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[X] Training Keiko: Alertness First
Alertness 31 -> 39 (284 XP)
Shadow Clone 30 -> 35 (165XP)
Rocket Jump! (10XP)
Physique 27 -> 28 (28 Pangolin XP)

Save 8 XP.

Don't know about bumping this over 40 bc of pyramids, it'll mess with FOOM. Once she hits first detour, it should be fine to bump it further

As Paper pointed on Discord however, we're retroactively voting in what she's been training this whole time. Plus, investing in more FOOM means investing in more hours Snowflake gets to exist, so keep this in mind when you vote
 
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[X] Training Keiko: Alertness First
Alertness 31 -> 39 (284 XP)
Shadow Clone 30 -> 35 (165XP)
Rocket Jump! (10XP)
Physique 27 -> 28 (28 Pangolin XP)

Save 8 XP.

Don't know about bumping this over 40 bc of pyramids, it'll mess with FOOM. Once she hits first detour, it should be fine to bump it further

As Paper pointed on Discord however, we're retroactively voting in what she's been training this whole time. Plus, investing in more FOOM means investing in more hours Snowflake gets to exist, so keep this in mind when you vote
Also:
  1. Alertness 39 means we still reliably lose initiative against chuunin level opponents (i.e., in many ways this is just a cosmetic change)
  2. Keiko earned 0.4x after the last update. With Noburi around, she can get 0.5x, and with the koi pond around she can get 0.7x. But if the current plan passes, she gets 0.9x (which is a lot). That's a massive improvement that's hard to justify passing up. She can detour right after this training plan for some Alertness, or more practically wait for Detour 1 since it'll be hard for her to get to 40+ otherwise.
  3. SC 40 is great for Snowflake -- she can last an entire day! And like IV points out, potentially do things that aren't training (12 hour duration vs 3 3-hour training blocks gives her 3 free hours even on regular training days).
 
I have made wordcount optimizations which I do not feel significantly impact the legibility of either plan. The changes haven't been colourized because they're spread so evenly throughout the plan that it would be almost entirely colourized.

'Welcome home' has technically increased in wordcount but the Kumokogo sections are now mirrored across the plans.

'Kabuto gets' has 20 free words. I'd love it if we can ask about getting a Turtle to Shark. And maybe writing a will before we go talk to Kabuto on the off-chance Orochimaru is visiting and we fail to be boring.

I've made exactly one edit I feel is substantive, which is that we use the word 'ask' regarding Haru and his problem-solving technique. IMO it changes the tone substantially.

