Okay, right, as much as talking about the ignore function is frowned upon, at the moment keeping silent about it hinders actually accomplishing anything.

At the moment Veb is the only one giving me criticism, but I have zero interest wading through the insults to pick out what's actually worthwhile.

Could someone else rephrase/summarize?

Got you, fam.

[X] Prepare enchanted grief for the use later in the evening, as you have time.
-[X] Use enchanted grief to test your and Sayaka's enchantments with a mind reading device.
-[X] Take a moment to test an enchanted grief marble with a clear seed you haven't pushed your own magic into yet. See if it plebs.
-[X] See if you can recycle enchanted grief from a griefhaxed item by using the edge of your range to refresh it.

Stripping out the insults, Veb points out that this isn't the time for experimenting with new capabilities, but using the capabilities we already have in our limited time window to achieve mental defenses. The overarching goal right now is achieving mental defenses, and bringing in enchanted grief is just distracting and diluting our attempts. They just want to save time and have Sayaka use mind reading. They also feel that it's an attempt to bypass previously won votes by voting to change what we're focusing on (and where their anger is likely stemming from).

----[X] Even Sayaka seems to think so -- she spent most of tonight giving Homura opportunities to be around Madoka.

Veb thinks this will overwhelm Homura, who is already trying to process something pretty far from her normal experiences.

[X] Dinner!
[X] Look for opportunities to give Homura and Madoka time to themselves.

Veb doesn't want to drop the politics discussion.

[X] Shiogama girls: Check in, ask how they've been. Ask if they're interested in private discussion tomorrow afternoon or being introduced to other groups around town sometime afternoon.

They don't want to interrupt during dinner, because they feel we're not close enough yet to them to do so.
 
Okay, right, as much as talking about the ignore function is frowned upon, at the moment keeping silent about it hinders actually accomplishing anything.

At the moment Veb is the only one giving me criticism, but I have zero interest wading through the insults to pick out what's actually worthwhile.

Could someone else rephrase/summarize?

Well, pretty much what Diomedon said, plus an attending epithet about you following word count limit in this case actively harming your attempt on votecrafting.
 
I actually put effort into writing votes that explain their own goals, motivations, and value analyses

I was asking for input on my modifications to your vote, because that was what you'd ignored.

If you're not, in fact, actively opposed to telling Mami what we're trying to do, then yes, there are almost certainly better ways to do it. They mostly start with actually telling her what we're trying to do and then showing her how.

I'd like to take a moment to clarify something here:

What I've written on that has been optimizing for something called subtlety. I had thought that it was the general opinion of this thread that, and I quote,

I sat down to vote for "talk about Homura with Mami" and couldn't make it ten words without it getting creepily invasive. We know so much more about Homura than anyone else that I don't know if we can talk about her with anyone else without sharing too many details.

I have been working around this rather than starting by telling her about Homura.

Please do tell me which of these is to come first.
 
I'd like to take a moment to clarify something here:

What I've written on that has been optimizing for something called subtlety. I had thought that it was the general opinion of this thread that, and I quote,

I have been working around this rather than starting by telling her about Homura.

Please do tell me which of these is to come first.
It turned out that I was wrong and was able to write something reasonable once I thought about it a bit more and reconsidered the approach. The first thing is to focus only on information that is already available to Mami, so things that are apparent from the current loop. This is significantly easier if you treat it as asking for Mami's input rather than using whatever we share to motivate a set of orders. The second thing is to treat it as a briefing and prep session for the second part of the vote, which again focuses it on things that are available to Mami and aren't problematic. End result, I managed to construct a counterexample to my own claim, and counterexamples beat everything. Sorry for not announcing it.

Edit: I'm also not sure what you mean by "optimizing for subtlety". That seems like exactly the opposite of clear communication and somewhat misguided. The problem wasn't that we were talking about things clearly, it was that we were sharing too much information. Sharing that information in obfuscated form is still sharing it. The trick was to find different, more restricted information to share that would accomplish our goals without going to deep. Once you find that more limited set of information you can talk about it as directly as you want as long as you stay inside the boundaries.
Veb thinks this will overwhelm Homura, who is already trying to process something pretty far from her normal experiences.
This summary misidentifies the object of the complaint. It is not the topic itself that will be overwhelming. Without an explicit directive, brinapilot will likely follow the thread's focus and mention the romantic implications of Sayaka's actions, and the romantic implications will be overwhelming. The vote needs an addition to direct brinapilot to avoid that approach.


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I was asking for input on my modifications to your vote, because that was what you'd ignored.
I parsed your comment here:
I'm voting for an altered version of your vote -- which you've said nothing about.
As "I'm voting for an altered version of (your vote, which you haven't said anything about)".
 
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It turned out that I was wrong and was able to write something reasonable once I thought about it a bit more and reconsidered the approach. The first thing is to focus only on information that is already available to Mami, so things that are apparent from the current loop. This is significantly easier if you treat it as asking for Mami's input rather than using whatever we share to motivate a set of orders. The second thing is to treat it as a briefing and prep session for the second part of the vote, which again focuses it on things that are available to Mami and aren't problematic. End result I managed to construct a counterexample to my own claim. Sorry for not announcing it.

This summary is so inexact as to be outright misleading. It is not the topic itself that will be overwhelming. Without an explicit directive, brinapilot will likely follow the thread's focus and mention the romantic implications of Sayaka's actions, and the romantic implications will be overwhelming. The vote needs an addition to direct brinapilot to avoid that approach.

If there is a decent way to communicate relevant information to Mami prior to preforming the actions I laid out, which is moral and acceptable, I have no issue with that in and of itself and would actively seek to include and utilize such because yes, that would be good for all of the reasons you (and maybe to a lesser extent I?) have laid out. Clear guidance helps. If it comes at expense to other parts I would take issue with that and that alone -- and this is where I take issue with your existing section:

-[x] Talk to Mami a bit more about Homura. You think that Homura might not realize that people care about her and might not know what it feels like to have friends. Does Mami have any ideas for helping her with that? It feels weird to tell all your friends to just walk up and tell Homura that they care about her.

Because what is laid out here is in fact a strict subset of what I want, and not a large one. For reference,

-[] Ask Mami to relate to Homura, in detail, how she sees and feels about her, how those things have changed over the time she's known her, and why and when those things have changed over the time she's known her.
-[] Encourage questions/comments as reasonable (i.e. as long as it doesn't make Homura uncomfortable)

What's being accomplished here goes far beyond the "declaration of friendship" stuff that was first floated a couple of months ago, because we have the opportunity to go beyond that and because it's deeply valuable to do so. Homura's issues go far beyond not realizing that people care about her and not knowing what it feels like to have friends. As we have seen from our talks with her -- about Sayaka, especially -- Homura does not understand what motivates the people around her to the actions and sentiments that they take and form. To quote something she said to us, very early on,

-bons.

You blink.

Homura's crossed the distance to stand in front of you, and is now looking down at you. She has a hand on your shoulder to bring you into the time stop. Beside you, Mami is frozen in hues of grey, still looking at where Homura was.

"Hi, Homura," you sigh. "How long has it been? Any news?"

"I haven't gone looking yet," she replies. She's wearing an expression you've never seen before on her face - she looks lost, and she's looking down, unwilling to meet your gaze. "You... why do you care?"

What I want to accomplish is much deeper than establishing to Homura that people care about her, and to Mami that Homura needs that established to her at all. Because Homura also needs to understand why people care about her, and not least because that's just about the only route I can see to her coming to accept that she's not a terrible person... And likewise, Mami needs to be brought to understand that Homura needs to understand why people care about her. That is the critical layer of what I want, and it is of at least a couple magnitudes greater importance than anything else I've advocated for, because it opens the door to us not needing to explain people to her, as they will do it for us. That is what I see as so deeply valuable about this, because if we can achieve that -- if we can get to a place where our entire group is willing and able to engage in explaining themselves to Homura without her needing to disclose her past beforehand -- we are going to find ourselves a couple of steps from de facto social victory in Mitakihara. And if Mami is willing to do it and then advocate for it... Sayaka will follow suit.

This is where we run into trouble. Because if it's just getting people to tell Homura that they care, then yeah, we can do exactly what you are voting in and it will work perfectly. What you've got is a maximally optimized approach to that.

But what I'm suggesting isn't that.

If you can craft a vote that does all of this, that takes the actions I'm saying we should take and openly communicates to Mami beforehand why and how, without running into the stumbling blocks we've discussed, then I will take it upon my back and carry it myself through Hell, Heaven and Earth and proclaim the whole way your contribution.

But otherwise, I'm going to object to you including the bit you're including (second quotation in this post), because it's a dismissal of what I want, and it's going to make it harder to accomplish what I want in the future when I'll have to reverse it as "Well, actually, more importantly we have to explain why you care, not just that you care."

...

Please tell me I managed to be clear with this >_>
 
This is where we run into trouble. Because if it's just getting people to tell Homura that they care, then yeah, we can do exactly what you are voting in and it will work perfectly. What you've got is a maximally optimized approach to that.

But what I'm suggesting isn't that.
Ah, that quote from Homura explains a lot.

And now I think I better understand why I reacted so badly to your original vote; it feels like you're trying to tell Mami why she cares about Homura. That's not exactly true, since it probably is the case that "how Mami's internal opinion of Homura changed over time" will capture the important information without pushing it in the wrong direction (e.g. the real reason probably isn't something like "well, Sabrina obviously cares about you, so..."), but I don't know if that prompt would lead Mami to share information that'd be sufficiently reliably accurate and informative about why she cares about Homura, especially because Homura would have to pick through it to figure out "why Mami cares about her" herself, which I don't think she's going to realize she should do or be able to do without explicit prompting.

Discarded chunks of WIP vote:
---[] Point out to Homura how much attention Madoka was paying to her. She's said that she has trouble understanding why people care; maybe she could just ask Madoka about it at some point?

Somewhere in the "After Madoka and Sayaka leave" block. I think that the "you should go ask your friends about this directly" bit is a really good thing to add and we should find a way to do it, but I think that this particular segue is a touch too dangerous; I'm fine saying that Madoka seems to like having Homura around but calling it out is getting too close to the truth.

---[] Before Homura asks - Sayaka likes it when her friends are happy, Homura is Sayaka's friend, it's pretty obvious that Madoka being happy makes Homura happy, and Homura seems to make Madoka happy, so it's a win-win for Sayaka.

Still trying to find ways to tell Homura to just ask her friends why they care, but I think that we're confident about this one to short-circuit it. Unfortunately, it's a bit too close for the truth.

---[] If Homura's confused, suggest just going and asking Sayaka about it.

I'd love to do this - like, seriously, if you can find a way to make it safe, please do - since it's absolutely something that Homura will be totally confused by and that's a fantastic reason to help her and Sayaka get to know each other. Unfortunately, I don't think that we can safely do it without first talking to Sayaka a bit - as I mentioned, I think that Homura won't be able to handle both this and the idea of romance simultaneously, and I don't think that Sayaka would know to be careful about that.

-[] Take a second to brainmail Sayaka. Her wing-womaning was incredibly effective and welcome, and you can't fault the lack of subtlety given how oblivious the two are so full steam ahead, but Homura consciously realizing that romance is a thing right now would mess her up badly, so if she asks it's 100% platonic. Sound reasonable?

This is my first attempt to resolve the issues with the above suggestion. Simple brute force. It is precipitous, mostly in that it reveals a bunch of private stuff to Sayaka, and I don't think that I'm sufficiently confident in it to vote for it purely on my own initiative. If you can do a nicer risk analysis on it and argue that it's safe I'd be entirely up for adding it and the consequent (telling Homura to go ask Sayaka about it) to the vote.




[x] Give Madoka and Homura some time alone together.
-[x] Talk to Mami a bit more about Homura. You want to make it clear to her how much better she made tonight, especially for Madoka, but you think she has trouble understanding why people care about her and you're not quite sure how to approach it without addressing that first. You explained to her why you care, but for something this personal you can't really speak for anyone else.

"You think" is technically correct, and I think that it introduces enough uncertainty that I'm willing to share it; I think that it's probably a reasonable conclusion to have drawn from non-metaknowledge. For example, I rejected this formulation:

-[] Talk to Mami a bit more about Homura. You want to make it clear to her how much better she made tonight, especially for Madoka, but she said she has trouble understanding why people care about her and you're not quite sure how to approach it without addressing that first. You explained to her why you care, but for something this personal you can't really speak for anyone else.

[x] Over dinner:
-[x] Have some fun brainstorming more defensive enchantments for people to try. Your friends can handle picking the good ideas out of the bad, so go nuts, be creative.

[x] Politics discussion:
-[x] Refine the "be kind to each other" statement - you do recognize that a functioning justice system is ultimately a threat of force; you have been completely explicit about your intent to drop the hammer on people that abuse Clear Seeds.
--[x] You'd just prefer less "20 angry magical girls at your front door" and more "modern policing organization".

[x] After Madoka and Sayaka leave:
-[x] Observe to Homura that tonight might be the happiest you've ever seen Madoka.
--[x] Madoka has self-worth issues, right? She needs to feel like she's contributing, and she doubts herself and needs friends to support her and convince her that she's doing okay.
--[x] Homura's been helping with both of those. You think that Madoka finds the politics really satisfying, and having Homura around seemed to make Madoka happy. It's good to see.
--[x] Homura needs to know that this isn't something you're coming up with yourself and it'd help if she understood why people care about her and are doing this, so:
---[X] Give Mami an opening to chime in, following your earlier conversation.
---[X] Point out some of what Sayaka was doing. *Don't* suggest romance, but even small details would be strong evidence of Sayaka's trust and would help Homura believe that she's the one responsible for Madoka's happiness tonight.

[x] After you finish talking to Homura:
-[x] TO THE INTERNETS
 
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And now I think I better understand why I reacted so badly to your original vote; it feels like you're trying to tell Mami why she cares about Homura. That's not exactly true, since it probably is the case that "how Mami's internal opinion of Homura changed over time" will capture the important information without pushing it in the wrong direction (e.g. the real reason probably isn't something like "well, Sabrina obviously cares about you, so..."), but I don't know if that prompt would lead Mami to share information that'd be sufficiently reliably accurate and informative about why she cares about Homura, especially because Homura would have to pick through it to figure out "why Mami cares about her" herself, which I don't think she's going to realize she should do or be able to do without explicit prompting.

So, at this point I think I have to go and explicate why I believe that that prompt would lead Mami to share information that'd be sufficiently reliable, accurate, and informative about why she cares about Homura, and to do that I need you to come with me on a...



Field trip.

Now, don't feel like you have to read all of the quotes that follow at the bottom of this post. Each (bar one which I linked but omitted) is an entire chapter. But.

Essentially every single one of these chapters contains something of extreme relevance to my argument here. When I was initially crafting this suggestion, I had the exact same doubts you are now raising as to whether it would be sufficient to simply ask Mami to relate the things I am asking her to relate, and so I went back and I started re-reading the chapters where Mami's opinion on Homura was on display. I got as far as the end of this set of chapters before I stopped and concluded that asking Mami, open-form, to relate how, when, and why her opinion of and feelings towards Homura have changed would not only work, but that it would work perfectly beyond my wildest dreams. I've been citing them loosely this entire time, but together they form literally the backbone of everything I am presenting, because they represent the cross-section of time where Mami is not being an emotional wreck, and Mami is not deferring to us re Homura, and Mami is recognizing that Homura is a good person -- and the way she acts in them is just stunning. It is absolutely, completely astounding how differently she behaves around Homura in them from any other time in the entire quest, and it has informed not only my desire to move generally towards what I'm proposing in the first place, but also the specifics of how I am proposing we do so. You will need to re-read them to understand in totality if you want to understand the full reasoning behind why I am claiming that this just works...

