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Re: Tsunade

"I had the strangest feeling that I knew [this plan]..." ... "And that I shouldn't ought to [follow through]." Like meeting someone who had been a friend, once, before something went drastically wrong... that wasn't really it at all, but Harry couldn't find words.

My own words feel inadequate. I have little more than a pitted stomach, a keening wail in the wordless part of my mind. There is something that does not belong with any proposed ways of getting Tsunade's vote, and I can't put my thumb on what - this terrifies me.
 
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My own words feel inadequate. I have little more than a pitted stomach, a keening wail in the wordless part of my mind. There is something that does not belong with any proposed ways of getting Tsunade's vote, and I can't put my thumb on what - this terrifies me.

We have until Saturday to figure out our options. That's why I started early, because Tsunade is...well...hard to figure out. The best option may be just not to talk to her about the vote.
 
Posting here I generally try to keep from criticizing or voting because I don't have the time or interest to put into learning the mechanics and lore to the required level. In light of the recent debacle I realize this isn't always the right path to take and feel I should express some of my perspectives on the problems here.

Fundamentally I object to the moral bargaining I see from players and am disappointed by the lack of POVs from, for lack of a more nuanced term, victim classes. I see a 'rational consequentionalist' as the exact same thing as a 'hard man making hard decisions', with the same outcome for the little people crushed underfoot. We've seen this in the recent events and earlier in the Pangolin deals. However I don't feel like utopian visions are always the motivation behind the ruthless decisions. I think there's a lot of pride there. Losing the Pangolin Scroll would make the thread and viewpoint characters look and feel uncool for example, so reasons are found to justify continuing the arms sales.

Further everything the thread wants to do to help civilians is something that doesn't cost them anything they really care about, like their pride or feelings of power. Hazou working himself ragged in disaster relief or giving away mountains of money (that doesn't exist, and was earned in-game with cool schemes people wanted to pull off anyway) doesn't matter. It feels like his 'uplift' kick is only an attempt to morally justify whatever horrible-but-clever thing the thread wants to do in hindsight, which I'm very uncomfortable with the implications of.

I feel the recent treatment of Hiashi is an emblematic scapegoating of that attitude. Does he represent bad things? Absolutely, but so does Hazou. More level headed characters like Tsunade see him as a step back compared to Hiruzen or Asuma but nothing like the apocalyptic threat to all that is good the thread seems to treat him as. He's a classist, and an isolationist, but he cares about Konoha and could be rationally bargained with. (He's also far from the decisive obstacle to world peace or worldwide humanitarian movements, there are four other Kage to deal with, Akatsuki and the Minor Villages.) I see a lot of space to negotiate with for civilian welfare, clanless rights or peace initiatives given the other sympathetic forces in Konoha (Naruto, Shikamaru, Asuma, Tsunade) and material benefits to Konoha's security that could be provided. However I've seen assassination discussed here and further undermining of Konoha's traditions for peaceful transitions of power. The Pangolin sales would have continued to fund the election if Keiko hadn't stood up and frankly (if the staff hadn't intervened) I think that the Uchiha deal would have gone through with a few token concessions to conscience and only a handful objecting. Anything is justified if it stops Hiashi.

Two, while 'HDK' is valid for main-story posts I don't feel Interludes are being used enough to give many serious but not world shaping elements of the world the focus they deserve. If it's never in the story it won't have weight. Has there ever been a series of interludes of what the Condor civilians are facing? I believe there was one of survivors of the Hot Springs Massacre, but has that been brought back since as probably Uplift's biggest personal crime? Have the friends and familes of the (probably exploited Clanless Chunin) murdered border guards come up? Would there have been interludes of the perspectives and feelings of the Uchiha civilians? I think there should be, and perhaps it shouldn't be voted on. People will probably choose a more prominant privileged and influential character like the Mizukage over the live of a border guard's orphan, but if you want to give proper moral weight to events I don't see another alternative than to deliberately choose to show the fallout. If it's not in the story then narratively it as good as didn't happen or matter.

