Possibly I'm whooshing right now, but the actual reason was because he expected to be Clan Head.
Which Naruto would know perfectly well, since he was there at the meeting discussing it right afterward, but it's close enough to the truth to maybe be a viable legitimacy-preserving public pretext.
As a concession to the hokage's statistically inevitable treason-related headaches, such an arrangement would also mean that any future messes Oro might make in Leaf are officially the Goketsu clan head's responsibility to clean up.
 
Movement drew her attention to the ocean. There was someone falling from the sky. She watched as they fell into the ocean. Their skin melted away and they reached out for a moment in agony. Then, suddenly a person – the same person – appeared in the sky just above where the person had melted to death and fell back into the ocean.

Same as Daizen, per Hazō's report. She looked around, then sighed internally. Not a single other person in sight.

In my mind this is a surprising outcome. If there were no correlation between death location and afterlife location, he wouldn't have been there, but if it were 1-to-1 the odds of there being only one person who died in the rift battle still stuck there seem pretty low - by my count, about six enemy mooks died on-page, fourteen bodies killed in the RER barrage were identified, and
Based on the anticipated number of people at the facility, the vast majority of enemies were vaporized in the initial blast
...and therefore not counted among the bodies. (Also, there'd have been the chance of Deidara coming back through the Rift for another go.)

So I currently suspect that there's a 'scattering' effect where you land in the afterlife some distance from the point corresponding to where you died, sometimes a very short distance but usually long enough to be out of sight.

Another possibility is that the recently-dead banded together and Deidara used his flight to rescue those who were stuck in a falling-into-acid-loop, but left this one behind for some reason, but if he was bothering to do that I don't know why would leave one behind.
 
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Remind me, but were we planning on asking Orochimaru to summon Hebikyōtei (the oath-witness snake) in front of Tsunade to make sure he wasn't disposed of by Orochimaru before passing the oath along?
@Left-Hand Mutant could you include something like this in your plan during the scene where we inform Tsuande about our bioseals?

Orochimaru followed Hebikyōtei to the Seventh Path to report to Manda suspiciously quickly….
 
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[X] Action Plan: The Returning Heroes
Word Count: <299
  • Close the Rift by entering and exiting it until it's too small for safety.
  • Set up a schedule for chakra deliveries for Orochimaru.
    • Ask him for substrate, we'll need a lot to defend Leaf.
  • Head to Leaf
    • Akatsuki may be present.
      • It's probably better to be smuggled in to avoid leaks.
      • Defer to Tsunade's lead about how the Goketsu will enter Leaf
    • Shape additional blanks on the march, as time permits
      • 10x Force Dome
      • 16x Ninja Radar
      • 4x Iron Earth
      • 2x Icarus
      • 2x Air Leadening
      • 1x TR 140
    • Get in contact with Neji and get an update on Leaf.
    • Keep checking for Kagome. Try to set up a rendezvous on the Human Path. Pass him a letter from Kei asking him to return.
    • Defer to Tsunade on how to approach Leaf exactly.
  • Make contact with Naruto somewhere near Leaf
    • Debrief him on the battle
    • Inform him of our runic capabilities, give him the same info we told Tsunade and Orochimaru.
    • How can we secure Leaf? We have Ninja Radar and we can drop a Summon Boss Rush on any infiltrators.
      • Orochimaru feared there would be an Akatsuki pair present.
      • It will be difficult to preserve runic OPSEC from sensors like the Hyuuga if runes are openly used in the fighting.
    • How freely can the Goketsu act in Leaf? Hazou'd like to pick up where he left off as Clan Head. What's happened to the remnant during the last 6 months?
    • We have a prisoner we'd like mindscanned ASAP.
    • Hazou strongly desires to tell Ino that he is back, does Naruto have a compelling reason to prevent this?
      • Kei will want to tell Fujisawa as well.
    • What the hell happened when Orochimaru went missing? Seems like all hell broke loose.
    • End the update before the meeting ends.
Major plan updates, we are back below 300 words and the tone has shifted considerably towards securing Leaf. I am leaving space in a future update to discuss SC, bioseals, and whatever else.
 
At camp, tell Tsunade about the Bioseals.
  • High-OPSEC, Bring Noburi and the documentation Oro provided.
  • Can she check for malicious or subversive effects?
  • Would she be able to remove them? What would that entail?
  • What does she advise we do?
If the idea is to hide the situation from Naruto, I'm not convinced by that, but I do agree that talking about it with Tsunade is more important, since she's the one who might be able to actually do something about the situation.

Repeat the "Akatsuki may be present" conversation, if appropriate.

Surely he knows if they're present, right? And if they are, once we show up in Leaf that's maybe an urgent situation and I wouldn't want to spend significant time on debriefing until it's handled

Major plan updates, we are back below 300 words and the tone has shifted considerably towards securing Leaf. I am leaving space in a future update to discuss SC, bioseals, and whatever else.

Darn, I just finished reading the previous version.
 
In my mind this is a surprising outcome. If there were no correlation between death location and afterlife location, he wouldn't have been there, but if it were 1-to-1 the odds of there being only one person who died in the rift battle still stuck there seem pretty low - by my count, about six enemy mooks died on-page, fourteen bodies killed in the RER barrage were identified, and
The ones not over acid lakes picked up supplies and booked it when they worked out how badass the assault force was.

@Left-Hand Mutant could you include something like this in your plan during the scene where we inform Tsuande about our bioseals?

