Can I ask who the players are in this case?
Letter is getting posted soon and will have signatures (we're currently at the "alright, this is the letter that emerged from everyone's paragraphs and debates, now who wants to put their username on it" stage).
As to who wrote it ? There are 30 people in the discord channel dedicated to it (meaning "30 people joined and posted at least once since it was created in november"), and I'd say at least half of them contributed to the letter and its various drafts ? It's definitely been very collaborative and has been underway for over a month.
 
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That was a doozy.
"Orochimaru will help Leaf against Akatsuki as he did at Nagi Island, and once he returns, we'll make sure he answers for his crimes against the village. As for the Gōketsu, Hazō is the best sealmaster the world has seen since my father, and that's including Jiraiya. In the past months, he's devised seal arrays that make the skywalker look like a children's toy. Just like the skywalker, he intends to use this invention to bring down Akatsuki as well."
Yeah, Orochimaru is 100% going to answer for his crimes. He's going to quietly submit to Leaf's justice. He isn't going to be a linchpin of our defense against AMITY and whatever remains of the Akatsuki.

Either Naruto is principled and deeply naive, or he's making the noises he needs to make for people who need to hear them. I expect the latter - 'hey we're going to go steal a Rift to the afterlife, eventually catapulting Leaf to undisputed supremacy but calling down the might of every other nation including whichever Akatsuki members we don't kill' isn't exactly the message he wants to deliver for a half-dozen reasons.
How could they have not been missing-nin, though? Haruka had never heard of a village falsely declaring their ninja as missing-nin, falsely attempting to hunt them down and retrieve them. Had other villages done this and used their ninja to strike against Leaf in a way that Leaf couldn't retaliate against? And what would happen once everyone knew that Leaf had done this? Would they be held accountable for every action that every missing-nin of theirs ever took? What if enemy nations somehow thought Itachi was still a loyal Leaf ninja, and tried to level accusations against Leaf for his crimes? Or Orochimaru, if his crimes against Leaf could not be reconciled?
I mean. Orochimaru was already repatriated and his crimes were already basically discharged, and we didn't have this issue. Seemingly, at least. So I'm not super-duper worried about that. The rest of it...well, good points, but all points which assume we're going to resume normal relations with the rest of the ninja world after this is over. Which we aren't - every Leaf nin is going to be kill- or capture-on-sight once word of the Rift gets out, whether they're missing or in good standing.
He'd never run with Jiraiya before he died. For all that happened, they hadn't been peers.
And we still won't be after he gets back, because he'd need to level ES quite a bit for that and his XP rate is probably going to be depressed for a while.
"Leaf's ninja are close," Orochimaru said, breaking the silence. "Make a clone before we proceed, in case someone attacks you."
...why burn the chakra? Couldn't Orochimaru just...stand in front of us? Does he really doubt his ability to keep us safe? I guess we're going full threat-minimization, but it seems a bit odd. Maybe it's a subtle manipulation.
Umehisa, a clanless jōnin who had never even had a family name.
Baller move. They could have definitely picked a last name at some point. 'Fuck you, I'm not just clanless, I'm a mudfoot' is a flex.
"What the fuck was that stunt when you left Leaf?" Tsunade demanded, continuing past Hazō to get in Orochimaru's face again. "Explain. Now."

"He was a traitor and I needed a plausible cover," he said. Though Orochimaru was comfortably taller than Tsunade, she seemed to tower over him. "It was coordinated with the Hokage, of course. You may confirm the details with him at your leisure. Though, frankly, I do not see why it matters in the short term. Even if I had killed the boy in cold blood, we would still be collaborating against Akatsuki. Unless you wish to see Jiraiya's legacy tarnished?"

"And the monstrosities?" Tsunade asked. "People died after you released them, you know."

Orochimaru waved his hand. "You can blame Akatsuki for that."

"You created them!"

"And who so rudely destroyed my estate, causing them to be released?"
So, we know that Konan and Kisame showed up and looked through a few of Orochimaru's labs. We also know they had some pretext for being there - it's unclear if this was 'Orochimaru did a crime against humanity' or 'we need to make sure his research is above board'. Comments he made indicate that it leans to the latter but I don't trust them: he's the only source of information we have on the topic and he's not so socially inept as being incapable of noticing that we're not exactly comfortable with crimes against humanity.

The thing that I can't reconcile is the comment about 'needing a cover'. How does killing someone create a cover? What is the cover? It must be the fake lab, but...ah, this is too tangled for me to try to pick apart right now.

I don't think it's likely that Orochimaru merked Kabuto - he's too useful. I expect that he was experimenting on some poor missing-nin - maybe the kid that ran away when we accidentally threatened him with fish sex torture - and that some of Orochimaru's contingencies feature throwing monsters out, just like the other biosealer we took down.

Regardless, he's not going to see justice for any of this until we've revived a bunch of S-rankers, and he's going to see that coming and dip.
Tsunade glared at him for a moment longer, then turned to Hazō. "And what's your excuse?"

"Akatsuki was going to kill me if I stayed," Hazō said, keeping Tsunade's gaze. "I served Leaf better by leaving."

"And the rest of your clan?"

"They were going to be targets as well."
What's our excuse? The Hokage gave us orders, that's our excuse. Where does she get off? We didn't want to leave, but when the Hokage gives you an order, you follow it, even if it leaves your honour in tatters.
"I suppose Oro doesn't give a fuck about anyone else to bother taking them with him," Tsunade mused. "Fine. We'll work together for now and see what Naruto has to say afterwards. What's this about Moon?"
Small typo here - probably meant to be 'oro doesn't give enough of a fuck about anyone else'.
"That's horrible," Tsunade said.

"It's practical," Orochimaru said. "Tangentially, how hypocritical of you to complain. Do you not remember the clans we raided for their techniques? Just as clans have their ninjutsu, villages have their ninja. We've only moved to a higher level of abstraction."

"This is different," Tsunade said, frowning. "We didn't kill the clans to the last. We were making targeted strikes to get specific techniques. What you're proposing is condemning the entire village, eventually the entire island, to death."
No, Tsunade, it isn't different except with respect to scale. You did kill - those people are never going to be alive again. The individuals are to their clan what clans are to villages what villages are to shinobi-kind as a whole. The only difference here is scale. You're allowed your own personal line in the sand, but let's not pretend it isn't arbitrary.
Tsunade glared at Hazō and opened her mouth, but Orochimaru cut her off.

"Perhaps you are about to say something rude to the boy about how he should know his place. You are absolutely correct that he is far too arrogant. Nonetheless, you need to realize that he also has every right to stand here with the two of us. I briefly observed him creating certain runes near my laboratory, and I can assure you that the specs he provided you are accurate. He may be barely a chūnin in other regards, but these S-rank capabilities are worthy of your respect."
This is pretty delicious. We are worthy of her respect, and it's nice to have someone else acknowledge it.

It's going to sting so much when he inevitably stabs us in the back.
Tsunade turned her ire to Orochimaru, grinded her jaw for a second, then turned back to Hazō. "Fine. Trying to stay anonymous would be a lot harder, since I haven't trained a dozen non-lethal ninjutsu to fall back on. They would also get plenty of other information. If shadow clones pop in the fighting, they'd eventually be able to put together that we were from Leaf. They'll learn about your runic arrays from running into the Force Dome, and that'll also give us away."
Runic arrays? Is she just confused?

Y'know what we should have done? Tried to pass this off as Pain, revived. This is exactly the sort of bullshit he could have pulled, and would have discouraged Moon from running to the Akatsuki.
"Your politeness is appreciated," Orochimaru said dryly. "Was that really so hard? Frankly, the least worthy person here is the girl. If we want a genjutsu specialist, surely we should use the Monkey Summoner, no?"

"I already have knowledge of Hazō's runes, so you don't need to manage OPSEC for that with me," Mari said, slightly softer than normal. "Additionally, unlike Kurenai, I can trap multiple targets with mind-control ninjutsu, which will aid substantially in capturing Moon's ninja nonlethally."

Orochimaru arched an eyebrow, but didn't comment further.
This also feels pretty good. Yeah, you should give Mari her dues. No, she isn't on our level, but she's no slouch.
"Anyway, it's fine if they realize it's us eventually," Hazō said. "What we don't want them to do is realize immediately. AMITY will learn at some point that we attacked Akatsuki, but we just need that to be after we return to Leaf and fortify."

"I expect moving the rift to Leaf will require a month, though that is a high variance estimate," Orochimaru said. "Project how long it would take for international retaliation to reach Leaf if we left Moon ninja alive."

"A week to lick their wounds and recuperate," Hazō said after a moment to think. "Leaf didn't do much of anything for a few days after the Collapse, and they will have weaker institutions. Then a few days just to reach the mainland, and an unknown amount of time to get the international response. We'd see it coming, so I'd have plenty of time to return to Leaf to fortify it with runes."
This...the math isn't mathing, for me. What's described here isn't a month of time, which means that Hazo is going to need to be sitting back at Leaf, ready to deploy defenses. In the meantime, we're doing what? Anxiously awaiting Orochimaru returning with the Rift? That, uh. We trust him with that? I have a weird feeling that if we leave him alone with that thing, we aren't going to see him again. Is there a plan for that, or...?
"The costs are disproportionate to the gains," Orochimaru said. "Remember that fighting nonlethally will be harder in this scenario, and we will cause a greater number of casualties. Additional chakra is highly valuable. I do not wish to weaken our attack against Akatsuki for the sake of petty mercy."

"How far does that go, Oro?" Tsunade asked. "Okay, you fight openly with your snake-venom jutsu to capture people, and even the inbred dumbfucks of Moon realize that it's you. Now it's easy for their ninja to run off and gather AMITY. Are we going to slaughter every damn civilian in the village that saw us fight?"

"I did not intend to leave any ninja behind to run messages," Orochimaru said.

"And what about the ninja that are outside the village on a mission?" Tsunade asked. "We can't track them down across the entire island."

"Very well," Orochimaru said. "Then we slaughter the civilians."
Yeah, this was 100% bullshit on Orochimaru's part. He always intended to slaughter the civilians. I guess Tsunade is just a bit shocked and working things out, but 'I didn't plan on leaving any ninja behind' has such obvious objections that Orochimaru obviously foresaw them and always planned to kill the civvies.

Interesting that he didn't just lead with that, and even more interesting that Tsunade participated in any of this. My model of her needs some updating.
"Absolutely not," Tsunade said. "No, Hazō is right. We should fight as anonymously as we can. Mari will have to hold back on her mass-genjutsu, and you will abstain from using your well-known ninjutsu. Mari can even use her genjutsu to actively misinform the civilians we'll leave behind. With illusions muddying the story, they should only be able to infer that a skywalking strike force kidnapped all their ninja."

Orochimaru sighed. "I do not want to compromise our odds against Akatsuki in the slightest. You do see why this is more important than a couple hundred civilians in a meaningless backwater, yes?"

"It's not about what's important, Oro," Tsunade said. "It's about what's right."

Oro rolled his eyes. "Very well. Any effective plan would require your consent, and I would hate to accuse you of being willing to actually change your mind in response to changing evidence and circumstances. We will fight ineffectively, kill ninja who could instead give chakra to our final mission, and invite an eventual attack on Leaf."

"We'll be taking all the ninja with us," Tsunade said. "And it'll happen too fast for civilians to put things together. The ones out on mission can pick up the slack protecting the civilians. Almost everyone lives."
So we've gone from 'Hazo should shut up, why is he here, proposing mercy' to 'Hazo is right, you need to shut the hell up, Orochimaru'. Very interesting. I'm chalking a lot of Tsunade being impulsive and not thinking things through to her horrified reaction to what we're proposing and general tension/stress. I hope she's normally a bit more clued-in than this. If not...maybe she's just used to being able to punch her way through problems? Maybe she shouldn't have been Hokage after all.
"I'd wondered the same," Orochimaru said, stepping up beside Hazō. "You did demonstrate his clone and his summons to me. His summons, at least, would be appreciated."
tfw you don't have any useful Summons.
"He opted to go to ground," Hazō said. "He knew he wouldn't be useful in the upcoming fight."

"False," Orochimaru said. "Extra bodies, well positioned, deplete enemy resources. Even masses of chūnin-level summons are useful, given that Tsunade and I will not be running as many shadow clones as theoretically possible due to limitations posed by Itachi's potential presence."
tfw you can only make one SC
"Has Kagome gone to forewarn Akatsuki?" Orochimaru asked, facing Hazō fully. For the first time in… quite a while, Hazō felt the weight of Orochimaru's presence.
Nice of Snuncle not to fully whammy us and nice to realize it's been a minute since he's even tried.
"That's not enough," Tsunade said, drawing the words out slightly. "Leaf's not going to just lose a summoner. Where is he?"

