Couldn't resist. I present, for your consideration: An Adaptation of a Favourite Scene.

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Himeko Nara was, by now, well accustomed to the practice of hiding her annoyance by politely sipping from an exquisite porcelain tea cup courtesy of Todai's Tea Appreciation Club. Of late, she'd been drinking a lot of tea while in the company of Jun Haga. The idealistic young girl was nominally her superior, being the duly elected representative of the Toshima Group to the Tokyo Mahou Shoujo Gikai, while Himeko herself was merely the longstanding de facto head of the Council's administrative department, and thus it behooved her to maintain the veneer of polite deference - no matter how difficult Miss Haga sometimes made that.

"...of course it isn't completely confirmed, yet, but at least one girl saw it first hand in Sendai!" Representative Haga's tone was as unabashedly enthusiastic as one might expect from someone of her age and lack of experience. "And if it is true - well, I don't have to tell you what that could mean, Himeko! Just think of it; no more competition, no more territories, no more need for everyone to be all angry and snarly at each other! It would certainly make my job a lot easier. Oh, I can't wait to tell everyone!"

"Miss Haga," Himeko began, ensuring her own manner conveyed all of the sororal concern and indulgent patience that she didn't actually feel, "Perhaps it would be wiser to wait for an official agreement to be reached, before making any premature announcements?"

"But the Council never agrees on anything!" Jun Haga may be inexperienced, Himeko reflected to herself, but she was at least bright enough to pick up on that particular truism more quickly than most. "Besides, I can't just keep something this big secret from everyone: what's the good of a representative if I don't keep my friends informed about stuff like this?"

What indeed? Himeko pointedly did not interject.

"I have to tell them something!" Jun concluded passionately.

"With respect, representative, you have to tell them nothing. In fact, I would advise you be as circumspect as you possibly can on this subject - both with your constituents in Toshima, and with magical girls in general." Another sip of tea as the girl across from her blinked incredulously.

"Huh? Are you saying I should lie?"

"Oh, not you, representative, no!" Himeko plastered a winning smile on her face.

"But...I have to give a report when I go home tomorrow." Jun's tone become somewhat sharper - despite her innocent persona, she was gradually learning to recognize that particular tone from the senior administrator. "So if not me, who are you saying should lie?"

"...sleeping dogs, representative." The tea really was quite good, today.

"I'm sorry, Himeko, but I can't do that." Oh no. Now the little girl had that look in her eyes. "Something this important can't just be brushed under the rug - I'm going to call a meeting of all the Toshima girls as soon as I get home."

"Miss Haga, let me give you some advice on some of the fundamental rules of successful government:" Carefully now, not too preachy, Himeko, "Never look into anything you don't have to, never set up an inquiry unless you know in advance what its findings will be, and never release information that has even the slightest possibility of reflecting poorly upon you at a later date."

"Himeko, this isn't a normal situation! If this 'Sabrina' really can do what the rumors claim she can, we're not talking territory regulations and seed allocation committees, we're talking about right and wrong!"

"You may be, representative, but I am not;" Himeko allowed a small smirk to twitch out from behind her steepled hands, "It would would be a serious misuse of government time."

The pout she got from Jun in reply was undoubtedly supposed to be cute, but the administration department head continued speaking unmoved.

"Government isn't about morality, miss Haga, it is about stability. Keeping things going; preventing anarchy - stopping society falling to pieces, and still being here tomorrow."

"What for?" Jun furrowed her eyebrows.

"I beg your pardon? I believe I just explained..."

"No, I mean, what's the actual point of this whole Council system, if it isn't to do good?" The younger girl was now staring at Himeko in vague confusion. "A true grief cleanser could do so much good for so many people, and..."

"Representative Haga, government isn't concerned with good and evil, it is concerned exclusively with order and chaos. I'm sure I don't have to explain to you how such a dramatic upset to existing structures could induce the latter."

"And it's in order for everyone to spend their whole lives hunting monsters just to survive?"

Himeko shrugged expansively.

