We've gotten a whole ton of various runic payloads we've already done prep days on, not to mention the explosive rune which if deliverable would kill most of them (sans Konan/Hidan). The difficulty inherent in killing Akatsuki is in bringing the weapon to their squishy meatself, which is something I think is shared with most if not all of our payloads.
 
If we show back up to Leaf we need to bring more than just "stuff that can stall Akatsuki indefinitely", since we can't really afford a stalemate scenario where Hazou is on-call 24/7 to craft and infuse runic defenses for Leaf and the surrounding countryside for an unspecified amount of time. This is not good for our long term goals, or Uplift, or the quest IMO.

Ex: If we get back with Force Domes, and Leaf goes to attack the Rift and the result of that is "Most of Leaf's powerful ninja die, again, and Oro sneaks the Rift off to parts unknown before getting the fuck out of dodge" then does that really leave us in a good position?

At this point I don't think we should return until we can ensure that we can force a confrontation where Leaf can kill these guys lol.
How about returning to Leaf very briefly and clandestinely, setting up a Runic Air Dome designed not to activate immediately, and leaving behind a note which makes it sound like a doomsday device with a deadman switch and anti-tamper triggers, but makes use of some of those prearranged codewords so that Naruto would be able to parse the rest as actually conveying shield specs and "in case of emergency" activation instructions?
For the cover story, it looks like a relatively traditional 'missing-nin going-away present,' the fact it hasn't detonated yet could be used as a pretext for the Hokage to give the hunter-nin restrictive rules of engagement or otherwise hold back ("Target must be captured and handed over to T&I completely intact. if you disintigrate him, or even just break too many fingers trying to field-interrogate somebody with Resolve 60, so he's not enough of a functional sealmaster afterward to disarm the contingency device he left behind... either this thing sets off a second Collapse, or I have to write Orochimaru a blank check to try and reverse-engineer it, or both.") and for actual defense against, say, Deidara bombarding the city, it's better than nothing.
 
How about returning to Leaf very briefly and clandestinely, setting up a Runic Air Dome designed not to activate immediately, and leaving behind a note which makes it sound like a doomsday device with a deadman switch and anti-tamper triggers, but makes use of some of those prearranged codewords so that Naruto would be able to parse the rest as actually conveying shield specs and "in case of emergency" activation instructions?
For the cover story, it looks like a relatively traditional 'missing-nin going-away present,' the fact it hasn't detonated yet could be used as a pretext for the Hokage to give the hunter-nin restrictive rules of engagement or otherwise hold back ("Target must be captured and handed over to T&I completely intact. if you disintigrate him, or even just break too many fingers trying to field-interrogate somebody with Resolve 60, so he's not enough of a functional sealmaster afterward to disarm the contingency device he left behind... either this thing sets off a second Collapse, or I have to write Orochimaru a blank check to try and reverse-engineer it, or both.") and for actual defense against, say, Deidara bombarding the city, it's better than nothing.
Naruto holding Leaf back isn't the greatest threat; Akatsuki and AMITY won't care about Leaf blowing up; and the entire idea is wildly out of character for what anybody knows of Hazou.

It would be wiser to just hide it and tell nobody beyond Naruto and his elite.
 
Naruto holding Leaf back isn't the greatest threat; Akatsuki and AMITY won't care about Leaf blowing up; and the entire idea is wildly out of character for what anybody knows of Hazou.

It would be wiser to just hide it and tell nobody beyond Naruto and his elite.
I agree hiding it completely would be preferable, if possible, but "doomsday device" is a useful explanation if Itachi finds the thing during a random search. Akatsuki wouldn't personally care, but they'd understand that Leaf-nin care, which might save friendlies from dying pointlessly in a double-bind. Naruto could further justify the 'capture intact' rules of engagement as having decent chances of success by referencing Hazo's proportionately weak combat skills.
 
Yeah. The weird thing is we basically haven't done any research we wouldn't have done in absence of Akatsuki, and we haven't done dimensionalism. We haven't even made a weapon that would scare them. We could state all of that honestly.

The problem is we still really really really don't want to meet the Akatsuki right now after how they've shown they'll act. Asuma told the truth* and then they murdered him and used the village's inevitable reaction to extort everyone and wrap the village around their thumb. Fuck them.

I would happily suggest putting all the above in a letter, addressed to Akatsuki and Naruto both.

