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Chapter 680: So Much, Yet Not Enough

"Are you getting anything?" Hazō asked.

"Yeah," Noburi replied, eyes closed with his fingers dipped in the grotto's water. "It's like… Hm. I don't know how to explain it. She's getting… brighter, maybe? Not exactly. I don't think I'd sense her from farther away. But she's more prominent in my attention. More than she always is, of course."

Through the thin privacy screen that Kei had provided, Hazō saw the rising outlines of Yuno and Satsuko relax back against the edge of the pool.

"Right. Can you sense inside Yuno's chakra system?"

"Not really," Noburi said. "I don't think I can do better than that seal you gave me. It's basically designed to figure out what's going on inside people's chakra systems."

"Well, it's actually designed for sealing Tailed Beasts, but it'll do. I don't know if I could make an improved version of a seal the Sage-damned Fourth Hokage made, and I'd rather save time trying. Is it good enough for you to figure out what the water is doing?"

"Saving time?" Noburi asked. "Since you apparently cracked the power of spacetime manipulation while Tsunade taught me moderately-advanced medicine, what do you gotta worry about that for? Just make more."

"The runes don't stack," Hazō sighed, glancing over at the half-meter wide brick of crystal and stone that was currently accelerating time in the grotto for everyone. He hadn't quite understood everyone's reactions when he'd announced what he was going to do. Kei and Kagome had already known, Tenten was unreadable as always, but Mari, Noburi, and Yuno? He definitely felt some awe, but less hope than he'd been expecting. And, underneath it all, a hint of fear…

"Or, I don't think they would, at least. If they interact in some undefined way, I'd rather not test it."

"Is this the sealmaster thing where 'undefined behavior' sounds not that bad but is actually really, really bad?"

"Yeah."

"Right. Anyway, I assume you're here for a progress update? Well, like I said, most of the good information I'm getting is through that seal you gave me. The pool's effect takes a while to kick in – I'm guessing around three hours. Based on what Mari said, the increased chakra efficiency doesn't happen evenly through that period. Instead, it ramps up at the end. I have some theories about what's going on internally to cause that, but I don't know for sure."

"How did the tests on chakra constructs go?"

"Nothing," Noburi said. "No effect on Snowflake, no effect on Cansaku – and before you ask, no, I couldn't sense anything weird about the 'nature' chakra supposedly in Cansaku. Which figures, you know? Here I think I've found something nice to get back in good with the Toad Sages, and nope."

"What do you mean, get back in good with them?"

Noburi turned slightly to face Hazō, opening his eyes but not taking his fingers out of the grotto where Yuno still bathed (Kei had only said "boys" when he'd asked why she just had a fairly large, waterproofed screen on hand).

"Hazō, you were there for half of it. You remember how I had to beg and plead for them to begrudgingly agree to teach me anything, right? They thought they were doing me a huge favor, and then I immediately went and snubbed them and told them I'd rather go and train with Tsunade. They'd already said they'd train me so I promised I'd finish with Tsunade quickly and come back to train with them on a very strict schedule, so they'd know I was respecting their time fully.

"And then what happens? I show up on day three of training to scrunch up my chakra in whatever esoteric way only they understand and tell the Toad Sages, 'Actually no, I just betrayed the village – yeah, my equivalent of the Toad Clan on the Human Path – yeah, the same one Jiraiya dedicated his whole life to and died for – yeah, the loyalty to which is the reason I gave for picking Tsunade over you the first time – on Hazō's orders. Sorry, gotta save all my time, stamina, and chakra for running away from Leaf on the Human Path for the next who-knows how long. Sorry!' You've heard Jiraiya say it, you've heard Naruto say it, you've heard me say it, and you've seen it yourself. They're cantankerous and prideful. How do you think they took it?"

Hazō winced. "That bad, huh?"

"Actually, not nearly that bad," Noburi said. "I don't like the taste of toenail nearly as much as you do, so I put it much more gently than that. Fukasaku said he never wanted to see my face again, but he didn't actually burn my face off with some overpowered ninjutsu. Honestly, I don't know what you told him to convince Ma to check me over for genjutsu, but even she was… well, not hostile, but definitely not friendly.

"And before you ask, I did have Gamadai tell them that we went missing to fight Akatsuki as soon as you told me, that we weren't completely spitting on Jiraiya's memory. They didn't acknowledge it, but based on what I know of them, if I come crawling back in a few months with something interesting and valuable to them, they'll probably… well, not forgive me, but at least not blanket ban me from talking with them ever again."

"That's stupid," Hazō said, crossing his arms. "If they know we're going missing to fight Akatsuki – which they should definitely believe, given how much I've been drilling it into them for the past few months, they should be helping us, not shunning us."

Noburi shrugged. "They're prideful. That's what pride is, right? It's just temporarily becoming stupid when it comes to things important to who you are."

"It's just annoying, that's all," Hazō said. "At least they don't seem as pissed with me… though, I couldn't get them to take the oath not to carry information to me from outside, so I probably can't talk to them while Akatsuki is still on our tail. Maybe this doesn't harm the expected mission success rate as much as I thought."

"Annoying for you?" Noburi asked, chuckling. Hazō thought he caught a hint of tension in the sound. "I mean, fair enough. I was going to say something about how going missing really meant burning our lives down, but I suppose you know that just as much as I do. What are you missing most?"

The image of Ino came to his mind unprompted, but Hazō pushed it away to think. "I just wonder how the clan is doing without us. Not to oversell us, but Team Uplift is the core of Clan Gōketsu. It's pretty easy for me to see how it could just collapse in my absence if people don't trust Gaku and follow his lead. Still, I'd rather the clan temporarily implode than force them all to live in a dystopia under Pain."

"Man, you are really focused on the mission, huh?" Noburi asked. "No time to relax in what's probably the world's only hot spring that gives you a massage from the inside?"

"I intend to. While I was setting up the Time Rune, I realized how inefficient it was to spend chakra on Earthshaping while the pool was right here. We need to maximize our chakra efficiency to maximize available research time. Speaking of which – how does the effect work on your system?"

"Yeah, yeah. My chakra system is fucked up because half of it is here-" he gestured to his chest with his free hand, "-and half of it is here." He gestured to the barrel sitting by his side. "I haven't bathed in it yet, but I don't think it'll hurt me permanently. It's all gentle with your chakra system. I'll monitor myself with that seal you gave me. I'll survive. The water didn't interact with my bloodline at all, either. I can store chakra in it, and I can drain and sense through it. All normal."

"How about storage?" Hazō asked.

"That's the weird thing," Noburi said. "That doesn't seem to work. Haul a bathtub of water out of the lake? Sure enough, I can pick up the beginnings of the effect starting in Tenten's coils after a ten minutes submerged. Store a bathtub of water and unstore it in the same spot? I spend thirty minutes staring at the seal readouts, and nothing.

"And I was definitely staring only at the seal readouts," Noburi said in a whisper to Hazō, "given the number of women that would messily murder me if my gaze accidentally slipped to Tenten while she was in the bath."

"I never would have thought otherwise," Hazō said confidently, "and in fact, your denials only plant the seed of doubt in my mind."

Hazō saw the outline of Yuno's head through the screen turning towards them.

"Oh, it's nothing, Yuno!" Noburi said, raising a hand quickly. "Just a, uh, joke."

Yuno considered, then her head slowly turned back.

Noburi winced. "Shouldn't have said that," he whispered. "She still feels bad that she doesn't get the team's in-jokes."

Back to a normal voice, he continued. "But yeah, I did think it was weird. I thought some contaminant in the water was causing the effect, but storage seals should handle medicine-like things just fine. I have no clue what's going on if storage seals don't work."

"But that's not the weird part," Hazō said, frowning at Noburi. "The weird thing is that the water doesn't work on shadow clones. They're supposed to be physical clones of us. Is their chakra system different?"

"It has to be," Noburi said. "Clone coils don't generate chakra, but physical chakra coils do. I couldn't tell you what the difference is, but hey, maybe I'll figure it out while I'm investigating whether I can cast shadow clones safely. Speaking of which, I will probably need a stipend out of our chakra budget for that, if only to get to watch someone cast the technique a few times per day and monitor their clones."

"Sure," Hazō said. "Fine. You need chakra, I need chakra. What's the bottom line on the pool? Can you replicate it, either through your bloodline or medical ninjutsu?"

"I've only been working at it for a day," Noburi said. "I can't tell you for sure."

"You get the most information when you start experimenting," Hazō said. "Less and less, each time you do it again. Remember our chakra-quantification experiments? I learned a lot from the first time I managed to do sixteen Substitutions, more when I pulled off seventeen the next time, a little more when I got nineteen, and then less as it went on. Even after three, I could have concluded that chakra was going to be weird."

"I think you could have told that after zero."

"Come on, Noburi. Can you do it?"

Noburi thought for a minute.

"Could the Vampiric Dew do it?" he said finally. "No. It's just too coarse for this sort of work, I think. Could medical ninjutsu do it? Yes."

Hazō felt a little knot of tension come loose, and Noburi glanced over at him and saw his expression, because he quickly raised his other hand.

"Wait, let me qualify that. I can't do it right now with any of my basic medical techniques. What I'm saying is that – based on what I think the pool is doing and comparing it to some of the medical ninjutsu Tsunade pulls out on the regular, I'm pretty sure that something like this effect should be replicable with medical ninjutsu. Still… First, I could be wrong about what the pool is doing. Second, I could be wrong about what's possible with medical ninjutsu because I misinterpreted Tsunade. Third, even if both of those are right, I don't know the first thing about ninjutsu creation, much less medical ninjutsu creation. So I'm pretty sure it's possible, but I don't actually see a path to doing it."

The tension hadn't actually come loose, it had just gone for a trip to the store and back. "Damn. And I'm definitely neither good enough at ninjutsu creation to teach you, nor do I have the time to do so. So our only hope is runes, then?"

"Probably," Noburi said, turning back to the water. "Maybe something lucky pops out, but my guess is no."

"Fine," Hazō said, gritting his teeth. "Can you describe to me what the pool is doing to someone's chakra system in as much detail as possible? I have a couple ideas for runes that can replicate this effect, but the better I understand it, the more detailed I can be."

"I could explain it to you," Noburi said skeptically. "But it would all be dense medical jargon."

"Then hurry up and teach me about chakra systems," Hazō said. "I asked before. Do you want me to beg and plead at your feet for you to teach me?"

"Actually… that would be nice," Noburi said.

Noburi looked at Hazō expectantly. Hazō crossed his arms. Noburi raised an eyebrow, inclining his head. Hazō tilted his head and frowned.

"When, smartass?" Noburi said, turning back to the water. "My schedule's packed tight. I gotta spend a couple days writing out in as much detail as I can what I think the water's doing to people's chakra systems. I've got baby's first solo bloodline research penciled in – namely, figuring out how the world's second-most complex jutsu is going to interact with my bloodline. When do I find the days or weeks to teach you all the crap Hashimoto taught me, when any spare time between projects or when we don't have chakra for extra shadow clones should be spent healing our most powerful direct combat asset?"

Hazō glanced over at Mari, who was relaxing on the far side of the grotto from the research team. "Are you sure about that?"

"Direct combat, genjutsu doesn't count."

"Whatever you say, bro," Hazō said. "Okay, maybe the medical ninjutsu teaching will have to wait. Or maybe I'll ask you to delay one of those other things. I'll try the runes with whatever details you can get me and we'll see how that goes."

o-o-o​

Once Noburi had gathered all the information he thought he could, the last few team members (himself, Hazō, Kagome, and Kei) finished their soaks in the grotto's heated pool. Yuno and Mari joined them while Tenten kept watch. It felt just as good as Mari had promised, and while Noburi and Mari and Yuno occasionally chatted it up, Hazō tried his best to feel what the pool was doing to his chakra. He even dropped into his technique-hacking trance for almost half an hour, only to find that the chakra within him was strangely… docile, perhaps?

Still, once, he'd exhausted everything reasonably productive he thought he could do while bathing, he had no choice but to relax.

The thoughts battered his mind.

The people he'd left behind – Ino, Gaku, whoever else Akatsuki decided was close to him – would be captured and held hostage by Akatsuki on the off chance Hazō ever read their Seventh Path messages. Given what they'd done to the jinchuuriki, torture wouldn't be off the table.

The Gōketsu Clan would implode from within, with no leadership to moderate disputes between the clan's factions. The clan's income would plummet without him and their Uplift projects would grind to a halt. Their political enemies would find a way to undo the clan altogether.

Orochimaru, with the power of runes, was going to find a way to steal the rift for himself. He had no true loyalty to Leaf or to Hazō. All of Hazō's hopes for the rift were going to disappear. He'd never see Jiraiya again. He'd never see Akane again.

Akatsuki was going to win. They were too powerful, and the odds were too sharply stacked against him. They'd open the rift, extract Pain, take control of the world with a solution second-best to the one even Orochimaru found unpalatable.

He tried to push them away. He couldn't.

o-o-o​

Finally, it came time for the team to emerge from their long soak, and as he directed his attention inward, Hazō could now definitely feel that something was different. His chakra felt… calmer. He felt like he could drop into his technique hacking trance in an instant if he needed to. Experimentally, he tried channeling chakra to his shoulder and marveled at how his arm snapped up. Not at how quickly it snapped up – it was no faster than usual. Instead, he marveled at how smooth it had felt. Normally, he felt a burning sensation when he channeled his internal chakra to move faster than an ordinary human could. Instead, he felt nothing. It was like he had been a wagon's axle coated in gunk all this time, and someone had finally cleaned and greased him.

Around him, he saw his teammates, many still wearing their towels from the pool, trying out the same experiments themselves. He hadn't glanced at what they'd been doing in the pool (when it came to bathing in Kei's vicinity, 'no peeking' was not so much a command as a law of reality), but apparently they too had saved their experiments for after they got out.

Kagome-sensei was quickly putting his blast harnesses back on, but Tenten had come down from her overwatch to help Kei experiment with different chakra-boosted throwing motions, while Yuno did some strange acrobatic maneuvering on the wall, and Mari watched them all with slight amusement.

And Noburi looked annoyed.

Had it not worked for Noburi, because of his abnormal chakra system?

"Alright everyone," Noburi said, addressing the cave and quickly bringing everyone's experiments to a stop (though Kagome continued to pull his pants up). "I know we're all close, like family, but all of this hiding of who we are has got to stop. I, for one, have seen what I needed to see. We're on the run together, we trust each other with our lives, so why are we worried about revealing ourselves to each other?"

"Noburi," Kei warned, reaching for her weapons pouch that had thus far stayed blessedly far from her hands. "I would request a clarification: are you confessing to observing us as we bathed?"

"I am," Noburi said. Hazō quickly checked if he remembered the appropriate prayers to the ancestors to make over a brother's funeral. Yes, he did.

"But this isn't about you, Kei," he said, holding up his palm to her.

"I've already done this with you before. It's about the other girls. You know what you've been hiding from us, Mari." He pointed straight at his teacher's chest. She glanced down at her cleavage in exaggerated shock.

"And to a lesser extent, you two," he said, gesturing to Yuno and Tenten. "Sorry my dear, but you are still new to the team. And I'm deciding now that we shouldn't keep any secrets from each other."

"Obviously, Kagome is the smallest," he said, turning on Kagome-sensei, who jumped slightly at Noburi's wrathful finger.

"Hazō and Kei are about the same," Noburi, pointing at his clan siblings' chests one by one. "Kei, yours are slightly bigger than Hazō's, of course, but that goes without saying."

"Then, you, Tenten, are slightly bigger than Kei," Noburi said, pointing at Tenten. She blushed.

"Yuno, my dear, you are so strong." Yuno, who had been grabbing Satsuko in confusion (and knowing Yuno, confusion was probably one of the many emotions best resolved with axe murder), paused. "And yours are bigger than all of these poor folk here," he said, gesturing at the Team Uplift members he'd already named.

"And Mari, you know what you are," Noburi said. Mari grinned and squeezed her arms together, causing her cleavage to pop out just a bit more. "Yours are the biggest of all. About as big as Kei and Kagome combined, I think."

Kei paused, confused, as she reared back to throw the kunai that would end her perverted brother's tirade and/or life.

"And then, of course, there's me," Noburi said, grinning widely and thumbing at himself. "I'm the biggest of all, and it's not even close. Mine are bigger than everyone else's combined."

Silence ruled in the cavern for a moment.

Tenten looked down at her chest, then questioningly at Kei.

"I had also initially inferred he was referring to breast size," Kei replied. "However, his final line has caused me to conclude he is instead referring to egos. Nonetheless, with his voyeuristic confession, I will proceed with termination." She pulled back to throw again.

"Chakra reserves!" Noburi said quickly, throwing up his hands, "I was talking about everyone's chakra reserves! I checked with my Bloodline Limit while we were all in the pool!"

Silence ruled in the cavern for a moment.

Then a series of slaps sounded off as palms met foreheads.

o-o-o​

Hazō opened his eyes without looking as his chakra suffused into the stone around him. Earthshaping was still expensive, steadily pulling chakra from him as he maintained it, but he could tell it was less than before.

First, the chakravore statue. He filled it with his chakra.

Hm. Nothing. He was expecting some resistance from the creature's own chakra the same way the cave in Honey had resisted the Earthshaping technique, but there was nothing there.

He tried manipulating it. The otter's face melted and twisted and folded on itself in slow motion.

He could work it like normal stone. Maybe because the creature was long dead? Any chakra it once held would have dissipated days ago.

He tried pushing his chakra deeper, and, as he expected, found that it was anatomically detailed all the way through. He could feel its organs, the pipes inside it through which food and waste would have once run. An interesting confirmation to his hypothesis, but nothing special. He set the statue aside.

He relaxed his hold on the ninjutsu's chakra and let it expand through the grotto. It touched every part of the grotto, then extended comfortably outwards to reach even into the caves around him. He expanded his reach slowly, feeling for any signs of resistance, any signs of chakra golems coming out of the earth to pound him into a paste, but… nothing.

He spent a couple hours closing off all the tunnels except their escape route, reducing the density of the masses of stone between the tunnels to fully fill the tunnels themselves with matter. Once he'd done that, he relaxed. A large-scale Earthshaping operation with no complaints from the cave? He was probably free to do as he pleased here.

He stopped trying to make changes, instead focusing within his reach for any unusual sensations from the technique.

Hm, he felt foreign chakra. He followed with his human eyes and saw one of the glowing, multi-colored crystals in the wall.

Yes… it hadn't resisted his ninjutsu, but it hadn't taken his chakra either. He could vaguely feel the outline of it like the void of Earthshaping chakra left behind by a piece of metal – the crystal jutting out of the rock face, then root-like tendrils embedding it in the wall of the grotto.

He tried pushing his chakra into it anyway, and any resistance it put up easily fell before the force of his ninjutsu. The crystal stopped glowing.

Huh. Okay, so there was a chakra effect in the crystals making them glow – they already knew that. It was anchored to the stone somehow, and Hazō's Earthshaping technique could override it pretty easily.

Should he override the rest of the crystals, and make sure that everything within his reach was his own chakra?

He narrowly decided against it. The crystals hadn't hurt anyone yet, and they were probably better for team morale than working only by the harsh light of the Daybright Lanterns. He'd tried his best to keep the team entirely in the cave, but had only convinced them to stay inside during the day, while they stretched their legs and trained outside in the desert at nights.

Still, he tried his best to send a message to the other crystals in the cave. Look what I did to your brother. I'll do the same to you if you mess with my team.

The crystals continued cycling through their colors.

Well, either they got the message or they didn't. Luckily, Noburi couldn't comment on him trying to make his chakra intimidating.

One last task before he emerged from the ninjutsu and back into the real world. He focused his attention at the markings on the wall just above him. He wanted to identify the oldest one, but it was so faded. He could feel the outer square and the scratches in the center in deep lines, intersecting and stretching outwards.

Hm, maybe it was like this? He deepened and extended the lines to fill the square. He checked, but none of the other scratches he could feel seemed like they were nearly as deep as the ones in the middle, so he smoothed them away, also detaching the lichens growing from the rock overhead. What remained was a square with four lines dividing it into even pieces, two vertical and horizontal, and two more along the diagonals. Like the character for a rice paddy, but crossed out.

Except, not quite. Hazō thought he'd straightened the lines too much – they shouldn't have hit the square perfectly at the corners and the midpoints of the sides. He rotated the lines inside the square slightly so that they had the same length.

Still not quite. The scratches were deeper in the middle, so the marks would have originally been thicker there and thinner at the edges.

Hm. Now Hazō wasn't sure any more of how much of this was true and how much was his own invention. It looked vaguely like an eight-pointed shuriken inside a square.

Ah, whatever, it was probably hundreds of years old. What did it matter anyway?

Instead, with the team having vetoed leaving his own mark, he set himself to a new task – cleaning up the rest of the markings on the walls, starting with Jiraiya's…

o-o-o​

After a few more minutes of staring into the fire, Snowflake finally rose and said her goodnights before retiring to join Kei and Tenten.

"So, it's just us, Mari."

"Just us," Mari agreed from across the small hibachi they huddled around for warmth. At the request of the team's couples, Hazō had Earthshaped nearly-enclosed alcoves for them to have some privacy while they slept (and yes, while they were sleeping, Kei-Tenten-Snowflake counted as a couple. Hazō had still made them a bigger alcove anyway). The other single member of their team, Kagome-sensei, had dozed off in an easy-escape sleeping bag near their exfiltration route. Thankfully, Hazō closing up the remaining tunnels had meant far fewer sleep-shattering explosions as tiny critters ran into the grotto's exhaustive trap perimeter.

"Isn't it getting late?" Hazō asked. "I think it's been about sixteen hours since I woke up at least. Shouldn't we get to sleep?"

To be honest, between being constantly underground and the time distortion from the rune, Hazō had no clue what the time was.

Mari sighed, flopping to the ground on her stuffed futon. "The less fun kind of sleeping," she muttered.

Years of practice let him ignore her comments, and after a moment, she picked up her romance novel again and flicked to the next page. It was a new one, he noticed, instead of one of her well-loved Jiraiya-authored books.

He watched her for a moment longer. There was something… tense about her. Not that she was nervous around him, but that she… wasn't looking at him? Actually, more that she had less of her attention on him than normal, and she was sustaining that by active willpower.

Hazō opened his mouth to ask what was wrong, then closed it. Mari was a master of her own body. She wouldn't give off cues that a relative beginner like him would pick up on.

…unless she wanted him to initiate the conversation himself. Obviously. He tried not to look like too much of an idiot as he opened his mouth again.

"What's up, Mari? Anything on your mind?"

"I've just been… thinking," she said, studiously keeping her gaze on her book. Hazō noticed that she wasn't actually flicking her gaze side to side to read.

"That's good?" Hazō said. "Or bad? I don't know which."

"Just thinking about our situation," Mari said, sighing.

"Ah," Hazō said. "So bad, then?"

"Eh, kind of mixed," Mari said. "I thought life as a missing-nin would be bad, but I wasn't expecting a chakra-boosted hot spring to relax in. I was expecting more murdering hunter-nin. On the flip side, I was expecting that I'd get to see the sun daily, so…"

"If you think it's important for team morale for people to do their training in daylight, we can do that," Hazō said. "Frankly, I was hoping I could lean on you a lot to make sure everyone was staying happy and on-mission."

"I know. I'll try, but it's a bit hard when my own morale isn't the greatest."

"You don't believe I can do it?" Hazō asked.

"The opposite, really," Mari said, folding her book and setting it down. She continued to stare off towards the glowing crystals along the grotto's walls.

"You do believe, and that's disheartening you…?" Hazō asked incredulously.

Mari sighed. "How do I explain this? Maybe I just start with the main thing I want to say. Hazō, I want you to have all my chakra."

"All your chakra?"

"Yes, all of it. Well, at least as much as Noburi can tap off of me while we're awake, keeping me at a high enough level of chakra that I can fight if we need to. You need it more than I do."

"Why?" Hazō asked. He could see the logic, but Mari was a jōnin. Jōnin trained their asses off – it was a fact of life drilled into him by his Academy teachers trying to get children to emulate their betters – and Mari couldn't do that if she was giving up every drop of chakra her coils produced. Plus, Hazō knew Mari, and for all that he knew that she loved him… she was also selfish.

"Well, lots of things," Mari said, now leaning back to stare into the ceiling. "For one, I'm not getting stronger as fast as I used to, so my training's less important. To some extent, I can't train in our current circumstances. I don't have subjects for genjutsu development, and the team, charming as they are, would be about as useful as fish if I were to try to train my microexpressions and such with them."

"You could spar with Yuno and sharpen your combat skills," Hazō said.

"I could, but that would cost chakra," Mari said. "And chakra is precious, like you've been telling us. I might be better at taijutsu than you'll ever be, but I know my limits. I'm never going to survive getting in a melee engagement with Hidan, much less the rest of Akatsuki. If I wanted to take them down, I'd be using my genjutsu, and you know how that ended."

