(Also, Firn: typo near the beginning; there are two question marks in a row, one of them in italics, the other not).
Thanks.
Also, Firn: a potential concern with regards to the quest's formatting/procedure with votes--

Holding parts of votes in abeyance because of unforeseeable complications is a fairly good practice for a number of reasons, but I worry that stuff gets lost in translation, like so:

1) SV makes a multi-part vote -->
2) Firn holds part of it in abeyance because of unforeseeable happenstance/etc -->
3) SV makes a new, shorter/more limited vote to address this new, unexpected turn of events, and keeps it much more limited in scope because they all just experienced most of their longer, broader vote get cut off and dropped without warning (a reasonable reaction to a reasonable practice, but on the whole...) -->
4) Firn enacts the latest vote, which either addresses the current matter or leads to the latest tangent expanding itself -->
5) Events continue along, with the entire chunk of the original vote that was held in abeyance being forgotten/dropped. As a result, at least some (potentially many) voters will later get blindsided by something happening that they thought had already been addressed by a preventative measure (or something) that SV had voted for previously; they don't remember (or misremember, or simply never knew) that the thing they voted for to prevent this exact situation from coming up was something that ended up being cut out and held in abeyance before being forgotten. This differs from SV simply holding off on doing something in a vote because everyone is already on the same page about X not being done, as it leaves some/perhaps many voters under the impression that matter X had already been addressed, leaving the actual issue unaddressed for a long while (until it becomes a big problem).

Not saying this is a frequent phenomenon or anything, but that it feels like it might be often/significant enough (or enough of a potential problem) to keep an eye out for it. Like moments where some big problem comes up and a bunch of voters are confused as to how it happened, saying things like "but didn't we do X a while back?" and a couple people have to go back and dig for the specific posts around the time the guessed timeframe was to figure out what happened.
To be perfectly honest, as I see it, forgetting mid conversation due to other stuff coming up is a thing that happens. I leave the vote held in abeyance thing as a courtesy, a) to show people where the vote cut off and b) if anyone wants to refer back to it.
 
The reason that the Barrier is such a big deal for me is that one of my top priorities in this Quest is to set things up so that Sabrina can cleanse everyone.
I agree with the goal, but I'm not convinced that any barrier tech will scale to the level we need. If we assume that 1 in 100,000 are meguca, based on the assumption that the Mitakihara metro area is typical and has 100 meguca and 10,000,000 people, then there are about 70,000 meguca on Earth and 1,200 in Japan. I think this is a high estimate, but pessimism is good here. I don't think we can visit 70,000 meguca in one day with barrier tech.

I think the only scalable solution is to have them come to us. Personally, I'd just recommend setting up a regular rotating delivery service of super grief seeds.

In any case, I think that the political problems that we'd face from the Incubators if we were regularly cleansing 700 girls will be so bad that we can't reasonably predict what would happen. Heck, maybe Feathers is a crazy magical girl Incubator experiment tailor-made to assassinate us. What if we're an Incubator and that's why our hair is white? Regardless of exactly what kind of weird stuff happens, I bet that, when things look really crazy, I don't think Homura will care that we are actually an Incubator witch robot from the future sent back to save Sarah Connor Madoka by future Sayaka and Kyubey, being chased by Evil Future Homura if we need to incept Hitomi to convince her to build a mecha to blow up Aokigahara forest, which is now a giant clone of us.
 
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I agree with the goal, but I'm not convinced that any barrier tech will scale to the level we need. If we assume that 1 in 100,000 are meguca, based on the assumption that the Mitakihara metro area is typical and has 100 meguca and 10,000,000 people, then there are about 70,000 meguca on Earth and 1,200 in Japan. I think this is a high estimate, but pessimism is good here. I don't think we can visit 70,000 meguca in one day with barrier tech.

I think the only scalable solution is to have them come to us. Personally, I'd just recommend setting up a regular rotating delivery service of super grief seeds.
Having people come to us would be easier if they don't have to come all the way to Mitakihara - that's not feasible for most people. Setting up a single cleanse point in each of the top 50 population centers in the world (for instance), and jetting/teleporting to each location on a regular basis would do a ton of good (allowing us to reach about 10% of the world's population with relatively minimal effort - I'd ballpark it at two hours of supersonic travel time per day if we want to cleanse each place once a week - and the time would be reduced even further if we can figure out teleportation or space compression), but that would only be possible if we first researched fast transportation. The Barrier seems like the best bet for that.

