What we DO have evidence of, is a workable amount of buy-in:
""Yuuri's awake?" Raw, naked hope flashes across Airi's face,"


What I think we would LIKE is "enough self-awareness" to the point where Anri could discuss the crime that landed her here. We don't have that, so the progress towards protecting everyone isn't quite there IMHO. Anri doesn't have the viewpoint in her dialog, so she's probably got a bit more thinking to do. Good news, I think our interaction is going well enough to make it possible. Yuki is giving us seriously good service, she's holding up professional discipline! Anri isn't backsliding due to bad handling.

As Anri is unsettled due to her change in circumstance, I don't want us to miss the open window. Right now is the time to get her to expect more "interference" from us, but using specifics and bargaining rather than raw authority. Forcing her is bad, but leading weakly won't cut it. I know that may be a fine line for some of us to walk and read - but it is a valid technique. It's what I'm calling us to use now. Love, definitely - lead, directly. This girl has very little to compare us to, and compromised logic:
""No shit that's what I want," Airi says, the spark of anger flickering to life. "How do I know you're not going to pull a fast one on me?"

You choose not to mention the fact that if you'd wanted to, you could have already done so. There's no way she could know for sure that the Grief Seed she'd been given was Yuuri's - the only reason you know is because of the name."



I don't expect her to be grateful all at once, but as she measures our clean and good actions, we will get her more safe and cooperative. Treating her as a powerful and wise individual isn't true, ATM. Respect as a person is good to show her, with the caveat that she is showing the world her "angry child" facet. Show her the one better choice, make it a choice, and I think she will improve. It just worked, and it will be fine a few more times.

Of course, the choices have to be thought of - what future do we intend? Make the intent clear to ourselves, or there is not intent. In this case, I'm asking our intent to be "work her towards a goal." In every case, that goal has to start out as "Yuuri." The part we should add to that is "caring about Anri helps Yuuri." Thus, start her on self-improvement activities. They won't complete right in front of us, but time is passing when we aren't there. IF we start anything useful.

The way to cook this all together is to offer her a definite form of acceptance, a place in the world to hold on to and rebuild from. We started that, and we should do the rest right now. Specifically, make her hear our offer as a literal, not as an implied - we want her to be "part of our SCIENCE" and "part of our culture." We take her hand. We show care for her. We already kept a promise. The befriending deal works by moving towards friendship, even if one of us has to be boss ATM. We may have to explain jail is going to continue, still overall we are presenting her with -

an ordinary world

for her to someday re-gain her friend Yuuri. At the price of it being a good and ordinary world for everyone else as well. She had morality before. As she puts her anger down, I think she can be that sort of person. I certainly want to find out.

(At the next higher level, I offer you a chance to blow minds and win hearts. Did we ever consider finding out anything about the families these girls come from? If they aren't better off as runaways, we could be moving to preserve some better homecoming for either of them. The correct white lies, little accommodations, whatever. Kyuubey only calculated his Masquerade to 'protect the system,' never intending these girls to have or need a family again. If there are adults we find halfway normal, they might become targets for our indoctrination program. Further, would parents be the best ingredient in a parole program? I know identity hijinks are at play, but we have magic -and clever friends. Put this in your vote.)

[X] Anri:
-[X] Welcome to our De-Witching Science Club!
-[X] YES. For now. Measure this herself - Hope alone may wake her faster or slower.
-[X] She can try gently communicating with her friends Witch to help the process along.
--[X] Still, get someone to watch in case you get hurt.
--[X] It took a week of being used for cleansing to make Aurora active again. It may just require waiting.
-[X] We are currently trying to make contact with Aurora, without getting injured.
[X] This is the most dangerous Magic anyone knows about.
-[Q] Kyuubey would tell you it has a failure rate of 100% - and might witch us just for trying. Then again, it witches everybody eventually.
--[Q] What it won't tell anyone is - that it feels pride every time we fail to disarm the trap.
-[X] Faster is less likely to work and more likely to break Yuuri's soul.
-[X] Problems? Depression would interfere. Magic seems rooted in emotion, and identity.
--[X] Witch Souls can transmit Grief, unconsciousness and pain.
[X] Sabrina asks Anri to also try to help herself.
--[X] Keep a journal, write out a list of affirmations.
-[X] Yuuri needs hope.
--[X] Try to become effective enough to make Yuuri's restoration happen faster, by learning.
--[X] Meditation is going to help, do that here.
--[X] Healing others would bring an even better way to focus on memories Yuuri would take up.
-[X] Learn sculpture. Start with mundane clay, not magic.
--[X] We will make a new body for Yuuri.
--[X] Practice required.
[X] Take her hand