*stated from Hazō's perspective
I really like this. We should write a letter from the perspective of a Hazou who, lacking Primordial Sealing, had really given up on opposing the Akatsuki, stewing in despair. He goes off to research/relax, overcautious because of how his last major sealing failure turned out (bonus points if we can come up with some heartbreakingly prosocial motivation for what he was researching). He gets this missive from Itachi. He immediately interprets it as the Akatsuki wanting to kill him and all his friends, despairs further, gives up on Uplift and all his ideals, and just decides to take his family and hide in the wilderness forever.

Phrasing it this way would potentially exploit Itachi's psychology. He'd previously indicated that he has somewhat self-deprecating views towards the Akatsuki as a force of good in the absence of Pain. And, well, here he goes, clumsily breaking someone who might've been a force for good.

The advantage here is that this might introduce some doubt regarding whether Hazou must be hunted down. If we go missing as-is, that'd be pretty unambiguous. If we provide this explanation for why even an innocent Hazou would go missing at this point? Well, perhaps they devote 85% of the effort to hunting us down, compared to the amount of effort they'd devote without said doubt. That's pretty good.

Have Mari optimize the letter, and we'd hit Itachi with like a Deception 100 attack. It'll almost certainly work.

It's also almost completely risk-free. Send it by civilian mail addressed to the Tower, after we've exfiltrated the rest of Team Uplift, or send it to Condors/Turtles.
 
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[X] Action Plan: Take The Fam And Go
Wordcount: >300
  • Tell Noburi we'll be back in a little over two weeks.
    • Reassure Noburi that we genuinely haven't done anything wrong, and we've stared down Itachi before.
      • Tell him to be firm, don't let Itachi steal anything before we get back.
  • Sanity/Optimize with K/K/S
  • Start heading toward that chakra-pool-cave in Wind(?)
  • ~2 days later, send a ciphered message to Mari
    • "We're going missing. anyone not with us is potential leverage. sometime in the next 8 days, exfiltrate team Uplift and whoever else you find it wise to include."
      • More people/resources is good, but only if they don't blow the exfiltration.
      • Burning bridges and cutting ties is good, but clan Goketsu and uplift projects collapsing is bad. Looking like we care about anything left behind is also bad. It's a balancing act, figure it out.
      • Some possible ways to extract value and cut ties. use judgement. only do these if they don't ruin the exfiltration.
        • exfiltrate ~all Goketsu ninja with you
        • exfiltrate Tenten
        • kidnap Ino ("kidnap", so remaining Yamanaka are held blameless.)
        • loot the Uzumaki clan vault, especially of seals.
        • loot anything else of value that won't immediately blow your exfiltration.
        • kill Ritsuo
        • steal the Monkey Scroll
      • Include some SCSAs with the message, to conceal their skytowers when camping.
      • Include notes from Kagome on how to destroy any sensitive materials in the Black Archive(Kagome's Bedroom)
      • Consider burning/stealing our Jutsu scrolls.
        • Clanmates have had plenty of time to learn them, and Itachi is likely to search the compound.
  • Research:
    • As time allows, finish Capacitor Rune and read TH notes.
  • Dogs
    • Let Cannai know what's up.
    • Ask for an Elite bodyguard dog
    • Offer contracts to all the dogs from the last raid.
Can I get one vote on this?
It's not done cooking, but it is better than the other action plan, and the QMs occasionally disregard interlude votes and pick the top action plan.
Probably doesn't matter, but it's nice to be safe.
 
While we should go for an interlude for the next update, we also should start thinking about what our next plan is.

I think that we at minimum need Noburi to research effectively. As for the rest of the family:

Taking Mari:
  • We'd have an extra jōnin's combat power
  • We'd have a social spec for any kind of infiltration of minor towns, negotiation with said towns
  • We'd have a genjutsu spec who might be helpful if Itachi shows up (which, TBH if Akatsuki finds us we're screwed anyway)
  • Our clan at home loses its resident social spec, which could weaken us
  • Also, if anyone could keep the Gōketsu's reputation at least somewhat together when its clan head goes missing it's Mari
  • Mari's genin team would be hit hard by their sensei going missing

Taking Yuno:
  • We'd get a chakra beast expert and mighty axe-wielder
  • She might have a hard time re-integrating when we got back (though probably not, if Naruto explains what happened)
  • Her genin team would also get left in the lurch
  • If we didn't take her then she would probably be very upset with/at Noburi; regardless she'd have a hard time without him

Taking Haru:
  • We'd get another strong combatant (chūnin level?)
  • We'd be able to get to bond with him being out in the field together
  • It might be hard to convince him to come or make him refuse and then leave the Gōketsu

I'm not too familiar with the rest of the family, but I will say that we should probably leave Gaku and at least one ninja behind. Gaku can manage things and our ninja can be the face of the clan. Note, though, that exfiltrating the main Gōketsu family and then going missing will make the Gōketsu look really bad. And if we don't take Haru, I don't think we'll ever breach the gap we create with him.