"I don't know," Hazō said, glancing down. "The Seventh Path, maybe. He ran off without telling any of us. Speaking frankly, he was scared by Orochimaru and didn't want to interact with him. No offense."

"You idiot…" Tsunade muttered. She glanced at Orochimaru. "Directed at you. Not Kagome."

Oro shrugged. "It is hardly my fault if the man is so fully lacking in willpower that he cannot fight for his family's lives."

Tsunade shook her head in faint disgust, then turned to Hazō. "You need to find a way to get him back once this is over."

Hazō nodded. He hoped he would too.
Yeah, he's gonna be back. Like, he knows all the associated risks, and it's just...he's only so crazy. We're his family, even if he doesn't think we're his family any more.
"I have spoken with the Lightning Runner pack about the importance of your mission," Cannai said, voice carrying despite the wind rushing by Hazō as he clung to Cannai's back. "Including that I myself am willing to be summoned to aid you. They appeared highly sympathetic. I have little doubt that you will convince them to fight against Kakashi's killers. Whether you want their service is a separate question."

"Got it," Hazō said. "I still have one question though: why don't they have the same names as the rest of Dog, starting with 'Can-'?"

"Those names were bestowed to them by their summoner," Cannai said. "Of course they were named members of the Dog Clan at birth, but though they respect their birth mothers and packs, as I said, their loyalty was to Kakashi first and foremost. It is hard to express the extent of their relationship, but it was incredibly deep."
Huh. This is an interesting way to handle the conflict with canon, and...I'd like to see some of the stories where they got their names, I think.
They arrived at a small valley between a pair of hills, in a camp that clearly imitated human norms. A variety of dogs large and small lounged around a burnt-out fire pit. A few heads popped up towards Hazō and Cannai, but they mostly just watched as the pair approached.

One dog, a tiny brown pug, arose once Cannai's feet were padding through the soft grass near the fire pit. "Alpha," he said in a rumbling tone. "This is Hazō?"

"Yes, Pakkun," Cannai said as he shrugged Hazō off of his back. "He wants the aid of the Lightning Runner pack. I will leave you to discuss."

"Hello, Pakkun," Hazō said. The dog had a forehead protector marked with Leaf's symbol around his head, and glancing around, Hazō saw that many of the dogs in this pack were wearing Leaf's symbol in a variety of ways. On a whim, Hazō decided to bow. If these dogs had been so extensively socialized by a human, maybe treating them in human ways would be better.

Pakkun bowed back, bending back into his hind legs like he was stretching. Around, the remaining dogs of the Lightning Runners rose. Hazō recognized them from Cannai's descriptions. Guruko, Akino, Bisuke, Urushi, and Bull. Two were missing, then? Ūhei and Shiba.
I get the impression forehead protectors are pretty tightly-controlled resources. You can't just grab one. Kakashi would have only been a Summoner under Hiruzen, maybe Minato, so they'd have probably let him grab a couple, but this is a Big Deal. Cool thing to bring in.
"The 'gateway' doesn't matter one way or another," Pakkun said. "You'll summon me to hunt down the bastards that killed Kakashi? That's all I needed to hear. If you're fighting Akatsuki, I'm in."
Baller. This is what we're here for,
"You mean that if we win, we can get Kakashi back as our summoner!?" Guruko asked excitedly.

Ah… Actually, Hazō had no intention of surrendering the Dog Scroll. As he was debating how to delicately explain this, Akino whipped his tail back and forth, then a sudden whump of force shoved Urushi's head into the ground.

"Don't get ahead of yourself," Akino said. "Remember that the Alpha couldn't even say whether the 'gateway' was even possible."
Yeah, uh...probably not, and not just because of metaphysics or whatever. Possession is nine-tenths of the law and 'we brought your ass back' is the other fraction.
"He also said that you won his trust," Bisuke, a light-brown mutt, said. "The Alpha trusts him, and is willing to be summoned for the fight. I'm in as well."

"It seems prudent to ease the Alpha's work," Akino said. "I will accept a contract to be summoned to fight Akatsuki."

"Count me in," Urushi said. "Dibs on Sasori!"

"Me too," Guruko said. "Anything to get Kakashi back."
It's a real pity that I don't know these guys are going to be much use. Hopefully at least one of them gets to see some action and feels like they avenged Kakashi. I don't know that I personally want them as Summons, if only because we'd be compared to Kakashi and come up wanting forevermore, but they seem like they need this.
Akino seemed ready for another whumping when the last dog, Bull, spoke in a booming voice that somehow failed to reach the same rumble as Pakkun. "I too would like to be summoned, Hazō. However, I don't think you should waste the chakra on me. Kakashi rarely summoned me, as he usually found that he could perform my role better than I could."

"You probably wouldn't be good for much anyway, Bull," Urushi said. "Kakashi didn't summon you half as much as he did me."

"And he didn't summon you half as much as he did me," Pakkun said. "That doesn't mean you're shit at your job, Urushi. The fact that you're shit at your job means that you're shit at your job. Don't bully Bull."

"What is your role, Bull?" Hazou asked. "I'm not Captain Hatake, and I'm good at different things than he was."

"'Nova-combat', is what Kakashi called it," Bull said. "I cannot fight for long or against many enemies effectively, but I can crush a single enemy into the dirt. Unfortunately, Kakashi was similarly capable, and apparently I was 'too fat' for him to want to summon me often."

"That sounds like exactly what I'm looking for," Hazou said. "A high chakra cost isn't an issue for me – I'll explain why later. Relatedly, what are the rest of your specialties?"
'Too fat'? Bruh. Bruh. Bruh. He obviously has a complex about it. Not cool, Kakashi. Not cool. Maybe we can make friends with Bull.
"Rescue ninjutsu," Guruko said. "If you need to protect weaker allies, I have you covered!"

"And I'm an all-rounder," Urushi said. "I can track better than Akino and keep a lookout better than Pakkun. My ninjutsu are more for handling loads of chūnin, which is part of why Kakashi summoned me so often, since you have so many more chūnin than jōnin. I guess against jōnin, he'd rather have Ūhei or Bull. Or just fight them himself. Not like he couldn't."
Both of those sound like they'll be pretty useful. If we can save even one Sannin clone from getting whammied, that's very worthwhile, and we need some way of dealing with the...Rain nin, Jashin cultists, whoever's showing up as cannon fodder.
As a final countermeasure, Hazō activated an Air-Leadener rune. Tsunade, Orochimaru, and Mari all had Wind ninjutsu, so their clones would be able to move unimpeded through the now-thick air that surrounded them, while most of the Moon ninja would be slowed.
Okay seriously: where's Kurenai? 'Hazo deployed some really busted seal array' is a pretty reasonable excuse. 'Shut the fuck up and don't ask any questions' is an appropriate command. Maybe she just wouldn't be that useful because genjutsu is one-on-one, but...I feel like she probably would have helped? Maybe less than her chakra would have helped a Sannin make a bunch of clones.

On a related note, why isn't Mari locking crowds down? Is that a known capability of hers? I figured that basically no one knew she could do that.
Scattered clouds overhead revealed glimpses of the uncaring stars above, and the moon had waned into a silver crescent whose light was barely enough for Hazō to watch as Hidden Moon similarly grew closer to its end. He adjusted his telescope to track a flash of light. A Fire ninjutsu of some sort, expanding until it met an invisible barrier – not a wall, but the curvature of a massive sphere. A moment later, in the same spot, a spear of lightning lanced outwards, impacted the wall of Hazō's Runic Force Dome, and splashed outwards instead of penetrating through.

A jōnin? Or a group of ninja, trying to work in concert to penetrate the Force Dome? With the dark overhead, he couldn't tell.
It's nice to see our gear field-tested, even if it's a little horrifying. It's very cool to see that it just isn't going anywhere despite presumably-desperate attempts. Maybe these are chuunin as opposed to jonin, who I assume are honourably standing their ground and providing us with their delicious delicious chakra, but, still.

...I kinda hope someone ran into the Force Dome and then realized there was something in their way.
Many Moon ninja would die tonight. Once the battle at O'Uzu was over, he didn't know what would happen to the Moon ninja they took as chakra batteries. They would have seen too much to let go immediately, and he didn't know if he could arrange for them to be kept alive for the month or so needed to get the rift to Leaf and hole up for the indefinite future.

Hazō didn't regret that. The ninja of Moon were as innocent as the ninja of Neck had been, but they were still ninja. They lived off the backs of civilian exploitation. At least, he told himself that. What would it mean if Moon's ninja had happened to treat civilians better than Leaf's? He didn't want to know.
Yeah, this is...a lot of moral weight. No one's ordering us to do this. If we hadn't brought it up, they'd probably still be alive. This is worse than Akane burning that village. Better than Isan, but not by much.

I hope it's worth it.
He felt worse for the civilians of the village. They would be running or hiding as a battle they could not understand unfolded around them. Some would die in fires or collapsing buildings, or for just standing in the wrong place at the wrong time when an ally or an enemy unloaded a ninjutsu. Still, battles were violent. He couldn't do anything about that. At least Tsunade had managed to spare the majority from Orochimaru's casual condemnation.

In the end, the attack was only possible because of Hazō. He repositioned his telescope again to watch as a sword glowing pale blue struck the Force Dome again and again to no avail. If Hidan had attacked the village, some ninja might have fought and died, but those that split into the wilderness in every direction would likely have survived. Hidan didn't seem like the type to track down and personally murder every last Moon ninja when he could instead scythe his way through crowds of civilians.
Yeah. This is...yeah. We have done what every vaguely-rational protagonist does: ranked our values and sacrificed one in service of another. It's inevitable, but it never feels good.
Hazō could exterminate them far more effectively than Hidan if he wanted to. Against Hazō, they couldn't even run.

As he watched his creation get tested and rise to the challenge again and again, Hazō wondered: would these be the last innocents he needed to trample in his quest for victory?
I really, really hope so. I really hope so.

If we grab the Rift, it should be the last time we need to wage a war of aggression. We'll need to defend ourselves, but that has a different flavour. We pull Jiraiya and whoever else out, and we can maintain peace through intimidation at first, and then - hopefully - good public policy.
A trio of clones, a Mari and two Orochimarus, rose to the skytower complex with the last of the captured Moon ninja. Their charges were set down, and the Orochimarus immediately set to work severing the Moon ninja's Achilles tendons, while Mari's clone headed back down. Nominally, she intended to work illusions on the civilians to further obfuscate their identities, but she'd discreetly informed Hazō that she'd be helping Moon's civilians fight fires and get out of danger where she could. Tsunade would probably have been on the ground treating them if that wouldn't have given her identity away.
Thank fuck. This will probably further muddy the waters, too. Who shows up, sucker-punches every ninja, and then saves civilians?

Pain. That's who. Can we spend an FP to declare that Mari's implanted memories are Pain-themed? I want to do that. Is it too late? It would have been a good idea.
Elsewhere on the skytower complex, Tsunade was doing something to the captured ninja's elbows that would keep them from casting ninjutsu, while Noburi was steadily draining them dry. Leaf's ninja had given their chakra so the attack could happen, and they needed refueling immediately. Everyone's help would be needed if they wanted to transport Moon's ninja to the island just south of O'Uzu before nightfall. With luck, they would be attacking in two days' time.

As the sky slowly lightened, heralding the distant sun, Hazō surveyed the fruits of their labors. Forty-seven captured ninja. Nineteen more, killed in the fighting – apparently mostly by friendly fire and "general battle chaos". Tsunade expected that it wouldn't even double their overall available chakra, since Moon had more junior ninja, while Leaf's deployment was almost entirely senior ninja.
So, is this...a good result, a bad result, middle of the road? I have no real context.
It was going to be close. Naruto had worked up fake missions for the task force, and staggered their departures as much as possible given the tight schedule, but that didn't mean the deception would work. They didn't even know if Akatsuki had realized yet that so many ninja had left the village at the same time. There had been no word from Leaf either way; for all they knew, they would be walking into a trap at O'Uzu.