The inclusion of Yukari and Kenta into the main story is a helpful step in the right direction though, it's been frustrating to see so much of the moral weight in the story being dependent on 'helping civilians' but excluding all civilian voices in the actual narrative.

That's all not to say I don't still appreciate the story, I just don't like the thread discussion very much or sympathise with Hazou anymore while enjoying the rest. Though I'm still holding out some hope that my sympathy for the character can be salvaged. On the character level the way I personally read this story is as Hazou's fall into Ninja Messiah madness. He starts as a young scared boy searching for both meaning and safety. The feeling of 'safety' is unfortunately provided through skill with violence and weaponized seals, which are a passion and also a crutch much like a kid carrying a knife to school because he's afraid. The sense of meaning I feel he's looking for like a gap year student at first, wanting to 'help civilians' isn't founded on organic empathy or experience it's just something he thinks he can do to feel like a good person. Then Hot Springs happens and he's responsible, yes, for the possibility of provoking a world war but also personally for the deaths of the civilians there and a number of missing nin in the same boat as him and nominal allies in the Konoha border guards and Jiriaya's agent and for abandoning the others in Swamp.

Then Jiriaya enters the pictures during the adoption arc, providing both the safety and power that Hazou wants on all levels. Wealth, political power, secret techniques, seals and the protection of the world's strongest ninja with a philosophy and cause Hazou can believe in. It makes a lot of sense for Hazou to be willing to keep the arms trading going for Jiriaya, and to take on his view of Hiashi. Then Jiriaya dies and Hazou is left adrift. My suspicion is this is all about Hazou grasping for the feeling of power and security he had as the Hokage's son and lashing out at Jiriaya's political rival as the representative of the threat of losing it. Naruto being on board with that, who probably took most of his attitudes about Hiashi from the same source and is also traumatized from captivity and missing Jiriaya and Hiruzen, doesn't help. There's also the guilt from supporting the Pangolins, which is partly justified on believing Jiriaya was justified in opposing Hiashi the way he did. So he doubles down and he drags his family down with him. Keiko sees the spiral and refuses to participate, Mari misplaces her trust and breaks.

So yeah Hazou's behavior and agression doesn't seem entirely stable to me, and I'd trust Tunsade's humanitarian perspective on the situation over a traumatized Naruto's and Keiko's moral compass over Hazou's. I'm really hoping the story is going somewhere with a compromised POV, because if it isn't and this kind of 'hard man' thinking is going to be the norm forever I'm uncomfortable.
 
This XenForo2 update seems to have broken the code that lets my Firefox 'Stylish' plugin show transparent text. This is a quick check to see if the update fixed it.
Yep, looks like it did.

Try this:
CSS:
.message-body span[style='color: transparent'] {
  /* border? */
  border-bottom: 1px dotted LawnGreen !important;
  /* always show */
  color: lawnGreen !important;
}
 
I feel the recent treatment of Hiashi is an emblematic scapegoating of that attitude. Does he represent bad things? Absolutely, but so does Hazou. More level headed characters like Tsunade see him as a step back compared to Hiruzen or Asuma but nothing like the apocalyptic threat to all that is good the thread seems to treat him as. He's a classist, and an isolationist, but he cares about Konoha and could be rationally bargained with. (He's also far from the decisive obstacle to world peace or worldwide humanitarian movements, there are four other Kage to deal with, Akatsuki and the Minor Villages.) I see a lot of space to negotiate with for civilian welfare, clanless rights or peace initiatives given the other sympathetic forces in Konoha (Naruto, Shikamaru, Asuma, Tsunade) and material benefits to Konoha's security that could be provided. However I've seen assassination discussed here and further undermining of Konoha's traditions for peaceful transitions of power. The Pangolin sales would have continued to fund the election if Keiko hadn't stood up and frankly (if the staff hadn't intervened) I think that the Uchiha deal would have gone through with a few token concessions to conscience and only a handful objecting. Anything is justified if it stops Hiashi.

First, nobody has seriously(That I know of) seriously suggested political assassination. It's counterproductive and promote a dangerous political environment. Second, no recent posters has suggested that Hiash is a mustache twirling villian, and I trust Mari's political analysis more than Jiraiya's exaggerated judgement.