I also think we need to come up with some way of getting into contact with Ami. Schelling point ideas anyone?

Anyway, I'm not ready to propose a plan yet, since (I hope) we'll get an interlude update next and I want to hold off on proposing solutions.

It's also almost completely risk-free. Send it by civilian mail addressed to the Tower, after we've exfiltrated the rest of Team Uplift.
I like this, and we should put it as a component in any plan we adopt.


Edit: Is there any repercussion of taking a family member that I'm missing?
 
Note that Scenery Clone Arrays take a snapshot of the area when they are activated and project that image henceforth. This works poorly in dynamic environments where clouds are moving around and the sun is moving across the sky.
OK. So we build Hidden Sky above the clouds so that we don't have that problem. And just hope that no one notices the sun thing, lol.

DotB Prerequisites: Sealing 20, Primordial Sealing 20, SSA or similar Out-exposure stunt
Hmm. Would any of Kagome's Kagome-stuff count?
 
Is there any repercussion of taking a family member that I'm missing?
I would argue that there are strong repercussions of not taking a family member with, which is that any member of Team Uplift (Noburi, Mari, Yuno) that we leave behind is near-certain to die horribly very soon.

This isn't even about leverage or intimidation. It's worth doing simply to inflict damage.

Consider:
  • We'd discussed before that seeing Akane's mutilated corpse would likely be enough for Hazou to get an additional TYS, yes?
  • We know that it's possible to launch social attacks, such as deceptions, at a remote, using letters/messages, right? By the same logic, it should be possible to inflict Mental Consequences using well-crafted missives that reveal some horrible thing that happened/that you did.
  • And if the Akatsuki can inflict a Severe on Hazou, they basically auto-win the race.
So it makes perfect sense to inflict a fate worse than death on Hazou's loved ones, then mail him proofs with graphic descriptions attached.

It makes perfect sense on a simulationist level, too. Hazou's success relies on him engaging in high-quality thinking about research projects. If the quality of that thinking degrades – due to distracting thoughts about his loved ones' fate, and any associated despair/trauma/guilt/fear – that'd of course degrade his performance and threat level, as well.

Now, a potential counter-argument here is that, rather than making Hazou despair, it would instead motivate him to more single-mindedly and recklessly pursue the Akatsuki's destruction, so it would be unwise of the Akatsuki to do so. There's something to that argument, but I'm not sure I buy it. The Akatsuki would likely expect that Hazou is already pouring his all into destroying them. All their actions would do, here, is inject a bunch of emotional turmoil into his mindset. And that's almost always good: it would cause reckless, desperate, risk-ignoring behavior; it would compromise his judgement to at least some extent. He might end up killing himself to a sealing failure pursuing a project he's unqualified for, because he has nothing else left but a desire to kill the Akatsuki. He might attack them prematurely, too hungry for vengeance to coldly assess the odds of victory.

If you're up against an adversary who wants to kill you, it's almost always a good idea to scramble their decision-making by injecting some stress-induced entropy into it. And if you can straight-up degrade their performance by traumatizing them? Perfect.

So anyone we don't take with will die.

It applies slightly less to Ino, since she's a high-profile politician not defined by her relation to Hazou. The costs of taking her might outweigh the (somewhat speculative) arguments for launching this sort of attack on Hazou.

It applies slightly less to Tenten and Miyuki, since Severe'ing Kei is of lesser priority than Severe'ing Hazou. Nevertheless, there's an argument for that as well, since it might cause a rift in our team, likewise degrading our overall performance. And the cost of taking two clanless chuunin is ~0.

It applies least of all to Shikamaru, who's both a high-profile politician and mainly connected to Kei. He's probably safe.
 
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You know what would really suck?

If Itachi decided that he wasn't going to make the mistake Nagato did and hold himself back, and therefore arranged for Deidara to preemptively nuke Leaf as a way to manipulate Hazou.
 