But I can give a cliff notes.

See, as it turns out, when we show up Monday, March 28th after school, Mami is working herself up to fight and potentially kill Homura, and then in the AM hours of Thursday March 31 -- so, ~24 + 24 + 10 = ~60 hours later -- we have the timestop.

And it turns out, if you are looking for it, that in that timestop, in the chapters between Direct Intervention 5 and Direct Intervention 28 (inclusive), in a period of what I'd guess is about four to five hours, Mami's entire stance towards Homura does a 180 and then some.

In Direct Intervention 5, Mami cooly -- and unwelcomingly -- greets Homura's arrival with a tiny, fractional incline of her head. Her attitude clearly conveys to the reader that Homura is no friend of hers.

By Direct Intervention 16, Mami is inviting her back to her apartment and cooking for her.

By Direct Intervention 19, Mami is saying "-I threatened to kill Homura the first time we met! And now look at her! I- I, I don't think..."

By Direct Intervention 23, we have what is probably the most important line of all, "Do you think..." Mami frowns. "She's really worried about Oriko, isn't she? Do you think she's been out looking for her?" (1)

Direct Intervention 25, Mami is pressing Homura to rest more and not push herself too hard.

Direct Intervention 26, "Homura... needs someone to look after her, doesn't she?"

Direct Intervention 27, "Homura, we're trying to help."


This is across four. to. five. hours. And it's accompanied by a variety of highly emotional moments, up to and including what adds up to "I was going to kill this girl... and she's just trying to defend people. She needs friends. She needs people to care. She's a good person."


So when I asked myself this sort of question:


I don't know if that prompt would lead Mami to share information that'd be sufficiently reliably accurate and informative about why she cares about Homura, especially because Homura would have to pick through it to figure out "why Mami cares about her" herself

My conclusion was that with probability approaching unity, Mami is capable of and will be lead to share sufficiently accurate, reliable, and informative answers as to why she cares about Homura, because we can literally pin down the four to five hour period where she went directly from not caring about Homura at all to caring about Homura significantly. I figure as long as all of the critical points from that segment of time are captured, whatever else Mami fills in is gravy... and I think it's basically impossible for her to miss that segment of time and those critical points within it. If something doesn't come across clearly enough, we're right there, we can prompt her.

As for "especially because Homura would have to pick through it to figure out 'why Mami cares about her' herself"... I think that can't be seen as anything but ludicrous once the context laid out here is brought into consideration, considering things like "Homura... needs someone to look after her, doesn't she?" If that's a real concern -- and it may be one -- it can be addressed with an addition that should probably be made anyways:

[] --intro line--
-[] Ask Mami to relate to Homura, in detail, how she sees and feels about her, how those things have changed over the time she's known her, and why and when those things have changed over the time she's known her.
-[] Encourage questions/comments as reasonable (i.e. as long as it doesn't make Homura uncomfortable)
-[] Ask questions/make comments (ONLY if necessary) to help Mami convey herself to Homura in a way that Homura will understand. By the end of this you'd like Homura to have a grasp of what brought Mami to care about her, as well as the fact that Mami does care about her.

[] Later, affirm to Mami that interacting with Homura is a Good Thing. Homura really needs good friends. (axed for being stupid and not what should be here)
[] Later, affirm to Mami that conveying things to Homura in a way similar to this conversation is generally effective, and that it would be really good if more people would engage with her in a similar fashion on occasion. (foot in door to doing this with other people)

Because it's not unreasonable for us to do some minimal steering if we have to.



I should make a couple more comments. I initially brought up Mami's lack of interaction with Homura. When I brought that up, I was contrasting her behavior through most of the quest with this:

"You- ugh," you break off when Mami puts a supporting hand on your shoulder. "Look. We're tired, and Oriko has had enough time to plan this out, and well enough that she could get to us inside the timestop. Remember the mine back there?" You wave a hand at your leg to emphasize. "What if she gets you with something like that while Mami and I aren't around?"

"I can still heal myself," the time traveller replies implacably. "It just takes time and Grief Seeds."

And of course Homura, of all people, would have plenty of both.

You open your mouth, but you're out of reasons. Reasons that you feel you can bring up, anyway.

"Homura..." Mami says, her hand dropping from your shoulder as she steps forward. Her voice is gentle, consoling, what you'd use to talk to a distraught child. "Why... why are you so determined to hunt down Oriko? I was -I am- furious with what she's done... but... what has she done to deserve your, your hatred?"

Homura stares at Mami, a flicker of emotion you don't catch crossing her face. "It's not your concern, Tomoe Mami."

The blonde flinches, but her face sets in determination. "Homura, we're trying to help."

This teeny, tiny little cross-section of time where Mami is not being an emotional wreck, and Mami is not deferring to us re Homura, and Mami is recognizing that Homura is a good person is so, so important. I cannot reiterate this enough. She just does not do this at any other time in the quest, and it's come time for that to change.



(1) -- consider what it would mean that Homura is worrying about Oriko, in the context of Homura having the powers that she has revealed to Mami since Direct Intervention 5, and in the context of Homura's actions since then. This is as far as I can tell the exact moment when Mami begins to recognize that Homura cares about and will try to protect others.

(2) -- I could not find a normal clip of this because apparently it's a meme and all the clips of it end with vehicle crashes or something. I died a little bit over that, it's sad.

"Sabrina, we should go," Mami says as she deposits Sayaka's mother on a proper stretcher, the ribbons disappearing in a burst of golden light. The paramedics are wide-eyed, but they have a job to do, and they rush the older woman off to the ambulance. Sayaka's father and Sayaka herself have already been ushered off to the temporary aid station.

"Miss, do you need help?" one particularly persistent medic asks you. His expression is puzzled, probably at your odd choice of attire, but he appears to be clamping down on his emotions.

"No, I'm fine," you say, pushing past him. "Yeah, let's go," you reply to Mami, who is also slipping through the crowd. "Sayaka, we'll take our leave, OK?"

"O-ok," she replies, looking up from the aid station, where she's breathing into an oxygen mask. She waves weakly at you, and you wave back.

There are a few paramedics and firefighters trying to detain you, but you slip past them easily and quickly bound up to a roof when you're out of sight.

Cresting the edge of the roof, you walk over to the side of a labouring air conditioning compressor, and slump down against it. The vibrations barely impinge on you, as sudden exhaustion that you shouldn't be experiencing washes over you. Psychosomatic reactions, then, as the adrenaline fades.

Mami follows you up to the roof, landing gracefully. Her expression is anything but serene, though, now that the crisis is over, and she begins pacing agitatedly along the roof.

"Madoka, Homura," you say, reaching out telepathically. "Everyone's OK. Alive."

"Oh, thank goodness, Sabrina!" Madoka replies immediately. "How's everyone?"

You hesitate, but Mami enters the conversation smoothly, "Sayaka and her family will be fine, Madoka. They're in the care of the professionals, now."

"Oh," Madoka says. You can tell that she's worried that they had to be relegated to medical care at all, but it seems that she accepts that. "Thank you, Mami, Sabrina."

"Hey, it's our job," you say wryly. Sort of, anyway.

"No need to thank us, Madoka," Mami says.

Mami finally abandons her pacing, and sits beside you, smoothing down her skirt with an air of distraction. "Sabrina," she says.

"Hm?" you raise your head to meet her eyes. The lines around her eyes are drawn tight, giving her a distinctly dangerous look- that of a finely crafted sword, or perhaps one of her filigreed muskets. Elegant, and yet poised to kill.

"You said that that girl who walked away was Mikuni Oriko?" Mami asks. Her voice is as pleasant as it usually is... except for the tightly leashed current of fury you can hear in it.

"Yes, she was," you say, sharpening to attention.

"I see," Mami says. Those words send a chill running down your spine, almost as if she'd just pronounced a death sentence upon Oriko. "And Homura knows of her?"

[] Write-in

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Heee.

"Yeah," you mutter. "Yeah, she does. I don't think she expected Oriko to do anything... quite like this, either."

"If she did, and didn't say anything..." Mami trails off. "But no. If she knows anything about this Oriko, then we need to talk to her."

"Mami, wait." You grab her arm as she shifts her weight to stand. "Oriko... From what I can tell, she likes making these big, elaborate plans. She wanted us to see her. She probably meant to make us angry- and I'm afraid going after her here and now is going to play right into her hands."

"We're not going after her right now," Mami states, shrugging off your arm and rising to her feet. She offers you her hand. "But if Homura knows about her? Then I want to know what she knows. Because this was not acceptable." Her expression is hard, and you can't help but remember that however pleasant she usually is, Mami is a veteran magical girl, who's presumably been in her share of territorial conflicts.

"I'm right with you, Mami," you say, grabbing her proffered hand with a smack of palm meeting palm, and letting her pull you to your feet. "This was utterly inexcusable, and we are not going to let this happen again. Homura will be happy to help, I suspect."

Mami nods firmly, jaw firmly set. "If Oriko is as formidable as Homura seems to think she is, then we're going to need all the help we can get." Her lips compress. "We might want to bring in Masami. And Kyouko... maybe."

You hum noncommitally. "Maybe. We need to be careful about this."

"Homura. Where are you right now?" Mami calls telepathically.

"I am watching over Madoka," Homura responds.

"Good. We'll be there soon," Mami replies. "Come on, Sabrina."

[] Go with Mami
[] Do something else
- [] Write-in
[] Write-in conversational topics


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If you choose to do something else, then write-in what you want to tell Mami. If you choose to go with Mami, then write-in conversation along the way, as well as anything that you personally to tell Homura.

Even in the middle of the night, Mitakihara City bustles as you and Mami soar over the rooftops. Cars stream endlessly on the road, and you fancy that perhaps one or two of the twinkling lights are the fire engines, and perhaps another carries journalists hurrying to the scene of the fire.

Not your problem, in the end.

"So, Mami?" you begin.

"Yes, Sabrina?" Mami asks.

"What's this Masami like?" you ask. Taller buildings are becoming shorter now as you head out towards the suburbs, and Mami leads you on a weaving path amongst them to ensure that you aren't seen.

"Hm... Peppy would be the best word to describe her. Always cheerful and happy, always listening to music of some kind of another," Mami replies. "Really quite powerful, though!"

"Huh. How'd you meet her, anyway?" you query, making a particularly tricky hop across a building- you're forced to tuck and roll to avoid an inconveniently placed antenna.

Mami shrugs. "Oh, I met her about... half a year ago, I think? I... well, I saved her from a Barrier, and told her a little about magical girls. She became one a while later, but since she lived so far away, we sort of... never kept in touch."

You can tell there's a little more to that story, and decide to risk pushing a little. "I get the feeling there's more to it than that?"

Mami laughs. "Can't hide anything from you, can I?" She tries for nonchalant. "She... stopped answering my calls. When I went to check on her, she told me she needed her space," she finishes evenly, but the slight stumble as she lands on a roof gives lie to that.

Ouch. You wince to yourself, and take a few quick steps forward to bump Mami's shoulder with your own. It's probably an old hurt at this point, but you can't help but feel that a little comfort would be for the best here. She turns and gives you a smile that's tinged with gratitude and just a little melancholy.

Mami's next words, spoken, not telepathic, are almost snatched away by the wind as the two of you leap for the next building, but straining, you can just hear them. "I'm glad you're here."

The two of you continue on in silence after that, now forced to move at the street level, keeping to darker areas and avoiding cars. You soon sense a magical presence, ahead... and above you? "This way, Mami," you say, veering off to the side.

The houses are sparser in this area- there is a remarkable amount of greenery and open ground around here, and you frankly have no idea how that works with land-starved Japan, unless the Kanames actually happen to be richer than gods, plural. But then again, it's not like theirs is the only house in this read, and nor is this land fenced off and 'Property of...'

There's... simply a perplexing amount of unutilized land here.

You circle around to the side of the house, where Homura's presence is, until you're almost directly on top of it. Your senses still say she's almost directly above you, but you don't see her.

"Here." Your head snaps up at the sound of Homura's voice.

As it turns out, she's perched incongrously on a tree branch, barely visible amongst the foliage until she shifted position slightly to look down at you. You squint at her position, and then back at the the Kanames' house, estimating angles. At a guess, you suspect that she can see into Madoka's window from her current position.

Homura hops down from her perch, landing softly beside the two of you.

"Homura," Mami says, inclining her head the barest fraction of a centimeter to the time traveller.

"Mami, Sabrina," Homura replies, returning the infinitesimally tiny nod.

Well, you'll take it. "Hello, Homura," you say.

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[] Talk here
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The Kaname residence is ridiculous. I have no idea how to make sense of it.

"Homura. What do you know about Oriko?" Mami prompts, fixing the time traveller with an unyielding, steady gaze.

You raise a hand, forestalling any further comment. "Wait. Homura, I think we should speak under cover of your power, just to be sure?"

Mami glances at you quizzically, with a slight hint of impatience, but defers to you and looks back at Homura, waiting for an answer.

Telepathically, you inform Homura, "Kyuubey knows about the timestop somehow, and has told Kyouko, at least. Not much point hiding it from Mami."

Homura's violet eyes shift to look at you, and a long moment passes before finally she bends down to pick up a twig from the ground, and holds it out to you. You grasp the twig, and hold your hand out to Mami. "Grab on, Mami."

"What's this fo-" Mami begins, grabbing your hand.

Homura turns her shield, and time stops. What little noise there is, here in the suburbs at 3AM in the morning, is completely snuffed out, leaving the three of you with nothing but the sounds of your breathing to accompany you. The world falls into hues of lifeless grey, the subtle motion of plants swaying in the wind dying.

Mami doesn't gape, precisely, but she stares at the deadened surroundings, eyes widened from her usual half-lidded expression.

"I can stop time," Homura says simply.

Mami swallows, recovering. "I see. That is a... powerful ability indeed, Homura."

Homura nods slightly. "To answer your question, Mikuni Oriko is a powerful, very powerful precognizant. She works with a time slower, Kure Kirika."

"Uh, that's not true," you inject. "Kirika, I mean. According to Kyuubey, her power is to cancel active magic." Under Homura's questioning glare, you shrug, and add, "I asked. Since he was so free with telling other magical girls about your power..."

A grimace. "Magic cancelling, then. Oriko is... was the daughter of the former senator, Mikuni Hisaomi."

Mami raises her eyebrows. "That Mikuni. I see."

"Oriko goes to school at Shriome," you add. "Kirika... at Mitakihara. I'd say be careful in school, but I don't think that's necessary. Kirika seems... quite unstable to me, when I met her- she's... uh, maybe 'yandere' for Oriko comes close? She's very, very protective of Oriko, but otherwise acts more or less normally. I think her Wish might have messed with her head a little."

Mami nods grimly. Even in her quietly simmering anger, the thought of the Wish intefering with a person like that seems to mildly disturb her.

"Am I to assume Oriko was behind the fire?" Homura asks. You doubt she's really questioning the idea, just confirming.

"Yes, she was," you say. "Or... she was there, when we arrived, watching from a rooftop. Then she just walked away."

"Whether she was responsible or not," Mami snaps, "she is at least responsible for walking away."

You nod. "What else do we know she's done? She gave me that threat to our house, she sent Kirika to talk to me... she... might have been responsible for having Kirika push Hitomi down the stairs? And apparently she was hiring? Homura, have you seen her?"

The time traveller shakes her head. "No."

