A new franken vote way too late for it to matter. Oh well, might as well get it out there.

[x] Ask the Ishinomaki group why Sendai would want to take over their city. Is it truly two years of constant skirmishes over Kato, or something more?
[x] You said Sendai arrived early. When exactly were the negotiations supposed to take place?
[x] Ask Ishinomaki if they can contact the University Group and get them to pull out to meet with us
-[x] if successful, head over and meet with them directly. Otherwise, head over to Sendai.
[x] Goodbye for now. Maybe with a little luck, we can get things to settle down in a day or two.
[x] Wings to grief carpet. Time to leave. Next stop: Sendai
[x] Heal injuries.
[x] Fangirl Mami on her absolutely amazing fight, and don't leave Kirika out.
[x] Update Homura, via telepathy.
[x] Check if Mami can telepathy with Kato
Hmm, I can see why some parts of my vote are problematic i.e. the second point. How about this:

[x] Ask the Ishinomaki group why Sendai would want to take over their city. Is it truly two years of constant skirmishes over Kato, or something more? (Frame the question as befuddled curiosity) Since logically Sendai should have come after Mitakihara due to being in between Ishinomaki and Sendai and until recentlly, less well-defended.
[x] You said Sendai arrived early. When exactly were the negotiations supposed to take place?
[x] Ask Ishinomaki if they can contact the University Group and get them to pull out to meet with us
-[x] if successful, head over and meet with them directly. Otherwise, head over to Sendai.
[x] Exchange contact details with the Ishinomaki group i.e. cell phones numbers, emails etc, ask for University group's contact details.
[x] Goodbye for now. Maybe with a little luck, we can get things to settle down in a day or two.
[x] Wings to grief carpet. Time to leave. Next stop: Sendai
[x] Heal injuries.
[x] Fangirl Mami on her absolutely amazing fight, and don't leave Kirika out.
[x] Update Homura, via telepathy.
[x] Check if Mami can telepathy with Kato

I just added the exchanging of contact details, which is just being good neighbours. A small cost measure that could pay off in the future. And reworded your first point a bit more in the vein of my third point. I still think the 2nd point doesn't matter much but will keep it to satisfy others. Yeah its a minor change, that probably doesn't matter at this point since Firn's written the update (hooray).
 
Another point, this directly contradicts Ishinomaki's earlier statement! (in the first quote box). Yuuki said they'd already been contacted by the University group and were laying the ambush. They're lying about something. You don't get to assume being the "bigger person" then turning around and laying an ambush to kill at the behest of allies. Also note their reasoning "Oh shit, Akiko's here attack!" (see bolded). This comes off extremely odd.
This point has been addressed by Firnagzen:
Not a mistake, no, but now that I look at it, the way I phrased it isn't terribly clear, so I believe I'll clarify this bit, so, free info:

The timeline is as such: The University group contacts the Ishinomaki group, asks them for an alliance. They agree, but no concrete plans are made yet. When Akiko asks to talk, they also agree, decide to be the bigger person etc, etc, because [nope, not that generous]. When they find Akiko there early, though, they assume the worse (that Akiko's found about their alliance and stuff), and holler to the University group, and attack. This is why things kick off early and all that.

Incidentally, there's a relatively big hint, well, hinted at in there if you can find it.
 
[x] Emdeman

I really also want to know how Akiko allegedly contacted them to arrange a meeting. And how they allegedly contacted her, at her end, and how Kato allegedly contacted Sendai to ask to be healed.

Someone is fucking around, and I want to know who and why.
 
You thought it was a one of the warring factions' magical girl? Too bad! It was me! Sayaka-chan!

And then Homura had never been more pissed off in her entire life.
 
You thought it was a one of the warring factions' magical girl? Too bad! It was me! Sayaka-chan!

And then Homura had never been more pissed off in her entire life.
Both Akiko and Sayaka have blue hair...
Akiko's got water powers while Sayaka's powers are water themed...