[X] Kabuto Gets Some New Friends

[X] Welcome Home, Here's Some Lists
Word Count: 299
  • GOKETSU-ONLY MEETING
    • Distribute DRAGONWAR reports.
      • Noburi/Keiko: thoughts on Ami's Crusader idea?
    • If the Arachnid scroll it isn't in a Rock fort we have no leads. Hazo doesn't know what to do next in either situation.
      • Discuss other options to get Kagome a scroll. Otter or Kraken seem most promising.
        • Would Kagome be able to contract in time to affect DRAGONWAR? If not, Hazou prefers Akane is next. Thoughts?
    • Orochimaru hasn't been to Sealmaster meetings. Is it worth trying to tackle DRAGONWAR without him?
  • Kumokogo
    • Bring HOWS to Arachnids, explain lifespan and how to tell if they need replacing.
    • Pitch Ami's Crusader idea. She's not familiar with 7th path, how could it be improved?
      • Condor Scouts should visit soon to verify Dragons exist, on Enma's recommendation. Pardon us if this was rude.
    • Describe landmarks around Rock fort, verify it's the same island/lake Kumokogo described.
      • Rock would capture/kill Hazou on sight. If the Scroll is there, Hazou likely can't access it.
      • If they have it, why they haven't signed it yet? Hopefully they train a Sealmaster...
    • Explain what Hazou thinks will be needed to recreate Seal for study. Manage research time expectations.
      • Any lore/history helps. How long have arachnids guarded it? Did Kumokogo see its creation/meet the Sage?
    • If the plan to reach the Great Seal is the same as before, Hazou has timed Implosion Seals for the kamikaze troops to wear.
      • Show proper respect.
      • Take time to teach seal activation.
      • How frequently can Great Seal be approached with this strategy?
      • Hazou isn't expecting much, but Implosion seals could damage lungs if detonated near Dragons' chests.
    • Apply HOWS to Great Seal, ensure they work, get out.
  • Other (Offscreen)
    • Ask Noburi where he wants training to go. Is our suggestion okay?
    • Ask Haru to stop murdering yaks.
[X] Kabuto Gets Some New Friends
Word Count: 279
  • Kabuto
    • Don't violate OPSEC/reveal information above his clearance.
    • The SSSSS will be joining Leaf soon. Their assistance was mission critical: this was a concession.
      • We wanted to notify you - they aren't fond of you.
    • Here's the most recent, highest quality copy of the Great Seal available and an updated report on DRAGONWAR.
      • Your insight and Orochimaru's would be very helpful if it is convenient.
  • Kumokogo
    • Bring HOWS to Arachnids, explain lifespan and how to tell if they need replacing.
    • Pitch Ami's Crusader idea. She's not familiar with 7th path, how could it be improved?
      • Condor Scouts should visit soon to verify Dragons exist, on Enma's recommendation. Pardon us if this was rude.
    • Describe landmarks around Rock fort, verify it's the same island/lake Kumokogo described.
      • Rock would capture/kill Hazou on sight. If the Scroll is there, Hazou likely can't access it.
      • If they have it, why they haven't signed it yet? Hopefully they train a Sealmaster...
    • Explain what Hazou thinks will be needed to recreate Seal for study. Manage research time expectations.
      • Any lore/history helps. How long have arachnids guarded it? Did Kumokogo see its creation/meet the Sage?
    • If the plan to reach the Great Seal is the same as before, Hazou has timed Implosion Seals for the kamikaze troops to wear.
      • Show proper respect.
      • Take time to teach seal activation.
      • How frequently can Great Seal be approached with this strategy?
      • Hazou isn't expecting much, but Implosion seals could damage lungs if detonated near Dragons' chests.
    • Apply HOWS to Great Seal, ensure they work, get out.
  • Other (Offscreen)
    • Ask Noburi what he wants to train. Is our suggestion okay?
    • Ask Haru to stop murdering yaks.
 
Here's my plan from last cycle, I'll probably write a different plan tomorrow though.

[X] Welcome Home, Here's Some Lists
Word Count: 299
  • GOKETSU-ONLY MEETING
    • Distribute DRAGONWAR reports.
      • Noburi/Keiko: thoughts on Ami's Crusader idea?
    • If the Arachnid scroll isn't in Rock fort we have no leads. Hazo doesn't know what to do next either way.
      • Discuss other options to get Kagome a scroll. Otter or Kraken seem most promising.
        • Can Kagome contract in time to affect DRAGONWAR? If not, Hazou prefers Akane next. Thoughts?
    • Orochimaru hasn't attended Sealmaster meetings. Is it worth trying to tackle DRAGONWAR without him?
  • Kumokogo
    • Bring HOWS to Arachnids, explain lifespan and how to tell if they need replacing.
    • Pitch Ami's Crusader idea. She's unfamiliar with 7th path, how could it be improved?
      • Condor Scouts should visit soon to verify Dragons exist, on Enma's recommendation. Pardon us if this was rude.
    • Describe landmarks around Rock fort, verify it's the same island/lake Kumokogo described.
      • Rock would capture/kill Hazou on sight. If the Scroll is there, Hazou likely can't access it.
      • If they have it, why haven't they signed it? Hopefully they train a Sealmaster...
    • Explain what Hazou thinks will be needed to recreate Seal for study. Manage research time expectations.
      • Any lore/history helps. How long have arachnids guarded it? Did Kumokogo see its creation/meet the Sage?
    • If the plan to reach the Great Seal is the same as before, Hazou has timed Implosion Seals for the kamikaze troops to wear.
      • Show proper respect.
      • Take time to teach seal activation.
      • How frequently can Great Seal be approached with this strategy?
      • Hazou isn't expecting much, but Implosion seals could damage lungs if detonated near Dragons' chests.
    • Apply HOWS to Great Seal, ensure they work, get out.
  • Other (Offscreen)
    • Ask Noburi where he wants training to go. Is our suggestion okay?
    • Ask Haru to stop murdering yaks. Asuma noticed, he's pissed. We're not exactly happy either.

