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Pregnancies versus children.

Most pregnancies result in children, but we can more readily agree to pregnancies than children. Promising children means ensuring the YUW reach full term, in a death world near two Sealing Masters who experiment and will, at least sometimes, have sealing failures.

I'm not saying to have them impregnated four times a year with "miscarriages" to match - that would be bad faith negotiating.
 
What you're reading is a translation from ElementalNationsese to English and, as anyone who has done translation work will tell you, idiomatic translation requires some flexibility.
I think it's a good idea to avoid phrases that readers will find jarringly modern, though. (Maybe @eaglejarl disagrees, since his Team Anko story includes such terms as "heroin" and "training bra.")
 
Well the mothers already have full visitation rights I believe, we're mostly pushing for Hazo also having the right to interact with his children. Keeping the the children up until they turn 5 wouldn't be unreasonable, the Uchiha would definitely save money not having to support a bunch of kids for at least a few extra years, but that's pretty cruel to the kids. Arguably more so then just outright raising them in the Uchiha compound with their mothers visiting whenever they have time.
Why do the mothers need to become Gouketsu in the first place? Let us adopt some other civilians, and let the Uchiha do their own dirty work. (I mean the work of making teenage girls into brood-mares.)
 
That's why we have a neutral medical doctor to decide in cases like this.

Decide what?

If it's a miscarriage and we contract for children then we just haven't fulfilled our obligation. If the contract is for pregnancies, then we have met our responsibilities as long as we can have a ToLHs verify their pregnancy existed at some point, which we'd be doing as a matter of course anyway.
 
@faflec @huhYeahGoodPoint

I would be supportive in including a "Hazou skeptically raises an eyebrow, reminds them that we're offering them a pretty good deal here in exchange for some minor concessions that are ultimately compatible with their main goal of getting back to full strength, and politely ask them what their back up plan is: are they going to wait for another rogue Kurosawa to fall out of the sky or...? " into the negotiations bits.
 
I would specifically make anyone in one clan with a bloodline originating from the other dual-clan. This protects secrets, protects bloodline possession, empowers the children by giving them both clans' secrets to draw upon, and merges the clans in a way that means a strong alliance is unavoidable.
 
@eaglejarl is the contract regarding children or pregnancies? What about miscarriage?

Here is the text:

"Anyway, here's the deal: There's usually one or two Council votes per month, for everything from choosing who fills significant seats like head teacher at the Academy or which ninja should get promoted to jōnin to negotiating with the Merchant Council to whether or not to tell the Daimyo to raise taxes. Technically, it's all advisory since the Hokage can do whatever he wants. In practice, what the Council votes for usually becomes reality. That will be especially true if Asuma gets elected, since he doesn't have the sheer physical power to kill anyone who oversteps. Long and short: Controlling the votes of nine of the seventeen people who sit on the Clan Council means controlling everything that matters about Leaf and the Land of Fire.

"The Uchiha acknowledge, grudgingly, that they can't afford to piss off the Hyūga too much, so they won't vote directly against them on this or any other truly major issue until the Uchiha have rebuilt enough of a ninja force to protect themselves. They will abstain, which is often going to be good enough. They'll give us this one, plus five more markers that we can cash in for any vote. Each marker gets them to vote for us or abstain, their choice. We also get another marker for each of the years in which they adopt a child from one of the of the girls we're adopting—"

"That starting on your eighteenth birthday, we are required to have each of those girls get impregnated by a ninja every year for five years, and that any children born from such a union are to be immediately adopted by the Uchiha? Oh, and that at least three of those pregnancies must be by a ninja who was born as a Kurosawa? Yup, that's what I'm suggesting."

"Anyway, starting three years from now and continuing for five years, each of these girls—who will be mature women at the time, moving on towards spinsters really—need to get impregnated by a ninja once per year. Each year, three of those impregnations need to be done by a ninja who was born as a Kurosawa. If you're too busy then we can hire someone or whatever. All of the kids they have during that period are automatically adopted into the Uchiha. Again, that all starts three years from now, when you turn eighteen. I figured that would give us enough time to get all our affairs in order so we weren't dealing with an aggravation of pregnancies while we're still struggling to get established.
 
The Gouketsu Clan will not allow for the eleven (11) civilian women to [...] be unwilling to bear children.