"Ugh," you grunt, feeling the urge to rub your temples, but both of your hands are occupied. "What the hell is her game? She's a precog, she can't simply be doing this for fun or something. If she wanted us dead, we'd probably be dead already."

"Irrelevant."

"That doesn't matter-"

Mami and Homura both reply at the same time, before looking at each other in surprise. Homura inclines her head for Mami to continue.

"It doesn't matter, Sabrina. Whatever her game, this was completely unacceptable, and she will answer for it," Mami says.

"Yes, she will!" you agree. "But if we don't do this carefully, we're probably playing right into her hands! We need to come up with some kind of plan, here- we need to stop this from happening again."

Mami grimaces. "I agree, Sabrina." She looks off into the distance, considering for the moment.

All three of you are quiet.

It's eerie, here in the time stop, with nothing to accompany you apart from the thundering of your heart and the slow breathing of the three of you. There exist, apparently, acoustic chambers soundproofed so perfectly that the silence drives people mad, and the longest anyone has ever lasted in one of those is about twenty minutes. You imagine much the same applies here.

You should be thinking of a way to beat Oriko, but here and now, you're coming up blank.

At length, Mami asks, "Homura. Your timestop. Could we use it to find Oriko and... deal with her?"

Homura's eyes widen fractionally, but she nods. "I am intending to try. The biggest issue will be finding her."

"Good. Can you bring us with you?" Mami asks.

[] Attempt to head off this plan
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[] Let them hash it out
[] Suggest improvements
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Phone typing again. Oh well.

Thoughts explode into your head as you hear Mami and Homura discuss assassinating Oriko from inside the time loop. How upset must Mami be to even contemplate that? You contemplate possible interactions of Kirika's and Homura's powers, as well as whether you should try to dissuade them.

Homura hesitates for a moment before nodding. "I can."

You inject a question at this point. "Homura, Kirika's power is to cancel out active magic. Do you think she might cancel your timestop?"

The timetraveller frowns, and considers it for a moment. "It's possible, yes."

"Then out first task should be to find her first, and, uh, neutralize her, or at least make sure she's not in a position to interfere?" you suggest. "I can still sense things while timestopped, so that should work."

Mami nods. "That sounds workable, though finding her is the biggest problem. Homura, how long can your timestop last?"

"Indefinitely, if I can cleanse my Soul Gem," Homura says, inclining her head to you. "It won't be a problem."

"Mmm," you agree with a nod. "One, uh, two more things. Firstly, Oriko is a precognizant... if she doesn't already have countermeasures against us, then she certainly will the moment you release the timestop. The other thing... well, again, she said she was hiring. Who? Maybe another magical girl?"

Mami looks away. "I hope she's not in the area. Oriko... Oriko needs to pay, but someone who was just hired for a job..."

"It shouldn't come to that," you comment. "Timestop, no?"

"I hope so," Mami admits, before turning back to Homura. "Homura, your timestop works by touch range. Do you think my ribbons will suffice?"

Homura nods.

"Then may I suggest we bind ourselves together using the ribbons so that we can spread out and search a larger area?" Mami asks.

"That should work," Homura agrees.

"I can't help but feel that a seer will be better at hiding than three of us can search, though, even with Homura's timestop," you comment.

Homura nods slowly. "I tried to find her yesterday, as well."

"We can cover a much larger area now, though, and Sabrina can sense magic in a very large radius," Mami points out. "And I am not letting her go without at least trying to find her."

Homura's eyes are slightly widen. You wonder how many times she's ever seen Mami this angry before. It can't have occurred all that often. She eventually nods again. "I suggest that we start at where you last saw her, then search towards her house. Failing that, we can check the old industrial area."

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- [] Anything else to say?
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Whoops. Wound up coding instead of writing an update.

"OK, then. Nothing for it, I guess?" you say, letting out a breath.

"The sooner we get started, the sooner we find Oriko," Mami says. She holds up the hand not gripping yours, and golden ribbon begins spooling out from between her fingers. The ribbons wind sinuously around your waist, and then snakes over to Homura, who watches the ribbon slightly dubiously. Nevertheless, she lets it wrap around her waist without complaint.

"The ribbon should lengthen as needed," Mami comments.

"Well. A cleanse before we go, then?" you suggest, letting go of the twig that had previously been bridging you and Homura, as well as Mami's hand. You shake out your hands; gripping things for so long has left them a tad sore.

Homura nods, and offers her Soul Gem, as does Mami. You draw off the corruption clouding their Gems -there's a fair amount on both their Gems-, and you pull it into the familiar little spheres of your Grief marbles for safekeeping. These join the others in your pocket, making for a total of twelve, and causing a somewhat unsightly bulge in said pocket. On an off thought, you pat your right pocket, ensuring that the Grief Seed is still there.

"Let's go, then," Mami says, starting in the direction of Sayaka's house. As promised, the ribbon stretches out behind her, seeming to have a life of its own as it avoids getting snagged on the various obstacles.

"Be careful, everyone," you breathe as you pick up the pace, Homura alongside you.

"Of course, Sabrina," Mami replies, turning to half smile at you.

The three of you move in near silence, ghosting over the timestopped city at a hundred meter spread. You quickly arrive at Sayaka's house, still blazing with stilled flames. Torrents of water, frozen in mid air, gout from the parked fire engines, and there are fire fighters rushing out of the building. One of them, halted midstep, is carrying someone in the traditional fireman's carry. You feel a slight pang- in your rush to save the Mikis, you hadn't considered other people in the building.

"One more thing for Oriko to pay for," Mami observes grimly from behind you. You hadn't even heard her walking up to you.

You shake off the thoughts. "Oriko was up there, wasn't she?" You point at a red-bricked building, and Mami nods, before silently taking a long hop to reach it. Homura follows, as do you.

The time traveller walks off to the edge of the building, peering around to get her bearings, and Mami trails a step behind.

... Mami's hands are shaking, just a little. With rage, or with uneasiness as the fact that she is planning cold blooded murder settles in, you don't know. You probably wouldn't have noticed, were you not currently hyper alert for any unexpected traps, impossibly functioning within the timestop.

You grimace, and look away, gaze falling to the ground.

There's a piece of paper with text on it lying on the ground, near the edge of the building. You raise an eyebrow at it, and glance at the others. They don't seem to have noticed it.

It's almost certainly a note from Oriko.

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... you know, I actually don't have anything to say in my usual note here. Oh well.

You scowl at the note. Would it be better to read it, or just leave it be? You're almost certain Oriko left that note- it's utterly pristine save for the traceries of beautifully done calligraphy. Your gaze shifts over to the other two again to make sure they aren't looking -Homura's pointing off into the distance, now-, before you stoop and pick up the note.

The note is short, and written in flowing, picture-perfect Hiragana penmanship of the sort someone who's taken lessons for half her life would have. It says, simply, 'This was, and remains, necessary.'

A tug on the corner of the note and it bends as though it caught on something.

Too late, you see the thread delicately glued to the corner.

Too late, you see the tiny black box the note had been sitting on top of.

Despite your enhanced reflexes, you're halfway through a panicked jump away when the box detonates, blossoming out in a spray of fire and shrapnel. White-hot agony shoots up your spine as metal shards tear their way through your right leg and hip. Some corner of your brain recognizes that the mine can't have been a military one- those have deadly radii in the tens of meters.

You crash down facefirst as a bleeding heap next to one of the vents on the roof. Your right leg, extended from the jump and caught in the brunt of the blast, is little more than a mangled mess of flesh, shredded tatters hanging from the bone.

It's probably a good thing you don't actually need all the blood that's pooling around your leg.

You clench your teeth, grinding them against each other hard enough to creak.

Mind over matter.

Pain is optional.

You don't need to feel the pain.

You can almost feel something click inside your brain, and the pain fades away to a dull ache.

"Sabrina!" Mami's instantly by your side, eyes wide and panicked. Homura's a step behind her.

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Remember that I have, to date, fiated Oriko's actions once.

You growl into the roof. It is, just about literally, just a flesh wound. You aren't going to die or even be seriously inconvenienced by something as minor as this. Grunting, you plant your right hand on the roof and force yourself to flip over, rolling on your left side to avoid grinding dirt from the roof into your mangled right hip. Your right leg flops, muscles unresponding to your mental commands.

Face up, you can see the glimmering cloud of shrapnel and fire of the explosion, frozen in the midair of Homura's timestop, like a deadly flower. There's a section simply missing from the explosive blossom, corresponding roughly to where you were.

"Sabrina- your leg," Mami whispers, face drawn into a rictus of horrified panic. She kneels beside you, hands already glowing with her trademark golden radiance, and she applies them to your mangled leg with alacrity. The bleeding is already slowing down. Luckily, it doesn't look like the bone was actually damaged, merely that your flesh was turned to minced meat.

"I-it'll be OK, Sabrina," Mami says urgently, reaching out one hand to grip yours tightly. Her hand is icy cold, and shaking violently. "Don't panic, I'll heal you, OK?"

Homura kneels opposite to Mami, the purple glow of her magic filling her hands. She lends her aid to the healing process, a scowl set hard on her face.

You blink slowly, and push yourself up to a half seated position. "No, don't move, Sabrina!" Mami says, trying to push you back down.

"Let me help," you protest, dredging up the instincts you have for healing. Magic rushes to your hand, and you draw forth a gentle white light that you know can knit together flesh and even mend broken bone, given time.

"N-n-n-" Mami stutters, staring at you with wide eyes. Her trembling grip on your hand, already bone-crushing, tightens further. "S-Sabrina, it's OK, there's no need to push yourself!"

You meet Homura's flat gaze, and then look back at Mami's terrified gaze, before subsiding back against the rooftop. "Let me help you cleanse your Gems, at least."

"Later, Sabrina," Mami says, turning her attention back to your leg.

You lie back in silence for a few minutes, mind churning. Even if you can't feel the pain, you can feel the odd squelching and movements in your leg as Homura and Mami carefully work over your leg with their magic. A while later, Homura grabs Mami's hand by the wrist and forces it up. "Mami. You need to cleanse, now."

"I-it's OK, I can just use a Grief Seed," Mami says, flustered.

"I can handle it, Mami," you insist, lifting your head slightly to look at her. The blonde frowns unhappily, but detaches her Soul Gem for you.

You gasp softly when you see it. You'd judge that it's almost half filled, and you hurriedly gesture at it, pulling all the corruption free to form a fairly substantial cloud. Mami, against her will, sighs in contentment as she is freed of the Grief. Homura holds up her own Soul Gem, and you cleanse that too- you'd judge that her Gem was maybe a fifth filled, at worst.

You grip Mami's hand firmly. "Mami, you don't need to push yourself so hard, either. You said it yourself, I'll be OK. Take your time, OK?" you smile at her.

"O-OK," Mami says shakily, putting on a smile and returning her Soul Gem to her hairpin.

As they return to healing your leg, you collapse the tremendous cloud of Grief down as far as it will go, forming a double handful of marbles. You have no idea what to do with these, so you just let them hover in a ring slowly orbiting around you.

"You know," you comment at the air as she returns to healing your leg. "I can't believe Oriko did that. She made a damned landmine and deployed it here, in a residential area. I mean, yes, she set Sayaka's house on fire, but... if she wanted Sayaka dead... She's been threatening, and dangerous, but..."

"Oriko is ruthless," Homura growls. Absently, you note that her healing seems to be significantly more effective than Mami's- where her purple coloured magic falls, the layers of flesh seem to weave themselves back together far more quickly than Mami's. It's still extraordinarily slow, though.

"Yeah, I guess she is," you admit. "Still... if she wanted us dead, any of us dead..."

"She is not infallible," Homura says.

"Good," Mami adds, a flash of fury crossing her face. Her healing hand remains steady, though, making its slow sweep across your leg. You shiver briefly at the unaccustomed expression on her face- and it's not like it's been in short supply ever since the fire. This is not the warm, kindly and gentle Mami you've become used to. This is the veteran magical girl, who has survived and defended her territory, solo, against all both Witches and magical girls alike for perhaps years.

As her hand tightens briefly against yours, and she turns to smile comfortingly at you, though, you're forced to amend your statement. No. That's the Mami that Oriko is seeing.

You sigh. "Where else should we search? From here to Oriko's house, and Kirika's? Maybe we should check our home, and Homura's as well?" you suggest. "I mean, areas of personal significance, right?"

"Yes," Homura agrees. "However, given that these are the obvious locations, Oriko may avoid them instead."

"Good point," you say. "Hm. School, perhaps? Mitakihara and Shirome? And, uh... one idea I had. If she's hiding from us, then my detection range is the largest, with my power... She could hide inside a Barrier, and I'd have trouble detecting her. With Kirika, she'd be basically safe inside a Barrier."

"Possible," Homura allows. "Cleanse, Mami," she adds sharply.

Mami sighs, and holds out her Soul Gem. It's not as bad as the previous time, only about a third, but it nevertheless forms a fairly substantial cloud, and combined with the Grief from your own and Homura's Gems, you have another handful of Grief marbles to add to your orbiting ring.

It takes past an hour and several more cleanses to heal your leg fully- that mine had made an utter mess of your leg. Homura did the majority, though not by much, of the work, her healing seemingly far more efficient than Mami's, who simply brute forced it. You speculate that perhaps Homura simply had more time to hone her skills.

The healing and one last cleanse finally done, you flex your leg, followed by your toes. Everything seems to be working fine, and you smile gratefully at Homura and Mami. "Good as new," you say. The pant leg is completely shredded, but your leg is whole and working perfectly again.

Mami stares at you, emotions mixing on her face, before giving in to her impulses and dragging you into a tight hug. "You were so brave, Sabrina. H-how do you do it? It's like you weren't even worried about your leg. T-the last time I broke my arm..." she trails off.

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There is quite a bit of dissonance with Sabrina's leg being utterly mulched, and her blithely talking about other things as if she doesn't care.

You now have a hundred seventeen Grief marbles, twelve of which are in your pocket.

You awkwardly hug Mami back, while out of the corner of your eye, you see Homura stalking off around a corner, dodging one of your Grief marbles as she goes. "I kinda cheated with magic to dull the pain," you admit. "And... you and Homura were right there, so it was OK..."

"Oh, Sabrina." You can feel her shaking her head against your shoulder. "You- you..." Mami breaks off, lost for words.

"I'm sorry for making you worry again," you offer weakly.

"You're sor- for making me worry. You weren't even- you're not even worried about your leg, are you?" Mami says with a choked laugh. "You, Sabrina... you are something amazing." She gives you one last squeeze before releasing you, and favouring you with a half-smile.

"I... uh," you say, slightly puzzled. "Thank you, Mami? And thank you for the healing, too," you half bow in her direction. Raising your voice, you add, "You too, Homura. Thank you for the healing."

Homura walks back around the corner of the silent air conditioning compressor. "You're welcome."

You take a step back, and look down at your shredded pant leg. You could retransform, and the costume would be fine again, or... you concentrate, twisting your magic just so, and a fine white glow suffuses you. The costume mends itself, weaving itself across your leg as though from some otherworldly bolt of cloth. Even the tiny rips and tears here and there mend themselves, threads snaking together.

Mami gives you an approving nod and smile, while Homura simply looks on impassively. You glance around, and look at the tremendous ring of tiny spheres of grief orbiting you slowly. "Oh wow..." you say, slightly shocked. You knew you'd cleansed off a lot of Grief, but actually seeing the sheer amount puts a different complexion on it.