[X] Yuki and her group:
-[X] Have her team recount their feelings about joining our team.
--[X] Personal attention for each, listen to their motivations.
-[X] Homura's progress finding a house for Yuki to claim.
-[X] Discuss the desired outcome for Tokyo. Determine a united front for the meeting.
-[X] Mention offer of ties to Asunaro.
-[X] Ask about the Soujus, seek counsel regarding defensive strategies.
--[X] Body Fabrication, and how to establish another facility
-[X] Get any intel related to Iowa. Request soft aid for a strike, planning and contacts.
-[X] The Murasaki Shrine Maidens.
-[X] Trustworthy magical girls with empathy/therapy powers.



Debate:
-[ ] If she doesn't have questions, you'll get out of her hair now.

[ ] Use enchanted grief to decontaminate yourself upon exiting the room.

-[ ] Give Yuki the antimagic bracelet. You trust her to reapply it to Airi if/when necessary.

Gonna have to ask you to show your work, at length.
These all don't seem to belong in the same vote. Intentions at odds with each other.
Please discuss context, or draw an analogy where the intent is clear? The actual relation between Sabrina and Anri, the intended internal state for Anri, Anri's actual reactions so far....??
@Redshirt Army - do you have further understanding to share?
 
Good catch @Godwinson .


[X] You expect it will take a week of this, maybe two, before anything else even *can* happen.
-[X] Impress on her that other people have rushed into dewitching before - and both they and the people they tried to help have suffered for it.
--[X] She can ask Miss Tsuruya about that. She's had to clean up the mess after failed attempts before. In fact you might even recommend it.

[X] You can give her more details if she's interested. You'll let her know if you discover anything new.
-[X] The key thing here is to be careful - you suspect Kyubey might be intentionally fucking with dewitching efforts, since it eats into his bottom line - and even if he isn't, it's a volatile process.
-[X] If she doesn't have questions, you'll get out of her hair now.

[X] Use enchanted grief to decontaminate yourself upon exiting the room.
-[X] Give Yuki the antimagic bracelet. You trust her to reapply it to Airi if/when necessary.

[X] With Yuki's team:
-[X] Clear the air. You'll be working together, so you need to wrinkle out any potential issues.
--[X] Especially in Tokyo, it'd be good to present a relatively united front.
--[X] You're... unhappy with the amount of collateral they caused in Sendai, but if they were desperate to recover their friends, some of the blame *is* yours.
---[X] Yuki has said that their team will strive to be better in the future, and that's all you can really ask for - too many magical girls have had to hurt people to survive for you to be judgemental about past actions.
[X] Break to voting for more discussion topics.
 
[X] Redshirt army

Like, Iowa are some bad people, but hopefully there is some middle ground between waiting to get attacked and setting our iron sights on destroying them
Aggressive reconaissance and info-gathering?
If HunterXHunter taught me something, is that knowledge is half the battle, and another third is getting that knowledge.

Whatever scenario we end up with, things will be much better off and controlled the more we know. I'd rather avoid finding out mid-battle that one of them has a deadman switch that detonates bombs in the middle of a city, or that a member is boosting their numbers with brainwashing magic.
 
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You know, at this point more people we are a witch then not. Why do I say this? The straw poll has Gott ist Tott(Definitaly a witch) at 63%. That means only 37% of people don't think we are a witch. Pretty interesting change of opinion from earlier if you ask me.
 
You know, at this point more people we are a witch then not. Why do I say this? The straw poll has Gott ist Tott(Definitaly a witch) at 63%. That means only 37% of people don't think we are a witch. Pretty interesting change of opinion from earlier if you ask me.

It has the "Meme answer" advantage though. I'm not sure a straight, boring, serious poll without the funny option names would have the same result. A distinction should probably also be made between "former witch" and "current witch".
 
You know, at this point more people we are a witch then not. Why do I say this? The straw poll has Gott ist Tott(Definitaly a witch) at 63%. That means only 37% of people don't think we are a witch. Pretty interesting change of opinion from earlier if you ask me.
Are we a witch? If you ask the girls we have fought so far... Were we a witch? Witches don't live their best life like Sabrina does.
Who is invested in that answer? Feathers, most of all?
If Madokami were asked the same question, would she answer, or change the question?