"It worked, right?" Hazō asked. "You tagged Hidan with your genjutsu, but he just dropped out of range?"

"It didn't work," Mari said. Her voice had gotten a hair quieter. "I used Silent Night on him. That's still my best capture technique. But I didn't put my all into it, because I thought he'd have the willpower to resist it and I wanted to save my energy for dodging his counterattack. And he did have the willpower to resist it, but I don't know if I would have trapped him if I'd really given it my all. It's making me think that even my best isn't going to be enough to go up against Akatsuki."

"You can do it, Mari," Hazō said. "You're one of Leaf's strongest ninja – you were – and you have all the tools that the clan can give you. Could give you, that is."

"In time?" Mari asked. "Sure, I think with shadow clone training and WHOOSH on my side, maybe I could become strong enough to go toe-to-toe with some of Akatsuki's freaks. But that's not the situation we're in. We don't have the chakra for me to aggressively train like I did in Leaf, and you're thinking we'll face Akatsuki down in months, rather than years. That's not enough time for shadow clones to make a difference in combat power for me or you.

"I have a lot of chakra. That chakra can let you do more searching for that one game-breaking, skywalker-tier rune that'll give us an actual edge over Akatsuki, even a small chance of which is way better than me having a couple more tried-and-tested taijutsu tricks. So, you should take it."

"Thank you, Mari," Hazō said. "Honestly. I know you're sacrificing a lot in offering this, and I'm grateful."

"Don't be too grateful," Mari said. "I tried retiring from ninja life once, and that lasted nine days before the Third kicked the bucket and I had to get back in the swing of things. If something crazy happens in nine days, I'll assume it's a sign from the ancestors that I should never take a day off again. Or maybe I decide I want to keep my chakra because I think you're not using it well. I'm capricious, who knows.

"Still… I'm tired, Hazō. It was easier to train hard when we were in Leaf and I could eat delicious foods and talk to the people that called themselves my friends and get laid and see Uplift steadily growing in the clan. It was easier when I imagined myself training to set a good example to my genin team or to protect them from chakra beasts or missing-nin, instead of training to fight monsters that I know in my heart I won't beat.

"Only you can fight those monsters, Hazō. So take my chakra, and fight them with everything you got. Fight for me, since I can't."

Hazō stared at her, then into the dancing flames. The logs in the hibachi were blackened, but they would probably burn for hours yet before they sputtered out to ash.

"Mari… I will."



You have taken a number of chakravore corpses. Neither Noburi nor Kagome know what to study in them.

The pool makes all chakra use except for summoning 20% less expensive (so boosting and dispelling cost 4CP instead of 5CP, and Pangolin Earth Armor (Effect:3) would cost 64 CP instead of 79). Rune infusion also is not discounted.

The effect lasts for 10 days, so you can soak in the pool and have time to travel pretty much anywhere in the EN and do a mission while you're there.

Noburi has collected fungi and plants with useful medical properties, good to the tune of a situational Aspect with 1 tag per day, to be used on medical rolls to heal injuries. 30 uses. You will need to remind us that it exists, otherwise no benefit.

Water Rune
Hazō thinks this rune is beyond his capabilities.

Chakra Soothing Rune
Hazō thinks this rune is beyond his capabilities*.

*at the moment

Noburi thinks this one feels the most viable – as the rune applies its effect into the user's chakra system directly, instead of trying to route via recreating the water. Still, even if runes can connect to a human's chakra system (which is uncertain: as Hazō has no seal examples that can do so, and Noburi doesn't know enough about runes to judge), it would need to be an extremely delicate operation to not completely blow out said human's chakra system, and Hazō knows that runes so far have been more about overwhelming power rather than incredible precision.

Worse, Hazō doesn't even exactly understand what precise operation he's supposed to be doing, because of the level of jargon Noburi needs to use to explain the pool's effect. Hazō thinks he could revisit this once he understands the medical stuff a bit better.

Soothing Field Rune
Hazō thinks this rune is beyond his capabilities.

Crystal Recreation Rune
Hazō thinks he could maybe do this rune.

With the pool's chakra discount making everyone's daily training cheaper and Mari's generous donation, the team can spare around 900 CP per day. Distribute this among SC casts (now 120 CP base + 20 per clone), SC training (still 80 CP per training block), and rune infusion (290 CP per infusion day, or 350 if done by a shadow clone) as you please – including if you want to allocate any spare SC-casts to Noburi's shadow-clone-Vampiric Dew projects.

No SC training happened during this update as it took some time for Noburi to gather all the data he needed and for everyone to soak in the pool, Mari hadn't yet made her donation, and spare chakra went towards Hazō's expensive ES and SC-multithreading casts. You may start allocating this chakra with your next plan.

XP Award: 8 + 2 (brevity) XP

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Chapter 681: We've Got This

"Hey," Noburi said to his sister.

Kei looked over, one eyebrow raised. A smile tweaked Noburi's lips and he tipped his head towards Hazō, who was thoughtfully poking at the fire with a stick. Kei looked; her face went through a rapid series of emotions. Confusion about what Noburi meant, recognition as she figured it out, and a sharp glower at her grinning brother and his extended hand.

"Not yet," she hissed.

"Oh, come on."

"Not yet. There is still a chance."

"Pfft."

Hazō, and the rest of the family, looked back and forth between the quarreling siblings.

"Something I should know?" he asked mildly.

"Nope," Noburi said, his grin getting wider.

"Not a word!" Kei whispered to him, only to be waved off without even a glance.

Hazō eyed them with jaundiced gaze before shrugging it off. "I've been thinking," he said.

Noburi looked at Kei triumphantly.

"Not yet!"

"There's something I need to say to you all," Hazō began.

"HAH!"

Kei glowered at her brother and his newly-reclaimed title as Mayor of Smugton. She also reached into her pocket and tossed him a five ryō coin.

Hazō cleared his throat pointedly.

"We had a bet on that you would be giving an uplifting speech soon," Noburi said. His grin was about to swallow his head. "She thought it would be tomorrow."

"Statistically—" She sighed. "Never mind. Hazō, please continue."

Hazō rolled his eyes.

The family was outside the cave, gathered around a bonfire as the stars spilled across the velvet backdrop of the heavens above them. In the distance, a (probably) coyote howled, and the light of the moon made the stars sparkle. The desert was hot during the day, even this late in the year, but at night the temperature plunged. As a result, everyone was sitting on blankets to keep themselves off the heat-sucking ground, and wrapped in more blankets to ward off the chill in the breeze that kept blowing in fits and starts, all too often driving the fire's smoke directly into Hazō's face.

Noburi and Yuno were sharing their blankets and Noburi had one arm around her shoulders. She was blushing furiously, but she hadn't pulled away. Had, in fact, gone so far as to tip her head on his shoulder. Satsuko was undoubtedly appalled.

Two years ago, they would never have lit this delightful bonfire that threw flames five feet in the air. The land around here was mostly flat, the sightlines miles long, and there would have been too much fear of attracting patrols of Sand ninja, or Akatsuki members that happened to be passing by because that was totally a thing that could happen, or random predatory plants, animals, or skittering things the size of small dogs but with chitin and too many legs. No, there would have been no delightful bonfire with which to warm the toes and the faces while toasting their dinner. Instead, each Gōketsu would have had a hibachi full of coals next to them and told everyone that yes, absolutely, nice and warm yup yup yup—what, are you some kind of pansy who can't handle a little cold?

(Okay, they probably wouldn't have said the last part. The Gōketsu were, after all, decent people and there were clear lines drawn to define topics and levels of acceptable teasing.)

Fortunately, in this enlightened modern era, Hazō had the Scenery Clone Array seals. Anyone standing more than a dozen yards away would see only another empty stretch of frigid wasteland. The same empty stretch that had been here an hour earlier after Hazō set up the array and before everyone started indulging their inner pyromaniac.

"I have something I need to say to you all," Hazō repeated. He looked slowly around the circle, meeting each person's eyes in turn. To his left, whittling on a stick, Kagome-sensei. Then Mari, who had wrapped herself in so many blankets that she had almost disappeared. Beside her, Tenten and Kei were sharing a blanket. They weren't cuddling—perish the thought!—but they were sitting closer than Kei could stand any other human to be and Hazō could tell from the way their green-and-tan blanket bulged up that their feet were touching. It was only the two of them under that blanket; Snowflake had 'gone to bed' an hour earlier, as the team was setting up the fire. Hazō wasn't sure if she had timed out or dispelled herself and cursed himself for losing track of her schedule.

Completing the circle, Yuno and Noburi. Who were now very definitely cuddling as they leaned back against a thick stump that they had padded with pillows. Yuno had slid down a bit so she could lean against Noburi's chest, and he had wrapped both arms around her with a happy rumble in his chest.

"The situation we find ourselves in, it looks bad," Hazō began. "We are away from our home. We have left people behind, people that we love and cherish. We are cut off from the resources that we normally count on and are forced to live in the wilderness, afraid of making contact with civilization because it might lead Akatsuki to us."

"Again, I think you're overestimating that risk," Mari added. He looked at her sourly for the interruption and she raised her hands in surrender. "Sorry. You were saying something about how awful everything is?"

"It looks bad, I know. I want everyone to understand, I want you to know, deep in your bones, that there is light at the end of the tunnel.

"Our goal is to kill Akatsuki, but it's more than that. As Kei pointed out to me, we need to kill them while also not ending civilization. Killing them would actually be pretty straightforward: I can make a rune that reproduces the ice storm that hit near Leaf, except with a vastly larger radius. The one near Leaf had a radius of about ten miles. I could make one with a radius of...fifty? A hundred? I haven't done the math, but it would be enormous. I could lure Akatsuki to some unoccupied piece of land in the middle of nowhere, set up one of these runes on a skytower a mile up, and turn it on when my telescope said they were a dozen miles away. I reverse summon the moment I do, but their first warning of what was coming would be the utter destruction of everything. Massive winds that tear up ancient trees and throw around boulders the size of a person. Freezing hell-spit falling sideways, making the blood freeze in your veins and explode your flesh. Could probably get some lightning in there too, just for spice."

He cocked his head in thought. "Actually, probably better to do it the other way. Instead of making it cold, make it hot. I turn the rune on and, a few seconds later, every breath of air within miles is hot enough to melt lead. Turn all of them to ash, and there wouldn't be any clouds gathering to provide warning.

"I have half a dozen ideas like that—things that would cause destruction over areas measured in small nations. Wide enough that I don't have to worry about getting Akatsuki into the AOE because the AOE is farther than they can see or sense or know.

"Of course, if we really wanted to go for certainty, and we were willing to decide that the end justifies the means and therefore it was okay to commit just a little bit of atrocity...well, we don't have to take the risk of luring them anywhere. We know that Konan is the Kage of Rain and spends most of her time there, and we know that the others gather there occasionally. Why not simply destroy the entire country? We can get any stragglers later, if they didn't happen to be at home."

He raised a hand to preempt Kei. "That was by way of example, Kei. I'm not going to do that.

"Because that is the other side of the coin," he continued, producing a fifty-ryō piece and holding it up to the light. It was a gold circle an inch across, carefully polished for exactly this demonstration. He held the coin up, tilting it so that it caught the firelight and clearly showed the face of Senju Hashirama.

"Save the world from Akatsuki's tyranny," Hazō said. He turned the coin around, showing the stylized leaf on the reverse. "Don't commit atrocities, destroy civilization, or kick off another war.

"The 'not committing atrocities' part is the main reason we're still out here," Hazō said frankly. "I want you to understand this, all of you: we can win this. We can kill Akatsuki. The hard part is doing it without losing our humanity in the process.

"We already have tools that will help with this. The Time Runes mean that we literally have more time than anyone else—time to train, to prepare, to research, to do whatever we decide is useful. Whatever will make all of us into the unstoppable badasses that we are going to be." He chuckled. "That we are already well on our way to being."

He gestured to Noburi. "My brother, special jōnin at seventeen. Third in command of Leaf General Hospital, at seventeen. The lynchpin of Leaf's victory in the most recent World War. The only reason that the Seventh Path survived the Drag.n invasion."

"My newest sister," he said, gesturing to Yuno. "Who has been utterly terrifying with her axe since the moment we met her, and is only getting more powerful as time goes on. She too is a special jōnin a year or so before most ninja become chūnin."

"Speaking of testing for chūnin," he said, gesturing to Kei. "Behold the woman so utterly dominant in the Chūnin Exams that Captain Momochi Zabuza himself bowed to her after giving her the winner's ribbon. So utterly brilliant that the Nara begged to bind themselves to our scrappy little new-forged clan of missing-nin through marriage to their clan heir. So desperate that they were willing to open their library." He grinned and was pleased to see when Kei's face softened into the tiniest little hint of a smile in return.

"Tenten, who has had multiple clans begging to adopt her and has refused them all because she prefers her liberty. Who came to Leaf as a child but already so skilled that they didn't know what to do with her. Who devastates monsters without so much as mussing her hair." He smiled. "I'm not sure I've said it in so many words, but I am so very glad that you are here. If you ever decide you want to be clan, the Gōketsu will welcome you with open arms. Because on the one hand you are good for Kei, and on the other hand you are already a ridiculous badass and in a few years you're going to be a legend."

He continued around the circle. "Speaking of legends: Mari, about whom there are already literally songs and stories. The only woman the Toad Sage ever met who he couldn't stop thinking about. To whom he ever used the word 'love' and meant it. The woman who is definitely in the running for being the world's greatest expert on the human mind, whether we look at her genjutsu skills or her social skills. A woman who goes where she wills and cannot be bound even by the will of a psychotic jinchūriki Kage. A woman who changed the shape of modern history not once but twice—once when she selected the diamonds in the rough with whom to found a new Village, and again when she convinced Leaf to accept us, thereby establishing the precedent that missing-nin can come in from the cold and that ninja can repatriate themselves."

He turned to the final person in the circle, and couldn't help that his eyes became watery. "And, last but very far from least, there is my teacher. Kagome-sensei, I'm not sure you realize how grateful I am to you, but I'm quite certain that you don't realize how incredible you are and what an impact you've had on the world.

"You created the skywalker seal. That seal has literally determined the entire shape of modern geopolitics. It gave us the opportunity to set those precedents that I mentioned a moment ago. It determined the outcome at the Battle on the Beach, and again at the Battle of the Gods. It completely altered Leaf's tactical doctrine and threw the Nara clan into a tizzy for months." He grinned. "And it let me and Noburi and Kei make the most badass ever entry at the Conclave." He chuckled, then sobered again.

"Being serious, though... Beyond transforming geopolitcs, you transformed education in Leaf. I pushed for the education of clanless after you and Honoka showed me that clanless only needed a little help to be just as good as clan. A generation from now, unless every other village adopts the same educational policies, Leaf will be the unchallenged dominant power in the world. Every clanless ninja owes you a debt, even if they will likely never realize it.

"And, of course, you trained me. I would have been dead a hundred times over without your safety procedures and training. Any glory I ever achieve with seals or runes will be owed in part to you. You have given me purpose, and hope, and the tools to reshape the world into something better than I found it. I am so proud to be your student." He bowed, a full dogeza, and held it for a moment before sitting up again and looking around the circle. (He carefully paid no attention to Kagome-sensei surreptitiously wiping at his eyes.)

"Yes, we are facing challenges right now. Yes, I suspect that all of us would prefer to be back in our beds in Leaf. And I suspect that many of you have been trying not to think that we will never be able to go back there.

"I tell you now: we will. Once Akatsuki is dead, once we have saved the world from their tyranny, we will return in triumph. One message to Naruto and he will meet us at the gates with a beaming smile on his face, backdated mission orders in his hands, and behind him an entire parade lined up in our honor. We will go down in Leaf's history with the names of its greatest heroes—the First founded the village, Tsunade is the greatest medic in the world, Jiraiya was a ninja without peer...and we are the ones who saved Leaf and the entire world from being ruled by a righteous zealot who wants to make humanity 'better' according to his own twisted standards. A zealot and his psychotic friends who think that the best way to enforce peace is through murder and extortion."

He looked around the circle again, slowly, meeting every rapt eye in turn.

"They are nothing but thugs," he said quietly. "Soon, they will be nothing at all. Nothing but a greasy stain on the dirt and an entry in the list of history's villains. We will do this. Every single one of us stands head and shoulders above our cohort, and we are going to continue to grow. We are going to become the unstoppable badasses whose legends make people say 'oh, the Sannin...yeah, I remember them. They were related to the Gōketsu, weren't they?'

"Trust me, all of you: we have got this. We will stop Akatsuki, we will return home in triumph, and we will be champions. Believe."

For long moments, no one spoke aloud. Their eyes said all that was needed, and those eyes were filled with pride, and with belief.



Day 1
Infuse TR130:
Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) - 3 = 41
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 23 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 3 = 60

Hazō completes the TR130! It lasts for 1 week and covers the same AoE as the TR125, but has a slightly improved time acceleration factor.


Infuse Icarus Rune:
Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) - 3 = 41
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 23 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) - 3 = 54

Hazō completes the Icarus Rune! Mechanics: This rune prevents the formation of Air Domes (including skywalkers) in a wide radius. Hazō suspects it may inhibit other forms of hardened-air-chakra-constructs (such as the tendrils in the skywalker sealing failure, certain Wind ninjutsu such as Whirlwind Barrier, etc).

Like with explosive runes, this rune can be infused with a variable amount of power, making a larger rune with a larger denial-radius.
  • 5 points of substrate: AoE = 1 kilometer across.
  • 25 points of substrate: AoE = 5 kilometers across.
  • 125 points of substrate: AoE = 25 kilometers across.

Prep Kamikaze Rune. Difficulty Result: This is the Superchiller rune, not a variant. Hazō's prep day of the Superchiller rune included that it would be hardened against heavy winds and cold – he knew about and expected the EM-nuke conditions would happen, and accounted for it in his rune-design process. Difficulty Result, same as previously stated for Superchiller: Easy.


Day 2
DoB rest.


Day 3
Prep Force Domes. Difficulty Result: Medium.
Prep TR150 Unchained. Difficulty Result: Hard. As a result, Hazōpilot decides to switch to a lower TR-rating of 140 (unchained) for future prep days and the infusion roll, figuring that it will split the difference between the relatively doable TR130 and the apparently-challenging 150.
Prep Iron Earth Rune. Difficulty Result: Hazō thinks exerting a full 5SB-style freeze on a massive volume would be pretty hard, and instead preps a milder version that merely makes all earth in reach have massively increased inertia, runic-drag style, which wouldn't completely prevent tunneling, but would make it prohibitively slow. In this context 'tunneling' would include anything that causes the earth to move, including shovels, HLAM, Earthshaping, Bones of Creation, and Tunnel Excavation. Anything that made material simply disintegrate would probably not be affected, but Hazō is not aware of any jutsu that does that. Difficulty Result: Easy.


Day 4
Prep Force Domes.
Prep TR140 Unchained. Difficulty Result: Medium.
Prep Kagome's Tears Rune. Difficulty Result: Easy.


Day 5
Prep Force Domes.
Prep TR140 Unchained.
Prep Chakra Shredder Pulse Rune. Difficulty Result: Medium.


Day 6
Prep Force Domes.
Prep TR140 Unchained.
Prep Let's Fuck With Sealmasters Rune. Difficulty Result: Hard. After working on this for a day, Hazou thinks that inhibiting activation might be easier than forcing activation, and forcing sealmasters to pay large amounts of chakra to activate their seals would have the similar effect of nullifying their main advantage. He doesn't know for certain though, and the idea would need a prep day.


Day 7
Infuse Force Domes:
Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 8 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) + 3 = 55
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 23 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 8 (prep) + 12 = 77

Hazō makes major progress on Force Domes. He thinks he's a little under a fifth of the way done. He feels pretty good about this rune, though he's not sure how much of that is due to excellent luck in the research process.

Infuse TR140 Unchained:
Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 8 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) - 3 = 49
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 23 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 8 (prep) - 6 = 59
Hazō spends a FP to reroll!
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 23 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 8 (prep) + 6 = 71

Hazō makes huge progress on TR140 Unchained. He thinks he's well over 50% of the way done. However, he's not sure how much value the rune will bring in terms of veterancy for higher acceleration factors, as he thinks he's already getting most of the benefit from his experience on TR103, 125, and 130.


Day 8
DoB rest.

Author's Notes: I could have written more of this plan but this was the big inspiring scene that I was super excited about and I feel that the rest of it can be handled offscreen without more than minimal loss of quality. (Also, I'm not sure how some of it would play out and need to discuss with the other QMs.) We'll get you answers on the rest of it ASAP.

XP AWARD: 40 This update covered 8 days.

Brevity XP: 8

"GM had fun" XP: 5
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  • Yeah, badass speeches are my Kryptonite. Thanks for the opportunity


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Chapter 682: Moving Along

About a month ago…

At last, her indecision had left her immobile as the icebergs steadily closed around her, cutting off her escape routes one-by-one until she was doomed to bleed herself against their jagged edges to make the narrowest escape she could.

Idiot child. Was she so selfish that she could only conceptualize her own suffering? People were going to die today.

At last, Akatsuki had fulfilled their promise to ensure that Hazō would complete no further dimensionalism research, that he would not be a competitor to their ultimate ambitions. After months of uncertainty, her decision to come on Hazō's mission was finally validated. Naruto's words, filtered through Noburi, filtered through Hazō, were insufficient to the situation – she longed to know if Akatsuki had asked about Asuma and the death of Isan and prayed that they had not – yet they were sufficient to force her to action.

Soon, the team would travel through hostile territory. She would need to travel and protect them on the Human Path. She could not afford to spend the majority of every day on the Seventh Path with her tessera and the innocent pangolins of Chūkū.

She needed the assignment to end in order to earn her superiors' approval and leave for days or weeks. The hyenas were raiding, not engaging. If she left, they would only grow more aggressive. She needed to stop them.

In their planning, she and Snowflake had granted themselves a little time to plan out the engagement of their dreams. In the event that none of the hyenas possessed ninjutsu capable of threatening her aerial position, and none of them were capable of reliably evading Hazō's Goo Bombs, and she was somehow able to persuade her tessera that they should leave alive the captured hyenas that had cost so many pangolin lives, then perhaps she might be able to escape today still holding the dubious honor of never having killed a sapient being with her far-too-bloodstained hands.

So, she had summoned Snowflake (two of whom elected to be Moonlight and Prism) and waited for the inevitable attack.

The signal had sounded. The hyenas had attacked from the east, but her preparations meant they took only one pangolin life (and how pitiful that she measured the life of an innocent as 'only' one) before they fled before Snowflake's charge. Kei followed them on skywalkers. The tall grass of the valley betrayed their steady retreat back to their den, and her cautious signals brought Snowlake and her tessera gradually forward.

Her hope of an ambush was foiled when she saw their den. The hyenas had noticed her obvious approach and had initiated combat preparations. Sparks of light came from below, betraying their active ninjutsu, while several of them were pacing and growling in the direction of the approaching pangolins. She counted ten.

Kei waited until Moonlight and Prism were by her side, high in the sky beyond the reach of all but the longest-range ninjutsu (and farther than any of the hyenas were willing to chance throwing their attacks). The pangolins took position south of the Hyena camp, while Snowflake would flank north on skywalkers, in the hope that any hyenas fleeing Kei's aerial onslaught would run right into her waiting Goo Bombs, rather than into the pangolin wall.

The air sat still in the slowly falling dusk. Perhaps they would not even smell Snowflake's position.

Kei was stalling. The hyenas' ninjutsu surely had a timer. They still thought they would win the fight, so were willing to stand, but if she waited too long, they would break into the grass and simply resume their attacks tomorrow. Her team could not afford the time that would cost. Worse, they might attack and overpower her tessera. Whatever their positions on Pantsā's war, they had been placed in her care, and her plan would endanger them if she chose not to play her part.

She nodded. It was time.

"Pangolin Clan Technique: Ghost Scales. Wind Element: Cloak of the Wind God."

Kei, Moonlight, and Prism grabbed a tagged kunai each and released their skywalkers, starting to fall, and the hyenas howled. Three throws whistled in an equilateral triangle to cover the hyena cackle, then moments later, the rushing wind around her turned into silence as her Banshee Slayers activated to cover the howling Banshee seals below, and cyan goo exploded outwards across the hyena formation.

Ninjutsu lanced outwards at her just as quickly, but she flipped midair and stuttered her skywalkers to adjust her trajectory, causing a sparkling bolt of light to pass her shoulder, while her sisters did the same to either side.

The initial onslaught of goo would trap only the weakest hyenas. Now, Moonlight and Prism threw their follow-up Goo Bombs into the densest part of the hyena formation, densely covering several as the rest dodged away from the strands that quickly got caught in the tall grasses.

Now in throwing range, Kei reached for a kunai. She had to make her choice. Continue with nonlethal methods, or execute the trapped hyenas before they threw more ninjutsu at her?

