical military academy, and he was raised by a single mother without any other familial support, and wasn't a popular kid in school - he might not actually know.
 
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Tell Asuma about seals.
  • Casino seals, Vibrator seals, and Chakradar.
    • You can provide him with some of the first two now. You'd like to more thoroughly stress test the third in case you need to make more adjustments, but those can be given as well assuming the tests shake out.
  • Kagome
    • Kagome has some interesting research ideas now that he has his time freed up again. Moslty some variants of "huge terrifying explosives thing".
  • Explain to him the concept of the CHAOS suit
    • Essentially it's just a suit with specifically placed seals on the exterior that allow for quick activation during live fire scenarios. The loadout is modular:At this point, mostly Macerators and some defensive seals (Banshee Slayers, Usamatsu's, etc.). Skywalkers can certainly be used here, for example.
    • Jiraiya thought it had some promise.
    • We have several research ideas for how to improve upon subsequent variants. For example, the Chakradar seals were originally concieved as a seal that would provide enhanced alertness to an individual wearing this, if a sufficient number were placed under the suit.
    • Ideally we'd like to improve upon the CHAOS suit concept (on both the sealing and material design fronts) and get something like that back to them. Does this sound useful?
Summon prep
  • Meet with Inuzuka to discuss history of ninken
    • If it seems likely that they are the descendants of Canvass' ancestor then summon her to have her check
  • Commission a set of teeth caps for Cannon.
    • Look up where Yahiko died
    • Meet with her to discuss a one time contract for the duel with Hagaromo
      • We will be fighting against enemies that deliberately tried to hurt our pack
      • We wish to have her by our side in this conflict
      • We might not be able to find her the relics of her legendary ancestor just yet. But we can start forging our own legend together
    • Request a recommendation for a jounin level summon from Cannai
      • Describe the situation to them.
      • They hit our pack.
      • We want to guarantee they never can again. That's why we want such a powerful summon on our side
      • Agree to pay whatever cost required to get a one time contract.
    • Noburi: make whatever deals necessary to get his summon squad put together
      • We want as much firepower as possible
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Wordcount optimized, plus some clarifications and some additions of my own - namely clarification on Chakradar function, asking the Inuzuka if they have leads.


To Asuma:
  • Casino seals, Vibrator seals, and Chakradar.
    • We can give the first two. The third is still in testing, but we're in the final stages if everything works out.
  • Kagome
    • Kagome has some interesting research ideas for his free time. Mostly variants on "huge terrifying explosions".
  • Explain the CHAOS suit
    • It's a suit with strategically placed exterior seals for accessibility in live fire scenarios. The loadout is modular: Macerators and defensive seals (Banshee Slayers, Usamatsu's...) currently. Skywalkers are an option, for example.
    • Jiraiya thought it had promise.
    • We can improve on subsequent variants. Chakradar seals were originally designed to enhance alertness by placing many of them around the suit and reading the response pattern.
    • We want to improve on the design and seal loadout to make it useful to Leaf. Does this seem worthwhile?

Summon prep
  • Meet with Inuzuka to discuss history of ninken
    • If Inuzuka ninken seem to be Canvass's ancestor's pack, summon her to check.
    • Ask if they know any wild creatures that match the description.
  • Commission a set of teeth caps for Cannon.
    • Look up where Yahiko died.
    • Meet with her to discuss a contract for the duel with Hagaromo
      • We are fighting against enemies that deliberately hurt our pack
      • We want her by our side in this conflict
      • We might not be able to find the relics of her legendary ancestor just yet, but we can start forging our own legend together
  • Ask Cannai to recommend a jounin-level summon.
    • Describe the situation to them:
      • They hit our pack.
      • We want to guarantee they never can again. That's why we want such a powerful warrior on our side
    • Make a deal for a one time contract.
  • Noburi: make whatever deals necessary to get a powerful squad
    • We want as much firepower as possible
 
I don't think Hazou actually had any seduction training, and sex ed probably isn't well taught as part of the magical military academy, and he was raised by a single mother without any other familial support, and wasn't a popular kid in school - he might not actually know.
Nah. Mari gave Hazou and Keiko "The Talk" during the early missing nin days, after finding them speaking in private. In retrospect, Mari probably knew Keiko was beginning to consider Hazou a romantic option (something she would later dismiss), and wanted to tease Keiko a little bit, bind the two closer together through shared embarrassment, and cover a potentially important knowledge gap.
 