Baddies Go Fwump (51) targets Resolve and the kitties all have the normal 20 resolve that sensible people buy in order to get their mental stress track to 3 boxes but don't bother increasing because dogs don't really use genjutsu so there's no need for me to roll.

Hyōtsume, Hyōsupotto, Hyōkamumono, and Hyōrōbā all get the Aspect "Sleepy" and an (Effect x 2) penalty to Athletics and physical skills. In this case that means -10.

Canfuwumpu also gets the "Sleepy" Aspect but as the caster the penalty is only half as bad, so just a -5.
Woah, Baddies Go Fwump at 51 is.... very high for a resolve targeting effect. That's enough to hit multiple Essies with a -12 debuff.

I really want to contract with this dog.
 
Yes? The anti-conductivity (whatever we name it) rune is separate from that. The idea came from how combustion might play into the "stop explosion" rune, but this one has nothing to do with stopping explosions in its intent - that's not what I meant anywhere. This is a weapon. A shiny, shiny weapon.

Or did I misunderstand you? It sounded like you noted I was conflating the two, somehow?
Oh, I see, I had gotten the impression you were advancing the case that an anti-explosion rune would inherently fuck with people's bodies.
 
if we do go the route of swearing dog not to pass on messages. we should only have them not pass on threats. i don't wanna miss out on any mutually beneficial offers from akatsuki. that sounds like a cliche failure mode.
 
"The agreement between Akatsuki and Leaf," Itachi replied, "consisting primarily of a substantial weregild paid by Leaf for the AMITY-violating murder of a member of Akatsuki and high-ranking officer of Hidden Rain. That agreement was made between myself, representing Akatsuki, and Tsunade, representing the office of Hokage and thus Hidden Leaf, and later affirmed by members of AMITY."
"Then, that leaves only one component to discuss: Leaf's research on dimensionalism.
"This is relevant to the agreement," Itachi said. "Do you believe Gōketsu Hazō is researching dimensionalism?"
"'Clan secrets' does not suffice," Itachi said. "Is he researching the rift?"

Naruto shook his head, making sure that his gaze never crossed into eye-contact with Itachi. "I gave him strict orders not to work on anything rift-related."
ITACHI: My "Not banning dimensionalism research for suspicious reasons" T-shirt has people asking a lot of questions already answered by my shirt.
 
You are entirely correct that the nervous system is not a collection of wires in its precise functionality. Thank you for the reminder. I had honestly not recalled all that until then.

However, Itachi still instantly dies:

(1) The evolution of the myelin sheathing specifically was a breakthrough in that it increased neural system performance drastically in organisms via insulating the axons. That alone strongly suggests that conductivity and insulation are vital for neurons to function. In addition, that single example shows that even increasing conductivity significantly would similarly disable nerves. This is significant because we can observe a small part of it IRL. So that's a new avenue (incidentally supporting the importance of conductivity and insulation in the nervous system), which is nice, but let's go back to the original:

(2) A precise example of what removing electrical conductivity would do:
Mitochondria produce ATP through oxidative phosphorylation, which relies on electron transport chains where electrons are transferred through a series of protein complexes. This no longer works, since those electrons cannot be transferred. Thus Itachi's cells no longer produce ATP. No ATP means no active transport of ions (The Na+/K+ ATPase pump uses vast and continuous ATP to maintain the gradient of sodium and potassium ions across the cell membrane), disrupting resting membrane potential and action potential generation in all nerves. The moment that happens, Itachi's nerves stop working.
Itachi still becomes an S-Class vegetable.

(3) As a third option, I do not think that the voltage-gated channels would actually open (ignoring the ATP path above) without the voltage gradient changes on the membrane being conducted to the channel. In other terms that gate should not "know" anything about the charge gradient because conductivity is the only way it *can* know (via the voltage sensor regions - either directly or though an electrical field, both of which require electrons to be conducted). Effective removal of physical properties makes things confusing, but here we are. Specifically, without electron movement we should not observe the voltage sensor regions detecting anything, hence all channels remaining closed. Anyway in this case, the same thing happens: Nerves don't work and the bird is dead.

To make a long story short, the nervous system makes use of electrical conductivity on multiple steps of its complicated and interconnected Rube Goldberg machine. If we take away any part of that, the machine no longer works. The above are some examples of specific parts that are being 'taken away', with explanations as to why they'd stop the machine immediately. These are certainly not exhaustive, but sufficient to demonstrate previously claimed capabilities.

I am therefore confident that we can simplify all of this to: "The effective removal of electrical conductivity is incredibly and immediately lethal."