They were already preparing a counterattack. Their movements assured her that they would gladly take advantage of any indecision of hers. Could she stand to dodge ten hyenas' worth of ninjutsu until the very last was captured, if in fact she could capture all ten?

She closed her fingers around her chosen kunai, activated the seal, and threw. An explosion silently spread goo and three hyenas' viscera across the plains.

She had barely an instant to doubt herself before the counterattack came. She could not hear their howls of rage, but she felt her chakra coils refilling as their ninjutsu lanced through Moonlight and Prism, the fear of their final moments failing to disorient her as she ran through the air between the flames and crystals and starlight that, over and over, failed to kill her.

A hunk of fibrous material landed squarely on her back and Kei attempted to shake it off, only to find it stretching tendrils around her. She formed handseals as she felt razor-sharp thorns stabbing through both layers of her armor and into a muscle of her back, then her Gale Repulsion threw the animated killer shrub back to the ground.

She turned and saw Snowflake attacking a hyena, who dodged out of the way of Snowflake's Goo Bomb. The distraction had been enough though, and Kei sent a kunai through the hyena's back, though it somehow stayed standing. Kei felt another burst of chakra and confusion as one of the other hyenas killed Snowflake, then she was moving again.

How had she ever believed she could defeat ten hyena warriors alone with ninja skills as mediocre as her own? Her clones had burst in seconds and now it was all she could do to stay ahead of their attacks. She could try to climb up again, but then the hyenas would flee or attack her tessera or-

Allied attack ninjutsu, flying in from the south, distracting the hyenas. Her tessera had defied orders to move in to her aid.

Her panicked brain reacted. She had no easy kills, but she could throw Goo Bombs to make opportunities for her tessera. She threw into the closing hyena formation. She did not know how many she caught because the goo did not arrest their ninjutsu, and her world became light and pain an instant later. She suppressed her screams to dash away, ignoring the burning across her back.

She climbed and turned again, focusing through the pain on the battlefield. The hyena survivors, only three of them, were fleeing, while her tessera stormed forward. Moving on instinct, she armed and threw an explosive kunai, which pierced the leg of a hyena and promptly blew it off.

The hyena was alive, she realized, as the other two fled into the grasses.

"Leave it-"

A hunk of stone crushed the crippled hyena's head in. She could not spare even one defeated hyena.

Three died by her hand, her tessera had killed five more, and two fled. Kei could not tell what she felt, except for relief.

o-o-o​

"...and that's why you were allowed to stay on the Human Path for the last month?" Noburi asked.

"Essentially," Kei replied. "I have far from discharged my obligation, given the embarrassment I brought the Pangolin Clan at Kago and the Conclave, but the annihilation of the Hyena raiding group has proven sufficient to protect Chūkū from further retaliation, so my leave has been granted. I suspect even that shall soon expire. The needs of a war are manifold, and the value of a summoner, even one so mediocre in combat as myself, will not grant me a long reprieve.

"Regrettably, I fear I will need to request offensive missions if possible. Morally palatable as defending innocent civilians from hyena onslaught may be, the time requirement involved in defending a location is unacceptable given my obligations to Team Uplift – and of course, given our team's specializations, my offensive capacity with adequate preparation time far exceeds the defensive capacity I provide. I fear I will have killed many more hyena by the time this month expires."

"I'm sorry you had to do that, Kei," Hazō said. "I'm grateful for the sacrifices you're making for the mission."

"Then do not misuse me," Kei said. "Our sidetracking has become a whole subquest, and we should return to the original topic: your plan for the next few days that you wanted to discuss."

"Right," Hazō said. "So, in terms of research, I was thinking…"

o-o-o​

"I see," Cannai said. "And that is why you haven't visited the Seventh Path this last month. I don't mean to accuse you, Summoner. On the contrary, I am sorry you have been dealing with events that any dog would struggle with, and my pre-emptive apologies for any complications I may have created by foiling your Seventh Path meeting points. They had not caused any trouble yet, but I still chose to pre-emptively expel the Pangolin emissaries from my lands rather than let them gather intelligence or sow discord."

"Ah, you kicked Pandā out?" Hazō asked. "That'll make coordination between myself and Kei more difficult. Maybe I can sort out a different meeting point. As for the rest of it, it has been a struggle. Still, we've secured a temporary base that should make some of those challenges slightly more manageable. In the interest of operational security, I won't tell you any more about that unless you want me to."

"I suppose I do not 'need to know', as Kakashi used to put it," Cannai said. "Of course, I will not tell you the things you do not need to know in turn. In fact, even if Dog had received a missive from another summon clan about Human Path events, I would not be able to carry it to you."

"Are you implying that Dog has received a missive from the Human Path?"

"No, just reminding you that… ah, forget I said it," Cannai said. "I feel no qualms about telling you about purely Seventh Path events, nonetheless. Things have progressed as I foresaw and feared, and Dog is now engaged in war with Leopard."

"I see," Hazō said.

"I am well aware that you are fully occupied on the Human Path," Cannai said. "Nonetheless, a summoner's support would be invaluable to Dog, if you can afford to provide it. Instant communication across my territory would allow us to overwhelm the leopards strategically as well as tactically, for instance allowing you to lead strikes deep into enemy territory mere moments after their main forces have been confirmed to be elsewhere."

"I'm sorry Cannai, I just…"

Cannai gave a short affirmative bark. "It's fine, Summoner. I have asked Candoru, Cansaku, Canvass, Canun, and Cantelabra to form a temporary pack in an otherwise unoccupied section of my territory far from our borders with Leopard or Hyena, so that they will be prepared to be summoned at any moment. I have informed them all of your mission, and they have all taken the same oaths not to communicate information from the Human Path to you, and won't be fighting in our war. They all believe in your mission and want you to succeed, but be mindful of their morale. Candoru and Cansaku in particular are quite regretful that they won't be fighting alongside their packmates in the war.

"If you require additional dogs, let me know. I will attempt to convince them to take your oaths and join your fight on your behalf. Apart from these volunteers, I believe you have already asked our diplomats in Arachnid to take the same oath and accept sequestration by the Arachnid Empress far from her capital, so that only leaves the Horizon Chasers. Are they still in Toad?"

"That's right," Hazō said. "They were actually pretty unhappy about being forced to stay near the Toad Sages' swamp for my sake, but luckily for them, the Toad Sages are being… unwise, to be polite. I'll tell the Horizon Chasers that they're free to travel again, and hopefully that'll be enough of a mood boost that they'll take the oaths for me."

Cannai eyed Hazō. "Be careful with them, Summoner. They are still dogs, you know. They are not dolls for you to puppet around at your convenience."

"I know, Cannai. And I do want to say thank you for arranging all these resources for me on my behalf as I prepare for the fight against Akatsuki."

"You do not need to thank me for this, no more than you needed to thank me for fighting against the Dragons," Cannai said. Hazō glanced down at Cannai's foreleg, where the section of the Alpha's paw and foreleg that had been sucked into the Mirror Dragon was still hairless and pale. "The dogs of the new Dusk Willow pack agree with me that your mission is important and our duty to Dog requires giving you the tools you need to succeed. I am merely allowing them to follow their conscience, so if at all, you should thank them for their aid. Needless to say, their aid is not conditional on you helping in our war against Leopard. You should act as you think right, Summoner."

"No, really, thank you Cannai," Hazō said. "I think many summon bosses wouldn't have hesitated to pressure me into helping their clan in wartime, so I'm very grateful that I'm the Dog Summoner instead of any other clan's summoner."

"That is more to their detriment than to my merit," Cannai huffed.

"How is the war going?" Hazō asked.

"Poorly. We are decisively winning, of course, but for every advance of Dog clan warriors, a counterforce of Leopards pushes through somewhere in our lines to win territory back for Hyōhakken. I have been steadily claiming more and more of Leopard's skies, killing their forces with superior numbers and superior tactics, but it is not the rapid and overwhelming offense I had been hoping for.

"Hyōhakken has not been so foolish as to take the field himself. Instead, we clash our wills day and night trying to push our territory over the other's. Even now, I am dedicating most of myself to holding our skies in place."

"Is that okay?" Hazō asked hesitantly.

"It is easier to hold territory than to claim territory that is being actively held," Cannai said simply. "As to the experience of pushing ourselves back and forth across the sky… suffice to say, it is unpleasant. Extremely unpleasant.

"While Dog is winning our war, it appears that the limited support I can offer Hyena is insufficient. They are slowly buckling. Dog may be better at warmaking than Leopard, but Pangolin has far more experience than either of us. If Hyōhakken drags our war out to his own bitter end, then Hyena will very likely fall. Not quickly enough to save Hyōhakken, but it will fall nonetheless."

"I see," Hazō said. "That's… troubling."

"It is the world we live in," Cannai said, rising to his feet. "Now, go and fight your fight, and I will fight mine. May we meet again in calmer winds."

o-o-o​

"Everyone, I think it's time we get out of here. We've been in this cave long enough, and while we don't know how long it will take Hidan to find us, we do know that he's on our trail. We're on a timer anywhere we go. We can try our best to make this cave defensible, but I don't think we can make it stand up to a dedicated assault by S-rankers – not right now at least – so we need to leave."

Mari sighed, looking at the heated pool in the grotto. "So recently did we meet, and so soon are we torn apart from each other…" she muttered.

"Isn't three weeks of hot spring vacation enough for you?" Noburi asked.

"It's never enough."

"We can come back eventually," Hazō said. "Refreshing the pool's effect will be useful to give us more spare chakra, and with the rest of the caves sealed off, we shouldn't need to fight nearly as many chakra beasts if we make a return trip.

"Anyway, I'm thinking we head over the mountains, across the river on the western border of Wind, and into the wilds outside of the Elemental Nations. Any thoughts?"

"How are you going to deal with the chakra beasts?" Yuno asked.

"The same as always," Hazō replied. "Monumental quantities of seals. I'm pretty sure there's nothing out there that's stronger than a Dragon, so they should all die against a three-layered skyslicer perimeter."

"Right, the beasts are manageable," Mari said. "It's not Bear, so we have some hope of surviving it. But they're still really strong. There's a reason that Sand hasn't tried to settle that area, despite it being pretty fertile."

"When there are areas in the Land of Fire without settlements, isn't that usually due to the density of chakra beasts, instead of how strong they are?" Hazō asked.

"Almost," Yuno said. "They go hand-in-hand. If you have more beasts, it's more likely that there are going to be strong ones among them. But that's for Fire. In Wind, they just don't have the same number of beasts as Fire does, so if the area doesn't have any people in it, I assume it's because they're pretty strong, right?"

"That's my understanding," Mari said. "And that's the area around the river. The farther we go into the desert beyond, the worse the beasts will get."

"They're still just beasts," Hazō said. "They're not intelligent. We can handle them. Plus, if they're that strong, they'll make a great deterrent against any would-be pursuers. As always, I'll defer specific details to our security expert," Hazō nodded at Kagome-sensei, "our chakra beast expert," Yuno smiled, "and our elite jōnin. If this is really going to be that hard, does anyone have better ideas?"

"With the Southern Isles unacceptable, and presumably not wanting to take the time to cross to the Eastern Continent, it may be acceptable to journey into northern Earth Country or to Snow," Kei said.

"As it's getting closer to winter?" Mari asked. "Veto."

"Mari, the mission comes first," Hazō said.

"Do you want me to freeze to death?" Mari asked. "How about the beaches on the south of Wind Country? The new capital is on the southeast end, but the area southwest of there is still pretty deserted, right?"

"With the loss of their eastern fertile strip to Rock and River in the Fourth World War, Hidden Sand has been taking efforts to develop the southern coastline, being one of the last few productive parts of their domain," Kei replied. "We could easily pick another anonymous point of desert, but even the relatively sparsely populated coastline may be too risky for the mission parameters, given that we are considering going outside the Elemental Nations themselves."

"Okay, so we can go north-"

"No we can't."

"-to Earth, Snow, or Lightning. We can take a massive trek out into the Eastern Continent, which would take us the better part of two weeks and be bad for Yuno's recovery. We could pick a patch of desert in Wind Country and just roll the dice on Hidan finding us. Or, we could try to go off the map."

"What's the big deal, guys?" Noburi asked. "They're just some stupid chakra beasts. We're Team Uplift, we've been killing overpowered chakra beasts since day zero."

Mari sighed. "Fine, we can give it a try. We can set up a ground base and a skytower base at first, and see how the monsters break through the defenses before we commit to spending any real time near the ground. Everyone needs to be on skywalkers at all times and ready to make a break for it if some overpowered monstrosity gets through the perimeter."

"We can use telescopes to observe the beasts when they attack," Yuno said. "Lots of them should be on the surface, so we can learn about their abilities before we actually need to fight."

"I have some new trap ideas for the little critters with the Scenery Clone Seal Array," Kagome-sensei added. "Let's see how they like it when they're getting boom-squished by traps they can't even see."

And with that, the team fell into planning their next adventure.



Day 1
Prep TR140 Unchained.
Prep Force Domes.
Prep Long Fuse Explosive. Hazō thinks that getting timers accurate to seconds or minutes over the course of several weeks is going to overinflate the project's difficulty, so he instead designs the seal so that the timer is set at infusion instead of activation time, and it is accurate only to the hours mark. Difficulty Result: Genin.


Day 2
Prep TR140 Unchained.
Prep Force Domes.
Infuse Long Fuse Explosive.

Hazō (Calligraphy): 47 + 3 (Dampeners) + 2 (prep) - 9 = 43
Hazō (Sealing): 53 + 2 (prep) + 9 = 64

Hazō completes the Long Fuse Explosive! Tentative mechanics: Once activated, this explosive tag occasionally flickers with light until a chosen time up to a month away, when it suddenly explodes. The duration is chosen at infusion time, and is only accurate to the hour mark.


Day 3
Prep TR140 Unchained.
Prep Force Domes.


Day 4
Prep TR140 Unchained.
Prep Force Domes.


Day 5
Infuse TR140 Unchained.
Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 8 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) - 9 = 43
Hazō spends a FP to reroll!
Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 8 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) - 3 = 49
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 23 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 8 (prep) - 6 = 59
Hazō spends a FP to reroll!
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 23 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 8 (prep) + 0 = 65

Hazō completes the TR140 Unchained! Tentative mechanics: Like previous time runes, but with +40% acceleration instead. Rune lasts for 6 months, and affects an AoE a kilometer in diameter centered on the rune.

Infuse Force Domes.
Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 8 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) - 3 = 49
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 23 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 8 (prep) + 0 = 65

The progress continues, slowly but surely. Hazō feels pretty comfortable with this rune.


Day 6
DoB rest.

A single explosive seal does not destroy an expended rune to the point where it is not recognizable. Twelve or so seems sufficient to grind it down into small enough pieces that someone inspecting the rubble afterwards probably wouldn't be able to tell that there was anything unusual about it.

Hazō isn't sure why the misterator didn't activate, and it's been a bit too long for the chakrascope to help diagnose what happened since there wasn't a sealing failure or anything major. He chalks it up to water damage.

Noburi is confident that he's collected enough data to recreate the pool's effect via a "conventional" MedNin + Technique Hacking route (though Hazō thinks he's overestimating how easy ninjutsu creation is). Noburi can't say for sure whether he has what you'll need for rune research. He's tried his best, but he can't predict how that research pathway will go. Given that Hazō has been too busy with runecrafting to learn medical ninjutsu, Noburi has started studying Hazō and Kei's shadow clone casts and doing [incomprehensible jargon describing some specific bloodline research methods] on himself.

Yuno's recovery is progressing well.

Kagome has started working on Banshee Fuckers. He reports that he's making slow-but-steady progress. He asks that you not adjust any departure timelines on his behalf, as he can always productively spend time scribing seals.

Hazō re-opens the caves with Earthshaping so that Kei and Tenten can search for the Otter Scroll. They do not find the Otter Scroll. Canvass also does not find the Otter Scroll. There is no sign of any chakravores, though there are a few smallish groups of magmaspines that are effortlessly eviscerated. Hazō closes the caves afterwards.

Mari reports no difference in her aura since arriving here, but confesses that she wouldn't be able to tell for sure, given that there's no one else around here with aura for her to test against.

Noburi and Kei personally dislike the idea of keeping drained ninja captives as chakra batteries on moral grounds, though they both acknowledge its utility to the mission. Noburi has some practical concerns: if never allowed to regain consciousness, he'd probably only be able to keep them alive for a couple weeks, and letting them regain consciousness regularly could potentially become dangerous, depending on what rank of ninja you've captured. More importantly, neither he nor Kei see a good way to transport them across long distances at anything resembling normal ninja pace. It could be a temporary solution to the chakra problem, if indeed you find an acceptable target, but it's not likely to be a permanent one.

XP Award: 18 + 6 (brevity) XP

Vote time! What to do now?

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Interlude: The Curse of the Kurosawa
Interlude: The Curse of the Kurosawa

June 16, 1071 AS.

The turnout at Ren's funeral was about what Hana had expected. On the one hand, Ren had been the Kurosawa clan head, the woman who'd guided the clan through over a decade of success. Whatever else could be said about Hana's sister, she had been a hard worker, and in a clan whose Bloodline Limit encouraged convenient shortcuts and labour-saving tricks, hard work was a virtue to respect. On the other hand, Ren had died in disgrace, the Clan Lady who'd lost the Kurosawa the hat, the diplomat who'd been defeated by diplomacy, with no legacy to leave behind but mediocrity.

Her reputation had become an albatross around the clan's neck–though, in fairness to her, part of that was just how much she was eclipsed by her successor. The Sixth Mizukage was popular with the seniors: respectful and open to dialogue, even correction, where Yagura had been dictatorial and Ren too occupied with shoring up her authority. He was popular with the rank-and-file: the AMI backed him at every step where they had obstructed Ren, and he was the first mover behind a world peace that had ended Mist's bloodiest military conflict since the Battle of Nagi Island (a conflict, incidentally, which Ren had committed them to). He was popular with the populace at large: he was the reformer Mist had been waiting for ever since waking up from Yagura's nightmare, and there was a careful forethought behind his choices that seemed characteristic less of an enthusiastic beginner and more of an elder who had spent decades preparing for this era with all the calculation of the Mori.

Given her awkward position with regard to the clan, Hana had not been invited to speak. The Kurosawa had, however, yielded to her rights as blood kin, which was how she came to be standing closest to the priest as he intoned verses of supplication to the ancestors–and next to one of those very ancestors in the flesh.

Next to Hana, Kurosawa Raito, Mother, wept in silence. It was not the way of the Kurosawa to hide their feelings at funerals–the fact that they could, better than anyone in the world, made the sincere expression of grief a sacrament in its own way.

Hana wasn't showing any feelings–not because of the Iron Nerve, or because she was too uncaring. She'd never been accused of that. She just didn't know how to feel. Ren had been her sister. Loved, admired, hated, pitied. Her best friend and the woman who had betrayed her in a way only family could. There was an entire ball of emotions tangled inside Hana, too complex to unwind, and no longer meaningful to anyone but her. It felt like any emotion she let herself show would be a lie without all the others.

Mother was weeping. Would she have wept if it had been Hana?

The ceremony concluded. The empty vessel was pushed out to sea. The offerings within would call to Ren's lost spirit, guiding it down to the Abyss where her ancestors–the ancestors she'd once shared with Hana–waited in judgement.

The crowd began to disperse. Hana was headed to Kurohige's. She didn't drink much, only socially–escape into alcoholism was a temptation she'd faced down too many times–but today, maybe it would help loosen the knot of feelings inside her and help her figure out whether and how she was supposed to mourn.

"Hana."

The voice was quiet, soft, but unmistakable. There were voices you never forgot, even if you were hearing them for the first time in twenty years.

Hana turned to face the mother who had abandoned her.

"What is it?"

"Do you have time?" Mother asked her. "I'd like to talk to you."

Now? After all this time?

"Please," Mother said. "This is the second time I've lost a daughter before I could find the right words to say to her. I won't live to see a third."

Hana wavered. What did she owe the woman who'd turned her back on her all those years ago? Who'd placed the nebulous, invented needs of the clan over her own family? Who hadn't lifted a finger for Hana when she needed a helping hand?

But then, that was also how she felt about Ren. And now Ren was dead, and everything Hana didn't say, and everything Ren didn't say, would stay unsaid forever.

"Fine," Hana said.

-o-​

The second Mother sat down in her parlour, her body language transformed. The ramrod-straight back sagged. The steady hands began to tremble. It hit Hana for the first time that Mother was old now, and that even if she didn't hide her feelings with the Iron Nerve, that didn't mean she didn't hide anything else.

"Hana, I'm sorry."

Hana must have misheard.

"Wh-What did you say?"

Mother rolled her eyes. "You heard me, Hana. I can say it again. I'm sorry."

Hana stared at her, aghast. "Now? After all this time?"

"Better late than never, right?" Mother asked. "It turns out, the closer you get to never, the less your stupid pride starts to matter.

"It's the curse of the Kurosawa, you know," she added. "We have the power to always wear a brave face, so we forget that sometimes it's better to admit defeat. We never forget a wrong, even when remembering it just means we're the ones hurting ourselves. Time after time, we turn and walk away when we should be begging on our knees.

"I always knew deep down I was a lousy mother. Always so distant, even though you were still my girls, and none of it was your fault. It's a miracle you turned out as well as you did. And then when I finally tried to do something for you, it all went to hell.

"You probably won't believe me, Hana, but I really did do it for you. I wanted to spare you the heartbreak I could see in your future. I didn't want you to go through all the pain I did when I made the same mistake. But if I'd only known you better, if I'd let myself be closer to you, I'd have realised just how much like the old me you were. There was never any chance of you choosing the sagely wisdom of your elders over your heart, was there?"

Hana sat silent, dumbstruck. In all her life, her mother had never spoken to her like this.

"What's worse," Mother went on, "I was wrong. Your lover, no, your husband never broke your heart. He put you first till the day he died. He even gave you the child you wanted. You can't imagine the idiot I felt when I heard news of his death and realised the betrayal I'd been waiting for was never going to happen."

"But…" Hana choked out, "if you already knew you were in the wrong back then… then why?"

Mother chuckled bitterly. "A dozen excuses, each more pathetic than the last. The Clan Council wouldn't accept the loss of face from the clan backing down. But I was still clan head back then. I should have used that power to ram it down their throats, and damn the consequences. Ren was about to succeed, and having the real heir come back to overshadow the backup candidate would ruin her authority, maybe even split the clan. As if I'd ever been a slave to politics when love was on the line. You'd have turned me down anyway because you couldn't forgive me–I still do think that, but what would I have had to lose by trying except that damned pride?"

"I would have," Hana agreed. "You and Ren ruined my life for stupid, petty reasons when I was never your enemy."

"Like I said, the curse of the Kurosawa," Mother said. "Just like after you'd been wronged to the Abyss and back, your own pride meant you wouldn't have been able to choke it down. Not even if it could've meant your son growing up with wealth and influence and clan heir training, because that's what he'd be until Ren had kids."

"If you're trying to tell me," Hana growled, "that after everything you did, I should've–"

"Oh, no," Mother interrupted, "this is the Kurosawa Raito apology tour. And besides, it sounds like little Hazō is doing way better over in Leaf than he would have as Lord Kurosawa. They've got Hokage dying like flies over there, and our ambassador says he comes out stronger each time. Apparently, he's due to marry Mori Ami soon, and if that's not destiny, I don't know what is."

Hana would put money on that particular rumour being either a total fabrication by the shipping faction of Leaf's rumour mill, allegedly founded by Jiraiya in his spymaster days and since gone out of control, or part of a sophisticated political game by Ami that had precious little to do with reality.

"Is that all you had to say?" Hana asked.

"Pretty much," Mother said. "I don't have that long left, you know"–she glanced down at her hands–"a few years tops, and only because I've kept on top of the medical ninjutsu Tsunade of the Three's been publishing through the AMITY medical network. No amount of pride is going to fix that.

"You'll be welcome here, Hana," Mother said. "I've got a bunch of capital saved up and little reason to hoard it. Whether you want to demand formal readoption or just come and go for tea and snacks without snooty doormen getting in your way, now's the time for me to ram my will down the clan's throat like I should've done when it mattered."

Hana stared. Formal readoption? She couldn't decide whether Mother's brain coral was fracturing with age or whether this was that notorious Raito sense of humour that had somehow never come out around her daughters.

Though it was halfway tempting, if only for the satisfaction of throwing the catfish among the pigeons. Her having left the clan was the only reason she didn't succeed Ren in the first place (well, that and the fact that she'd sooner slit her wrists and jump into the Hundred Fins). She was the clan's original choice for heir, a pure-blooded main family Kurosawa, and a veteran jōnin, while Lord Hanzō, for all his talents, was a branch family special jōnin chosen half as a figurehead. She wouldn't win a contest against him, not with her mother as her only backer (if that), but even the possibility would give half the clan conniptions.

Clan business would also be a nice excuse to take a break from the endless diplomacy missions the Sixth was throwing at her (she was still getting used to the luxury of being able to complain about too much work).