"But the bestest part," Ami said, speaking over him, "is how by the time things are far enough along for it to be obvious that the whole thing's a blatant lie I made up on the spot, I'll be totally safe from the consequences."
Ohh, prime opportunity to kill Ami right there! Let her go ahead with her plan, lie to the Mizukage's face and spread rumours that'd imply she wants to defect, then approach Asuma and discredit her, denying her repatriation, and watch her get executed. I knew she'd eventually do something too clever to be safe. Best part: when we'll need to take control and make Hazou murderous, Ami won't even be in Leaf, meaning no need to surmount the insurmountable problem of hiding our intentions from her! She basically did the entire job for us.

Alright, now that we know how, we need to decide whether we want to do that or not. Any high-risk high-reward plans for determining her compatibility with our long-term goals we want to run, any crisis situations we want to put her into to see how she'd react and how far we can trust her?
Turnabout's fair play.
 
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Anyway, back to the Asuma conversation.

...would this be a bad time to bring up the chakra pony?
We already know how that played out (mostly). Asuma couldn't spare the manpower to hunt down a chakra pony, so instead some other sort of chakra beast was captured as a replacement and is currently being tamed by the Inuzuka. There's no proof but I'm approximately 100% sure that it's the chakra fox from back on the Goketsu estate, and I am very hyped to see the eventual reveal.

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I'm reeealy not liking the lack of consideration of how sister just had a really, really bad day and Ami made sure we knew she needs help.
 
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@Velorien Are you opposed to writing an interlude on Hazou's (much delayed) birthday celebrations?
I think right now it is more likely that I'd write Yuno's engagement party, as ordered by Hazō a few chapters back. With the deadline coming up, you're running out of time to have it unless you also want it to be her hen night (if such things exist in Isan).
 
Nah. Mari gave Hazou and Keiko "The Talk" during the early missing nin days, after finding them speaking in private. In retrospect, Mari probably knew Keiko was beginning to consider Hazou a romantic option (something she would later dismiss), and wanted to tease Keiko a little bit, bind the two closer together through shared embarrassment, and cover a potentially important knowledge gap.
And as far as Akane goes, the high prevalence of female ninja in general suggests that sex ed is taught in the academy, at least to female ninja if not to males as well. It's kind of hard to have a lot of people on active duty if they're all pregnant or at risk of becoming so.

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[x] Training Hazou: Closer to FOOM
[x] Training Noburi: Slap people with water
[x] Training Keiko: Incrementally More Resolve
[x] Training Akane: Incrementally More Resolve
 
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@Oneiros re: Asuma

Sorry, but wasn't the premise that we would be spending future time researching something new for him? I'm sure he'd like the ESP seals, I'm just not sure that it addresses the prompt.

I have ideas:
  • Very Powerful Explosive Seal (what it says on the tin)
  • Cube Seal (Creates a force cube around the seal, in its frame of reference, with variable size. Use a 1m cube for utility, or attach a 10m cube on an activation timer to a thrown kunai.)
  • Heatwave Seal (Creates a sudden blast of superheated air that's harder to dodge than an explosion due to being invisible.)
E: too late, okay...
 
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@eaglejarl @OliWhail @Velorien

Just a suggestion: I'm not sure with what frequency y'all update Kagome's (or Mari's) character sheet, but I think he's mostly been doing Cryptography stuff the last couple months. Maybe an 70-20-10 percentile spread between Crypto, Calligraphy, and Sealing?
 
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This tally is absolutely fucked for some reason. Lore update votes from 2016?
 
Interlude: Conflict Resolution
Interlude: Conflict Resolution

Mari took a breath, ensured that her face was on properly, and then knocked softly.

The door opened within moments; either Ami had been about to go out or she was expecting a visitor.

"Mari?" she said, raising an eyebrow. Clearly she had not been expecting Mari to be the visitor.

"Yup," she said, offering a grin that combined amusement and world-weariness. "Won't be but a moment. Hazō came to me about your little kerfluffle this afternoon, asking for advice on how to handle it." She rolled her eyes.

"I see," Ami said. "I had believed he understood me better."

"Yeah, well, he's Hazō. Always brilliant when it comes to changing the world, usually an idiot with people. Anyway, he's angry enough that it's going to make it hard for him to work with you and this plan you're putting together is too important to mess up. Could you come for dinner tonight, around seven? Just the three of us. I can play mother hen and get things sorted out so he can get past it and we can do what needs done."

Ami studied her for a long moment but Mari's face was water, calm and clear and expressing only the aggravation of needing to mother a teenager.

Ami snorted. "I suppose. He still owes me dinner at the Yabai Café for making me late, but I suppose I can come to that giant pile of yours."