Something... Fishy is going on here.
 
Maybe... Kato witched out in Ishinomaki, and neither group is willing to kill her witch. Akiko wants to try healing her with Rin, and blames the Ishinomaki girls. The Ishinomaki vets can't bring themselves to end a former comrade, and blame Akiko for causing the witchout.

[X] Emdeman
 
[X] Emdeman

There's a ton fishy about all of this, but I haven't been up for a full review and shadowruns lately. Going with Emdeman's version, though I feel direct questions will only get us so far.
 
A new franken vote way too late for it to matter. Oh well, might as well get it out there.

[] Ask the Ishinomaki group why Sendai would want to take over their city. Is it truly two years of constant skirmishes over Kato, or something more?
[] You said Sendai arrived early. When exactly were the negotiations supposed to take place?
[] Ask Ishinomaki if they can contact the University Group and get them to pull out to meet with us
-[] if successful, head over and meet with them directly. Otherwise, head over to Sendai.
[] Goodbye for now. Maybe with a little luck, we can get things to settle down in a day or two.
[] Wings to grief carpet. Time to leave. Next stop: Sendai
[] Heal injuries.
[] Fangirl Mami on her absolutely amazing fight, and don't leave Kirika out.
[] Update Homura, via telepathy.
[] Check if Mami can telepathy with Kato

Is Ishinomaki aware, the University group is under attack right now?
 
"We've Got Hostiles" pt. 13
You contemplate the bewildering array of information that's been presented to you - by Akiko, by Yuuki, by Aki... And really, the only conclusion you can draw is that something stinks. Someone, maybe more than someone, is lying, lying hard, and you're not sure who. Little contradictions everywhere.

"Yeah, actually. A few more things," you say slowly. "First... really two years of skirmishing over one girl? I mean, Mitakihara is closer to them than Ishinomaki, until recently, was... less well defended," you ask, barely-faked bewilderment in your voice. You are rather baffled, after all.

"Not hardly, with Tomoe Mami there," Aki says, jerking her chin at Mami. Ayaka looks chagrined at that, glancing away.

"More to the point," Yuuki says. "We don't really know."

"Yeah," Aki agrees, sobering. "Like, that's what she was screaming the first time, right? But why she keeps coming back?" She shrugs.

"You said that Sendai arrived early? When, exactly, were the negotiations supposed to take place?"

"Today," Yuuki replies. "Why?"

"No... Just thinking," You shake your head. "Nothing else... I guess we're pretty much done here. Oh, wait-" you glance at Mami and Kirika. "Anything you want to know?"

Mami shakes her head, honey blonde coils bouncing. "Nothing I can think of," she says.

"Nope," Kirika says.

"Oh, sorry," you say, a thought striking you. "One more thing. We're... probably going to go try talk to the University Group right now. Is there any chance you can contact them and ask them to pull out to meet us?"

Yuuki raises an eyebrow at you. "Ask them to meet you? Sure, I can do that," she says. "Ask them to pull out? Would you pull out of your home city?"

"Uh, not what I meant," you amend hastily. "I mean, retreat from Sendai, to talk to us?"

She frowns. "Still no. Like, you're fighting for your life, and someone asks you to stop, to talk? Just... go interrupt them or whatever. Like, you've got experience doing that." She waves at herself and her group.

"... Yeah, that's fair enough, I guess," you say. "Thanks for the information." You stress the last word slightly, in the vain hope that you might see someone react to that. No such luck; Yuuki and Aki simply nod in agreement.

You half turn away from them. A twist of will and a wave of your hands, and the pall of loose Grief hanging over the scene drains away to form a loose carpet, your wings streaming away to add to it. That little act gets you some uncomfortable looks from the Ishinomaki girls, too.

"Goodbye for now," you call to them as you walk over to the carpet, Mami and Kirika following behind you in flanking positions. "Hopefully, with a little luck, we can get things settled in a day or two."