"I... guess I need to do something about that," you say to no one in particular. "Bit unwieldy." You reshape the enormous ring, dividing up the marbles into seven groups of fifteen marbles each, and move each group to sit at the points of half an icosahedron, centered on you. Each of the small groups of marbles form a small ring of fourteen orbiting the remaining one of their number.

With the marbles spaced out like that, you reason, it should be relatively out of the way. Less chance of them running into things as you roof hop, though you resolve that you'll probably need to get that sling bag from Mami if you plan on keeping this many marbles around. It's fine in the timestop, with no one to see, but you'll look decidedly odd to non magical girls.

"It's sort of pretty," Mami observes, looking at the geometric patterns you formed from the Grief marbles, but the smile fades from her face.

You shrug. "It seemed like the thing to do. This will keep the Grief out of the way, at least?"

"It's a good thing you can remove corruption," Mami says quietly. "There's... probably more than I can afford, here." It seems that the sheer magnitude of what it had taken to heal you is beginning to sink in for her. She continues in a slightly more formal tone. "And thank you, Homura, for insisting that I cleanse my Soul Gem. Losing my magic at this juncture would have been unfortunate."

Homura nods. "Not a problem," she says, eyes flickering to yours for a moment. You can tell what she's probably thinking- about Mami, and her reaction to the unpleasant reveals on the nature of magical girls.

"Anyway," you say, catching Mami's attention. "Shall we continue on? Oriko's still out there, somewhere."

"I suppose so," the blonde replies. "Do you need a minute to rest first, Sabrina?"

"No, I'm fine," you demur. "How about you? And Homura?"

"Not necessary," Homura says.

Mami shakes her head, blonde curls flapping. "I'm fine, too. Where shall we go, first?"

"I suggest checking towards Oriko's house," Homura replies.

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Geometry!

"Sounds good to me," you affirm. "Which way, then, Homura?"

"There," the timetraveller replies, pointing off into the distance. You nod, and let her take point, hopping off in that direction. You and Mami follow at a distance, spreading out to form the points of a large V connected by golden ribbons.

Pushing your senses out as far as they can go, you scan thoroughly for magic as the three of you proceed slowly. You even descend to the streets a few times to ensure that Oriko isn't travelling along at ground level to hide from you, weaving in between the few frozen cars and eerily still pedestrians on the street.

Even with the three of you searching at a hundred meter spread, there's a considerable amount of area to cover, and it's a quiet two hour trip, with only the occasional murmur to break the monotony before you approach Oriko's house. It's located in one of the more well-off parts of the town, as you'd expect, and much like the Kaname residence, this area is surrounded, perplexingly, by swathes of open land and greenery. Oriko's house is an enormous two story building, virtually a mansion in and of itself.

Looking down at it from atop a nearby building, you decide to circle it before going in, and you hop down to the street while Homura prowls about on the rooftops, examining the area with a keen eye. Mami joins you down on the streets, trailing you as you hop over and around the sparse people and cars. Brief colour blooms as you swing around a lamppost with one arm, momentarily bringing it into the timestop with you.

"What's wrong, Mami?" you ask, after a few minutes of Mami trailing you silently. You come to a halt, and half turn to look at her.

Mami blinks unhappily, and opens her mouth, before slowly closing it again. Eventually, she begins, "Oriko... is not the first magical girl I've had to fight for territory."

You think you can hear a 'but', hanging in the air.

"She's the first to have gone after your friends like this?" you fill in the blanks for her.

"Yes, she is," Mami says, looking away. "I don't understand. Why would she do that? She- I- I want her to pay, Sabrina. But I- I- why would she do that? Set fire to Sayaka's house, and then set a trap for you like that?"

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Do you want to comb the house room by room, just scan it from the outside, that kind of thing?

You shake your head, turning to face her fully. "She believes that this had to happen, I think."

Mami looks at you quizzically. "That doesn't make sense!"

"She's a precog," you say. "And before the explosion... there was a note. 'This was, and remains, necessary.' She... believes that this was necessary. If she can see the future, or maybe a future, then I'm guessing she's trying to shape it."

Mami's lips firm into a thin line. "That's no excuse."

"It's not," you agree. "Whatever that future she wants is... its present requires Sayaka's house burned down, or letting everyone else in there suffer... or me out of the way, or something. I have a few problems with all of that," you finish, sharp gaze meeting Mami's.

She nods slowly, eyes hard. "She needs to answer for what she's done."

"Yes, she does," you say firmly. You can see Mami's inner turmoil, though... despite her simmering rage, despite the territorial conflicts she must have been in, you don't think she's ever come up against someone quite so outright murderous. Teenaged girls don't usually go around setting fires, jaded and hostile or no.

"C'mon," you say, bumping her lightly on the shoulder. "We need to find her first, or all this is moot."

"I suppose so," Mami says.

"Coming, Homura?" you call, raising your voice. Your shout is shocking loud in the eerie silence of the frozen world. The black haired magical girl looks down at you from her perch on the building, and you can see her nodding before hopping down with her hair trailing behind her.

The three of you prowl towards the Mikuni residence carefully, walking up the main path to the front door while you stretch your senses as far as they will go to examine for any traces of magic. The three of you reach the house without incident, and without sensing anything magical, either.

Wordlessly, the three of you decide to circle around the house, simply observing it from the outside and peering into the windows. From what you can see, it looks like a perfectly normal house. Perhaps a little messy, but considering that Oriko has, presumably, been living largely on her own for a while, it's only to be expected.

Behind the house is an enormous backyard planted full of rosebushes. There's a table and chairs set up back here, too, for the occasional afternoon tea or some such, you guess.

After circling the house once, you glance at the others. "Shall we check inside? Maybe there's some clue as to where she is?"

"I don't see the point, if you do not sense her inside," Homura offers. "I know where Kirika lives."

"I... agree with Sabrina," Mami says. "We should check to see if there's anything inside."

"Fine," Homura grunts. "There's an open window on the second floor, around the back."

You nod, and the three of you proceed over to find the window. It is, indeed, open, but just a crack. Mindful of how the note had been trapped, you glance over at Mami, but she's already speaking.

"I'll use my ribbons on the window, OK?" she says.

You nod in agreement. "Yeah, I was just about to suggest that."

More golden ribbon spools out in Mami's hands, and twists upwards like a snake doing a particularly neat trick. The ribbon reaches the window, and the three of you tense in anticipation as contact is made and colour blooms along the window frame.

A heartbeat.

And another.

And... nothing happens.

The ribbon, moving hesitantly under Mami's control, pulls the window fully open. Once again, nothing happens. "I'll... go check it out, OK?" you suggest.

Mami frowns unhappily. "One of us needs to, I guess, and it shouldn't be Homura, since she's holding the timestop. I... I'll... Um. Be careful."

The blonde gestures, and the ribbon at the window blossoms out into a full webwork ladder, branching off interweaving ribbons that anchor themselves against the walls. You nimbly climb up the ribbons, and, very carefully, poke your head through the window to look inside.

You take a few careful minutes to look around, senses hyperalert and ready to spring back at any moment, but as far as you can see, it's just a bedroom. One that's done up nicely in a pastel lavender. The canopied bed is... alarmingly frilly, with veils drifting downwards. On a hint of paranoia, you carefully bring a single Grief marble forward to nudge the veils aside, and you find that the bed's unoccupied. You even check the wall just under and above the window for more mines.

No traps or anything that you can see.

"It's clear, I think," you call back, before clambering fully into the room, still ready to call the Grief marbles to shield you at a moment's notice.

You take a cautious step further in, watching carefully for any trip wires that might connect you to a trap, and a sharp eye on where the ribbon connecting you back to Homura drapes.

Rustling of the ribbon ladder heralds Homura climbing into the room, followed by Mami.

"Well, we're in," you murmur. "Room by room?"

Homura nods silently, while Mami answers, "I suppose so."

The three of you spread out, roaming through the rooms of the house. It's almost melancholic, somehow, with the house oddly still and empty. Every closed door is treated with suspicion, and opened at a distance with Mami's ribbons, while the three of you stay vigilant, avoiding touching anything if at all possible.

One of the rooms turns out to be a study, richly furnished with what you think is a mahogany desk and shelves filled with books. On the desk is a photograph of a younger, laughing Oriko and a distinguished looking man hoisting her on his shoulders. You glance at Mami, and move to block the photograph from her view.

Moving on, you find another room, this one furnished, at a guess, for Oriko to study in. There's a few school textbooks lying around, but more interesting are the glass jars. One is half filled with some black powder and what looks like glass marbles, while another has some traces of yellow powder. There are also various tools on the desk, along with some wires and bits of electronics lying around.

Homura peers down at the desk. "Gunpowder," she observes quietly. "Charcoal grinder," she adds, pointing at the glass jar, and a little motorized assembly you hadn't noticed before.

You nod in agreement. A simple mill grinder. "Here's where she made the bomb, then."

Mami just shakes her head, looking at the paraphernalia of destruction on the desk, her hands twitching.

Eventually, the three of you move on, after examining the room in detail. It looks like Oriko doesn't have the materials to produce more bombs, but that means little. They could be hidden elsewhere, or already deployed, for all you know.

"Mami, could you check the fridge?" you suggest, when you reach the kitchen.

"The fridge would make an excellent place to hide a bomb," Homura points out, glancing at you.

"Yeah... We should probably get out of the house or something," yoy acknowledge.

"Well... I could," Mami answers. "Why do you ask, Sabrina?"

"To see if there's fresh food in there," you reply. "If Oriko's abandoned the house..."

"That makes sense," Homura nods, walking out of the kitchen, presumably to look for a way out.

The tremendous glass doors opening out to the rose garden slide open without any issue, and the three of you retreat to a safe distance, with Mami leaving a ribbon snaking behind, ready to open the fridge.

"Do it," Homura says, when the three of your are squatting behind a tree. Mami nods, and frowns, presumably feeling out the fridge with her ribbons, before prying it open. All three of you tense in anticipation of an explosion, but nothing happens, and you relax slowly.

You creep back into the kitchen, now with the refrigerator door hanging wide open. As it turns out, it's almost empty of food, with one lonely head of cabbage and a carton of milk sitting in the corner.

"Well," you say. "This isn't conclusive, but it's suggestive."

Mami shakes her head. "If she isn't even living here any more, then what next?"

[] Continue searching the house
[] Search elsewhere
- [] Where?
[] Write-in


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Hmhm. Another phone-typed update.

"Maybe... Kirika's house?" you suggest, a little hesitantly after debating whether to bring up Shirome Academy. "She could have moved there."

Homura nods in agreement. "Possible," she allows.

Mami's frowning in thought. "Ah... Can I check something else before we go?" she asks, pressing her hands together and separating them with a length of ribbons spooling out as if from some unseen reel. She looks inquisitively at you and Homura.

You shrug. "Sure. What is it?"

"Oriko's wardrobe," Mami says, walking towards the stairs to the second floor. "If Oriko's not staying here any more, then her clothes..."

"Will presumably be gone," you finish, understanding dawning. "Good idea, Mami."

She beams back at you as she ascends the stairs. While you wait for her to return, you glance at Homura. She meets your gaze, and tilts her head infinitesimally to the side, eyes deliberately sliding to the side to indicate the stairwell, then back to you. An eyebrow raises fractionally.

... Is she asking about Mami and you?

You raise one eyebrow quizzically, and shrug.

Homura frowns slightly, and with small, minimal movements, taps her Soul Gem with her other hand, before tapping herself on the chest over her heart, before raising that eyebrow again.

You shrug helplessly, face drawn into an uncomprehending grimace.

The timetraveller makes a small 'tch' sound of irritation, but rocks her hand left and right. Later.

You nod, and at this point, Mami comes down the stairs. "Shall we move outside before I try the wardrobe?" she suggests.

"Yeah, probably a good idea," you agree.

"A wardrobe is just as viable a place to hide a bomb," Homura adds.

Mami gives the time traveller an odd look, but lets it pass without comment. The three of you troop outside and hunker down again, while Mami uses the ribbon she left behind to open the wardrobe again. After a good deal of nothing happening, you return to the house to examine the wardrobe.

It's pretty empty. Again, not wholly conclusive, but it certainly suggests that Oriko has moved elsewhere, and you say as much to the others.

You sigh. "Well. I think that's everything that might be of interest here," you say. "Shall we move on? Kirika's house?"

"Yes, let's go," Mami agrees. "Homura, do you know the way?"

The time traveller nods. "Not that far," she says, leading the way out.

It doesn't take you long to reach Kirika's place. As it turns out, she lives in an apartment block, much like Sayaka does. Did. A first floor apartment, which you scan from a distance with your senses, and find nothing. Since it's a first floor apartment, the three of you take a little extra time to peer in through the windows.

Again, nothing seems out of the ordinary, just an apartment for a family of three, of whom two are not currently in bed. The room you're guessing is Kirika's, with a single bed and a few plush toys arrayed on a writing desk, is empty. The bed doesn't look slept in, either. Of Kirika's parents, or so you presume, her father is sleeping, but her mother is... it appears that she had been pacing, in the living room, when the timestop caught her. Her eyes are turned anxiously towards the clock, frozen at 2:47AM.

Mami looks uneasily at you, and you shrug back, looking just as unhappy. Or so you imagine, anyway. Homura remains impassive.

"I... guess Kirika's not here either?" Mami says. Her voice is hushed, even if there's no need for it.

"And hasn't been home for at least the night, either," you add, jabbing a thumb at the pacing Mrs. Kure. You sigh.

"Where should we go to next?" Mami asks.

Surprisingly, Homura answers before you do. "The hospital."

Your eyebrows shoot up in surprise, and you incline your head at her. "I was just about to suggest that, too. I mean, if Oriko sent Sayaka and Hitomi there... Well, I assume Sayaka's being sent there. That was a Mitakihara General ambulance, wasn't it?"

Mami nods. "It was. Good thinking, Homura." The blonde turns to leap off towards the roof top, but Homura speaking stops her.

"Wait," the time traveller says, before adding, belatedly, "Please."

"What is it, Homura?" you say with a trace of anxiety. Is her time stop malfunctioning or something? About to summon squamous horrors from beyond the veil of reality to punish us for daring to intrude on their domain?

"... I need a cleanse," she says, holding up her hand, palm facing you.

"Oh, is that all," you reply, relieved. The corruption is easy to draw off, perhaps about a fifth. You've been in the timestop for a subjective total of maybe four hours, at a guess- while travelling ordinarily doesn't take so long, travelling while going over the path with a fine toothed comb certainly does, and so does searching a house.

You crush the cloud of grief down into the small spheres that's become your tradition, and frown at the number- seven of them. After a moment's thought, you make another group of fifteen to form another vertex on your icosahedron by adding eight more marbles from your pocket.

"There," you say, smiling at Homura.

"Thank you," she allows.

Well, you'll take it. Without much else to do, you walk over to an alley before crouching and leaping, ricocheting up the alley walls to reach the rooftops. Mami and Homura are right behind you, and after a moment to reorient, the three of you are headed to the hospital, Mami in the lead.

It doesn't take long before you're looking down on the hospital grounds.

"Where shall we search now?" Mami wonders out loud.

[] Look in A&E, see if Sayaka's there
[] Look for ambulances
[] Check in on Hitomi
[] Check in on Kyousuke
[] Check the rest of the hospital
[] Scan from a distance
[] Write-in


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One hundred and twenty four Grief marbles, four of which are in your pocket.

"Hmm... we could see if Sayaka's reached the hospital yet?" you suggest. "And if Oriko's going after our friends... then we should check on Hitomi and, um, Kyousuke, maybe?"

"The ambulance may not have arrived before I started the timestop," Homura notes.

