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Do we know if jonin in MfD get assigned solo missions regularly?
Full (i.e., not "special") jōnin -- yes. The ability to do missions solo is a standard mark for a jōnin.

It's a Standard to Summon and either a Standard or Supplemental to Reverse Summon. I'm unsure if there's a ruling about this @Paperclipped @Velorien @eaglejarl ? Want to weigh in?
It's a non-Reflexive Supplemental to return to the Human Path from the Summon Realm. It's a Standard for your summon on the Human Path to bring you to the Seventh Path, or a non-reflexive free for themselves to return on their own.

Soooo if she's teaching 3 genin did we get 3 adoption slots? Presumably for our 3 academy kids?
You got two adoption slots, one marked for Honoka and one marked for the final-year "Gōketsu" Sasha. The family of the other Academy student on your estate elected to move somewhere safer in Leaf after Yūdai's sealing failure ate the mother of that family and a couple of their younger siblings.

Also, Mari notes, you secured ongoing goodwill from Asuma. For the next one-to-three years, whenever KEI bothers Asuma about not doing enough to support clanless students, he'll at least be able to point to Akane, and how he "made" her take this long-term sensei relationship for KEI's genin, which is substantially more valuable than a few months' scattered training.
 
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Added a dedicated building for our Elder Grief Counseling group that we made after the Collapse. Also specified that the asethetics are to be soothing/comforting.

[x] (Goketsu Estate): With a Population Like Ours, We Need a Town Unto Ourselves
Words: 300

  • Sanity Check everything (and vet businesses) with Gaku, Mari, and Kei
  • Design:
    • Hire Shikamaru-recommended KEI-architect from NFF (flatters Shikamaru ; spotlights program).
    • Blend elements from other compounds (represents our connections within Leaf):
      • Uchiha (Hazou's ancestors, highlights bloodline connection to Leaf).
      • Nara (Kei's marriage to Shikamaru).
      • Senju (Jiraiya's teammate, and Noburi's lead medic/maybe-sensei).
      • Orochimaru's compound (potentially slighted if we reference Tsunade, but not him).
      • Sarutobi, (Jiraiya's sensei).
      • Yamanaka (Hazou/Akane's relationship with Ino).
      • Aburame (budding business relationship).
    • Require architect collaborates with...
      • Kagome (maximize trap-setting potential).
      • Noburi (medical checks).
      • Mari (general I&S defenses)
      • Kei (sanity checks/optimization/logistics)
  • Construction:
    • Hire KEI-recommended construction crews from NFF (spotlights program ; increase KEI connection).
      • Monitor for corruption.
    • Hazou teaches Reo Earthshaping.
      • Using Earthshaping, fix structural faults in (and hyper-condenses) all building materials (increases defensiveness).
      • Work with construction crews/engineers to ensure Earthshaped material is safe to use.
  • Details
    • Therapy Building (grief counseling)
      • Soothing aesthetics
    • Wooden facades (nod to Leaf's architectural styles)
    • Kagome-approved Underground Evac Buildings (civilians)
    • Goketsu Event Building
      • Huge dragon skeleton carving.
      • Relief carvings of Summon Clans we've contracted.
    • ES-Reinforced walkways (QoL improvement)
    • Hide Koi pond for FOOM OPSEC training.
    • Lampposts (increases visibility at night)
      • Marble statues, holding seals? (Leaf's heroes)
      • Without compromising effectiveness, Replicate light placements within Nara compound (Nara Homage)
    • Lots of gardens with water features, flowers, and fruit trees (Yamanaka homage, supplements Food Bank)
      • Subtly incorporate defenses...
        • Benches that're comfortable, but also reliable cover
        • Brick Facades over MEWs around garden/park perimeters
    • ES gold filigree into important buildings (use shapes reminiscent of sealwork)
    • ES relief carvings that resemble sealing on surfaces, hiding real seals in the noise.
    • Private monument to clan's fallen in the heart of estate (provides solace).
    • With Mari, Hazou Earthshapes fully anatomically accurate Jiraiya Colossus. Clothe in Arachnid Silk garments.
 
