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Onmur said:
Why... not?

I'm sure it'd be fine, though the ending should be predictably happy and 'just'. Which means Sabrina wouldn't Witch Out?
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Bad news, it's ghostwritten by Karen Traviss.

That means:

SABRINA IS EVIL AND NEEDS TO DIE AND ALSO SAYAKA DID EVERYTHING WRONG

i love you qb
i love you mami
BABIES BABIES BABIES BABIES

Also homura married kyousuke because tru wuv.

(No, really, Traviss went from a decent sci fi writer with a talent for detail to someone writing sci fi twilight in every novel she could.

Literally everything.

Sci fi twilight complete with BABIES BABIES BABIES.

And the less said about the rape camps she wrote into gears of war the better...)
 
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Ugolino said:
Bad news, it's ghostwritten by Karen Traviss.


BABIES BABIES BABIES BABIES

Also homura married kyousuke because tru wuv.

(No, really, Traviss went from a decent sci fi writer with a talent for detail to someone writing sci fi twilight in every novel she could.

Literally everything.

Sci fi twilight complete with BABIES BABIES BABIES.
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She ghostwrote all the epilogue WAFF in Sayakaquest :V
 
Ugolino said:
Bad news, it's ghostwritten by Karen Traviss.

That means:

SABRINA IS EVIL AND NEEDS TO DIE AND ALSO SAYAKA DID EVERYTHING WRONG

i love you qb
i love you mami
BABIES BABIES BABIES BABIES

Also homura married kyousuke because tru wuv.

(No, really, Traviss went from a decent sci fi writer with a talent for detail to someone writing sci fi twilight in every novel she could.

Literally everything.

Sci fi twilight complete with BABIES BABIES BABIES.

And the less said about the rape camps she wrote into gears of war the better...)
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OK, don't despair, we can fix this.

Sabrina is actually an Evil being!

... And that's exactly why Madokami introduced a community of mostly good-natured voices into her head! The voices proved too vast for Evil Sabrina, and so subsumed her, diluting Sabrina's Evil to being nearly imperceptible.

Unfortunately, Sabrina's base being remains Evil, and once the Voices' work is done, she will return to her base nature. Thus, she decides to sacrifice herself for the common good before that can happen.

It is a time for grieving, despite the ultimate victory over avians, and Kyuubey makes his move then!

He tries to integrate himself back into Mami's life, now that Sabrina isn't there to block him away. Mami tries to refuse Kyuubey, but gives in due to her crushing sadness and loneliness, accepting anybody who would try to keep her company, even...

But Madoka barges in, followed by Homura, Kyouko and Sayaka, who kicks Kyuubey away!

Together, they tell Mami that Sabrina isn't truly gone as long as the friends she's made stick together, and they all cry together and hug each other in a big group hug. Also, Sayaka's still holding Sabrina's Grief power so they can host any amount of meguca friends in Mitakihara.

Homura finally gets over the Kwyjibo loop and literally pushes Sayaka towards him, causing them to confess their love, Sayaka for Kyousuke and Kyousuke for Sayaka and music, forming a three way relationship in which Sayaka manages to see Kyousuke almost as much as Violin-chan.

The End.
 
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Onmur said:
"What the hell is that?"

"It looks like Sabrina."

"But she's dead!"

"I know..."

"Hey you, robot... doll... thing. What are you? Who are you?"

"I? I... I am... I am not a Witch!"

"... Good enough."

*Hugs the doll*

"Mumihugs..."
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"Sabrina? Sabrina! Where are you? Oh! There you are. I should have known."

"Madoka? What is this?"

"That's Sabrina Jr. Everyone was really sad because Sabrina was gone so I built her to fix everything. I also might have used some of your bomb ingredients to power her without your permission. Sorry about that."

*Glances at Sabrina Jr.* "... It's fine."
 
and then Sabrina wakes up from the horrible horrible dream


and hugs Mami

>Later when Firn comes back<
.... what the hell?
 
RexHeller said:
"Sabrina? Sabrina! Where are you? Oh! There you are. I should have known."

"Madoka? What is this?"

"That's Sabrina Jr. Everyone was really sad because Sabrina was gone so I built her to fix everything. I also might have used some of your bomb ingredients to power her without your permission. Sorry about that."

*Glances at Sabrina Jr.* "... It's fine."
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I think out Madokami's got a fixation with 'fixing everything'. And possibly with making potential fixes that are simultaneously potential obliteration.
 
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After compiling an album of my favourite Oriko artwork for the To the Stars Discord server, i was advised to post it here because apparently y'all love that shit.

So i made an account after lurking the forum for several months just to post it! Hi!

Here is the album. i will try to add more sources in future, but i gave up on some after i got really tired, so some are still missing...
 
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Omniscient Trees said:
After compiling an album of my favourite Oriko artwork for the To the Stars Discord server, i was advised to post it here because apparently y'all love that shit.

So i made an account after lurking the forum for several months just to post it! Hi!

Here is the album. i will try to add more sources in future, but i gave up on some after i got really tited, so some are still missing...
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Sabrina: *walks into apartment* Mami we have an issue Oriko was not at her house or the ware.....
*beat*
Sabrina: OH GOD POD PEOPLE
 
Random idea: Let's suppose Sabrina was created through Madoka's Wish.

