I think the link is broken? Or maybe I can't see it because I'm on mobile.

Edit: In any case, in PMAS Oriko was out of commission after Homura basically decapitated her. Then again, Sabrina could be different in virtue of being weird.
 
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Oh that doesn't work either, no idea what my problem is🤷‍♀️


View: https://imgur.com/a/98S5cB6

I think it might have something to do with my connection or IP if that makes sense? Cause I can't see any imgur images. Can't even embed the above link. Oh well. Thanks for the effort tho.
 
Oh that doesn't work either, no idea what my problem is🤷‍♀️


View: https://imgur.com/a/98S5cB6

I think it might have something to do with my connection or IP if that makes sense? Cause I can't see any imgur images. Can't even embed the above link. Oh well. Thanks for the effort tho.

let me just copy the link directly, so that you can paste it on your browser:
View: https://imgur.com/lyL8Ejy there you go, this should do the trick.
https://imgur. com/lyL8Ejy
 
Hazard Course Pt. 15
"Yeah, nah," you say, frowning after a moment's of thought. "If they're friendly, then that's our mistake. But I don't think anything good'll come of letting them make the first move."

"Correct answer," Kyouko drawls, quirking an eyebrow down at you. "Gotta say, was half expecting you to want to talk it out."

You roll your eyes. A test, huh?

"I'm not that bad," you say, scowling up at her with your own eyebrow raised. "I mean, I've been expecting hostiles the entire day, and here they are. I'm... optimistic, not dumb."

"Cool," Kyouko says, planting her spear point-down on the top of the trellis so she can slouch against it, balancing in stark defiance of the narrow strips of wood beneath her feet. "So. What's next?"

... that's still a test, but hey. You have an answer for this.

"I'm going to let Mami and Homura know," you say. "Just in case - we should be fine, but let's be sure. As for our probably-Souju ambushers... honestly, Kyouko, I'm delegating and leaving it in your hands. What's our play? And... how long do we have to figure out a plan, anyway? They can sense us from outside, yeah?"

Kyouko snorts, relaxing deliberately and putting a gentle hand on Yuma's shoulder. Yuma glances up at Kyouko at the touch, then draws in a deep breath and straightens, planting the head of her mace in the wood and likewise relaxing.

"Lazy option, but 'aight," she says. "We've got 'bout half an hour to talk it out, tops. Any magical girl can get a sense of what's happening in a Barrier, but pinpointing what's happening 's a non-starter." She scowls. "Easiest way outta this is to have someone else hit them from behind, but I take it that's not an option, Miss Goody Two Shoes?"

"I..." You scrub your hand through your hair, looking out at the deceptively idyllic strawberry farmscape of the Barrier and the mottled brown sky above. "No, I'd rather not."

"Mmmkay," Kyouko says. "Then we gotta hit them hard and fast the moment we exit the Barrier. Focus on one, knock her down and punch through. Equal numbers of us and them, but we should be able to break out."

"Hey, uh - we just need a distraction, right? I could do it," Sayaka says. "I'll get rid of this clone and duck out to the toilet at school to send a new one out. Then we'd just coordinate by telepathy?"

"Could work," Kyouko says. "Pincer them in."

"Actually, on that note, Kyouko-" you say, frowning and raising a finger. "Four bodies, or four Soul Gems?"

Kyouko scowls, drumming her fingers on the haft of her spear as she thinks it through.

"I'm... not sure," she concedes.

"Right," you say. You can feel your frown deepen. "It's not impossible that the Soujus have accomplices, but given that we know she's a Soul Gem collector, it might just be, uh, one body? And... Oriko was having trouble picking her out too, so it's possible that she fooled your senses?"

"Why four though?" Sayaka asks. "There's... just the two Soujus, right?"

"Assume the worst case," Kyouko grunts. "Assume there's four of 'em, and if there's only one, great, that makes life easier for us getting out of this."

"Right..." You run your hand through your hair again, thinking. Well, you've decided you're going to let Kyouko take the lead on this because hell, she's the veteran here. You might prefer to try and talk it out, but... hostile actions are hostile actions, and if it's a misunderstanding, you'll make amends after the fact.

"Alright, so... am I getting rid of this clone or nah?" Sayaka asks.

"Hang on a sec," Kyouko says. "So, the plan's simple, because fancy gets you killed. Three steps. One, we need t' make it seem like we haven't noticed them. That means we kill the Witch as we normally would, call it twenty minutes from now, and that's two: we coordinate and distract them at the same time 's the Barrier vomits us out. Step three is that we come out swinging and hit them from both sides. You follow?"

"Right, yeah," Sayaka says, frowning. "It'll be maybe five minutes from here to... uh, from school to here."

"Ten," Kyouko says. "Don't rush it, you gotta stay hidden."

Sayaka nods, her expression tight.