"Nope."

"Sigh... Traitorboy."

"AAAAAH, THAT GŌKETSU HAZŌ"

... Kagome? No wait... Fifi?

Love that about the Hyūga. Betrays expectations that you wouldn't have in another clan... and a little lack of political training for her, perhaps.
More supposed to be that she's comfortable enough that she's not tapping all her political training around Shino, I think.
You never know when you're going to need to fight off someone who's just that slow. Going into this with no training? Yeah right. Stay alive. Slowly.

Nope, not even gonna speculate on those, too dangerous, even as a joke
???
Oh come on, that's mean Asuma seems mostly sane

Oh wow that was only two years ago. And we'll make jōnin by the third, isn't that great
That seems quite ambitious, but surprisingly doable. Protagonist perks, I suppose.
Thanks!

That was on Mr. Welch's List, wasn't it? Can't make your charisma score hideously negative so people automatically obey the opposite of what you tell them?
... Can we do it regardless? As long as we make our support for a cause public, and vote on it after the conservative bloc, we can ensure that the reverse, which we actually want, happens.
Try it, please. It would be hilarious to write everyone's reactions as Hazou's suddenly advocating for random conservative policies.
So you're just going to come to his place? A sealmaster's? In Sand, they have a proverb about giving a sealmaster time to prepare, you know.

I KNEW IT! THEY'RE IN CAHOOTS WITH THE HYŪ- ah, right, sorry, the opposite.
Still, the enemy of my enemy, right? An opportunity to do treason methinks I do see
Trying to... betray the Hyuuga?
And they're all trying to get him first for his latest "bright idea"

Oh no it's the Watchers

Already hyped. Fingers crossed for Grandpa Ryuugamine

Hmm... well, at least the story is.... somewhat accurate....

Hazou's Fandom grows.... but seriously, it's awesome to hear Uplift is spreading even if it's just the seeds.
Sadly, didn't seem to spread to this village.
Note to self, invent leather tanning shoemaking seal.

Two characters that we never see is nice. I've felt pretty justified in my comments after that Shino chapter that it wasn't going to go anywhere (and it has been a very long time now since we did that.) But I'm still glad it did finally get called back to. I hate to see threads go nowhere even if I opposed them at the time. This is a very satisfying callback, that shows even the simple things Hazou does can have serious impacts on people.
Hmm, we've had a little thing about the Aburame deal in the back for a bit, but haven't yet posted it for similar reasons to the Estate vote not passing -- the energy in the playerbase seems a little low atm.
Hey now, we also paid for it! But I'm glad his reputation as the ideas guy has grown.
I... don't think Hazou paid for what was ultimately a >year long research initiative by the Aburame's best artisans, did he?
Hello Hinata would you like to buy some darkness seals

The implications here are simply amazing. So many funny things come to mind. Do you think Neji rants to her about the turtles at all or does Hinata mostly just figure it out herself from Neji's embarrassment? I wonder if she's met any of his summons. Does he like YOUTH now? So many possibilities...

I like that they think he can just do that shit. SEALMASTER STONKS GO UP

As we suspected the elders are snobby assholes. Hopefully we get to beat these guys up eventually

Hopefully the beginning of something truly excellent. I'm surprised she didn't mention the rumors of his harem building ngl

So I guess he's still kicking. Good for him? I wonder how strong he is at this point...
Ask!
So they know it was him......

Hope they figure it out

Goddamn Hazou's got game. Heir of Jiraiya indeed- hey wait why did she think he was getting married.... DAMN YOU AMI

Damn you Ami
Insightful.
A lot of interesting information here... the plot thickens. Damn you Ami

...what.
What?
Well whoever they are, they're as flummoxed as us it seems.

Secondary? Gotta bump those numbers up!

That is ASTONISHINGLY good intel... Who are their informants...?
What do you mean? A decent chunk of this is public. Everyone knows Hazou was at the Chuunin Exams.
......compare him to RYUUGAMINE? The fucking only known LOGISTICS JONIN?
Hazou's the first creativity-spec jounin.
Lmao Hazou's political power is a Sine wave
When has he been solidly influential? The Election? Since the Akatsuki treason, I feel like he's just been barely hanging on.
...okay, so they don't know EVERYTHING. That's good. EM nuke and our personal bullshit like MARS are under the radar still.