As for tea and snacks, if Mother thought it would be that easy to buy forgiveness for a stolen future, then she was definitely growing senile. But then again, she'd apologised. Would things have been different before the end if Ren said she was sorry, from her heart and without making excuses?

"I'll think about it," Hana said, the non-answer the best she could manage.

That twisted ball of feelings inside her was the size of a Tailed Beast Bomb now, and no less volatile. Screw discipline. It was the day of her sister's funeral, and nobody would raise an eyebrow if, just for today, she drank Kurohige's dry.

-o-​

Hana's brush hovered over the scroll, wet with ink. Hazō needed to know that his aunt had been declared dead. She hoped he wouldn't be too angry that the Kurosawa hadn't invited him to the funeral (though, then again, he'd be angry with the Kurosawa, and screw them), but the clan was more than happy to privately roll up the scroll on that chapter of its life rather than making the disgraced clan head's funeral an international occasion.

The brush hovered. She missed him. Ancestors, but she missed him. Was he happy? Healthy? Eating well? She knew what sealmasters were like. Did he have a consort, or was he still mourning that nice Akane girl? Hana was starting to feel her age, especially after yesterday's conversation, and having the question of grandchildren settled would do her heart a world of good.

A horrible thought occurred to her. What if the Ami rumour was true? It made no sense, but a rational woman like Hana had no hope of understanding what went through that girl's head, and young men had a tendency to think with their minnows even before they had to face a seduction specialist jōnin.

That would be a disaster. A catastrophe he'd regret for the rest of his life. Maybe she should forget the letter and go straight to Leaf to stage an intervention before it was too late.

(No, she was not her mother. Hana would never disown her child, not even if he chose to engage in holy matrimony with chaos itself.)

Straight to Leaf. No, that wasn't an option for her anymore, was it? She'd written to Leaf before, asking for permission to visit, and been politely but unambiguously told she was persona non grata, on the explicit orders of the Fifth Hokage.

She hadn't pressed the matter. The Gōketsu had made their choice. Mari over her. They could surely have pressured Jiraiya into pardoning her otherwise. And she couldn't imagine it anyway if she tried, going back into that house where that monster was treated as family.

It's the curse of the Kurosawa, you know.

Mari was a monster. Hana loathed her from the bottom of her heart. That was true and justified and would never change.

We have the power to always wear a brave face, so we forget that sometimes it's better to admit defeat.

Hana's mother had given up on ever being with her daughter again, not because she didn't love her–implicitly; those were words she hadn't said yesterday–but because she couldn't accept her mistake and throw everything she had into making it right.

Hana wasn't her mother. She would never be her mother.

We never forget a wrong, even when remembering it just means we're the ones hurting ourselves.

Hana loathed Mari. That would never change.

But did she loathe her more than she loved her son?

Time after time, we turn and walk away when we should be begging on our knees.

Hana sighed. She put away the scroll, marred by ink dripping from the brush like the tears that preceded closure.

She unrolled a new one.

Honoured Lord Hokage, she began.

-o-​

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Chapter 683: An Imperfect Defense

"Noburi's declared Yuno all better," Hazou said, "so once I finish this latest round of rune research, we should get moving. Before we go, I wanted to run an idea by you. I think we can force anyone tracking us to cross through Bear if they want to get to us. We cross over Wind's western river, then once we've gone far enough into the desert, we turn north and end up on the far side of Bear."

"The far side of Bear?" Mari asked. "Does Bear have a far side?"

"I assume so," Hazou said. "Surely the… Bear-ness ends at some point, right?"

"And how will we know where that point is?"

"We just go as far as we can," Hazou said. "We have skywalkers. If we run three hundred miles into the desert then turn north, surely we'll have gone past the borders of Bear, right?"

"Bear isn't really a country. I don't think it has borders so much as a 'we're pretty sure people stop coming back if they go farther than about here'. We're already going into territory that no sane ninja would follow us into. Why overcomplicate things by going into the one place more dangerous to us than Rain?"

"Because I'm not worried about the sane ninja chasing us. I'm worried about Hidan."

Mari considered that for a minute. "I still don't think it's worth it. Based on what you said, he doesn't track like he's got a compass pointing at us. Instead, Jashin, I guess, somehow leads him to us. If we can walk a path to the far side of Bear, he can as well. Speaking for myself, if I were giving directions to a ground operative, and a big obstacle stood between them and their objective, I'd give them the route around, not just tell them to barrel through. Unless his tracking really is a dumb compass, and he's also dumb enough to blindly follow it into Bear, I don't think we get anything out of the risk. Let's keep it simple. Head into the deep desert, secure a site, then get you set up to be as productive as possible."

"Fair enough. Let's go tell the team."

o-o-o​

With a final, monumental twist of chakra, Hazou pressed reality inwards and compressed it into the stone blank in front of him. He felt momentarily disoriented as a thousand choirs sang colors of ever-so-slightly different shades, but they rotated and the light finally shined through.

If his calculations were right, he'd just completed the Iron Earth Rune.

He activated it, then stood and stepped back, and immediately he felt the difference. The sandy ground under his research site had changed. It felt almost solid like a pavestone, except it shifted ever so slightly as his feet oh-so-slowly sank into it. He reached down to scoop up a handful of sand and had to chakra-boost to get his hand in and pull it free of the ground. As he pulled it free of the ground, the incredible resistance the earth had shown suddenly ended and he flung the sand in the air. It flew like normal, but when it landed, it didn't make the soft susurrations he'd expected. Instead, each grain neatly stuck still, failing to cause any tiny adjustments in the nearby sand.

He pulled another handful of sand from the ground more carefully and watched it stream through his fingers where it pooled in too-tall pyramids that collapsed slower than they had any right to.

If all went well, this would prevent (or at least, massively slow) tunnelers from entering Leaf from below once the village had the protection of a Runic Air Dome to cover itself from above. It was the start of a defense that would keep the village safe from even Akatsuki.

o-o-o​

It was well past sunset when the team emerged from the cave. They quickly dismantled the defensive perimeter and climbed on their skywalkers into the dry desert night. The stars and moon shone bright overhead, and the cool air eased the exertion of stair-stepping a mile into the air. They turned west and walked over the mountains.

Strangely, the mountains seemed to split the desert away from a green paradise. Trees and bushes covered the far side of the mountains they crossed, and dozens of streams fed down into a wide, slow-moving river on the far side. They had plenty of time to watch the river from above as they crossed high in the sky, and it made Hazou think. Abundant water from the wide, twisting river should have made those plains a perfect place for farming and settlement, yet the land remained completely untamed. Had the chakra beasts here really prevented Hidden Sand, so desperate for grain, from claiming the land?

Well, it wasn't just the danger. They'd had other land to worry about before the war, and protecting this area would have required projecting force through their great desert. Still, if they could reach out to the southern coast, maybe they would choose to settle here as well in time.

Past the river, life still covered the land. The pale moonlight illuminated endless tall grasses, only occasionally broken up by patches of crooked trees. It reminded him of the terrain in Rice Country, except without rice paddies set up around every stream and pond.

The team had surely left the area that any cartographer would have included in their maps by now, but they continued to run. Without any landmarks or directions, they had no target in mind. If they ever wanted to come back into the Elemental Nations, they just needed to go in the direction of the sunrise.

And if they came back to the world already under Akatsuki's iron grip, Hazou intended to do so with the power to end their tyranny once and for all.

o-o-o​

Their pace slowed as they ran into a heavy headwind, and they took the opportunity to collapse onto skytowers, relying on Kagome-sensei's Darkness Domes to shut out the light so that they could sleep. They rose well past sunrise and carried onwards into the wind, until the scattered rocky outcroppings and thin grasses of the savannah finally gave way to sandy desert again. They continued for a couple hours longer, then prepared to make their base.

Hazou, Noburi, and Kagome-sensei waited on a skytower while the more combat-capable members of the party descended to secure an area against roaming chakra beasts. Once they got the all-clear, they reunited on the ground where Hazou and Kagome-sensei set up a more thorough perimeter.

Hazou burned through the day's allotment of chakra casting a powerful Earthshaping. He ignored the sounds of occasional explosions and fighting around him as his teammates violently expunged a few recalcitrant beasts from their former territory, instead reshaping the sand around him into a maze of walls of compressed quartz surrounding their fifty-meter-wide camp. Kagome-sensei had plenty of suggestions and corrections, changing patches of the walls from opaque to transparent and back so as to maximize the team's sightlines out while minimizing any sightlines in.

Then, Hazou turned his attention to the underground, increasing the density of the stone and making underground pockets of air that Kagome-sensei would fill with yet more traps for potential burrowers. He sealed the caves, collapsing them and filling them with dirt, and moved the bedrock to the surface, so that the team could have stable stone to run on if they were attacked rather than loose sand or glass.

The rest of the day was more of the same. For the next few hours, while Hazou crafted the base's time-acceleration rune, the local beasts wanted to test their luck against the newcomers. Kagome-sensei and Yuno analyzed their capabilities and updated the defenses, iterating until, finally, the beasts seemed to realize that Team Uplift was no easy meal, and the explosions came to an end.

Finally, Hazou could start his research.

o-o-o​

Several days later…

Slowly, Hazou drew himself away from the strange abstractions of the Out and back into reality. He heard crying.

"What's wrong?" he asked, once he'd found his way across camp towards where Kei and Tenten and Noburi huddled around a crying Yuno.

"A particularly malfeasant type of chakra beast," Kei replied, her hair whipping slightly in the ever-present eastward wind as she watched Yuno. Noburi was holding his wife, leaving Kei and Tenten standing around awkwardly.

"Is it alright if I ask what happened?" Hazou asked, stepping closer and kneeling down beside Noburi and Yuno.

Yuno faced him, face still screwed up, but Hazou caught a hint of a smile on her face. "Yes! Hazou, I'm so glad you're here. I thought…"

"Give her a hug, Hazou," Noburi said. "Contact is good."

Hazou hugged her.

"Do you want to know the story?" Yuno asked.

Hazou nodded.

"They were jackals. They weren't that big – maybe up to my waist? I think it was only two of them that I found, close to our perimeter, and I should have just killed them both. Instead, Satsuko split one just to make sure they weren't too fast, and the other one looked at me and put me in this genjutsu.

"It was a salt flat. So endlessly flat in every direction. In the distance, I could see mountains in every direction, but they were so, so very far. Above, there was the full moon. Only the moon. I didn't see a single star.

"I dispelled, and the genjutsu went away. The genjutsu was weak and the beasts were slow so I thought I could handle them. I went ahead of my clones, since I know shadow clones are weak to genjutsu, and I let the other one go so I could track it back to its den. I was worried we were sitting on the jackals' territory and that they might come back and hunt you or Noburi. I wanted to clear them out."

Yuno paused to wipe her tears away, breathing deeply. "I used that jutsu Orochimaru gave you, then I went into the den. It was a big cave, nothing too tight. There weren't that many of them. Less than twenty. The place had a dry stink to it, like dried blood and shit. The floor was covered with bones and hair. It was light outside and only a little bit of light was going into their cave, but their eyes…

"It was like they were reflective, like a cat's, but they were shining this dark, endless purple. And when I saw them, they sent us… somewhere else.

"It was that same place, that same endless salt flat. I dispelled again right away, but there were so many looking at me, and in an instant they sent me back. I kept dispelling, but each time I was only able to take a step forward before they sent me back there again. I was moving so much faster than them in this world, but it was in stutters as I came here for a third of a second at a time. Satsuko split one, then, somewhere in the next dozen dispels, I ran out of chakra.

"I was stuck in that salt flat with Satsuko. She was the only one there with me. She was supposed to be rising up to parry away one of their attacks and spray blood in another's eyes but instead she was dry. Not even the jackals were there. I tried to use your seals, but they didn't work while I was there, and while I could feel my chakra, I had spent it all, so I couldn't even use any jutsu.

"I was there for a long time. I wanted to think and see if there was some way out of there, but I was so tired. Maybe it was because I was out of chakra – I don't think I regenerated while I was in that world – but I mostly think it was a part of the genjutsu. They didn't want their prey thinking or planning. They wanted it to give up. I think I would have died myself, if it weren't for the fact that every time the genjutsu was about to end, there was this faint creaking, tearing sensation in the world that let me get ready to go back to this world so that I could twist my feet a little, swing Satsuko a bit farther, start to duck under an attack, whatever, before they sent me back to that world.

"We tried walking towards the mountains in the distance. I don't know how long we walked for. They never got closer. I would have tried running, but I was so, so tired. I couldn't manage more than a walk. The moon fell behind the mountains I was walking towards, but the sky didn't get lighter. Instead, it stayed dark, and the moon just rose again from the mountains behind me. Each time I was there, the moon would fall and rise six times before the genjutsu ended with the moon high in the sky again.

"I tried sleeping, but I couldn't. The salt was thick in the air. I could feel it sapping the water from my eyes and my mouth and my lungs. When I laid down, it was worse. I could feel it rubbing into my skin, with the faintest burning that kept me from sleeping. I tried meditating, training, anything, but I was just too tired to make it work. For one of the genjutsu-cycles, I tried walking towards the mountains the whole time, but I never got closer. After that, I didn't care where I walked. I just picked a direction.

"I tried writing messages in the salt. The words when I stayed close, but when I walked away and came back, they'd been smoothed over. I don't know who did that. Even when I wrote the message and didn't leave it for all six moons, it was gone after I went back to this world for however many seconds.

"I never gave up. It was so hard. Eventually, all I could do was try to fix what I last saw in this world in my mind. The jackal pouncing at me, the lightning around me, anything, just to remember some experience that wasn't the endless salt. I planned out what I needed to do next – as much as I could with that fatigue running through my mind – then I just lay down and stared at the moon, or walked. I tried to remember my plan until I felt that creaking, tearing sensation, then came back into this world, maybe killed another jackal, then went back.

"I don't know how long I spent there with only Satsuko. Not Noburi, not you, not anyone. If I didn't have Satusko, I don't know if I would have kept fighting. It was just us. I think it was months. Maybe a year. I'm so happy you're all here with me, that this world is the real world. It is the real one, right? I don't think I would make it if I saw that world again. I started to wonder and doubt. Did I really remember what I thought my life was like, or was I just making it up? It was getting harder and harder to remember what I was like before the salt flat. The tiredness killed my ability to remember too. I couldn't even remember your faces while I was there. I'm glad that I can see you all again. I hope what I remember is real

"I don't want to sleep tonight. Or for a long time. If I went back there, I think I would go mad.

"Thank you for being here. Thank you for being real."

o-o-o​

"What are those birds doing up there?"

"Eagles, looks like," Kagome-sensei said, squinting. "Must think we're prey. Too many stinking chakra-sensing beasts. They're able to find us despite the illusion arrays. Doesn't matter. They'll cut themselves up on the skyslicers if they try to swoop down at us."

"I don't like having them overhead," Mari said, bounding up to Hazou's side. "I'm going to burn your spare chakra for the day to make some shadow clones to scare them off."

Hazou's face soured. They'd already had to cut into the chakra he was using for shadow clone training in order to refill their fighters after some encounter with chakra beasts in and around their camp. It was necessary to keep everyone at maximum fighting capacity, but still the waste grated at him.

Hazou nodded, and Mari bounded off to Noburi. A minute later, the team huddled in tight formation as a pair of Mari and Tenten shadow clones went up, passing through gaps in the skyslicer net to the hawks above.

The birds swooped faster than Hazou could track, and he saw a puff of a shadow clone dissipating. Tenten winced.

"They're fast!" Mari said as the birds tucked their wings into a dive, aiming, somehow, for the holes in the skyslicer net while the clones trailed behind. "Girl power, now!"

Hazou cut his thumb against the pin on his belt in an instant as he heard Kei, Yuno, Tenten, and Mari starting to incant their combat ninjutsu. The 'soft' members of the team – that is, the men – were to retreat into the Seventh Path while the rest held their ground. Hazou hated it, but against hordes of beasts that could even injure Yuno if she didn't take care, he couldn't stick around and expect to survive.

"Summoning Technique: Cantelabra!"

And, just according to orders, the young dog immediately pulled Hazou back across the planes.

o-o-o​

Hazou had no choice but to wait. The Dusk Willow pack had asked if they could help, but Hazou just needed to count sixty seconds before he could return to the Human Path. His team would survive, he knew it, and they would be there to greet him, so he anxiously counted down the seconds until he could return. If, against all odds, they weren't there, he'd skywalk up while summoning Cantelabra again, returning to the Seventh Path if there were still beasts around.

Finally, his mental timer ran out and he formed the twist of chakra that released him back to the Human Path. He landed on the sand with his stomach complaining from the summoning lurch, but he forced himself to trigger his skywalkers and run as he turned and saw-

Mari flagging him down. Scattered corpses of the eagle creatures across their camp. Everyone else hovering around a body on the ground.

Kagome appeared behind him in a pop of pale viridian smoke.

"What happened?" Hazou asked, coming to a stop by Mari's side. Noburi was holding a hand against a bleeding wound in Tenten's side, while gesturing at Yuno to hand him something from a pouch. He could see that Tenten was conscious and gritting her teeth as Kei held her hand, pale as a sheet.

"Tenten got stabbed by one of their beaks," Mari said. "Everyone else is fine, the clones took a lot of hits. Snowflake didn't make it. Wound doesn't look that bad, she should live."

"If you're not helping, don't be a fucking distraction," Noburi turned to snap at Hazou and Mari. "Get away. Make sure we're not disturbed. Yuno, the poultice in the red jar, quickly. Here, rub it into the wound, and let me…"

o-o-o​

The ground shuddered and Hazou looked up from his storage-sealed desk to see the scattered grains of sand on the ground shaking.

Kagome-sensei was on his feet. "Incoming, that's-"

The ground shook again.

"-a breach on the-"

The ground shook again. Hazou scrambled to his feet as his more agile teammates – Mari, Kagome-sensei, Yuno – were already chakra-boosted and climbing into the sky.

"-underground perimeter, section-"

The ground shook, shuddered, and finally gave in as a giant sinkhole opened under what had previously been their camp.

Hazou's didn't hear the rest of whatever Kagome was saying. Instead, he activated his skywalkers and sprinted, trying to climb into the sky as the sinkhole opened further and he saw something coming up from the depths, and fast.

It was a circular maw, large enough to swallow the Hokage Tower whole, and lined with teeth, each taller than a two-story building.

Hazou pushed chakra through his legs to outrun the beast, but he was too slow. The maw opened and extended, and the razor tip of a tooth tore a shallow cut through his leg. Then, like zigzagging lightning, the maw started to close, at that same tooth turned around and punched into his stomach.

Hazou reacted instantly, flickering off his skywalkers so that the tooth only stabbed him rather than fully impaling him. The creature's bite was taking him to the center of its maw. He twisted midair, gritting his teeth as the tooth grinded into his belly, and crunched his feet to his core. He burst out, smashing the tooth with a chakra-boosted strike and activating his skywalkers as he jumped up and away from the creature's gullet. Behind him, he heard teeth clack as the beast failed to shred him in the center of its ring of bladed teeth.

Hazou climbed, glancing around him to see Noburi and Kei and Tenten climbing just above him, each of them bloodied by the beast's attack. He reached to the blood at his gut, wetting his fingers to start the summoning technique to make his escape, when he noticed the giant-mawed worm-like beast below. It thrashed once as a shallow section of its face came loose to hang as a thick flap, split by the even line of a skyslicer. Then, apparently deciding that its prey was too much trouble to finish hunting, it pulled its mouth back underground and burrowed away.

Another narrow survival. Hazou didn't know how far the creature could leap into the air, but if it wanted to, Hazou was in no shape to survive another attack.

That wound in his gut was bleeding pretty heavily. He should probably check-in with Noburi about that.

Kagome's underground perimeter gives everyone forewarning that this is about to happen, so there's no "surprise round". Instead, combat starts like normal.

Initiative
Mari
Kagome
Yuno
Chakra-sandworm
Tenten
Kei
Noburi
Hazou

Mari
Sprint into the sky. She would stick around to provide a Substitution target, but everyone needs to get into the sky anyway where Substitution doesn't work, so there's no point.

Kagome
Sprint into the sky.

Yuno
Sprint into the sky.

Chakra-sandworm
Takes ?? stress passing through and destroying the skyslicers. AoE bite attack on everyone in the camp. This is one of the stronger solo chakra beasts at this distance from the EN in terms of overall power, but it's more of a tank than a DPS, so its attack is not actually that strong. Weapons:2.

Attack: ??

Everyone is using a Reflexive Supplemental to activate skywalkers.

Kei (Athletics): 53 + 7 (boost) + 5 (Skywalkers) + 6 (invoke "Team Uplift") + 6 (tag Kagome's Perimeter forewarning) + 6 = 83
Kei takes 5 + 2 = 7 stress! PCJ soaks 2 and pops! Her stress track soaks 3! Kei takes a Mild Consequence!

Noburi (Athletics): 45 + 8 (boost) + 5 (Skywalkers) + 5 (invoke "Team Uplift") + 5 (tag Kagome's Perimeter forewarning) + 6 = 74
Noburi takes 8 + 2 = 10 stress! PCJ soaks 2 and pops! His stress track soaks 3! Noburi takes a Mild and Medium Consequence!

Hazou (Athletics): 37 + 3 (IN) + 6 (boost) + 5 (Skywalkers) + 10 (invoke "(Formerly (Formerly)) Marked for Death" + invoke "Team Uplift") + 5 (tag Kagome's Perimeter forewarning) + 0 = 66
That's enough to survive, but not enough to avoid taking a Severe! Hazou has only 1 FP left, so he cannot buy enough half-tags to avoid taking a Severe! Hazou will reroll: a +6 or above will let him dodge a Severe, but a -9 or below would kill him. Taking a Severe would jeopardize the mission and risk far more than his life, so Hazou's willing to take the gamble based on recent characterization of him being super mission-driven. In most worlds, the result is the same as it currently is.
Hazou (Athletics): 37 + 3 (IN) + 6 (boost) + 5 (Skywalkers) + 10 (invoke "(Formerly (Formerly)) Marked for Death" + invoke "Team Uplift") + 5 (tag Kagome's Perimeter forewarning) + 6 = 72
Hazou takes 8 + 2 = 10 stress! PCJ soaks 2 and pops! His stress track soaks 3! Hazou takes a Mild and Medium Consequence!

Tenten (Athletics): ??

Tenten
Sprint into the sky.

Kei
Sprint into the sky.

Noburi
Sprint into the sky.

Hazou
Sprint into the sky.

Round 2

Mari, Yuno, Tenten, Kagome

Continue running vertically, getting 100s of meters in the sky.

Chakra-sandworm
At this point, with its skyslicer injury stinging and its prey far off in the sky, it decides to call off its attack and return back to the earth.

o-o-o​

"Ugh, my research notes got eaten," Hazou said from his reclining position on a skytower while Noburi quietly worked at his abdomen. "Along with my good desk, my good chair, my good brush, my good everything. That's going to set me back days. Plus, we're going to need to relocate and set up a new base, and that takes time and chakra."

"You still want to stay out here in this Sage-forsaken desert!?" Noburi asked incredulously. "I thought that encounter would be your wake-up call that it's time to get out of here and go chill on some of those beaches in the southern islands with the normal wildlife. It's been about two months, right? Shouldn't it be clear of hunter-nin by now?"

"No, I don't think we should leave yet," Hazou said. "It's the dangerous beasts that are protecting us right now. This was just a fluke."

"If we're staying, we need to take our defenses much more seriously," Mari said. "No more keeping everyone on a ground base. You need your time runes to do research, right? Will they work on a skytower?"

"It should work," Hazou said. "I wouldn't want to infuse a rune prototype near interference from active seals or runes, but I've got the time rune's design ironed out and it should work fine on top of a Five-Seal Barrier."

"Good, then we're going to spend all our time on skytowers. Dealing with only fliers will make things easier. We'll set up a ground base with static defenses, but keep it unoccupied, except maybe making sure it's clear with clones occasionally. When you need to infuse your prototypes, you do them only through shadow clones, and we'll all make shadow clones to guard you. No more setting our real bodies on the ground where all the beasts are."

"That's pretty extreme, Mari," Hazou said. "We've got fewer defenses in the sky, and we'll be restricted to small skytowers the whole time if we don't want to be burning valuable skywalker-hours."

"You nearly died ten minutes ago, Hazou," Mari said. "Extreme is warranted. And I trust Kagome to figure out adequate perimeters. No, if we're sticking it out here, we need to take things seriously."

o-o-o​

"Hey Noburi, how's the bloodline study coming along? Have you figured out whether you can cast Shadow Clone yet?"

Noburi looked up. His hand hovered above the exposed skin of his forearm, glowing with green medical chakra, but the light quickly blinked out.

"Itching to teach me so bad, so that I finally get a shot at surpassing you? Sorry, I can't risk my life on it yet. I haven't found any obvious no-go's that makes me confident that the technique will murder me instantly if I try to cast it, but my chakra system is really complicated and there are so many experiments I want to run. Even Tsunade didn't bother trying to document my system completely. She just focused on the stuff where she thought there would be interesting room for progress."