Thank you for coming to my TED Talk.

(As I am not a professional in this field, this is half-remembered book knowledge combined with wikipedia patches. I hope that this longer explanation passes muster, and at least one of the (much higher/much lower) conductivity runes make sense with respect to their intended function.)

Edit: Also, none of the in-depth discussion really matters to Hazo, since he will expect and observe the "bundle of wires" concept in action. The simplified version is sufficient for his purposes.
The problem here is that conductivity is an emergent property. It's a consequence of the movement of charge on microscopic scales, not an independent property that can be dialed up and down without changing anything else. Therefore, any rune that suppresses conduction is doing one of two things:
  • Altering some fundamental rule in a way that incidentally suppresses electrical conductivity.
  • Recognizing places where electrical conduction is happening and selectively preventing it from happening.
I would contend that the first method would result in very major side effects, effectively no matter what you actually change. The second method results in a rune whose function depends on its definition of 'electrical conduction'; conduction of electricity in metals is extremely different from conductivity in ion-containing liquids, and there's no particular reason to think that a rune which suppresses one would also suppress the other, particularly that (as I argue below) Hazō has no reason to think that (to him) Raiton energy is involved in nerve signal transmission.

Now, let's go through your points and see what they require in order to work.

(1) The evolution of the myelin sheathing specifically was a breakthrough in that it increased neural system performance drastically in organisms via insulating the axons. That alone strongly suggests that conductivity and insulation are vital for neurons to function. In addition, that single example shows that even increasing conductivity significantly would similarly disable nerves. This is significant because we can observe a small part of it IRL. So that's a new avenue (incidentally supporting the importance of conductivity and insulation in the nervous system), which is nice, but let's go back to the original:
In this point, you appear to be talking about 'conductivity' as 'any movement of charge of any kind'. The myelin sheath, like all lipid bilayers, is (mostly) impermeable to ions, which is its primary function. (This link gives a decent explanation of the myelin sheath.) In order to increase conductivity across the myelin sheath, you'd have to ... actually, I don't even know what you'd have to do. Weaken the interactions of ions with water at the membrane boundary so it's less unfavourable for them to enter the bilayer? Give charged things higher energy so that they're more likely to reach the activation energy needed to cross?

Increasing conductivity is not what you're primarily proposing, but it illustrates the point. Conductivity is emergent, and in conduction by ions it emerges simply from physical movement of those ions from one place to another; any rune that blocked nerve signalling by reducing conductivity would need to prevent any net movement of charge of any kind, even on microscopic scales.

(2) A precise example of what removing electrical conductivity would do:
Mitochondria produce ATP through oxidative phosphorylation, which relies on electron transport chains where electrons are transferred through a series of protein complexes. This no longer works, since those electrons cannot be transferred. Thus Itachi's cells no longer produce ATP. No ATP means no active transport of ions (The Na+/K+ ATPase pump uses vast and continuous ATP to maintain the gradient of sodium and potassium ions across the cell membrane), disrupting resting membrane potential and action potential generation in all nerves. The moment that happens, Itachi's nerves stop working.
Itachi still becomes an S-Class vegetable.
Here, you seem to want your rune to block the transfer of electrons from one atom to another. This ... well, we have no reason to think it wouldn't be possible, but it would also shut down all of chemistry, or at the very least all of redox chemistry; for example, in all likelihood fires would not start in the rune's radius of effect. Precedent with temporal runes suggests that Hazō is unlikely to produce such a wide-ranging effect when he intends to produce something narrower, and I wouldn't expect conduction-suppression runes to be an exception.

(3) As a third option, I do not think that the voltage-gated channels would actually open (ignoring the ATP path above) without the voltage gradient changes on the membrane being conducted to the channel. In other terms that gate should not "know" anything about the charge gradient because conductivity is the only way it *can* know (via the voltage sensor regions - either directly or though an electrical field, both of which require electrons to be conducted). Effective removal of physical properties makes things confusing, but here we are. Specifically, without electron movement we should not observe the voltage sensor regions detecting anything, hence all channels remaining closed. Anyway in this case, the same thing happens: Nerves don't work and the bird is dead.
This is (probably) straightforwardly wrong. Voltage-gated ion channels detect electric fields; electric fields do not require the movement of charge to propagate. A conductivity rune that shut down the propagation of electric fields would also dramatically alter the properties of matter within the radius. All interatomic interaactions operate primarily through electrostatic effects; a rune that suppresses electric fields would also weaken interatomic interactions and make material in its radius easier to deform or break, or in the extreme case, instantly vaporize it. If, to avoid this effect, you set it up so that electric fields can propagate over normal interatomic distances but not larger ones (create a hard cutoff after 1nm, perhaps) you will not prevent conduction in metals (though you may slow it; I don't know how important long-range field propagation is in electrical conduction in metals compared to the short-range domino effect).