However, Hiashi being a classist, isolationist, and only giving a shit about Konoha, as well having the gall to suggest that Asuma's belief in peace is naive makes him dangerous for world peace.

It is my opinion that Hiashi will either cause a war on accident, or let a war happened on his watch.
 
However, Hiashi being a classist, isolationist, and only giving a shit about Konoha, as well having the gall to suggest that Asuma's belief in peace is naive makes him dangerous for world peace.
The idea that belief in peace is naive can actually be...correct. PM Chamberlain of pre-WWII Britain is widely regarded as a failure precisely because he believed that peace with Hitler's Germany was possible. That errant belief of his had a lot to do with the inevitable war with Germany becoming WWII in 1939 instead of a regional and quickly won dust-up earlier in the '30s. Peace is certainly desirable; it is not always possible.
 
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Posting here I generally try to keep from criticizing or voting because I don't have the time or interest to put into learning the mechanics and lore to the required level. In light of the recent debacle I realize this isn't always the right path to take and feel I should express some of my perspectives on the problems here.

Fundamentally I object to the moral bargaining I see from players and am disappointed by the lack of POVs from, for lack of a more nuanced term, victim classes. I see a 'rational consequentionalist' as the exact same thing as a 'hard man making hard decisions', with the same outcome for the little people crushed underfoot. We've seen this in the recent events and earlier in the Pangolin deals. However I don't feel like utopian visions are always the motivation behind the ruthless decisions. I think there's a lot of pride there. Losing the Pangolin Scroll would make the thread and viewpoint characters look and feel uncool for example, so reasons are found to justify continuing the arms sales.

Further everything the thread wants to do to help civilians is something that doesn't cost them anything they really care about, like their pride or feelings of power. Hazou working himself ragged in disaster relief or giving away mountains of money (that doesn't exist, and was earned in-game with cool schemes people wanted to pull off anyway) doesn't matter. It feels like his 'uplift' kick is only an attempt to morally justify whatever horrible-but-clever thing the thread wants to do in hindsight, which I'm very uncomfortable with the implications of.

I feel the recent treatment of Hiashi is an emblematic scapegoating of that attitude. Does he represent bad things? Absolutely, but so does Hazou. More level headed characters like Tsunade see him as a step back compared to Hiruzen or Asuma but nothing like the apocalyptic threat to all that is good the thread seems to treat him as. He's a classist, and an isolationist, but he cares about Konoha and could be rationally bargained with. (He's also far from the decisive obstacle to world peace or worldwide humanitarian movements, there are four other Kage to deal with, Akatsuki and the Minor Villages.) I see a lot of space to negotiate with for civilian welfare, clanless rights or peace initiatives given the other sympathetic forces in Konoha (Naruto, Shikamaru, Asuma, Tsunade) and material benefits to Konoha's security that could be provided. However I've seen assassination discussed here and further undermining of Konoha's traditions for peaceful transitions of power. The Pangolin sales would have continued to fund the election if Keiko hadn't stood up and frankly (if the staff hadn't intervened) I think that the Uchiha deal would have gone through with a few token concessions to conscience and only a handful objecting. Anything is justified if it stops Hiashi.

Two, while 'HDK' is valid for main-story posts I don't feel Interludes are being used enough to give many serious but not world shaping elements of the world the focus they deserve. If it's never in the story it won't have weight. Has there ever been a series of interludes of what the Condor civilians are facing? I believe there was one of survivors of the Hot Springs Massacre, but has that been brought back since as probably Uplift's biggest personal crime? Have the friends and familes of the (probably exploited Clanless Chunin) murdered border guards come up? Would there have been interludes of the perspectives and feelings of the Uchiha civilians? I think there should be, and perhaps it shouldn't be voted on. People will probably choose a more prominant privileged and influential character like the Mizukage over the live of a border guard's orphan, but if you want to give proper moral weight to events I don't see another alternative than to deliberately choose to show the fallout. If it's not in the story then narratively it as good as didn't happen or matter.

