Ah, sorry. I must have misread it, sorry about that.

Regardless, I'm trying to figure out why Gai and Asuma would voluntarily take on teaching a team. What do they gain out of it?

I'd say it's a mixture between cultural conditioning and incentivization. The Will of Fire says to protect Leaf and pass along knowledge so that the next generation can do the same. That, combined with some Tower pressure for newly minted jonin to pass along knowledge/skills before they die, would be enough to have Asuma and Gai take on a team. Especially if we assume that Hiruzen had his own son teach the next generation of ISC heirs to further bind their closely knit clans to the Leaf, and that Gai --a taijutsu monster --saw Lee's blind persistence and was inspired by it.
 
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I also think the conceptual leap of building a water wheel where Repulsion Seals act like a chakra replacement for falling water is a smaller leap than pistons driving a crankshaft. Piston-crankshaft assemblies are a lot of joints and moving parts.
OTOH you'd need a separate pair for each blade on the wheel, which would need to somehow be matched to its pair when it reaches the point we're pushing it at.
 
A piston driven engine is a lot of bulk. We should be able to build something like a reversed stepper (electric) motor with far more ease and space efficiency.



Do we know if this is a set of Repulsion A and Repulsion B and all A,B parings repulse each other, or is it creates a unique pair each time they are created such that if you create A and A' as a pair, and B and B's as a pair, A repels A', but not B or B's?
We have absolutely written up very detailed and thoroughly stress-tested mechanics for this seal, unfortunately they are too large for this textbox I lost the password a hacker deleted them my dog ate them I'm not able to make them available at the moment. I'm pretty sure that it's a two-element seal and the elements repulse each other, but it's possible that I'm misremembering.

Aha! You didn't say HDK! Is this actual, word-of-God, OOC information?
*sigh* Fine. Updated.

Would QMs be able to give estimates of the sizes of major and minor villages?
Yup.

Regarding the Mist/Leaf clash over Naruto - in chapter 124 Jiraiya states there were 12 ANBU agents who engaged the 12 Mist jonin. I assume that almost all of these were jonin given that they wiped out the Mist jonin.
They were, but note that skywalkers were a brand new thing and they make an enormous difference. That was the last major battle that we rolled by hand and the jōnin v ANBU part of it was a curbstomp. Hiruzen got a stupidly unlucky roll which is why he died.

This estimate gives 15 Jonin in ANBU, say 5 jonin as clan heads (Inoichi, Chouza, Shikaku, Inuzuka, Hiashi), we know 3 jonin are teachers (Gai, Asuma, Nakamura) and given that Leaf had I think 6-8 teams at the chunin exams, and likely jonin-senseis whose team wasn't ready for the exams, let's say 10 jonin as jonin-sensei at a time (this kind of makes sense - if they're assigned to fast-track teams that reach chunin in 2 years, that's 5 per year - but seems a little small). 10 hunter nin jonin, 5 dedicated infiltrator jonin, and 5 specialized jonin (T&I, Yamanaka, Logistics, Kabuto in Medical) and we hit 50.

QMs is this/does this seem fairly accurate?
Let me get back to you after I catch up with the others.
 
It's not realistic to have less than 3 S-rankers in a major village, because at that point you could send the Sannin (who appear to be strong even for S-rank) and a force of Jonin and have approaching even odds, or alternatively Akatsuki, given how 4 of them rolled 12 Leaf jonin, Nakamura, Naruto, and Jiraiya, could also roll that village. I'd say maybe 3-5 per major village, 1-2 per minor village, and Leaf has 6-8 normally? Sarutobi, Jiraiya, Kakashi, Gai, Tsunade, Naruto, Asuma, and an ANBU or a hunter nin that died at battle of the Gods? And with every village at about half strength now we're down to Tsunade, Naruto, Asuma, and Orochimaru.
Keep in mind that Elite Jounin like Gai, Kakashi, and Asuma are not S-rankers (though after inheriting the Monkey Scroll, Asuma likely is on the cusp of S-rankery). They're in the same demographic category as S-rankers, the 'unlikely to die to anything less than history-defining battles' group, but they aren't S-Rank yet.

In terms of proper S-rankers, it looks like major villages tend to have about 2-3 proper S-rank ninja. Sand had Gaara and Chiyo, and now only has Chiyo, and the consequence of only having one S-ranker is that Sand looks really weak right now compared to other major villages.

Meanwhile, Rock had Han, Roshi, and Onoki, two Jinchuuriki and one Kage, and Cloud had A, B, and F. It's also possible that there's one or two more that I'm not aware of from those villages, and it'd be more apt to say 2-4. Leaf is highly anomalous, generating multiple times as many S-rankers as other villages but losing something like half of them, ending up merely one or two S-rankers higher than average.

