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@Shrooms if we don't specify, Hazou will prep for 5 days for the Sealing section whoch is total overkill IMO, can you add a line that says "Eschew prep, use SSA, reroll -9/-12 on Callig/Sealing rolls"
Implemented, thanks

Counterpoint, what are the advantages to releasing it? More goodwill? We're overflowing with it right now.
Well given that it seems like we're about to try getting SC for people it seems to me that we will be spending a lot of that goodwill soon, but perhaps I am wrong
 
I mean, generally, it's doing what Asuma told us to. Regardless of whatever else is going on, being on his good side will help for A-day.
 
Speaking of which are you willing to vote for my plan
I am currently playing Tears of the Kingdom, check again in 2-8 weeks. (I'll look into it later tonight, haha.)

I noticed that Hazou only has 1 FP atm, so for safety reasons this time I'd suggest just rerolling the Callig rolls.

Normally rerolling Sealing -9/-12s is a very efficient way to spend FP as it's worth more than an invoke, but I don't think we have the FP to spare this time.
Really? How long's it been since we refreshed?
 
[X] Action Plan: Fine, I'll Do It Myself
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Involving Hidan is a good idea, though I'd prefer we wait until after making tangible progress on Minato's notes to leak the cipher.
 
While I'm pinging people @acidshill @Unaligned Player Would you be willing to take a look at and ideally vote for my plan? I see you voted for faflec but perhaps mine hold something that catch your eye (there are two of them)
Sure, it seems like a perfectly fine plan. At the very least it should be an entertaining sanity check.

I would like it if you put something in there about Canvass doing a scent comparison, because at this rate it's never going to happen.

[X] Action Plan: Fine, I'll Do It Myself
 
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Welcome to Marked For Death, an AU Naruto-verse quest by and for the rational fiction crowd. The protagonist, Gōketsu-née-Kurosawa Hazō, is a young ninja from the Village Hidden in the Mist who went missing, had adventures, and then managed to buy his way into the Village Hidden in the Leaves by way of a seal that he co-invented which transformed warfare.


For anyone new to quest participation, the basic notion (for the purposes of this story) is that everyone in the thread controls a single character (Hazō) by voting on what the character does. We use approval voting, meaning that you can vote for as many plans as you like.

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Why not put the answer in our sealed will or something? If it's only meant to come out in the case of Hazo's death anyway. Sure let Asuma know so we earn the same brownie points, but we shouldn't give this away just yet.
Would you be willing to vote for the version that doesn't have that part btw?

Sure, it seems like a perfectly fine plan. At the very least it should be an entertaining sanity check.

I would like it if you put something in there about Canvass doing a scent comparison, because at this rate it's never going to happen.

[X] Action Plan: Fine, I'll Do It Myself
Word count is tight but I'll try to work it in
 
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  • Optimize with Mari/Kei
  • Asuma
    • Clan head tutelage
      • Hazou is interested. Before committing, they're both busy. How frequently would they train? Would Hazou accompany Asuma to Hokage duties to save time?
    • Minato seals
      • With everything happening, Hazou has made marginal progress on Minato's seals, but is resuming research.
      • Hazou claimed clan secrecy on decoding to protect Goketsu interests and ensure compensation for work, but it's shortsighted if Hazou/Kagome died.
        • Provide folded slip of paper with answer key.
        • Hazou is reasonably confident Kagome, Orochimaru, and himself are the only ones who can finish them anyways.
      • May want to keep this secret to avoid empowering Orochimaru. Wouldn't want him giving himself a Bijuu or something.
      • Minato was renowned for combining Hacking and Sealing. Should that be necessary, would Asuma tutor Hazou in Hacking?
    • Specjonin
      • In that vein, Hazou feels competent enough to request evaluation for Sealing specjonin. What can Asuma tell him about the process?
    • R&D Missions
      • Suggestion: R&D missions. Hire research as a mission via tower (taxed), with innovation becoming non-secret property of client (client is owed royalties for known use by third-parties).
    • Akane investigation
      • Hazou wants Asuma to consider involving Hidan in searching for Akane.
        • Frankly, Hidan terrifies Hazou, in part because Hidan said since he has Hazou's blood, he can find Hazou anywhere. However...
          • That ability could find Akane's body.
          • He seems favorably inclined towards Hazou.
          • Akatsuki has vested interest enforcing AMITY.
        • As scary as he is, it seems pragmatic. We don't know other village's intelligence gathering capabilities. If there's a 1% chance they can discover EM we should act.
  • Gaku: Get Canvass herbs/spices, compare with Akane's attackers' smell.
  • Sealing
    • Devote a SSA clone to sealing. Research Minato seals/directional explosives.
    • Eschew prep, use SSA, reroll -9/-12 on Callig/Sealing rolls