"Heh. Thanks. Sorry for this...you know how he is."

"I thought I did."

Mari chuckled and shook her head. "See you tonight."

o-o-o-o​

"Ami."

"Hazō," said Serious Ami, nodding without a smile. Hazō had proven unable to keep up with Effective Ami and Mari had made it clear that the boy was too emotional to be useful. Serious Ami could at least offer him the balm of social conformity, even if it was ridiculous and a waste of everyone's time. She still would not offer an apology, of course.

Hazō was standing on the far side of the heavy oak monstrosity that was the Gōketsu dining room table. The desired seating arrangement was clear; Mari at the head of the table to moderate, Hazō to her left and Ami to her right. The messaging was interesting; the room was lit with candles instead of those lantern seals with the pompous name. The table settings were black-varnished wooden chopsticks and bone-handled soup spoons on ivory rests. Serviceable, no ornamentation. The kind of thing one might see at a midscale restaurant; they looked out of place in the large stone room with its elegant wall hangings that showed landscapes on the east and west walls and the Gōketsu crest on the north. Mari might as well have whispered in her ear: We care little about appearances and more about effectiveness, yet this situation is significant enough that we have to spend time on this conversation.

Each placemat had a storage seal at the center, another at the top, and a third just beyond that. Presumably each contained a single course and the seals would keep them hot or cold until the diner was ready. We are a major clan with significant resources. It is inefficient to annoy the head of a major clan, or to reveal that you think he's slow. Normies still put stock in social niceties even though they're stupid and a waste of time.

A rotating platform between their three seats held another storage seal which Mari tapped, unsealing a lightly-steaming tea pot and three freshly-poured cups. She spun the platform and silently gestured for Ami to choose, offering a small smile as she did. She was turned slightly so that Hazō would not see the sardonic twist to the smile. You are a guest and we are showing you honor. Hazō is still willing to work with you.

Serious Ami nodded and chose a cup, seating herself and unsealing her first course without waiting for invitation. A large bowl of soup with udon noodles and bits of meat and vegetable. The message went back to Mari: I understand your point, yet I will not be bound by social convention and I do not count myself his inferior.

Hazō sat as well, choosing a cup of tea and unsealing his own meal. He was attempting to use the Iron Nerve to show himself calm and unruffled. It was adorable; Ami had grown up with actual Kurosawa who had the training. He was still angry but he had completely missed the silent conversation that Mari and Ami were having.

Mari stood at her place, looking back and forth between them and sighed. I stand outside this issue and intend to be a moderator, not a mediator. "Okay," she said. "Let's get this dealt with. Ami, Hazō, you need to get past this and find better ways to work together in the future. The political stuff that's going on is too important to screw it up." It is to your advantage to slow down and take his feelings into account more.

"To this goal: Ami, I would like to introduce you to a Gōketsu family tradition for conflict resolution."

Free-Spirit Ami mentally rolled her eyes; the moment anyone formed a group they insisted on binding themselves with rules and restrictions and conventions. Didn't they realize that those things were nothing but handles and levers?

Analyst Ami mentally cocked her head in interest. Sometimes conventions allowed for faster information interchange and the restriction was an acceptable trade-off.

"And what might—"

Mari grabbed Ami's hair and slammed her face into the table.

The impact left her stunned for a split second, just long enough for Mari to grab Ami's left arm, pull it up into a joint lock, and drape a leg across Ami's back with Mari's foot on the table.

Chakra surged through her, forcing her to her feet. Mari was a taijutsu expert but she weighed virtually nothing. Chakra-boosted strength would throw the woman off and across the room, giving enough time to escape. Parameters needed to be updated; the Gōketsu were unable to—

Mari didn't move. Chakra adhesion had locked her left foot to the floor and her right foot to the table. Ami thrashed, trying to roll to the right in order to twist out of the lock, simultaneously grabbing Mari's knee with her free hand and digging her thumb into the joint. Enough pain would break any—

The thoughts scattered and the joint strike got lost as Mari lifted Ami's head and shoved it down into the soup bowl.

The salty broth stung her eyes and flooded her nose. She had been inhaling and a few drops of it went into her lungs, making her choke and cough. She struggled, trying to spill the soup so she could get air but the bowl was too wide and too low.

Mari pulled her up again.

"You are extremely good at what you do, Ami," she said calmly. "But you don't always think all the way through your actions." She rammed Ami's head back into the soup bowl.

Ami was ready this time; she kept her eyes closed and started drinking the moment she was under. She tried to twist her left hand so she could get her nails into Mari's neck, but her former teacher had her wrist locked tight.