This sounds strange. Maybe change to "none of the eleven (11) civilian women will [...] be made to bear children against their will (at threat of contract-breach or whatever)" or something similar.

Should adoption not be feasible, the Gouketsu Clan will ensure that the total number of children born to these women (55) remains the same, and will ensure another children is born from the remaining women as soon as is healthy to do so. Should this occur after the five-year stipulation, the Uchiha Clan will not be obligated to pay the one (1) political marker owed for the particular year a child is born.

This paragraph feels weird to me. (It is listed twice, under "1." and "2.", is that intentional?)
If the total number of children born to the women remains the same, which remaining women will bear the compensatory child?
Also, the original speaks of 55 pregnancies.

"Anyway, starting three years from now and continuing for five years, each of these girls [...] need to get impregnated by a ninja once per year. Each year, three of those impregnations need to be done by a ninja who was born as a Kurosawa. If you're too busy then we can hire someone or whatever. All of the kids they have during that period are automatically adopted into the Uchiha.
 
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Yeah, I'm sorry @Kiba I'm going to have to change it back. We're not trying to screw them with this, and I think they know that.
Suggested Changes to the Uchiha Deal:

Gouketsu Key Contentions and Possible Solutions: If any of these contentions are not solved to our satisfaction, we will not sign the contract. Bulleted beneath each Key Contention are details and/or possible solutions to the contention.
  1. The Gouketsu Clan will not allow for the eleven (11) civilian women to be impregnated to be threatened, blackmailed, coerced, or in any other way be unwilling to bear children. At any point, any one of the civilian women may choose to 'opt out' of the deal, and may choose to remain within the Gouketsu Clan or be re-adopted into the Uchiha Clan as she sees fit.
    • The Uchiha Clan is free to select another healthy civilian woman to be adopted into the Gouketsu Clan. This woman will continue the previous woman's obligations under the same terms of the deal.
    • Should adoption not be feasible, the Gouketsu Clan will ensure that the total number of pregnancies (55) remains the same, and will ensure another pregnancy from the remaining women as soon as is healthy to do so. Should this occur after the five-year stipulation, the Uchiha Clan will not be obligated to pay the one (1) political marker owed for the particular year a child is born.
  2. To ensure the safety of the eleven (11) civilian women, a competent medical professional will be enlisted to confirm whether or not each woman is capable of giving birth with minimal complications (NB: the chances of this woman dying or being otherwise permanently weakened from the ordeal is less than 5%). Should this medical professional deem it so, the rate OR number of births for this woman must be reduced or ended entirely.
    • The Uchiha Clan is free to select another healthy civilian woman to be adopted into the Gouketsu Clan. This woman will continue the previous woman's obligations under the same terms of the deal.
    • Should adoption not be feasible, the Gouketsu Clan will ensure that the total number of pregnancies (55) remains the same, and will ensure another pregnancy from the remaining women as soon as is healthy to do so. Should this occur after the five-year stipulation, the Uchiha Clan will not be obligated to pay the one (1) political marker owed for the particular year a child is born.
  3. Parents of any child born and immediately adopted or married into the Uchiha Clan will be allowed to be heavily involved in the raising of the child until said child has reached his or her age of majority. This includes any children born under the eleven (11) civilian women adopted from this deal, as well as any future children with the potential to develop the Sharingan.
    • At the bare minimum, the Gouketsu Clan requires the right to visit these children as often as they desire.
    • The Gouketsu Clan offers to shoulder the cost of raising these children, which includes but is not limited to: monetary costs, training, general child rearing, etc., until they reach their legal age of majority, after which point they will move into the Uchiha Clan. At all points these children will be legally considered to be members of the Uchiha Clan.
    • The Gouketsu and Uchiha Clans may choose to raise these children together under dual-clan membership. This means that they will be considered to be both of the Uchiha AND the Gouketsu Clans, though their status as Uchiha Clan will take precedence.
    • The Gouketsu Clan is willing to train these children to prevent issues arising from the Iron Nerve bloodline from occuring, and may offer them tutoring in certain clan secrets (without being said aloud, this means teaching them details on the Iron Nerve). Any clan secret training will be understood to be not taught to anyone outside of the Gouketsu Clan. Additionally, the Gouketsu is willing to teach them non-clan secret techniques and outfit them with seal loadouts at our discretion.
      • NB: The incentive here is that if they are family they get treated like family. This includes making sure they're better equipped than a small nation's army and are as unkillable as possible.