[X] Kabuto Gets Some New Friends
Word Count: 286
  • Kabuto
    • Don't violate OPSEC/reveal information above his clearance.
    • The SSSSS will be joining Leaf soon. Their assistance was mission critical: this was a concession.
      • We wanted to notify you - they aren't fond of you.
    • Here's the most recent, highest quality copy of the Great Seal available and an updated report on DRAGONWAR.
      • Your insight and Orochimaru's would be very helpful if it is convenient.
  • Kumokogo
    • Bring HOWS to Arachnids, explain lifespan and how to tell if they need replacing.
    • Pitch Ami's Crusader idea. She's unfamiliar with 7th path, how could it be improved?
      • Condor Scouts should visit soon to verify Dragons exist, on Enma's recommendation. Pardon us if this was rude.
    • Describe landmarks around Rock fort, verify it's the same island/lake Kumokogo described.
      • Rock would capture/kill Hazou on sight. If the Scroll is there, Hazou likely can't access it.
      • If they have it, why haven't they signed it? Hopefully they train a Sealmaster...
    • Explain what Hazou thinks will be needed to recreate Seal for study. Manage research time expectations.
      • Any lore/history helps. How long have arachnids guarded it? Did Kumokogo see its creation/meet the Sage?
    • If the plan to reach the Great Seal is the same as before, Hazou has timed Implosion Seals for the kamikaze troops to wear.
      • Show proper respect.
      • Take time to teach seal activation.
      • How frequently can Great Seal be approached with this strategy?
      • Hazou isn't expecting much, but Implosion seals could damage lungs if detonated near Dragons' chests.
    • Apply HOWS to Great Seal, ensure they work, get out.
  • Other (Offscreen)
    • Ask Noburi what he wants to train. Is our suggestion okay?
    • Ask Haru to stop murdering yaks. Asuma noticed, he's pissed. We're not exactly happy either.
Updated, thanks FS
 
[X] Training Keiko: Alertness First

[X] Welcome Home, Here's Some Lists
 
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[X] Training Keiko: Alertness Second

Shadow Clone 30 -> 40 (355 XP)
Alertness 31 - > 34 (454 XP)
Rocket Jump! (464 XP)
Physique 27 -> 28 (28 Pangolin XP)

Save 3 XP
 
Question about the seal structure:
Does it seem like it could be composed of a collection of planar seals with interlinking connectors, or is it more fundamentally 3 dimensional?

I presume the latter, because the former seems much more approachable.

Re: deathworld portal
It may be worth investigating whether the Nara libraries have any recorded observations by chakra sensors of the sites from which Summoners were reverse summoned to the 7P. Since they return to the spot they were summoned from, it may be that there is also a "slightly open" portal or some kind of detectable chakra residue left there as an anchor.
 
Glad my fears about Asuma reacting negatively to the rift mission were unfounded. And Shika is the best.