Furthermore, light is made up of alternating electric and magnetic fields. Preventing the propagation of electric fields probably has major effects on the propagation of light, adding 'total darkness' to the tally of side effects.

Summary of what I got from this:
  • Regardless of the mechanism, any rune sufficiently general to hit both metallic conduction and ionic conduction is likely to have major side effects, whether to the action of chemistry (e.g. fires), to the integrity of nearby matter, or to the propagation of light. Precedent with Temporal Runes suggests that Hazō is unlikely to produce such side effects in a rune, and therefore there's no particular reason to think that a rune preventing electron conduction (which is what has Hazō has primarily seen of electrical conduction, since lightning is sufficient to cause dielectric breakdown in most materials and so even materials that normally conduct ionically will conduct an immediate lightning strike through electron movement) would also prevent ionic conduction, or have the 'side effect' of preventing nerve operation.
    • If Hazō is aware that nerves involve 'electricity' in their operation, and decides to specifically research a rune that does have that effect, that's of course another story. However, the thrust of your argument was that an anti-conduction rune would not require metaknowledge to shut down nerves; that Hazō is aware that Raiton energy can produce muscle spasms doesn't imply that he's aware of the normal function of charge movement in the nervous system.
      • As a comparison, Hazō is presumably aware of many neurotoxins, even if poison-resistance traning means they don't work on ninja; he would be unlikely to make the inference from the existence of neurotoxins which produce abnormal function that neurotransmitters exist and are important to normal function. Indeed, he probably shouldn't; mercury produces neurotoxic effects, but there are no heavy metals involved in normal nerve function.
 
particularly that (as I argue below) Hazō has no reason to think that (to him) Raiton energy is involved in nerve signal transmission.
It's apparently common knowledge in-universe that Lightning jutsu work well with nerves, I remember it coming up at least once before and some in-universe explanation existing.

As for the rest, the QMs have imperfect knowledge of physics so chakra doesn't bother respecting the laws of physics in fine detail. See: time runes not having boundary effects, explicitly stated on Discord to be because the QMs tried calcing it out and full calculation proved infeasible. Chakra is actual literal magic and we can in fact arbitrarily instruct it to shut off specifically nerves in a given area without breaking chemistry or light or so on, instead of having to instruct chakra to shut off conduction as a whole. The obstacle is whether Hazo understands that lightning and nerves are related in some way that a rune could exploit, and as far as I know the answer is already yes.
 
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It's apparently common knowledge in-universe that Lightning jutsu work well with nerves, I remember it coming up at least once before and some in-universe explanation existing.

As for the rest, the QMs have imperfect knowledge of physics so chakra doesn't bother respecting the laws of physics in fine detail. See: time runes not having boundary effects, explicitly stated on Discord to be because the QMs tried calcing it out and full calculation proved infeasible. Chakra is actual literal magic and we can in fact arbitrarily instruct it to shut off specifically nerves in a given area without breaking chemistry or light or so on, instead of having to instruct chakra to shut off conduction as a whole. The obstacle is whether Hazo understands that lightning and nerves are related in some way that a rune could exploit, and as far as I know the answer is already yes.
Ah. Alright, was not aware of that.

Still, not disputing that Hazō can (in principle) research a rune that shuts off nerve signal transmission. The claim I have a problem with is that a rune that shuts of electrical conduction (as Hazō would understand it) would automatically have that effect, which I think is a reasonable reading of @Halil 's post.

As an analogy for why I have a problem with this that isn't the thing we're currently arguing about; consider a rune that shuts off friction in its AoE. Like conductivity, friction is an emergent property and cannot be changed independently of other things. What Halil is arguing feels to me like arguing "Well, without the intermolecular interactions that cause friction, water should behave like a superfluid and e.g. support indefinitely rotating vortices", but simultaneously ignoring the equivalent argument "Well, without the intermolecular interactions that cause friction, all matter immediately vaporizes because there's nothing to hold it together anymore". You can have a rune that switches off friction at surfaces (say by coating them in a microscopic layer of chakra), or you can have a rune that switches off the interactions that cause friction and thereby vaporizes everything in its radius of effect, or you could have a rune which switches off friction at surfaces and causes water to act like a superfluid, but you can't claim that the second rune should act like the third one, or that someone ought to be able to make the third rune without explicitly aiming for its effect.