Aggressive reconaissance and info-gathering?
Sounds just like an IRL answer, and a good part of our solution. "Obfuscation" would be another fine way to prepare.
 
Okay, so. I don't really mind @Kaizuki 's take overall, but I think it can be skimmed down a bit. Plus, the vote is meant to also cover some of the topics to raise with Yuki's team.

[X] You expect it will take a week of this, maybe two, before anything else even *can* happen.
-[X] Impress on her that other people have rushed into dewitching before - and both they and the seeds they tried to help have suffered for it.
--[X] She can ask Miss Tsuruya about that. She's had to clean up the mess after failed attempts before. In fact you might even recommend it.

[X] You can give her more details if she's interested. You'll let her know if you discover anything new.
-[X] The key thing here is to be careful - you suspect Kyubey might be intentionally fucking with dewitching efforts, since it eats into his bottom line - and even if he isn't, it's a volatile process.
-[X] If she doesn't have questions, you'll get out of her hair now.

[X] Use enchanted grief to decontaminate yourself upon exiting the room.
-[X] Give Yuki the antimagic bracelet. You trust her to reapply it to Airi if/when necessary.

[X] With Yuki's team:
-[X] Clear the air. You'll be working together, so you need to wrinkle out any potential issues.
--[X] Especially in Tokyo, it'd be good to present a relatively united front.
--[X] You're... unhappy with the amount of collateral they caused in Sendai, but if they were desperate to recover their friends, some of the blame *is* yours.
---[X] Yuki has said that their team will strive to be better in the future, and that's all you can really ask for - too many magical girls have had to hurt people to survive for you to be judgemental about past actions.
[X] Break to voting for more discussion topics.
Okay, I feel the need one possible problem here is that this vote cuts out basically everything that addresses the "wanting something else to do" interpretation of Anri's words and the portion of the Firn's suggestion that involves asking if she's after something specific.

Given that Anri is going to be stuck in a room for a week, bored and the way powerlessness can lead to issues like depression, I'm concerned that that oversight could cause problems.
 
Apologies, guys - won't be updating today. I didn't get enough sleep the night before and didn't get much writing done yesterday, and well, with the later than usual vote I wasn't able to get any done during the week, either. Tomorrow, hopefully!
 
Apologies, guys - won't be updating today. I didn't get enough sleep the night before and didn't get much writing done yesterday, and well, with the later than usual vote I wasn't able to get any done during the week, either. Tomorrow, hopefully!

Does this mean Sabrina is suddenly sleepy?

:p
 
Okay, I feel the need one possible problem here is that this vote cuts out basically everything that addresses the "wanting something else to do" interpretation of Anri's words and the portion of the Firn's suggestion that involves asking if she's after something specific.

Given that Anri is going to be stuck in a room for a week, bored and the way powerlessness can lead to issues like depression, I'm concerned that that oversight could cause problems.

Hmm, how about this?

[X] You expect it will take a week of this, maybe two, before anything else even *can* happen.
-[X] Impress on her that other people have rushed into dewitching before - and both they and the seeds they tried to help have suffered for it.
--[X] She can ask Miss Tsuruya about that. She's had to clean up the mess after failed attempts before. In fact you might even recommend it.

[X] You can give her more details if she's interested. You'll let her know if you discover anything new.
-[X] The key thing here is to be careful - you suspect Kyubey might be intentionally fucking with dewitching efforts, since it eats into his bottom line - and even if he isn't, it's a volatile process.
-[X] If she doesn't have questions, you'll get out of her hair now.

[X] If she wants something to do other than just channel Yuuri's Seed with hope, we can probably arrange some supervised excursions outside her cell.
- [X] If nothing else, having something else to do will help with her mental health, which will help with channeling Hope magic.


[X] Use enchanted grief to decontaminate yourself upon exiting the room.
-[X] Give Yuki the antimagic bracelet. You trust her to reapply it to Airi if/when necessary.

[X] With Yuki's team:
-[X] Clear the air. You'll be working together, so you need to wrinkle out any potential issues.
--[X] Especially in Tokyo, it'd be good to present a relatively united front.
--[X] You're... unhappy with the amount of collateral they caused in Sendai, but if they were desperate to recover their friends, some of the blame *is* yours.
---[X] Yuki has said that their team will strive to be better in the future, and that's all you can really ask for - too many magical girls have had to hurt people to survive for you to be judgemental about past actions.
[X] Break to voting for more discussion topics.
 
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