"And you..." Kyouko slants a look at you, crimson eyes narrowed. "Sabs, you go tell Mami first."

"And Homura," you add, raising your eyebrow. "And come to that, the Kures and the Shiogama girls too."

It's not like you don't understand what she's saying. Mami... Mami's never been one to sit by idly, has she? And Kyouko has a point there, too. You've always done your best to ensure that school time is sacrosanct for your friends, but with Sayaka here, the walls are already breaking down, and you can't see Mami not wanting to come and help, class attendance be damned.

"Sure, whatever," Kyouko says, rolling her eyes. "C'mon, let's go find the Witch. There's Familiars to get through first."

She takes off at a dash, spear slung low at her side and boots dancing featherlight over the wooden trellises. Yuma launches herself after, while you and Sayaka decide to stay on the ground level, Sayaka shooting you a slightly nervous grin as she takes the rear. Nerves, but that's only to be expected, you suppose.

The easier ones first, then. Also the ones that give you just a bit of trepidation as you reach out across Mitakihara with telepathy.

In a way, Watanabe Noriko's the opposite of Ayase and Luca Souju - where they're two magical girls sharing a body, Noriko's a single magical girl in two bodies. A rather delightful symmetry, in many aspects, and some small voice of paranoia can't help but whisper that the Soujus might have wanted to look in on them.

Surely they'd have called for help if they'd been attacked, though.

"Miss Watanabe?" you say.

"Miss Sabrina?" The girl responds quickly, the sound of her mental voice sending relief flooding through your veins even as you can picture her face - faces, rather, both of her bodies bending in worry that bleeds through to the telepathy. "What is it? Is there trouble?"

"I... well, I apologise for being the bearer of bad news," you say. "We're working on handling it, but the Soul Gem thieves I warned you about are in Mitakihara. Currently they're stalking me and a couple of my friends, and we're confident of handling them, but I thought you deserved a warning."

"Oh," Noriko says. "Ah... I, well, Akemi and I are out shopping right now? We can come and help if you need to?"

"There's no need," you say firmly. "We're reasonably confident - we'll call for help if we really need it, but it's not your responsibility."

"We live here now, Miss Sabrina," Noriko disagrees politely. "But... if you're sure, I admit it would be a relief."

"I'm sure," you say. "Enjoy your shopping trip."

"It's just for groceries, but thank you," Noriko says.

And that's that for the Shiogama girls. You feel like you should go visit them more. They'd moved to Mitakihara to escape memories and trauma, and sure, giving them a new place to stay is something, but it doesn't feel like it's enough. Still, it seems they're well for now, and apparently ignored by the Soujus. The next call, then.

"Oriko?" you ask telepathically.

"Sabrina? What's happening?" There's a note of frustration bleeding into Oriko's mental voice - frustration and stress.

"We've noticed magical girls that are presumably the Soujus camping outside a Barrier that we're currently in," you say. "They haven't bothered you, yeah?"

"They're- what?" The frustration turns to annoyance. "I- I still can't see them."

"Hey, it's OK, Oriko," you say. "They might be running some kind of anti-scrying measure?"

"That is... unfortunate," Oriko says, the annoyance now restrained. "I apologise for not being able to warn you in time, Sabrina. Are you well? Do you require our aid?"

"Not now, and... the apology is unnecessary, Oriko, but accepted anyway. You've done plenty, watching my back like this, and if a few issues slip through the crack, that's fine." you say. You could point out that she'd given you the warning far back, but you doubt that's a good tack to take. "And I just wanted to check that you and Kirika were safe, actually."

"We are," Oriko says. "What's your current plan?"

"We're planning a counterambush," you say. "Well, Kyouko is - I left it in her hands."

"I see," Oriko says. "Then... I wish you the best of luck. Please do tell me if you need help."

"I will," you say, exhaling as you end the call. Just in time, as Sayaka swings her sword out, pointing.

"Up there!" Sayaka calls. You follow her eyes to the skyline, then up to the towering walls clawing to the blotchy brown sky in jagged crenellations of translucent, plasticky material and stretching from horizon to horizon.

"That'll be it," Kyouko shouts back, slowing to a jog, her footsteps light atop the strawberry-laden trellises. "Slow, now, we've got time. Sabs, how's those calls coming?"

"Working on it!" you say.

The last two to inform about the Soujus: Homura, and Mami. Homura would be glad for the warning, and more than willing to stay to guard Madoka. Mami, on the other hand... you worry for her. School is important, dammit, but you're not sure she'd be willing to stay, not with you potentially under attack. And you admit, you'd be glad for her help, but it sits poorly with you to interrupt that.