"Homura's right. It will be... close, either way," Mami says. "But I agree, we should check, just in case."

You shrug. "OK, then. A&E first, Hitomi, Kyousuke, then the rest of the hospital, just in case?"

"Sounds like a plan," Mami says with a smile. "Shall we?" She motions with her hand toward the hospital, in a little 'you first' gesture. You smile back at her and take a long leap off the edge of the building and letting your instincts and a touch of magic guide your fall towards the building with Mami's golden ribbon whipping out behind you like a kite's tail.

Halfway through your descent, though, you realize something.

Your landing is a controlled roll, landing on your shoulder and ending with you in a crouch, ready to spring to your feet again. You refrain from doing so, and simply rise to your feet while waiting for the other two to arrive. When they do, you give them a sheepish look. "Uh. I don't actually know where A&E is...?"

Mami giggles. "Oh, Sabrina. And you were doing so well." Then a similarly sheepish look dawns on her face, and she adds, "Though I don't know, either."

"This way," Homura says. She doesn't roll her eyes, exactly, but you can practically hear said eye roll in the tone of her voice. You grin at Mami behind Homura's back, and she returns the grin. The shared moment of mirth fades quickly, though, lost in the pressing silence and grim search ahead of you.

You push your senses out as you pass through the hospital grounds, scanning the area, however, you don't detect anything apart from the three of you.

The A&E section of the hospital is unsurprisingly populated. The receiving bay is bustling with activity, nurses rushing to and fro carrying various items. One is mid-slip, small tubes of what are, on closer inspection, burn cream flying out of his arms. A harried looking woman is hurrying out of one of the side doors, pushing ahead of her a trolley filled with various items- bandages, scissors, medication, and so forth.

All of them frozen in time, in an utterly surreal tableau.

... The man who's slipping and dropping the burn cream has a particularly silly looking expression on his face, eyelids drooping and teeth bared. The whole freeze-frame expression issue.

"It's kind of creepy," you note as the three of you weave past the human statues, careful not to get the ribbon caught on anything.

"It is," Mami agrees from behind you.

A few minutes of poking your head through all the triage areas turns out to be rather unfruitful. No Sayaka, or even any one who looks to be in for burn treatment or even smoke inhalation. Then again, Sayaka would be the among the first, if not the first, of the people from the fire to arrive, since you'd gotten her out of the fire with alacrity.

"Maybe we should check on the others?" Mami suggests tentatively, rubbing at her nose. The air in here has that slightly antiseptic smell you associate with hospitals, and you wonder for a brief moment how that works - do you have to keep moving, or all the oxygen near you will be used up? But how about those conversations with Homura, where you didn't move around?

You put the thought aside, and agree with Mami.

The three of you make your way through the hospital to the long term care wards, and wind your way up to the seventh floor on the stairs, since the elevators obviously aren't working. The three of you cautiously look in on Kyousuke, and find that he's sleeping soundly, with nothing out of the place in his ward room.

The same is true of Hitomi, sleeping peacefully on the tenth floor. There's a little journal beside her bed, you note, but you don't dare to read it.

You sigh. "Nothing wrong here, either."

"If Oriko doesn't want to be found, we'll have a hard time finding her," Homura points out.

"Let's just check the rest of the hospital," you comment. "Just in case."

Mami nods in agreement. "It can't hurt. If she's hiding from us, then the less obvious places would be worth a look."

Exiting the building through the roof, the three of you comb the hospital grounds rapidly, leveraging your massive detection radius to its fullest. You don't find Oriko nearby, however, you do find a Witch's Barrier nearby, and call it out to the others, before heading over to it.

It's the same geometrical slit in reality as any other entrance to a Barrier you've seen, and cast in the same iron-grey as anything else in the time-stop.

Mami looks worriedly at it. "We'll need to come back to this later, when we have the..." she pauses, and frowns, before finishing, "when we have the time."

You groan, while Homura's eyes flick upwards to the sky for a moment, and her hands twitch. Unintentional or not, that was just terrible. A thought occurs to you, though, and you voice it out. "If Oriko wanted to hide from me in particular, a Witch's Barrier would be perfect," you say, indicating the Barrier.

"Because the Barrier drowns out a magical girl's presence?" Mami says, tapping her chin thoughtfully.

"Right, all I can sense is that there's a Barrier, not anything inside it," you comment.

"A Witch's Barrier is a dangerous place to hide, though," Mami comments.

"If Kirika has anti magic, then it might not be as dangerous," Homura offers.

You nod at the time traveler. "Yeah, I was thinking that. I doubt she's in this one in particular, but in general..."

Mami purses her lips. "Something to keep in mind if we don't find her?"

"Yeah," you confirm. "Hey, Homura, what happens with your timestop and Witch Barriers?"

"I'm not entirely sure," the time traveler admits. Her shield bearing arm moves slightly, coming uncertainly to the front of her body. "I've never tried bringing people with me while crossing a Barrier before."

"Hmm." Might pose a problem, and then again, it might not. Either way, it's something for later, you reason. You sigh, and rub at your eyes. "Anyway, let's finish our search of the hospital."

The three of you resume the search. As you approach the starting point, you see a few ambulances moving along the road. You point them out, and veer over to take a look.

... Ambulances, inconsiderate of curious people trying to ogle, don't have convenient back windows for you to peer into. You're forced to try looking in from the front of the ambulances, peering around the drivers, while very carefully avoiding touching the ambulances and bringing them into the timestop.

Magical girl or not, you really don't want to get hit by a moving ambulance, even if it is suitably ironic.

Despite the fact that you're taller than Homura and Mami both, this still proves to be a mildly tricky task, resulting in you hopping up and down to try and get the right angle to look in.

Nevertheless, you eventually spy a familiar shock of blue hair in one of the ambulances, accompanied by her father. Sayaka's mother, with the same shade of blue hair she has, is lying on the gurney strapped down in the back of the ambulance.

They look, if not fine, then in acceptable condition.

"She's in good hands, then," Mami says. At the same time, though, she looks mildly pensive.

Someone's stomach grumbling interrupts her. Your head snaps up, staring first at Mami, and then Homura. "That wasn't me," Mami says.

The two of you stare at Homura.

"What?" the time traveler asks, defensively.

You shake your head, a smirk tugging at your lips. "Nothing."

[] Suggest eating
[] Continue searching
- [] Where?
[] Write-in


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Was out and busy most of the day.

Oh, and GM's honour - Oriko is in a fixed and pre-determined location, and one that's not some random alley somewhere. If you find her, you find her. It's just... well, you haven't.

You let the smirk fade from your face, and glance at Mami. "So, on a completely unrelated note," you begin in a perfectly level voice, "maybe it's time go and find something to eat?"

Mami nods, one hand coming up to cover her mouth. "Yes, I agree."

"How about it, Homura? I'm sure we can spare the time," you address the black haired girl.

She glares at you, but relents quickly. "Fine." She raises her shield, and with a clicking of the gears, produces an instant ramen cup, which she tosses to you, and a second one to Mami.

You reflexively catch the cup of instant noodles, as does Mami. She looks down at the plastic cup with an unhappy frown, turning it over in her hands. Homura sits at the edge of the roof, facing in, and puts down her cup beside her, before reaching behind her shield again. This time, she produces a... what the hell, Homura?

Your thoughts grind to a halt as the time traveller pulls a kettle, with steam still wafting from the spout, from behind her shield. "Open the cup noodles," Homura instructs with a hint of irritation and a slight gesture with the kettle. Neither you nor Mami have moved to open your cup noodles, and she looks dismayed to have to eat instant food.

"No, Homura," Mami says firmly, looking up at her.

"It's the middle of the night, it's cold, we're h- hunting a dangerous magical girl..." she reels off. "We'd all feel better if we had something that isn't instant food, Homura."

Homura sighs, closing her eyes for a moment, but eventually seems to come to the decision that it's not worth the effort to try and dissuade Mami. When she reopens her violet eyes, she grits out, "Fine. What do you suggest, then?" The kettle is returned to her shield, and she reclaims the instant noodles.

"My apartment," Mami says firmly. "We should check it, in any case, and perhaps yours too, after we eat. I believe I should be able to cook something even with the timestop."

Homura raises one shoulder in a minute shrug, and makes a little 'go ahead' gesture with her hand. There's a tiny, tiny quirk of what might be a nostalgic smile on her face as she watches Mami turn to lead the way back to her apartment, though, that you might've missed had you not been watching her closely.

The three of you arrive at Mami's apartment without incident, or stumbling across errant magical girls along the way. The door is opened with some trepidation by Mami, but everything turns out to be normal and undisturbed.

Mami peers down at the boots of her magical girl outfit, before dismissing them in a flash of golden light and walking into the apartment. You raise an eyebrow at her, and frown down at your own boots. You've just seen a practical demonstration, so... ah.

Your own boots disappear, too, and you walk into the apartment, past Mami, who's holding the door open. "Come in, Homura," she invites.

The black haired time traveller hesitates for a moment, but dismisses her high heeled shoes and walks in.

"OK!" Mami says, closing the door behind Homura. "I'll just prepare something simple, then," she says, moving to the kitchen with ribbons blossoming out ahead of her.

[] Go help Mami
- [] Conversation?
[] Talk to Homura
- [] What about?
[] Write-in


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Why wouldn't Homura carry a kettle of boiling water?

As you walk into the apartment, you're careful to alter the ever-shifting icosahedron of Grief marbles so as to accommodate all the obstacles in the apartment. You probably need to find some easier way of bringing them with you, you figure.

Homura walks over to the sofa, and sits down primly, tucking her hands into her lap. She looks around the room curiously, as if she's never been here before. Paying close attention, though, you can see the deep echoes of old pain written in the way the lines around her eyes tighten.

"Hey, Mami?" you call as you search.

"Yes?" the reply echoes from the kitchen. How that works, you don't know; since sound by rights needs air as a medium of passage, but, well. Magic is as magic does.

"Mind if I grab that sling bag? I kinda have too many marbles of Grief right now," you comment. Where was that bag?

"Of course!" Mami replies. "Should be on the shelf, next to mine."

So it is. You grab the bag, and hold it open, amusing yourself by having the marbles file inside one by one and packing themselves neatly within. For now, you leave the bag here in the living room, before entering the kitchen to help Mami with the cooking. Mami is frowning at the tap; despite her having one hand on it, no water's coming out.

"Whatcha cooking, Mami?" you ask, peering around. There's some uncooked spaghetti in a packet on the table, along with various other ingredients- tomatos, mushrooms and so forth neatly set out.

"Pasta pomodoro," she says distractedly, pronouncing the syllables correctly to your mild surprise. "Do you think Homura has any non-boiling water in her shield?"

"I'll ask," you say, and stick your head out of the kitchen to look at Homura. "Hey, Homura, do you have any water? That's not boiling?"

"Yes," Homura replies, rising to her feet. She walks into the kitchen, and pulls several large bottles of distilled water out from her shield which she places on the kitchen countertop.

"Ah, thank you, Homura," Mami flashes her a grateful smile. "Can't cook without water..." She grabs one of the large bottles and empties it into a pot, which she leaves on a stove. Golden ribbons wind around the pot handle and the stove itself, vibrant blotches of colour in the iron-grey world.

You grab the chopping board and a knife, before starting to chop the ingredients. You're familiar with the general recipe, if perhaps not Mami's specific version of it, so you know what to do. Mami tries to nudge you away, but you just roll your eyes at her, and she smiles exasperatedly at you. Instead, she reaches for a skillet which, she begins to heat up, humming slightly. Seeing that, you put aside the tomatoes which you'd been chopping up and reach instead for the onions.

"How'd you learn to cook this, anyway?" you ask curiously as you push the onions over to Mami, who's currently pouring oil into the heated skillet.

She flushes slightly. "I like Italian food," she answers as she expertly drops the onions in with a hiss of oil.

You nod. "Ah, I see," you reply. "Are we adding some chicken or something?"

"Oh, yes," she says as sliced garlic joins the onions. "I should still have some chicken breast in the refrigerator."

You reach over, and pull open the fridge to hunt for the chicken, and then busy yourself to shredding it. Mami's smile dims slightly when she thinks you're not looking, you notice.

The meal -technically, breakfast?- doesn't take long to prepare with the two of you working in perfect tandem, even with the complication of having to manuveur around the golden ribbons linking things to the time stop. As you cook, however, you can't help but notice that whenever you're ostensibly busy with something else, Mami looks slightly unhappy.

"Food's done," you call as you divvy up the spaghetti, Mami finishing up the sauce. There's no response from Homura.

There's no response from Homura.

Stay calm, Sabrina.

Caaaaaalm.

Your walk to the kitchen door is perhaps a little more hurried than usual, and your heart is certainly not beating out a thundering tatoo in your chest.

...

She's asleep.

The time traveller has fallen asleep on Mami's sofa, half-slumping over sideways. Even asleep, her mouth is downturned into a frown, but her features are more relaxed, more unguarded, than you've ever seen.

Asleep, Akemi Homura seems much smaller than even her petite 156 centimeters. Her slumbering form lacks the usual fiery anger, the weary but implacable energy she usually moves with.

Asleep, Akemi Homura is just a Japanese school girl dressed in an unusual costume. Just a slightly malnourished, tired girl - even if the cut of her costume disguises it, you can see that she's rather skinnier than she should be, and her skin is perhaps on the unhealthier side of translucent. Relics of her time spent in hospital, you suppose.

You glance at Mami, who's walked up to peer over your shoulder. She raises her eyebrows at you, and inclines her head to you. Your move.

[] Wait for Homura to wake up
- [] Talk to Mami while waiting?
- [] Write-in conversation topic
[] Wake up Homura
[] Write-in


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Been busy.

Your face curls into a smirk, and you turn to look at Mami, still peering over your shoulder. "Don't tell her she's this adorable when she's asleep," you whisper to her. "She'll probably never go to sleep again."

Mami giggles quietly, one hand over her mouth. "We should let her sleep, I think," she whispers back when her laughter subsides.

You nod. "Yeah, I agree. But first..." you raise your left hand and reach out with your magic, gently drawing a bilious cloud of corruption out from Homura's Soul Gem. In her sleep, her face eases slightly, and she slumps over further on the couch, murmuring quietly into the cushion.

Mami's hand comes up to cover her mouth again, and her eyes crinkle in laughter. You can practically hear the delighted squeal she's too refined to express.

"Caffiene, maybe?" you mutter quietly to Mami, stepping back and lightly tugging her back into the kitchen. Absently, you call the large mass of Grief marbles you'd left in the sling bag to you, and the bag silently floats itself into your waiting arms. "The food'll keep, just let the timestop hold it."

"That's probably a good idea," Mami says. "I'll put some tea on."

"Do you have something stronger? Coffee?" you ask, as you collapse the malevolent cloud of Grief you have into the usual spheres and adding them to the pile already inside bag.

The blonde shakes her head, nose wrinkled in disgust. "I don't like coffee." She busies herself setting a kettle of water to boil. You locate the tea leaves, and dump several spoonfuls into a teapot. You then take a long, measuring look at it, and dump a few more spoonfuls in.

Mami ignites the stove, and leaves the kettle to boil, before leaning against the counter, arms clasped tightly around herself in a hug. When she catches you looking at her, she smiles at you, but it's more than a little strained.

"Are you OK, Mami?" you ask.

"Hm? Yes, of course I am..." she replies, a tad unconvincingly.

No, she's not. But you'll hold your peace for now, because you want to talk to her seriously, and the kettle's about to boil. As if on cue, it begins to whistle just as you think that, and Mami busies herself pouring water into the teapot. "I think that's a bit too much tea leaves," she comments on seeing just how much you'd added. A golden ribbon loops itself around the handle of the tea pot, and she steps back from it.