The inclusion of Yukari and Kenta into the main story is a helpful step in the right direction though, it's been frustrating to see so much of the moral weight in the story being dependent on 'helping civilians' but excluding all civilian voices in the actual narrative.

That's all not to say I don't still appreciate the story, I just don't like the thread discussion very much or sympathise with Hazou anymore while enjoying the rest. Though I'm still holding out some hope that my sympathy for the character can be salvaged. On the character level the way I personally read this story is as Hazou's fall into Ninja Messiah madness. He starts as a young scared boy searching for both meaning and safety. The feeling of 'safety' is unfortunately provided through skill with violence and weaponized seals, which are a passion and also a crutch much like a kid carrying a knife to school because he's afraid. The sense of meaning I feel he's looking for like a gap year student at first, wanting to 'help civilians' isn't founded on organic empathy or experience it's just something he thinks he can do to feel like a good person. Then Hot Springs happens and he's responsible, yes, for the possibility of provoking a world war but also personally for the deaths of the civilians there and a number of missing nin in the same boat as him and nominal allies in the Konoha border guards and Jiriaya's agent and for abandoning the others in Swamp.

Then Jiriaya enters the pictures during the adoption arc, providing both the safety and power that Hazou wants on all levels. Wealth, political power, secret techniques, seals and the protection of the world's strongest ninja with a philosophy and cause Hazou can believe in. It makes a lot of sense for Hazou to be willing to keep the arms trading going for Jiriaya, and to take on his view of Hiashi. Then Jiriaya dies and Hazou is left adrift. My suspicion is this is all about Hazou grasping for the feeling of power and security he had as the Hokage's son and lashing out at Jiriaya's political rival as the representative of the threat of losing it. Naruto being on board with that, who probably took most of his attitudes about Hiashi from the same source and is also traumatized from captivity and missing Jiriaya and Hiruzen, doesn't help. There's also the guilt from supporting the Pangolins, which is partly justified on believing Jiriaya was justified in opposing Hiashi the way he did. So he doubles down and he drags his family down with him. Keiko sees the spiral and refuses to participate, Mari misplaces her trust and breaks.

So yeah Hazou's behavior and agression doesn't seem entirely stable to me, and I'd trust Tunsade's humanitarian perspective on the situation over a traumatized Naruto's and Keiko's moral compass over Hazou's. I'm really hoping the story is going somewhere with a compromised POV, because if it isn't and this kind of 'hard man' thinking is going to be the norm forever I'm uncomfortable.

I apologize in advance for not putting as much effort into this post as yours, but, in vague order of response:

I think that 'hard man' thinking is entirely reasonable in circumstances where you are in a position of influence. When you are, you have a duty to get the best results you can for those whose lives you have influence over. Hazou, by my read of his character, considers both the Goketsu more directly, and people worldwide to be part of his sphere of influence -- and rightfully so, in my view.

If he does not do the best that he can for everyone's sake, not just for the sake of his own morals, then that is a failing from my perspective. And the thing is, you're right that sometimes we optimize for keeping our own power as it is rather than helping people. But on the other hand... if you don't have that power, then you can't actually help people. If Keiko didn't have her contract, we would not have been able to clear that land so quickly and get the civilians set up in our back yard. Power is necessary to affect the world, in one way or another, and if you give that power up-- through action or inaction, then you are giving up the ability to make the world a better place.

I will not comment on your ideas of the Uchiha deal in light of recent thread activities (or more accurately, lack thereof), other than to say I wholly disagree that it was a negative for any of the people involved other than perhaps Hazou who was shown to be uncomfortable with it.

Re: Hot Springs being the worst thing, are you forgetting about the incident where under Nikkou's orders we capsized a ship full of around 60 civilians? Or does the fact that it was under orders affect your judgement of it? Because believe me, we could certainly have refused them.

I will also note that we did a lot of freaking out about the Pangolin deal in thread discussion and off site that didn't make it into plans for one reason or another.

I suspect that we will always be having to make hard decisions because the world is shit and it's not so nice as to give us Paragon or Renegade choices.
 