Mari pulled her up again.

"You want to mess with Hazō? That's fine, up to a point. Bringing Akane into it, with something that might damage her reputation? No. I will not allow that."

"Let me go! Ahh!" She gasped as Mari leaned slightly forward, increasing the pressure on Ami's shoulder.

"Furthermore, you need to be thoughtful about how far you escalate," Mari continued, acting as though she hadn't even heard Ami's demands. She pushed Ami's head back into the soup but Ami had drained the bowl and it amounted only to having her face mashed into boiled vegetables.

Mari released her hair but leaned farther forward, using the joint lock to ensure that Ami could not raise her head. With the freed-up hand she picked up the teapot and slowly poured its contents over the back of Ami's head. Ami immediately started drinking but the liquid flowed in faster than she could consume it and soon she was underwater again. Another attempt at a joint strike against Mari's leg brought only a punishing twist on the armbar that made her grunt in pain and give up the attempt.

Mari took back the grip on her hair and eased off on the joint lock enough that she could bring Ami's head up into the air again.

"See, if you escalate to the point of openly defying a Clan Head, of implicitly telling him to his face that you don't care about his feelings or his authority, that he matters nothing to you...well, that makes him escalate." She laughed softly, the sound dark and low. "Or, in this case, makes me escalate. Hazō had no idea what I was planning; he only asked for advice, not action. You need to understand that Hazō is not a lone actor. When you deal with him you are dealing with the Gōketsu. Mess with him, spin him around, tease him or make him look a little bit foolish...fine. He needs to learn to cope with those things. Demean him, make clear that he—and, by extension, the Gōketsu—are insignificant to you? Worse, do it outside where there were people nearby that definitely saw what was happening and might have heard the exact words? No. There are limits, and you crossed them."

Facets flickered by, looking for the one that could resolve the situation.

"I'm going to let you up now. I don't expect you to apologize—we both know that you still don't think you did anything wrong and your apology would be worthless. Instead, you will make clear that you understand the lesson."

The redhead took her leg off of Ami's back and stepped away, taking care to not leave herself vulnerable when she released the armlock.

Ami pushed herself to her feet, blanking her face as she analyzed the situation and considered tone and inflection. This was definitely time for Danger-Mitigation Ami to guide.

"I understand the lesson," she said, eyes locked on Mari's as she bowed very slightly, more of a shallow nod. She would not grovel. Ami was not a primary combatant but everyone in the room knew that Mari could not take her so easily without the advantage of surprise. Hazō would not even be a factor.

"Not to me. To Hazō."

Rage flickered through but she dismissed it. "I understand the lesson," she said to Hazō. She did not repeat the bow. Through this entire scene, the boy had not moved. He sat in his chair, silent and attempting to Iron Nerve his way to an appearance of calm disinterest.

"Hazō?" Mari asked. "Is there something you'd like to say to Ami?"

Hazō considered her for a moment. Strangely, he had deactivated the Iron Nerve, allowing her to see his true feelings...and there was no delight at her pain. The rage was gone, replaced by nothing more than acceptance, perhaps closure.

"Get out," he said calmly.

Danger-Mitigation Ami studied him for a moment and then turned and left. Neither of the others moved. I am confident enough in your good sense that I feel no need to ensure you do nothing inappropriate on your way out.
 
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Ah, the friction that comes with new friends/acquaintances learning each other's boundaries. Hazou didn't delight in Ami's humiliation (foreshadowing?), but was just resigned and disappointed that it happened. I suppose that he (and we) are realizing that Ami isn't going to be the Team Uplift member we've always wanted? That the dynamic is going to be more complicated and layered than that simple dream?

Either way, I must admit to some surprise that this wasn't a genjutsu. Further, I was shocked by Mari's skill in combat. I really shouldn't have been, of course. A jonin is a jonin, and Mari is far from merely a social spec jonin who likes genjutsu. I guess the last few in-game months of Mari playing around with Leaf's political scene has made me forget that Mari is dangerous.

Still, I wonder how Ami will react to this?
 
Me starting the chapter: "Yay I can't wait to see Mari and Ami hang out and be BFF mentor/students!"

And I oop (I was still screaming "get her ass!" in my mind though)

Also, I know Ami is highly competent and a Jonin to Hazou's chunin, but even for her it's pretty bold to assume a Sealmaster isn't relevant to the fight in his own house.

I'd be very disappointed in both Hazou and Kagome if that entire room wasn't filled to the brim with secret bullshittery
 
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