Some notes about
@Shrooms 's plan
Apologize for lashing out about Jashinism.
- Hazou's still getting used to the idea of working with Jashin. It's easier picturing him as an ally than something to venerate.
- Yuno/Hazou publicly supporting Jashin is politically inconvenient to Hazou's goals (therefore inconvenient for Jashin's plans for him.) Leaf isn't ready for Jashinism yet. Hazou's still trying to persuade them to Uplift, which will likely take a few more years.
I don't think this will work: Yuno's mission is to increase Hazou's devotion. She will
not like Hazou backing down on Jashinism because of
politics. I agree with the not-bolded parts though. Leaf is not ready, we will be shooting ourselves in the foot by outing ourselves so soon. We will be heretics, and all religions will oppose us. If we want Jashin to win, we must play the long game: we should be creating the conditions for a swift conversion of the population. For example, fomenting frustration with other faiths and weakening them
eg: how about offing the Hagoromo at some point.
I think the description of Jashin being an ally to us is fair, but could we word that sentence differently; for example:
"Hazou is still getting used to the idea of
implementing Jashin's plans rather than simply his own. "
Ask for Yuno's help representing Hazou's aspect.
- Hazou's branch will kill those who threaten innocent lives.
- They will promote improved quality of life for as many people as possible.
- They will encourage voluntary births - willing parents are better at raising successful children.
Not sure if the children's success holds any value for jashinists. I think it might be more effective to say "We will be promoting births, meaning more lives for Jashin to claim"
I think asuma was just trying hard to mimic the welcoming third hokage. And oro unconscious affection for the third felt more cooperative
That's what I believed before rereading the passage, but it doesn't feel like that: Any conscious Oro would see the manipulation and probably be very angry; in truth, it feels like he forgot he even made a preliminary report a second ago. How could that be natural, or caused by unconscious affection?
Edit:
[X] Training Plan (Kei): Deceit to 20