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Right, pulling the Nagisa bit with the expectation that we'll be able to give it the attention it deserves in a future update.
 
Should we maybe add some more hopeful notes about the Constellation, to make sure we don't scare him? He needs to know the danger involved to show why we needed to act, but he also needs to know that we knew we would come back to her.

While Iowa was a threat we couldn't ignore, it was also a fight we knew we could win. We out numbered them about 2 to 1 iirc (I don't remember exactly who all participated) and as dangerous as the Iowa group was they didn't have anything that we didn't have a counter for. Grief economics means that coalitions on the scale of the Constellation are completely unprecedented in the magical girl world, making us one of if not the single strongest unified group around despite our age.

It's a fine line to come across as self assured without sounding arrogant, but I think it's a line worth treading.
 
Torgamous said:
I don't think Sabrina is capable of discussing Constellation without sounding hopeful.
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True enough lol, but I think my point still stands.

I think that along with our explanation of the facts of life of the magical world we should mention that we're working on solutions, and that the Constellation genuinely has the power needed to make things better.
 
... huh. Apparently I never posted the disclaimer for no update last week, sorry about that - had it typed and apparently failed to actually hit the post button. Whoops. That said, I'm really sorry, but the update isn't going to be this week, either, my energy levels are once more out of whack, I'm sorry, and Nagisa's uncle is being uncooperative.

This weekend!
 
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