As for minor villages, I would buy that their power often peaks at Elite Jounin as often as not. We have the example of Waterfall's Fu as an S-ranker in a minor village, but I would similarly buy that the strongest ninja in River is closer to Hiashi than Jiraiya in terms of power.
 
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It seems statistically improbable that 2 S-rank ninja - Gai and Asuma - were jonin-sensei at the same until, unless the rationale is to prioritize teacher continuity, passing down their lessons, protecting the genin, and that they're unlikely to grow significantly stronger.

I'm fairly certain that neither Asuma nor Hiashi are/were S-rank.. I vaguely remember being told that directly for Hiashi and I think Hiashi was stronger than Asuma.

E: immediately ninja'd by @Inferno Vulpix whoops :p
 
I vaguely remember being told that directly for Hiashi and I think Hiashi was stronger than Asuma.
I think the "Hiashi is stronger than Asuma" was partially motivated by how their fighting styles interacted (Jyuuken is insane for CQC) and how, in a fight for the Hokage, Asuma's more lethal fighting style would be disadvantaged against Hiashi's.
 
You are actively disagreeing with me, and yet I find myself fond of you. This is a novel sensation.

The short answer is that the Condor resistance is described as a desperate, wrecked force. If they could ally with another close clan beyond a neutral buffer state it's hard to imagine them refusing.

Plus, burgeoning pan-clan alliance. This is about fostering multilateralism on both planes instead of focusing on specific individuals.

I appreciate it! Big fan of having civil disagreements and not taking things personally.

When you phrase it like that I can definitely see the benefits. If I had to pare it down, I'd say I'm still worried that the Condors take the whole 'enable the destruction of our culture' things fairly seriously, and would try to attack Keiko or us (which is another thing - make sure the Pangolins and Condors don't have any issues given that both their summoners are going to be Leaf ninja).

I think it would be better going for the Otters, setting up the trade network, forming some sort of 7P UN, and then fitting the Condors in so that they don't have a choice but to accept. It's not that they're going to hate us more for forcing them in. I just want to ensure we aren't in any danger from them.

I'd say it's a mixture between cultural conditioning and incentivization. The Will of Fire says to protect Leaf and pass along knowledge so that the next generation can do the same. That, combined with some Tower pressure for newly minted jonin to pass along knowledge/skills before they die, would be enough to have Asuma and Gai take on a team. Especially if we assume that Hiruzen had his own son teach the next generation of ISC heirs to further bind their closely knit clans to the Leaf, and that Gai --a taijutsu monster --saw Lee's blind persistence and was inspired by it.

I like this reasoning, and it makes sense for Leaf. Other villages don't have a Will of Water or Will of Rock though, so it's probably more administratively ordered there?

The whole demographics things, where you want to have meaningful casualties and meaningful stakes, but don't want to worry about the details so it feels like there's infinite ninja is my least favorite things about Naruto fanfiction, and there's been a fair number of battles or losses (vs Mist, vs Akatsuki, sealing failure, sinkholes) that I can't contextualize because there's not a population model I can point to.

You're growing on me, but you really did pick literally the two worst examples of pedagogical selfishness in the entire history of the entire setting.

Fair, but I don't think any other Leaf S-ranks take a team other than the Hokage (honestly very coincidental that Hokage keep teaching other Hokage. Maybe teaching correlates with being good at politics?), so it's very peculiar that 2 did at the same time.

Pending them actually being S-rank, see below

They were, but note that skywalkers were a brand new thing and they make an enormous difference. That was the last major battle that we rolled by hand and the jōnin v ANBU part of it was a curbstomp. Hiruzen got a stupidly unlucky roll which is why he died.

That's a very good point, and it explains why they folded to Akatsuki, since Sarutobi, Jiraiya, and Naruto took the equivalent S-rank Mist ninja.

Keep in mind that Elite Jounin like Gai, Kakashi, and Asuma are not S-rankers (though after inheriting the Monkey Scroll, Asuma likely is on the cusp of S-rankery). They're in the same demographic category as S-rankers, the 'unlikely to die to anything less than history-defining battles' group, but they aren't S-Rank yet.

In terms of proper S-rankers, it looks like major villages tend to have about 2-3 proper S-rank ninja. Sand had Gaara and Chiyo, and now only has Chiyo, and the consequence of only having one S-ranker is that Sand looks really weak right now compared to other major villages.

Meanwhile, Rock had Han, Roshi, and Onoki, two Jinchuuriki and one Kage, and Cloud had A, B, and F. It's also possible that there's one or two more that I'm not aware of from those villages, and it'd be more apt to say 2-4. Leaf is highly anomalous, generating multiple times as many S-rankers as other villages but losing something like half of them, ending up merely one or two S-rankers higher than average.