Additional Concessions to Contentions: In addition to solutions to specific contentions, these are general concessions that may be added to resolve any contention. Specifics are to be determined based on the magnitude of the contention and how much is necessary to 'balance the scales'.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers an increased payment totaling up to R1,500,000 per month to the Uchiha Clan.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers to reduce the total number of political markers given upfront by the Uchiha Clan down to 3.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers to void political markers the Uchiha Clan is obligated to give for every year a child is adopted into the Uchiha.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers to void political markers the Uchiha Clan is obligated to give for every year a child with the potential to develop the Sharingan is adopted.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers to reduce the amount or duration of the 5% Uchiha income net of basic clan expenses, and are willing to void this entirely.
 
I would specifically make anyone in one clan with a bloodline originating from the other dual-clan. This protects secrets, protects bloodline possession, empowers the children by giving them both clans' secrets to draw upon, and merges the clans in a way that means a strong alliance is unavoidable.
Yeah, if that's feasible it sounds like a definite goal.
 
*Sigh* There's currently no plan towards no taking the deal/ being against selling bloodline/ trading progeny (or at least any hardline approaches). Plan-making on mobile sucks, but I'll give it a go. Input welcome, especially with the dinner because I can't social well.

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[X] Action Plan: Civilian Specifics

Afternoon: Clan meeting, feat Naruto.
  • Homogoro deal: money for Asuma vote, let's do it. Right?
  • Uchiha deal: Mixed feelings. [Insert long, drawn- out separate post link here. Mostly cribbed from a Ipsos's post, and some from faflec's, but also adding in a provision about getting a worse deal in exchange for not having the Kurosawa parental requirement] Get everyone's thoughts, don't do it if the majority are against it, after provisions.
  • Akane and Noburi: take over care of civilians in our yard (collaborate with medics, building better shelters, etc)
  • Mari: Continue what you've been doing. Take offers to Uchiha and Homogoro once decided, lets get those done.
  • Kagome: help with civilians, restock seals, hold down fort?
  • Naruto: what are you up to?
  • Any other issues?
Evening: Dinner Guests
  • We appreciate you all coming
  • Talk with clanless about retainership, potential of seal training. Issues they think should be addressed, clan vs clanless. Helping with now homeless civilians?
  • Trade interesting Jiraiya stories with Snake.
 
This sounds strange. Maybe change to "none of the eleven (11) civilian women will [...] be made to bear children against their will (at threat of contract-breach or whatever)" or something similar.
Sure. Changed it up a bit, but it's most of your suggestion.
This paragraph feels weird to me. (It is listed twice, under "1." and "2.", is that intentional?)
That's intentional.
If the total number of children born to the women remains the same, which remaining women will bear the compensatory child?
We'd choose from the remaining women. I don't think it's necessary to specify, since the Uchiha Clan won't care (?).
Also, the original speaks of 55 pregnancies.
...Yes? I don't see your point?

Suggested Changes to the Uchiha Deal:

Gouketsu Key Contentions and Possible Solutions: If any of these contentions are not solved to our satisfaction, we will not sign the contract. Bulleted beneath each Key Contention are details and/or possible solutions to the contention.
  1. None of the eleven (11) civilian women will at any point be threatened, blackmailed, coerced, or in any other way be made to bear children against their will. At any point, any one of the civilian women may choose to 'opt out' of the deal, and may choose to remain within the Gouketsu Clan or be re-adopted into the Uchiha Clan as she sees fit.
    • The Uchiha Clan is free to select another healthy civilian woman to be adopted into the Gouketsu Clan. This woman will continue the previous woman's obligations under the same terms of the deal.
    • Should adoption not be feasible, the Gouketsu Clan will ensure that the total number of pregnancies (55) remains the same, and will ensure another pregnancy from the remaining women as soon as is healthy to do so. Should this occur after the five-year stipulation, the Uchiha Clan will not be obligated to pay the one (1) political marker owed for the particular year a child is born.
  2. To ensure the safety of the eleven (11) civilian women, a competent medical professional will be enlisted to confirm whether or not each woman is capable of giving birth with minimal complications (NB: the chances of this woman dying or being otherwise permanently weakened from the ordeal is less than 5%). Should this medical professional deem it so, the rate OR number of births for this woman must be reduced or ended entirely.
    • The Uchiha Clan is free to select another healthy civilian woman to be adopted into the Gouketsu Clan. This woman will continue the previous woman's obligations under the same terms of the deal.
    • Should adoption not be feasible, the Gouketsu Clan will ensure that the total number of pregnancies (55) remains the same, and will ensure another pregnancy from the remaining women as soon as is healthy to do so. Should this occur after the five-year stipulation, the Uchiha Clan will not be obligated to pay the one (1) political marker owed for the particular year a child is born.
  3. Parents of any child born and immediately adopted or married into the Uchiha Clan will be allowed to be heavily involved in the raising of the child until said child has reached his or her age of majority. This includes any children born under the eleven (11) civilian women adopted from this deal, as well as any future children with the potential to develop the Sharingan.
    • At the bare minimum, the Gouketsu Clan requires the right to visit these children as often as they desire.
    • The Gouketsu Clan offers to shoulder the cost of raising these children, which includes but is not limited to: monetary costs, training, general child rearing, etc., until they reach their legal age of majority, after which point they will move into the Uchiha Clan. At all points these children will be legally considered to be members of the Uchiha Clan.
    • The Gouketsu and Uchiha Clans may choose to raise these children together under dual-clan membership. This means that they will be considered to be both of the Uchiha AND the Gouketsu Clans, though their status as Uchiha Clan will take precedence.
    • The Gouketsu Clan is willing to train these children to prevent issues arising from the Iron Nerve bloodline from occuring, and may offer them tutoring in certain clan secrets (without being said aloud, this means teaching them details on the Iron Nerve). Any clan secret training will be understood to be not taught to anyone outside of the Gouketsu Clan. Additionally, the Gouketsu is willing to teach them non-clan secret techniques and outfit them with seal loadouts at our discretion.
      • NB: The incentive here is that if they are family they get treated like family. This includes making sure they're better equipped than a small nation's army and are as unkillable as possible.

Additional Concessions to Contentions: In addition to solutions to specific contentions, these are general concessions that may be added to resolve any contention. Specifics are to be determined based on the magnitude of the contention and how much is necessary to 'balance the scales'.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers an increased payment totaling up to R1,500,000 per month to the Uchiha Clan.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers to reduce the total number of political markers given upfront by the Uchiha Clan down to 3.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers to void political markers the Uchiha Clan is obligated to give for every year a child is adopted into the Uchiha.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers to void political markers the Uchiha Clan is obligated to give for every year a child with the potential to develop the Sharingan is adopted.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers to reduce the amount or duration of the 5% Uchiha income net of basic clan expenses, and are willing to void this entirely.
 
I would specifically make anyone in one clan with a bloodline originating from the other dual-clan. This protects secrets, protects bloodline possession, empowers the children by giving them both clans' secrets to draw upon, and merges the clans in a way that means a strong alliance is unavoidable.
I'm trying to figure out how to add this in. Please remind me to go back to adding it in a couple hours if I haven't.
This was chronologically before you changed it back to fit the original wording of "pregnancies". They did indeed have a point at the time! Grrr!! :p
That is very awkward. My mistake.

@eaglejarl I'm not sure how useful my revisions to the Uchiha Deal would work for you, could you take a look?
Suggested Changes to the Uchiha Deal:

Gouketsu Key Contentions and Possible Solutions: If any of these contentions are not solved to our satisfaction, we will not sign the contract. Bulleted beneath each Key Contention are details and/or possible solutions to the contention.
  1. None of the eleven (11) civilian women will at any point be threatened, blackmailed, coerced, or in any other way be made to bear children against their will. At any point, any one of the civilian women may choose to 'opt out' of the deal, and may choose to remain within the Gouketsu Clan or be re-adopted into the Uchiha Clan as she sees fit.
    • The Uchiha Clan is free to select another healthy civilian woman to be adopted into the Gouketsu Clan. This woman will continue the previous woman's obligations under the same terms of the deal.
    • Should adoption not be feasible, the Gouketsu Clan will ensure that the total number of pregnancies (55) remains the same, and will ensure another pregnancy from the remaining women as soon as is healthy to do so. Should this occur after the five-year stipulation, the Uchiha Clan will not be obligated to pay the one (1) political marker owed for the particular year a child is born.
  2. To ensure the safety of the eleven (11) civilian women, a competent medical professional will be enlisted to confirm whether or not each woman is capable of giving birth with minimal complications (NB: the chances of this woman dying or being otherwise permanently weakened from the ordeal is less than 5%). Should this medical professional deem it so, the rate OR number of births for this woman must be reduced or ended entirely.
    • The Uchiha Clan is free to select another healthy civilian woman to be adopted into the Gouketsu Clan. This woman will continue the previous woman's obligations under the same terms of the deal.
    • Should adoption not be feasible, the Gouketsu Clan will ensure that the total number of pregnancies (55) remains the same, and will ensure another pregnancy from the remaining women as soon as is healthy to do so. Should this occur after the five-year stipulation, the Uchiha Clan will not be obligated to pay the one (1) political marker owed for the particular year a child is born.
  3. Parents of any child born and immediately adopted or married into the Uchiha Clan will be allowed to be heavily involved in the raising of the child until said child has reached his or her age of majority. This includes any children born under the eleven (11) civilian women adopted from this deal, as well as any future children with the potential to develop the Sharingan.
    • At the bare minimum, the Gouketsu Clan requires the right to visit these children as often as they desire.
    • The Gouketsu Clan offers to shoulder the cost of raising these children, which includes but is not limited to: monetary costs, training, general child rearing, etc., until they reach their legal age of majority, after which point they will move into the Uchiha Clan. At all points these children will be legally considered to be members of the Uchiha Clan.
    • The Gouketsu and Uchiha Clans may choose to raise these children together under dual-clan membership. This means that they will be considered to be both of the Uchiha AND the Gouketsu Clans, though their status as Uchiha Clan will take precedence.
    • The Gouketsu Clan is willing to train these children to prevent issues arising from the Iron Nerve bloodline from occuring, and may offer them tutoring in certain clan secrets (without being said aloud, this means teaching them details on the Iron Nerve). Any clan secret training will be understood to be not taught to anyone outside of the Gouketsu Clan. Additionally, the Gouketsu is willing to teach them non-clan secret techniques and outfit them with seal loadouts at our discretion.
      • NB: The incentive here is that if they are family they get treated like family. This includes making sure they're better equipped than a small nation's army and are as unkillable as possible.

Additional Concessions to Contentions: In addition to solutions to specific contentions, these are general concessions that may be added to resolve any contention. Specifics are to be determined based on the magnitude of the contention and how much is necessary to 'balance the scales'.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers an increased payment totaling up to R1,500,000 per month to the Uchiha Clan.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers to reduce the total number of political markers given upfront by the Uchiha Clan down to 3.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers to void political markers the Uchiha Clan is obligated to give for every year a child is adopted into the Uchiha.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers to void political markers the Uchiha Clan is obligated to give for every year a child with the potential to develop the Sharingan is adopted.
  • The Gouketsu Clan offers to reduce the amount or duration of the 5% Uchiha income net of basic clan expenses, and are willing to void this entirely.
 
Suggested Changes to the Uchiha Deal:

Since there is no leeway for misunderstandings here, I would suggest that the subpoints under 3) be labeled in preference order. For example, if you prefer the dual-clan arrangement but would settle for visitation rights:

"i) Ideally, the Gouketsu and Uchiha Clans raise these children together under dual-clan membership. This means that they will be considered to be both of the Uchiha AND the Gouketsu Clans, though their status as Uchiha Clan will take precedence.

ia) If this is agreed to, the Gouketsu Clan offers to shoulder the cost of raising these children, which includes but is not limited to: monetary costs, training, general child rearing, etc., until they reach their legal age of majority.

ib) Furthermore, if this is agreed to, the Gouketsu Clan is willing to train these children to prevent issues arising from the Iron Nerve bloodline from occuring, and may offer them tutoring in certain clan secrets (without being said aloud, this means teaching them details on the Iron Nerve). Any clan secret training will be understood to be not taught to anyone outside of the Gouketsu Clan. Additionally, the Gouketsu is willing to teach them non-clan secret techniques and outfit them with seal loadouts at our discretion.

ii) If the arrangement in i) cannot be achieved, then at the bare minimum, the Gouketsu Clan requires the right to visit these children as often as they desire."