Still, the sun would rise soon. Hazō needed to help figure out how to move four dozen incapacitated ninja nearly two hundred miles. He needed to buckle down and get to work.
So, two days? Honestly I think we just tie them up and keep them down. They're going to figure out they got hit with a Wakahisa pretty quickly if they're allowed to maintain consciousness. Drugs, jutsu, draining, whatever. Keep them down and carry them like sacks of potatoes.
Outside of the Lightning Runners, the few jōnin-level dogs that Hazō talked to had immediate objectives in the Leopard war they were angling for, and didn't want to risk injury or death for someone they had just met. Unfortunately, Hazō earned no additional summons outside those recruited in-chapter.
RIP. Hopefully not a decisive factor.
The amount of earth a Runic Force Dome's chakra pillar can pierce is inconsistent. It seems to depend on the soil quality, as it mostly penetrates through the loose earth that could ordinarily be traversed by Hiding Like a Mole. A couple meters seems to be a relatively safe distance, though if the soil were unusually loose (e.g. in a desert), it could be higher.
That checks out - it generates some amount of force and stalls after that. It's nice to know that we can get a few meters: that isn't going to defeat a sensor-type, but it's something.
While traveling, Kei has bargained with Pantsā for contracts with additional elite combat summons, offering herself for an additional deployment in Pangolin's wars once the Riftwar has concluded. This has cleared her Leadership stagnancy, but may put her into a deployment in Leopard, fighting against Dogs. She is not happy about this, but accepts that if Hazō is getting biosealed, she too must make sacrifices to take down Akatsuki.
Yeah, again a big RIP, and hopefully we can mostly avoid this by kicking a bunch of Leopard ass and ending the war.
Noburi has similarly secured contracts with two of Jiraiya's old combat summons: Gamahiro and Gamaken (Gamazō declined, unfortunately). Like the Lightning Runners (and the Toad Sages, and Gamabunta), they're mainly willing to be summoned in order to fight Akatsuki.
Presumably they're pretty big badasses, but they're not currently on his sheet. Is this intentional?

Regardless: we ball, and we ball hard.
For the sake of your planning, between Leaf's chakra battalion and the captured Moon ninja, you will have 22000 CP available to allocate for your attack. Leaf's ninja currently intend to be at low-but-nonzero reserves in order to facilitate running away if things go south. Moon's ninja will all be drained to zero. This number includes chakra from your team, but does not count Orochimaru Prime, Tsunade Prime, or Kurenai Prime's reserves. All three intend to remain at full chakra going into the battle.
That...seems like a lot. @Sir Stompy can you link your post doing the math? I want to see how well we did, over all.
 
Can I ask who the players are in this case?
Probably the guys who coordinate on discord. Us forum plebs aren't real gamers players, we don't count.

(This is a lighthearted joke not an indication of bitterly hurt feelings of exclusion. Yes, really.)

We definitely want to hear your thoughts as well! I just created a group PM with you guys where you can check it out. If any other people on the forum want to be added, please let me know with a ping so I can add you as well.
 
Hopefully that all makes sense and wasn't too much. We'd appreciate feedback on what you think of the above, what issues y'all have with the quest in general, and suggestions for how to fix them.
This is a topic that got covered in the letter that we composed, but I think it might be worthwhile to zoom in on it for its own post.

A few weeks ago, I coined a couple terms in the player-only thread: "high-res" and "low-res", as applied to MfD simulationism. Put plainly, high-res is everything that we see on-screen, everything covered by the narrative and explicitly fact-checked by the QMs, while low-res is everything else, the background events and facts of the setting, that may one day enter the realm of high-res themselves.

The reason for the distinction is, of course, that high-res simulation is costly and only so many things can be subjected to it, while low-res simulation works fine for everything else. This leads to, say, a foreign essie having the broad strokes of their build specced out, but not directly written as a FtD charsheet until they need to actually get into an onscreen fight.

But the reason this is a topic of contention is that, inherently, high-res simulation and low-res simulation work differently. To be a little poetic, low-res is the world as it ought to be, the greater vision of Marked for Death in your head, while high-res is the world as it needs to be, the cold iron chains of the simulation. Framed that way, it maybe makes some sense when I say that it feels like high-res simulation is more restrictive than low-res simulation.

This is not, to be clear, an accusation that the players are receiving unfair treatment. Interestingly, it is a perfectly undirected trend that only coincidentally disadvantages the players. It just so happens, after all, that we're the ones on-screen most of the time. So Hazou, Team Uplift, and even the rest of Leaf spend far more time under high-res simulation than the rest of the Elemental Nations, in decreasing order of severity.

But backing up, what do I really mean by "the difference between high-res and low-res"? Is there really a difference? Keeping the disparate parts of the setting coherent is of course a major QM simulationism goal, after all. I'll try and go over some things the players have observed that seem to suggest there exists a meaningful difference.

The first one, and one that seems to stick out the most to various players, is the apparent results of exploration and adventuring. Our sample size is limited, of course, we have not done much adventuring in the grand scheme of things, but the sales pitch has been pretty impressive so far: it is said that the Sannin got as strong as they did by going on such adventures, and that Itachi found his deep lore of the world through similar means. It makes sense, from the low-res simulation, that such things might happen. But high-res might disagree. Consider the chakra water cave we went to: I do not dispute the material powerup it represented (I honestly think it's pretty good), but on the lore side of things we mostly just found a single carving that might, unbeknownst to Hazou, be related to the Otsutsuki. And that's reasonable, high-res says. What did we expect, a lockbox of hidden scrolls in the depths of the cave? Why would that be there? Why would it have lasted centuries, why wouldn't anyone else have looted it by now? It makes total sense that only a wall carving would survive all this long, so that's all we get. That's just the one cave, of course, but shouldn't the same reason apply to the next hidden cave we find too? If there are supposed to be secret scrolls lying around, where could they still exist at this point? If there aren't, where did Itachi get his secrets from?

From our perspective, it feels like a strange game of whack-a-mole. Each adventure spot carries the implicit promise of potential for lore, but those expectations come from the low-res simulation, which says that such things are the way lore is obtained. Each box we open, each mole we whack, yields a high-res result saying "when you think about it, there obviously wouldn't be any secret scrolls here".

And again, this is extrapolation from limited evidence. Maybe the chakra water cave was just on the low end of things, maybe we just need to do more adventures. (Crimson State Island honestly sounds like a much more tempting possibility, one that even high-res might be lenient about) Maybe there were secrets hidden at the bottom of the Honey Cave, just waiting for us to get past the vine golems and whatever deeper threats lay behind them. Or maybe, we'd go there and high-res would say "what did you expect?". There's clearly lore out there, there must be for all these worldly essies to have unearthed it, for them to advise us to do the same (as if to say that they believe they have not depleted the last remaining caches), but if the high-res simulation objects to random lore scrolls lying around in adventure spots then no matter where we look for this vaunted lore we simply won't find it. It'll always be "somewhere else".

Another angle is the contentious topic of character competence. While I will be the first to admit that Ami is a showwoman who specializes in making her works seem effortless, the fact that she's rarely on-screen seems to correlate with the way she seems much more effective at being a social-spec than Mari. Low-res simulation says that it's reasonable for Ami to build up these favour networks like the AMI and KEI, to stay on top of them, balancing all sorts of politics and personalities, to coup a Kage and negotiate directly with the Akatsuki so as to create world peace. I'd even agree! Social-specs are meant to be awesome at this kind of thing, and Ami is herself awesome, so her list of achievements makes a lot of sense. And Mari too, behind the screen, is said to deftly manage the Goketsu politics and run circles around her various foes, a less glamorous but still undoubtedly herculean task. Even Kei, who is known to be a fine leader for the KEI, mostly does so off-screen.

Ami can think circles around her foes. Mari can do the same. Figuring out people, predicting their behaviour, and plotting out the best way to manipulate them, they can do this stuff in their sleep. Ami in particular seems to thrive on doing this in real-time, dancing on the razor's edge and following an ever-evolving model as she speaks. But when we sit down for a meeting (as, alas, meetings are the most efficient way to communicate necessary information to the players), that edge feels absent. The most distinct example in recent memory being Mari's expressed inability to model Orochimaru. Even accounting for the fact that Orochimaru is a famously unusual individual, even accounting for Mari's personal struggles, it feels odd that she struggles so much. If it's not too self-aggrandizing to say, we-the-players feel like we have a pretty good read on him, barring pretty absurd "one level higher than you" ultra-deceptions. If there exists enough information for us to reach a model like this, shouldn't the extremely competent Mari be able to achieve something similar, if not greater? Would Ami be able to do better? She negotiated directly with him before, after all, off-screen in the realm of low-res. Or, if we had Ami missing with us and in these same meetings, would she be there with Mari warning us that she can't even begin to predict how he'd behave?

Just one example, of course, and a very anomalous one, but it's the kind of concern that weighs on our minds. Are our allies being sabotaged, being prevented from living up to their full potential, by living under the harsh spotlight of high-res simulation and its increased scrutiny? Are we being held back by the chains of the world as it must be, rather than flourishing in the world as it should be? It's uncomfortable to think about, especially as we consider that it's hard to claim "we are being unfairly disadvantaged" without seeming like, if I may be frank, salty entitled powergamers. Even now, writing this, I sort of flinch as I create a framing that says "Mari should be able to outmaneuver Orochimaru" because, like, the alternate IV who only pretends to care about simulation coherency and actually just wants to maximize player power might say the same thing. But this is what weighs on my mind, my true worry about how the parts of this setting fit together as we play it.

Minato can create a whole new sealing style from scratch, fueled by sheer genius and inspiration. Hazou invented a new sealing style by closely studying the Sage's creation until we learned its secrets. Any would say that our accomplishment is still impressive, but I'm left wondering if Minato's accomplishment could have ever been replicated in high-res. If, in an alternate reality where we never heard of Minatosealing - let alone obtained his notes - but still had the same crucial insights about TH and chakra threads, and also leveled our stats to the same level as he did, would it have been an option for us? Or would it have just been a closed door, because high-res simulation says that there's no way to do that kind of research without instagibbing yourself? We look around at the various essies of the world and their many assorted S-rank tricks, sharing little to no overlap with each other. Some of them inherited their powers, others invented it themselves, but the picture painted is that virtually everyone carves their own path to S-rank, that if you're good at TH it's simply possible to make a paper jutsu like Konan's, or a whatever-the-heck-it-was jutsu like Kakuzu's. And yeah, these are the peaks of the setting and Hazou has no special TH advantages, it's not like we're purusing a path where we'd even put that question to the test. But I'm left to wonder, if we did have TH that high, if we did get to the point where we approached that door, would it be closed or open? Would high-res agree with low-res, would there be a way for us to carve our own path to S-rank, or would we be locked out in the game of whack-a-mole, promised that the loot must exist somewhere, if only we go find it, yet invariably absent each time we look?

And again, even now this feels bad to say, because not even in the worst case of these fears have you ever made an unfair decision. High-res is the world as it must be, and that's simply true. It's also the part of the world that you put the most effort into, making sure all the fiddly little details line up and don't blow up in your face hundreds of chapters later. Making sure the potrait that is Marked for Death withstands even the intense scrutiny of dozens of players with years of experience playing this game. And what am I to recommend in response? Butcher the low-res simulation until it better lines up with the high-res one? The low-res simulation is the world as it should be, it's the cool ideas and the plot twists, the sparkling promise of adventure and glory. Am I to say that such things should be torn down if they can't keep up with the high-res scrutiny? It's not an easy question, even if everything I've said is on-point.

And I must also acknowledge that we have made it remarkably far ourselves. Even just now, Orochimaru himself praised our capabilities. The lack of hax-overlap between essies suggests in its own way that Hazou's already obtained the only essie hax he can ever expect to get his hands on, that these sorts of things aren't easy for even essies themselves to get, that Itachi couldn't just snowball his way into reinventing Konan and Kakuzu's signature jutsu once he knew they could be achieved. It feels audacious to stand there and say that we're still being held back, that we still deserve more, and that's not the angle I'm trying to approach this from. As a player it behooves me to ask what the optimal plan of action is, to accurately model both what we have and what we stand to gain. And we know that we should be running around doing cool adventure stuff, delving for secret powerups and lore and stuff just like Itachi and the Sannin. But we're starting to hesitate: is our model wrong? Are we just playing that game of whack-a-mole, led around by a sincere promise that what we seek must be out there somewhere, yet never where we look for it? Or, when we look at our allies, our resources, and our talents, is our model wrong? The things they were purported to do, that we heard but not saw, can we rely on them when the spotlight starts shining? Or will we climb all that way only to find a closed door and the cold chains of the world as it must be?

Thus, high-res and low-res. Player ambition and fear of disappointment. Mismatched models and a dire coincidence of earnest efforts. Hard to articulate, hard to speak of without sounding like shameless powergaming or an accusation of malfeasance. A problem measured in patterns and negative space, the dissonance between the titles of the story and the lines within. Ephemeral enough that even now I can't be sure how much is real and how much is hallucination, my own biases tinting my perspective. And yet I still think it's worth saying, not to seek more power or to point a finger and assign blame, but because if it's true then we're not on the same page even when we're all being honest, and no matter what direction that goes it'd be nice to have more accurate models.
 
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There's still discussion on our side about how exactly we'll tweak the answer if and when we decide to do so. Some options we've come up with are "choose a new answer that's relatively close" and "choose a new distribution, re-roll, and if the outcome is still bad then oh well." Input welcome on which of these seems better.
[...] it would be fun to have at least one of the canon dogs fight alongside Hazō and there is no critical reason for the distribution we chose. In this particular case we decided to simply have Bull be the strong jōnin summon that's willing and able to fight

For this matter, specifically, I am leaning more the former ("new answer that's relatively close") than the latter ("reroll with new distribution"). A new answer, designed by a QM, that is closer to the spirit of "intending to retain 'fun' but still similar to the rolled answer" feels like it would provide more consistently positive results than "reroll with new distribution bars."