Yes please. Let's fight off some fucking kidnappers baby!
The issue is that they don't *want* you to fight them off. They're not really going to be sending a force that's likely to lose.
...mhmm, that's the only reason... Ami did say she had some theories...

...how do they know this?! Is there a traitor ANBU?! Was this the Neck trip or the Nagi trip?!

L + Ratio + No dogs + Come and take it + Cannai will reject you

...damn. Hazou is worth more than a fucking summoning scroll.

Wait, do they know about the Dragons? Are they... trying to weaponize them? Huh I guess we never considered some people might get involved with the Dragons in a BAD way...
Every proper Lovecraftian horror needs an apocalypse cult around it, right?
Tfw they don't count Tsunade

...the status quo trending towards humanity's inevitable demise? THAT status quo?

I like how it's just a given that he will do this. Awesome.

🤔 Feels like watcher bait but I'll entertain the notion. Maybe the Watchers are a subsection of this organization?

Man, they think he could SURPASS Ryuugamine or maybe already has. I need Ryuugamine's POV SO FUCKING BAD. Also, what is "the worst?" Leaf dominance/PAX Konoha? Why would that be bad? Is the conflict intentionally manufactured? Hmm nah too similar to things in worm some of the authors don't like
You know, if you really need Ryuugamine's POV, I do take comms....
Okay cool guess there's just spies hanging out on the estate now... Not sure what other Sealing failure this would refer to. I'd almost think the Rift but I don't think Hazou had enough notoriety yet and also it's not recent anymore.
I'm pretty sure that the estate is pretty open to outsiders, and just about anyone can walk on. With hundreds of civilians and loads of construction, access control seems really hard.
The moment you feel like writing another of this sort of chapter, please do, this was amazing. One of my favorite chapters in a while!

Bitter rival of Old Man Daijōbu.
What does this mean?
Ah, wrong eye color! How long must these poor women go deprived of posters in their bedroom?

Easy boon to our image by visiting settlements riding a Dog, projecting the image they already want to believe.
While the Dogs are often bigger than dogs, I don't think any of Hazou's summons are really suitable to riding...
Sad. So desperate for this kind of figure, begging to fall for a fake. Bankroll a Konoha-wide celebration to test how widespread or deep the admiration goes.

Mari PR efforts at work.

Deeper meaning or just making conversation?

Bread and butter of a clan with byakugan.

Lee! Next 100 laps walking upside down on his legs! Then rightside up on his hands!

Get not inviting Kiba, but no Akamaru?

Died at Nagi? Slow sparring is a great detail. Makes the segment come to life more than simple talking heads.
Thanks, I thought it was a cute detail.
Second time we hear about Ami investigating the Yodomi. Cool adventure sis. Not jealous at all. NOT AT ALL.
You can go and have adventures if you want! You should feel totally free to do this, honestly.
Sad. No free Orochimaru killing tips. Six colors, meet once a month. Viridian Azure Saffron Crimson Verdigris Ochre. Nothing special to report from searching thread references of these colors. Kakashi gave Canter an azure scarf. Azure dye used by Isanese that only comes from beetle in Tea. Crimson hair for Mari and endless crimson blushing.

Random hunch, these spooks are from Waterfall. Every perspective is someone from the Mist Chūnin Exam? No, wrong. Not Kuniko. Wanted to find a pattern too badly.

Still, easy for group with invisibility to collect heaps of information. Weak to Hyūga. Investigate history of mysterious foreign disappearances?
An interesting hypothesis.... Notably, Waterfall is probably by far the strongest minor, with a jinchuuriki and a number of powerful clans.
EM storm or failure before compound move? Planning to send fake refugees?

@Paperclipped Been keeping track and you are very good at nailing established character voices on the first try and if not the first, always fixed the second. A joy to read!
I'm not sure exactly what this means, but thanks!