"And you don't care?" Clearly, the young representative was having some illusions shattered throughout the course of this conversation, but that was perhaps for the better.

"It isn't my job to care, Miss Haga - that is the role of elected representatives, such as yourself. I am, after all, a humble functionary: my job is to carry out Council policy."

"Even if you think it's wrong?" Jun seemed more puzzled than upset, now - as if she were trying to figure Himeko out.

"Well, almost all Council policy is wrong," This time, it was another wry grin that was concealed behind the teacup. "But frightfully well carried out."

Well thats accurate for just about every single large organization ever.
 
Hmm. We should be able to ameliorate a lot of potential issues with a Clear Seed if we make it clear that we'll come down like a ton of bricks on anyone who decides to try to conquer Tokyo with one while the situation remains in flux.

We should try and get a meeting set up with Chiyoda soon. Since they're more-or-less in charge of Tokyo, we'll probably be working closely with them - and I'll eat a hat if they don't keep an incredibly detailed overview of the Tokyo situation on hand.

Poor Homu, though. I'm imagining Moemura trying to navigate the politics here and it makes me want to hug her.
 
Hold the fuck up. I just realized something.

Okay. In the Sendai conflict, Akiko was attempting to hire on the North Tokyo faction. Meanwhile, the University group was on the verge of bringing in the Osaki faction, on the opposite side of the conflict. Both factions are members of Tokyo Council. What does this say about the relations between the two factions? And how much would have Tokyo imploded had they been brought in?
 
There's also a non zero chance the "aggressive" groups run around bombing people.


Or at least insist on then having a right to know... Among other things.
 
Well, I already want to stab that Omake's version of Himeko. Government should be about both morality and stability. Never one to the exclusion of the other. People like her are disgusting.
 
The boyfriend might be useful for figuring out which bombs are where, since we can ask him about it without risking him dying.
Government should be about both morality and stability.
Himeko's argument boils down to "stability is moral, so we should ignore morality to uphold it." I've never actually seen an argument for order being a worthwhile value separate from morals that didn't do that.
 
"Some groups are bloodthirstier than the others, but we keep them in check by weight of threatened collective action," Kurenai says. "But there's... a kind of desperation to some of them. As far as we know, they aren't low on Grief Seeds or anything, but they're always hungry for more."

These might be the ones that know where witches come from. An excess of grief-seeds makes sense for people who know it's the only thing staving off their deaths.
 
Himeko's argument boils down to "stability is moral, so we should ignore morality to uphold it." I've never actually seen an argument for order being a worthwhile value separate from morals that didn't do that.

Still disgusting.

Back on topic though, I think we definitely need more information here, and should at the very least probe carefully about the bombs.
 
Well, I already want to stab that Omake's version of Himeko. Government should be about both morality and stability. Never one to the exclusion of the other. People like her are disgusting.

To be fair, the original character Himeko is based on is a civil servant, and it's therefore necessary that he be prepared to carry out government policy regardless of his personal or moral views on it. As the scene continues, a more idealistic junior of Himeko/Sir Humphrey questions whether civil servants should have to believe in the policies they implement, to which the reply is something like:

"Bernard, I have served 11 governments over the past 30 years. If I believed in every policy I've instituted, I would have been passionately committed to going into the common market, and passionately committed to staying out of it. I'd have been utterly convinced of the rightness of nationalizing steel, and of denationalizing it, and renationalizing it. On capital punishment I'd have been a fervent retentionist and an ardent abolitionist. I'd have been both a Keynesian and a Friedmanite, a grammar school preserver and destroyer, a nationalisation freak and a privatisation maniac, but above all, I would have been a stark-staring raving schizophrenic."
 
"I'm grateful for the guide," you say, smiling politely at her. "I'm Sabrina Vee -Vee Sabrina, I suppose- and this is my friend, Miki Sayaka. Ah... I'm here to meet Nakahara Kurenai?"

<snip>

Something about her twigs at the back of your mind.
Googling the name brings up a character in Vampire Knight named Maria Kurenai, who was voiced by Mai Nakahara.