It also "honors" the original roll by choosing a similar answer, rather than a complete rewrite. This honestly doesn't matter as much, to me, but I can see how it might appeal to a certain mindset.

It was also done to nice effect in this chapter, which makes me hopeful for its future implementation.

Letter is getting posted soon and will have signatures (we're currently at the "alright, this is the letter that emerged from everyone's paragraphs and debates, now who wants to put their username on it" stage).
This is a topic that got covered in the letter that we composed[.]

It should be posted in ~6 hours, give or take some time. To my understanding, the letter is more or less in its final form, and the delay is just to give people time to submit their final thoughts.
 
In the past months, he's devised seal arrays that make the skywalker look like a children's toy. Just like the skywalker, he intends to use this invention to bring down Akatsuki as well

The cover story is 'unspecified seal arrays', got it. Quite sensible.
And I see Naruto is on board with the general plan we suggested.

How could they have not been missing-nin, though? Haruka had never heard of a village falsely declaring their ninja as missing-nin, falsely attempting to hunt them down and retrieve them. Had other villages done this and used their ninja to strike against Leaf in a way that Leaf couldn't retaliate against?

IMO if the Rift hadn't changed the game, false-flag attacks along those lines were one of the two big faultlines that would've made AMITY unviable in the long term anyway (along with villages the ~1 new S-rank nin per major village per decade and occasional Akatsuki death meaning that eventually they won't hold enough power to deter a coalition of several major villages)

Umehisa, a clanless jōnin who had never even had a family name

Umehisa mentioned! (For those who don't recall, he was the first of the clanless jōnin who challenged Ritsuo)
I have a have a perhaps disproportionate fondness for him and Miyajama Ema, considering that they appeared in a single paragraph each, due to the fact that they were going to feature in an omake I was working on a while ago but never finished.

"He was a traitor and I needed a plausible cover," he said. Though Orochimaru was comfortably taller than Tsunade, she seemed to tower over him. "It was coordinated with the Hokage, of course. You may confirm the details with him at your leisure. Though, frankly, I do not see why it matters in the short term. Even if I had killed the boy in cold blood, we would still be collaborating against Akatsuki. Unless you wish to see Jiraiya's legacy tarnished?"

But the question is, who?
I'm hoping for Kabuto. Firstly, we always thought might be a traitor. Secondly, he's too cool with the whole biosealing and vivisection thing. Thirdly, OOC info suggests he's dangerous in general and might try something when it comes to necromancy in particular.

"Absolutely not," Tsunade said. "No, Hazō is right. We should fight as anonymously as we can. Mari will have to hold back on her mass-genjutsu, and you will abstain from using your well-known ninjutsu. Mari can even use her genjutsu to actively misinform the civilians we'll leave behind. With illusions muddying the story, they should only be able to infer that a skywalking strike force kidnapped all their ninja."

Better than I hoped for, honestly; I'm glad Tsunade cares enough to insist on a certain level of mercy.
Perhaps we can come up with some deniable way to help out the civilians after the rift battle, though I wouldn't bet on it. Maybe tip off Mist to take over the place?

Ah… Actually, Hazō had no intention of surrendering the Dog Scroll.
So if we ressurect Kakashi, and then there are two simultaneous living people who have signed the Dog Scroll, does it undergo a Sage-level sealing failure?

"Rescue ninjutsu," Guruko said. "If you need to protect weaker allies, I have you covered!"

'I think in this case we are the weaker allies; good to have you with us.'

"Perhaps you are about to say something rude to the boy about how he should know his place. You are absolutely correct that he is far too arrogant. Nonetheless, you need to realize that he also has every right to stand here with the two of us. I briefly observed him creating certain runes near my laboratory, and I can assure you that the specs he provided you are accurate. He may be barely a chūnin in other regards, but these S-rank capabilities are worthy of your respect."

"Ōshimo Final Technique: Hoarfrost's Embrace!"
Final techniques are a bit of an oddity; one has to wonder why people invent and level them. My guess would be that most of them are take-the-limits-off variants of normal non-final techiques, but it doesn't fit easily into normal ninjutsu design in this system.
...it'd be funny if after we get rift retrivals streamlined enough re-useable final techniques became somebody's speciality.
 
This is a topic that got covered in the letter that we composed, but I think it might be worthwhile to zoom in on it for its own post.

A few weeks ago, I coined a couple terms in the player-only thread: "high-res" and "low-res", as applied to MfD simulationism. Put plainly, high-res is everything that we see on-screen, everything covered by the narrative and explicitly fact-checked by the QMs, while low-res is everything else, the background events and facts of the setting, that may one day enter the realm of high-res themselves.

The reason for the distinction is, of course, that high-res simulation is costly and only so many things can be subjected to it, while low-res simulation works fine for everything else. This leads to, say, a foreign essie having the broad strokes of their build specced out, but not directly written as a FtD charsheet until they need to actually get into an onscreen fight.

But the reason this is a topic of contention is that, inherently, high-res simulation and low-res simulation work differently. To be a little poetic, low-res is the world as it ought to be, the greater vision of Marked for Death in your head, while high-res is the world as it needs to be, the cold iron chains of the simulation. Framed that way, it maybe makes some sense when I say that it feels like high-res simulation is more restrictive than low-res simulation.

This is not, to be clear, an accusation that the players are receiving unfair treatment. Interestingly, it is a perfectly undirected trend that only coincidentally disadvantages the players. It just so happens, after all, that we're the ones on-screen most of the time. So Hazou, Team Uplift, and even the rest of Leaf spend far more time under high-res simulation than the rest of the Elemental Nations, in decreasing order of severity.

But backing up, what do I really mean by "the difference between high-res and low-res"? Is there really a difference? Keeping the disparate parts of the setting coherent is of course a major QM simulationism goal, after all. I'll try and go over some things the players have observed that seem to suggest there exists a meaningful difference.

The first one, and one that seems to stick out the most to various players, is the apparent results of exploration and adventuring. Our sample size is limited, of course, we have not done much adventuring in the grand scheme of things, but the sales pitch has been pretty impressive so far: it is said that the Sannin got as strong as they did by going on such adventures, and that Itachi found his deep lore of the world through similar means. It makes sense, from the low-res simulation, that such things might happen. But high-res might disagree. Consider the chakra water cave we went to: I do not dispute the material powerup it represented (I honestly think it's pretty good), but on the lore side of things we mostly just found a single carving that might, unbeknownst to Hazou, be related to the Otsutsuki. And that's reasonable, high-res says. What did we expect, a lockbox of hidden scrolls in the depths of the cave? Why would that be there? Why would it have lasted centuries, why wouldn't anyone else have looted it by now? It makes total sense that only a wall carving would survive all this long, so that's all we get. That's just the one cave, of course, but shouldn't the same reason apply to the next hidden cave we find too? If there are supposed to be secret scrolls lying around, where could they still exist at this point? If there aren't, where did Itachi get his secrets from?

From our perspective, it feels like a strange game of whack-a-mole. Each adventure spot carries the implicit promise of potential for lore, but those expectations come from the low-res simulation, which says that such things are the way lore is obtained. Each box we open, each mole we whack, yields a high-res result saying "when you think about it, there obviously wouldn't be any secret scrolls here".

And again, this is extrapolation from limited evidence. Maybe the chakra water cave was just on the low end of things, maybe we just need to do more adventures. (Crimson State Island honestly sounds like a much more tempting possibility, one that even high-res might be lenient about) Maybe there were secrets hidden at the bottom of the Honey Cave, just waiting for us to get past the vine golems and whatever deeper threats lay behind them. Or maybe, we'd go there and high-res would say "what did you expect?". There's clearly lore out there, there must be for all these worldly essies to have unearthed it, for them to advise us to do the same (as if to say that they believe they have not depleted the last remaining caches), but if the high-res simulation objects to random lore scrolls lying around in adventure spots then no matter where we look for this vaunted lore we simply won't find it. It'll always be "somewhere else".

Another angle is the contentious topic of character competence. While I will be the first to admit that Ami is a showwoman who specializes in making her works seem effortless, the fact that she's rarely on-screen seems to correlate with the way she seems much more effective at being a social-spec than Mari. Low-res simulation says that it's reasonable for Ami to build up these favour networks like the AMI and KEI, to stay on top of them, balancing all sorts of politics and personalities, to coup a Kage and negotiate directly with the Akatsuki so as to create world peace. I'd even agree! Social-specs are meant to be awesome at this kind of thing, and Ami is herself awesome, so her list of achievements makes a lot of sense. And Mari too, behind the screen, is said to deftly manage the Goketsu politics and run circles around her various foes, a less glamorous but still undoubtedly herculean task. Even Kei, who is known to be a fine leader for the KEI, mostly does so off-screen.

Ami can think circles around her foes. Mari can do the same. Figuring out people, predicting their behaviour, and plotting out the best way to manipulate them, they can do this stuff in their sleep. Ami in particular seems to thrive on doing this in real-time, dancing on the razor's edge and following an ever-evolving model as she speaks. But when we sit down for a meeting (as, alas, meetings are the most efficient way to communicate necessary information to the players), that edge feels absent. The most distinct example in recent memory being Mari's expressed inability to model Orochimaru. Even accounting for the fact that Orochimaru is a famously unusual individual, even accounting for Mari's personal struggles, it feels odd that she struggles so much. If it's not too self-aggrandizing to say, we-the-players feel like we have a pretty good read on him, barring pretty absurd "one level higher than you" ultra-deceptions. If there exists enough information for us to reach a model like this, shouldn't the extremely competent Mari be able to achieve something similar, if not greater? Would Ami be able to do better? She negotiated directly with him before, after all, off-screen in the realm of low-res. Or, if we had Ami missing with us and in these same meetings, would she be there with Mari warning us that she can't even begin to predict how he'd behave?

Just one example, of course, and a very anomalous one, but it's the kind of concern that weighs on our minds. Are our allies being sabotaged, being prevented from living up to their full potential, by living under the harsh spotlight of high-res simulation and its increased scrutiny? Are we being held back by the chains of the world as it must be, rather than flourishing in the world as it should be? It's uncomfortable to think about, especially as we consider that it's hard to claim "we are being unfairly disadvantaged" without seeming like, if I may be frank, salty entitled powergamers. Even now, writing this, I sort of flinch as I create a framing that says "Mari should be able to outmaneuver Orochimaru" because, like, the alternate IV who only pretends to care about simulation coherency and actually just wants to maximize player power might say the same thing. But this is what weighs on my mind, my true worry about how the parts of this setting fit together as we play it.

Minato can create a whole new sealing style from scratch, fueled by sheer genius and inspiration. Hazou invented a new sealing style by closely studying the Sage's creation until we learned its secrets. Any would say that our accomplishment is still impressive, but I'm left wondering if Minato's accomplishment could have ever been replicated in high-res. If, in an alternate reality where we never heard of Minatosealing - let alone obtained his notes - but still had the same crucial insights about TH and chakra threads, and also leveled our stats to the same level as he did, would it have been an option for us? Or would it have just been a closed door, because high-res simulation says that there's no way to do that kind of research without instagibbing yourself? We look around at the various essies of the world and their many assorted S-rank tricks, sharing little to no overlap with each other. Some of them inherited their powers, others invented it themselves, but the picture painted is that virtually everyone carves their own path to S-rank, that if you're good at TH it's simply possible to make a paper jutsu like Konan's, or a whatever-the-heck-it-was jutsu like Kakuzu's. And yeah, these are the peaks of the setting and Hazou has no special TH advantages, it's not like we're purusing a path where we'd even put that question to the test. But I'm left to wonder, if we did have TH that high, if we did get to the point where we approached that door, would it be closed or open? Would high-res agree with low-res, would there be a way for us to carve our own path to S-rank, or would we be locked out in the game of whack-a-mole, promised that the loot must exist somewhere, if only we go find it, yet invariably absent each time we look?

And again, even now this feels bad to say, because even in the worst case of these fears have you ever made an unfair decision. High-res is the world as it must be, and that's simply true. It's also the part of the world that you put the most effort into, making sure all the fiddly little details line up and don't blow up in your face hundreds of chapters later. Making sure the potrait that is Marked for Death withstands even the intense scrutiny of dozens of players with years of experience playing this game. And what am I to recommend in response? Butcher the low-res simulation until it better lines up with the high-res one? The low-res simulation is the world as it should be, it's the cool ideas and the plot twists, the sparkling promise of adventure and glory. Am I to say that such things should be torn down if they can't keep up with the high-res scrutiny? It's not an easy question, even if everything I've said is on-point.