The mood of the Gōketsu Clan reunion breakfast was strained. Hazō had had to give Yuno a formal clan head order not to murder Mari, which was not the kind of thing he suspected most clan heads had to deal with. Mari and Keiko were even less on speaking terms now that the mission was over, and Noburi twitched whenever Yuno so much as looked in Satsuko's direction. As a small mercy, Noburi's natural charm seemed to have finally won Keiko over during the course of their journey back, or maybe she'd just decided that it was time to get back into the habit of tolerating foolish younger siblings.

Still, it was good to see everyone back after what felt like five months away, and there was only so much the ominous clouds hanging over his family's heads could do in the face of a bouncing, welcoming Akane. Kagome-sensei too was full of questions for the returnees, even if most of them concerned the Yoshida's tactics and capabilities. Atomu struggled to get a word in edgeways, even though, as someone who'd never been to Isan, he was the most fascinated to learn more. Even Snowflake was present, as Noburi revelled in his restored access to all the chakra he could eat. (The clan was still broke, but Hazō wasn't going to begrudge Noburi how he spent his share of the mission payment.)

As the breakfast drew to a close, Keiko, next to him, began to fidget nervously. After a few seconds, Snowflake reached over and squeezed her hand.

"If I may have your attention, please?"

Keiko waited for everyone to put down their spoons. Hazō remembered the last time this had happened. Had Keiko acquired a new girlfriend in Isan? Was she going to publicly swear a blood oath of vengeance against Mari? Was she about to give a speech praising Hazō's brilliant planning that had secured the Leaf-Isan alliance and possibly saved their lives?

"I... have a request," Keiko began, which ruled out all of those options—at least unless she had fallen for Yuno during the Isan mission and was about to ask her out. Disturbingly, that became more plausible the more Hazō thought about it given the forced proximity, the emotional and physical isolation, the many opportunities for the suspension bridge effect to trigger, and the many things they shared in common. For example, both girls had a troubled childhood (and a single point of emotional dependence to get them through it), a naturally serious attitude, a love of edged weapons, and a willingness to murder their loved ones at the drop of a hat. Now that Hazō had seen the possibility, he could not unsee it.

"Obviously," Keiko said, so far addressing no one in particular, "please feel free to ignore me if you consider it unreasonable or inconvenient, and I entirely understand if you would rather not... but would you mind, on a purely experimental basis..."—she hesitated—"addressing me as Kei?"

I sympathize with Yuno, but I'm glad Hazou won't tolerate her impulse here. I really have to remember to ask if Chakra beasts massacres are enough to tide Yuno over, or is putting off the killing of a human a must Yuno will inevitably have to occasionally quench.

What the hell does she even think of Hidan?

The atmosphere in the house was expectedly chilly. Sad to see Kei and Mari are doing even more poorly. I like how big of a deal her nickname is to her and to Snowflake is. Her identity issues are fascinating, if not a bit frustrating to deal with. Like seeing the development though.

"Good morning, Your Lordship," Motokazu said, bowing to precisely the correct degree required of a man who was superior in age, experience, and military rank but inferior in political rank.

"Good morning, Motokazu. You have the gratitude of the Nara for your attendance today."

"The price you offered was appealing, Your Lordship. Although the mission details were quite...restricted." He pulled out a copy of the mission scroll and read it off in full:

Posted By: Lord Nara
Qualifications: Possession of the Byakugan and experience doing extremely detailed analysis of a specified region
Open Mission?: No. Candidates must apply with Lord Nara personally
Mission Rank: A
Price: 2x standard rate
Location: Non-national territory, approximately 4-5 days away from Leaf
Duration: Travel time plus up to 1 week onsite
Details: The Nara are seeking to hire 1 Byakugan-bearing jōnin or senior chūnin with specialization in investigation for a classified A-rank mission. You will be accompanied by 2 Nara-chosen chūnin, one of whom is mission leader and will have authority on the ground. You will be required to defend the party if attacked and, once onsite, use your Byakugan for extremely precise detection, analysis, and mapping under the direction of the mission leader.
NOTE: Mission leader is currently on medical restriction. He will be carried in a litter but you are not required to serve as bearer.
NOTE: Mission leader has generated substantial social conflict in the past. You will be expected to maintain professionalism and fully support the mission despite frustration and/or personal feelings.
NOTE: Additional specialists of varying ranks may be attached dependent on their availability.