Orochimaru followed Hebikyōtei to the Seventh Path to report to Manda suspiciously quickly….
Will do when I get home, thanks.

Major plan updates, we are back below 300 words and the tone has shifted considerably towards securing Leaf. I am leaving space in a future update to discuss SC, bioseals, and whatever else.
This looks really good I'll refactor my fork tonight to follow the timeline/outline.
please ping me if you include a Tsunade bioseal scene, and I'll vote.
 
[X] Action Plan: The Returning Heroes
Close the Rift by entering and exiting it until it's too small for safety.
What are your thoughts on testing the rift's resurrection mechanics by killing random Moon-nin? We're already going to kill them (via Noburi), we may as well check to see stuff like "if we kill 2 ninja 10 meters apart, do they respawn 10 meters apart in the afterlife?"; "if we kill a Moon-nin, bring them back, and then kill them again, do they respawn where they died the first time or the second time?"; stuff like that.
 
[X] Action Plan: The Returning Heroes

What are your thoughts on testing the rift's resurrection mechanics by killing random Moon-nin? We're already going to kill them (via Noburi), we may as well check to see stuff like "if we kill 2 ninja 10 meters apart, do they respawn 10 meters apart in the afterlife?"; "if we kill a Moon-nin, bring them back, and then kill them again, do they respawn where they died the first time or the second time?"; stuff like that.
We are maybe not killing them. Spoke to Paper on Discord and he said to hold on regarding that. There's not much point killing them if Rain ninja escaped already.
 
Make contact with Naruto somewhere near Leaf
  • Debrief him on the battle
  • Inform him of our runic capabilities—same info shared with Tsunade and Orochimaru.
Requested addition in exchange for a vote. Made a few tweaks to reduce wordcount, but as long as you have something in there about only referring to that rune as "Project Twilight" I'll be happy. I added a link like you did when we first try to implement this without using explicit language to save WC.

I'm happy to help with wordcount to accommodate this as well!
researching Superchillers (codename Project Twilight) and
 
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If the idea is to hide the situation from Naruto, I'm not convinced by that, but I do agree that talking about it with Tsunade is more important, since she's the one who might be able to actually do something about the situation.
Ideally, Tsunade helps us resolve this somehow and no-one else ever needs to know.
I she can't help, I'm not to strongly opinionated on telling Naruto or not. But Tsunade needs to know ASAP

Surely he knows if they're present, right? And if they are, once we show up in Leaf that's maybe an urgent situation and I wouldn't want to spend significant time on debriefing until it's handled
Tsunade was just in Leaf and in contact with Naruto, and couldn't confirm any particular Akatsuki in Leaf.
Presumably, any Akatsuki loitering in/near Leaf long term are trying to keep a low profile so we don't flood them in Boss summons and Essieclones.
Anyways, let's go triangulate their location with Ninja-Radar and flood them in Boss summons and Essieclones.
 
This looks really good I'll refactor my fork tonight to follow the timeline/outline.
please ping me if you include a Tsunade bioseal scene, and I'll vote
Why can't this wait until we get back to Leaf?
What are your thoughts on testing the rift's resurrection mechanics by killing random Moon-nin? We're already going to kill them (via Noburi), we may as well check to see stuff like "if we kill 2 ninja 10 meters apart, do they respawn 10 meters apart in the afterlife?"; "if we kill a Moon-nin, bring them back, and then kill them again, do they respawn where they died the first time or the second time?"; stuff like that.
Orochimaru coded but I am tempted. Anyone object/approve?
Requested addition in exchange for a vote. Made a few tweaks to reduce wordcount, but as long as you have something in there about only referring to that rune as "Project Twilight" I'll be happy. I added a link like you did when we first try to implement this without using explicit language to save WC.

I'm happy to help with wordcount to accommodate this as well!
See Discord for my counteroffer.
 
Set up a schedule for chakra deliveries for Orochimaru.

Maybe I've missed something, but what's the actual case for him doing the whole thing now, rather than kicking it once or twice to get it to an unknown-to-our-enemies location a few miles from the current site, coming back to Leaf to help handle the situation if there's an Akatsuki pair there, and doing the slow move-to-Leaf part once Leaf is confirmed safe-ish?

Tsunade was just in Leaf and in contact with Naruto, and couldn't confirm any particular Akatsuki in Leaf.
Well damn

Anyways, let's go triangulate their location with Ninja-Radar and flood them in Boss summons and Essieclones.
Seems iffy - whether they're in a location that isn't plausible for random Leaf-nin is just a matter of luck, except maybe if it's Kisame and/or Konan. Also risks rune infosec (if just ninja-radar) or blows it completely (if force domes & RERs), but I guess the secret wasn't going to last much longer anyway, and it's not like I have a better idea for what to do about them.
 
Maybe I've missed something, but what's the actual case for him doing the whole thing now, rather than kicking it once or twice to get it to an unknown-to-our-enemies location a few miles from the current site, coming back to Leaf to help handle the situation if there's an Akatsuki pair there, and doing the slow move-to-Leaf part once Leaf is confirmed safe-ish
I think the CBA on Orochimaru's presence given that we uncover an Akatsuki pair in Leaf is not worth the payoff.

We give up like 2 weeks of rift moving. That's 50% (probably much more) of the job.

In exchange we get Mandaa (can't really use in Leaf) and Orochimaru. Who is better defensively than offensively.

I don't think we're actually going to find an Akatsuki pair in Leaf (although checking for one is just good sense).

Given what we're giving up for what we're getting I would rather Orochimaru stay behind.
 
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