And I must also acknowledge that we have made it remarkably far ourselves. Even just now, Orochimaru himself praised our capabilities. The lack of hax-overlap between essies suggests in its own way that Hazou's already obtained the only essie hax he can ever expect to get his hands on, that these sorts of things aren't easy for even essies themselves to get, that Itachi couldn't just snowball his way into reinventing Konan and Kakuzu's signature jutsu once he knew they could be achieved. It feels audacious to stand there and say that we're still being held back, that we still deserve more, and that's not the angle I'm trying to approach this from. As a player it behooves me to ask what the optimal plan of action is, to accurately model both what we have and what we stand to gain. And we know that we should be running around doing cool adventure stuff, delving for secret powerups and lore and stuff just like Itachi and the Sannin. But we're starting to hesitate: is our model wrong? Are we just playing that game of whack-a-mole, led around by a sincere promise that what we seek must be out there somewhere, yet never where we look for it? Or, when we look at our allies, our resources, and our talents, is our model wrong? The things they were purported to do, that we heard but not saw, can we rely on them when the spotlight starts shining? Or will we climb all that way only to find a closed door and the cold chains of the world as it must be?

Thus, high-res and low-res. Player ambition and fear of disappointment. Mismatched models and a dire coincidence of earnest efforts. Hard to articulate, hard to speak of without sounding like shameless powergaming or an accusation of malfeasance. A problem measured in patterns and negative space, the dissonance between the titles of the story and the lines within. Ephemeral enough that even now I can't be sure how much is real and how much is hallucination, my own biases tinting my perspective. And yet I still think it's worth saying, not to seek more power or to point a finger and assign blame, but because if it's true then we're not on the same page even when we're all being honest, and no matter what direction that goes it'd be nice to have more accurate models.
Without contradicting your points, which are interesting and noteworthy, I should mention that the high-res/low-res division also advantages the players in a variety of contexts. The other Leaf clans, for example, are at a massive competitive disadvantage because they are usually stuck in low-res mode, and don't all get to develop and react to their circumstances over time in the same way that the Gōketsu do. Likewise, we can barely keep up with designing new runes and ninjutsu as the Gōketsu obtain them. Other ninja tend to be out of luck unless we have a concrete reason to work on their character sheets, even if high-res would give them some significant advantage (e.g. other sealmasters having a chance to invent powerful original seals in the background because they're conducting research on a daily basis, or somebody else discovering Earthshaping or an equally impactful counterpart).
 
...it'd be funny if after we get rift retrivals streamlined enough re-useable final techniques became somebody's speciality.
History records jōnin of every possible specialisation and none, including sealmaster jōnin (Namikaze Minato), summoning jōnin (Hanzō of the Salamander), seduction jōnin (Ayame the Thrice-Lecherous, one of history's greatest disguise kit users), puppet jōnin (Sasori of the Red Sands), and logistics jōnin (Mori Ryūgamine).
 
Without contradicting your points, which are interesting and noteworthy, I should mention that the high-res/low-res division also advantages the players in a variety of contexts. The other Leaf clans, for example, are at a massive competitive disadvantage because they are usually stuck in low-res mode, and don't all get to develop and react to their circumstances over time in the same way that the Gōketsu do. Likewise, we can barely keep up with designing new runes and ninjutsu as the Gōketsu obtain them. Other ninja tend to be out of luck unless we have a concrete reason to work on their character sheets, even if high-res would give them some significant advantage (e.g. other sealmasters having a chance to invent powerful original seals in the background because they're conducting research on a daily basis, or somebody else discovering Earthshaping or an equally impactful counterpart).
Yeah, and we've definitely been doing our best to make the most of our opportunities. Ultimately the core problem with high-res/low-res dissonance isn't the end-state it puts us at, the ledger sheet of advantage and disadvantage, and more the ambiguity it introduces into our models of the world. We're doing our best to understand this world and make the best choices within it, as is the purpose of this quest, and if there are persistent mismatches between how we think things work and how things actually work then even when we do win it gets harder for our victories to feel satisfying.
 
I mean. Orochimaru was already repatriated and his crimes were already basically discharged, and we didn't have this issue.
Orochimaru may have been repatriated, but there was no story that he wasn't a missing-nin all along. He got a blanket pardon from Jiraiya after Jiraiya was too dead to face the political consequences, and right after Hiashi confirmed that pardon, Hiashi also ended up too dead to face the political consequences. The Collapse also gave Orochimaru a fair bit of cover.

Runic arrays? Is she just confused?
Yes, that was the intention.

This...the math isn't mathing, for me. What's described here isn't a month of time, which means that Hazo is going to need to be sitting back at Leaf, ready to deploy defenses. In the meantime, we're doing what? Anxiously awaiting Orochimaru returning with the Rift? That, uh. We trust him with that? I have a weird feeling that if we leave him alone with that thing, we aren't going to see him again. Is there a plan for that, or...?
Why wouldn't you trust him to take the Rift to Leaf? Surely you're not accusing Orochimaru of being anything less than a perfectly loyal Leaf ninja?

So we've gone from 'Hazo should shut up, why is he here, proposing mercy' to 'Hazo is right, you need to shut the hell up, Orochimaru'.
Orochimaru's "kill all the civilians" option helped price-anchor Tsunade to accept the nicer path. See, Orochimaru really does look out for the civvies! (Alternately, Tsunade isn't planning on letting the captured ninja go free at the end).

I get the impression forehead protectors are pretty tightly-controlled resources. You can't just grab one. Kakashi would have only been a Summoner under Hiruzen, maybe Minato, so they'd have probably let him grab a couple, but this is a Big Deal. Cool thing to bring in.
You don't think Kakashi was the kind of person to pull a heist for his canine companions?

Okay seriously: where's Kurenai?
What does she bring to the table that Mari does not?

On a related note, why isn't Mari locking crowds down? Is that a known capability of hers? I figured that basically no one knew she could do that.
Tsunade's being conservative, because she doesn't think that it'll be necessary to overpower Moon.

...I kinda hope someone ran into the Force Dome and then realized there was something in their way.
Almost certainly! But they wouldn't be nicely lit up they way jutsu are.

Who shows up, sucker-punches every ninja, and then saves civilians?
My intention was that Mari was doing it discreetly, not actively pulling civilians out of burning buildings. That would probably put the Gouketsu on people's radar, once the story spread to the EN.

The cover story is 'unspecified seal arrays', got it. Quite sensible.
Naruto saying "Hazou's just below Minato, the guy that disappeared Tailed Beasts and teleported across countries" does kind of leave open a lot of options for what's possible.

IMO if the Rift hadn't changed the game, false-flag attacks along those lines were one of the two big faultlines that would've made AMITY unviable in the long term anyway (along with villages the ~1 new S-rank nin per major village per decade and occasional Akatsuki death meaning that eventually they won't hold enough power to deter a coalition of several major villages)
Well, AMITY doesn't need to stand up to decades, it just needs to hold long enough that Pain can come back and use it as a basis to usher in a new era of world peace!

- Konan

So if we ressurect Kakashi, and then there are two simultaneous living people who have signed the Dog Scroll, does it undergo a Sage-level sealing failure?
Would the Sage really build such a failure-prone system?

Final techniques are a bit of an oddity; one has to wonder why people invent and level them. My guess would be that most of them are take-the-limits-off variants of normal non-final techiques, but it doesn't fit easily into normal ninjutsu design in this system.
Unfortunately, the process of practicing suicide techniques has claimed many a ninja life.


Very enjoyable reaction posts, both of you. Please take +1 XP each to a character of your choice (chosen randomly by 1d3 among the PCs if you do not pick within 24 hours) as thanks.
 
Orochimaru may have been repatriated, but there was no story that he wasn't a missing-nin all along. He got a blanket pardon from Jiraiya after Jiraiya was too dead to face the political consequences, and right after Hiashi confirmed that pardon, Hiashi also ended up too dead to face the political consequences. The Collapse also gave Orochimaru a fair bit of cover.
So what you're saying is that Orochimaru did the Collapse. Huh.
 
Vote time! What to do now?

Noburi will already inflict some Consequences (probably mostly Milds) in the process of draining the Moon ninja along the default path. He could go farther and get you a bit more chakra, but there's a risk of causing deaths. He will do it if you order him to.

I'll vote for any plan that has us do this. We need that chakra. And it's not like we can keep them alive after the fight, anyway.
 
"Absolutely not," Tsunade said. "No, Hazō is right. We should fight as anonymously as we can. Mari will have to hold back on her mass-genjutsu, and you will abstain from using your well-known ninjutsu. Mari can even use her genjutsu to actively misinform the civilians we'll leave behind. With illusions muddying the story, they should only be able to infer that a skywalking strike force kidnapped all their ninja."

Orochimaru sighed. "I do not want to compromise our odds against Akatsuki in the slightest. You do see why this is more important than a couple hundred civilians in a meaningless backwater, yes?"

"It's not about what's important, Oro," Tsunade said. "It's about what's right."
I just want to say here that I am so glad that Tsunade vetoed murdering the entirety of Moon. I ... honestly wasn't sure that would be worth it even if it was the only thing we could do to get the extra chakra. There's a thin line between us and Pain, and that would put us on the other side of it, I think.

No, Tsunade, it isn't different except with respect to scale. You did kill - those people are never going to be alive again. The individuals are to their clan what clans are to villages what villages are to shinobi-kind as a whole. The only difference here is scale. You're allowed your own personal line in the sand, but let's not pretend it isn't arbitrary.
It's different if you think of institutions (and families, because that's what clans are) as things which matter intrinsically in themselves, which is a view relatively uncommon in the modern Western world but (as I understand it) widely held historically. Tsunade is thinking "well, people died, but the people were going to die anyway; the institution of the clan lived on". Given that it's common for cultures that hold this view to raise people to value the wellbeing of their family or institution above their own, it makes perfect sense to view wiping out an entire institution as worse than killing the same number of people spread across different institutions; the members of the institutions themselves would agree with that view, insofar as the total damge dealt to instutitions by killings scattered across many is far lighter than the total damage dealt from the complete destruction of one.

The idea that institutions exist only to serve their members is (as I understand it) not the norm, historically. I think it's correct - though of course I would, being raised in a culture that holds that view - but it's important to understand that most of the people of the Elemental Nations probably don't think that way.

Would the Sage really build such a failure-prone system?
... We're all going to die.

Oh well, at least we'll get to find out what the other Paths are like after our mind is translated into our chakra and smeared evenly across the universe to silently scream for all eternity.
 
Very enjoyable reaction posts, both of you. Please take +1 XP each to a character of your choice (chosen randomly by 1d3 among the PCs if you do not pick within 24 hours) as thanks.
Hazo, please and thank you.
What does she bring to the table that Mari does not?
Another genjutsu-capable jonin SC user is another genjutsu-capable jonin SC user. Genjutsu appears to be pretty much perfect for this mission: you lock anyone dangerous down for the half-second it takes a Sannin to crash into them and render them harmless.
Tsunade's being conservative, because she doesn't think that it'll be necessary to overpower Moon.
~29% of available ninja are dead. Sure, some of these were genin, but some of them were high chuunin or jonin. I'm not going to ask you to crunch the numbers on the net chakra gain from having increased our capture effectiveness from 70% to something like 95%, but it seems like it would have been meaningful to me without significantly increasing the degree to which we wound up implicated.

On an entirely different note, the next threadmark will be the thousandth threadmark. Wild.
 
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Or perhaps this one, which is labeled as an Omake.
Omake: Cells

This chapter is being written using modified Dresden Files rules.

Important note: All the mechanics in this chapter were made up on the spot without consulting the other QMs, so this probably isn't exactly how we would do it if we actually moved to Dresden Files. Also, the scenario and characters were not vetted with the other QMs either, so the events of this may or may not have actually played out in canon MfD.

The basic rules will be shown in the story below. Here are the modifications:

  1. High Lethality:
    1. When assigning stress, also fill all boxes below the point.
    2. You may not take Moderate or Serious consequences in order to reduce stress.
    3. Any time someone attacks you, if you survive without taking consequences then you are allowed an immediate counterattack on their initiative. You still get your own actions on your initiative.
  2. After physical combat, everyone on the winning team (conscious or not) gains 1 Fate Point (FP) per person on the losing team, regardless of which or how many opponents they were personally involved in defeating.
  3. After social combat, everyone involved gains 1 FP for each opponent they personally defeated.
Uchiha Sasuke

Dresden Files rules. Power level 'Chest Deep': 8 refresh, 30 skill points, skill max Superb
Assumed: 1 Significant advancement, giving 1 skill point and assorted other unused bennies

Aspects

Aspects are elements of your character that can help or hurt you. Sasuke's aspects are:

  • Last Scion of the Uchiha
  • Ninja of the Leaf
  • Balanced on the Edge of Darkness
  • Always Second Best...For Now!
  • Your Betrayal Only Strengthens Me
  • Never Tell Me The Odds
  • Brothers in Trouble
  • Calm in a Crisis
  • Bonus Aspect: Corrupted Will of Fire
Total Refresh: 1 [relates to how many Fate Points you get / how many powers you can buy]
Fate Points: 7 [changes from session to session depending on player actions. At character creation it's equal to your Refresh, but we're assuming Sasuke's been around for a while so this number is chosen arbitrarily.]