"The details of the mission will be revealed to the person hired for it," Lord Nara said calmly. "I assume you do not object to a short test?"

"Of course not, sir. Please, go ahead."

"Within the sphere of your Byakugan, name as many out of place elements as you can locate. There is no time limit."

Motokazu raised an eyebrow. That was an extremely unusual test. He closed his natural eyes, slowed his breathing, and activated his bloodline.

Was confused a little about where this was going until I remembered we did let Shika in on the secret. I'm guessing Shika and Asuma have been in talks about the potential of the rift, if it works, and the opportunity has now arrived since the end of the world might the push need to exploit this.

"Lord Gōketsu is the mission leader."

The Hyūga dignity does not allow its bearers to scream. Nor to attack the heads of other clans.

Ha! I cracked a big ole smile here. I can only imagine the look on his face must have been worth it.

"Ah, c'mon, Moto," Sasuke said. "No fighting in the field. You can relax."

"I am relaxed, Lord Uchiha."

"Leave him alone, Nobby, Sasuke," Hazō said. He yawned, although it was interrupted halfway through by a wince.

"Hey, how come you're yawning, Mr I've Been Lying in a Hammock All Day?" Noburi said with a grin. "The rest of us have been running our feet off carrying your lazy ass."

"He's not lazy!" Kagome-sensei snapped. "He's injured! Can't you see the crutches and—"

"He knows, sensei. He was just teasing.
Yay! Another Sasuke scene.
Why is he so chill here? I guess he likes Goketsu well enough
"I am glad that Lord Asuma did not require us to go after those Isan ninja," Yuno said, her voice hesitant and all too clear that she was trying to fill an awkward silence.

Hyūga looked up in interest. "You were on the Isan mission?"

She nodded. "Yes, it's because I'm—"

"I'm sorry," Hazō interjected. "Yuno, Hyūga, I apologize but I'm actually not sure what the classification is on this subject. Could I ask that we leave it until we get home and I'm able to get clearer instructions?"
Interesting that Asuma had us lay off Isan.
"Traveling with you is not what I expected," Hyūga said out of nowhere.

"Oh?" Hazō said. "How so?"

Hyūga waved at the seal from which his extra-wide, extra-deep, extra-full bento box had come. "The food. The chakra water for long-distance endurance. The...tents." He gestured to the Gōketsu mini-cabins. Six feet long, three feet high and wide, heavily built, with a thick mattress inside, Jiraiya's Awesome Daybright Lantern seals on walls and ceiling, slidable windows with heavy clasps to keep out attacking animals and insertable wire mesh to keep out insects when there were no attacking animals, and storage seals inside for storing snacks, water, empty bottle for when nighttime visits to the facilitree were disincentivized by beasts roaming the camp, and a variety of other amenities. They were carried in pieces across several storage seals and then slotted together in seconds with steel bracings inside.

As far as field kits go, I wonder if Goketsu is at the cream of the crop? These field setups would do great for the clan as a whole. I believe we also wanted to change the seal load-out for the clan as a whole, so this would be great to standardize amongst them.

"About seven months ago, me and several other ninja were here. I got in a fight with a missing-nin named Daizen. He used a lightning jutsu which damaged many of my seals. One or more of the seals experienced catastrophic failure. The result, as you can see, was the eruption of a massive granite tube from which spouted fountains of lava. The tube pushed me backwards but it hit Daizen in the chest. This resulted in him being crushed and then buried in lava.

"In addition, three portals were torn open. The one of interest was about...here." He scratched a mark in the soil with his crutch. "It's hard to say exactly but that's as close as I can recall." It would have been closer if he'd been able to replay his movements using the Iron Nerve, but that wasn't an option. His bloodline was working again but the injuries meant that his body physically could not execute the necessary actions.