You shrug. "We need the caffiene, I think," you say. "Anyway, c'mon, Mami."

You tug lightly on her sleeve, and lead her over to your bedroom, carefully tiptoeing past the slumbering Homura, who's by now fully tipped over on the sofa and is burrowed up against the backrest. The evidence of your rushed departure is still present in the form of the blankets strewn roughly about and the crumpled sheets.

You seat yourself, and pat the bed beside you while giving Mami an inviting look. She reluctantly seats herself, looking away out of the window to avoid looking you in the eyes, but she scoots over close enough that you can feel the warmth from her body.

"How are you holding up, Mami?" you ask.

She sighs, but doesn't answer.

You let the silence stretch out.

"I," Mami starts, before trailing off.

You bump your shoulder lightly against hers, giving her silent encouragement.

"I'm... not comfortable with this, Sabrina," she says quietly. "I- she hurt you so badly. You might have died! And Sayaka, too! I- but..." She sighs again. "I was -am- so angry, and she needs to pay, but this... skulking around- I-"

She's uncomfortable with this cold, premediated hunt and murder, you gather.

"I, I- I want Oriko gone," she whispers, still looking away from you. "But this..."

[] Write-in

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There's more than one layer at play here.

Mami is a veteran magical girl.

One hundred thirty nine Grief marbles, four of which are in your pocket.

"She-" Mami breaks off the sentence with a sigh, and falls silent again. Her head lowers slightly.

"Hey," you say, draping one arm around her shoulder and pulling her into a hug. "You're a good person, Mami."

"I want Oriko dead," she says in an almost inaudible whisper, still looking away from you. She leans into the hug, though, drawing comfort from the simple physical contact. "She threatened our home. She burned down my friend's house."

You chuff out a sigh. "That's just being human, Mami," you say. "And this... this isn't something I want to do either. We're not..." you wave your hands, searching for a word. "We're not assassins. But we need to get her to stop."

Mami groans. "I... but... this timestop..."

"How did you deal with it?" you ask.

"Huh?"

"Before, I mean. Oriko isn't the only one, you've mentioned being in fights before," you say. "I know that life as a magical girl isn't always... nice, Mami."

"It isn't. She... she's not," she admits quietly. "I was, am, furious, but- never like this. Not a cold hunt like this... We just fought, and I won. I- I... I've hurt people before. Badly. But always in a fight..."

She takes a shuddering breath. "A-and what happens if we find her? We kill her? I- I can threaten as much as I like-" Mami lets out a choked laugh "-I threatened to kill Homura the first time we met! And now look at her! I- I, I don't think..."

You shake your head, understanding. "You don't think you could actually kill someone." Except, perhaps, in the heat of the moment, the types of a breakdown, you think to yourself. You know what she could once have done.

"N-no..." Mami says.

[] Write-in

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Mami's always been able to talk up a good show.

Your arm is already around Mami's shoulders, but you pull her into a full hug. She stiffens in your arms. Not really what you'd been hoping for, but you just hold her for a moment.

"It's not about hunting her, really," you say contemplatively. "It's more... we need to find out why she's doing these things, and stopping her from doing more. The timestop is just the best way of doing it."

Mami sighs. "It still doesn't feel right." She pushes herself up from your hug, and you let her, though one arm still remains around her. "It- I... what do we do when we find her?"

You shake your head. "I don't know, Mami. But I do know that it doesn't have to end in killing if we find her, between the three of us. We've got Homura's timestop, I can cleanse for as long as we need it, and more importantly-" you give her a little shake "-we've got Mami Tomoe. We can find another way."

"You- I-" Mami slumps, head dipping almost to her chest. "You... I'm not- I don't deserve your trust, Sabrina. I don't think- I c-could kill a-anyone, but I- Just thinking about Oriko, what she's done, I want her gone, and-" she breaks off with a wordless noise that's half sob and half snarl, clutching at the air in front of her as if wringing someone's neck. "I- I don't trust myself. And it scares me."

You pull her into a hug again, and this time, she accepts, collapsing bonelessly against you, tears silently rolling down her face. "It's OK, Mami," you soothe, rubbing her on her back gently. "Whatever happens, I'll still be here to help. Always, Mami."

She speaks through her tears, mumbling into your shoulder. "I- I don't deserve you, Sabrina."

You let her cry herself out in little sobbing heaves. Out of the corner of your eye, you can see her Soul Gem- it's perhaps a little tarnished, but nowhere near enough for it to matter yet.

Eventually, her quiet sobs fade away. You idly draw the corruption from her Soul Gem, and pack it away as marbles in your pocket.

She draws back from the hug, and simply looks at you for a long moment with a wan smile on her face.

The smile fades, though, and she asks, "I'm still not sure... do you think we could leave the timestop, just for a bit? J-just to gather my thoughts? The silence is..."

[] Wake up Homura, ask her
[] Wait for Homura to wake up
[] Continue the hunt, leaving Mami behind
[] Just a little further
- [] Specify
[] Continue onwards
[] Write-in


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Heat of the moment. Fury. Incoherency? Oh yes.
Read between the lines. Metaphorically speaking.
One hundred forty three Grief marbles, eight of which are in your pocket.

You swallow. You don't want to leave the timestop, since that would free Oriko to do whatever it is she has planned. But now that she's brought it up, you realize the effect the timestop's been having on her... and you're reluctant to subject her to more of it.

Mami's face falls. "O- of course, it's OK if you want continue, finding Oriko is important, too," she says.

"No, no. We'll stop, but I..." you hesitate, but you decide that this really is for the best. "Just one more stop, OK? I want to check on Nagisa first."

Mami smiles wanly. "I... OK. I can... yes," she says with a nod.

A thought strikes you. "I... maybe we can put a movie on or something? So there's some noise while we eat, or something?"

"I'd like that," Mami says, sitting back. She leans against you, the height disparity leaving her shoulder against your arm, a warm sensation even through the sleeve of your longcoat.

You sigh. "I'm sorry, Mami. I know it's not what you wanted to hear... but I... even if we can't find Oriko, I'd like to make sure everyone we know is safe, at least. We... should probably stop for the night after this, anyway, we're all tired, and I don't think we can keep this up too much longer."

Mami chuckles warmly. "You... You, Sabrina... you are something special, aren't you?" She shakes her head, smiling. "I... I dub thee white knight Sabrina, friend to all she meets," she says, with a slight stumble over the unfamiliar syllables.

"I'm not that good a person," you protest, though a smile comes unbidden to your face. "It's just... I can't just let these things go, you know?"

"Ahhh... you would say that," she chuckles warmly. "In any case, yes, Sabrina, I'm OK with checking in on Nagisa, since you think it's necessary."

"Thanks, Mami," you say. "Do you want to try the TV now?"

"Mmm... Is Homura still sleeping?" Mami asks.

You lean back on the bed, trying to peer out of the door. You can just see the back of the sofa from here, and Homura doesn't seem to be sitting up, so you presume that she is, indeed, still sleeping.

"Looks like she is, yeah," you say.

"Hm... maybe if we make it really soft?" Mami wonders. "I don't want to disturb her sleep. She looks like she hasn't, for a few days."

"I wouldn't be surprised," you answer, rising to your feet and offering Mami a hand up. She accepts it, and you pull her up, while musing on Homura.

Mami swipes at her face, rubbing the heel of one of her hands -glove and all- against her eyes. "Yeah, Oriko seems to really have her on edge."

You agree with a nod as you head in to the living room. With Oriko around, you have to wonder if Homura's even slept at all, as opposed to watching over Madoka every night. As you step out of your room, you hesitate, and turn to head back in, drawing a questioning look from Mami. You grab your blanket off your bed, though, and bring it with you over to the sofa where you ever so carefully drape it over the sleeping time traveller.

Homura mumbles something incoherent, and you freeze. One of her hands -her left one, with the Soul Gem and shield- comes up to tug the blanket closer around herself, and she snuggles back down against the blanket.

Her Soul Gem's not very clouded, you notice. You wonder a little at that, but you figure that she's had literal years, if not decades of experience in being efficient. It probably counts for something.

You grin at Mami, who's watching over your shoulder, and she smiles back. You point questioningly at the television, feeling a lot more confident that you can probably try it without waking Homura -she's utterly exhausted, it looks like-, and Mami nods. You snag the remote as she walks over to the shelf, looking for something to play.

With a hand on the television to keep it active, you turn the television on. It simply displays static, but it works, and you hastily turn the volume down until it's nearly inaudible. A quick glance back at Homura tells you that she's still sound asleep.

Your head snaps back to the television. Wait, what? How does that work? Time stop... electricity? Shouldn't the electricity be stopped? You frown at the television. You frown up at the ceiling lamp Mami had habitually flicked on when she stepped in. It had been off in the timestop, and Mami turned it on, but she's not touching it now and it's still emitting light and how does that even-

Mami waves a hand in front of your face. "Are you OK, Sabrina?"

"I... uh, yeah," you say, blinking away the thoughts. Magic is fucking weird, you conclude to yourself.

"Uh, OK." Mami holds up a box for you to see. It's... you blink. It's a console game: Earth Defense Force: Insect Armageddon. "Do you game, Sabrina? If not, I've also got some movies..."

[] Sure!
- [] Maxim 5. Close air support and friendly fire should be easier to tell apart.
- [] Maxim 25. If the damage you do is covered by a manufacturers warranty, you didn't do enough damage.
- [] Maxim 34. If you're leaving scorch-marks, you need a bigger gun.
[] Nah, watch a movie.


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Why EDF? Because this exists. (Technically that's based on EDF 2017, not IA, and IA isn't quite released yet, but I'm more familiar with Insect Armageddon and shut up.)

--Linked but omitted. While extremely good fluff, constitutes the only chapter of the set which is really irrelevant to this discussion--

You shake your head. "I'd rather let her sleep," you say. "If you're alright with that, I mean?" You give Mami an inquiring look.

Mami dips her head in a nod. "I'm... willing to let her sleep. She really needs it, doesn't she?"

"Yeah," you shake your head. "Doesn't even seem to have stirred even with the noise we were making."

"Do you think..." Mami frowns. "She's really worried about Oriko, isn't she? Do you think she's been out looking for her?"

"Sounds quite likely," you answer. Privately, you suspect that she's also probably on Madoka-surveillance around the clock, too.

Mami sighs, and you put a comforting hand on her arm. "Just a little longer, OK, Mami?" you say. "Shall we eat? I don't know about you, but I'm starting to get hungry."

"Sure," Mami says, rising to her feet to fetch the spaghetti from the kitchen. You follow her, but pause by the sofa and check Homura's Soul Gem. Deciding to play it safe, you draw off the Grief from her, collapsing it into the familiar little spheres. You then head into the kitchen, where Mami's checking on the spaghetti.

She pours out the tea into cups, while you pull out some utensils. Forks, to go with the spaghetti, and between the two of you, you carry your food and tea out to the living room. Homura's portion you leave in the kitchen, still locked within the timestop.

You and Mami seat yourselves next to the television. Thanks to the timestop, your food is still piping hot, and you're about to dig in when an idea occurs to you. "Hey, Mami? Maybe we could watch a movie or something while eating?"

"Ah? Sure," Mami says, blinking up at you and putting her plate down on the floor. The colour fades from the plate as her hand leaves it. She stands, and wanders over to her small collection of movies. "What would you like to watch?" she asks.

"Something light, I guess?" you shrug.

Mami runs a finger along the spines of her disc collection. "Hmm... How about an anime?"

"I suppose so?"

"Ah, just the thing, then," Mami smiles, pulling out one of the discs. You don't see what it is before she cracks the casing open and pulls out the disc. "I haven't gotten around to watching this one, anyway."

The television is quickly set up, and the two of you are sitting in front of it, Mami again sitting close enough to you that her elbows bump against yours. You twirl your fork in the spaghetti, gathering a decent amount which you stick into your mouth as you wait for the movie to begin. Mami's cooking is good; just the right balance of taste.

"The morning of December 16. It was so cold. And I mean cold, that if you took an ice pick and plunged it into the ground, you'd shatter the earth into a million pieces."

Time passes quickly, and the two of you polish off your meal quickly, setting aside the plates. The tea you'd made is extraordinarily thick, but it definitely perks you up.

As the movie draws to a close, your tea long finished, you look back at Homura. To your surprise, she's still sleeping - she must have been utterly exhausted, but her sleep seems rather less restful, now. Her face is contorted into an expression of dismay, and her hands are fisted in the blanket you'd draped over her.

Mami glances back as you do so, and a frown also creases her forehead.

[] Wake Homura
[] Let her sleep it off
[] Write-in


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Well, it's not Endless Eight.
Implying implications.
One hundred forty six Grief marbles, eleven of which are in your pocket.

You sigh. "Time to wake her up, I think," you mutter, looking at Mami.

"Are you sure?" the blonde asks. "We could just let her sleep... maybe the nightmare will pass?"

You shake your head. "No... I think this would be for the best." You rather suspect that Homura's nightmares can only get worse. You stand easily, stretching out the kinks from your sitting so long, and move over to the sofa, where Homura's rolled over, tangling herself in the blanket.

"Homura?" you say softly, reaching out to nudge her gently on the shoulder. You lean back, ready to avoid a reflexive shooting.

Nothing.

Homura mutters something in her sleep, and she curls in on herself to avoid your hand. Her death grip on the blankets loosen slightly, though, and her face eases.

"Homura, it's time to wake up," you say, nudging her a little more firmly.

The black haired girl makes a little 'mnaaaaaa' noise, and one hand comes up to bat weakly at yours. You can hear Mami biting back a delighted squeal from behind you, and you half turn to grin at her.

You put your hand on her shoulder and give her a little shake. "Homura, wake up," you say, louder.

The time traveller's eyes blink open, and for a bare moment between heartbeats, you can practically see the old Homura in her sleepy violet eyes. She blinks again, looking muzzily up at you, confusion swimming in her eyes. The moment passes, however, and her eyes harden, startled expression quickly subsumed under her usual impassive mask.

"Good morning, Homura," you say with a smile, stepping back.

She glares at you, pushing the blanket back and swinging herself upright. "I fell asleep?"

"Yes, you did," you confirm.

"You should have woken me up," she snaps at you.

"No, we shouldn't have," you counter. "With your time stop, we're not losing any time, and with me around, corruption isn't an issue. And really? You need the rest, Homura." That she fell asleep at all, let alone remained asleep like that, speaks volumes about how tired she must have been.

"I agree with Sabrina," Mami adds firmly. "You were exhausted, Homura. Anyway, stay here, I'll get some food for you." The blonde turns up the volume of the television, and walks off to the kitchen.

Homura frowns, looking slightly mutinous, but she seems to accept your logic and remains seated on the sofa. You sit down beside her, kicking your legs out. "You shouldn't be afraid to accept help from your allies, you know," you reprove.

She sighs almost imperceptibly, but doesn't reply to that. She only reacts when Mami pushes a steaming plate of pasta and cup of tea in her face, looking up at the blonde. "Thank you," she says, grudgingly, before accepting the fork and beginning to eat.

Mami seats herself on the sofa on your other side, watching the television, which is now looping through the movie a second time. You split your attention between observing Homura, Mami, and the television. Homura's fork moves rather rapidly- it seems that in addition to being exhausted, she's starving, too. You catch Mami's eye, and jerk your head in the direction of the time traveller. She nods in acknowledgement, lips pursed as she watches Homura wolf down the food.