Template: Ninja of the Leaf (total cost: -4 Refresh)

NotL is the Ninja Academy Graduate template with the 'Will of Fire' Aspect appended. Sasuke's history has twisted his view of the Will of Fire, changing the Aspect to 'Corrupted Will of Fire'. The normal Will of Fire is about sacrifice and service, while the Corrupted Will of Fire is more like noblesse oblige—the nobility are superior to others and therefore have a duty to control the poor ignorant peasants for the peasants' own good. Also, all Uchiha are superior to all non-Uchiha.

See below for full details of NotL.

Skills

NB: You cannot have more skills at a given level than at the level below. Therefore, if you want three skills at Fair (2) then you need at least three skills at Average (1). MfD characters start at the 'Chest Deep' power level, meaning 30 skill points at character creation. Sasuke has had enough adventures to have earned 1 additional skill point.

  • Survival: Average (1)
  • Weapons: Average (1)
  • Stealth: Average (1)
  • Endurance: Fair (2)
  • Rapport: Fair (2)
  • Alertness: Good (3)
  • Presence: Good (3)
  • Discipline: Great (4)
  • Athletics: Superb (5) (It's actually just Great, but Ninja Body bumps it up +1. Listed here as Superb for easier reference.)
  • Conviction: Superb (5)
  • Fists: Superb (5)
Powers and Stunts

Stunt, -1 Refresh: Hands of Death (Either Fists OR Weapons skill gets +2 and ignores normal armor. You may take it twice in order to get the benefit with both Fists and Weapons. NB: This stunt is strictly better than the similar Lethal Weapon stunt, which costs -1 Refresh. HoD should therefore really cost at least -2 Refresh. It's underpriced specifically to ensure that every ninja has it without crippling their builds, because that pushes MfD more towards the high-lethality setting we're looking for.

Power: Sharingan, First Stage. -3 Refresh

+2 Fists. +2 Alertness (including initiative), +2 Athletics (including dodge), +2 Investigation. To activate it you must spend a Fate Point and then pass a Discipline check with a TN of Good (3). If you fail the check then the Sharingan does not activate and you don't get your FP back.

Stress tracks

These are similar to hit points, although slightly more complicated. Attacks fill a given spot on the track and, if that spot is full, roll up to the next. (e.g., if you are hit for 2 stress then you fill in the second box and only the second box, but if that box is already filled in then you fill in the next available box to the right.) If you fill up the whole track or roll off the end then you are 'taken out' (dead or unconscious). You can prevent stress from being applied by taking Consequences, such as 'black eye' or 'broken arm'. There are limits on these that we won't go into here. Under MfD house rules, if you fill in a given box then you also fill in all the ones to the left of it.

  • Physical: _ _ _ (2 by default, +1 for having Fair (2) Endurance)
  • Mental: _ _ _ _ (2 by default, +2 box and +1 Mild consequence for having Superb (5) Conviction)
  • Social: _ _ _ _ (2 by default, +2 for having Good (3) Presence )
Sasuke's Superb Conviction means he may take 2 Mild mental consequences instead of the standard 1. A Mild consequence prevents 2 stress and gives a temporary Aspect that the attacker or his proxy can tag on the following round.

Character Background

High Concept: Last Scion of the Uchiha

Trouble: Balanced on the Edge of Darkness

Character Creation Phases:

Phase 1: Where Did You Come From?
(Aspect: Always Second Best...For Now!)

The second son of the Lord of the Uchiha, in line for the most noble house of the mightiest ninja village in the world, Sasuke was forever overshadowed by his older brother, Itachi. His family rubbed his nose in this in a thousand ways, large and small. Disappointed looks, lack of time from parents and elders, the constant refrain "Itachi did it better / faster / sooner." The only one who did not, the only one who stuck up for him, was Itachi himself. Sasuke idolized his brother and worked himself into the ground to be worthy of Itachi's praise.

Phase 2: Rising Conflict
(Aspect: Your Betrayal Only Strengthens Me)

One night, for no reason anyone ever understood, Itachi went berserk and killed every ninja in the clan except for Sasuke. Afterwards, Sasuke was the favored prince of the surviving (civilian) clan members. They treated him like a messenger from the Pure Land, devoting every effort to keeping him from going insane and growing his power so that he could rebuild the clan. They poured out treasure like water to buy him the best ninja trainers, the finest education, to weave connections with other clans and figures of power such as the jinchūriki, Naruto.

Sasuke's love for his brother has turned to hatred; he has sworn to avenge his family, yet that rage and hatred are tempered by the wisdom of his sempai. He knows he is not yet stronger than Itachi and may never be. He accepts that his vengeance will not be a solo task and trains to exhaustion with his team. His sharp tongue and uncompromising nature make it difficult to be his ally, much less his friend, but those who push past the harsh words and ready criticism will find a burning Will of Fire that manifests as unquestioned loyalty to those who fight beside him.

The elders of the Clan Uchiha are astounded by the strides he has made as a ninja and as a scholar, yet they fear the core of pain and hate that lurks behind Sasuke's eyes. When he comes into the fullness of his power he will be either the greatest Lord the clan has had in a hundred years...or a monster too horrible for words.

Phase 3: What Was Your First Adventure?
(Aspect: Never Tell Me The Odds)

The week before Sasuke entered the Academy, Itachi was leaving on a mission. Sasuke begged to be allowed to come along, claiming that he would be safe enough with his big brother and that it would be an excellent training opportunity. At first Itachi refused, but eventually Sasuke wore him down. The mission was a milk run -- find and kill some chakra beasts that were bothering the local farmers -- and so he agreed.

As so often happens, the mission proved more complicated than expected. The 'chakra beasts' were actually a group of foreign ninja who were making trouble with the intention of luring out and ambushing Leaf ninja one by one. When Itachi found what was actually going on he tried to take Sasuke home, but the boy flatly refused. The farmers were real, they were really in danger, and the Will of Fire did not allow Leaf ninja to turn aside. Itachi was having none of that, but he was eventually convinced when Sasuke pointed out that the ninja would most likely escape if Itachi spent the time to take him home and return. Reluctantly, Itachi agreed. He left Sasuke with the farmers, barricaded into a basement panic room, while he went out to hunt the enemy. Sasuke, of course, immediately snuck out and took up a sentry position atop the barn roof. It was good that he did, because two hours after he left, one of the enemy returned. Itachi had torn through his squad like a hurricane through tissue paper, but the lone survivor had managed to escape temporarily. He knew that Itachi would find his trail eventually and that he couldn't outrun the elder Uchiha, so he thought he might take the farmers hostage and talk his way out. No sooner had he arrived than he was attacked by a clumsy civilian child wielding a pitchfork. The enemy ninja thought to slap the boy aside, only to be surprised when the 'boy' suddenly moved at ninja speed, lunging past him and slicing his Achilles tendon in passing. The child was completely overmatched, but the adult ninja had a useless and bleeding leg that prevented him from moving quickly. Whenever he tried to escape, Sasuke was in front of him. If he attacked, the boy would fade back or dive behind cover, staying out of reach and circling, forcing his enemy to keep moving on the bad leg. The ninja couldn't stop to bandage his wound without a stone being flung at him from behind with ninja-strength force.

By the time Itachi showed up, the enemy was bled white and barely conscious. Itachi dispatched him with ease, then spent the next ten minutes lecturing his little brother on how crazy that had been. The impact of the lecture was a bit diluted by the fact that he then demanded every detail, listened with rapt attention, and carried Sasuke home on his shoulders in victory.

Phase 4: Guest Starring
(Aspect: Brothers in Trouble)

Sasuke's greatest rival and greatest friend throughout his growing up with Namikaze Naruto, son of the Fourth Hokage and jinchuuriki of the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox. Naruto was the prankster of the pair, always managing to drag Sasuke into his adventures with an innocent look and a gormless "but Sasuke, sneaking into Uncle Jiraiya's sealcrafting library to steal his notes will be good training...." The number of times the two of them stood before the Hokage's desk for a tongue lashing was equalled only by the number of times that they ignored a tongue lashing.

Phase 5: Guest Starring Redux
(Aspect: Cool in a Crisis)

Today, Jiraiya likes to brag about how his sealcrafting never goes wrong. The emphasis in that is on the 'brag'. Naruto and Sasuke were hiding atop the reservoir retaining wall on the day that Jiraiya made his fifteenth wildly unsuccessful attempt to reproduce the Hiraishin. Fortunately, while Naruto's clones kept the semi-sentient balefire away from the unconscious Jiraiya, Sasuke was able to break open the retaining wall and flood the sealing lab. It was seven months before Jiraiya's hair grew back enough to use the Needle Jizo.





Template: Ninja of the Leaf

This is simply the Ninja Academy Graduate template (see below) with the added 'Will of Fire' Aspect. Refresh cost for this template is simply the -4 Refresh from the Ninja Academy Graduate base template.

  • Will of Fire (-0 Refresh)
The Will of Fire is a philosophy of duty and service taught to every ninja from Leaf. It is the source of the strength that makes Leaf ninja superior to foreign ninja. It includes a cluster of beliefs such as:

  • Ninja are the thin black line defending Leaf from a hostile world; they have a duty to protect the city and its people
  • Civilians are not inherently inferior to ninja
  • There is a duty of loyalty to comrades
  • The Hokage is the embodiment of the Will of Fire. His words are inherently true and his morality and honor are unquestionable. Yes, there are times when he needs to sacrifice a ninja in service to a higher good, but he will never do that if there is any other choice
  • Dying in the service of Leaf is a good death that will send you straight to the Pure Land. That said, it's much better to send the other guy to the Pure Land while you go home to report mission success and have some dango


Template: Ninja Academy Graduate (-4 Refresh)

  • Ninja Constitution (-0 Refresh)
You heal at normal human rates, but you heal fully (no scars, weakened bones, etc) from anything that doesn't kill you. You retain physical strength/speed/vitality much longer than civilians and have a slightly extended natural lifespan assuming you aren't killed.
  • Ninja Body (-2 refresh; downgraded version of Inhuman Speed + Strength)
    • Speed of the Wind: Move one extra zone with no penalty
    • Agility of the Monkey King: Athletics rolls +1, including for dodging.
    • Mighty: Roll Might at +1 when lifting, opening, or breaking
  • Ninja Magic (-2 Refresh; weakened form of Evocation)
Ordinarily Evocation lets you do essentially anything, within a certain framework. Ninja Magic (created just for MfD) works mostly like Evocation but has a lot more restrictions that cause it to work Naruto-style.
  • Skills of the Shadow Warrior (net of -0 Refresh [+1 Refresh because of significant required skill costs, -1 for the required Hands of Death stunt])

    Characters with the Ninja Academy Graduate template must buy the following Skills and Stunts up to at least the indicated levels:
    • Alertness: Average (1)
    • Athletics: Average (1) (enhanced to Fair (2) by Ninja Body)
    • Conviction: Average (1)
    • Endurance: Average (1)
    • Discipline: Average (1)
    • Conviction: Average (1)
    • Fists: Fair (2)
    • Stealth: Average (1)
    • Survival: Average (1)
    • Weapons: Average (1)
    • Stunt, -1 Refresh: Hands of Death (Either Fists OR Weapons skill gets +2 and ignores normal armor. You may take it twice in order to get the benefit with both Fists and Weapons. NB: This stunt is strictly better than the similar Lethal Weapon stunt, which costs -1 Refresh. HoD should therefore really cost at least -2 Refresh. It's underpriced specifically to ensure that every ninja has it without crippling their builds, because that pushes MfD more towards the high-lethality setting we're looking for..
Sakura was going to blame him for this, he was sure of it. The girl had a horrid grip on reality.

Of course, the entire thing was ridiculous. Ninja didn't get captured, they got killed. The idea that two-thirds of a team—more importantly, of a Leaf team—could get taken alive and imprisoned, leaving the third member free to attempt a rescue, was insane. For that matter, why would the third member attempt a rescue? Why wouldn't he go back to Leaf to complete the mission and gather reinforcements? Going up against a foe that had already captured two of your peers (well, teammates) would be foolish. Also, what in every world ever imagined by human mind could possibly take Naruto captive, much less hold him? If the stupid proctors were going to do this, they could at least have made the decision as to who the 'prisoners' and the 'rescuer' were based on the abilities of those involved instead of making them literally draw straws.