"How come it's taking so long?" Hazou asked. "I would have thought 'can I cast this technique?' would be a pretty basic question for an expert med-nin like you. After all, Dr. Yakushi thought he could have an answer for us in a couple weeks."

"Well, Yakushi-sensei is a more skilled medic than me and a much more experienced researcher," Noburi said with a scowl. "This is my first real project, and it involves figuring out the interaction between the world's most powerful ninjutsu and the world's most powerful bloodline. I don't dream small, but I need some time to figure this out, alright?"

"Sorry," Hazou said, holding his hands up. "I didn't want to get on your back about it or anything. I just wanted to ask: since you're spending a while every day healing me, why don't you teach me while you do it? We've been over this before, and with the ninjutsu-cost-reduction from the pool finally fading away, I should have the spare hours in the day to actually be a dutiful student."

"You really want me to teach you medical ninjutsu?" Noburi asked. "Starting now?"

"Yes," Hazou said.

"Okay," Noburi said, his expression going distant. He pointed at a small stone basin he'd unsealed on a table nearby. "Go wash your hands."

"Sure," Hazou said, walking over to the basin to dip his hands in and rub them off. He heard Noburi follow him but paid it no mind.

"Not like that, you twit!" Noburi suddenly said. He grabbed Hazou's wrist in one hand and a horsehair brush materialized in his other. He rubbed the brush across a soap brick, then started to scour Hazou's skin as though it had offended him.

"Ow! Noburi, that's-"

Hazou disappeared in a puff of smoke.

Noburi stopped mid-scrub, then looked guiltily to the adjacent skytower where Hazou Prime had looked up from his research notes with a sharp glare.

"Was that really necessary?" Hazou said, once Noburi had walked over with his tail between his legs.

"It was something that Hashimoto used to do to me," Noburi said. "I guess I should try to be a better teacher than her, huh?"

"Yes, please. Try to channel your inner Tsunade instead, if you can."

"I wouldn't call her a better teacher…" Noburi said. "A better medic, sure. Less physical, yeah. More oh-my-god-I-can't-breathe-because-I'm-being-crushed-by-a-mountain though. And a pretty similar amount of verbal abuse, honestly."

"Well, then be yourself and prove that you're better than either of them. Now, I believe you owe me some chakra, so that I can remake the shadow clone you so rudely popped?"

o-o-o​

The laws of nature complained, shuddered, and shook as Hazou grabbed them by the wrist and forced them into a brutal armbar. Finally, they grumbled and tapped out, and the brilliant, glowing colors coalesced into the rune sitting on the ground in front of Hazou.

This was it, then.

He activated the hopefully-final version of the Force Dome Rune and waited. Nothing visible happened, which was good. The rune should have created only an invisible force field, but he'd struggled immensely to get the damn thing to stop leaking power during the prototyping process.

Slowly, Hazou stood and walked away from the rune with a hand extended in front of him, waiting for that inevitable-

Bump

-as he touched the wall of force that now cut him off from the rest of the world. The barrier felt neither warm nor cool. It felt just like the air around it, but when he touched it, he found that his hand simply refused to go any farther. Looking down, he could barely see the line in the sand where the Force Dome Rune had pushed and split grains of sand to dig into the earth.

Now came the important part: testing whether the Force Dome Rune actually had achieved true invulnerability. If he was right, this could form the new cornerstone of his perfect defense, and he could finally get to the real meat of this research trip – developing the weapons to kill the demigods he'd taken as his enemies…

o-o-o​

"Hazou," he heard Mari's voice quietly call out. He pushed himself to his elbows, deactivated his Darkness Dome seals, and got promptly blinded by the distant sunset… which he'd somehow forgotten that he'd gone to sleep facing.

By the time he blinked the glare out of his eyes, Mari was sitting by the edge of the skytower, legs hanging off and red hair whipping in the westerly wind.

"You okay there?" she asked. "Letting yourself get blinded like that will get you killed when I'm not around, you know."

"You are around," Hazou said simply.

Mari was quiet for a second. "You trust me a lot. Too much for a ninja."

"Should I not?"

"You can. That doesn't mean you should."

"I do trust you," Hazou said. He finally sat up fully. "Anyway, what's up, Mari? You wanted me for something?"

Mari sighed. "It actually has to do with that. Look, you and Tenten and Noburi have healed your various injuries from the giant worm attack, and I hear that Yuno can finally sleep longer than fifteen minutes at a time without waking up in a panic, so our combat capacity is on the mend – even if Kei needs to go do her Pangolin missions soon. Still, the sheer number and variety of chakra beasts we've faced makes me scared, Hazou.

"I'm sharper, faster, and stronger than you, so I'm pretty sure I can handle myself against almost everything out here. I think Yuno can mostly do the same, plus or minus some outliers. The issue is that I don't think you can. That giant worm thing would have killed you if you were just a hair slower, or it were just a hair bigger, and that isn't even the worst possible situation. The thing I'm afraid of isn't that you'll be too slow to dodge an attack. It's that if we spend long enough out here, we run the risk of just randomly encountering some sort of chakra beast that's got an ability so weird that it just instantly kills one of us. I know we're going after resurrection magic, but I assume you don't want a death in the team any more than I do, and my honest guess is that if we stay out here, it's just a matter of time. We can't defend against everything indefinitely."

"That's a reasonable worry," Hazou said. "But our tools are getting better. With your full-sky strategy, we didn't even take any injuries this last week. We're understanding the beasts better, and I'm making new runes. If we apply them right, we can reduce our risk even more."

"That's a possibility," Mari said. "But we've taken injuries in fights before this week, and we're still seeing the occasional beast. As someone who's been in more ninja fights than you've had game nights, a fight in which a teammate takes an injury is not that far from a fight in which a teammate dies. We're already pretty close to the edge. Plus, our defenses were supposed to be good enough. And they are really good – I'm guessing that something like eighty, ninety percent of beasts that would otherwise cause trouble are instead getting turned away at the door by the illusion seals or killed by Kagome's perimeters. Still, that still leaves a few that get through, and the thing about our defenses is that they carve off beasts from the bottom of the distribution more than the top.

"The ones that bypass our defenses make the most problems. Remember that giant rolling ball of fire that came at our skytower a couple days ago? We ran away from that, but who knows what will happen the next time a really weird beast is in the area. I can't tell you for sure how a beast kills us, because then I'd just tell Kagome and get the hole patched. I'm just saying that I'm getting an intuition, as the experienced jounin of the party, that if we stick around these parts, some of us are going to die. It would most likely be one of the weaker members of the party. Maybe Tenten first, since she can't reverse summon."

"Okay, okay, I get it," Hazou said, leaning back against his elbows. "I don't think the desert is as bad as you're saying, but I'll take it into account."

"Thanks, Hazou," Mari said, rising with a smile. "Now, remember how you were saying that you trusted me?"

"Yeah? I do trust you to- wait-!"

But it was too late to fight back. Mari disappeared around him in a flash and grabbed him in a brutal combined headlock and hair ruffle.



Noburi has made substantial progress on understanding the Shadow Clone/Vampiric Dew interaction. He has put that on pause to tutor Hazou in MedNin for a while.

Kagome has been too busy scribing seals and maintaining defensive perimeters to research Banshee Fuckers.

I'm not sure what "off-track" means – it does not appear in any previous plan, nor is it defined here. I could try to figure it out, but alas my patience for ambiguous plan lines is low. If it means "research without occupying a seal-track worth of SC time", that's impossible. If it means "research using an SC, instead of Prime's time", write that. If it means something else, please write that out. I'm going to ignore that whole plan line.

Similarly:
  • Once the pool effect ends and FOOM blocks decrease, redo all previously difficulty checked but unresearched runes, starting with the Great Seal and any ...well within..., then move to ...maybe..., then ...beyond…
    • This is higher priority than notes, but lower than learning mednin or FOOM
The prioritization section is hard to read so I'm not going to put much effort into interpreting it "correctly". Coincidentally the pool's effect running out coincides nicely with a narrative change of situation, so I'm going to say that Hazou doesn't do any extra prep days because he's working on learning MedNin once the pool's effect runs out.

Day 1
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Iron Earth Rune.

Day 2
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Iron Earth Rune.

Day 3
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Iron Earth Rune.

Day 4
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Iron Earth Rune.

Day 5
Infuse Force Dome.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 8 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) - 6 = 46
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 27 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 8 (prep) + 3 = 72

Infuse Iron Earth Rune.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 8 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) + 3 = 55
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 27 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 8 (prep) + 0 = 69

Day 6
DoB rest.

Day 7
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Iron Earth Rune.

Day 8
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Iron Earth Rune.

Day 9
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Iron Earth Rune.

Day 10
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Iron Earth Rune.

Day 11
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Iron Earth Rune.

Day 12
Infuse Force Dome.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 10 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) - 6 = 48
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 28 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) - 6 = 66
Hazō spends a FP to reroll!
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 28 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) + 6 = 78

Infuse Iron Earth Rune.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 10 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) - 12 = 42
Hazō spends a FP to reroll!
Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 10 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) + 3 = 57
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 28 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) - 3 = 69

Hazō completes the Iron Earth Rune! TENTATIVE mechanics*: Anyone tunneling within around a kilometer needs to roll their tunneling technique (or Physique, if working by hand) against the user's Runecrafting. Each shift of failure causes the tunneling to take 1 step down the timeladder longer.

RUNE MECHANICS MARKED AS "TENTATIVE" ARE PRETTY LIKELY TO CHANGE WHEN WE GET A CHANCE TO DISCUSS THEM. DON'T BET STRONGLY ON THESE MECHANICS BEING WHAT YOU'RE GOING TO GET.

Day 13
DoB rest. Running out west.

Day 14
Setting up new base and research site.

Day 15
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Ninja Radar Rune. Difficulty Result: Medium. Hazō is attempting a limited-range version of the rune, hoping that, like chakdar and the jinchuuriki seal chain, he'll be able to scale it up once he has a working version. Also, because he expects that "limited-range" for a rune will still be pretty impressive.

(buys 1 FP, -10 XP)

Day 16
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Ninja Radar Rune.

Day 17
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Ninja Radar Rune.

Day 18
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Ninja Radar Rune.

Day 19
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Ninja Radar Rune.

Day 20
Infuse Force Dome.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 10 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) + 6 = 60
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 29 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) + 9 = 82

Infuse Ninja Radar Rune.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 10 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) - 3 = 51
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 29 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) + 0 = 73

Day 21
DoB rest.

Day 22
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Ninja Radar Rune.

Day 23
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Ninja Radar Rune.

Day 24
Research is interrupted by an overpowered chakra beast encounter destroying the entire base and research site.

Day 25
Moving to and setting up a new base and research site.

Day 26
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Ninja Radar Rune.

Day 27
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Ninja Radar Rune.

Day 28
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Ninja Radar Rune.

Day 29
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Ninja Radar Rune.

Day 30
Prep Force Dome.
Prep Ninja Radar Rune.

Day 31
Infuse Force Dome.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 10 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) + 6 = 60
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 30 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) - 9 = 65
Hazō spends a FP to reroll!
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 30 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) + 12 = 86

In a stroke of luck, Hazō completes the Force Dome Rune! TENTATIVE mechanics: Forms over around a minute, AoE limits are twice that of Air Dome, immovable while active, unbreakable and undamageable by any force Hazou or the team is able to bring to bear.

This counts as progress towards his sealing stagnancy barrier, but does not clear it.


Infuse Ninja Radar Rune.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 10 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) + 0 = 54
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 30 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) + 0 = 74

Hazō estimates he is around a third of the way done with this rune.

Day 32
DoB rest.

Following the chakra budget:
  • Day 1 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 2 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 3 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 4 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 5 (infusion)
    • 0.6x
  • Day 6 (rest)
    • 1.4x
  • Day 7 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 8 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 9 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 10 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 11 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 12 (infusion)
    • 0.6x
  • Day 13 (travel + DoB rest)
    • 1.0x
  • Day 14 (setting up new base would normally consume all chakra, but pool discount allows low rate)
    • 0.4x
  • Day 15 (prep; minor chakra beast encounter costs chakra from fighters, only 500 CP for the day)
    • 0.6x
  • Day 16 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 17 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 18 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 19 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 20 (infusion)
    • 0.6x
  • Day 21 (rest)
    • 1.4x
  • Day 22 (prep)
    • 1.3x
  • Day 23 (prep; chakra beast encounter ending with Tenten wounded would normally consume all spare chakra, but with pool discount 250 CP remains)
    • 0.3x
  • Day 24 (prep; interrupted by chakra beast attack; only partial SC training completed)
    • 0.5x
    • Pool bonus runs out here.
  • Day 25 (setting up new base consumes all chakra)
    • 0.0x
    • Mari starts using ~250 CP / day on clones to make sure ground areas are clear. Budget down to 250 CP.
  • Day 26 (prep; chakra beast attack costs chakra from fighters, 0 CP for the day)
    • 0.0x
    • Noburi starts teaching Hazou MedNin here.
    • Hazou and Noburi heal their Mild Consequences.
  • Day 27 (prep)
    • 0.3x
  • Day 28 (prep; chakra beast attack costs chakra from fighters, 0 CP for the day)
    • 0.0x
  • Day 29 (prep)
    • 0.3x
  • Day 30 (prep)
    • 0.3x
    • Hazou and Noburi heal their Medium Consequences. Shoutouts to Noburi for making it possible for Hazou to do the next infusion without a Consequence penalty.
  • Day 31 (infusion)
    • 0.0x + chakra "debt" (Noburi is out of chakra after refilling Hazou clones for infusions + Kei/Mari clones so they can defend Hazou-clones against potential attackers that, if they interrupted him, would cause a runic infusion failure, and spends the rest of the day on the Seventh Path)
  • Day 32 (rest)
    • 0.0x (repaying debt so Noburi can be at full chakra)

Sum of XP rates is 26.5. Total SC XP is 26.5 * 4 (base) = 106. So, total XP earned is 128 + 106 SC XP + 10 (brevity) - 10 (FP buy) = 234 XP, for 252 XP total with Hazou's existing 20 XP. Based on the plan, he buys: PrimSeal 28 after the first research cycle, PrimSeal 29 after the second research cycle, PrimSeal 30 after the third research cycle, and PrimSeal 31 after the fourth research cycle. Hazou puts 1 level into MedNin, representing that he has started the training. We're saying it'll be around six weeks till he has a suitable grasp of the basics to the point where he can then continue to improve on his own (a little less than Noburi's equivalent time-investment when he was at that point of his ninja career), so with the weekish here, around five weeks remain.

FP Tally:
  • Start with 3 FP.
  • Spend 2 FP on Day 12 infusion.
  • Buy 1 FP on Day 15-19 for new cycle.
  • Earn 1 FP on Day 20 for brevity-based-bonus.
  • Spend 3 FP on Day 24 to survive chakra-beast encounter.
  • Earn 3 FP on Day 24 for surviving encounter without a Severe + 2 Consequence-based FP.
  • Earn 1 FP on Day 30 for brevity-based-bonus.
  • Spend 1 FP on Day 31 infusion.
  • Earn 1 FP as refresh on update end because started + ended with <4.
  • Final amount: 4 FP.

This update covered 32 days, but 26 days objectively for the team, due to the use of Time Runes. It is hard for the team to maintain a steady sleep cycle when using Time Runes and also spending most of the day outdoors in sunlight, which is confusing people's bodies about when to feel awake or tired (they sleep under Darkness Domes, of course).

XP Award: 128 + 10 (brevity) = 138 XP
GM-fun Award: 2 XP
Shadow Clone Training XP: 106 XP


Vote time! What to do now?

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Chapter 684: Relocation

"So..." Hazō began.

Around the fire, everyone groaned. Noburi threw a piece of honeybread at his brother with a "Boo! No serious stuff over dessert!"

"How do you know it's serious stuff?" Hazō demanded with injured innocence. "Maybe I'm going to say, 'so, I solved all our problems today'. You don't know."

"You only use that tone when you've got Things To Discuss," Mari said, leaning on the final words.

"Let us make it simpler," Kei said. "Did you solve all our problems today?"

"Well...no. But that wasn't what I wanted to talk about!"

More honeybread flew, along with a single blueberry. (Among the many reasons storage seals were awesome: out-of-season fruit compote!)

"Be serious, please," Hazō said. "This is important."

Sighs.

"My most pessimistic estimate for when Akatsuki could open the rift was three months," he continued. "We're coming up on that. Also, we've been in this location for a while, it's proving to be more dangerous than we bargained for, and I'd like to start talking about where we go next." Hazō held up a hand in a 'wait' gesture. "I don't want to move until I've finished my current project, the Extremely Long Fuse Explosive seal. I'm not comfortable leaving rune blanks and even active runes behind every time we move. I'm working on an explosive seal with a fuse of up to a year. I figure we put it next to the rune we want to destroy, set the timer for a month, and bounce."

Frowns.

"Is that safe?" Noburi asked. "Sounds like a good way to get a runic failure."

Hazō shook his head. "We won't use it to destroy any active runes. Most of the long-duration runes I've come up with this far automatically shut down after about a month. The timer on the ELFE—"

"Elfy?" Mari asked. "You seriously named your super destructive thing 'elfy'?"

"ELF-E," Hazō said. "Extremely Long Fuse Explosive."

"Nope." Crimson hair shook in a faint susurration. "From now on it's Elfy."

Hazō opened his mouth, suddenly remembered a slew of old sayings such as 'pick your battles', 'stay on mission', and 'lose the battle so you may win the war', and shut his mouth again.

"Fine, it's Elfy. Whatever, the point is that we set the timer for after the active rune expires, then when it blows there's no runic material or blanks sitting around for other people to study."

"Instead there's a large crater covered in crystal shards to mark the site," Snowflake noted. "Doesn't that call attention to our tracks?"

"By the time anyone finds one of those sites, we'll have been gone for weeks. And I can probably figure something out to make it less obvious. Anyway, not the point. The point is that we're getting close to the point when Akatsuki might have figured out how to open the rift.

"And this is why we don't discuss serious stuff over dessert," Mari said, setting her fruit compote down. "Now my stomach is all twisty."

"Even once they get the rift open, they'll still have to search for Pain," Snowflake said. "He won't be standing at the entrance."

Hazō shook his head. "Don't forget Hidan and his ridiculous tracking abilities. Apparently Jashin will lead him to his target."

"Hasn't so far," Kagome-sensei noted. "We're still here."

"Lord Jashin loves Hazō," Yuno pointed out quietly. "Hazō is high priest of His aspect of Birth."

Everyone took a moment to digest that.

"Leaving aside for a moment the question of Hidan seeking us," Kei said, "for safety we should assume that Hazō is correct. When we seek to recover Jiraiya and Akane, we shall need to hunt. Hidan may be able to walk directly to Pain."

"I've got three questions," Hazō said. "Kei, I know this is asking a lot, but can you make any estimate of how long we might have left before Akatsuki cracks the rift?"

She shook her head. "Optimization and estimation rely on accurate and sufficient data. I have no way to judge the difficulty of the task, the skill of Akatsuki's sealmasters, the existence and nature of any resources required, or Akatsuki's access to such hypothetical resources."

"Fair enough. That leads into my second question: we need some way to know when Akatsuki cracks the rift. One potential method would be to leave a dead drop in Arachnid for Orochimaru. We ask Kumokōgō to please pass on only one single message: 'you need to return to Leaf immediately'. That way we can't be influenced by threats and we only come back when Orochimaru decides it's necessary. It's against Naruto's orders, but what he doesn't know he can't leak."

Everyone took a moment to digest that.

"That is...beyond playing with fire," Mari said slowly.

"Hang on," Noburi said, eyes narrowing. He had been reclining with Yuno leaned against him but now he lifted her gently off so that he could sit up, eyes narrowed at Hazō. "'Return to Leaf'? We're missing-nin. Sure, you made that big speech about how if we managed to kill Akatsuki then we'll be welcomed back and Naruto will back-date orders, but why would it be safe for us to return before we've done that?"

"Same way that we got in the first time," Mari interjected before Hazō could come up with anything. "Offer up enough good stuff, any village is glad to have you. We simply tell them that we were never missing. Hazō went on a research mission, which he properly cleared with the Hokage, and the rest of us decided to join him as a family vacation. If they thought we were missing...well, that was their mistake and we are frankly disappointed in them for jumping to such a ridiculous conclusion."

"There is no way that's going to pass," Noburi said. "No. Way."

The jōnin shrugged. "You'd be surprised at how much you can get away with given enough raw audacity. If something is simply too far out of whack, people's brain try to backfill an answer that makes things seem reasonable." She chuckled. "One time, I ran through a restaurant wearing a nighty and pushing a wheelbarrow, shouting 'Quick! Put all your food in here, no time to explain!'" When I got to the end of the line I pulled a guy to his feet and said 'You're strong, push this and follow me!' Then I turned to the two guys sitting with him and said 'Go get the Jōnin Commander and the Kage, have them meet us at Torture and Interrogation!'"

Everyone stared at her.

"...Ohhhhkay," Hazō said after a minute. "And why did you do all this?"

"Glad you asked! The guy I told to push the wheelbarrow was the civilian spy I was there to extract. He and I ran the wheelbarrow out to the front gate and told the guards to 'Open it! We have to get this stuff outside before it explodes!' They opened the gate and let us out."

She took a sip from her flask, grinning impishly, and chuckled at the memory before casting it aside with a casual shrug.

"More seriously," she said, "we're coming back with megaexplosives, some of which have timers long enough that an infiltration team could be all the way back in Leaf and thoroughly alibied before they went off. We've got protective runes, this that and the other thing runes, and, oh yes, time manipulation runes. Runes that let Leaf's ninja advance faster than those of any other nation. You can bet your adorable little boots that Leaf would take us back."

"And Akatsuki?" Snowflake asked.

"Beyond my pay grade," Mari said. "That's for Clan Heads to solve, not poor overworked rank-and-file ninja like me."

"Rank-and-file," Hazō said, snorting with derision. "Hardly. Anyway, if we could please get back to the main point: I am not advocating this idea, I am exploring it. We set up a dead-drop with Orochimaru such that he and only he can send us exactly one message: come home immediately. This lets us know when we're out of time and need to move against Akatsuki.

"The real problem is Orochimaru. What are the chances he's been compromised by Akatsuki?"

Everyone looked at Kei. Kei looked grumpy.

"This is a woefully underspecified question," she complained. "The multitude of definitions for 'compromised' alone make it—"

"Your best guess," Hazō said. "It'll be better than everyone else's detailed study."

"Do not for a moment think that you can push aside my rightful irritation by means of such transparent flattery, Hazō. I—"

"Can consider all of the castigating remarks to have been made and cut to the chase," Hazō said with a smile. "Give us your best guess, Kei."

"...Fine." She paused to think, her face going blank as she reached out to the Ice. (Reached Out to the Ice?)

"It seems highly unlikely that Akatsuki has control of Orochimaru," she said, her voice remote. "He has few levers and values his freedom to an inordinate degree. Were anyone to find a valid means of coercion he would most likely simply depart from Leaf. He undoubtedly still has a large number of bases and resources hidden outside the city."

"Great. What are the chances that he tries to hurt me through the dead drop?"

"The mere action is impractical. You need only ask your escort to ensure that he is not present before you speak to the Empress. Were he to attempt leaving an explosive, a snake, or such, it would undoubtedly be found."

"Great," Hazō said. "Now, there's one problem: the spiders promised that they wouldn't pass messages to us, so we'd need to do some kind of workaround. Have an oathsworn Arachnid use an unsworn Arachnid to pass messages, something like that. Do you see any issues with that?"

"Obviously, it would be catastrophic. Just as Cannai was displeased with you attempting to go behind his back in assembling a diplomatic mission, Kumokōgō will be displeased with you attempting to suborn her people into breaking her oath."

"Ah." Having been on the receiving end of a Clan Lord's displeasure, Hazō was not eager to repeat the experience. "Well...maybe I can release her from the oath or get her to modify it. Something."

"Perhaps."

"You're leaving out the key part," Noburi said. "It's Orochimaru. Y'know, the guy who wanted to vivisect you and Kei? Why would you trust him for something like this?"

"He's the only one who could do it," Hazō said. "We can't go through Naruto because Akatsuki will be checking in with him and he's clearly such a little wuss that he'll give up the instant they frown at him, so—"

"Hazō." Mari's tone was sharp. "He's a teenage boy who was starved, abused, and tortured for months before being used as fuel for a ritual we don't know the nature of. That would traumatize anyone even if done by normal means but, according to Orochimaru's dossier, the Sharingan has an ability that imposes torture beyond what is physically possible. If you think you could go through all that and not leak information when your torturer shows up to question you then you aren't as smart as I think you are. And you are far too demanding."