Another important point: It is directly in the Goketsu's interests for the Uchiha to vote for your candidate instead of abstaining, you should see if any of the concessions you offer them can flip them to a true vote instead of an abstain:

Current Situ:
9 Yes, 7 No, 1 Abstain
Hyuuga Flips 1: 8 Yes, 8 No, 1 Abstain
Hyuuga Flips 2: 7 No, 9 Yes, 1 Abstain

With their clan head out of commission and Mari working against them, I don't think it's likely for the Hyuuga to have flipped more than 2 without Mari catching wind of it. At the very least you should see if the Uchiha will agree to vote for your candidate on the re-vote if the first vote is a tie.

Since most inter-clan warfare within the same village is probably economic warfare (Keiko describing how the Mori defeated their rival clan, Mari nothing that economic warfare is legal), you might be able to get the Uchiha to fully flip if you simply offer them enough guaranteed money.

Tangentially, one of the upcoming plans should include some investigation of whether civilian influence can be converted into a flipped clan on the vote. The fact that Ami chose to make a speech to the civilians as part of her favor suggests that it could be a fertile avenue - perhaps one clan or another has economic interests that require a skilled and willing civilian business partner, for example.

Also, I don't know if Mari is already doing so, but you should ask her if Hiashi can be negotiated with: the Hyuuga sense of honor would likely cause them to follow through with any agreement they actually pen, and in his rant Hiashi made clear that he respects ability most of all. If the Goketsu have demonstrated the ability to generate significant political influence from a severely disadvantageous position (only 5 ninja with minimal warchest against a founding clan with 20+ ninjas), that might convince him that the Goketsu can be a worthwhile ally and asset to Leaf. It doesn't hurt to explore the possibility and potentially help a brother (Noburi or Naruto) out.

The exchange would be "give the Uchiha that leeway, but if Hiashi wins the entire deal is off." So the last sentence isn't accurate - they risk losing out on the deal.

I'm aware of the opportunity cost, but I don't see any advantages to you of giving the Uchiha that leeway and creating the chance for something to go wrong. It seems to be trading off a massive advantage for minimal gain, and directly reduces the incentives the Uchihas otherwise would have to ensure Hiashi loses, which would be actively counterproductive from the intention:

-Under the current deal, if Hiashi wins then the Uchiha are in a bad spot (they have pissed him off by abstaining) and if Hiashi loses then the Uchiha are in a great spot (they have a path to restoration and are part of the winning bloc), though not prefect as the Hyuuga will still be pissed at them. The current deal strongly binds the two clans together as the Uchiha are incentivized to side with the Goketsu even if Hyuuga wins.

-Under the "deal is off if Hiashi wins, but no other enforcement mechanism" plan, they are greatly more incentivized to just vote Hyuuga. If Hiashi wins the Uchiha are completely unharmed (since they will vote for him), and if Hiashi loses the Uchiha are in an even better spot (since they still have a path to restoration and the Hyuuga aren't even pissed at them). Maybe they want the deal badly enough that this drastic improvement in the incentive to vote Hyuuga doesn't sway their actual decision, but why take that massive and unnecessary risk for minimal gain?
 
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@faflec (and everyone else)

I support what Rihaku said above, as far as changes to things go.
 
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Rate this post "like" if you do, "hugs" if you don't. Disregard the possibility that she is Anko for the purposes of this survey, please.

Edit: Correction. Henceforth all rating except "like" will be interpreted as "I don't"; rate accordingly.
 