It was especially galling that he had been the one to draw the short straw as the rescuer because, much as he hated to admit it, either of the others would have been a better choice. Sasuke's role on the team was diplomat and free safety, but this scenario didn't play to his strengths. He could apply ridiculous amounts of force in close- or mid-range, but not sustain it over an extended battle the way Naruto could. He could sneak and scout, but not as well as Sakura could. Naruto, with his utterly ridiculous chakra pool with which to power Rasengans and his total lack of thinking, would have simply carved a straight path to his team, cutting through walls and guards alike, all without slowing down. Sakura, with her ridiculous stealth skills and sensory jutsu, could have practically strolled in behind one of the guards, lifted the keys off his belt, and unlocked the cells. Sure, if she'd been spotted she would have been cooked, but the odds of anyone spotting her were pretty low.

So, yeah. He was the one responsible for the rescue, and Sakura was undoubtedly going to be pissy with him about not showing up sooner. Sage's mercy upon him if her 'captors' had mussed her hair in the process of locking her up.

Bah.

NB: Skill rolls are (your skill + 4dF (4 Fudge dice)). Fudge dice have six sides: two show -1, two show 0, and two show +1. You can burn a Fate Point (FP) to either reroll all the dice or to get a straight +2. You can also modify your rolls using aspects. (See below)

Sasuke, hide from the guard:
Stealth, Average (1). Sasuke really doesn't want to be seen, so he spends an FP to invoke the 'DARK AND PERILOUS NIGHT' aspect of the scene in order to get +2 on his Stealth check. Remaining: 6 FP.
4dF (4 Fudge dice): -1, 0, 0, -1

Crap! That roll was awful! Sasuke spends an FP to invoke his 'Ninja of the Leaf' aspect in order to get a reroll. (5 FP remain)
4dF: 0, 0, -1, -1
This is really not his night. Okay, -2 is more than he can afford but another reroll is too uncertain. He burns yet another FP to invoke his 'Calm in a Crisis' aspect in order to add a straight +2 on the roll, thereby canceling out the roll itself and leaving him with three successes (1 from his Stealth, +2 from tagging the scene) and 4 FP. This was an expensive roll!

Red Team genin, currently on patrol:
Awareness, Fair (2) + 4dF: -1, 0, -1, -1. Total: Poor (-1)
Sasuke's not the only one with bad luck tonight! The guard wanders by, completely oblivious.


Sasuke pressed himself a little tighter against the ground as the guard passed by. As soon as the enemy was out of sight around the building, Sasuke was moving, ghosting forward in the shadow of a passing cloud and straight up the side of the wooden tower. The logical place to put prisoners was in the basement, but this structure had been constructed specifically for the Exams. It was possible but unlikely that the proctors had taken the trouble to build a basement.

Of course 'unlikely' was for posers. Real ninja were certain that there was no basement, because they took advantage of the fact that one of their teammates was the adopted son of the Hokage in order to steal the blueprints before the Exams even started. (He carefully suppressed the surge of irritation at how pleased Sakura had been to think of that before Sasuke did.)

Pushing aside the distracting thoughts of soft pink hair and clever— Pushing aside the distracting thoughts, Sasuke climbed the last few inches and peeked up over the edge of the roof.

And cursed.

Okay, seriously? Why in the everloving fuck were there two guards up here? It was too dark and the woods too close for them to be terribly useful as sentries, so—

Oh, Sage's balls. The Old Man must have realized that they'd stolen the blueprints and dropped a hint to the enemy as an equalizer. Die in a fire, you obnoxious old bastard.

Sasuke has the option to go down and try a different approach or to cut his way through the guards. It would be smarter to go down, but the GM decides to put a Compel on his 'Never Tell Me the Odds' aspect. Sasuke has a choice: act on the Compel and gain a Fate Point, or spend a Fate Point to ignore the Compel. Guess which he does?

FP: +1 (5 remaining)


Screw this. The Red Team wasn't obliged to keep the prisoners 'alive' beyond a certain point, and he wasn't sure how long they would wait. Time to show these losers what it meant to face an Uchiha.

Base Initiative is equal to your Alertness, which can be modified by powers or stunts. Sasuke's 'Sharingan, Stage 1' power would give him a significant boost, but he hardly needs it for these two scrubs.

Sasuke, Initiative: 3
Red Team Ninja #1: 3
Red Team Ninja #2: 2

Huh, a tie. Maybe these guys aren't such scrubs after all. Okay, fall back to Athletics to break the tie.

Sasuke, Athletics: Superb (5) + 4dF: 0, 0, 0, -1. Total: Great (4)
RTN#1, Athletics: Good (3) + 4dF: +1, +1, +1, 0. Total Fantastic (6).

Damn, this guy's fast! Initiative order for the rest of the fight is RTN#1, Sasuke, RTN#2.

(Note that everyone has the Hands of Death (HoD) stunt, giving the +2 on their Fists roll against unarmored targets, and no one is wearing armor.)

RTN#1, attack: Fists (3) + 2 (HoD) + 4dF: 0, +1, +1, -1. Total: Fantastic (6)
Sasuke, dodge: Athletics, Superb (5) + 4dF: 0, -1, +1, +1. Total: Fantastic (6). No damage.

Reminder: MfD uses high-lethality house rules, one of which is that you get to counterattack when someone attacks you, so long as you did not take a consequence. RTN#1 just took a swing at Sasuke, so now Sasuke is going to counterpunch the guy's head off attempt to disable his opponent.

Sasuke, counterattack: Fists, Superb (6) + 2 (HoD) + 4dF: +1, -1, -1, -1. Total: Superb (6). It's a bad roll and Sasuke wants to take this guy out fast, so he burns an FP for a reroll.
REROLL: Sasuke, counterattack: Fists, Superb (6) + 2 (HoD) + 4dF: +1, 0, -1, +1. Total: Beyond Legendary (9). That's better!
RTN#1, dodge!: Athletics, Good (3) + 4dF: +1, -1, +1, +1. Total: Superb (5).

RTN#1 takes 4 stress. He only has 3 boxes on his Physical Stress track, so he needs to shed at least 2 stress in order to avoid being taken out. He opts to take a Mild consequence (reducing the stress by 2) and gain the aspect 'Battered and Off Balance'. He's taking 2 stress; ordinarily only the #2 box on his stress track would be filled, but under MfD rules both the #1 and #2 boxes are filled. If, later in the fight, he takes a 1- or 2-stress hit it will roll up into his #3 box, thereby filling his stress track and taking him out. Unless you have extremely high Endurance or an appropriate power, you're only allowed to take one Mild consequence, so RTN#1 will not be able to shed stress again in this fight. Since he needed to take a consequence he is not allowed to counterattack.
Time for the second enemy to get his licks in.

RTN#2 attack: Fists (3) + 2 (HoD) + 4dF: 0, 0, 0, +1. Total: Fantastic (6)
Sasuke, dodge: Athletics 5 + 4dF: -1, 0, 0, -1. Total: Good (3). Oops, not Good enough! Sasuke burns an FP (2 FP remaining) for +2, boosting his dodge up to Superb (5), then takes 1 stress. He chooses not to take a consequence.

Sasuke, counterattack: Fists (5) + 2 (HoD) + 4dF: 0, 0, +1, +1. Total: Beyond Legendary (9).
RTN#2, dodge: Athletics Good (3) + 4dF: +1, -1, 0, -1. Total = 2. He's a total scrub with no FP to spend; he goes down hard.

Next round!
Now that the pattern is established, I'll just show the final totals instead of spelling it all out.

RTN#1, attack: Fantastic (6)
Sasuke, dodge: Great (4). Yikes! Never fear, all is not lost. Last round, Sasuke placed the 'Battered and Off Balance' aspect on RTN#1. You're allowed to tag an aspect once for free immediately after you create it. (Ideally on the same round, definitely not more than 1 round later.) Sasuke gladly tags the aspect (special effect: push the enemy slightly off balance so as to weaken the attack). This gives Sasuke a +2 on his dodge roll, boosting it to Fantastic (6) and reducing the damage to 0.

Sasuke, counterattack: Legendary (8)
RTN#1, dodge: Great (4). He has no FP left, so he takes 2 stress. He's already used his only Mild physical consequence and the first and second boxes on his stress track are full, so the attack rolls up into the third box. That fills his stress track, so he goes down.

Sasuke wins! House rules kick in: After every combat, everyone on the winning team get +1 FP per person on the losing team. Sasuke gains +2 FP. FP remaining: 3.


The guards were slow and stupid; they didn't hear him coming until he was on top of them. He started a straight kick to the first enemy's back, intending to fling the boy right off the roof so there would be only one opponent to deal with, at which point—

Sasuke stifled an unworthy-of-an-Uchiha yelp and aborted his attack when his target, a tall redhead from Rock, launched a vicious no-look mule kick while simultaneously shouting "Intruders on the roof!" Sasuke barely managed to twist away from the kick, catching a painful but not disabling impact on the outside of his thigh. The redheaded pleb didn't seem to understand that he was dealing with the Prince of the Uchiha; Sasuke conveyed this information in the politest way that a hammerfist to the back of the head could manage. It knocked the taller boy to the ground, but he turned the fall into a (somewhat shaky) leg sweep intended less to cause damage and more to keep Sasuke occupied for a moment while the Rock ninja shook off the blow and got his feet under him. Sasuke contemptuously jumped over the sweep and started an axe kick that would snap the idiot's knee in half and—

"Kyaa!"

Oh, for fuck's sake. He'd momentarily lost sight of the second Rock ninja and now he had to pay the price as a punch materialized out of nowhere and crashed into his side, accompanied by an actual attack cry. An attack cry?! Really?! Well, apparently it was true what they said: 'Rock' didn't refer to their homeland, it referred to the contents of their heads. Yelling as you attacked was an insane thing for a shinobi to do, and would have had every taijutsu instructor at the Leaf Academy crying in their drinks if one of their students had done it.

He rode the blow, accepting a bruised rib in exchange for the chance to slam a side kick into the little idiot's chin. The impact lifted the Rock ninja off the ground and threw him a couple yards; he hit the ground hard, an unmoving lump with a shattered jaw that would need serious attention from the medics if he was ever going to eat solid food again.

The Red Menace was back on his feet and moving forward, still a little wobbly but with his hands up. He started a fast left hook but Sasuke leaned back away from the punch and popped a toe kick into his attacker's hip before the punch could get fully underway. The kick was rushed and there was no power in it, but it sufficed to make the bastard stumble a little, thereby defusing the attack. More importantly, it opened the enemy's guard so that Sasuke could move in for a vicious knee-and-elbow combination that bruised the liver and shattered the collarbone. The Rock ninja hit the ground with a gratifying thump and didn't move.

Sasuke sighed. The shouts and the multiple impacts on the 'ground'—really the roof of the building—must have attracted attention. On the bright side, there were two opponents down out of...nine? Twelve? Fifteen? Rock had a major presence at the Chūnin Exams this year, and Sasuke didn't know how many of them would have been assigned to the Red Team for this exercise. Especially if the Old Man was feeling peevish at Naruto for stealing his blueprints and was deciding to take a little not-all-that-subtle-really revenge.

Sasuke, Alertness, Good (3) + 4dF: -1, +1, -1, -1. Total: 1

Nothing of interest going on here. Nope, nope, nope.


Well, whatever, he couldn't hear anyone charging up to kill him so he probably had a couple minutes. He looked around to see what he had to work with. The roof was wide and flat except for the small 'hut' in the center where the stairs debouched. There were a few pebbles and sticks, probably dropped here by birds...speaking of which, that wasn't all the birds had dropped, and he'd just fought his way across a generous pile. Eew.

He scraped the soles of his sandals repeatedly across the roof, accomplishing very little. Fortunately, the pants of Mook #2 (as he had mentally tagged the chubby one) proved more absorbent.

No longer distracted by the awareness that he was walking around with gooey, sticking bird poop on his feet, Sasuke turned his attention back to the question of getting into the building. Going down the stairs was definitely not the way to go, so—

The door to the stairwell burst open and a Rock ninja came racing out, naked sword in hand and head swiveling as she looked for her target. Another followed on her heels, and pounding footsteps on the stairs behind that one muttered glumly about reinforcements seconds away.

Of course, the Lord of the Clan Uchiha would never panic. That was beneath him. Still, Sasuke did feel that perhaps this would be a good time to move quickly. And hit hard. Or run away. Yes, running away might be good. No, wait. The Lord of the Clan Uchiha did not run away, he relocated the engagement to more advantageous terrain. Yes. Still, before trying to relocate, he should probably do something about the goons on the roof with him.