We're planning on doing a cleansing run this weekend. If we can properly test the Barrier to verify its safety (with respect to Feathers) before then, then we might be able to use the cleansing run to test the general concept of fast travel within the Barrier.
 
[SILLY PARANOIA]

You know, for a moment I had a scary though: What if the feather was a grief creation of Sabrina's? When we made the Barriers, they didn't feel wrong to us, like other Barriers do. I know that's just because it's right that the grief is shaped by our will, that's our wish, but still, an example of a thing that we made that doesn't feel like other things that are similar to it.

But of course, if we made it, it would still feel witchy, and even if it somehow didn't feel witchy to us, it would to our friends, who haven't commented on it.

But there is another type object of that is made of grief and doesn't feel wrong: Grief Seeds. Grief construct. Not pinging radars. What if the feather is something similar?

Here my paranoia runs out. This is a silly idea.

But really, if we didn't know feathers were bad stuff, I'd be wanting to try and create another one of these things.
 
But really, if we didn't know feathers were bad stuff, I'd be wanting to try and create another one of these things.
It's less create and more pestering Homucifer(?) to give us her fingernail clippings.

Though that is a cute idea....Hm, but we did analyse our grief, right? Given grief seeds give ERROR there might be a mismatch.
 
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It's less create and more pestering Homucifer(?) to give us her fingernail clippings.

Though that is a cute idea....Hm, but we did analyse our grief, right? Given grief seeds give ERROR there might be a mismatch.
Analyse our grief? With witchy grief objects, you mean? We haven't. We've only used our instincts for that.
 
[x] Muramasa

We're not putting barrier creation off forever, just until the Feathers threat has been defeated. Once we survive Walpurgisnacht, and Whatever-is-Worse-Than-Walpurgisnacht-Which-May-or-May-Not-be-Feathers, then we can consider worldwide cleansing.
 
[X] Boonerunner

We desperately need to stop making stupid promises. Barrier generation has the potential to be extraordinarily powerful, and we've barely explored it yet. If opening or closing a barrier does, indeed, cause us Feathers problems... have you considered that we're not the only Witch in the setting? Barriers are created and destroyed all the time.

To make a plausible case for our Barrier experimentation being a problem, not only do you have to explain why creating or destroying a barrier "lets Feathers in" (which, on its own, makes no damn sense), you also have to explain why our barrier in particular is different from all the thousands of others that are created and destroyed on any given day.

And, honestly, that promise ain't gonna reassure anybody. It won't help us with our social check. It presents us with no benefit now, but will almost certainly make things harder for us down the line.
 
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[X] Boonerunner

We desperately need to stop making stupid promises. Barrier generation has the potential to be extraordinarily powerful, and we've barely explored it yet. If opening or closing a barrier does, indeed, cause us Feathers problems... have you considered that we're not the only Witch in the setting? Barriers are created and destroyed all the time.

To make a plausible case for our Barrier experimentation being a problem, not only do you have to explain why creating or destroying a barrier "lets Feathers in" (which, on its own, makes no damn sense), you also have to explain why our barrier in particular is different from all the thousands of others that are created and destroyed on any given day.

And, honestly, that promise ain't gonna reassure anybody. It won't help us with our social check. It presents us with no benefit now, but will almost certainly make things harder for us down the line.
Well, first, we're not actually a Witch, so our Barrier is different from all the other ones in the fact that it's a non-Witch Barrier. That doesn't mean much, though.

While there's the possibility that Feathers is just trolling us, which would render all of the following post moot, my idea I've been harboring for a while is that Feathers can interfere with our magic, due to [REDACTED], and [REDACTED]:
Here's another tip. You (as in the character) have immense potential, and [REDACTED], because of [REDACTED]. Thanks to that, any Wish you make will get you an enormous amount of power, it's just the nature of that power that varies from here to there.
Whatever that means.