As for minor villages, I would buy that their power often peaks at Elite Jounin as often as not. We have the example of Waterfall's Fu as an S-ranker in a minor village, but I would similarly buy that the strongest ninja in River is closer to Hiashi than Jiraiya in terms of power.

I'm assuming elite jounin are S-rank mainly because otherwise Akatsuki, a group of 10, could solo major villages. That feels setting breaking to me - the whole reason the village system works is that, as we've experienced, its horrifying and near suicidal to go missing nin. But having an entire missing nin group be more powerful than a village is just-- if you go based off of that, Akatsuki had like half the S-rankers that exist. The ratio of S-rank to jonin works because S-rankers, as you pointed out tend not to die.

Also I might be remembering wrong, but I thought Kakashi was referenced specifically as S-rank, meaning his rival Gai would be as well, and I know Zabuza was referred to as both S-rank and Elite Jonin.

Another thing - I feel there gets to be a pretty big difference between senior chunin and new chunin, and I think the same thing starts to happen with jonin after they survive 3-5 years. I'm not sure it works to have all ninja but injured or S-rank ones die at 30, essentially. There's enough heredity of ninja being children of ninja that I'd expect them surviving longer in exchange for having a slower power curve due to less experience. See: Choza, Inoichi, Shikaku, Hiashi, Shibi, and Tsume, all these clan ninja that survived until their kids were 15 and approaching chunin. Assuming they had children earlier as 20/21, that still puts them at 35 until they died.

You could also make an argument that they died to a coincidence and normally would've survived longer, but ninja. Eventually some act of war comes and they're going to die at some point. A little curious how clan elders work now - maybe they aren't ninja and gain their power due to longevity and experience vs ninja power?
 
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I'm assuming elite jounin are S-rank mainly because otherwise Akatsuki, a group of 10, could solo major villages. That feels setting breaking to me - the whole reason the village system works is that, as we've experienced, its horrifying and near suicidal to go missing nin. But having an entire missing nin group be more powerful than a village is just-- if you go based off of that, Akatsuki had like half the S-rankers that exist. The ratio of S-rank to jonin works because S-rankers, as you pointed out tend not to die.
Thing is: Akatsuki was setting-breaking. They very nearly literally broke the setting, and it was only the combined firepower of every major village working together with a heaping dose of luck that took them down (when Akatsuki's strongest member couldn't even fight!)

It's been made clear that there was nothing stopping Akatsuki from systematically razing every Hidden Village to the ground other than the fact that Pein was going for the perfect ending where he could stop all war with only the deaths of nine jinchuuriki.

Also worth remembering is that Pein was ludicrous. Not just the Rinnegan hax god eyes letting him do a ritual to affect all of humanity and other fun stuff like that, but he managed to find all these S-rankers, who range from Itachi to Hidan to Orochimaru and everything in-between, and convinced them all to work together towards a common goal. Think about how hard it would be to get Tsunade on board with a plan like that, and imagine trying to do that ten times over.

Pein's actions are incredible, as in they would not be credible if you didn't already know that Akatsuki was real. His actions defied precedent and common sense alike, and it's only by the barest of margins that he failed in the end.
 
Thing is: Akatsuki was setting-breaking. They very nearly literally broke the setting, and it was only the combined firepower of every major village working together with a heaping dose of luck that took them down (when Akatsuki's strongest member couldn't even fight!)

It's been made clear that there was nothing stopping Akatsuki from systematically razing every Hidden Village to the ground other than the fact that Pein was going for the perfect ending where he could stop all war with only the deaths of nine jinchuuriki.

Also worth remembering is that Pein was ludicrous. Not just the Rinnegan hax god eyes letting him do a ritual to affect all of humanity and other fun stuff like that, but he managed to find all these S-rankers, who range from Itachi to Hidan to Orochimaru and everything in-between, and convinced them all to work together towards a common goal. Think about how hard it would be to get Tsunade on board with a plan like that, and imagine trying to do that ten times over.

Pein's actions are incredible, as in they would not be credible if you didn't already know that Akatsuki was real. His actions defied precedent and common sense alike, and it's only by the barest of margins that he failed in the end.

I don't like it because it ends up concentrating a very high portion of the villages power in 2 or 3 people, which means a war can turn on a single death. Mari - elite jonin Mari (good case for not having elite jonin be S-rank by the way) - could barely function under Tsunade's aura. Imagine trying to fight that. I prefer having more S-rank ninja to the point where you need a convincing battle win (@ our defection, where it was the loss of the jonin that hurt) in order to truly pull away in a war.