Hazō tossed one hand in momentary acknowledgement. "Fine, whatever. Reasonable or not, Naruto can't keep secrets from them so we can't use him as our point of contact. We need a summoner so we can make contact on the Seventh Path instead of having to sneak in where we might be spotted. We need a summoner who has contracts co-located with our contracts, and we need someone who checks in with their summons regularly. That leaves out basically everyone except Orochimaru."

Everyone digested yet another unappetizing point.

"I hate absolutely everything about this idea," Noburi said.

"It seems extremely risky," Yuno offered, her voice tentative. "What if he made a deal with Akatsuki to hand you over in exchange for something he wanted?"

"I think that, oh rats." Snowflake began to speak and then disappeared as her time ran out. Moments later she was back as Kei re-cast the Shadow Clone jutsu.

"I think that you are far too comfortable with the idea of Orochimaru," she continued, offering her creator a brief nod of thanks as she re-affixed her ribbon of distinction.

"Not...really?" Hazō said. "I think I understand him, at least a little bit. He doesn't like people, he wants to be left alone to do his work, but he's very smart and he always chooses long-term over short-term."

"Kagome?" Mari asked. "You're being very quiet."

Kagome-sensei shrugged, not taking his eyes off the piece he was whittling. It appeared to be an musical instrument of some kind, perhaps a recorder.

"It's obvious we're going to do it," he said casually. "Best to let everyone get their concerns out. Hazō will wear them down eventually."

Hazō looked at his teacher in surprise. "Sensei? Do you think it's a bad idea?"

Kagome-sensei let his hands drop into his lap and stared at Hazō in surprise. "Of course it's a bad idea! Dealing with that stinker is always a bad idea! Except in this particular case it's a less-bad bad idea than not dealing with him. We need to know when those schnooks get the rift open and it's either let Snakeschnook tell us or we have to go scout it ourselves, which I'm not happy about. If we don't have some way of knowing when they get it open then we could be sitting out here, dumb and happy, researching things that we don't have time to finish before they get their leader back and put lupchanz in everyone's ears so that we all act nice and loyal and don't fight or yell at each other anymore."

No one spoke.

"That...is an entirely valid point," Mari admitted after at least a minute. She laughed. "What is the world coming to when dealing with Orochimaru and potentially pissing off the Boss of one of the largest and most powerful clans on the Seventh Path is our safest option?"

No one spoke.

"Okay," Noburi said, visibly putting the topic aside. "So, you were mentioning relocating? Where to?"

"There's a few options," Hazō began.

"If the next words out of your lips are anything other than 'the Southern Isles', I swear by the Sage I will shave you bald and tattoo 'I am an idiot' on your forehead," Mari said. Her voice was entirely sincere. "I have had enough of roughing it in the desert—"

"'Roughing it'?" Hazō asked, looking pointedly at the small bowl of blueberries, raspberries, and cream in blackberry compote that she was eating, before sweeping his gaze across the camp chairs and piles of pillows.

"—sand constantly in my fruit compote, completely unable to sleep because of the monsters attacking us at all hours, never feeling completely clean because the stream is so loaded with minerals, my clothes always crusty—"

"I'm not sure you've worn the same outfit twice since we left Leaf," Hazō objected.

"—and all the other privations I have suffered through with such grace and good cheer! If crazy terrorist demigods are maybe going to end the world, you will take me on a holiday to beautiful sunny islands first!"

Hazō raised his hands in surrender. "The Southern Isles it is. Unless anyone else objects?"

"I have wanted to see them ever since Noburi told me of your last visit there," Yuno said. "They sound beautiful. And perhaps we could go past that island with the giant crabs that have chakra metal in their shells? Satsuko and I would like to see those crabs."

"Kei, do you foresee any specific reasonable circumstance that would make it more dangerous for us to go to the Isles than anywhere else?" Hazō asked, suppressing a smile as long experience allowed him to phrase the question in a way that left her no objection.

She glowered at him but finally admitted, "No, I do not."

"Great! It's a plan. Now, we're not leaving until I finish..." He sighed, then bowed to the inevitable. "Elfy."

"You had best finish it quick," Mari warned, fiddling with a blade that she hadn't been holding a moment before.

"Ha...right. Yes, I'll be as quick as I can. In fact, I'll go to bed now so that I can get started early tomorrow. G'night!"





Author's Note: I will leave the conversation with Kei for @Velorien if he wishes to write it, or we can assume it happened offscreen.

Day 1
Prep Remote Explosive. Difficulty Result: Easy.
Prep Landmine Rune. Difficulty Result: Easy.
Prep ELF Explosive. Difficulty Result: Chūnin.
Prep Null Rift Rune. Difficulty Result: Hard. A rift is by definition a hole between two dimensions, meaning that Hazō has no idea how to create a rift from one Path to the same Path. He cannot rule out the possibility of a portal effect from one point on the Human Path to another but that would be distinct from a rift.

Easy runes only require one of full-prep or DoB, and these runes were assigned DoB-status, so Hazō can rip it ASAP on those, but chūnin seals require one of DoB or 5 days of prep, so Hazō will prep for a full rune-cycle before infusion in order to sync up the cycles.

Day 2
Prep Remote Explosive.
Prep Landmine Rune.
Prep ELF Explosive.
Prep Microrift Rune. Difficulty Result: Easy. Hazō notes that this rune could be potentially extremely dangerous, as he has no control over whether the rune connects to a Path, the Out, or something else entirely. He would rather not accidentally connect a particularly dangerous/malevolent part of the Out to the Path where he lives…

Day 3
Prep Remote Explosive.
Prep Landmine Rune.
Prep ELF Explosive.
Prep Pathbound Rift Rune. Difficulty Result: Hard. Without any way to target, Hazō thinks he might be able to target a random location on the Paths, but he doesn't know for sure whether it's possible, much less any information about where the rift would actually open. He does think that the targeting problem might be ultimately solvable if he were willing to open hundreds of rifts in the process.

Day 4
Prep Remote Explosive.
Prep Landmine Rune.
Prep ELF Explosive.
Prep Contracting Force Dome Rune. Difficulty Result: Hard.

Day 5
Prep Remote Explosive.
Prep Landmine Rune.
Prep ELF Explosive.
Prep Space-Contracter Rune. Hazō doesn't know how much compression he can manage with runes, but he thinks that starting with 2000x+ would be too much to ask for. He'd rather start smaller and chain up, so he preps a variant which compresses a cylinder of space 10 meters long and 10cm in diameter down to a cylinder 0.1 meters long and 10cm in diameter. Difficulty Result: Medium.

Day 6
Infuse Remote Explosive.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 10 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) - 3 = 51
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 31 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) + 9 = 84

Hazō makes massive progress; he thinks he's over halfway done with this rune!


Infuse Landmine Rune.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 + 10 (prep) - 6 (timeladder down) + 0 = 54
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 31 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) + 0 = 75

Hazō makes massive progress; he thinks he's over halfway done with this rune!


Infuse ELF Explosive.

Hazō (Calligraphy): 47 + 3 (Dampeners) + 10 (prep) - 3 = 57
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 53 + 10 (prep) - 3 = 60

Hazō makes substantial progress, he thinks he's a third of the way done. He thinks he could probably afford to drop some prep, but he'll give it another cycle before making such decisions…


Prep Great Seal.
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 31 + 18 (crossover bonus from unboosted Sealing) + 6 = 55

Result: [TBD]

Day 7
DoB rest.


Day 8
Prep Remote Explosive.
Prep Landmine Rune.
Prep ELF Explosive.
A "track" worth of clone-hours from here on out is spent on seal-scribing, stockpiling skywalkers for the big trip to the southern isles.

Day 9
Prep Remote Explosive.
Prep Landmine Rune.
Prep ELF Explosive.

Day 10
Prep Remote Explosive.
Prep Landmine Rune.
Prep ELF Explosive.

Day 11
Prep Remote Explosive.
Prep Landmine Rune.
Prep ELF Explosive.

Day 12
Prep Remote Explosive.
Prep Landmine Rune.
Prep ELF Explosive.

Day 13
Infuse Remote Explosive.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) + 10 (prep) + 0 = 54
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 31 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) - 3 = 72

Hazō completes the Remote Explosive Rune!

Mechanics:
The blank is 5x larger (i.e., consumes 5x more substrate) than an equivalent explosive rune and can be made in the same sizes as an explosive rune (puffer, training, full strength). It is shaped like a point-type crystal instead of being approximately spherical.

At infusion time, the creator chooses a distance to target, which can be anything up to 1 mile. This is the maximum range that the rune can fire, not a fixed distance. (In general you will probably always choose the 1 mile range but you have the option to choose shorter if, e.g., you are giving the rune to someone else and want to disguise its full capability.)

Activating the rune is a Standard action. Upon activation, the air within 3 zones of the rune starts to faintly ripple and warp and there is a clearly audible hum that steadily builds in intensity. Shortly thereafter, the rune triggers, and the effects of an explosive rune occur within a zone in front of the crystal's point and distance-to-target away.

The rune can be slowly rotated in three dimensions in order to change the target zone. It will typically require at least a Standard action to get it rotated and on target and may require several such actions.

The rune can fire up to 3 times and then burns out. It deactivates after firing, meaning you need to reactivate it for each new shot. [The rate of fire is still under QM discussion]

Sighting in the rune requires at least one practice shot. When you initially fire it, you choose a zone within the range and flip a coin. If the coin lands heads then you hit the target zone. If it lands tails then it hits a randomly-selected adjacent zone. The shot-drift is consistent for a specific rune so once you have done the sighting shot you can always hit the target zone even when retargeting. Each individual rune must be sighted separately.

The rune requires line of effect but not line of sight. That means you can shoot through (e.g.) the canopy of a forest but not through (e.g.) a Force Dome.


Infuse Landmine Rune.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) + 10 (prep) + 12 = 66
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 31 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) + 3 = 78

Hazō completes the Landmine Rune!

Mechanics:
After a small amount of chakra (seal-activation levels) is applied to the rune's surface, the rune's humming/glowing quickly crescendos. At the same point in the next combat round, the rune suddenly explodes (so if Hazō triggers the Landmine Rune on Round 1, it activates on Hazō's initiative in Round 2).

Same mechanics as the explosive rune, but triggers much quicker. Compatible with ARS/MARS.


Infuse ELF Explosive.

Hazō (Calligraphy): 47 + 3 (Dampeners) + 10 (prep) + 12 = 72
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 53 + 10 (prep) - 3 = 60

Hazō thinks he should finish this seal in another cycle. He thinks he could skip prep, but at this point, it won't save much time and will add some risk, especially given that he's going to be trying new runes next cycle. His Calligraphy is so high that he thinks that Sealing is his limiting factor here, and without DoB, that's pretty limiting. He thinks he could have gotten this seal done in 4-6 days if he'd been willing to spend a DoB track on it.

Day 14
DoB rest.

Day 15
Prep Storm Rune. Difficulty Result: Easy.
Prep Air Leadening. Difficulty Result: Easy.
Prep ELF Explosive.

Day 16
Prep Storm Rune.
Prep Air Leadening.
Prep ELF Explosive.

Day 17
Prep Storm Rune.
Prep Air Leadening.
Prep ELF Explosive.

Day 18
Prep Storm Rune.
Prep Air Leadening.
Prep ELF Explosive.

Day 19
Prep Storm Rune.
Prep Air Leadening.
Prep ELF Explosive.

Day 20
Infuse Storm Rune.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) + 10 (prep) + 6 = 60
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 31 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) - 9 = 66
Hazō spends a FP to reroll!
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 31 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) - 3 = 72

Hazō thinks he's about a third of the way done with this rune.


Infuse Air Leadening Rune.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) + 10 (prep) - 6 = 48
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 31 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) + 0 = 75

Hazō thinks he's also about a third of the way done with this rune. This has a pretty similar difficulty to the Storm Rune.


Infuse ELF Explosive.

Hazō (Calligraphy): 47 + 3 (Dampeners) + 10 (prep) + 3 = 63
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 53 + 10 (prep) - 6 = 57
Probably won't cause a sealing failure, but Hazō doesn't want to spend even more time on this seal if this roll by chance happens to prevent the seal from completing… Hazō spends a FP to reroll!
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 53 + 10 (prep) + 6 = 69

Hazō completes the ELF Explosive!

Day 21
DoB rest, starting travel to the Southern Isles.

You have completed research on Elfy and are now in the Southern Isles. Not sure how much time that should have taken but you did it.

XP AWARD: 91 This chapter took 28 days subjective between research and travel to the Southern Isles. It took 23 calendar days.

Brevity XP: 10

"GM had fun" XP: 0 No strong feelings.

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Chapter 685: The Paradox that Is Nara Kei

"What fresh horrors have you come to inflict upon me, Hazō, ye bringer of underspecified queries and demander of under-researched speculations?"

"Yes, yes, all right," Hazō said with a grin. "You know I wouldn't have asked if I didn't think you could do it."

Kei rolled her eyes. "Your flattery, while as subtle as a Pantsā dropped from skywalker height, is not unsatisfying, but I believe my needs have been met for one night. What is on your mind?"

"I've been writing up a new set of lists," Hazō began.

He gave a pause for the mandatory groan, which Kei duly provided.

"We don't know what's coming," he said, "except that it's going to be rough, so somebody has to make sure we're all on top of our training schedules. Kei, ever since we went missing–in fact, a bit before–you've been back in your Team Uplift support role, and that means you haven't been exercising your leadership skills."

"What leadership skills?"

"Oh, please," Hazō said. "You've been half in charge of the Nara and at least a third in charge of the KEI, and as far as I can tell, both organisations are in good shape, not on fire, and successfully adapting to the various challenges these crazy recent years have been throwing at us. In fact, by some secondary metrics like treason count, you're a better leader than I am."

"I am closing that particular gap apace," Kei noted. "But supposing I do in fact possess leadership skills, why is my lack of practice relevant out here in the wilderness? If you are about to suggest that I take command of Team Uplift while you focus on research, then rest assured I will not hesitate to collect my girlfriends and depart for Snow Country while you enjoy your sojourn in the Southern Isles."

"Snow Country?" Hazō asked, aghast. The team had been to Snow Country once, briefly, to escape Zabuza. It was an experience so miserable it drove Mari to near depression.

"A beautiful haven of endless swathes of snow and silence," Kei confirmed. "If I am ever to retire from the shinobi profession, a delusional notion given my projected life expectancy, an isolated mountain in the depths of Snow would be a prominent candidate."

"And your girlfriends have given this plan the go-ahead, have they?" Hazō asked.

"...So what is the relevance of my leadership skills to our situation?"

"Ninja skill development is synergistic, you know that," Hazō said. "Much as I'd love to dive headfirst into sealing and never train anything else again, if I don't have at least one other area in which I'm growing and discovering different kinds of insight and experience, I'll find myself in a mental rut and stagnating before I know it. Maybe it's not obvious to you, but from monitoring your training, I can tell that the social skills you've been developing from your consort and coordinator work have had a big impact on your overall growth. The lists don't lie."

"Hazō, please reassure me that you are not implying that I have accidentally become some kind of social specialist. Reality itself would surely shatter around us the instant it realised the depth of paradox it had thoughtlessly permitted."

"Don't look at me," Hazō said, "I just work here."

"Fine." Kei gave a deep, put-upon sigh. "Assuming for argument's sake that I place my faith in your lists even as they proclaim the impossible, how do you propose I address the issue, bearing in mind that I have not retracted my threat with regard to Snow?"

"Pangolins," Hazō said simply.

"Pangolins are not a solution to anything, Hazō," Kei objected. "They are a problem. With the possible exception of Pandā, whose innocent charm is captivating even despite the morass of indoctrination through which he wades."

"Doesn't that make them ideal for leadership training?" Hazō asked.

"I did not mean my team specifically," Kei said. "We have had time to develop an acceptable understanding of each other's needs and boundaries. For all its endless and crippling flaws, the Pangolin military system does at least inculcate respect for the importance of harmony and hierarchy within the unit. Granted, I am still labouring to convince Panjandrum to respect my dietary needs and not add various gradations of pangolin pepper to my meals in order to gradually acclimatise me to a 'healthy' level of spice, but I do not feel this to be an arduous challenge on the level of resolving workplace personality clashes between fanatics or motivating a pure-blood Nara to work in the morning."

"I guess that's good," Hazō said, "except insofar as it's bad. In that case, why don't you challenge yourself by contracting some jōnin-level pangolins? That gets you negotiation practice, hopefully some disruptive elements that you'll need to find ways to integrate into your existing team dynamic, plus successfully wrangling veteran soldiers who think that you're just a slip of a girl and they know better than you about everything should be enough to level up your social skills a dozen times over. Or, you know, drive you homicidally insane, but that's always a risk with gaining experience as a ninja."

"Do we possess the resources?" Kei asked. "It has not escaped my notice that we are deep into the kami-forsaken wilds, severed from Gōketsu wealth, the thriving trading networks of civilisation, and, worst of all, opportunities to replenish our dwindling hot chocolate supply."

"We'll find the resources," Hazō reassured her. "And to the extent that we can't, well, securing the loyalty of a demanding target from a position of material disadvantage sounds like exactly the kind of challenge we're looking for."

"I wish Ami were here," Kei said. "She would have no difficulty identifying whatever flaw in your plan is causing me to feel such intense misgivings."

"Me too," Hazō said. "But since she isn't, and your misgivings are probably just you accurately assessing how much of a pain this is going to be, are you in or not?"

"Perhaps I am not the one who needs negotiation practice most," Kei muttered. "Very well. Stubborn soldiers and obdurate officers await. Please seal my stew while it is hot if I do not return for dinner."

"I'll even leave out the pangolin peppers," Hazō promised.

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Interlude: Difficult Realizations
Interlude: Difficult Realizations

Hazō crept carefully up the tunnel buried deep within the guts of the Great Seal's butte, carefully forcing his brain to focus on survival and not wordplay. Even through several feet of stone, he imagined that he could hear the rustle of movement above him, even though he knew it was impossible because they had killed all the Drag-ns and it w4sn't possible that anything Else had slipped through the boundaries of reality and into the Seventh Path. Right? Definitely not.

"Earth Element: Hiding Like A Mole Technique," he said as quietly as the jutsu would allow. He felt the familiar skin of chakra settle around him and used it to swim through the rock into the chamber he had previously created around the Great Seal itself. Once he had emerged into empty space he lit up a Jiraiya's Awesome Daybright Lantern seal and began unsealing supplies.

It was time for the Great Seal to give up some of its secrets.

o-o-o-o​

"...and this section here is a four-dimensional projection of a Sumitani inverter!" Hazō said, jabbing excitedly at his notebook.

Kagome-sensei looked over the notes with a frown before pointing at a different section of the sketch. "You said that bit was a sixteenth-chord harmonic stabilizer, right?"

"Yes."

"Is that a cubic projection of a second-chord stabilizer?"

Hazō waffled his hand. "Sort of? It's..." He flailed, trying to find the words. "It's complicated."

Kagome-sensei nodded, accepting that. "If this were a seal, placing a second-chord stabilizer near a Sumitani would leave you with a resonance node. Sloppy work."

"Yeah. It's not quite the same in a rune, though. There is a...well, it's not..." He frowned. "It's not a resonance node so much as a disproportionately wide point in the chakra construct's structural matrix. It's like a fabric where the weft isn't wound perfectly evenly."

Kagome-sensei sniffed derisively. "Still sloppy."

Hazō nodded. "Yeah, it is. In fact, the Great Seal is like that in a lot of places. I don't understand all of it, or even most of it, but the parts that I have figured out have a lot of small inefficiencies or places where I can see better design choices based on lifting seal theory into higher-dimensional space."

"Seal theory has advanced in the last thousand years. I guess back then they didn't know not to put a Sumitani near a 2CS." He sniffed derisively. "Ignorant primitive stinkers. Not even knowing to keep their Sumitanis away from their 2CSs."

"Huh." Hazō blinked, digesting that. "That's a very good point." He cocked his head, eyes losing focus.

Kagome-sensei, long familiar with the signs of a seal research in mid-ponder, didn't say anything.

Hazō's mouth opened slightly, lips rounding into an 'O' as horror widened his refocusing eyes.

"What?" Kagome-sensei demanded, his voice sharp.

"Oh boy," Hazō said. "Oh. Oh no."

"What?!"

"Excuse me, I need to check something."

o-o-o-o​

"Sensei?" Hazō asked, sixteen hours later after everything and everyone had moved on to completely different activities.

Kagome-sensei looked up as his student approached, notebooks in hand. The older man had been working on his whittling project, now definitely revealed as a recorder, but he set it aside as Hazō dropped onto the blanket next to him.

"Sensei, look at this and tell me what you think." He shoved a sheaf of papers at his teacher.

Kagome-sensei leafed through the pages one at a time, frowning. "This is...what is this?"

"It's an approximation of what you would get if you took a particular cross section of one segment of the Great Seal and projected it down into two dimensions. It's not an accurate portrayal but... Just tell me what you think."

"This section here is a storage element, right?" One knobbly finger tapped the page.

"Right. What else do you see?"

"This resonance node. Almost in the center, but just far enough out to be unbalanced."

"Right. What would that do to the design?"

"Is this going somewhere?" The words were querulous, the older man clearly feeling patronized.

"Please, I need a second opinion on this and I'm trying not to bias you."

"Well...it would leave a hole in the construct, allowing external chakra to pass in and interact with the design from the inside." He scratched his cheek, thinking. "That's incredibly basic. You always shield your designs such that interactions happen only on one surface. Otherwise you're vulnerable to compression effects causing destabilization."

"Right, and what might cause that?"

"Could be lots of things, but probably disruptions in the local chakra field. Jutsu use, chakra adhesion, some seal effects, some critter abilities, that kind of thing."

"And what would it do to the storage space?"

Kagome-sensei had to think about that. "Well...it probably wouldn't cause a failure, if that's what you're worried about. Maybe there would be some extra stress on the next ejection. Worst case, you might see a spontaneous collapse of the storage space, ejecting the contents. Very unlikely, though."

Hazō sighed, pressing a thumb into his forehead hard as though trying to drive away a pounding headache. "I was really hoping I was just crazy."

Kagome-sensei's hands instinctively flicked across one another in the long-practiced motion that turned his rings around from the back of his hands to the front. To combat position.

"What?" he demanded.

Hazō looked at his teacher, his eyes tired. "The Great Seal is a spacetime effect, locking the Dragons away." He paused as a new idea struck. "And, it occurs to me, possibly other things than the Dragons? Sage only knows what else is in there. Anyway, those Drag0ns slipped out but nothing else. It's possible that the Seal is empty now, that there's no more threat."

Kagome-sensei snorted. "We couldn't possibly be that lucky. It's a seal—well, a rune. Always assume the worst possible thing and know that you're not going to think worst enough."

"Yeah, agreed. So, there's likely stuff in there. Here's the thing, though: storage seals are a relatively modern invention as far as we know. Probably long after the Great Seal was created and, as you pointed out, seal theory has advanced. The first storage seal would have been ridiculously complicated and it's only because we have topomantic theory that they're easy today."

"And we got topomantic theory from studying storage seals. Sure."

"Right, so. The original storage seal design would probably have been larger and less efficient."

"Okay...?"

"The Great Seal is a spacetime effect that's being used to simulate storage, not a proper storage effect the way we would do it today. It's huge, literally the size of a mountain, and I think that's because it doesn't work like a modern storage seal. It projects a field outwards, across the entire Seventh Path, instead of confining it to a small area near the seal the way a storage seal would."

Kagome-sensei tipped his head as inklings began to loom on the edges of his mental vision. He did not panic because the inklings had not yet assembled themselves into realization.

"The design has these inefficiencies and issues in it," Hazō continued, "like you pointed out with the Suminari-like thing and the cubic-projection 2CS. I think there's a small gap, maybe a slew of small gaps, in the matrix of the Great Seal. They've allowed outside effects to enter the matrix of the Seal and...call it 'rub against the edges'."

"Effects like what? The spiders don't let anyone up there, so there shouldn't have been any chakra effects near the butte."

"I don't think the vulnerability is to chakra effects. I think it's to spatial distortions. Think about it—every time a storage seal opens or closes, every time a Five Seal Barrier or Air Dome or other spatially-locked effect triggers, it distorts the local fabric of reality."

"Well, sure, but the effects are miniscule. They wouldn't affect a storage seal, even if it was only a few inches away and even if it had such a trash design as you were showing me."

"Right, but remember that this is a spacetime effect simulating a storage effect, not a storage effect per se. It's projecting its effect outwards across the entire Path instead of wrapping it into the local spacetime. All of those spatial-manipulation effects aren't a few inches away, they are essentially inside the chakra construct of the seal."

Kagome-sensei's lips parted but no words came out for several seconds.

"That..." He went silent, head tipping as he thought.

"That..." He went silent, frowning in further thought.

"That barely makes sense," he said, irritated. "There's no time inside a storage seal! If there's no time then there's no time for effects to interfere! Even if this thing is only simulating a storage effect, there still shouldn't be time!"