We never got a physical description of Nakahara Kurenai.

"Some groups are bloodthirstier than the others, but we keep them in check by weight of threatened collective action," Kurenai says. "But there's... a kind of desperation to some of them. As far as we know, they aren't low on Grief Seeds or anything, but they're always hungry for more."
The Ones That Know.


Additions to the Meguca Files:
  • Nakahara Kurenai: Witch Name Unknown
    Age: Unknown, perhaps 16
    Powers: Unknown
    Notes: Obsidian-black eyes, old enough to not cause much comment in a university, but young enough to be young in a university. Something about her twigs at the back of your mind.
  • Ito Yuri: Witch Name Unknown
    Age: Unknown, perhaps 18
    Powers: Unknown
    Notes: Athletic looking young woman, impressive muscle tone in a sleeveless, pastel green dress that matches her eyes. Highlight-streaked dark blonde hair. Unfortunately, for all that, you'll probably always remember as 'that magical girl with a boyfriend', Umeko Haruki.
  • Konno Terumi: Witch Name Unknown
    Age: Unknown, perhaps 12
    Powers: Unknown
    Notes: Slender and almost frail, dressed in clothes a little too big for her. Silver, hime-cut hair.
  • Chiaki Haruna: Witch Name Unknown
    Age: Unknown, College Aged
    Powers: Unknown
    Notes: We were told she was in class at the time of our visit.
 
Didn't we institute an auto vote back in Asunaro to check the Witch name of every new meguca we meet?

Maybe Firn forgot? Coming up with Witch names for so many characters can't be easy.
Nepthys
Look, you joke that Mitakihara has a cathedral built on top of it for some reason. Rissho University is a castle.

Rissho University is a castle.

A huge, fantasy castle in generic Western fairytale style. It's right out of a storybook, all swooping towers and pointy roofs and flying buttresses in cheerful pastel colour painted concrete and glittering glass.

"... what is it about schools?" you mutter, blinking.

"Huh?" Sayaka asks, peering down at the University building. "That's just how they are, isn't it? And universities have a lot more budget."

... I'm nine hundred and ninety-nine percent sure Madoka Verse Taylor Hebert sold her soul for better schools.
 
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Updated the Tokyo Politics tab in the Day Planner. Working on the Dramitis Personae and Meguca Descriptions tabs now.

Also: We know from descriptions we got in Sendai that the Osaki group has an empath. Since that's a power particularly useful in leadership and politics, I'd guess that that's Kurenai.

So... yeah. She's probably reading our emotions right now. That's not really an issue - we've been honest and we're sincere about our desire to help. In fact, it'll probably help establish that we're serious and don't have ulterior motives.
 
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... I'm nine hundred and ninety-nine percent sure Madoka Verse Taylor Hebert sold her soul for better schools.

Given the general description of how Tokyo looks, with skyscrapers that "dwarf the Skytree", it seems that weird gigantism in architecture in general is just a thing in the PMMMverse and there's no way that isn't because of wish magic.

Also, I think it'd be a good idea to establish a SOP on how to figure out understanding about the infohazards (the witchbomb and lichbomb) from newly contacted Meguca's without revealing the infohazards. Since the frequency and necessity of that is clearly starting to rise.
 
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Also, I think it'd be a good idea to establish a SOP on how to figure out understanding about the infohazards (the witchbomb and lichbomb) from newly contacted Meguca's without revealing the infohazards. Since the frequency and necessity of that is clearly starting to rise.

We just need to develop short term memory wiping enchantments with Umika and Niko's help. Ask about the bombs, then wipe the memory of asking if the girl didn't know them. EZ. :V
 
Okay! Time to analyze the politics of Tokyo!

The roof seems clear, so you go in for a landing - except it isn't. A young man, muscular and tall with a close-cropped head of plum hair, pulls the roof access door just as you start to dissolve the flight platform. He's handsome, you suppose, dressed smartly in a button-up shirt and long pants, but you're rather panicking just a little bit right now-

"Uh... Miss Vee?" he asks. "And Miss Miki?