Maybe Feathers' one of the causes of our 'immense' potential? Perhaps it's giving us a leg up and that allows it to mess with our magic usage? When we made the Barrier, we made a 'World' and a 'portal/link' into that World. Could Feathers expand on those concepts and link our World with another one?



And something that's been nagging at me for a while: The wings. Why wings? They're pretty cool, but why? Where do they come from? Are they part of our meguca things (coat, hammer)? Or is it a sign of something else? Does it hint towards somebody else's influence on us? Do we just like wings so much we instinctively make them without though, much less voting for it?

You instinctively tear at the disorienting, unreal landscape around you. Bright, nauseating colours bleed and shred into bilious clouds of Grief that form behind you into two tenebrous, coiling wings that shift and warp. Subconsciously, you avoid the two shades of Grief that are behind you, just as you avoid the blaze of magic that's not so far ahead. Only when you've cleared your immediate area do you stop, gasping erratically for breath, hunched over with your hands on your knees.
We didn't vote for this!

... Anyway, I'm off.
 
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[X] Boonerunner

We desperately need to stop making stupid promises. Barrier generation has the potential to be extraordinarily powerful, and we've barely explored it yet. If opening or closing a barrier does, indeed, cause us Feathers problems... have you considered that we're not the only Witch in the setting? Barriers are created and destroyed all the time.

To make a plausible case for our Barrier experimentation being a problem, not only do you have to explain why creating or destroying a barrier "lets Feathers in" (which, on its own, makes no damn sense), you also have to explain why our barrier in particular is different from all the thousands of others that are created and destroyed on any given day.

We haven't actually determined if our barrier is identical to normal witch barriers yet. It's also the closest tie to feathers we have to date. Until we can actually prove our barriers have nothing to do with feathers (and we can't. Not yet.) Then the precaution is warranted, and passing our barrier off as a normal witch barrier is just not going to sell right now.

And, honestly, that promise ain't gonna reassure anybody. It won't help us with our social check. It presents us with no benefit now, but will almost certainly make things harder for us down the line.

:Citation Needed:

I completely disagree. If we say we're going to stop doing the thing that's suspected of warping the timeline right now, why wouldn't it reassure Mami (who's freaked out enough after the incident) and Homura (who can't help but think of the barrier as a potential threat right now). You need a better argument then this.
 
We haven't actually determined if our barrier is identical to normal witch barriers yet. It's also the closest tie to feathers we have to date. Until we can actually prove our barriers have nothing to do with feathers (and we can't. Not yet.) Then the precaution is warranted, and passing our barrier off as a normal witch barrier is just not going to sell right now.



:Citation Needed:

I completely disagree. If we say we're going to stop doing the thing that's suspected of warping the timeline right now, why wouldn't it reassure Mami (who's freaked out enough after the incident) and Homura (who can't help but think of the barrier as a potential threat right now). You need a better argument then this.
Yeah, we can do other experiments in the mean time, but Barriers can afford to wait until a later date, we can still do them later though if the feathers Occurance was a one grime thing in that case.
 
my idea I've been harboring for a while is that Feathers can interfere with our magic
That's plausible, but now the dodgy reasoning has moved elsewhere: if it's about us and not about barriers in general, why would barrier magic be more helpful to Feathers than other magic? You do have an argument here, but I can't see it as more than wild speculation.

We haven't actually determined if our barrier is identical to normal witch barriers yet.
If someone were proposing some way of testing whether our barrier is different, maybe using that to look for Feathers and surprise her ahead of time, I'd be all for it. No one is. We're proposing promising to Mami that we will not test it again, probably for literally years given the speed at which the quest moves.

(We could have asked Kyubey if our barrier was different, even considering that we have to take everything he says with a giant mountain of salt, but instead we decided to piss him off for no reason. Oh well...)

Until we can actually prove our barriers have nothing to do with feathers (and we can't. Not yet.) Then the precaution is warranted
Can we be absolutely certain our barriers have nothing to do with it? No, we can't. But we do know that a significant connection is ridiculously implausible. Barrier creation has proven insanely powerful just in the one brief test we've already tried. With a power like this, we can save people. Many people. The onus is not on me to absolutely disprove your shadowrun; as you said, no one can. It's on you to prove that your shadowrun is so plausible that we need to stop trying to save people in order to placate it.