This XenForo2 update seems to have broken the code that lets my Firefox 'Stylish' plugin show transparent text. This is a quick check to see if the update fixed it.
Yep, looks like it did.

EDIT: Nope. :<
Try this:
CSS:
.message-body span[style='color: transparent'] {
  /* border? */
  border-bottom: 1px dotted LawnGreen !important;
  /* always show */
  color: lawnGreen !important;
}
I also went and took the syntax Loony provided, and used it to modify the Stylish script I had been using to make it work without changing any of the features of how it looked:
CSS:
.message-body span[style='color: transparent']
{ text-decoration: underline dotted; text-decoration-color: inherit !important; background: #000000; }
.message-body span[style='color: transparent']:hover
{color: #99cc00 !important;}
(Loony's version makes it auto-visible, this one keeps the black background that shows green dotted underline when hovered over).

Probably a good idea. @Inferno Vulpix Maybe put that into the Plan Cache?
Sure.
 
Two, while 'HDK' is valid for main-story posts I don't feel Interludes are being used enough to give many serious but not world shaping elements of the world the focus they deserve.
Mostly we only write interludes when we're too tired to write an actual update. As such, interludes will almost always be light and fluffy and deal with non-challenging topics. In other words, it's not that we're choosing to avoid those heavier subjects, it's simply that when we have energy we prioritize giving the players agency in the main chapters (which means writing from the POV of Hazō or his team), and when we don't have energy then we write fluffy interludes.

Try this:
CSS:
.message-body span[style='color: transparent'] {
  /* border? */
  border-bottom: 1px dotted LawnGreen !important;
  /* always show */
  color: lawnGreen !important;
}
I also went and took the syntax Loony provided, and used it to modify the Stylish script I had been using to make it work without changing any of the features of how it looked:
Thank you both, that works great. Yayyy!
 
I think that 'hard man' thinking is entirely reasonable in circumstances where you are in a position of influence. When you are, you have a duty to get the best results you can for those whose lives you have influence over. Hazou, by my read of his character, considers both the Goketsu more directly, and people worldwide to be part of his sphere of influence -- and rightfully so, in my view.

If he does not do the best that he can for everyone's sake, not just for the sake of his own morals, then that is a failing from my perspective. And the thing is, you're right that sometimes we optimize for keeping our own power as it is rather than helping people. But on the other hand... if you don't have that power, then you can't actually help people. If Keiko didn't have her contract, we would not have been able to clear that land so quickly and get the civilians set up in our back yard. Power is necessary to affect the world, in one way or another, and if you give that power up-- through action or inaction, then you are giving up the ability to make the world a better place.

While this is true, it's also true that this is something said by every tyrant ever. (alongside, "It will all be worth it when i'm in CHARGE")
If you kill your own principles while trying to get the power to apply those principles, you won't actually changes things once in power, this is why Tsunade laughs at us(and everyone), because she thinks that while trying to change the world, we're(and everyone) going to "make hard decision" and what will survive could like her, or Nagato or Jiraiya or Hiashi...but not like Idealist!Hazou.
She even noted that Hiashi was exactly the same when he was younger, so let's be careful with the "Pragmatic Evil button"(It won't apply to us, because we cheat by being us, but Hazou will feel the consequences).


I mean,personally i would love to arrive at a point when we're not the worse(morally)ninja in Konoha as far as results are concerned.
 
Fundamentally I object to the moral bargaining I see from players and am disappointed by the lack of POVs from, for lack of a more nuanced term, victim classes. I see a 'rational consequentionalist' as the exact same thing as a 'hard man making hard decisions', with the same outcome for the little people crushed underfoot. We've seen this in the recent events and earlier in the Pangolin deals. However I don't feel like utopian visions are always the motivation behind the ruthless decisions. I think there's a lot of pride there. Losing the Pangolin Scroll would make the thread and viewpoint characters look and feel uncool for example, so reasons are found to justify continuing the arms sales.
You did notice that we averted an apocalypse along the way, yes? Inventing superweapons and selling them to Leaf and the Pangolins in exchange for elevating and funding us respectively led to us being able to significantly increase Leaf's military power and solidify Jiraiya's position as Hokage following Hiruzen's death, which in turn made finding and defeating Akatsuki at all possible. If we weren't hard men making hard decisions, by now literally everyone would have been dead. (Unless you think Akatsuki were in the right — that would be an interesting position to take.)
 