Homura polishes off the spaghetti in record time, and you catch her glancing oh-so-casually at the kitchen, as if she's wondering if there's more. However, she silently sets aside the plate, and picks up the cup of tea, slowly sipping it.

"So, Homura," you begin. "We're considering calling off the time-stop hunt, after checking maybe one or two more locations. There's just too many places Oriko could have gone to ground."

The time traveller fixes you with her violet gaze. "You and Mami may leave the time stop," she says, and, a heartbeat later as if she's debating something with herself, she continues, "May I come back to you for cleanses of my Soul Gem?"

[] Write-in

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Sleeping Homu, and something for you to consider, perhaps- why is Homu so tired?

"Yes, of course," you say. "Even so, you shouldn't stay up too much longer, Homura. You really need the sleep. As it is, you're barely half awake, and, y'know, you actually fell asleep there. If you're barely alert... It's that much easier for Oriko to catch you off guard, you know?"

Homura looks away. "I can't affor-"

"Can't you?" you snap. You have easy rebuttals for this, since you were just thinking about it. "You have all the time in the world, and I'm perfectly happy to cleanse your Soul Gem for you. Food? Have you been eating instant ramen all the time?" -from the flash of surprise that crosses Homura's face, you suspect you're right- "I'm sure Mami doesn't mind feeding you." Mami nods, supporting you.

"It's not necessary," Homura scowls at you.

"Unecessary is not the same thing as 'shouldn't be done'," you say, holding up a finger. "I believe I've mentioned this before."

"Sabrina's absolutely right, Homura," Mami injects firmly. "You're pushing yourself too hard. You can afford to rest."

At least one good thing came of this entire affair, you reflect. Mami now actually cares enough about Homura to try helping her. Which is... unexpected, but nice. Now, if only Homura would actually accept the help. And speaking of help...

"And one more thing, Homura," you say to her scowling face. "I think it's probably for the best if you sleep here tonight, after everything's done, OK? Safety in numbers, right?"

Homura glares at you, and you glare right back. Finally, she relents, and glances away. "Fine," she grunts.

"Good," you say. "Alright, then. Our next stop for now is checking on Nagisa... but first, cleanses, everyone?"

You go through your standard ritual of drawing off the corruption from everyone's Soul Gem, including your own, while still seated comfortably on the sofa. You call the sling bag to you, levitating it via the mass of Grief marbles inside, and drop the new ones in before leaving the bag on the floor beside you.

Mami purses her lips, looking thoughtfully at Homura's cleaned out plate of spaghetti. "I suppose I'll wash up later, when we're not in the timestop," she muses. "Have you finished your tea, Homur-"

The timetraveller interrupts her by grabbing the cup and draining the remains of the tea in one long gulp.

"... Alright, then," you say. "Let's go?"

After looking up Momoe Shin's residence, the three of you set out again, with you remembering to snag the sling bag. Mami takes the lead- even if she doesn't know the precise address, she knows the general area.

It turns out that Momoe Shin lives in an apartment in a relatively upscale part of the city. It's not the implausible rolling acres of the Kaname and Mikuni residences, but the buildings are new, and seem to be well maintained.

"Uh..." you check the address written on a scrap of paper. "That building there, I think. Third floor."

Mami peeks over your shoulder at the paper, and you obligingly angle it so that she can see it easily. "Yes, that's the right one," she agrees, while Homura looks on impatiently.

The three of you head over to the building, and Mami uses her ribbons to lift you up to peer through the window. Momoe Shin's house speaks of quiet opulence, and, to an extent, bachelorhood, though it's generally well kept. Nagisa, it turns out, is sleeping. The braids are undone, and the ribbons are piled up on her bedside table.

There's absolutely nothing out of the ordinary here.

You wave your hand to signal Mami, and the ribbons holding you aloft relax, letting you back down to the ground. "Nothing wrong here, it seems," you inform the others.

"Hm... What will be our next step, then?" Mami asks, glancing around at the grey of the time stop.

[] Continue hunting
- [] Where?
[] Stop hunting
- [] Try to convince Homura to stop too?
[] Write-in


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Homura actually agreed to staying over pretty readily, didn't she? I wonder why.

One hundred fifty four grief marbles, eight in your pocket.

"Um..." you glance at Mami, slightly worried about her reaction. "Mami, would you mind if we were to check out Homura's house, too? I know I said Nagisa's would be our last stop, but I just thought about this..."

Mami nods, though her smile is slightly strained. "I... yes, that's a good idea," she agrees. "Wouldn't do to leave her in the lurch."

"It's not necessary," Homura repeats impatiently. "I'm capable of checking my house myself."

"Homura, just let us help you, OK?" you say.

She glares at you, but ultimately relents. "Fine. Let's go, then," she grumbles, and starts walking away.

You glance at Mami as you start to follow the time traveller. "You're sure you're OK with this, Mami?"

"Yes," Mami affirms with a smile. Lowering her voice, she adds, "Homura... needs someone to look after her, doesn't she?"

"I... yeah, she kinda does," you whisper back.

"I can hear you perfectly well," Homura calls back, before tensing and crouching to jump up two closely spaced buildings.

You look back at Mami again, and roll your eyes. You follow Homura up to the roof, as does Mami, and the three of you leap off towards her apartment, an odd corner block at the junction of three streets. Mami cautiously opens a window with her ribbons, and the three of you enter Homura's apartment through the window.

Homura's apartment is... odd. In the center of the living room are several backless sofas, arranged in broken, concentric circles. The walls are a plain tan colour, and there are little devices studded along the edge between the floor and walls - projectors, you figure. The air in here, even deadened by the timestop, has a faintly antiseptic scent.

But that's not really what draws your attention. What does is the massive, bladed pendulum hanging down from the unusually high ceiling - if not for the timestop, the words 'careening madly' should probably be applied. You... knew that she had one, from your memories, but actually seeing it in person is something else. You stop and stare at it, as does Mami.

"Is that a hologram?" Mami asks, still staring up at the pendulum.

No response. You look around for Homura, and don't see her. The ribbon binding you to her leads into one of the side rooms, and you tap Mami on the shoulder, pointing at it. "Homura?"

"Here," she replies, voice floating out of that room. You walk over, picking your way around the sofas, to find that this room apparently serves as Homura's armory. There's a table with a reading lamp and a viceclamp on the side. While there aren't any guns lying around -why would there be, when Homura can keep them in her shield?-, but you can smell the gun oil in the air, and lying on the table are cleaning rods of various kinds, as well as wirebrushes and so forth.

Homura's peering under the table as you walk in. "Nothing?" you ask.

She shakes her head. "Nothing."

"Anyway... I think that after we finish up here, we should go back to Mami's apartment and stop there," you say, choosing your words carefully.

"As I said earlier, you and Mami may leave the hunt," Homura repeats, standing and frowning at you.

"No, I mean we, Homura. You're pushing yourself too hard," you say. "I think..."

[] Write-in argument
[] Ask about the pendulum
[] Something else?


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Minor edit to the last update, incidentally; you brought your bag of Grief with you.

"I... look. What I said earlier is still true, Homura. We're just getting tired, while Oriko is still fresh, and she has Kirika, and possibly one more magical girl to help her," you say, thinking furiously. A footstep behind you; Mami following you into the room.

"I can rest in the timestop, as you've demonstrated," Homura says flatly. "It's more important t-"

"Will you?" you snap, eyebrows arched high. "You know, the fact that you actually fell asleep like that says something. Like, for example, that you haven't been resting properly, timestop or no."

"And?" Homura replies evenly.

"You- ugh," you break off when Mami puts a supporting hand on your shoulder. "Look. We're tired, and Oriko has had enough time to plan this out, and well enough that she could get to us inside the timestop. Remember the mine back there?" You wave a hand at your leg to emphasize. "What if she gets you with something like that while Mami and I aren't around?"

"I can still heal myself," the time traveller replies implacably. "It just takes time and Grief Seeds."

And of course Homura, of all people, would have plenty of both.

You open your mouth, but you're out of reasons. Reasons that you feel you can bring up, anyway.

"Homura..." Mami says, her hand dropping from your shoulder as she steps forward. Her voice is gentle, consoling, what you'd use to talk to a distraught child. "Why... why are you so determined to hunt down Oriko? I was -I am- furious with what she's done... but... what has she done to deserve your, your hatred?"

Homura stares at Mami, a flicker of emotion you don't catch crossing her face. "It's not your concern, Tomoe Mami."

The blonde flinches, but her face sets in determination. "Homura, we're trying to help."

[] Intervene
- [] How?
[] Let Homura reply
[] Write-in


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Short update today. You would have asked about the pendulum, but Mami had her own ideas.

It's your turn to put a hand on Mami's shoulder, tugging her back lightly. She turns questioningly to look at you, and you shake your head, no.

"Homura, you're running yourself ragged," you say, meeting her gaze steadily. She doesn't deny it, eyes sliding away from yours - not in impatience, but rather that she can't quite seem to meet your gaze. "Whatever your opinions on Oriko are... you, your health, are more important. The only real lasting effect that Oriko's had on us so far, with this incident? This-" you pat your bag full of Grief marbles, "-and the three of us being tired. You especially." And, you add to yourself, Mami now actually caring enough about Homura to give a damn, you suppose.

Homura doesn't reply, gazing at a point somewhere near your feet. You sigh. "If you still want to continue... well. I'm still happy to cleanse for you. Just... please be careful, Homura. And don't stay out for too long, OK?"

Homura still doesn't reply, and you hold out a hand to her. "C'mon Homura. Let us help you."

Violet eyes meet yours, inscrutable and implacable once again. "You wanted to go back to Mami's house, correct?" She walks past you, leaving the room.

You sigh heavily and look at Mami helplessly. She's half turned, one hand out in an aborted gesture to grab Homura. She can only shake her head back at you, golden eyes looking lost.

Well, there's nothing for it, is there? You really can't force Homura of all people to stop.

The two of you follow Homura out, your eyes drawn with all the inevitability of gravity up to the pendulum. You really want to ask about the pendulum.

You really want to ask about the pendulum.

You... "Hey Homura, on a completely unrelated topic, uh... why the pendulum?"

Homura stops in her tracks, and turns to look at you with a raised eyebrow. Mami, by your side, very slowly palms her face.

"I like it," Homura says simply. Her eyes track up to it. "It reminds me of..." she trails off, looking lost for a moment, before recovering and stalking out of the apartment.

"Sabrina..." Mami groans into her hand, shaking her head.

"What?" you ask defensively. "I wanted to know."

"Oh, Sabrina," Mami says, lifting her face from her hand and favouring you with a smile and a shake of her head. "Nothing gets you down, does it."

You shrug as you follow Homura out of the apartment.

The three of you journey back to Mami's apartment in silence, each lost in your own thoughts. Mami opens the door, and you file in silently.

"Um. How does this work, Homura?" Mami asks, looking at the time traveller.

Homura plucks at the ribbon around her waist. "You just need to disconnect the ribbon."

"Um. OK," Mami says, sitting on the sofa, and spending a minute to fuss with her skirt, and then her clothes, flicking off invisible specks of dust. She pats the sofa beside her, looking at you invitingly.

"You won't even notice. Just dissolve the ribbon," Homura says, looking slightly bemused at Mami's antics.

"I..."

She's scared, you realize.

And you guess you can see why - time continues, in a fashion, and it doesn't involve her. It's... somewhat existentially disturbing, you suppose.

You sit down on the sofa beside her, and give her an encouraging smile. "It's nothing, Mami. It's not like Homura hasn't done it before, right? Used the timestop, I mean."

"I guess," she admits, returning your smile. Now looking determined, she looks at Homura, and dissolves the rib-

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-bons.

You blink.

Homura's crossed the distance to stand in front of you, and is now looking down at you. She has a hand on your shoulder to bring you into the time stop. Beside you, Mami is frozen in hues of grey, still looking at where Homura was.

"Hi, Homura," you sigh. "How long has it been? Any news?"

"I haven't gone looking yet," she replies. She's wearing an expression you've never seen before on her face - she looks lost, and she's looking down, unwilling to meet your gaze. "You... why do you care?"

[] Pull Mami in.
[] Say something
- [] What?
[] Write-in


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There are, as is usual, more than one layer to Homura's reactions.
 
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I'll try to read that tonight.

Also, I have trouble with arguments wrapped in narratives. The emotion and drama of the narrative get tangled up with the emphases in the actual argument and I find that disentangling the confusion is time-consuming, error-prone, and emotionally exhausting, especially when the narrative is that of the poster rather than that of any of the characters. Can you please try to at least give me a clean, declarative introduction paragraph with a clear thesis statement so I know what I'm looking for in all of that?
 
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@Vebyast
I appreciate that you are mostly attacking votes and arguments, as opposed to people, and I definitely appreciate the passion for my Quest. That said, please cut back on the vitriol in your posts.

@Kaizuki
Vebyast does have a point - the wall of quotes is difficult to parse. Try summarizing it?

@The Phoenixian
I'm going to ask you to extend @Vebyast the benefit of the doubt and try and work with him on this in good faith.
 
Vebyast does have a point - the wall of quotes is difficult to parse. Try summarizing it?

I literally quoted twenty chapters and summarized highlights from them, and exchanged your name for the chapter titles on them. It is not intended to be parsed, it is not something meant to be read in a go or something like that. The story only thread serves that purpose. It is there as a quick reference so that I can cite chapters by title in the post.

It sure as hell does take up too much space, though, and-- ooooh I'm stupid lemme go spoiler that.

I'll try to read that tonight.

Also, I have trouble with arguments wrapped in narratives. The emotion and drama of the narrative get tangled up with the emphases in the actual argument and I find that disentangling the confusion is time-consuming, error-prone, and emotionally exhausting, especially when the narrative is that of the poster rather than that of any of the characters. Can you please try to at least give me a clean, declarative introduction paragraph with a clear thesis statement so I know what I'm looking for in all of that?

Literally go in there and keep track of what Mami says about and how she acts towards Homura, alongside how much time has passed. If you do that -- just watch for the Mami-Homura stuff and keep an eye on roughly how much time has passed since the start of DI 3 in-character -- everything I want you to see should actually just jump off the page and on to your face. 90% of everything else in there can be skimmed or outright ignored. Turns out, Mami basically went from thinking Homura was the enemy to caring about her and wanting to help her in literally a single event, albeit an extended one, and it's going to be pretty hard for Mami to not remember it. The only reason I'm citing so many chapters is that it's spread out so much that it ends up being one thing per chapter, basically, and it's not so bad because this is back when chapters averaged 800 words.
 
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.... I feel like RL vs quest time flows distored and masked the about face Mami did on Homura.

To use it SEEMED gradual enough.

Really it was really quick
 
So, at this point I think I have to go and explicate why I believe that that prompt would lead Mami to share information that'd be sufficiently reliable, accurate, and informative about why she cares about Homura, and to do that I need you to come with me on a...

(2)

Field trip.
I........ WAT
OKAY THATS A THING
I don't think you, or anyone else in the thread had the insanity to watch past about twenty seconds into that.
I am shook

also hit damn, now I have a compulsion to just read the entire story only thread again
 
@The Phoenixian
I'm going to ask you to extend @Vebyast the benefit of the doubt and try and work with him on this in good faith.
I'll do what I can, but for the sake of my sanity I believe it would be best if Vebyast and I interacted as little as possible.

I don't want to say more than necessary about the ignore function but I would instead encourage Vebyast to respond in kind.

I have considered him a friend, and the loss hurts, but we have fought far too often, every time accumulates, and I cannot keep doing this.