That means last loop's Madoka managed to affect the current loop.

How?

I propose last loop's Madoka actually tagged along with Homura when she time travelled.

Kind of. Homura doesn't know. Madoka might have followed in Soul only.

Now, that Madoka resides inside Sabrina or was the base to create Sabrina, thus the oddly large potential.

Omniscient Trees said:
After compiling an album of my favourite Oriko artwork for the To the Stars Discord server, i was advised to post it here because apparently y'all love that shit.

So i made an account after lurking the forum for several months just to post it! Hi!

Here is the album. i will try to add more sources in future, but i gave up on some after i got really tired, so some are still missing...
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Somehow, I could now see Oriko in Jojo

Nice!

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Onmur said:
Random idea: Let's suppose Sabrina was created through Madoka's Wish.

That means last loop's Madoka managed to affect the current loop.

How?

I propose last loop's Madoka actually tagged along with Homura when she time travelled.

Kind of. Homura doesn't know. Madoka might have followed in Soul only.

Now, that Madoka resides inside Sabrina or was the base to create Sabrina, thus the oddly large potential.
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I don't think that's really necessary. First of all Potential doesn't really work that way; her relationship to Madoka as "Created by her to fix everything" is sufficient to explain it.

Secondly, Madoka's power is so bullshit that effecting the next loop doesn't require her to be in it. My current headcanon, though, is that Madoka made her wish [which may or may not have created Sabrina/turned Walpurgis into her], died to make Homura loop (and probably didn't Witch out), and basically added a payload enchantment to Homura's shield.

Homura loops into the current timeline. The payload activates. If necessary, causality is restructured in this timeline to make it possible for Sabrina to fix everything, such as the timing of Nagisa's contract. Secondly, Sabrina is created probably/maybe. Thirdly, Sabrina is bootstrapped with the potential, the meta-knowledge, etc., and might have a Karmic Destiny bond to Madokami and/or Homucifer.

Madoka seems to expect Sabrina to fix problems when they arise and has a lot of passive faith in her. This is probably a mix of her natural personality, whatever interference Madokami may be doing, and a natural result of Madoka being the same soul that made the wish in the first place. The fact that she didn't do so in this lifetime doesn't change that it was a wish that came from the depths of her heart. That sort of thing probably reverberates across time and space.
 
AuraTwilight said:
That sort of thing probably reverberates across time and space.
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Wait does that mean Amy is alive. :V

AuraTwilight said:
"Created by her to fix everything" is sufficient to explain it.

Secondly, Madoka's power is so bullshit that effecting the next loop doesn't require her to be in it.
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AuraTwilight said:
, and basically added a payload enchantment to Homura's shield.

Homura loops into the current timeline. The payload activates.
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More than a payload waiting to activate, I'd think it more like a passive effect that continually affects 'everything at the time of Madoka's Wish', and since Homura was a thing at that time, she's carrying it until such a time her issues are fixed, but everything aside from that would be completely unintentional side effects. Collateral fixing.

AuraTwilight said:
Madoka seems to expect Sabrina to fix problems when they arise and has a lot of passive faith in her. This is probably a mix of her natural personality, whatever interference Madokami may be doing, and a natural result of Madoka being the same soul that made the wish in the first place. The fact that she didn't do so in this lifetime doesn't change that it was a wish that came from the depths of her heart. That sort of thing probably reverberates across time and space.
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That did seem to be what the golden eyes seemed to indicate. Or at least, we haven't come up with any better ideas in the last... two years.
 
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Onmur said:
Wait does that mean Amy is alive. :V
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Well, Homura canonically makes a point of saving Amy in every loop in Madoka's honor. So....yes. but not for that reason.

More than a payload waiting to activate, I'd think it more like a passive effect that continually affects 'everything at the time of Madoka's Wish', and since Homura was a thing at that time, she's carrying it until such a time her issues are fixed, but everything aside from that would be completely unintentional side effects. Collateral fixing.
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Eh. No. That Madoka should've known about Homura's looping, so it'd be entirely intentional. And it's probably not an ongoing effect aside from Sabrina's existence because Player Agency.
 
AuraTwilight said:
Eh. No. That Madoka should've known about Homura's looping, so it'd be entirely intentional. And it's probably not an ongoing effect aside from Sabrina's existence because Player Agency.
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I guess 'payload' does fit better than 'continuous effect'. Since the Wish already did its work, and of course, it can fail to actually fix everything.

Do you think Madoka wished 'everything could be fixed' in a timey wimey way? I'm now wondering if her Wish had any effect in her own loop.

- Did Madoka's Wish affect only our loop? Just like Homura wished to re-meet Madoka, which led to time travel/parallel worlds, Madoka could have wished that 'everything was fixed', meaning all that was lost an unrecoverable, just like when Homura Wished, meaning time travel again... and why not, Madoka's and Homura's Wish might have gone together.

- Did Madoka's Wish affect hers and our loop? By way of Homura carrying that 'payload' into this loop.

- Did Madoka's Wish affect everything, including all parallel worlds/loops? In that case, we totally've got to find out if there's more brain damaged meguca with savious complex we can meet. It'll be a blast.
 
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