Edit: Actually, I suppose continuous ionic/covalent/metallic lattices might survive the effect of the second rune. However, water definitely would not, so the point still holds.
 
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The problem here is that conductivity is an emergent property. It's a consequence of the movement of charge on microscopic scales, not an independent property that can be dialed up and down without changing anything else. Therefore, any rune that suppresses conduction is doing one of two things:
  • Altering some fundamental rule in a way that incidentally suppresses electrical conductivity.
  • Recognizing places where electrical conduction is happening and selectively preventing it from happening.

You repeat the "emergent property" objection many times in your post, and use it as the basis of your greater objection, so I must address it thoroughly in one place.

1. Evidently false by previous results: If we can make a rune that can dial up and down time, the "emergent property" defense for not being able to screw with conductivity does not hold water. It's clear that chakra doesn't care.

2. A false assumption in the first place: "Emergent properties" are turtles all the way down, hence stopping at any point and saying "but this is the fundamental property we can change to get knock-down effects above; ignore everything below it." would be invalid. You can't point to one arbitrary point on that turtle tower and say "chakra-manipulabale physics start here. You can't touch anything above or below."

Any "you have to choose which fundamental (sub)atomic interaction property you would need to mess with to get the actual effect you want" objection is therefore pointless. And highly likely to be outside of our (to be specific, my. I can't follow Hazou into Strings-land...) capabilities.
(As an aside, do you think Hazo knows even about relativity?)

If this line of reasoning is false, I will address your points built upon the "emergent property" objection. It could well be! But until then, that would be working under false a false premise, hence misleading.


I would contend that the first method would result in very major side effects, effectively no matter what you actually change. The second method results in a rune whose function depends on its definition of 'electrical conduction'; conduction of electricity in metals is extremely different from conductivity in ion-containing liquids, and there's no particular reason to think that a rune which suppresses one would also suppress the other, particularly that (as I argue below) Hazō has no reason to think that (to him) Raiton energy is involved in nerve signal transmission.

Two asides:
1. DanZapman already addressed the Raiton energy knowledge being present in-story, so I won't belabor that point further except to say that I am sure you can imagine that Hazo is somewhat aware of what one of the five human elements does to the human body - both academically and through in-person observation, since ninja throw that at each other.

2. Creating the new requirement that "Hazo should know why Raiton has the effects it does" feels, at best, like splitting hairs. And is unnecessary anyway, since he will observe the effect he expects.

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I will address your two other points that are not based on "but an emergent property", shortly:
1. The myelin sheath doesn't fit: You are right. The myelin sheath example was an auxiliary idea I had before our discussion, which I specifically noted was used for secondary reasoning. (e.g. I do not know what is going on here, but changing this variable seems to cause this, so...). Therefore it does not fit with the rest, and may make it seem like I arbitrarily go between those two definitions of "conductivity". The second and third are specifically for electrical conductivity.

2. Side effects:

Summary of what I got from this:
  • Regardless of the mechanism, any rune sufficiently general to hit both metallic conduction and ionic conduction is likely to have major side effects, whether to the action of chemistry (e.g. fires), to the integrity of nearby matter, or to the propagation of light. Precedent with Temporal Runes suggests that Hazō is unlikely to produce such side effects in a rune, and therefore there's no particular reason to think that a rune preventing electron conduction (which is what has Hazō has primarily seen of electrical conduction, since lightning is sufficient to cause dielectric breakdown in most materials and so even materials that normally conduct ionically will conduct an immediate lightning strike through electron movement) would also prevent ionic conduction, or have the 'side effect' of preventing nerve operation.
    • If Hazō is aware that nerves involve 'electricity' in their operation, and decides to specifically research a rune that does have that effect, that's of course another story. However, the thrust of your argument was that an anti-conduction rune would not require metaknowledge to shut down nerves; that Hazō is aware that Raiton energy can produce muscle spasms doesn't imply that he's aware of the normal function of charge movement in the nervous system.
      • As a comparison, Hazō is presumably aware of many neurotoxins, even if poison-resistance traning means they don't work on ninja; he would be unlikely to make the inference from the existence of neurotoxins which produce abnormal function that neurotransmitters exist and are important to normal function. Indeed, he probably shouldn't; mercury produces neurotoxic effects, but there are no heavy metals involved in normal nerve function.