First, nobody has seriously(That I know of) seriously suggested political assassination. It's counterproductive and promote a dangerous political environment. Second, no recent posters has suggested that Hiash is a mustache twirling villian, and I trust Mari's political analysis more than Jiraiya's exaggerated judgement.

However, Hiashi being a classist, isolationist, and only giving a shit about Konoha, as well having the gall to suggest that Asuma's belief in peace is naive makes him dangerous for world peace.

It is my opinion that Hiashi will either cause a war on accident, or let a war happened on his watch.
I seriously recommended it. I still do somewhat, although we've missed our best opportunity so it's not as good of a plan.
The idea that belief in peace is naive can actually be...correct. PM Chamberlain of pre-WWII Britain is widely regarded as a failure precisely because he believed that peace with Hitler's Germany was possible. That errant belief of his had a lot to do with the inevitable war with Germany becoming WWII in 1939 instead of a regional and quickly won dust-up earlier in the '30s. Peace is certainly desirable; it is not always possible.
The bad rap chamberlain gets is certainly inflated; he wasn't ignoring the risk of war with germany at all.
That's an SV meme, right? I don't think I really have the context to understand the point you're trying to make with that.
The 'Hard Men Making hard Decisions While Hard" is a way of mocking all these overly self-congratulatory people in power who make the "hard but neccesary" decisions without any self awareness; despite what these decisionmakers might think, many of these decisions are very much not neccesary and there's a curious tendency for the people suffering the downsides to be anyone except the decision maker. Oftentimes, instead these decisions are made to fit the model in the person's head of a "tough, rational leader," rather than actually being such. It's like the criticism HPJEV levels at McGonnagal about her merely acting out the role of a strict disciplinarian.
 
I mean,personally i would love to arrive at a point when we're not the worse(morally)ninja in Konoha as far as results are concerned.

I'm confused. Do you think we're anywhere near the bottom quartile given the average track record?

An argument could be made that we're decently close, given that our greatest sins are, in order:

1) Creating a situation in which Akatsuki had a high probability of failing. (Arguable, depends on if their plan worked/was actually a good solution.)

2) The Pangolin Deal

3) The Sunset Racer

But I don't think thats quite likely.
 
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I'm confused. Do you think we're anywhere near the bottom quartile given the average track record?

An argument could be made that we're decently close, given that our greatest sins are, in order:

1) Creating a situation in which Akatsuki had a high probability of failing. (Arguable, depends on if their plan worked/was actually a good solution.)

2) The Pangolin Deal

3) The Sunset Racer

But I don't think thats quite likely.
On the other hand, we recently saved 200 civilians, and our influence created the mission type of Till 'n' Fills.
 
While this is true, it's also true that this is something said by every tyrant ever. (alongside, "It will all be worth it when i'm in CHARGE")
If you kill your own principles while trying to get the power to apply those principles, you won't actually changes things once in power, this is why Tsunade laughs at us(and everyone), because she thinks that while trying to change the world, we're(and everyone) going to "make hard decision" and what will survive could like her, or Nagato or Jiraiya or Hiashi...but not like Idealist!Hazou.
She even noted that Hiashi was exactly the same when he was younger, so let's be careful with the "Pragmatic Evil button"(It won't apply to us, because we cheat by being us, but Hazou will feel the consequences).

I mean,personally i would love to arrive at a point when we're not the worse(morally)ninja in Konoha as far as results are concerned.
Hm, this is actually a really interesting question.

@Lord Marshal and @No-one of Importance , could you each please outline what specifically evil actions Hazō has taken and which principles you think he has sacrificed? The conversation will go a lot faster if it's specific instead of general. Also, do you consider him to be 100% harmful, or has he ever done anything that you believe has improved the world directly or indirectly?
 
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