[] Don't tell Mami about the Soujus
[] Tell Mami about the Soujus
- [] Try and persuade her not to come and help?
-- [] Write-in (word count limit: 150 words)


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And we're back! A shorter update this time, but on the upside, the next update should come quicker this weekend, if only because I already had a good chunk written before Sabrina barged into my head and pointed out that she knows Mami would have Opinions. :V
 
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Look, all I'm saying is, as much as we don't want Mami to get hurt, she and Homura in timestop can kill 99% of all Magical Girls period.
 
[X] Tell Mami about the Soujus
- [X] Her decision if she wants to excuse herself to go stomp a mud hole.

I ain't gonna restrict her, though I'd prefer things be couched in her just missing a few minutes of class rather than skipping the rest of the day.
 
Just in general, we want her to be strong and independent. Deciding to hide this ambush from her is the same as making the decision to stay in school for her. She deserves to know and deserves to make the decision herself.
 
Absolutely no way do we hide this from Mami.

The way we bring it up will matter, will affect how she wants to handle this, but there's no way trying to not bring it up at all will end well.

I will throw hands on this!
 
As a compromise on the "school is important" issue, maybe we could suggest that Mami act as a deadman switch? She can stay in school for now and ping us telepathically every minute or two, and if we don't answer then she and Homura come bail us out under timestop.
 
Not telling her is out of the question and I don't think there's any way Mami will stay in class once she knows. Especially since we told her the Soujus were gonna come for Sabrina's Soul Gem.

We should reassure her that the situation is under control and maybe have her join Sayaka's clone after updating Kyouko?
 
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Yeah, meguca combat is quick enough that Mami can probably zip out and back disguised as a nurse trip. She's probably going to want to come.
 
[X] Tell Mami about the Soujus
- [X] Her decision if she wants to excuse herself to go stomp a mud hole.

education be dammed:mad::mad::mad: Homura probably has a copy of this month's curriculum, so it's not as important:p
 
2 things.

We should concretely address the Shiogama's girls legitimate concerns about defending their new home. We're making an army to defeat wally, we really should make sure our army's role is clear, and not based on conscripting everybody in reach. Perhaps a noncombatant, militia, and army proper division?

Easiest way outta this is to have someone else hit them from behind, but I take it that's not an option, Miss Goody Two Shoes?"

"I..." You scrub your hand through your hair, looking out at the deceptively idyllic strawberry farmscape of the Barrier and the mottled brown sky above. "No, I'd rather not."
Why not? Wouldn't an attacker from the rear help us and even provide confirmation of their identity? We don't want to sound the alarm for our out of town allies or give the game away to our attackers, but getting help moving shouldn't be off the table.
 
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[X] Tell Mami about the Soujus
-[X] Convince her to be the card in hand in case the ambush goes badly


Maybe her and Homura can be in the bathroom at the same time as the ambush just in case.
 
That four keeps bothering me... Don't the Soujus usually keep their collection on them? If what Kyouko is sensing are the Soul Gems that is.

Maybe we should ask Sayaka to pass her clone the vision power to see if she can give us more info since we have some time before the ambush.
Although it might not be great combat wise. There's also that comment of Sabrina about an anti-scrying technique. There could be some form of stealth involved
 
That four keeps bothering me... Don't the Soujus usually keep their collection on them? If what Kyouko is sensing are the Soul Gems that is.

Maybe we should ask Sayaka to pass her clone the vision power to see if she can give us more info since we have some time before the ambush.
Although it might not be great combat wise. There's also that comment of Sabrina about an anti-scrying technique. There could be some form of stealth involved

Considering no one we've asked has known about them, they might be newer than expected.

Actually considering that the other events in Kazumi Magica haven't happened yet it might make sense for the Soujus to not have a large fabergé egg collection just yet.
 
Yeah I don't post here much anymore but not telling Mami would be dumb from an operational perspective and catastrophic from a friendship/girlfriend perspective. It'd show a serious lack of trust and coddling. School is important, but not so important it can't ever be interrupted for emergencies. And given this is Mami's city, not telling her would basically be saying she's not really in charge and we'll hide things from her "for her own good". She's got enough issues without Sabs giving her that one.
 
Okay, clearly we're telling Mami, not that I had much doubt with this bunch.

And while school is important, a few missed classes isn't going to hurt all that badly. I'm for having her cut the rest if (when) she wants to come help. Hell, maybe call her or the school ourselves to make an excuse?
 
Personally, I don't think Mami needs to be on dead man's switch, and I wouldn't encourage her to stay in school- she might take that the wrong way, and frankly it being her city, I can't imagine she would take that plan without some pushback. Get Homura alone on dead man's switch, let Mami approach and engage along with Sayaka if need be.

It's her city. She's gonna show up to defend it, so may as well plan around that.

Edit: Also, Sabrina is being stalked by a girl that Mami once said about, quote: "Beat her into the ground." I find it unlikely she wants to listen to a math lecture instead of showing up to make sure things are okay in person.
 
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