You blink.

"Oh you're the boyfri-" Sayaka claps her hands over her mouth, eyes widening.

"God damn it, everyone calls me that," he says, pressing his palm to his forehead. "Yes, I am. Yuri thought it might be better to have someone wait for you, just in case, and yes, I'm perfectly aware of the irony in her name. I've heard every iteration of that joke there possibly is."

Sayaka makes a strangled noise.
Majestic. Kurenai (and Yuri, of course) has put us off balance just by welcoming us, and even better it feels like our fault for being surprised by a male that knows about magical girls. Looks like they're trying to regain the initiative after we surprised her with 20 minutes to prepare for our visit. They're good.

"Haruki!" a young woman calls, looking up from a table occupied by two other girls. They all stand, but the speaker hurries over, deep blonde hair bouncing as she gives Haruki a kiss. "You found them!"
Trying to throw us off a little more? Doesn't seem very effective.

"Which brings us to here," Kurenai says with a sharp nod. She taps her chin thoughtfully. "Why don't I... hm. I have a pamphlet, or would you rather hear it from me?"

"... You have a pamphlet?" you ask.

"University printing services," Kurenai says with a shrug. "Yuri's doing, actually. I understand the Tokyo University group does the same."

"I'm..." You trail off. You know what, it makes a weird kind of sense. "Sure, let me see?"

Kurenai smiles, and produces a pair of bright, glossy little booklets. You and Sayaka take one each, your friend raising an eyebrow at the bold lettering across the top.

So you've become a magical girl! the title declares.
They have propaganda to encourage new contractees to join the council. Useful.

It's almost a republic, ad-hoc and haphazard. Each group sends a representative to debate in times of import, presided over by the Chiyoda group.

"The Chiyoda group is where the Imperial Palace is, isn't it?" you ask. Sayaka looks up quizzically.

"Correct," Kurenai says. "Toshimichi Akane claims descent from Emperor Shōwa, but in truth that matters less than the fact that she's charismatic and powerful. She's frequently the only thing stopping Tokyo from turning into all out war."
So, sounds like Akane is the leader overall, with magical girls in teams composing the nominal selectorate, and representatives of teams forming the real selectorate. Out of the representatives, Akane will need to keep a certain number aligned behind her (half? Less? We don't yet know how much of a majority the council needs in order to make official decisions), who will be the winning coalition. The Chiyoda team are also all essential supporters for Akane, as she needs to keep them happy with her rule in order to remain their representative.

You return to reading. It seems like they make decisions by majority vote. Chiyoda doesn't vote, but in turn has a veto, and apparently groups exchange invidivual magical girls on a rotating basis with Chiyoda for hunting.
Akane is basically the President then. I'm not sure I'm reading this correctly, but it sounds like other groups help Chiyoda farm witches? That means a lot less work for the Chiyoda girls, and would certainly be a system set up by Akane in order to keep them happy with her leadership. A bribe *ahem* campaign contribution, if you will.
Furthermore, decisions are made by majority vote. One would think that this requires Akane to have over half of the representatives aligned behind her, but we don't know how many parties there are. If there are a large number of small parties, Akane will not need as many representatives to support her, because her ideas only need more votes than the next most popular decision in order to win. Small parties whose ideas won't win suck up some of the representatives from everyone else, so that the second most popular idea has less votes, and thus it takes less votes for the winning idea (Akane's) to win.
I'm not sure, but large amounts of arguing seems to me like it might be indicative of many smaller parties all trying to make their opinions heard.

Witch hunting is delineated strictly by territory held between groups, which... seem to be static. There's even a map printed in the brochure, and no provision for changing the borders.

"What's Witch hunting like here?" Sayaka asks. "Apparently the borders were fixed long ago?"