To all three of you, thanks for the reaction posts. +1 XP apiece to a PC of your choice(s).

You can always write a part two if/once you feel like it.
Ah, but then it would take space away from some of the *other* cool interludes I have teed up.

Although perhaps we would have had an additional Aspect to tag.
Yeah, for sure. "Leaf's Youngest Jounin" would be a very nice Aspect to have around in social situations.
 
Legit, as soon as the Concalve ends, I'm only going to be voting for plans that have us going up to Asuma and demanding a special jonin rank.
HAZOU: hi, I'm a jonin in Sealing now.
ASUMA: source?
HAZOU: Me.
ASUMA: Can't argue with that.


What do you mean? A decent chunk of this is public. Everyone knows Hazou was at the Chuunin Exams.
Moreso the fact that he negotiated with the Hokage to do a mission


To all three of you, thanks for the reaction posts. +1 XP apiece to a PC of your choice(s)
Hazou. Fate of the world etc
 
More supposed to be that she's comfortable enough that she's not tapping all her political training around Shino
That's a weakness we can exploit oh, that's sweet!
If this is about the dire need for specialised defence against the very slow kind of threats, obviously only very slow defence could work, otherwise your block ends too early and you're doomed.
If this is about me refusing to theorise about a Thinker clan because they're scary, well, I refuse to theorise about a Thinker clan because they're scary. I may or may not walk back on that statement if and when convenient, as my religion directs me to. It's a convenient religion.
That seems quite ambitious, but surprisingly doable. Protagonist perks, I suppose.
The thought of aura-blasting lesser threats (and Ritsuo, as a prank, before he gets a chance to recognise it's us) will warm our heart enough to soar above chūnin
Try it, please. It would be hilarious to write everyone's reactions as Hazou's suddenly advocating for random conservative policies.
It would also be hilarious to vote for Hazō suddenly advocating for random conservative policies. No wait, can we make them wear youthsuits if we publicly renounce them?
Trying to... betray the Hyuuga?
I meant betraying Leaf by allying with these secretive plotters because they're the enemy of our enemy (the Hyūga) but you know, I think I like your version better. Let's betray the Hyūga. Or whomever, really, I'm not picky.
 
To all three of you, thanks for the reaction posts. +1 XP apiece to a PC of your choice(s).
Are you sure you want to encourage me I mean, thanks! It seems the thread likes it when Hazō does not die. I think I like it too. Maybe Hazō should get it.
What does this mean?
Answering for coldcutconvict: Genki can be written as 元気, in which case it's mostly used to say "in good health, doing good." Daijōbu means "okay" (as in, it's okay/I'm okay) so they're mortal enemies. It's like if we met Kurosawa Hanzo now, we'd quite naturally fight for dominance over the... local group of somewhat similar names, I suppose.
 
What does this mean?
Lysbeth covered it :). In good silly fun for a name for a random generator to pick Genki as a name for someone cranky. XP to Noburi, please.
While the Dogs are often bigger than dogs, I don't think any of Hazou's summons are really suitable to riding...
Stand with reigns + one Dog for each foot call that an honorary Arachnid.
You can go and have adventures if you want! You should feel totally free to do this, honestly.
Looking forward to it after the Conclave or it is revealed regressing to genin was not a joke!
An interesting hypothesis.... Notably, Waterfall is probably by far the strongest minor, with a jinchuuriki and a number of powerful clans.
Would have been interesting to see what role Waterfall played in the story if Hidden Swamp worked out or the group spent more time as independents near Iron. Almost went there on a mission related to rum, apparently.
I'm not sure exactly what this means, but thanks!
When you write Shino it feels like Shino. Hinata does not feel like a reskinned Ino. After millions of words with the main cast, no uncanny valley when you write them. Hope this is clear.
 
You know, making ourselves valuable to both Naruto and Orochimaru would make ourselves that much harder to kidnap.
 
