Oh. The thinker clans are in communication, their goal is the preservation of civilization. Shikamaru knew about Akane's ability to end the world. Shikamaru would have access to the mission rotation, and is intelligent enough to point us int he direction of the Hagoromo. That's... I don't want that to be true.

FWIW, my model of Shika looks at any plan to put Gouketsu "repeatedly shatters global paradigms in ways that are a headache to account for" Hazou in any kind of manic emotional state (especially driven by negative emotions), and quietly keels over and vomits.
 
FWIW, my model of Shika looks at any plan to put Gouketsu "repeatedly shatters global paradigms in ways that are a headache to account for" Hazou in any kind of manic emotional state (especially driven by negative emotions), and quietly keels over and vomits.
On the other hand, he has to consider what Mr. Asuma "Commit War Crimes on the Way Out" Sarutobi might order Akane to do.
 
And maybe also the massive bomb that is ES50 while we're at it?

An Emergency Clan Meeting in which we talk about these two situations with our clan is actually going to end up pretty interesting. Especially with Kei Nara there.

Kei Nara who would be Clan Head after Asuma executes Shikamaru for treason, like Hiruzen(?) did to that one Hyūga Clan Head. (Though this is the least of the reasons this is going to be interesting.)

Ah man, I kinda wish we could only invite Snowflake Gōketsu instead :(
I am deeply unclear as to why you would ask me to vote for your plan in this manner. It comes across pretty rude, given that I've articulated previously, both generally and to you directly, that I'm not interested in watching an on-screen meeting about ES 50, and that I have that meeting in my plan, just off-screen.

Asuma isn't going to execute Shikamaru under any circumstances. Asuma is not stupid and I suspect he will have already identified that the timelines are weird and may imply a leak.

I agree this is important. I'd like to give it the space it deserves, next cycle.
 
Take out the vile bigot stuff for Hagoromo. The bullet point below it as well. I'd just start with the third bullet point, why the school doesn't work and what we want instead.
I included those points because they seem to be the rough consensus viewpoint, and I want to respect/represent that. I also expect it's absence to be dealbreaker for some posters.
Thank you for lettting me know you object to it, if others say the same, I'd remove it.

Might need to hold off on telling Asuma about Akane's mission being leaked in case he's the one that did it.
I don't think pointing this out to Asuma costs us much, even if he's behind it. I do think how he responds will let me update on how much to suspect him. but it's s fair concern.



[X] Action Plan: Doing it again, less sealing, no scroll
 
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So there were no signs of explosions or untriggered seals at the campsite?
You'll recall that there were trees with burn marks visible underground. There were also some damaged pieces of paper which looked like they used to be seals. Neji has no way of knowing whether they were triggered or not before their destruction.
 
Actually, that actually tracks quite well.



SHIKA: This isn't a big priority and also do NOT cross any borders no matter what.

ASUMA: This is a huge fucking deal that needed immediate and drastic response. Anyway, I assume you're crossing either this border or that one to purse further? Here's what to do in either case.

...
This is not going to end well.

Asuma isn't going to execute Shikamaru under any circumstances.

We on the other hand...
I admit, if Shikamaru betrayed us like that, it would hurt. It will hurt him more, but still, it would hurt.
 
RE:Shikamaru Killed Akane

I am excited to finally uncover treachery and heartbreaking betrayal among our ranks, but on priors, I mostly expect this to turn to be us jumping at shadows (no pun intended).

Fully support discussing this IC, to be clear; just registering a prediction.
 
Somewhat-final plan updates.

@Noumero, @Egg Shavings, @Dictator4Hire, @RandomOTP, @faflec, @cog-nito, @T_of_A, @Lord Marshal, @charlesrwest, @Rafin, please review the changes and make sure it's still to your liking. IMO the most significant change is that I cut the part about trying to secure exclusive rights to sell Earthshaped goods both because I think it's unlikely to be viable and because I needed the wordcount. If you can produce a version of the plan that has space, I'm happy to put it back in.

If y'all could also check that the links in the plan go to scenes that seem relevant, that would be great as I've had some trouble with that and want to confirm they're all good.

@Velorien @eaglejarl @Paperclipped, spoons permitting, would you please check the plan for number of scenes, ambiguous/confusing phrasing, etc.?

I am declaring bankruptcy on plan-related comments made before this post: there are too many and I've lost track of them due to busyness and SV's notification system not really helping. If you have any comments or change requests, please...
  • Make a new comment containing nothing but the comments/change requests. Ideally, include suggested wording for changes which keeps me under wordcount. Please either quote my post or tag me.
  • Indicate your willingness to vote for the plan if the changes are made (ignore this if you're already voting).
If you don't follow that format I'm (probably) going to ignore it.
I would be willing to vote for your plan(s? I'm not sure the difference between them.) if Snowflake was added to the pile of people that we checked things with prior to Asuma.
 
SHIKA: This isn't a big priority and also do NOT cross any borders no matter what.

ASUMA: This is a huge fucking deal that needed immediate and drastic response. Anyway, I assume you're crossing either this border or that one to purse further? Here's what to do in either case.
Yeah I think this was a point of confusion for us, because IIRC we didn't even discuss following the trail any further, and when Asuma said that I was like 'what? we can do that?'. Might have been a good idea.
 
RE:Shikamaru Killed Akane

I am excited to finally uncover treachery and heartbreaking betrayal among our ranks, but on priors, I mostly expect this to turn to be us jumping at shadows (no pun intended).

Fully support discussing this IC, to be clear; just registering a prediction.
Same, tbh. This is a deathworld where most ninja die before they hit Chunnin.
 
Anyone else remember when Asuma traded plants to the Wakahisa that would essentially allow chakra to gold conversion amd he thought that this would likely weaken Mist more than strengthen it? Might be relevant soon.
 
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