While it is a repeat, this bears repeating:
If you make the same post about the time rune, you will find that it (at least) causes molecular breakdowns on its threshold and possibly causes sub-atomic breakdowns on its threshold. Have we seen perfect slices out of the landscape (and-or MeatPuppet192108), or more exotic consequences like hellfire consuming the area? No.
In fact, as a happy coincidence, some of your points must exactly be the same, as both electron and ion transfer "will" break down at the barrier, hence the time rune must also result in the major side effects you mention, "whether to the action of chemistry (e.g. fires), to the integrity of nearby matter, or to the propagation of light"
Do any of these things happen?
No. (Barring the fire, which I doubt Hazo checked)

So this is a double-standard. If the time rune does not have those problems, neither will the conductivity rune.

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Still, not disputing that Hazō can (in principle) research a rune that shuts off nerve signal transmission. The claim I have a problem with is that a rune that shuts of electrical conduction (as Hazō would understand it) would automatically have that effect, which I think is a reasonable reading of @Halil 's post.

Okay, I want to cut through chasing definitions if I can. Otherwise I can see this stretching out a bit. Let's see:

To be clear, are you saying: "If Hazo looks at / considers Raiton's effects on animal or human bodies (and-or discusses with Noburi what shocking corpses can do), considers his knowledge about conductivity[1], and decides to take that away, the resulting rune would not shut people down immediately?"
[1]: They have ninja wire - and according to the wiki a fundamental use of lightning release is channeling it through ninja tools. One trivial observation any such ninja can make would be "why are we/they using metal tools for Raiton", for instance. Alternatively "why does Raiton make people faster/twitchier?"... Or even: Regardless of what we think, Raiton works on nerves. The whole definition debate is therefore superfluous, because Raiton on nerves would be Hazou's natural inspiration.

Because if you don't think so, then our discussion over definitions don't matter. Through the grace of Hazou and chakra, everything works regardless.

Regardless, thank you for engaging this idea so thoroughly. It is sincerely better than the alternative.
 
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The obstacle is whether Hazo understands that lightning and nerves are related in some way that a rune could exploit, and as far as I know the answer is already yes.

I'll reiterate @DanZapman 's point to clarify my stance.
My efforts were not to dictate the specific mechanism or effect (wrt conductivity) Hazo should use to achieve instant-nervous-system-kill. That's clearly not how this works, e.g. the time rune. Instead, my efforts were to show that there already exists Hazo-(accessible)-knowledge and subsequent physical effects (related to conductivity) that Hazo can manipulate for AoE instant-nerve-kill.
And I think we've already achieved that.
 
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@Halil I'm really not invested in this fight, but it's worth remembering that seals are not epistemologically simple. They operate in categories based around human understanding, not physical primitives. These two are at odds, and you can sometimes play them off each other, but it's still fundamentally the case that seals are specified (both Watsonianly and Doylistically) in terms of outcomes, and that's generally the same way the autobalancer ends up looking at things and deciding how difficult they should be.
 
@Halil I'm really not invested in this fight, but it's worth remembering that seals are not epistemologically simple. They operate in categories based around human understanding, not physical primitives. These two are at odds, and you can sometimes play them off each other, but it's still fundamentally the case that seals are specified (both Watsonianly and Doylistically) in terms of outcomes, and that's generally the same way the autobalancer ends up looking at things and deciding how difficult they should be.

I think you misunderstood my final point. I indeed agree with you. The physics and biology discussion, at least on my part, was illustrative rather than prescriptive.
For instance, I'll reiterate something from the end of my previous post with regards to how Hazo might think of this, with new emphasis:

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To be clear, are you saying: "If Hazo looks at / considers Raiton's effects on animal or human bodies (and-or discusses with Noburi what shocking corpses can do), considers his knowledge about conductivity[1], and decides to take that away, the resulting rune would not shut people down immediately?"
[1]: They have ninja wire - and according to the wiki a fundamental use of lightning release is channeling it through ninja tools. One trivial observation any such ninja can make would be "why are we/they using metal tools for Raiton", for instance. Alternatively "why does Raiton make people faster/twitchier?"... Or even: Regardless of what we think, Raiton works on nerves. The whole definition debate is therefore superfluous, because Raiton on nerves would be Hazou's natural inspiration.
 
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