"Ah. Yes," Kurenai says, considering. "It's... not bad, I suppose? I don't really have a strong basis of comparison, but we get by, with enough Grief Seeds. Oh, if you look further down, there's a note that groups can be balanced by switching magical girls across teams."
Now this is interesting. In America, gerrymandering is done by shifting the borders around to fit the people. Here, this isn't the case. Instead, gerrymandering is done by shifting people around to fit the borders. I bet Akane either directly or indirectly has a fair amount of say in who gets sent where. This would allow her to stack lots of people who don't like her into the same teams, meaning that they have less impact on representatives since they only need a certain number of girls on the team to vote in the representative. Any more third party girls on a team than are strictly necessary to have a majority are effectively wasted politically. I would expect that girls from Akane's party are relatively spread out, having slim majorities over third party girls in order to maximize their impact on the political makeup of the representatives.

As a bonus, Akane can honestly say that she's trying to put girls together who will work well together, since third party girls will probably get along better with each other than with members of other parties.
Example: Team Tagwen has 10 members, 6 of which are members of the Cheese party, and 4 of which are members of Akane's Cake party. Akane will switch out the 4 members of the Cake party into Team Gogswain, who have 2 members of the Cake party and 8 members of the Cheese party. Now Team Tagwen has 10 Cheese party members (but still only one representative), while Team Gogswain has enough Cake party members that they are the majority. While previously the Cheese party could send 2 representatives to the council, now they can only send one, and the Cake party has a representative that they didn't have before.

"Some groups are bloodthirstier than the others, but we keep them in check by weight of threatened collective action," Kurenai says. "But there's... a kind of desperation to some of them. As far as we know, they aren't low on Grief Seeds or anything, but they're always hungry for more."
Might be an unfortunate side effect of the gerrymandering. Akane's party is more peaceful, so she puts violent and expansionist girls together in same groups so that they won't have as much power (especially when there's no way to expand their territory at all). This minimizes the voices of those particularly bloodthirsty girls, but also means that those entire teams are filled with them, making the teams very difficult to deal with for everyone else.
That being said, it doesn't say why they're like that. Perhaps the desperation for some groups is born of being in situations that they need more grief seeds for? People who are injured and need to buy healing, people who are depressed and desperately gathering enough seeds to survive, or perhaps people who just really like power, or have vendettas like Akiko.





Whew. Okay. So, by my analysis, this seems very similar to the political system of the United States. Less complicated, fortunately, and without term limits, but pretty darn similar. We should probably try and figure out whether Kurenai's group is part of Akane's party, or part of an opposition party.
 
Well, I already want to stab that Omake's version of Himeko. Government should be about both morality and stability. Never one to the exclusion of the other. People like her are disgusting.

Foremost, a government should be consistent. This will also tend to make it predictable, dependable and stable (well, so long as it is not consistently terrible).

You want morality to be involved in the actual governing part of government about as little as you want justice to be the chief concern of court proceedings.
Yes, ideally, it would be a moral government and justice would be the outcome of the courts, but primarily their concern is ensuring everyone is equal under the law and things happen in their proper order.

And focusing on morality and justice above all have you ignoring the fundamental rights of someone sooner rather than later in the name of what is Right. And that is not proper. A government, a good, legalistic government, HAS to ensure that first and foremost it is consistent in applying and meting out reward and sanction.
 
You know it might be useful to create a sort of unified mass witch hunting team, where each of the 26 magical girl teams sends a representative and the team goes through to each of the territories, hunts witches, and divides the spoils between all 26 territories. The representatives rotate out once every two weeks or something, so everyone's required to do some hunting but nobody has to do all that much hunting.

I guess my most immediate concern with that is it's only really fair if all the teams are about the same size. You could probably come up with a scheme where your territory's contribution to the demon hunting group is based on the number of magical girls in the territory? And you could probably do the same for the won grief seeds?

Of course that doesn't actually solve the problem of some of the territories wanting to take over all the others and stuff.
:o It's perfect...
Akane would love this. It gives her so many opportunities to reward her supporters! Valuable members of her party could have less rotations as part of The Grand Hunt (TM), or at least could be allowed to choose when they do their rotations. Teams that are part of her party could be given a larger distribution of the spoils, perhaps with some excuse, like larger population size, or having depressed members). Akane could reward teams by making sure the Grand Hunt doesn't pass through much of their territory, leaving them more witches to farm. This would be great! For Akane.
 
