Eh, they all do that. Both of the leading options and mine all contain roughly 30 seconds of talking; the only one that doesn't is... Higure's? I think he's the only one who is still voting to continue beating our head against a wall, if he didn't change his vote when I wasn't paying attention.
Line two gives her an order with "don't bother to" and comes over as arrogant- maybe reword? Line one's wording could use work tonewise too if you want to. Just my two cents.Hm, so these seem to be the leading approaches for a "parting shot" to dealing with Sasa. The thing is, I'm not sure either one leaves us with a lasting impression, especially after five minutes of being annoyingly pushy. Do you think it would be better to tease that we have an ulterior motive for talking to her when we leave? After all, she seemed most interested in us when Sabrina was a mystery, not when she was dismissing her mysteries as being "complicated". Something like:
[X] Okay, clearly you don't want to talk; I get that. But the way you've communicated that tells me that you match the profile I'm looking for, that you're more important than you know.
[X] I'll probably be around here again tomorrow. Don't bother looking me up, though; I'm pretty sure I don't have a legal identity to find.
[X] Talk to Kyoko when you're finished with Sasa
-[X] Um, yeah, sorry about that.
-[X] Be right there.
[X] Head over to Kyoko
The only positive thing I can think of is that now Sasa might be ticked off enough that she won't want to talk to Kyubey, either. Wouldn't that be an interesting way to prevent a contract?
Throwing Sasa under the bus isn't right. Do you want to deal with a crazy, hostile Sasa later? If not, we need to handle this as best we can, even if it's not the fastest.
You make it sound like one mundane annoying encounter is going to cause her to have a genocidal rage for Sabrina later.
Constructive criticism involving that her performance should probably be less destructive to the environment around her.
You make it sound like Kyubey's going to send all the Magical Girls of Japan after Sabrina. Kyubey probably doesn't give as much of a shit as you guys think he does.
And how would she even know about Yuma? This is very, very unlikely.
Yeah, you're right about that. How about:
The point is to be a mysterious stranger, possibly a competitor to QB when he comes sniffing around. Sasa seemed to be most interested in Sabrina when she was a mystery, not when she was being arrogantly dismissive of her own mysterious-ness by calling it "complicated" (wouldn't you be?), so let's play up our mysterious-ness and then flee. Leave her wanting more, so to speak.
Sasa is the poster child for overreacting hilariously and in a petty way. If it was anyone else, I'd be being paranoid, but Sasa is probably the most petty character in the entire canon.
Constructive criticism involving that her performance should probably be less destructive to the environment around her.
You make it sound like Kyubey's going to send all the Magical Girls of Japan after Sabrina. Kyubey probably doesn't give as much of a shit as you guys think he does.
Oh no, a girl who's completely justified in disliking us after we pestered her for about 5-10 minutes is going to turn our entire world upside down. Someone sound the alarms. If she contracts, she'll go from a moody girl into a shit-tier Meguca whose mind control is so bad that it gets outclassed by another Magical Girl whose wish didn't even involve it in the slightest (Satomi Usagi from Kazumi Magica). She only knows who Sabrina is. She doesn't know who her friends are at all.
Yes? I was disputing your use of the qualifier "a bit".
Why would it contract a shit guca like Sasa for that then.
Well, you know, I'm still looking for people to vote for my idea...
Mmm... I, ah... I don't know, mmm... Difficult choice, I mean, come on...
It makes more FUN for us.Oh god that second red line's Sasa rage bait.
Why add lines that'll drive Sasa up the wall?
Oh god that second red line's Sasa rage bait.
Why add lines that'll drive Sasa up the wall?
