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grimlock said:
Try asking specific and technical questions. "Does this dialogue work better in passive voice?" or "I feel like I have too much talk-head stuff going on. Any suggestions for how to flesh it out?"-
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I can't really pinpoint anything specific. It's just an overall bad feeling about something I hastily scrawled within thirty minutes, maybe less, an hour after deadline (which doesn't seem to have been enforced anyway).
 
'Tis I again, delivering another entry in my chronicles of wading through the history.

Diary of a Madman, entry #uh, I don't wanna tab out and count it.
It is done. The NME side-quest was conquered and the journey once again took the direction of the main questline. At page 826 and wondering whether someone adopted the plot bunny of Black Moon being in Germany. And as the subject of sports was touched, I consider the American 'football' rugby for pansies. I think I even read some theory/study which suggested the padding / armour makes long-term health problems / injuries worse.

Random immature thought of the day: Am I the only one who gets giggles when the word 'Adamite' is used? I don't know how well-known the historical meaning of the word is in other countries, but as it was a part of a very significant era in Czech (my country's) history, it is commonly taught in schools here. And trust me, a teenager WILL remember a passage about what basically amounts to nudist hippies, sans the drugs perhaps. (well, who knows..)

An so we have gems like those..

Strypgia said:
Yeah, whatever might have happened if an Adamite Angel made contact with Lilith, it wouldn't have been the Complementation/planetary-rewrite that they were looking for seeking Adam.
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Strypgia said:
He was still smiling. It was getting on her nerves even more than the constant background itch of her Angelic side screaming at her to destroy the Adamite interloper.
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Strypgia said:
She very calmly turned to the Adamite intruder standing in her bedroom and very, very calmly asked, "Kaworu Nagisa, are you staring fixedly at my underwear?
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Rei is instinctively 'cats & dogs' hostile to him because he's Adamite.
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Strypgia said:
"I... apologize again. I have no right to expect you to... let me touch you, stare at you, demand your care, not even as... a strange sort of way to fight my Adamite side. It is an unfair burden to place on you."
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Now you cannot unsee Kaworu as a streaker.



P.S.: Reminder for Strypgia: Give Maya at least one badass scene.
 
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Naughtilus said:
'Tis I again, delivering another entry in my chronicles of wading through the history.

Diary of a Madman, entry #uh, I don't wanna tab out and count it.
It is done. The NME side-quest was conquered and the journey once again took the direction of the main questline. At page 826 and wondering whether someone adopted the plot bunny of Black Moon being in Germany. And as the subject of sports was touched, I consider the American 'football' rugby for pansies. I think I even read some theory/study which suggested the padding / armour makes long-term health problems / injuries worse.

Random immature thought of the day: Am I the only one who gets giggles when the word 'Adamite' is used? I don't know how well-known the historical meaning of the word is in other countries, but as it was a part of a very significant era in Czech (my country's) history, it is commonly taught in schools here. And trust me, a teenager WILL remember a passage about what basically amounts to nudist hippies, sans the drugs perhaps. (well, who knows..)

An so we have gems like those..











Now you cannot unsee Kaworu as a streaker.



P.S.: Reminder for Strypgia: Give Maya at least one badass scene.
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I just replaced "Adamite" with "nudist" in my head in all those quotes and welp.
 
Naughtilus said:
a very significant era in Czech (my country's) history
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Ah! Czechs are fun people. My wife and I had a great time in Prague 10 years ago, and oh holy god, is the beer in the Czech Rep good. I don't even like beer at home, but I had the beer there. :)
Naughtilus said:
P.S.: Reminder for Strypgia: Give Maya at least one badass scene.
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Quit peeking ahead! :p

Finished a big project at work today, so hopefully will have writing time now. The next scene is going to be Hikari and Asuka noticing something about Rei, and pulling her aside for some girl talk.
 
Strypgia said:
The next scene is going to be Hikari and Asuka noticing something about Rei, and pulling her aside for some girl talk.
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Hikari: "Did you see?!"
Asuka: "Yeah! Her roots are blue. The fuck do you think it means?"
Hikari: "I know! Who has naturally blue hair? Wait... Asuka, do you think... could Rei..."
Asuka: "No... surely not. No, that's silly."
Hikari: "You're right - there's better odds of Kaworu being an Angel infiltrator than Rei."
 
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So....

What would the A&T! gang think of Alucard?

Two versions; canon, and Abridged?
 
both would involve screaming in mortal terror at the hellish monstrosity that is basically a scaled down version of SEELE's Instrumentality.
 
Nilay said:
So....

What would the A&T! gang think of Alucard?

Two versions; canon, and Abridged?
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Given that the manga wouldn't have even been half-finished when 2I hit, and the anime only came out in 2001, I'm not sure it would have become very big.

Edit: Unless you mean as if the characters interacted, in which case Alucard was a set of imaginary numbers from late spring 2000 to some time in 2030.
 
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Schpoonman said:
I just replaced "Adamite" with "nudist" in my head in all those quotes and welp.
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Susano said:
And here we thought the Lilithian nephilim is the nudist...
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Just according to keikaku.

Strypgia said:
Ah! Czechs are fun people. My wife and I had a great time in Prague 10 years ago, and oh holy god, is the beer in the Czech Rep good. I don't even like beer at home, but I had the beer there. :)
Quit peeking ahead! :p
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Am not peeking. You yourself told us to remind you, on page 790something.
I doubt you remember what brand you had, eh? If you ever find yourself passing through this little country, I'll point you towards some quality stuff.

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Remind me to keep you away from any bomb-testing sights
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But a nice EXPLOOOOOOOSION!! is a site to behold.
Sorry, couldn't resist a little English-teaching jab.
 
Nilay said:
What does that mean?
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At that point in time, Alucard had consumed Warrant Officer Schrodinger and could not perceive his individual identity, thus he did not exist.

On that note though, ND!Rei meets Abridged Alucard

R: "Heee~eey, what'cha doin'?"

A: "Eh, I'm getting ready to take a walk."

R: "Can I come too?"


Elsewhere, both Integra and Yui turn to their respective menservants, "Do you have a sudden, vague sense of existential dread?"
 
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