1 FP spent. Remaining: 2

With the FP spent, Sasuke still needs to pass a Discipline check to activate the Sharingan:

Sasuke, Discipline: Great (4) + 4dF: Great. TN: Good. Pass!


Reaching deep into his soul, Sasuke called out to the power of his blood, invoking the strength that had made his ancestors the most feared clan in the Elemental Nations. It roared forth, racing eagerly to his call like a hunting cat straining at the lead. A burning pressure swept through his eyes and the world slowed around him as the Sharingan activated.

The first Rock ninja was barely three steps out of the stairwell and currently looking seventy-three degrees away from Sasuke, her head tracking oh-so-slowly to the right to find her target. The second ninja wasn't even fully outside—the open door was blocking Sasuke's line of sight, but the bottom edge of the door was a few inches above the roof, and the ninja-sandal-clad foot that was visible below the door revealed its owner's position: back foot still inside the stairwell, front foot about to touch on the roof outside, in the process of shifting his weight onto the front leg.

The Sharingan (or, at least, the level of it that Sasuke had thus far unlocked) did not actually enhance the user's speed. Instead, it accelerated his mental faculties, giving him plenty of time to measure angles, study the opposition, plan his attacks, and place them exactly where they would do the most good. It also suppressed emotions, allowing for clear and logical evaluations unimpeded by the stress of battle. In point of fact, it made the whole process of moving around tedious, since your mind seemed to be moving at normal speed while your body was swimming through treacle. It was even more tedious when you needed to cross twenty feet of roof while lugging a hundred and eighteen pounds of tubby mook with birdshit on his pants.

Movement in Dresden Files is handled with zones. Zones are an abstract region of space in which characters are close enough to interact. Zones are always defined by the GM. Characters in the same zone can talk to each other, or punch each other in the face. Characters one zone apart can throw things at each other (provided there's nothing in the way). Characters two or more zones apart can shoot at each other with (modern setting) guns or (MfD setting) bows / crossbows (again, provided there's nothing in the way).

You can move freely within your own zone.

In order to move between zones the GM chooses a target number (usually Mediocre (0) unless there are obstacles that make movement difficult) and you make an Athletics roll. You can move one zone if you equal the target number, plus an additional zone for each shift above the target. The 'Speed of the Wind' trait under the 'Ninja Academy Graduate' template means that anyone who graduated from ninja school can move an additional zone on top of whatever they roll.

This fight includes the following zones:
  • The roof, where we find Sasuke and four enemies (two of whom are already beaten to an unconscious pulp) as well as the walls of the building. Aspect(s): WIDE OPEN and MOONLIT
  • The ground at the base of the building, consisting of a couple dozen yards of overgrown grass and then steadily-thickening forests. Aspect(s): DARK AND SHADOWY, OVERGROWN, and UNTAMED
  • The staircase leading into the inside of the tower, access to which is available only through one narrow door and up which are charging an unknown number of enemy ninja. The staircase is accessible only from the roof. Aspect(s): CRAMPED, POORLY-LIT, and CROWDED.
TNs for moving from:
  • roof <=> ground: Mediocre (0)
  • roof => staircase: Superb (5). Once all the enemy ninja flee or are defeated it becomes Mediocre (0).
  • staircase => roof: Average (1). There's a door, and it's tricky to get through when you're fighting. Once all the enemy ninja flee or are defeated it becomes Mediocre (0).
Sasuke has his Sharingan running so he's suddenly a bit of a combat monster. Let's do initiative (i.e. Alertness).

Sasuke: 5
Female Rock ninja: 4
Male Rock ninja: 3

Sasuke, establish a block against people coming onto the roof from the stairs. Fluff: Throw the fat kid's unconscious body against the door.
Athletics Epic (7) + 4dF: -1, 0, 0, -1 => Superb (5).

Female Rock ninja, attack (Weapons 5 + 2 (Hands of Death) + 4dF): Epic (7)
Sasuke, dodge: Athletics Epic (7) + 4dF: Epic (7)

Sasuke, counterattack: Fists (9) [base of Superb (5) + 2 (Sharingan) + 2 (Hands of Death)] + 4dF: Legendary (8)
FRN, dodge: Athletics, Superb (5) + 4dF => Good (3). Spend 1 FP to invoke her 'Fast as Lightning' aspect for a reroll. REROLL: FRN, dodge: Athletics, Superb (5) + 4dF => Great (4). Spend 1 FP to invoke her 'Sword Saint' aspect for +2. That leaves 2 stress. Take a Mild consequence, 'Mashed-up Face', to reduce that to 0.

Male Rock ninja, attempt to move through door (Might check): Mediocre (0). Fail! Can't come onto the roof yet.

Round 2!

Sasuke, punch out FRN: Beyond Legendary (9). It would be nice to tag the 'Mashed-up Face' for something, but it doesn't really lend itself to a combat bonus.
FRN, dodge: Good (3). She burns an FP to invoke her 'Fast as Lightning' aspect for a +2, then burns another to invoke her 'Sword Saint' aspect for another +2. Dodge is now 7. Take 2 stress. She's out of consequences, FP, and half of her 4-box physical stress track is full.

FRN, counterattack: Fantastic (6)
Sasuke, dodge: Epic (7)

Round 3! Sasuke burns an FP to keep his Sharingan going. Remaining FP: 1
Sasuke, attack: Beyond Legendary (10)
FRN, dodge: Superb (5). She takes five stress and is out like a light.

Sasuke gets 1 FP for the opponent he defeated. Remaining FP: 2. He allows his Sharingan to close so as to conserve FP.


The Sharingan did not grant strength, but it gave you the time to use what you had most effectively. Sasuke looked down to verify his feet were placed exactly right, checked the position of his body, breathed in...and hurled the unconscious Rock ninja at the open door to the stairwell. It slammed back on its frame like a flail smashing into the threshing stone; the ninja who had been coming through it was knocked back inside with a startled yelp. Just as calculated, the body of the fat Rock idiot (a bit of redundancy there) slumped against the door, keeping it closed.

That left only one opponent on the roof with him, and she was suddenly up in his face, lunging for him so fast that she seemed to be half-speed sparring instead of crawling through space like an arthritic snail. Her sword whistled down in a perfect diagonal cut that would have bisected him from left collarbone to right hip if she'd done it with full force. Her timing and distance were perfect; he wasn't going to be able to swim through the treacle fast enough to evade the cut.

So he didn't.

Only the edge of a sword is dangerous; Sasuke reached out and placed his hand on the flat of her blade as it came down, pressing it gently aside. His snail-slow body barely managed it, and only the unnatural calm imposed by the Sharingan kept him from panicking at how close it came.

Still, it did miss and the Sharingan did keep him calm. Calm enough that he was able to step forward and smash both fists into her eyes as she completed her strike. That put him close enough that when the door bumped outwards with the force of the ninja inside attempting to force it open, he was in position to kick it shut again. It wasn't necessary; Fatty was doing a much better job as a doorstop than he had as a ninja.

He continued the momentum of his initial attack, stepping past her and smashing her in the back of the head on the way. The blow was hurried and not placed correctly because the infuriating woman saw what he was doing and was actually fast enough to start spinning her sword around behind herself such that if he'd placed the hit properly he would have cut his hand in half. Still, it rocked her offbalance and in perfect position for— No, damnit, she just dove forward into a roll and came up back at her perfect range. Sage's nose hairs, why couldn't this woman have been born in Leaf? She was taller than he was, with defined muscles, callouses on her hands, and hair cut in a pragmatically short style that was utterly unlike all the civilian girls (and even some of the kunoichi!) who liked to throw themselves at him. If she could think half as well as she could fight it might even be interesting to talk with her...maybe after he punched her lights out he should see about finding her later?

Eh, whatever. Focus on punching her lights out first. The power of the Sharingan was burning in his eyes, his nerves, his blood, making him feel as though his body was on fire even as it buoyed him up on an unstoppable wave of power. He calmed it, twined his chakra into cords with which he bridled his bloodline and reined it back, forcing it to spend its force as he directed instead of as it willed. And then he gathered that power, blurred forward past the enemy's feeble attempts at a block, and smashed a palm strike into the girl's solar plexus so hard that for a moment he honestly thought she was going to fly off the roof. Fortunately, her unconscious body bounced to a stop a good six feet short of the edge.

There were repeated impacts on the door now. He couldn't make out the words, but there seemed to be at least three different voices and footfall patterns just inside the stairwell. Tubby wasn't going to keep that closed more than a few seconds, and even with the Sharingan Sasuke wasn't sanguine about his chances of fighting his way down a narrow staircase packed with enemies.

Time to get creative. He allowed the Sharingan to slip away from him; his bloodline was about precision and efficiency, which was the exact opposite of how the next few minutes were going to go.

He snatched a pad of storage seals out of one pocket and a pad of explosives out of the other and slapped one explosive on the roof a few yards from the staircase. It took only a moment to prime it, another second to unseal a big slab of iron on top of it, and then he backed away. The explosion sent the massive chunk of metal leaping into the sky like a scalded cat, but its weight sufficed to direct most of the force down, blowing a hole straight through the heavy timbers of the roof. He jumped into the hole, already pulling out another explosive/storage seal pair.

o-o-o-o​

"Sakura?" he called softly.

There was a moment of near-palpable surprise and then Sakura's voice hissed from the third door on the left. "Sasuke? In here!"

He hurried to her door and slid the hatch back. The familiar (and, as expected, angry) face of his pink-haired teammate was waiting on the other side.

"What took you so long? I can't believe you left me stuck in here with him!"

"Yo, Sasuke!" came the (as expected) chipper voice of his other teammate. "Life treating you okay, Sourpuss?"

"Eh," Sasuke said, crouching down to inspect the lock. He hadn't found keys, which was a problem. The door was thick and heavily constructed with good steel for the lock and the fittings. He had some small explosives that would theoretically blow the lock out without killing everyone inside, but a lot of prison cells had doors that were....

He sighed and stood up. "Door's trapped. There's explosives in the lock that will kill everyone nearby, and there's likely more of the same in the door itself. Probably dummied up for the Exams, but it will still count as a kill if they go off."

"Keys?" Sakura asked, her tone making it a chastisement instead of a question.

"I was a little busy on the way in," Sasuke said defensively. "Seriously, I put down four of them, then blasted my way through three floors to find you guys. I blocked some of the holes behind me with junk I had in storage, but they'll be here any second. Can't you guys get out on your own?"

"We could," Sakura said, glaring at her blond teammate. "If someone weren't feeling lazy."

"Hey, I had to give Sourpuss a chance to show off, right?"

The hatch in the door was small and Sakura was blocking his line of sight to Naruto, but the sound of the other boy's voice told Sasuke everything he needed to know about Naruto's expression: that same insufferable, irritatingly engaging grin that always eventually led to a trip to the Hokage's Office.

"Seriously, Naruto?" Sakura said, hands on her hips and fire glaring from her eyes. "This is the Exams! Stop clowning around!"

"Hey, I was unconscious! They drugged me!"

"Damnit, Naruto," Sasuke said. "It pains me to say this, but Pinky is right. As freakishly fast as you heal, I'm sure whatever they gave you wore off five minutes after they put you in there."

"Did not! I only just woke up!"

"Liar!" Sakura said. "You've been awake for half an hour!"

"No I—"

"Enough, children!" Sasuke snapped, as the first squad of enemies came around the corner fifteen feet away. "Argue later, fight now!"

I'm not bothering to roll for the rest of this because it's pretty much a foregone conclusion.


Sakura was jostled aside as Naruto's face suddenly appeared at the hatch. The blond was obviously having to stand on tiptoe and crane his neck to be able to set eyes on the corridor.

"Mass Shadow Clone no Jutsu!" His teammate's voice had thankfully lost its bantering tone, because Sasuke wasn't sure how much more of 'playful Naruto' he could stand under the circumstances. Although, granted, those circumstances were made much less stressful by the appearance of a trio of short, stocky blond ninja in the hall between himself and the enemy.

Each of the three Narutos cut a handseal and shouted, "Mass Shadow Clone no Jutsu!" A dozen more appeared, packing the corridor all the way to the corner and leaving the trio of Red Team ninja helplessly pinned under a mass of clone pseudo-flesh. From the corner three copies of Naruto's voice said, "Mass Shadow Clone no Jutsu!" Startled yelps and thumps suggested that enemy reinforcements were no longer a concern.

"So, about those keys," Sakura said calmly. "Any chance you could go find them? This scenario is scheduled to run another two hours, so if at some point someone could think about letting me out of this cell so that I can interrogate these losers then we could find where their flag is and wrap up two events at once. Although, if you boys would like to sit and compliment each other on how amazing you are instead, that's fine too."

Sasuke sighed. "Yeah, yeah. Give me a minute." Grumbling, he started moving down the hall systematically, searching each prisoner as he went. After all, someone had to do all the actual work.






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