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Ah, now I see: Yuri and Yuko are the exception that clarifies the rule:

It's not that magical girls themselves are necessarily lesbians, it's simply that every SO of a magical girl is into Yuri :V

... I kinda want to share that one. Well, after we're back home anyways. These guys have heard it a thousand times already.
That sounds like those groups are either lich or witchbombed. We might want to ask for a list of "problem groups" from Kurenai, then arrange visits to those groups in particular.

It wouldn't surprise me if those groups weren't often either the most desperate in arguing for our aid, or the most suspicious. Noa said earlier that the Meiji group rejected our offer entirely, which speaks to them having possible encounters huckster grief controllers, and I wouldn't be surprised if it happened as a result of them being witchbombed.

On the subject of bombs, an idea that comes to mind is asking Toshimichi Akane for advice on how she set things up: We're starting to get a bunch of refugees in Mitakihara, and if she's managing Tokyo in order to keep wichbombed girls from spreading things and causing chaos, her advice on how would be quite pertinent. If nothing else how to talking to them to figure out who knows what and arrange things accordingly sounds useful.
 
Foremost, a government should be consistent. This will also tend to make it predictable, dependable and stable (well, so long as it is not consistently terrible).

You want morality to be involved in the actual governing part of government about as little as you want justice to be the chief concern of court proceedings.
Yes, ideally, it would be a moral government and justice would be the outcome of the courts, but primarily their concern is ensuring everyone is equal under the law and things happen in their proper order.

And focusing on morality and justice above all have you ignoring the fundamental rights of someone sooner rather than later in the name of what is Right. And that is not proper. A government, a good, legalistic government, HAS to ensure that first and foremost it is consistent in applying and meting out reward and sanction.
Talking about how government should be is all well and good, but it seems to me that it doesn't predict what government is actually like very well. The number one rule for understanding politics is that rulers (like Akane) want to gain power, and then keep as much of it as possible, for as long as possible. That's why government likes stability. Because stability makes it easier to stay in power. Your essential supporters are less likely to try to overthrow you if they know that all those little benefits they get from supporting you are going stay there for as long as you're in power. If you start changing things willy nilly, your supporters may become unsure if that nice big tax break they enjoy might suddenly not exist next year. That's when they start looking around for who else might make a better leader than you.
 
You know, on learning that the leader of Tokyo is named Akane, I find myself wondering.

Way back when, before PMAS, there was Sayakaquest. Which had much the same community as PMAS, especially early PMAS, including Firn himself. And it had a Tokyo girl by the name of Akane too.

So I find myself wondering if this Akane is also a punch-guca.
 
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You know, on learning that the leader of Tokyo is named Akane, I find myself wondering.

Way back when, before PMAS, there was Sayakaquest. Which had much the same community as PMAS, especially early PMAS, including Firn himself. And it had a Tokyo girl by the name of Akane too.

So I find myself wondering if this Akane is also a punch-guca.

That would be great.
 
We just need to develop short term memory wiping enchantments with Umika and Niko's help. Ask about the bombs, then wipe the memory of asking if the girl didn't know them. EZ. :V
or mote efficiently we should start using euphemisms of kinds that those who have been bombed would understand and those who haven't wouldn't
like in the irc chat the inquired about the litchbomb by asking us our opinions on rings
to someone who hasn't been bombed it would seem a bit odd but to someone who hasn't it would be pretty obvious what they're getting at
we just need to figure out one for where witches come from
Oh, and I wonder if the "So You've Become Meguca" pamphlet includes the lich and/or witchbombs. I doubt it, but with this sort of organization, nothing stays secret for long, even when it should.
i would believe that it would include the litchbomb at least simply because it is an incredibly basic part of it and you need to know to protect your gem at all costs.
 
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