"And what came through this portal?"

Hazō took one hand off his crutch so he could waffle it back and forth. "It's more complicated than that. On the other side of the portal was a beach. Daizen appeared in midair above the ocean, fell in, and died. He then reappeared at the same point and the process repeated."

Yes, that's exactly what happened. Nothing else. And no one else was present either. Can't believe it was seven months ago that this occured. But I don't know how we could have possibly came back without the massive win that was our alliance with Isan.

Hazō blinked at receiving an actual, albeit stiff and formal, apology from a Hyūga. Fortunately, he had become socially clueful enough not to comment on the surprise. "Based on the manner of Daizen's death, I think the ocean was highly acidic—he was...dissolving? Burning? Something. Anyway, he wasn't dying of drowning. I couldn't let him keep being tortured like that, so I used skywalkers to enter the rift and save Daizen. I brought him back out, unharmed."

Hyūga waited. "And?" he said at last.

Hazō licked his lips nervously. "As best I can tell..." He shook his head. "Never mind. I want to find that portal and reopen it. Your job is to tell us anything you can that will give us a place to start. If you can locate the exact spot where the rift was then we have some experiments that might give us more information. What can we do to support you on this?"

Burning acid and excruciatingly painful deaths don't crack a Hyuuga's composure, but working for a Goketsu will. Noted.

"Smart to bring Sasuke," Noburi said, once they were out of plausible earshot. "If it was just Hyūga he could have pretended there was nothing to see and we'd have no way of knowing differently. With Sasuke here, the honor of the Hyūga is on the line. He needs to find it before Sasuke does or admit that the Sharingan is better."

Hazō nodded. "It's why I'll take his report first. I'm just hoping that Sasuke can actually find something or Hyūga isn't going to feel as much pressure to compete."
:drevil:
I did not even think of this dynamic when having a Hyuuga or Uchiha was proposed, but it worked out perfectly.
"More than Mr White Eyes," Sasuke said. He walked over to the spot that Hyūga had indicated and traced a region with his hand. "There's a disruption in the air currents through here. It's really faint. Even with the Sharingan I could only see it when the sun was at exactly the right angle just as a gust went through. The dust didn't move correctly."
I will vote for more inclusion of Sasuke Uchiha scenes in the future. Also, Mr White Eyes is now a thing. The Goketsu must use this term along with their more unique and colorful vocab.

I am deeply disappointed at the minimal usage of the word 'stinker' or any it's variations.

Hyūga nodded somber acknowledgement. Sasuke laughed without taking his whirling red gaze away from the blank lying across Hazō's clone's arm. "Get on with it, man. I've got twenty ryō on the line with your brother that says you blow up."
I knew I liked him for some reason.
 
[X] Kabuto Gets Some New Friends
Word Count: 286
  • Kabuto
    • Don't violate OPSEC/reveal information above his clearance.
    • The SSSSS will be joining Leaf soon. Their assistance was mission critical: this was a concession.
      • We wanted to notify you - they aren't fond of you.
    • Here's the most recent, highest quality copy of the Great Seal available and an updated report on DRAGONWAR.
      • Your insight and Orochimaru's would be very helpful if it is convenient.
  • Kumokogo
    • Bring HOWS to Arachnids, explain lifespan and how to tell if they need replacing.
    • Pitch Ami's Crusader idea. She's unfamiliar with 7th path, how could it be improved?
      • Condor Scouts should visit soon to verify Dragons exist, on Enma's recommendation. Pardon us if this was rude.
    • Describe landmarks around Rock fort, verify it's the same island/lake Kumokogo described.
      • Rock would capture/kill Hazou on sight. If the Scroll is there, Hazou likely can't access it.
      • If they have it, why haven't they signed it? Hopefully they train a Sealmaster...
    • Explain what Hazou thinks will be needed to recreate Seal for study. Manage research time expectations.
      • Any lore/history helps. How long have arachnids guarded it? Did Kumokogo see its creation/meet the Sage?
    • If the plan to reach the Great Seal is the same as before, Hazou has timed Implosion Seals for the kamikaze troops to wear.
      • Show proper respect.
      • Take time to teach seal activation.
      • How frequently can Great Seal be approached with this strategy?
      • Hazou isn't expecting much, but Implosion seals could damage lungs if detonated near Dragons' chests.
    • Apply HOWS to Great Seal, ensure they work, get out.
  • Other (Offscreen)
    • Ask Noburi what he wants to train. Is our suggestion okay?
    • Ask Haru to stop murdering yaks. Asuma noticed, he's pissed. We're not exactly happy either.

