Kine's would be fine with me for a vote. Too many of the votes are really similar anyway, so a good ol' bandwagon would sit right with me. Same objection as Mura, though.
 
So wait, Kine: what exactly are you advocating again? We would like to tell Hitomi the situation, as understood by Mami. Nothing more, nothing less. I get that we may be going a little fast, but that's no reason not to start saying these things now. We want to make sure all pertinent information gets across, so we're telling her. What's wrong with that?
If I can try to sum up...

1) Note that Madoka's and Sayaka's introduction to magical girls was (somewhat) accidental, to avoid trying to create an answer to the 'special' question. Answering that is a convoluted mess that doesn't help anything.
2) Note that there's plenty of story behind why we're all together, even though Madoka and Sayaka aren't magical girls. We aren't singling her out, but at the same time there will be plenty of time to talk about it later. It's not immediately relevant.
3) Focus on the friendship aspect, of both why she was excluded, and why we are trying to explain things to her now.
4) Not focus on the details of the magical girl mechanics, because it's been done to death, and because I think it would be better to let Madoka and Sayaka be the ones to lead that conversation (though we can chip in as needed), for a variety of reasons.
 
Something like this, as a sub-item to the general discussion at the end?
[x] "Madoka and Sayaka kind of got dragged into it by accident. That's how they met Mami."
[x] "Then I met them due to circumstances around when I arrived here."
[x] "And Homura met Mami earlier, and... well, lots of things have happened that tied us all together."
[x] "The important thing, though, is that through all of this, you've never really been directly affected, so we've been trying to avoid dragging you into the mess that is the magical girl world."
[x] "However it's not fair to them, or to you, to constantly have to tiptoe around this massive secret. You're their friend — our friend — which means we don't want to hide things from you."
[x] "This isn't a recruitment speech or anything; we're not trying to drag you into being a magical girl. This is just us coming clean about some of the issues that a friend should know about."
[x] Help answer any questions she might have (though let the others take the lead where appropriate, rather than dominating the conversation), with the understanding that we're still wanting to visit Kyousuke before dinner.
-[x] Mention that, though you're not very good at it, you are capable of some minor magical healing. If possible, we'd like to try healing Hitomi's arm and Kyousuke's hand before we head back home tonight.
 
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I would not say 'not very good at it.'. That would make Hitomi and Kyousuke nervous. Not specialized in healing magic is preferable.
Hm. Would still like to give some sort of nod to the vast gulf between someone like Yuma (regrowing multiple limbs in a matter of seconds) and Sabrina (taking days to regrow one arm). 'Not specialized' doesn't quite convey that. Don't want to say that we're 'bad' at it, just...

Gimme a few minutes.
 
Hm. Would still like to give some sort of nod to the vast gulf between someone like Yuma (regrowing multiple limbs in a matter of seconds) and Sabrina (taking days to regrow one arm). 'Not specialized' doesn't quite convey that. Don't want to say that we're 'bad' at it, just...

Gimme a few minutes.

How about Torgamous's suggestion? It's simple and to the point.
 
How about Torgamous's suggestion? It's simple and to the point.
Better, but feels a bit awkward to phrase. How about:
-[x] Mention that, though you're far from the best, you are capable of some minor magical healing. If possible, we'd like to try healing Hitomi's arm and Kyousuke's hand before we head back home tonight.
That still implies the gulf, but without implying we're actually bad at it.

Edit: And now I'm waffling with Torgamous's version.. meh
 
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take away the word minor and leave the "though you're far from the best". "some magical healing" continues to imply that we're not completely capable anyway.

This is a, uh, minor quibble though.
 
take away the word minor and leave the "though you're far from the best". "some magical healing" continues to imply that we're not completely capable anyway.

This is a, uh, minor quibble though.
OK, edited that as well. Updated my vote with this:
-[x] Mention that, though you're far from the best, you are capable of some magical healing. If possible, we'd like to try healing Hitomi's arm and Kyousuke's hand before we head back home tonight.
 
If I can try to sum up...

1) Note that Madoka's and Sayaka's introduction to magical girls was (somewhat) accidental, to avoid trying to create an answer to the 'special' question. Answering that is a convoluted mess that doesn't help anything.
Saying that Madoka and Sayaka were introduced accidentally would be a bald-faced lie. Kyuubey was actively recruiting them because of Madoka and Sayaka's potential. And Hitomi has potential too (though it's small enough that Kyuubey probably has a lot of more tempting targets). Note that potential does not mean that one person is more "special" than another. It just means that Kyuubey gets more energy (on average) if they contract.

I rewrote my vote to account for our knowledge of Hitomi's slight potential and to allow Madoka and Sayaka a better chance to tell their story:

[x] I'm afraid that being "normal" isn't enough to protect people from the monsters in the world. It's better if you know:
-[x] Unexplained suicides, murders, and disappearances are often caused by reality-warping, despair-inducing monsters called witches.
-[x] Witches can't be seen by most people, so warn her to be wary of sudden unexpected surges of depression - it probably means a witch is near - call us immediately.
-[x] Kyuubey's offer is one wish in return for becoming a magical girl and fighting witches. It's usually not worth the cost - fighting witches is a dangerous business - many who make a wish end up regretting it.
-[x] In my case, I was dying when I first met Kyuubey and Madoka and Sayaka and made a contract. Being saved from death was worth the price, but we are totally against anyone contracting for anything less serious. As to why Kyuubey was with Madoka and Sayaka, that's their story to tell...
-[x] Tell Hitomi that she has a slight potential (potential is approximately the amount of energy that Kyuubey can obtain if she contracts). It's probably not enough to seriously tempt Kyuubey, but she should be careful about him all the same.
-[x] Mention that, though you're far from the best, you are capable of some magical healing. If possible, we'd like to try healing Hitomi's arm and Kyousuke's hand before we head back home tonight.
 
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Saying that Madoka and Sayaka were introduced accidentally would be a bald-faced lie. Kyuubey was actively recruiting them because of Madoka and Sayaka's potential. And Hitomi has potential too (though it's small enough that Kyuubey probably has a lot of more tempting targets).
Kyuubey was certainly waiting for the right opportunity to recruit Madoka, and used Homura hunting him down for extra sympathy points. Sayaka being there was coincidence. The witch being there was coincidental (Homura didn't expect it), and thus their stumbling onto Mami was accidental as well. So there's a mix of accidental and deliberate in there, which is why it's (somewhat) accidental. IE: Kyuubey would certainly try to make contact with Madoka, but the specific events that happened were not planned.
 
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