I'll try to respond to his last points and the thread's latest when I can get myself back under control.
 
you know if we ever figure out how to witch out for superpowers like they do in rebellion, we Could be boring and just refer to them by our witch names, or we could be cool and come up with a pop music reference from the eighties and a dramatic pose :V
 
.... I feel like RL vs quest time flows distored and masked the about face Mami did on Homura.

To use it SEEMED gradual enough.

Really it was really quick

Yeah, pretty much. In the planning phase, I was thinking about this whole thing, and I got to a point where I decided I had to go and see where and how Mami's opinion of Homura changed, and then I read through that thing and clocked the IC time and just sat there and cackled for like five minutes afterward because holy fuck.

It also really underscores Oriko's actions. Imagine if she'd been able to pull off more things -- would we have had similar results with Kyouko, for instance? What she did was wrong, but under a magnifying glass it sure as fuck worked as intended.
 
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It also really underscores Oriko's actions. Imagine if she'd been able to pull off more things -- would we have had similar results with Kyouko, for instance? What she did was wrong, but under a magnifying glass it sure as fuck worked as intended.

Oh...
Oh no.
Oriko can not find out about this. Otherwise the aloof Ojou smugness levels will be positively apocalyptic. :o
 
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I literally quoted twenty chapters and summarized highlights from them, and exchanged your name for the chapter titles on them. It is not intended to be parsed, it is not something meant to be read in a go or something like that. The story only thread serves that purpose. It is there as a quick reference so that I can cite chapters by title in the post.

It sure as hell does take up too much space, though, and-- ooooh I'm stupid lemme go spoiler that.



Literally go in there and keep track of what Mami says about and how she acts towards Homura, alongside how much time has passed. If you do that -- just watch for the Mami-Homura stuff and keep an eye on roughly how much time has passed since the start of DI 3 in-character -- everything I want you to see should actually just jump off the page and on to your face. 90% of everything else in there can be skimmed or outright ignored. Turns out, Mami basically went from thinking Homura was the enemy to caring about her and wanting to help her in literally a single event, albeit an extended one, and it's going to be pretty hard for Mami to not remember it. The only reason I'm citing so many chapters is that it's spread out so much that it ends up being one thing per chapter, basically, and it's not so bad because this is back when chapters averaged 800 words.
The issue isn't how much space your post takes up, it's that the way you posted something is a way that the other party in the discussion can't readily parse without exhausting mental work, and a way that you know can't be readily parsed. When you're reminded of this expressly, your response basically amounts to "Fuck you, read it anyway," which not only isn't helpful, it's also actively harmful to the discussion as a whole. Considering that, again, you know this is an issue, as it's been stated directly to you on multiple previous occasions, I'm left with two clear impressions -- that you're specifically formulating your arguments to be unreadable to your opposition, and that you're specifically arguing in such a way as to rile up your opposition. I would strongly suggest that you rectify this immediately.
 
The issue isn't how much space your post takes up, it's that the way you posted something is a way that the other party in the discussion can't readily parse without exhausting mental work, and a way that you know can't be readily parsed. When you're reminded of this expressly, your response basically amounts to "Fuck you, read it anyway," which not only isn't helpful, it's also actively harmful to the discussion as a whole. Considering that, again, you know this is an issue, as it's been stated directly to you on multiple previous occasions, I'm left with two clear impressions -- that you're specifically formulating your arguments to be unreadable to your opposition, and that you're specifically arguing in such a way as to rile up your opposition. I would strongly suggest that you rectify this immediately.

What part of any of this needs to be urgent?

@Vebyast, I've frequently known @Godwinson to act as a spokesperson for you. Let me be clear: whatever your schedule is right now, this just doesn't have to be made to fit into it. There is no reason for you to be rushing this or to feel like I am rushing you. If you want to insist that we resolve this before this coming vote, we can ask Firnagzen for a delay. Otherwise, this could literally be resolved over, like, an entire IC day. We can separate the parts that have anything to do with what you proposed from the parts that have anything to do with what I'm proposing, vote in the parts that are relevant for right now, and this will not be a time constraint on the current vote or any vote which will occur in the next multiple months.

At what point did the relationship between the two of you and me move to a place where Godwinson is here excoriating me for bloody asking people to re-read things that are relevant to my argument?

You once commended me for going really deep with my thinking. This is me doing that. What's followed has been me now trying to communicate to you what I've found, when I can manage it, in what ways I can manage it. Nothing more. Nothing less.

I've been frustrated, at some points, in the course of it, and I don't like that -- I find myself getting angry and I think, this is not good, I shouldn't be getting angry with these people, I know them, I spent years having productive conversation with them. And so I apologize for that.

I only want two things. I want you two to try to understand what I'm trying to convey to you, because I genuinely think I've found -- again, I will say, because I hope that what I've accomplished in the past still has any value to you -- something of great import. And I want you two to not rush into voting something in that tries to make use of what I've found until I'm sure you actually understand it.

That's it.

That's it.

Give me that. Please.
 
What part of any of this needs to be urgent?

@Vebyast, I've frequently known @Godwinson to act as a spokesperson for you. Let me be clear: whatever your schedule is right now, this just doesn't have to be made to fit into it. There is no reason for you to be rushing this or to feel like I am rushing you. If you want to insist that we resolve this before this coming vote, we can ask Firnagzen for a delay. Otherwise, this could literally be resolved over, like, an entire IC day. We can separate the parts that have anything to do with what you proposed from the parts that have anything to do with what I'm proposing, vote in the parts that are relevant for right now, and this will not be a time constraint on the current vote or any vote which will occur in the next multiple months.

At what point did the relationship between the two of you and me move to a place where Godwinson is here excoriating me for bloody asking people to re-read things that are relevant to my argument?
I was speaking on my own behalf, because you're looking like an asshole here, and this? This is not helping matters.

Because it's not "oh, go re-read things". It's being asked to make your bloody argument readable, and your response amounting to "No, fuck you, go re-read it until you understand."

So you know what? Helpful exercise -- reframe it to give your argument in a 300 word count post. No quotes, no "go read all of this", no "go reread the story and then look at it with my argument in mind". Give your argument, directly, itself, in 300 words or less.
Adhoc vote count started by Godwinson on May 19, 2019 at 9:20 AM, finished with 189 posts and 16 votes.

  • [x] Give Madoka and Homura some time alone together.
    -[x] Talk to Mami a bit more about Homura. You want to make it clear to her how much better she made tonight, especially for Madoka, but you think she has trouble understanding why people care about her and you're not quite sure how to approach it without addressing that first. You explained to her why you care, but for something this personal you can't really speak for anyone else.
    [x] Over dinner:
    -[x] Have some fun brainstorming more defensive enchantments and potential tests for those enchantments (up to and including griefhax, if it'd be sufficiently useful to offset the time cost).
    [x] If you have to dispel any griefhax devices constructed using enchanted grief, use the opportunity to see if you can recover the enchanted grief by moving it outside your range.
    [x] Politics discussion
    -[x] Refine the "be kind to each other" statement - you do recognize that a functioning justice system is ultimately a threat of force; you have been completely explicit about your intent to drop the hammer on people that abuse Clear Seeds.
    --[x] You'd just prefer less "20 angry magical girls at your front door" and more "modern policing organization".
    [x] After Madoka and Sayaka leave:
    -[x] Observe to Homura that tonight might be the happiest you've ever seen Madoka.
    --[x] Madoka has self-worth issues, right? She needs to feel like she's contributing, and she doubts herself and needs friends to support her and convince her that she's doing okay.
    --[x] Homura's been helping with both of those. You think that Madoka finds the politics really satisfying, and having Homura around seemed to make Madoka happy. It's good to see.
    --[x] Homura needs to know that this isn't something you're coming up with yourself and it'd help if she understood why people care about her and are doing this, so:
    ---[X] Give Mami an opening to chime in, following your earlier conversation.
    ---[X] Point out some of what Sayaka was doing. *Don't* suggest romance, but even small details would be strong evidence of Sayaka's trust and would help Homura believe that she's the one responsible for Madoka's happiness tonight.
    --[x] Note that this vote tries to stick to observations that are safe outside time stop - you specifically want to help Homura stop feeling like she has to hide everything about herself and her relationships.
    [x] After you finish talking to Homura:
    -[x] TO THE INTERNETS
    [X] Dinner!
    -[X] Have fun coming up with potential enchantments and potential tests for those enchantments, you can hax in anything you can think of after all, even if it takes time. Allow sillyness. Bemoan that you don't have a devil here so you can't ask for her help in this. A Mara type would great for testing defenses against illusions.
    [X] Look for opportunities to give Homura and Madoka time to themselves.
    [X] Addendum to science vote: expansion of intention and specifics:
    -[x] Prepare emotion enchanted grief to try Homura's mind reading suggestion as you have time and aren't occupied by other concerns.
    --[x] Focus on emotions and desires akin to mind-reading: Your desire to understand yourself and others, to communicate, and to help them understand each other, and the times where you have succeeded in getting through across those divides. Finally getting your feelings through to Mami. Giving Homura insight into Sayaka. Watching Sayaka's understanding of and relationship with Homura develop over the weeks.
    -[x] Try to recycle the enchanted grief after your done with it, using the edge of your range to reset it. Save some for later if you can.
    --[x] If recycling worked, run through the best of the proposed tests.
    [X] Internet vote in abeyance.
    [X] Talk scheduling: How would everyone feel about spending Saturdays hanging out and/or doing administrative stuff as needed and Sundays taking trips outside the city for cleansing, recruitment, etc?
    [X] Shiogama girls: Check in, ask how they've been. Ask if they're interested in private discussion tomorrow afternoon or being introduced to other groups around town sometime afternoon.
    [x] After Madoka and Sayaka leave:
    -[x] Observe that tonight might be the happiest you've ever seen Madoka.
    --[x] Madoka has self-worth issues, right? She needs to feel like she's contributing, and she doubts herself and needs friends to support her and convince her that she's doing okay... And, it seems like Homura being around has been helping with it too. It's good to see.
    ---[X] Let/cue Mami to comment on that, too. (Establish that this isn't just something you're coming up with)
    ----[X] Even Sayaka seems to think so -- she spent most of tonight giving Homura opportunities to be around Madoka.
    [x] Hug Mami
    [x] Kaizuki
    [X] Veb
 
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What part of any of this needs to be urgent?

I think the problem is that it feels as though you could make the argument simpler and more accessible and are refusing to out of spite, which is arguably against the rules of SV itself to the tune of some variety of bad faith debating.

Don't quote me on that, I'm not 100% sure, I'm just lending my two cents in as an attempt at an impartial observer.

If absolutely every line you quoted is utterly crucial and indispensable to your argument then fine, keep them all, but if you want people to understand, it behooves you to try and make your point more accessible and more comprehensible wherever you can as long as it does not sacrifice meaning to do so.

And I admit, while I'm not prepared to wholly discount the possibility, I would be pretty surprised if there wasn't some way you could tl;dr the whole argument down to a paragraph or two instead of a wall of quoted text.

The problem right now isn't with your argument, it's with the way it's presented.
 
I think the problem is that it feels as though you could make the argument simpler and more accessible and are refusing to out of spite, which is arguably against the rules of SV itself to the tune of some variety of bad faith debating.

Don't quote me on that, I'm not 100% sure, I'm just lending my two cents in as an attempt at an impartial observer.

If absolutely every line you quoted is utterly crucial and indispensable to your argument then fine, keep them all, but if you want people to understand, it behooves you to try and make your point more accessible and more comprehensible wherever you can as long as it does not sacrifice meaning to do so.

And I admit, while I'm not prepared to wholly discount the possibility, I would be pretty surprised if there wasn't some way you could tl;dr the whole argument down to a paragraph or two instead of a wall of quoted text.

The problem right now isn't with your argument, it's with the way it's presented.

I did give a TLDR!

But I can give a cliff notes.

See, as it turns out, when we show up Monday, March 28th after school, Mami is working herself up to fight and potentially kill Homura, and then in the AM hours of Thursday March 31 -- so, ~24 + 24 + 10 = ~60 hours later -- we have the timestop.

And it turns out, if you are looking for it, that in that timestop, in the chapters between Direct Intervention 5 and Direct Intervention 28 (inclusive), in a period of what I'd guess is about four to five hours, Mami's entire stance towards Homura does a 180 and then some.

In Direct Intervention 5, Mami cooly -- and unwelcomingly -- greets Homura's arrival with a tiny, fractional incline of her head. Her attitude clearly conveys to the reader that Homura is no friend of hers.

By Direct Intervention 16, Mami is inviting her back to her apartment and cooking for her.

By Direct Intervention 19, Mami is saying "-I threatened to kill Homura the first time we met! And now look at her! I- I, I don't think..."

By Direct Intervention 23, we have what is probably the most important line of all, "Do you think..." Mami frowns. "She's really worried about Oriko, isn't she? Do you think she's been out looking for her?" (1)

Direct Intervention 25, Mami is pressing Homura to rest more and not push herself too hard.

Direct Intervention 26, "Homura... needs someone to look after her, doesn't she?"

Direct Intervention 27, "Homura, we're trying to help."


This is across four. to. five. hours. And it's accompanied by a variety of highly emotional moments, up to and including what adds up to "I was going to kill this girl... and she's just trying to defend people. She needs friends. She needs people to care. She's a good person."

I gave it right there! Before any of this stuff! That was it! That was the tldr!

I do not understand what more to give. I'm not fucking lying, okay? I don't understand. I know how I got what I got. I've tried my best to convey it. What replies exist in the thread seem to indicate understanding.

What the actual fucking hell am I supposed to do? Go take communication classes? It's the middle of the fucking semester and while I am struggling less with my ongoing issues, I am still struggling with them! But every single fucking time, the first I hear out of anybody is "fuck you for not making this more understandable." I DO NOT KNOW HOW! I have contributed some very valuable things to this quest. I would appreciate it if people would fucking work with me when I'm trying to make things understandable for them, because oftentimes, it is genuinely not easy for me. I have genuinely enjoyed what I have felt has been a polite and productive dialogue between myself and Vebyast over the last dozen or so hours. This post, right here?

Ah, that quote from Homura explains a lot.

And now I think I better understand why I reacted so badly to your original vote; it feels like you're trying to tell Mami why she cares about Homura. That's not exactly true, since it probably is the case that "how Mami's internal opinion of Homura changed over time" will capture the important information without pushing it in the wrong direction (e.g. the real reason probably isn't something like "well, Sabrina obviously cares about you, so..."), but I don't know if that prompt would lead Mami to share information that'd be sufficiently reliably accurate and informative about why she cares about Homura, especially because Homura would have to pick through it to figure out "why Mami cares about her" herself, which I don't think she's going to realize she should do or be able to do without explicit prompting.

You should have seen the goddamn smile on my face when I read that. That was fucking satisfying. Something I did worked. I got part of what I'm trying to convey across to a person I care about conveying it to.

And right now I'm fucking tearing up.

I am not here to fuck with you Godwinson.

I am here strictly for the purpose I bloody came here for in the first place: I want the characters of this quest to be happier. That's fucking it. I don't know when we moved to this place where I can't try to talk to you anymore, but it's bloody killing me and I don't know what the hell to do about it.

You wanted me to try harder?

I am fucking trying harder.

I AM FUCKING TRYING HARDER!

Now either treat me with a bare minimum of respect, or by GOD--

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@Firnagzen. @Higure. @ManusDomini. Somebody remove me from this thread for at least a day. I want some time to avoid saying something I will regret more than what I already have said.
 
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