Could i suggest asking Dogs/Toads if they have any training jutsu? Because the sooner we learn those, the better.
[X] Kabuto Gets Some New Friends
 
Why are we giving Kabuto a heads-up, again? He's not an ally. He's not someone who's position we need to look out for. I don't think warning him is actually harmful (probably), but it isn't helpful to us, either. If this is just an add-on to giving Oro the updated version of the great seal diagram, then it can be painlessly cut to save wordcount (and avoid extending Hazou's conversation with a hyper-slytherin sociopath), and also, Oro should already have the diagram because my last plan had Hazou distribute it to the leaf sealmasters.

E: Like, I could understand if this section were trying to subtly get him indebted to Hazou, but I don't get the impression that that's the angle here. In fact, I don't get the impression that we have an angle here at all.
 
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E: Like, I could understand if this section were trying to subtly get him indebted to Hazou, but I don't get the impression that that's the angle here. In fact, I don't get the impression that we have an angle here at all
We're about to ask him for a favor, doing one for him first is one way to soften him up (even if he sees through it, the advice is still helpful).

Also, we've supposedly been sharing stuff with orochimaru this whole time, this is just another way to get him to hopefully actually look at it
 
We're about to ask him for a favor, doing one for him first is one way to soften him up (even if he sees through it, the advice is still helpful).

Also, we've supposedly been sharing stuff with orochimaru this whole time, this is just another way to get him to hopefully actually look at it

It doesn't really feel compelling as a favor or that Kabuto would be likely to see it as a favor.
 
We're about to ask him for a favor, doing one for him first is one way to soften him up (even if he sees through it, the advice is still helpful).

Also, we've supposedly been sharing stuff with orochimaru this whole time, this is just another way to get him to hopefully actually look at it

I'd be shocked if he hadn't looked at it. The universe is where Oro keeps his stuff.
 
Didn't the Pangolin have to figure out how to activate seals on their own rather than be taught by Keiko?
Maybe Faflec knows? Im surprised they aren't regarded as heretics. Both they and the Crows know Sealing when they shouldn't. Actually, I wonder if they cut a side deal with the Crows to learn sealing from them?
 
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I like how big of a deal her nickname is to her and to Snowflake is. Her identity issues are fascinating, if not a bit frustrating to deal with. Like seeing the development though.

This was alluded as far back as the Chuunin Exam Arc, when we see Ami's pov of the Kei/Ami reunion (we see Ami talk about timers and favors and one action accomplishing multiple goals). I forget the exact wording, Ami says something to the effect of "Keiko could longer afford to be Kei."

I'm still examining what this means (possibly returning to a "truer" version of herself, finally trusting Uplift Family with her "real" name, being brave enough to allow herself to be vulnerable with her Uplift Family in a new way? Something else?) but I'm tentatively hopeful.
 
I feel sad because the entire intra-Gouketsu situation is bad enough that we need to have a serious heart-to-heart with Yuno, Mari, and Keiko (probably missing someone here), and SOON, before someone gets actually killed, but my ability to write such a plan is worth fuck all.
 
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