I'm still not the biggest fan of having a system where there's almost no recourse against the strongest ninja leaving the village and doing whatever they want (again, Akatsuki had at least 1/3 of S-rank ninja, probably over half after they finished capturing the Bijuu), but you make a good case that it's fits what we see in story. This is something you can argue yourself into believing whatever, so I'll go with whatever authorial fiat ends up being.
 
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Regardless, I'm trying to figure out why Gai and Asuma would voluntarily take on teaching a team. What do they gain out of it?
Connections and influence. Asuma and Kurenai were both in charge of 3 heirs to major clans. That gives them incredibly strong connections to those clans, and allows them to shape the very future of the village. Everything that Kurenai taught Hinata about a ninja's duty to the village, about civilians needing to be protected/ruled over/uplifted, or about foreign ninja being evil or good is all information that Hinata will be drawing upon now that she's clan head. Asuma knows Shikamaru and Ino on a personal level, so he has a better idea of what he needs to do to maintain the support of their clans now that he's Hokage.

And Gai... well, Gai is Gai. He likely wanted to spread the Spirit of YOUTH to the next generation, although unclear whether he picked three nobodies because they happened to be particularly YOUTHFUL or whether it was actually a brilliant ploy to get students he could spread his YOUTH to without their families freaking out and doing everything they could to not allow the scourge of YOUTHFULNESS to take over their clans.
 
Connections and influence. Asuma and Kurenai were both in charge of 3 heirs to major clans. That gives them incredibly strong connections to those clans, and allows them to shape the very future of the village. Everything that Kurenai taught Hinata about a ninja's duty to the village, about civilians needing to be protected/ruled over/uplifted, or about foreign ninja being evil or good is all information that Hinata will be drawing upon now that she's clan head. Asuma knows Shikamaru and Ino on a personal level, so he has a better idea of what he needs to do to maintain the support of their clans now that he's Hokage.

And Gai... well, Gai is Gai. He likely wanted to spread the Spirit of YOUTH to the next generation, although unclear whether he picked three nobodies because they happened to be particularly YOUTHFUL or whether it was actually a brilliant ploy to get students he could spread his YOUTH to without their families freaking out and doing everything they could to not allow the scourge of YOUTHFULNESS to take over their clans.
Also... it's possible that being a jounin teacher to clan students could result in said clans providing you extra training (read: secret techniques, but not super secret) so their kids don't die. Hard to get that elsewhere.
 
10 hunter nin jonin, 5 dedicated infiltrator jonin, and 5 specialized jonin (T&I, Yamanaka, Logistics, Kabuto in Medical) and we hit 50.

QMs is this/does this seem fairly accurate? This seems like not enough to me - I feel that the clans would have some jonin that aren't in the dedicated roles above.

Special Jonin seems like a potential and reasonable explanation.

There aren't that many, but they're often otherwise skilled Chunin taken out of the more immediate mission death cycle due to their special skills. Like Ebisu, he doesn't sound like he goes on missions. Special Jonin would be taken from the 'dead' Chunin category since they're Chunin generally, but for their extra specialty/narrow high skill level, but they're no longer available for general missions on the Chunin roster.

Edit: this also gives the QMs a fudge factor to call people Jonin without worrying about the exact count since a Special Jonin would be called a Jonin in most social circumstances, and the average Leaf ninja wouldn't necessarily know their official rank since there's no lapel insignia in this universe.
 
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I'm assuming elite jounin are S-rank mainly because otherwise Akatsuki, a group of 10, could solo major villages. That feels setting breaking to me - the whole reason the village system works is that, as we've experienced, its horrifying and near suicidal to go missing nin. But having an entire missing nin group be more powerful than a village is just-- if you go based off of that, Akatsuki had like half the S-rankers that exist. The ratio of S-rank to jonin works because S-rankers, as you pointed out tend not to die.
To expand on this, before the invention of skywalkers, Akatsuki had absolute air superiority as one of their strengths. In canon, when Deidara attacks Sand, Gaara is the only ninja capable of retaliating thanks to his flying sand platform. After Gaara's defeat, the only thing that stops Deidara from razing the village is that it's not within mission parameters.
 
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Get together and write a story, they said. Have a few awesome ninja fights, they said. Punching and magic and badass speeches and absolutely no f'ing spreadsheets or economic models or hydrology maps or demographic explanations, they said.

Ptui.
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Wasn't the Collapse your idea? You could have had Hiashi have his secret nightly meeting with Anko and have him survive. But no, now we have the reasonable Hokage and have to feel bad about the treason we are and will commit!

I miss friend Hiashi.
 
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