"'d be better luck than we've had," Yuuki snorts. "Eh, who knows. Good luck, and good hunting." She pivots on her heel and walks to the edge of the roof before throwing herself off, the rest of her group following her quietly. Ayaka throws you one last glance as she goes, eyebrow arched.

You roll your eyes at her.

You drop heavily onto the carpet, pressing a hand to your side. It comes away sticky with blood - not that you'd bothered to feel it, but still, nasty. Mami, instantly concerned, hisses sympathetically, and sits beside you to press the glowing radiance of her magic to your wound.

You chuckle sheepishly as Kirika bounces onto the carpet behind you. "I feel silly," you say. "I'm the only one who even got tagged in that fight." Absently, you lift the carpet into the air and begin heading towards Sendai instead.

"Don't be silly," Mami scolds.

"Ahhh, but you were absolutely amazing in that fight, Mami!" You turn a bright grin on her. You've been keeping this in for a while. "They didn't even come close to touching you. And that first hit, where you didn't even see what's-her-name, Yuuki? That was brilliant! And you looked damned cool doing it, too."

Mami blushes. "N-no, that was nothing special," she demurs.

"No, Mami." You reach outand grab her free hand tightly in yours, the roughness of her fingerless gloves contrasting with her soft skin. "That was phenomenal, Mami. You are phenomenal."

"T-thank you," Mami smiles, her blush intensifying. "You did well too, Sabrina."

"Heh," you say, and turn back to look at Kirika, who's smirking a shit-eating grin at you. You roll your eyes -you know what she's thinking- and inform her, "You too, Kirika."

Her grin widens, fang poking out. "I know!" she smirks, and buffs her fingernails against her shirt. "Would've gotten them if they didn't both have their stupid armours."

You laugh. "Yeah, but seriously, one against two, both of them experienced? That's good no matter how you slice it."

"Yeah, yesh," Kirika says, flapping her hand at you. "Go squeal over your ojou some more."

"Not my ojou," you reply, but grin at Mami nevertheless. "And really, Mami, that was really, truly remarkable." Her fingers shift under yours. "You're amazing, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise, not even yourself."

"Thank you," Mami says. Her face remains tinged with pink, and her hand still steady on your side, cooling warmth of the healing magic sinking into your gash - thankfully, it's not too deep a cut.

"I mean really," you say. "I could track them all and I don't think I could have pulled that shot off."

Mami shakes her head. "It's just... experience," she says. "You know... you're amazing too."

"Nah," you disagree. "I just have huge advantages. And look at me, I still got hit!"

"You were fighting three people at once, defending me, and helping Miss Kure, and still coordinating perfectly with me," Mami says, beaming at you. "That's amazing, too!"

"Heh," you say. "I just have advantages."

"Sabrina, experience is also an advantage," Mami says, moving her hand to tap you lightly on the nose.

"Hey!" you pout. "And fine. We all did great there. But you especially."

Mami giggles, returning to healing your wound.

"Anyway," you switch to telepathy as you reach cruising altitude and begin to accelerate. "I think we should tell Homura what happened back there?"

Mami nods. "That would be a good idea."

"Eeeeeh," Kirika drawls. "Hey, where're we goin', anyway?"

"Sendai," you say.

"Gotcha."

You reach out for the time traveller. "Hey, Homura?"

"Yes?" the time traveller replies immediately. You have the impression of her full attention on you, her violet eyes intent on nothing in particular.

"Just a little update, we went to Ishinomaki, and intercepted the Sendai group, who are now probably back in Sendai proper. We, ah, talked to the Ishinomaki girls, too," you tell her.

"... they attacked you first, didn't they?" Homura asks shrewdly.

"Well, yeah," you admit. "We took them down, and, then we talked to them."

"Ah," Homura says. "What now?"

"We're going to Sendai, to see what's happening there," you reply. "Is there anything happening back home?"

"No," Homura replies. "Madoka and Sayaka are shopping."

"Right," you say. "Are you shopping with them?"

