Puella Magi Adfligo Systema
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Onmur
Archangel of Nutella.
I forgot something:
References!
The Power of Evil™ does it again!
References!
We be System Breaker meguca, but never it says what's left after we're done breaking everything will be better than what there is now.
This from the talk with Oriko after Homu beheaded her.
This is referencing that dream sequence that had Sabrina unable to sleep well that one time.
The Power of Evil™ does it again!
Onmur
Archangel of Nutella.
Refine, refine, refine... I assume they'll talk, vote lines are the points Sabrina would bring up during conversation.
I didn't mean to X the [] at first, actually. It's just better when trying to get some vote refinement going on.
How about something short?
[] Conversation points to try and touch:
-[] Don't know, that's not the point. The point is that Oriko was happy. Whether she lived or died, she had no regrets. She did have LZRS, though. And you can be just as happy as her.
-[] You've told me we can change destiny, haven't you? I believe you. Why can't you believe yourself?
-[] To be perfectly honest, I know I can change things, but for the better? I'd rather you would help me there.
-[] I've seen everything go wrong. I've see us losing the fight. But that only makes me want to try harder. And I think you're the same. You want to live. So don't tell me what you'd die for. What would you live for?
Always Happening
We could have prevented this.
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- On a train with no brakes
[x] Banjo2E
Respectfully, I think that Onmur's vote (prior to him ninjaing me) softens the tone too much.
And yeah, the pockets line should probably wait until the end of the conversation, if she still doesn't get it- I just want to make sure she knows that we can assume direct control and ensure that nothing can touch her.
Don't forget that Oriko, like any meguca, can demilich with practice, so she doesn't necessarily have to go comatose/be useless for the duration.
Respectfully, I think that Onmur's vote (prior to him ninjaing me) softens the tone too much.
And yeah, the pockets line should probably wait until the end of the conversation, if she still doesn't get it- I just want to make sure she knows that we can assume direct control and ensure that nothing can touch her.
Don't forget that Oriko, like any meguca, can demilich with practice, so she doesn't necessarily have to go comatose/be useless for the duration.
I readily and freely admit that my proto-vote was a stream-of-consciousness list of talking points hammered crudely in the shape of dialogue, but it seems to have been a good starting point.
noahgab1133
Fluffy?
[x] Always Happening
... I blame tiredness.
Onmur
Archangel of Nutella.
Koko took advantage of Firn's tiredness to cheat herself some more screen time!
That scoundrel!
'Hey, I should get more screen time.'
'Not now... I've got them trying to bash away at their problems with the Social Hammer... again.'
'Eh, come on, can't I drop by or somethin'? It's been like, 26 updates since I last appeared.'
'Well, it'll be a few more since they're so slow... wait, you're keeping count?'
'Uh, no, of course not.'
*Yawn* 'Whatever. Story time... Let's see... What was I writing again?'
'They're telling about the other dimension thing.'
'Ah, right... Alone at the park... no... girlfriend... who was that again?'
'Kure Kirika.'
'Right, no Kirika... hung father...'
'That's... bad.'
'Mmm... yeah, bad... now, little green girl-'
'Yuma.'
'Right, Yuma, Chitose Yuma, murmurs... um...'
'I do.'
'Mmm?'
'It's Yuma, I'm taking care of her.'
'Oh, right, that makes sense...' *YAAAWWWWWNNNNNNN* 'But wasn't this scene happeni-?'
'Why don't ya go to sleep?'
'Wait, let me finish... shitstain of a mother... wait, something's wrong-'
'Yeah, she's such a bitch.'
'Yuma's mom sucks.'
'Yeah.'
'Whatever. Sasa Yuuki, lasers, Walpurgisnacht, realisation, and...' *Yawn* '... done. I think.'
'Let me check- Yup! It's all good, not mistakes here.'
'... OK. I'ma pass out now.'
'Right, right, later.'
...
'That wasn't nice of you.'
'He, he, he...'
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You count the updates??
OMG Onmur you're awesome!! I hate rereading old updates because the internet here is so slow. And my reading speed is as slow as the internet speed, so I try to memorize them in the first reading.
Onmur
Archangel of Nutella.
No, why would I count updates when y- I mean, of course I'm awesome!You count the updates??
You know, that's pretty much what happened.
Like.
Yeah.
'lil less yawning, but yeah.
That's pretty much what happened.
Onmur
Archangel of Nutella.
Firganzen's got a Shoulder Devil Koko and a Shoulder Angel Sayaka confirmed.
This quest is a national treasure. For several nations.
Judging by the language list, pretty much all the nations.
DB_Explorer
Purveyor of alternate realities.
- Location
- San Diego, California
- Pronouns
- He/Him
Frin for UN Sec General.
*much later*
Sabrina: SO thus we we make Madoka sectary general of the UN!
Personally, I think that you guys' sense of humor can be real hit and miss. But every once in while, you guys can get a legit laugh.
Onmur
Archangel of Nutella.
ALL NATIONS (You put this in my head. This is your fault.)
Sabrina goes visit Masami and Hiroko one random day...
P.M.A.S. Meguca of the Nations said:
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Dirtnap
Kanmusu Affecionado
FTFY, he ships 'em harder than joe lewis' right hook.
So, what are all the votes again? There were a whole bunch of them, and I lost track.
Onmur
Archangel of Nutella.
I think the votes need refinement. For example:
This could use a little better wording?
This might be just me, but the story ended, so this isn't exactly correct. It just ended before Walpurgisnacht actually arrived.
This part doesn't make sense -Oriko isn't worried about Walpurgisnacht, but about Feathers, which is a whole other can of worms.
Maybe get rid of Walpurgisnacht's mention here and focus on Feathers?
Of course, that kind of leaves us with empty promises, since we can't assure anything about Feathers being stopped, we're going in blind.
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Ugh, yeah, we really should discuss it more. I'm not really feeling it right now, though, Maybe later. You guys go ahead.