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Oriko already knows about the Loops, and that Homura's been increasing Madoka's potential. So does Kyubey, for that matter.
 
Muramasa said:
That's fine. The words 'looked up' however imply the we got the knowledge from somewhere else. Kyubey is smart enough to pick up on it.
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It's not meant to ask about "Witches we looked up" in those words, and I don't think Sabrina'd admit to out of context knowledge like that without prompting. Edited anyway.
 
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Muramasa said:
That's fine. The words 'looked up' however imply the we got the knowledge from somewhere else. Kyubey is smart enough to pick up on it.
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Ah. I mean, "the notable witches in her visions". What does 'notable witches in her visions' mean? We asked about witch outs before and it seems she'd need something more to work with:
"No, I mean... how finely can you predict things?" you ask. "Could you try to see girls Witching out before it happens?"

"No," Oriko shakes her head, before stopping. "Yes. Maybe." She frowns, eyes unfocusing. When you open your mouth to comment again, she holds up her hand to quiet you. "I follow... threads, of visions. The starting points of those threads are... somewhat random, but it's... easier to follow some than others."
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Ninja'd
 
So the "[]ask Oriko about approaching Kyoko" was taken out, and I don't really care too much about that, but is there a reason that we aren't asking Homu (the person with the most Kyouko experience) about approaching her while we've got her here? Or doing the 'oh, hey, BTW war threat is over FYI.' (Ugo's vote has us pinging Masami and Ishinomaki, but not Kyouko/Yuma)?
 
The plan there's to visit Kyoko ourselves- and Homu advice on Kyouko isn't really all that useful or time-limited. It isn't needed right now.

Telling her the war's over takes away some of the excuse for us to drop in.
 
Apologizing to Oriko should have a bit more explicit weight. "Sorry about threatening to turn your favorite person into a witch. Now tell me about other people.." The way its worded now lacks an emphasis on our sincerity. On the fact we are actually upset that we considered it and are so very, very, sorry. Because the events of the previous day have prompted some reflection.
 
CornyBones said:
Apologizing to Oriko should have a bit more explicit weight. "Sorry about threatening to turn your favorite person into a witch. Now tell me about other people.." The way its worded now lacks an emphasis on our sincerity. On the fact we are actually upset that we considered it and are so very, very, sorry. Because the events of the previous day have prompted some reflection.
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Rewording a bit, but "points not phrasing" is what I'm hoping for there.


[x] Give Homura another hug before parting.
[x] A last couple bits of SCIENCE testing this afternoon, while contacting people.
-[x] SCIENCE
--[x]Examine a soul gem, a normal grief seed, and a broken grief seed in detail with all senses. Catalog the parts; grief, magic, whatever else you can figure out, any unknowns. What are the differences and similarities?
--[x]Compare a magical construct like your hammer to an identical grief construct. What are the differences in attributes, and in how each can be created, manipulated, or dismissed?
[x]Consult the book of Witches in a grief gerbilball with internal lighting.
-[x] Contacts
--[x] Masami/Hiroko - Polite check in. Inform them that things seem to have settled down, and of the suggested handling of grief seeds.
--[x] Ishinomaki - Polite check in. Summarize situation, and make note of the grief seed cleansing plan.
---[x] Also: Ask when the meeting with Sendai was originally arranged, and if it was done through Kyuubey.
[x] Check in on Oriko (telepathy). We were going to come visit. Did she need us to bring anything?
[x] When visiting:
-[x] Standard grief cleanses.
[x] Thank her and Kirika for their help yesterday.
[x] Apologize for what you threatened to do to Kirika. Tell her that it had been a bluff, one you'd never have gone through with, and that you do regret hurting her by making it.

[x] We would like to try a healing trick, if she'll help us make sure it'll work.
-[x] Try to create a magic healing item. Apply healing to remaining Oriko injuries.
--[x] If it doesn't work, provide normal healing for any remaining injuries she has that we can manage. Let Homura and Mami know that we're healing Oriko's injuries-but keeping the house arrest for both.
[x]Ask her if she's seen anything problematic.
-[x] Consult her about Asunaro.
-[x]Ask about the Witches.

Edited for wording and to make Oriko less of a guinea pig for science.
Edited again so we don't rush into questions.
 
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