"Right, but remember that a storage seal is designed with a coherent and balanced matrix that presents only one surface to the outside. There is time outside the matrix but not inside, but only because the matrix is structurally built to define an 'inside' and an 'outside'. If I'm right, the Great Seal isn't. It projects its field outwards, far wider than a modern storage seal does, and it has all these weak spots in its matrix. I think that any spatial-manipulation effect, anywhere on the Seventh Path, is going to rub against the matrix from the inside. It's going to cause compression effects—"

"—and possibly spar divergence," Kagome-sensei said, nodding as the realization came together. "Which would—"

"—widen the gaps and expose more of the insides."

Kagome-sensei rubbed his chin. "Those weak spots...is it possible that the things inside the storage effect could use them to escape? That wouldn't make any sense with a time-locked storage seal, but you're saying that there actually is time inside the Great Seal."

Hazō waffled his hand. "I'm not sure if there is or isn't, not as far as the creatures trapped there are concerned. Still, I'm pretty sure I'm right about there being time sufficient for the matrix itself to be compromised."

"I could see a couple of possibilities...maybe there is time and the creatures were able to slip out. That would suggest that the holes are small and so only the smallest or lightest of the prisoners could get out, so those six Dragons were the least bad of what's in there. Alternatively—"

"—maybe the holes are sweeping around through the internal space and spitting out stuff at random, in which case we know nothing about their comparative strength."

"Either way, spatial-manipulation effects need to stop on the Seventh Path. Five Seal Barriers, Air Domes—"

"Also known as skytowers and skywalkers. And let's not forget Conjura's teleportation abilities."

"Or the storage seals being used by the trade network. Which is great, because good luck getting those stinkers to stop trading while we're out here in the woods."

Student and teacher went silent, staring at one another in muted horror. The shock hadn't fully hit yet, Hazō knew. In a few minutes he would freak out properly but right now the implications were only slowly dawning.

"Just once, I would like the Sage to have done something properly," Kagome-sensei groused. "Lupchanz! Rain! This Great Seal nonsense! Why can't he and his stupid stinking brother just sod off and stop trying to fix everything?!"





Author's Note: Kagome does not have the Earth Infusion stunt and therefore does not have the Primordial Sealing skill and therefore does not have any ability to work with runes. As such, the discussion above should not be read as him having the ability to help Hazō with his research. On the other hand, he is working towards having those things and he's an expert sealmaster so I decided that it was fair to have him participate in the discussion, in part to reflect his academic efforts towards runecrafting and in part to serve as a convenient narrative device.

XP AWARD: 0 It's an interlude.

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Chapter 686: A Rift in the Path

"You are late, summoner."

Kei refused to feel even a shred of guilt at the Taxiarchos' imperious glare.

"I have arrived precisely at our pre-arranged time, Taxiarchos."

The pangolin's glare did not lessen a whit. "Soldiers are expected to arrive fifteen minutes early, rather than risk being a second late."

Ami had not trained her in the fine art of precision timing for an extradimensional insectivore to castigate her over hallucinated violations of military etiquette.

"Any such risk is purely imagined, Taxiarchos. Now, we have wasted twenty-seven seconds thus far, so perhaps we could endeavor to use our next several minutes more productively."

The Taxiarchos continued to glare, then turned to gesture down at the war map spread across the floor, surprisingly similar to the war-rooms she'd endured in Leaf's war with Rock two years ago.

"This valley," the pangolin said, gesturing, "is a chokepoint stopping our advance to the northwest. It is well defended from every angle, and it would cost too many pangolin lives to take by brute force. If we claimed the valley, though, it would give us a foothold to expand to the rest of the region. You will help us take it."

"The scale of this mission exceeds my capabilities, Taxiarchos," Kei said. "This map indicates six dozen hyenas in the valley. I cannot fight so many, nor could I make a non-negligible dent in their forces."

Though…

"Perhaps if the hyenas did not necessarily need to be killed, I could find a way to secure the valley."

The Taxiarchos scoffed. "What, are you going to put the Bonds of Civilization on them and walk them out of there? I don't care how you get the hyenas out of the valley, but they're holding onto it for dear life. Obviously, since it's the keystone of their defense in the region. They're not leaving except as corpses."

"I cannot comment on its feasibility, but if I arranged to fill the valley with noxious gasses, they would have no choice but to leave."

"Huh. If you can arrange that, then so be it. I'm putting a squad of soldiers under your command, Ypolochagos Nara, and you may deploy them as you will. There will be several other squads as well, and if your scheme earns my approval, I will instruct them to coordinate with you.

"Still, I did not call you here to figure it out yourself. I called you here because I had an intention to deploy you. You may make your suggestions afterwards. I said that there was no good approach into the valley, but in fact, there is only no good approach on the ground. Your skywalker seals could let you make approaches that no pangolin could match and no hyenas would expect. The watch outposts on the mountain outcroppings, here and here, if taken out, would make these areas here temporarily unobserved, letting us move in forces from here…"

o-o-o​

"So, that's the gist of it," Hazō said. "If I go back too soon, then I'm wasting valuable research time that could be used to make better weapons to kill Akatsuki with. If I go back too late, the Riftwar will already be decided and all my efforts will have gone to waste. Which is why I'd like to ask you to get in contact with Orochimaru for me. He's dangerous and might hurt me if I talk to him directly, but I think he also wants Akatsuki dead, so he'll be willing to pass me a message if it's time to head back to Leaf. You just need to give him this."

Hazō offered a bound-up parcel (avoiding storage seals for the Great Seal's sake was going to be hard), with a letter outlining Hazō's requests for Orochimaru (both in terms of stopping Akatsuki and stopping the storage-seal-fueled Conclave trade network) and Hazō's hastily-copied research notes for the Runic Force Dome as payment.

"That to I can agree, summoner of Dog, but to you an oath to carry no messages sworn I have from others. Why I have come so far from Sanctuary it is, that you to I may speak without risk of another close coming and you unwanted knowledge giving."

"Ah, but you won't carry a message from anyone to me," Hazō said. "On a somewhat related note, could you keep this rock safe for me?"

He reached into a pocket and revealed a simple fist-sized stone that he'd grabbed off the beach and painted red that morning. The paint was already peeling, but that was more because of his uneven paint job rather than any flaw in Kagome-sensei's paints.

"Safe for you keep it? Can this thing I do," Kumokōgō said, extending a hairy foreleg to accept it, her confusion evident only in the delay she took to respond.

"Good," Hazō said. "And, when Orochimaru tells you that it's time for the attack, could you return the rock to me?"

There were any number of ways he could get Orochimaru to communicate back to Hazō, such as leaving a dead drop somewhere they could both access, but Hazō didn't want Orochimaru to be able to send Hazō arbitrary information that the Sannin could use to manipulate or hurt him. Instead, the challenge had been to find a way that Orochimaru could only send the signal that it was time to attack Akatsuki.

"It's not a message, of course, so it's not related to your oaths. It's just a rock. Plus, even if it were a message, it's not from anyone else – it's my rock, right? So giving it back to me doesn't conflict with your oaths either."

"Summoner of dogs, know I the oaths' intention. You from the outside world information to not give you for me wished, and want not to that circumvent I do," Kumokōgō said.

"Well, if it's going to be a problem, we can do the oath ceremonies again," Hazō said. He'd been trying to avoid that whole mess.

Kumokōgō dipped her head again. "No. It is fine. Your plan a greater issue with I have. Certain I am not to aid you I want. Akatsuki before you have told me about, yes, but deeply thought I have not about whether to aid you in them killing I want. The day of the battle on killed personally one of the Dragons the Summoner of Crow, and another wounded, and Summoner of Shark, alongside fought us all. Both of them pledged have to the Arachnid Clan aid if from the Great Seal additional Dragons appear. As well, Karanium and Makomalika both their aid have pledged, and both well-aligned are their summoners with.

"Destroy could the Arachnid Clan's relationship with them in this way betraying them, mere inaction in a way does not, and presents a risk that certain I am not can Arachnid afford to take. Sworn I have to your location to them not give, but mean does not that help them you destroy I must."

"Kumokōgō," Hazō said, gritting his teeth. "Empress. Akatsuki are evil. They aimed to take over the Human Path once before, and they are aiming to do it again. Please, for all the help I gave you against the Dragons, for all the help that I will give you in fixing the Great Seal, do this for me."

"...will consider I it," Kumokōgō said. "Your explanation of the circumstances I have heard and arguments my summoner's own, but consider it still I must. An oath I will not swear you to your rock return. Not yet."

Hazō sighed. "That's fine. For now, at least, it shouldn't be urgent." And, if need be, he could find another way to get in contact with Leaf.

"Will you take this to Orochimaru, at least?" Hazō asked, offering the package. "Or leave it somewhere that he'll surely see it. Actually…"

Hazō pawed for his paper and a charcoal, and quickly scribbled a note to Orochimaru. He described the situation and Kumokōgō's reluctance to help them save the world. Maybe, if the time came and Orochimaru realized that Hazō's runes would be essential to opening the rift, the man would somehow find some way to get in touch with Hazō. He shoved the note in the package.

"There you go."

"For you I that much will do," Kumokōgō said. Another foreleg claimed the bundle of papers. "To keep it where, not know I, as him have not seen I weeks for. Once returns he, given it shall be."

"Thank you, Empress," Hazō said, the Iron Nerve letting him keep his expression deferential despite the sting of betrayal he felt.

o-o-o​

Cannai blended out of the forest around him in that silent, inexplicable way of his.

"Apologies for keeping you waiting, summoner," Cannai said. "There are many things in my territory demanding my attention and my power, and even travel and communication grows expensive for me."

Hazō looked at Cannai. The Dog Clan's leader wasn't exerting his presence as the Alpha the same way he had when the war first broke out. Cannai had become more comfortable with remaining himself while protecting the Dog Clan on whatever metaphysical level he needed to, but still, Hazō could tell that Cannai was tired. The Alpha moved slightly slower, and he had a deep weariness in his voice.

"Let me help," Hazō said. "Let me take messages across your territory for you. I'll have a bit of time every few days. I feel like I'm not doing enough for the war."

"As I have said, you do not need to do anything for the war," Cannai said. "But your aid would be appreciated. How many times in a day could you summon a Dog such as Canoe?"

"Huh, I don't know. Four, maybe? Five?"

"Your chakra reserves have not progressed much since you acquired the scroll, then," Cannai said. "That is fine. How about with the aid of your brother, who transfers chakra?"

"Triple that," Hazō said. "But we don't have that much chakra to spare right now, since we've been removed from our village. Why does it matter how many Canoe-strength dogs I can summon? Surely I should summon puppies for moving messages around, right?"

"I would not send puppies to the front lines," Cannai said. "We have dedicated messengers, but they are not puppies. I shall attempt to find the fastest ones which will nonetheless cost you the least to summon. Beware though, summoner – you wished not to be disturbed by outside elements, correct? If it becomes known that you are passing messages for us, as Leopard may well infer if our coordination suddenly improves on given days – though I shall attempt to obscure it – then the Akatsuki you fear may well search for your contractees. The Dusk Willow pack is kept in Dog's heartlands for this very reason, so that your enemies will not be able to reach them. Dedicated messengers on the borders are far more vulnerable."

"Can't you help keep any outside elements away?" Hazō asked.

"To an extent," Cannai said. "But I took an oath not to pass messages because you want a defense with no weaknesses, and I believe this would open weaknesses. I cannot predict what will happen, but with a war dividing my attention and my strength I know there would be risks."

"I can live with that in order to help with the war," Hazō said. "Really, I regret that I'm not doing more. I was going to offer you skytowers, except I recently found a… concerning discovery about how dimensional seals are damaging the Great Seal, and I really can't afford to make that problem any worse. As it is, the Seventh Path trade network needs to be completely shut down – so maybe it's a good thing that we pulled Dog out of it earlier."

"You're saying that storage seals also interfere with the Great Seal?" Cannai asked.

"That's right."

"Including the storage seals you gave us, so that we could transport the sleds you made for our pups everywhere without weighing ourselves down, as well as for the saddlebags and foodstuffs?"

"Right… yeah, you really shouldn't use those either. Can you get those back to me so I can take them off the Path?"

Cannai lowered his head to the ground and huffed. He scratched the ground with the bare forepaw he'd nearly lost to the Mirror Dragon, then looked back up at Hazō. "So be it, summoner. I would not want the Great Seal to further deteriorate while so many other crises occupy the Seventh Path. I shall prepare this for you within the week."

"I'm sorry."

"It is not your fault that the storage seals interfere with the Great Seal," Cannai said. "That is just the fact of nature. I had wondered whether I ought to ask you for skytowers, or whether your experiences with the Pangolins would make this request damage our relationship. Perhaps I should be grateful that the option has been taken away from me."

"I really do want to help, though," Hazō said. "I can supply you with Force Blades, and the MARS needed to use them effectively. We have a half-dozen spare combat harnesses that your warriors could use right away, and I could ask Kagome-sensei to make more for you."

"I will accept this gift, if you think it will do more good than harm."

"I think it's fine," Hazō said. "I don't offer it lightly, after the horrors of the Pangolin conquest of Condor, but it's a gift without an indefinite commitment of supply, so I trust that you'll use them well."

"For harms, I meant against the Great Seal."

"Ah. Sorry. Yes, Force Blades aren't dimensional, so unless they fail unexpectedly, it should be fine."

"It will be appreciated," Cannai said, turning to look out as if the woods around them were transparent. "Making a handful of dogs more lethal in combat is a far cry from the aerial superiority that enabled Pangolin to conquer Condor, but it will help."

Hazō waited, while Cannai looked out, presumably to the front lines in the distant south (or, at least Hazō assumed it was the south. Judging direction without the sun was nearly impossible).

"You have something else you want to say," Cannai said as he turned back to Hazō and lay down again.

"Yes," Hazō said. "It's a request, and I want to preface this by saying that you should feel no pressure to say yes. I know the Leopard war and your battle with Hyōhakken must demand a lot out of you, and I don't want to distract you, but it would be incredibly useful if I could summon an S-rank combatant for the final battle against Akatsuki. I can't summon you with my natural reserves, but my brother who can transfer chakra has another ability – he can temporarily expand a person's chakra reserves by a massive amount. It could be enough to let me summon you to the Human Path. Would you be willing to let me try?"

"Let me think, summoner," Cannai said, resting his head and letting his eyes close momentarily.

Hazō waited.

"Yes," Cannai said finally, and Hazō felt an almost-physical weight settle around his shoulders as a contract formed, the contract that would let Hazō summon the Dog Clan's Alpha.

"You will summon me only once as a test, and if it works, I will need to return to Dog immediately. My impression is that when the final battle happens, you will have forewarning, correct? You will tell me about when I must battle as far ahead as you can, that I may arrange for our clan to lose as little to Leopard as possible in the intervening time."

"Thank you," Hazō said. "Truly, Cannai, thank you."

"Defeating Akatsuki is important," Cannai said. "I see that much. Moreover, it is fast. If things go well, Dog will lose barely anything. Even if it goes poorly and I am metaphysically disjointed for a few weeks, I will still return to my territory in my diminished form rather quickly. We will stop our advance, or maybe get pushed back until I recover, but it will not be the end for us in the same way that failure against Akatsuki risks the end for you."

"This is what it means to be member of the Dog Clan, Hazō. The Dog Clan fights with you. I will fight with you."

o-o-o​

Hazō waited while Kagome-sensei's brush crossed the page in slow, careful methodical strokes. The brush lifted and he saw his mentor's lips quirk slightly to the side as he considered the stroke he'd laid down. Kagome-sensei lowered his brush again, making some infinitesimal adjustment to correct the blank appropriately according to whatever infinitesimal deviation his steady arm had made.

Minutes later, Kagome-sensei gently slid the blank with its ink still drying to the side and reached for a storage seal, from which he released a gently steaming mug of hot chocolate.

He turned to Hazō. "What's up?"

"Nothing urgent, Kagome-sensei," Hazō replied. "Can we talk?"

"Sure," Kagome-sensei said, and Hazō went ahead and unsealed his own chair, hot drink, and blanket. Winter in the Southern Isles was mild enough that no one needed to wear a coat, but with the wind and clouded skies, the team's stock of pre-prepared winter coziness was still going fast.

"I wanted to ask you about rift safety," Hazō said.

"Right. Well, I taught you the six core rift-safety protocols, depending on the type of rift," Kagome-sensei said. "As well as the auxiliary protocols depending on which kami-and-Outer-entity-satisfying dances you needed to do to prepare for the infusion. Do you need to review any of that?"

"Not at all," Hazō said quickly, hoping to forestall hours of lecture. "I remember everything. The thing is, I'm going to open a rift, and I was wondering if the rift safety protocols should be adjusted if I do get to pick the time and place of infusion, but I still don't know what's behind it. I'll be doing it through a shadow clone of course, with Prime miles away and up on a skytower, but I wanted to pick your brain about any other changes to the protocols we should make."

"Huh, a controlled rift opening," Kagome-sensei said. "Makes sense that we should do things differently if we can prepare. Get all the barriers and stuff ready, maybe even put the rift in a Five-Seal Barrier shell of something thin… But when did you manage to finish the rift-opening seals? And which rift are you working on? And how come you don't know what's behind it?"

"There's one answer to all of those questions," Hazō said, cautiously sipping at his tea. "I'm going to make a rune that opens a new rift to… somewhere. I can't make heads or tails of the targeting, so it's just going to be random."

"What." Kagome-sensei's tone was completely flat, disbelieving.

"It's our only real option," Hazō said. "The weapons and defense programs are coming along fine, and we have the barest smidgen of a route of communication opened with Leaf, so the last thing we need to develop is the rift seals. While we can get started without a rift, we can't actually go all the way to opening it, moving it, whatever else we want to do, unless we have a rift to experiment on. And I've already done the math: runes should be able to punch a hole out of the Human Path just fine, so-"

"Are you crazy!?" Kagome-sensei said, gesturing outwards and spilling hot chocolate on his desk, ruining the blank. "Hazō, that's replicating a seal failure! We never do that!"

"It's not replicating a seal failure," Hazō said, meeting his mentor's gaze. "I'm not trying to make a rift to anywhere that a seal failure has aimed at. Like I said, I'm sure I can make the rune correctly. It's not going to fail."

"No! Are you being stupid on purpose? Making a rift to some random Path or part of the Out or something worse is a sealing failure effect!"

"Fine. It'll be a controlled one," Hazō said. "Rune effects have been bigger than expected before, but it's never caused any real problems, and I'm pretty sure I can keep the size of the rift generated below what regular seal failures produce. We can take all the precautions we need ahead of time. I'll be on a skytower miles away, you and Noburi and Kei can be reverse summoned, and everyone else can be miles farther out. I think the risk is low enough that we can do it."

Kagome-sensei's gestures had long since emptied his mug, and the man's eyes were wide. "Hazō, you can't do this. Sure, a lot of things can't kill you with all the safety precautions, but lots of things can! What if you open a rift into concept-space and you get your mind eaten via the shadow clone link? What if you open into a highly energetic space that just explodes all of us for miles before you can react and reverse summon? What if an Omicron-class entity incarnates? And it's not just you, Hazō! It's the whole world! I know you don't believe that Watcher crap Jiraiya tried to feed you, but sealmasters really shouldn't do this because we have a responsibility to the world to not blow the stinking thing up just because we did the math and it seemed like a good idea!"

"Actually, I disagree with that," Hazō said. "Statistically, there have been too many sealmasters and probably too many sealing failures that made rifts for that to be a real possibility. If rifts had a real chance of ending the world, the world probably would have ended by now."

"You don't know what's out there, Hazō. No one does!" Kagome-sensei glowered at him, then leaned back in his chair, thinking. "How many rift sealing failures do you think there have been since the Sage made chakra? A thousand? The odds of a world ending rift can't be that high, but that doesn't mean they're zero either. Are you ready to gamble everything over it?"

"Frankly, yes," Hazō said. "I think the odds are low of that outcome, but Akatsuki's odds of winning are single-digit percentages or above. Opening a new rift it a gamble I have to take."

"Why do you have to take it?" Kagome-sensei asked. "Why not use another rift to make your rift seals?"

"Which one?" Hazō asked. "Akatsuki owns the O'uzu one, and the one in Iron is going to be crawling with hunter-nin right now."

"Any of the others!" Kagome-sensei said. "I know two- no, three that killed the stinking idiots I used to work with. There's one in northern Lightning country, another in Sky, and the last one is at a black site on one of the Haran Bay islands. I only heard about that one though, I don't know exactly where it is, but we could find it. None of them are occupied, probably. Why not use one of those?"

Huh.

"I didn't know you knew any rift locations," Hazō said.

"How do you think I came up with the dang rift protocols?"

"Well, there are downsides to using those rifts. What's on the other side? Are they even safe enough to open up?" Hazō asked.

"Safe?" Kagome-sensei asked. "No. But if you use a shadow clone and stay miles away and reverse summon at first notice of anything going wrong? Still not safe, but safe enough, yes. Safer than punching a new hole in the Path and praying it works out."

"There would still be downsides to going to any of those," Hazō said. "There's the travel time, of course, which is probably five days of travel to the closest, more if we go for the others. Mari would be miserable going back up north in winter. We'd be getting closer to the Elemental Nations, to hunter-nin, and maybe to Akatsuki."

"But it's still better," Kagome-sensei said. "You see that, right? You're not going to push ahead with the rift-making rune, are you?"

"On the whole, I think…"



What does Hazō think?

Much as I would like to write this plan's research (the Storm Rune looks particularly fun), this seems like a good point for a controlled vote. Your options are:

[X] Yes, push ahead with the Microrift rune.
  • Hazō thinks Kagome is unlikely to make a huge fuss over it. Kagome will feel slighted (perhaps as an extension of the previous trend of Hazō not accepting Kagome's advice on things Kagome perceives as important), but will accept it as a necessary part of your mission to win the O'uzu rift without dying to hunter-nin.
  • If this wins, I will finish writing the plan as-is on Sunday.

[X] No, go to one of Kagome's rift-sites.
  • The team will discuss between themselves and pick the best rift site using their in-character knowledge.
  • If this wins, I will finish writing the plan on Sunday, but with the adjustment that Hazō and co. travel to one of Kagome's rift sites, and Hazō immediately starts researching the Rift-Opener instead of the Microrift rune.

[X] Cancel Microrift rune, but do something else. (write-in)
  • Hazō agrees with Kagome that the Microrift rune should be skipped for now, but doesn't want to directly proceed to one of Kagome's rift sites. In this case, the highest voted Action Plan (or interlude) will win, and I will write that on Sunday.
    • Needless to say, this will rule out doing the Microrift rune.

XP Award: 4 + 1 (brevity) XP
GM-fun Award: 1 XP


Vote time! What to do now?

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Chapter 687: The Limits of Reality

"But it's still better," Kagome-sensei said. "You see that, right? You're not going to push ahead with the rift-making rune, are you?"

"On the whole, I think…"


Hazō sighed.

"I think you're right. We can afford to get closer to the Elemental Nations with our defensive tools, and poking new holes in reality has too much potential downside. I still don't think the odds of that downside are that high, but we don't actually need to risk it."

"Good," Kagome-sensei said, inclining his head slightly in relief. "Let's grab the map and I'll show you where the sites are, and we can pick which one to go to…"

o-o-o​

"Hah!" Kagome said, pointing with one hand while the other clutched his telescope.

"You found it?" Noburi asked.

"Yes! Look, do you see it?"

Noburi raised his telescope to his eye, but didn't see anything but the forest canopy below them.

"Right there," Kagome said, pointing ahead. "They obviously didn't know they'd be observed from above. They planted the trees extra-thick along the site's perimeter so that any stinking Mist ninja or Leaf ninja or Hot Springs ninja passing nearby wouldn't see a thing through the trees. But from skywalkers, it's obvious! You can just see the triangle where the trees are denser than the normal forest."

Noburi looked where Kagome pointed for an area where the already thick foliage grew even thicker, but found nothing.

"Right," Noburi said, putting enough confidence in his voice that hopefully Kagome would assume that he had seen it. "You still don't know if the site is occupied, right?"

Kagome shook his head. "I only heard about the sealing failure, not about what they did to it afterwards. For all I know, they leveled it. Or maybe they're still holed up in there, with all their guards watching the sealmasters nonstop, forcing them to scribe and infuse and scribe and infuse, and for the unlucky ones, forcing them to make new seals, having their notes taken and inspected every few days, forced to make research infusions if they ever want to see-"

"Got it, got it," Noburi said. "Well, let's go swap out for the combat team and let them make sure the site is clear before we go in, okay?"

Kagome-sensei grunted in affirmation, but continued to mutter about the sealing sweatshop the whole way back to camp.

o-o-o​

Hazō inhaled, holding the breath in until he could feel the energy rising in his gut, then set his shoulders back.

"You ready?" Noburi asked. "I know I'm ready to meet Cannai, given how much you've gushed about him."