Next Plan:
  • Tell Mari/Kei about examining the Great Seal with Orochimaru. Ask about Spec Jōnin status.
I truly do not understand the desperate urge to ask them about this in the middle of the Conclave when it makes no difference either way, as it isn't currently actionable. Is it just to sate your curiosity? If so, you can probably just ask the QMs if those characters think Hazou would qualify.
 
Voting isn't open but I want to get this down on paper. If this plan blows Ma and Pa's minds, then they may suddenly become a lot more invested in our survival and/or dump a bunch of lore on us.

@Paperclipped, @Velorien, @eaglejarl, this is the sort of plan that would become very boring immediately if some of the underlying assumptions are wrong. The underlying assumptions are that the Toad Sages aren't already reasonable aware of our plans and intentions. Can you comment on Hazo's knowledge here? It was pointed out that we had a Toad at the remote viewing session - what would they have reported back?

('No comment, put preliminary questions in a plan' is a reasonable answer.)

[X] Action Plan: Have We Seriously Not Done This Yet?
Word count: <300
  • Ma and Pa:
    • Run by Noburi, Mari, and Naruto.
      • Ask Noburi for his read based on knowing what Ma and Pa are like.
      • Ask Mari if doing this is treasonous.
        • Side note: should we invite Kei/Ami? If so, do that.
      • Ask Naruto to be present.
    • At an appropriate moment during one of Naruto's training sessions, politely request that Ma and Pa move to a high-opsec area.
      • Select a site based on the contents of the conversation we're about to have.
    • Bring them up to speed on Project Necromancy. Goal: convince them that we're a) not crazy b) deadly serious.
      • Present facts, with Naruto corroborating what we told him.
      • Answer questions. Be honest about what we know and don't know.
      • If asked, be clear that, yeah, part of the reason we want Jiraiya back is because he'd increase our personal power, but even if he only returned as a civilian everyone ignored, he's still our father. The world is poorer without him and we refuse to simply accept that.
    • Problems we're aware of:
      • We're only partway to an actual mechanism to open the Rift.
      • The Akatsuki or others are probably racing us to it.
      • We have no idea if we can survive in Nakara.
      • We have no idea how to locate him once we're in.
      • A successful revivification would upend Human Path politics.
      • Any I've forgotten that Pilot would be aware of.
    • Any advice or lore they can contribute to the project would be deeply appreciated.
 
I don't think we can reasonably do that without encroaching on clan secrets.
I think we could get Shikamaru's permission. Especially if we don't ask Kei for details, and just hand her a Darkness seal to practice with before leaving the room. Just a "did this make Nara Jutsu stronger?"

We could even be a little transparent with Shikamaru. "We have a seal that we think might synergize well with Nara jutsu, but aren't sure about possible interactions. We want to safety test it. We want to sell it to you, but don't want to make false promises. Kei will only give us a 'yes/no' answer, and we won't be near her when she tests it. She won't divulge the details of the Nara jutsu, and she won't divulge the details of the seal to you."

We could even tack on a clause similar to "if this seal synergizes with Nara Jutsu, we would trade it exclusively to the Nara" (or maybe even straight up trade them the designs for something).
 
"Well, I can understand that," Hinata said. "The telescope you gave me has been incredibly useful already. The elders are being snide about it, you know. They're asking if my bloodline's inadequate, and if that's why I'm using civilian technology. I don't think they get how perfectly the telescopes complement the Byakugan. Even without the bloodline, I'd bet people can get tons of great uses out of it, especially with Gōketsu's sky-seals."
Huh. A young individual seeing ideas that could help the country as a whole but is stymied by those in power out of sheer conservatism (and not unlikely a healthy dose of "shoot the engineers" thinking). The only difference is in Leaf you aren't immediately unpersoned.
 
I'm actually pretty worried about Kei and her build. All of the other uplift kids have a legit argument for spec jounin right now. Hazō is one of the top 5 great seal masters alive. Noburi has the chakra reserves to drop a boss or multiple jounin summons. Akane is a walking WMD and can punch evenly with jounin. All Kei has is some decent Nara jutsu. Plus her columns are in terrible shape and raising a new capstone is over a year away. I'm not really sure what path we should take to get her back on track but we should spend some in game time making her suck less
 
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