"Yes," she says, a trace of... embarassment? leaking into her mental voice. You grin at Mami - her eyes are crinkled in amusement, too.

"Good," you say. "How's Oriko?"

"Sleeping," Homura says.

You snort lightly. Whoops. "OK," you say. "Anything else?"

"Nothing," Homura confirms.

"Alright, then. See you," you say.

"See you," she replies, closing the connection.

You close your eyes, sighing. "Well. One last thing, Mami - can you try reaching Miss Kato? I mean, she's ostensibly the lynchpin of that this entire thing turns around, so..."

"Of course," Mami agrees, smiling. "Hold on... Miss Kato?"

Silence.

"Miss Kato?" Mami tries again. "This is Tomoe Mami, from Mitakihara."

The response isn't any better, and eventually, Mami shrugs helplessly at you.

[]Turn back to Ishinomaki
[] Stop by Mitakihara
- [] For?
[] Press on to Sendai
[] Write-in


=====​

We now return to your (not that) regularly scheduled updates.

Oh, and if you're wondering that Yuuki didn't relay you through the the University Group - she's going with the idea of, 'I'll talk to them, and then get back to that weird chick.' Which'll be the next update.
 
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That was fucking adorable, oh my God.

Also, Kirika confirmed for shipper-on-deck!

Maybe:

#include <stdio.h>

int main(){

double Homura_Grief;
double Oriko_Grief;
int Check1;
int Check2;

printf("Homura, how are your Grief levels?");
scanf("%d", &Homura_Grief);
printf("Homura, how are Oriko's Grief levels?");
scanf("%d", &Oriko_Grief);

Homura_Grief = Homura_Grief ./ 100;
Oriko_Grief = Oriko_Grief ./ 100;

Check1 = Homura_Grief <= 0.3;
Check2 = Oriko_Grief <= 0.3;

if (Check1 == 0 || Check2 == 0)
{
[x] Go back to Mitakihara for a quick cleanse, possibly some tea and biscuits. ;}
elseif (Check1 == 1 && Check2 == 1)
{
[x] Go to Sendai;
}

}

TL;DR: We should ask Homura how she and Oriko are doing Grief-wise, and head to Sendai if they're doing okay.
 
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We already asked Oriko about that just before running into Ishinomaki. She was annoyed and wanted to go to sleep.

There should be no reason for Homura's levels to have changed recently.
 
But if we're in a hurry, wouldn't it be faster if we could use the Homu Express? If we're travelling by Homu Express, de-griefing Oriko would be trivial anyway.
 
I feel sad.

I don't know the physics in order to calculate the amount of thrust (and therefore energy) required to break the sound barrier with three human female sized blobs on a flat plate. ._.
 
[] Press on to Sendai.
Alright, time to meet the last warring group so we can figure out what the hell is going on here (let's just hope it's something we can magic away, eh?).

Edit: better vote
[X] Mura.
 
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Just... go interrupt them or whatever. Like, you've got experience doing that.

We've also got experience they don't know about relevant to making a big distracting scene, considering how much grief manipulation seems "witchy" to magical girls' magical senses.

[jk] Do our best WalmartNight impression
 
[X] Press on to Sendai

That... changed a bunch of things. Akiko confirmed to be planning something. Kato Setsuko became more important but could still possibly be a red herring. Things just got a lot stranger and Sendai is looking as shady as hell now. Why would they attack Ishinomaki? It seems like a pointless waste of magic. I think Sendai was going to Ishinomaki for another attack, going by past history. No way Akiko would go for negotiations if there was nothing to negotiate about. Assume everything Sendai told us is suspect.

Pure speculation time: Rin is a healer, perhaps she's also a biological manipulator in the vein of Amy Dallon? Sendai has been getting a lot of seeds from their "mercenary" activities and University group. Perhaps they need it for something? Like maybe restore a MG from just a soul gem? Maybe thats what happened to Kato Setsuko, she had her body destroyed? Or some other magically expensive activity.
 
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