Hey! Hey! Have you heard? Have you heard the Rumor? Have you heard the Rumor of the Too-Long Vote?
They say that you should make sure your vote is shorter than one-hundred-and-fifty words, or else a bunch of spooky red monsters will pop out! They say that for every word that your vote exceeds one-fifty, the monsters will move back doing that thing you love a whole hour on their calendar, and if you do it too much, you'll never get to do it at all! Scary!
More seriously, while I like the intent behind Kaizuki's longvote (and
@Nerevar 's edit), I very much prefer to keep intent as just that, so that Firnagzen has maximum freedom when it comes to actually writing the update and implementing the vote, instead of just giving a long monologue.
Here's my attempt to streamline things:
[X] Give the Mandalay girls their space. They're clearly overwhelmed.
-[X] Ask them to call anytime whenever they're ready to talk.
[X] Check in on the prisoners.
-[X] Find out what all their names and powers are, and Yuki's read on their personalities.
--[X] Mention that according to Nadia, one of them must be a sub-3 month experience new hire? Any indication on which one?
-[X] Ask Yuki what secure containment procedures she's planning on using.
--[X] If there are safety issues or Yuki plans something unacceptable (i.e. more than just gemming), break to voting.
[X] Take the Yuki express back to Fukushima with everyone, assuming it's safe.
[X] Thank everyone very much for their contributions. That went incredibly well, and you hope that you can all work together more in the future.
-[X] Touch on the existing level of alliances and agreements that exist, then be enthusiastic about the future possibilities of a free exchange of powers and ideas fueled by unlimited magic, with everyone here helping each other in ways they might not even have considered yet.
--[x] Bring up Akemi's luck magic as example.
--[X] If naming comes up, propose "Mahou Shoujo Kyoukai".
[X] If Kazumi and Yuki are on-board, extend an invitation to Mika to attend the Tokyo meeting with us as a partner in our coalition.
-[X] Ask Kazumi and Mika if they're interested in letting Yuki set up a node near them - Mitakihara's getting one, and near-instant transport would make future collaboration much easier.
This is ~250 words, as compared to Kai (and
@Nerevar 's) ~650.