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Since there is no leeway for misunderstandings here, I would suggest that the subpoints under 3) be labeled in preference order. For example, if you prefer the dual-clan arrangement but would settle for visitation rights:

"i) Ideally, the Gouketsu and Uchiha Clans may choose to raise these children together under dual-clan membership. This means that they will be considered to be both of the Uchiha AND the Gouketsu Clans, though their status as Uchiha Clan will take precedence.

ia) If this is agreed to, the Gouketsu Clan offers to shoulder the cost of raising these children, which includes but is not limited to: monetary costs, training, general child rearing, etc., until they reach their legal age of majority, after which point they will move into the Uchiha Clan. At all points these children will be legally considered to be members of the Uchiha Clan.

ib) Furthermore, if this is agreed to, the Gouketsu Clan is willing to train these children to prevent issues arising from the Iron Nerve bloodline from occuring, and may offer them tutoring in certain clan secrets (without being said aloud, this means teaching them details on the Iron Nerve). Any clan secret training will be understood to be not taught to anyone outside of the Gouketsu Clan. Additionally, the Gouketsu is willing to teach them non-clan secret techniques and outfit them with seal loadouts at our discretion.

ii) If the arrangement in i) cannot be achieved, then at the bare minimum, the Gouketsu Clan requires the right to visit these children as often as they desire."
I agree with this but honestly do not know what solutions are better than the others. pls halp
Another important point: It is directly in the Goketsu's interests for the Uchiha to vote for your candidate instead of abstaining, you should see if any of the concessions you offer them can flip them to a true vote instead of an abstain:

Current Situ:
9 Yes, 7 No, 1 Abstain
Hyuuga Flips 1: 8 Yes, 8 No, 1 Abstain
Hyuuga Flips 2: 7 No, 9 Yes, 1 Abstain

With their clan head out of commission and Mari working against them, I don't think it's likely for the Hyuuga to have flipped more than 2 without Mari catching wind of it. At the very least you should see if the Uchiha will agree to vote for your candidate on the re-vote if the first vote is a tie.

Since most inter-clan warfare within the same village is probably economic warfare (Keiko describing how the Mori defeated their rival clan, Mari nothing that economic warfare is legal), you might be able to get the Uchiha to fully flip if you simply offer them enough guaranteed money.
Point, I'll make a note to ask about this.
Tangentially, one of the upcoming plans should include some investigation of whether civilian influence can be converted into a flipped clan on the vote. The fact that Ami chose to make a speech to the civilians as part of her favor suggests that it could be a fertile avenue - perhaps one clan or another has economic interests that require a skilled and willing civilian business partner, for example.

Also, I don't know if Mari is already doing so, but you should ask her if Hiashi can be negotiated with: the Hyuuga sense of honor would likely cause them to follow through with any agreement they actually pen, and in his rant Hiashi made clear that he respects ability most of all. If the Goketsu have demonstrated the ability to generate significant political influence from a severely disadvantageous position (only 5 ninja with minimal warchest against a founding clan with 20+ ninjas), that might convince him that the Goketsu can be a worthwhile ally and asset to Leaf. It doesn't hurt to explore the possibility and potentially help a brother (Noburi or Naruto) out.
This probably won't be in the suggested-changes post, but I can try to add something into the main plan.
 
We get an additional marker every year for as long as at least one of those girls is able to produce a live birth.

Seems to specifically anticipate miscarriages. The deal is for pregnancies, not births, not children.

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@faflec, I want to highlight this distinction:

Anyway, starting three years from now and continuing for five years, each of these girls [...] need to get impregnated by a ninja once per year. [...] All of the kids they have during that period are automatically adopted into the Uchiha.
(emphasis added)

Should this occur after the five-year stipulation, the Uchiha Clan will not be obligated to pay the one (1) political marker owed for the particular year a child is born.

If they're impregnated within the 5 years but give birth afterwards then they don't seem to be included as part of the deal as a child the Uchiha would be required to adopt.
 
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Does anyone actually think it fairly likely (at least 10% probability) that the ANBU Snake is somehow strongly connected to Orochimaru, or is Orochimaru?

Rate this post "like" if you do, "hugs" if you don't. Disregard the possibility that she is Anko for the purposes of this survey, please.

10%? Sure, that's fair.

Someone J jokingly told to look after his kids? Who goes by the alias "Snake"? Oro can bodyswap and has horcruxes in canon, so I can totally see this as just Oro in a female body, and I assume he's good at acting like someone who isn't Oro when he's in public, which handwaves away how he acted and why he didn't solve the sealing failure.

We've somehow ended up inviting someone called "Snake" who had some connection to Jiraiya, and was left with semi-serious instructions to look after us, to dinner. If she isn't snaunt Oro then I'll be dissapointed.
 
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