"He really is that great. You'll see," Hazō said. "Yes, I'm ready. Hit me."

Noburi held Hazō's hand for a second, gauging Hazō's chakra levels, then measured out a tankard of water. Hazō downed it.

Immediately, Hazō felt the chakra run through him. Ordinarily, it felt like bottled lightning, like energy running up and down his body making him want to move. This time, however, Hazō had full chakra reserves and Noburi was filling his chakra system above and beyond what it could normally handle. The lightning turned painful, piercing through his veins and tearing him apart from the inside out as it ran through him, waiting to be freed.

And chakra didn't like to wait. Hazō could tell as soon as he finished drinking that the incredible amount of chakra was already leaking out of him, beyond his modest coils' ability to contain. He couldn't waste a second. He handed the tankard back to Noburi, cut his thumb, and brought his hands together.

"Summoning Technique: Cannai!"

When Hazō summoned a dog, it felt like someone tied a boulder around the chakra in his hara and dropped it. Summoning Cannai, it felt more like a mountain. Chakra streamed out of Hazō faster than he'd ever felt it move before, and he felt his extremities go numb as they went from overflowing to dry in an eyeblink.

Noburi's loaned chakra was gone, and his own chakra was nearly gone too. The chakra flow kept going though, and while Hazō could feel it stabilizing, he didn't feel it slow as his chakra continued to disappear into the boundary between Paths. With the technique not slowing, it would soon cut into his essential life-chakra, needed to sustain his physical body.

Gritting his teeth, Hazō pulled his hands apart and aborted the summoning before the technique could hollow him out. He felt a sudden rebound of pain in his hara as the chakra-thread connecting him to Cannai snapped, and stumbled to all fours as his unnatural energy vanished.

"Didn't make it, huh?" Noburi asked sympathetically. "That's alright, every dog has its day. I'm sure you'll get it next time."

"Shut up," Hazō managed to get out between his panting breaths.

"Hey, don't be mad at me! I didn't know I was going to be throwing you to the dogs in this experiment! Really, I didn't have a dog in this race. In fact, I was kinda hoping you'd pull it off."

Hazō flopped to the ground and rolled onto his back, still panting.

"Hm, you seem pretty tired. Maybe I should let sleeping dogs lie?"

"Help me," Hazō said. His chakra system felt awful – empty and pulsating from its sudden, massive swing in capacity.

"Fine, fine," Noburi said, sauntering over, measuring out another tankard of water, offering it to Hazō's collapsed form. "First thing's first: how about some hair of the dog?"

o-o-o​

Hazō GroundedThunderGod stepped back from the now infused rune, which hummed away with its transcendent power. Unless he'd mixed up the astrological influences, the Storm Rune should now be complete. All that remained was to test it.

He activated the rune, then quickly backed away into the Kagome-standard MEW bunker. The rune took a few seconds to do anything – runes tended to take a while to gather all the energy they needed to operate. The lightning started building atop the rune, which looked good. Nothing was arcing directly out like previous prototypes had done. He'd wanted the lightning strikes to be from above so it could effectively target the entire area of effect, instead of being limited by barriers or terrain.

The buildup of lightning chakra continued until the rune's firing mechanism reached full capacity, and it started to unload its lightning across the surrounding terrain.

It was louder than Hazō had been expecting. That made sense, given that lightning made thunder, but it would make it harder to deploy this rune from stealth in tandem with everything else in his arsenal. He made a quick note of this.

He looked outside the bunker. The lightning strikes were intense. He could see small craters and spiderweb burnt patterns in the ground where the strikes hit. By luck, a strike hit an old cedar tree and split it, sending it falling to the ground. Still… the lightning didn't strike frequently enough to make getting hit a certainty. At a glance, it looked like the rune only put out a couple dozen bolts per second. A ninja in the area could probably leave it without getting hit. With ninja fights as fast as they were, Akatsuki could probably finish any fighting and leave comfortably before a lucky bolt hit them.

He needed to increase the rate of fire, probably also the area of effect, and maybe add in a homing function of some sort… he'd found the base rune easy, but all those additions would make it challenging. Maybe some subset of those upgrades? He made a quick note of this.

He was still writing when a bolt of lightning landed inches from his bunker, dispelling him with its sudden shock.

o-o-o​

"This doesn't feel right," Noburi said. "The sun isn't even at its peak. It's the middle of the day. I shouldn't already be done with my day and about to go to sleep."

Kei reached down and moved a game piece forward, played a card, and took a new one from the stack. "Refusing our brother's abuse of the laws of reality is as trivial as ascending with skywalkers beyond the reach of the time-acceleration rune. If you wish to maintain a typical sleep schedule, the power is within your grasp."

"Ugh, I mean, I want to get stronger just as much as the rest of you," Noburi said, while Yuno to his side puzzled over her hand (Kei's prepared board-game library was far more extensive now than anything they'd had access to in their first time around as missing-nin, but the many new games meant more slow games as people learned the rules and strategies). "It would just be nice if it would also make sense to my body."

"Hazō already suggested a fix to that," Yuno said. "He said we can just live underground and use the Daybright Lanterns to represent sunlight when we want to be awake and turn them off while we sleep."

"Right, but that sucks. Moles and Rock ninja aren't exactly known for having rich, fulfilling lives. As it is, it's pretty limiting to have to stay in range of the rune at all times, even though the effect is pretty- how dare you?"

"Sorry," Yuno cringed slightly at the admonishment in Noburi's voice, and he quickly raised his hands.

"No, no, it's fine," he said apologetically. "I just thought you'd target Kei."

"Well, I think she's probably going to win anyway, and I thought I could probably get second if I did…"

"But we can team up against her! Look, if you instead-"

Noburi was cut off by a sudden roar that pierced the air. The team was on their feet in an instant and saw a pillar of light steadily growing from the distant woods.

"Sealing failure or runic success?" Noburi asked. "Fifty ryō, place your bets now."

"Sealing failure," Yuno said.

"Runic success," Kei said simultaneously.

Tenten inclined her head back and forth, then landed on Yuno.

"My money's with Kei," Noburi said, raising his voice. The roaring sound that had startled them hadn't actually stopped, turning into a continuous, growing rumble that would have drowned out their conversation.

The pillar of light continued to rise and swell until it burst with a crack and it split into dozens of rays spreading outwards. Everyone tensed, but the rays didn't reach their camp. Instead, each ray arced downwards and impacted the ground. Still, the pillar didn't decrease in size and instead continued to spawn new rays that raced outwards and down like an endless fountain of lightning.

"What the hell is that?" Mari yelled over the continuous roaring, racing out of her Darkness Dome with her nightgown held closed by her hands. Hundreds of bolts of lightning struck the ground in the space of her words.

"We don't know," Noburi yelled back. "That's the location of one of Hazō's research sites. The one with the shadow clone, luckily. It looks like we're out of range."

"Out of range of the lightning, sure," Mari said. "What about every damned ninja within a hundred miles that's going to see or hear a lightning storm on a clear day and come investigate? Quickly, we need to pack up camp and get out of here!"

o-o-o​

"Hazō, do you have time for a brief discussion?" Kei asked.

"Hm? Sure," Hazō said, pushing himself away from the edge of the skytower they'd camped on over the Kaizoku Sea. Somewhere to the south their homeland of Mist slept, while far to the east, Kagome-sensei's next-best rift site called to him. Hazō was a bit annoyed that they'd needed to abandon the Haran Bay rift site and lose even more time, but he still didn't want a run-in with Hidan or anyone else on their tail.

"Hazō," Kei said, once they'd settled themselves around a hibachi in the center of the skytower and could no longer see their breath. "I believe now may be an opportune time to revisit my previous request of you regarding the development of city-killers."

"Right," Hazō sighed. "You don't need to explain it to me. I see how raining down millions of lightning bolts in a city-sized area is a city-killer. Is this actually going to be a discussion, or is it a chance for you to admonish me?"

"It is not about admonishment, Hazō," Kei said. "I find it highly likely that ninja from Hot Springs and Cloud are standing on the outskirts of that storm and monitoring it as we speak. It would astonish me if this were not promptly raised to the attention of the very highest members of their leadership. Perhaps even an ambitious patrol from Hidden Mist would have noticed it. This is not a discreet creation that you have wrought."

"That… all seems true," Hazō said. "But it's not a big deal. Stranger things have happened as a result of sealing failures. Noburi even told me about your bet. They'll probably write it off as such."

"I am aware that this would be the most likely possibility, provided they do not investigate the clearly-visible origin of the lightning and find the rune at its heart," Kei said.

"We could have waited the storm out and cleaned it up," Hazō said.

"An encounter with enemy ninja was almost certain," Kei said. "The risk was unacceptable."

"Still, the burnt-out rune seems easy enough to explain as a sealing failure effect to someone who doesn't know any better," Hazō replied. "The stone will probably be pretty badly damaged by the end of it and might blend in with the wrecked terrain. Plus, random weird rocks won't mean any more to Cloud's sealmasters than it would to the field ninja checking it out."

"In the interest of retaining productivity in this conversation, I will refrain from catastrophizing when you have clearly envisioned a perfectly-viable best-case scenario," Kei said. "In which case, I will forego the sub-bullet of this conversation in which I remind you both that proliferating runecraft would be catastrophic, as well as that even inspiring other ninja, whether they be sealmaster or ninjutsu hacker, to pursue weapons of mass destruction could be equally catastrophic, given the lesson we have learned from Elemental Mastery.

"Instead, I will remind you of my other points, hopefully summarized in a reasonably efficient way. This is not a weapon you can use repeatedly, or in front of Orochimaru, for the fear of instilling aforementioned apocalyptic inspiration. This is not a weapon you can present to the Hokage and expect to be used to create a peacetime without atrocity. This is not a weapon that I would trust even you to never err with."

"I'm sorry," Hazō said. "Honestly, I didn't mean for it to be a city-killer. Runes have a tendency of being stronger than I expect them to be."

"That is certainly reassuring and not at all horrifying to hear from a man who has told me that his short-term intention is to develop a rune that opens a connection between our Path and a dimension sufficiently deadly to completely annihilate a Hidden Cloud research site," Kei said. "I do not wish to induce undue guilt, Hazō. Nor would I expect you to promise me that you will never use this again – much as I would like for that to be the case – no more than I could have expected the Seventh to promise that he would never use the Elemental Mastery technique once he had learned it. I simply wish to remind you of the stakes, and the far-reaching consequences of the terrible power you now wield."

"I understand," Hazō said. "I'll… I'll be more careful. Sage-damn it, this is why I wanted to be far, far away from everything while I worked on the rune research."

"If I interpreted Kagome's admirably-composed rants correctly, the 'Microrift' would have led to far, far worse outcomes for the health of civilization," Kei replied.

"Could have, not would have," Hazō said. "Agh, why are there so many constraints on what I can do? Why do I have to navigate a thousand different potential downsides to get anything done?"

"Power, responsibility, et cetera," Kei replied. "I held a far lower quantity of either than you currently do, and I made far worse decisions under their weight. I have faith in your ability to navigate this, Hazō. Please, live up to it."

o-o-o​

Hazō focused and channeled chakra to his palm to form the basic medical ninjutsu. The chakra control needed for the skill was somewhat similar to seal infusion, but separated by orders of magnitude. Just because he was an expert at channeling his chakra into seals, he didn't immediately become a master in the art of medical ninjutsu. He needed to make sure not to get too confident. Noburi had drilled that into him. The balance of chakra in a patient was very delicate, and indelicate medics could cripple or kill their patients in minutes.

Slowly, stutteringly, his palm lit up with faint green light. It was a far cry from the bright, even glow that Noburi could produce in a snap, but it was something.

"Not bad," Noburi said, offering his hand for Hazō to press his palm against. "Here, let's see what you got."

Hazō extended his hand and adjusted his chakra control as Noburi corrected him.

"Your technique hacking trance lets you sense your own chakra system way better, right?" Noburi asked, half an hour later.

"That's right," Hazō said.

"Why don't you do that and test your medical ninjutsu on yourself?" Noburi asked. "It seems like you'd get way better feedback about how you're affecting the patient's chakra system if you can feel it happening, instead of needing me to correct you bit by bit."

"It would be too hard to enter the trance when I can barely maintain a stable palm-healing technique," Hazō said. "And by the time I have the technique down well enough that I could keep it while trancing, I think it would be much less valuable to have that feedback."

"Yeah, sounds right," Noburi said. "There's a knack to it, but you'll get it pretty quickly with practice. Still, the way you're describing the trance sounds very useful. I see why young Tsunade went out of her way to learn it way back in the day. Maybe I ought to learn technique hacking, huh?"

"Don't you have too much to do already?" Hazō asked. "One thing at a time – or, at least, one thing at a time until you finish your shadow clone research. So you should probably do that first."

"Of course, of course," Noburi said. "Plus, I need to figure out something to get back in the Toad Sages' good graces, and they're jutsu nerds, right? Really, since you're half the reason they're mad at me, you should be helping me figure it out. I had a bit of an idea – Shima apparently had this old hair pin she liked, but it was stolen by a Mara they had a feud with, so I was thinking-"

Noburi cut himself off as Kei appeared in a sudden cloud of smoke. She stepped out of it with a slight limp, face blank.

"Oh shit, you're hurt?" Noburi asked, quickly standing and walking towards her. "Hazō, get the stool. Here, let me take a look at that leg…"

"It is fine," Kei said. "No wounds were sustained, I merely suffered a minor sprain while dodging a ninjutsu on skywalkers."

"That's good, but I should still treat it," Noburi said.

"No, it is fine," Kei replied. "I just… Mari."

Mari had just stepped out of her heated tent, joining the rest of the team in welcoming Kei back from the Seventh Path.

"Mari," Kei repeated. "When first I killed people, I felt pain. The lives of those I kill grow no less valuable. Why do I feel less and less each time?"

Mari's eyes softened in sympathy and she shot a look at Noburi, one that even Hazō could decode. Let me take care of her.

"It's hard, Kei," Mari said. "There is so, so much about being a ninja that is hard. Come in my tent, sit down, and have some hot chocolate. I'll tell you about how it was for me."

o-o-o​

Just over two years ago, Hazō and Kagome-sensei had visited the afterlife rift on O'uzu Island to plan out how they would open the rift to resurrect Jiraiya. They'd always planned to use sealcraft – to puzzle out step by step how to interact with the rift, open the dimensions, and finally gain access to that place where their clan's patriarch waited for rescue. Still, their plan had also spanned across years – necessary to chain seals for complex functions and gather information and lore about how the dimensions worked in the first place. By all rights, the completion of the rift seals could have taken months more, if Hazō and Kagome had still been working on their original seal progression.

Hazō had set out instead to make a rune that opened rifts. He'd made it from scratch in three weeks.

It wasn't just the sheer amount of power that runes wielded. It was their… expressivity. Hazō had no better way of characterizing it. Seals were beautiful, but they were so limited – like a song played with only the octaves and fifths. Runes made so many new things possible. It wasn't just twisting the flow of time or causing effects to occur at a massive range. A rune was more than happy to reach into a rift, through the other side, create a 'stopper' to contain a chakra flow, reinforce the transshift canal (or whatever the equivalent was here – Kagome-sensei unfortunately didn't know what the failed seal had been), and fill it with chakra to inflate it.

Or so he hoped. That last step was the one he hadn't tested.

Hazō Wayshredder stood in the snow up to his mid-shin, looking at the rune he'd just finished infusing atop a granite pedestal. It glowed faintly and hummed its ethereal hum, promising to bring destruction to the world in which it resided.

…that was probably an over-exaggeration. It was just a rune, in the end. He expected it would have too much power, that its brute force against the delicate structures of the rift would cause the rift to degrade faster than it would have otherwise. Still, it probably wouldn't do any worse than nothing.

The rune was an intricate, meter-wide spherical cage of clear crystal and white quartz that surrounded a single point in space where the rift scar waited. He'd identified its precise location with Kagome-sensei's chakrascope and spent almost half an hour aligning the blank precisely for the infusion. The rift scar was invisible. For now.

The breeze battering Hazō's face with heavy snowflakes still let him see that where he stood was unusual. Around Hazō, there were nothing but trees, some bare-branched, and others holding on to their needles as if a coat against the harsh winter. Stone bricks criss-crossed the forest floor in lines, some sections coming up to his waist while others were barely bumps in the sheet of white that covered the ground. Remnants of the old sealing facility in which a sealmaster had once failed an infusion.

In the forest beyond the reaches of the facility, Hazō saw only the barest hint of what lay within this rift. The blanket of white had long bumps in it in every direction from fallen logs decaying on the forest floor. The logs were surely husks now, filled with fungus and mold and all sorts of other creatures, but that didn't stop Hazō from seeing their shapes. Every log had fallen pointing towards the rift.

Hazō Prime was two miles away on a skytower, waiting for the infusion so that he could run. Mari's shadow clones were with him, and would escort him to Mari, who was four miles away. The rest of the team was hours away on foot, far too distant to be harmed if the rift-opening didn't proceed as intended.

Hazō closed his eyes, exhaled, then set a finger against the rune to activate it.

The rune's humming didn't grow louder, it just grew higher and higher in pitch until Hazō could no longer hear it. He backed away, leaving crunching steps in the ground and never taking his eyes off the rune.

Reality twisted, bent, and broke open in the center of the rune, becoming a pinprick point of blackness that caused a burst of wind as all the air in the forest suddenly drew towards it. Hazō anchored himself with chakra adhesion and continued to back away, watching as that point of blackness steadily grew.

It would consume anything, Kagome-sensei had said. The bricks from the facility, the needles and snow whipping towards it, even the sealmasters that once worked here. As the rift grew, it would demand more and more, faster and faster, tearing down the trees with the wind speed and causing a minor hurricane, until finally its appetite abated and it started to shrink instead.

Hazō watched as the rift into another dimension expanded until it perfectly fit the runic cage containing it, then stopped. A meter-wide sphere of pure destruction.

The wind whipping around him threatened to pull him away from the ground, and Hazō braced himself against a tree, which slowly creaked towards the rift. He could barely see it now, wrapped in a maelstrom of wind and snow and debris picked off the forest floor or torn off the trees.

It was a success. He'd opened a rift. All that remained was to report so that Prime and Mari could make their escape.

He dispelled himself.



Days 1-5
Traveling to Haran Bay.

(It takes longer to locate the facility, but Hazō starts his prep days immediately instead of waiting).

Day 6
Difficulty check on Rift-Opener: Medium. -1 FP per the new rules, but also +2 prep days. Per SoP, Medium requires full prep.
Prep day on Storm Rune. He doesn't need to prep it, but does so anyway to align the cycles.

Day 7
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Storm Rune.

Day 8
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Storm Rune.

Day 9
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Storm Rune.

Day 10
Infuse Rift-Opener:

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) + 10 (prep) + 6 = 60
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 32 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) + 5 (free invoke on "Out-Touched Sealing Genius") + 0 = 81

Hazō is not sure if it was the invoke or that the rune is on the easy side for a Medium, but he felt that was pretty comfortable. He'll do another full-length cycle before he considers dropping prep (and also because it will give him time to recover from the Moderate Consequence from the Cannai summoning attempt).


Infuse Storm Rune.

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) + 10 (prep) - 6 = 48
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 32 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) - 3 = 73

Well, progress is consistent here. He thinks he's about two-thirds done.

Day 11
DoB rest; Cannai summoning attempt.

Day 12
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Storm Rune.

Day 13
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Storm Rune.

Day 14
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Storm Rune.

Day 15
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Storm Rune.

Day 16
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Storm Rune.

Day 17
Infuse Rift-Opener:

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) + 10 (prep) - 6 = 48
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 32 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) - 6 = 70

That didn't feel that easy, but also not that hard? Maybe that was unusually bad luck?


Infuse Storm Rune:

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) + 10 (prep) + 0 = 54
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 32 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 10 (prep) + 9 = 85

Hazō completes the Storm Rune! TENTATIVE* mechanics: Lightning streams out of the rune into the sky, flows outwards like a fountain, then strikes the earth all around the rune. An area about 1 kilometer across, centered on the rune, is struck by endless lightning for 24 hours. At any given moment, ~50 bolts are striking the ground, but they are randomly distributed across the entire area so it's unlikely a given person will be hit by any given bolt, but nearly-certain if they don't promptly leave the area.

The lightning strikes hit everyone together in melee, and are a TN110, Weapons:2 attack that deals Energy:Lightning stress if not dodged or blocked.

The lightning quickly peters out once below the level of the rune, so the rune can't be effectively used to bombard an area from high ground or a skytower. The lightning needs room to leave the rune from above, so the rune also can't be effectively used from deep underground unless a shaft is made.

There will be a continuous skybeam of lightning emerging from the rune throughout the duration, making the Zone in which the rune sits functionally uninhabitable. This does not damage the rune.

When the rune runs out, it cracks and blackens, becoming a mass of blackened crystal in the shape of the rune.

*AS PER USUAL, RUNES WITH TENTATIVE MECHANICS ARE HIGHLY SUBJECT TO CHANGE. PLEASE EXPECT THEM TO CHANGE IN SOME REGARD, PERHAPS MANY REGARDS AS THEY MOVE TOWARDS THEIR FINAL FORM.

Day 18-19
Traveling to the rift site in Sky after the Storm Rune gave away the team's location pretty hard.

Day 20
Hazō thinks he could drop prep days on Rift Opener, so he goes down to 4 prep days. He's intentionally slow about dropping prep for runes because runic failures are bad, and prep days aren't that bad when they still increase the roll and thus get him progress.

Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Air-Leadening Rune.

(+1 FP for brevity-based-bonus; 3 FP)

Day 21
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Air-Leadening Rune.

Day 22
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Air-Leadening Rune.

Day 23
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Air-Leadening Rune.

Day 24
Infuse Rift-Opener:

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) + 8 (prep) - 6 = 46
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 32 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 8 (prep) + 3 = 77

Hazō's not on the verge of completion, but one more roll should do it for sure.


Infuse Air-Leadening Rune:

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) + 8 (prep) + 3 = 55
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 32 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 8 (prep) - 6 = 68

Hazō's moving along here; he thinks he's over halfway done.

Day 25
DoB rest.

Day 26
Hazō will drop to 3 prep days. Again, probably slower than he needs to but he really wants to be cautious around rune research. At least this is probably better than Kagome-sensei full-prepping everything…

Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Air-Leadening Rune.

Day 27
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Air-Leadening Rune.

Day 28
Prep day on Rift-Opener.
Prep day on Air-Leadening Rune.

Day 29
Infuse Rift-Opener:

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) + 6 (prep) + 3 = 53
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 32 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 6 (prep) + 0 = 72

Hazō completes the Rift-Opener Rune! Once, Kagome hoped to make a seal that would do the same over months or years of challenging research. Hazō did it as a rune in three weeks. In a cave, with a box of scraps.

TENTATIVE* mechanics: A rift scar needs to be placed at its exact center (likely being aligned using Kagome's chakrascope seals.) When the rune is triggered, after about a minute, the rift gradually grows to the size of the rune caging it. Once fully-opened, the rift gradually grows smaller and eventually closes.

The diameter of the rift opening depends on the amount of substrate used:
  • 5 points of substrate: 1 meter opening, closes after 6 hours.
  • 25 points of substrate: 3 meter opening, closes after 1 day.
  • 125 points of substrate: 10 meter opening, closes after 2 days.
  • 625 points of substrate: 30 meter opening, closes after 3 days.
  • …and so on.

May be incompatible with certain rift scars for reasons beyond Hazō's current understanding, but designed to work with the O'uzu rift.


Infuse Air-Leadening Rune:

Hazō (Earthshaping): 50 - 6 (timeladder down) + 6 (prep) + 0 = 50
Hazō (Primordial Sealing): 32 + 22 (crossover bonus from DoB-boosted Sealing) + 12 (Disciple of the Beyond) + 6 (prep) - 9 = 63
Hazō doesn't think this is going to fail so he'll let it fly for FP efficiency.

Hazō makes healthy progress. He thinks another cycle, even another no-prep cycle, should finish off this rune.

Day 30
DoB rest.

(+1 FP for brevity-based-bonus; 4 FP)

The team is currently on a skytower about eighty miles south of Hidden Sky. This update covers 25 days on the calendar and 30 days subjectively. On every day on which Hazō had clone-hours that weren't being spent on research or SC training, he spent 4 training-blocks helping Kagome-sensei scribe skywalkers to help replenish the team's stockpile (having used nearly 10,000 seal elements of skywalkers alone since leaving the desert).

Hazō has completed his basic training in MedNin, and has purchased MedNin to level 10 so that he can make further progress on his own.

The beasts here are much easier to handle than out in the far wilderness. Consequently, the only extra harm suffered against your chakra budget was Kei's missions in Pangolin, which ate the entire chakra budget on 4 of the regular prep days.

XP Award: 120 + 10 (brevity) XP
GM-fun Award: 2 XP (Storm Rune scene was very fun)


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