I completely disagree. If we say we're going to stop doing the thing that's suspected of warping the timeline right now, why wouldn't it reassure Mami (who's freaked out enough after the incident) and Homura (who can't help but think of the barrier as a potential threat right now). You need a better argument then this.
Both Homura and Mami are worried about bigger, broader problems than this. They're not spooked by Feathers specifically -- they're worried we'll get ourself killed, or get Madoka killed. This is a long, broad pattern of behavior, and one promise won't erase that whole pattern. Sure, maybe we won't die this way if we keep our promise, but we've proven many times over our resourcefulness in finding new ways to put our life in danger.

(But, then again, how can I object? Look at how well that last promise worked, the one that lost us use of our precog. Homura never worried again, did she? :p)
 
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Our Benefactor pt. 34
You choke back your instinctive apology, swallowing hard.

"It can't be," Mami blurts out. "It isn't. Right, Sabrina?" She turns a pleading look on you.

Homura's gaze remains fixed on you, amethyst eyes fixed steadily on you. Her breaths come slow and measured, and her stance is carefully neutral.

You shake your head slowly. "It doesn't feel like my powers," you say, holding the feather up for them to see.

Mami reaches a hand out, stretching across you, and hesitates a moment. "S-Sabrina? May I?"

"Sure," you say, handing it over to Mami.

She takes the feather and raises it to her eye level, the slightest tremor betraying her discomfort. After a moment of intense scrutiny, she speaks again, voice soft. "It... seems normal to me." She holds the feather out to Homura with a small, hopeful smile.

The time traveller's eyes flick down to the feather for a moment, before returning to regarding you in stony silence. She shakes her head, and Mami's smile fades, the hand holding the feather dropping back to her side.

You force yourself to straighten and meet Homura's eyes, clear blue against faded, tired lilac. Splashes of colour in a drained world. "I don't think it's my powers or I, Homura. It... Remember I mentioned at lunch, that I made a Barrier? I made the same Barrier, and in the same way, earlier this morning, and I didn't encounter anything unexpected."

A flicker of a frown, chased by realisation washes across Mami's face, and she nods encouragingly at you.

You continue. "But... Homura, Mami, I... In any case, no more Barriers. Not until I find out what all these feathers are about."

"M-maybe..." Mami starts to say something, before trailing off with a sharp shake of her head.

"Mami?" you ask, giving her a quick hug and an encouraging smile.

She takes a deep breath, looking up at you. "Maybe it's something like a lightning rod? When y-you make a Barrier, some... Witch powers are, are, drawn in, s-somehow? L-like calls to like?"

Homura's attention shifts to Mami. Neutral, silent, barely moving. Almost a statue, for all the emotion she's displaying, and nearly as still as everything in the frozen world of the timestop.

Mami notices, frowning at Homura. "I... don't you think so, Homura? S-Sabrina?"

[] Write-in

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An interesting suggestion, but a short update.
 
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Oh crap! Well, this is going to be hard to get out of, well I will be waiting for a vote, from someone who knows what to do, until then!
 
"But... Homura, Mami, I... In any case, no more Barriers. Not until find out what all these feathers are about."
The problem with this promise is that it says that we won't make any Barriers until we can prove that they have nothing to do with "Feathers". Which is something that will be extremely difficult to do without experimenting with the Barriers. It's a Catch-22 that effectively means swearing off all Barrier research until we conclusively determine (from other sources) that the Barrier doesn't have anything to do with "Feathers". Which probably means that we can't make any Barriers until after we defeat "Feathers".

I really wish we hadn't made this promise.
 
Huh. Mami's theory actually makes sense to me, though I don't know what she means by "like calls to like".

Our wish was to control grief, presumably, that means we have perfect control over grief but we never did specify that in the wish.
 
And now Homura's probably debating the merits of killing Sabrina. Fantastic.

Stop doing this, please. For shadowrunning is distasteful.

Sabrina has show how much valuable is for Homura despite her... peculiarities. Jumping from "reliable but strange" to "too much for a threat, should I?" is a jump to high to make and so quickly.

Anyway, should we consider Mami's suggestion? We got nothing for now. :\
 
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