[X] Action Plan: Fine, I'll Do It Myself No Answer Key
Word Count: 260
  • Optimize with Mari/Kei
  • Asuma
    • Clan head tutelage
      • Hazou is interested but before committing, what does Asuma have in mind? They're both busy. How frequently/how long would the training happen? Would Hazou be accompanying Asuma to Hokage duties to save time?
    • Minato seals
      • With all the everything going on, Hazou has only made some progress on Minato's seals, but he is resuming research.
      • Minato was renowned for combining Hacking and Sealing. Should that be necessary, would Asuma tutor Hazou in Hacking?
    • Specjonin
      • In that vein, Hazou feels competent enough to request evaluation for Sealing specjonin. What can Asuma tell him about the process?
    • R&D Missions
      • Suggestion: R&D missions. Hire research as a mission via tower (taxed), with innovation becoming non-secret property of client (client is owed royalties for known use by third-parties).
    • Akane investigation
      • Hazou would like Asuma to consider involving Hidan in searching for Akane.
        • Frankly, Hidan terrifies Hazou, in no small part because Hidan told him since he has Hazou's blood, he can find Hazou anywhere in the world. However...
          • That ability could potentially find Akane's body.
          • He seems favorably inclined towards Hazou.
          • Akatsuki has a vested interest in enforcing AMITY.
        • As scary as he is, it seems pragmatic. We don't know the intelligence gathering capabilities of other villages. If there's even a 1% chance they can discover EM from her body we have to act.
  • Gaku: Get Canvass herbs/spices, compare with Akane's attackers' smell.
  • Sealing
    • Devote a clone to sealing. Research Minato seals and directional explosives.
    • Eschew prep, use SSA, reroll -9/-12 on Callig/Sealing rolls
I have added getting Canvass to check herbs/spices to both versions of the plan
 
Would Hazou accompany Asuma to Hokage duties to save time?
"What would the training look like? Shadowing Asuma as clan head/Hokage?"
Provide folded slip of paper with answer key.
Can we make it a storage scroll? That it's on a slip of paper makes it pretty clear that the answer is obvious - at least, short.
May want to keep this secret to avoid empowering Orochimaru.
This seems weird to me. May? I figured that this was a dead-man switch sort of thing.
 
"What would the training look like? Shadowing Asuma as clan head/Hokage?"
works for me

Can we make it a storage scroll? That it's on a slip of paper makes it pretty clear that the answer is obvious - at least, short.
sure, works

This seems weird to me. May? I figured that this was a dead-man switch sort of thing.
It can be reworded but I wasn't imagining it to be a deadman switch personally, moreso just that he has the solution on hand if he needs it. I think a true deadman's switch would need some more thought put into it
 
[X] Action Plan: Fine, I'll Do It Myself
Word Count: 298
  • Optimize with Mari/Kei
  • Asuma
    • Clan head tutelage
      • Hazou is interested. Before committing, they're both busy. How frequently would they train? What would the training look like? Shadowing Asuma as clan head/Hokage?
    • Minato seals
      • With everything happening, Hazou has made marginal progress on Minato's seals, but is resuming research.
      • Hazou claimed clan secrecy on decoding to protect Goketsu interests and ensure compensation for work, but it's shortsighted if Hazou/Kagome died.
        • Provide storage seal with answer key.
        • Hazou is reasonably confident Kagome, Orochimaru, and himself are the only ones who can finish them anyways.
      • Hazou would prefer secrecy to avoid empowering Orochimaru unless absolutely necessary. Wouldn't want him giving himself a Bijuu or something.
      • Minato was renowned for combining Hacking and Sealing. Should that be necessary, would Asuma tutor Hazou in Hacking?
    • Specjonin
      • In that vein, Hazou feels competent enough to request evaluation for Sealing specjonin. What can Asuma tell him about the process?
    • R&D Missions
      • Suggestion: R&D missions. Hire research as a mission via tower (taxed), with innovation becoming non-secret property of client (client is owed royalties for known use by third-parties).
    • Akane investigation
      • Hazou wants Asuma to consider involving Hidan in searching for Akane.
        • Frankly, Hidan terrifies Hazou, in part because Hidan said since he has Hazou's blood, he can find Hazou anywhere. However...
          • That ability could find Akane's body.
          • He seems favorably inclined towards Hazou.
          • Akatsuki has vested interest enforcing AMITY.
        • As scary as he is, it seems pragmatic. We don't know other village's intelligence gathering capabilities. If there's a 1% chance they can discover EM we should act.
  • Gaku: Get Canvass herbs/spices, compare with Akane's attackers' smell.
  • Sealing
    • Devote a SSA clone to sealing. Research Minato seals/directional explosives.
    • Eschew prep, use SSA, reroll -9/-12 on Callig/Sealing rolls


[X] Action Plan: Fine, I'll Do It Myself No Answer Key
Word Count: 260
  • Optimize with Mari/Kei
  • Asuma
    • Clan head tutelage
      • Hazou is interested but before committing, what does Asuma have in mind? They're both busy. How frequently/how long would the training happen?
      • What would the training look like? Shadowing Asuma as clan head/Hokage?
    • Minato seals
      • With all the everything going on, Hazou has only made some progress on Minato's seals, but he is resuming research.
      • Minato was renowned for combining Hacking and Sealing. Should that be necessary, would Asuma tutor Hazou in Hacking?
    • Specjonin
      • In that vein, Hazou feels competent enough to request evaluation for Sealing specjonin. What can Asuma tell him about the process?
    • R&D Missions
      • Suggestion: R&D missions. Hire research as a mission via tower (taxed), with innovation becoming non-secret property of client (client is owed royalties for known use by third-parties).
    • Akane investigation
      • Hazou would like Asuma to consider involving Hidan in searching for Akane.
        • Frankly, Hidan terrifies Hazou, in no small part because Hidan told him since he has Hazou's blood, he can find Hazou anywhere in the world. However...
          • That ability could potentially find Akane's body.
          • He seems favorably inclined towards Hazou.
          • Akatsuki has a vested interest in enforcing AMITY.
        • As scary as he is, it seems pragmatic. We don't know the intelligence gathering capabilities of other villages. If there's even a 1% chance they can discover EM from her body we have to act.
  • Gaku: Get Canvass herbs/spices, compare with Akane's attackers' smell.
  • Sealing
    • Devote a clone to sealing. Research Minato seals and directional explosives.
    • Eschew prep, use SSA, reroll -9/-12 on Callig/Sealing rolls
 
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