Knows enough to remember the feeling that Homura wasn't a bad person, even when their personal interactions were weird as heck, though. Or, that's how I parsed canon, anyway.

And the eerie feeling you've seen something in a dream, that keeps being relevant- neither is the weight of that something to trivialize, even if we shouldn't exaggerate it either.
EX-AG-GER-ATE!
 
Hmmm, a possibly dumb question but it's stuck in my mind and it's relevant to the discussion: All those little flashes we see during PMMM, is it possible some or all of those are Madoka's past-timeline memories?

Stuff like the cut to the window getting cracked but not broken and the sudden scene and lighting change from rain to red night with Sayaka showing her soul gem keep coming to mind in particular.
 
Hmmm, a possibly dumb question but it's stuck in my mind and it's relevant to the discussion: All those little flashes we see during PMMM, is it possible some or all of those are Madoka's past-timeline memories?

Stuff like the cut to the window getting cracked but not broken and the sudden scene and lighting change from rain to red night with Sayaka showing her soul gem keep coming to mind in particular.

I tend to think it might be so, when I consider the matter. Is there any concrete word about it, or is it one of those "the Doyleist reasons are symbolic, the Watsonian ones are 'yes these are prolly memories' " things?
 
I tend to think it might be so, when I consider the matter. Is there any concrete word about it, or is it one of those "the Doyleist reasons are symbolic, the Watsonian ones are 'yes these are prolly memories' " things?

It could've been done to pay homage to Revolutionary Girl Utena, I guess.

That, or my favorite hypothesis, i.e. Madokami retroactively adds people, things and events to the anime, is correct.

Though I was talking about chairs.

Anyway. Does anyone else think that Madoka and Homura need to sit down and have a long, long talk sometime soon? Preferably before one of them becomes a universal constant or rips another in two and then noms her divine part, for example?
 
A potential concrete point: Madowishes have proven that they can reach through the loops to have persistent effects. "Protecting Madoka" involves not just protecting her inside a single loop but also keeping her from making a Wish that'd render Homura's job impossible. By that standard, Homura's done a much better job of protecting Madoka than she did in Canon.
 
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Well, seeing as Kai has THE PLANS, I'll wait to see what's cooking in catgirl's head before thoughtcrafting much more about the vote.

I can just say, this was a blow to Homura, so we need to help her deal with it before going on.

As said before, we could offer to point out evidence Homura has missed/ignored about Madoka's dreams, like Madoka's comments about having met before, and deja vu. Also, what the dreams are about.

The basic gist of the idea is to proceed by establishing that Madoka had some ability to retain --

Y'know what? *digs around in notes*

Here's what the next step is according to the blueprint.

-[] Ask her if she is aware that Madoka dreams about her before they meet each loop.
-[] She was never precisely fighting alone. It's very problematic -- Madoka doesn't get the full time-travel experience, she only gets gut feelings and insufficiently specific prophetic dreams. But it is enough to preserve some of the important stuff, not even as actual knowledge but as just enough of a push, a feeling, for her to act differently based on it.

I want to clarify, that is not a vote. That's... blueprint. The objective is to establish:

A) That Madoka has some ability to retain information across timelines, and to act differently based on that information

Secondarily, the following critical points arise from this which we may wish to raise immediately or hold off on:

1) If Madoka is capable of retaining and gaining information across timelines, it should be possible for her to give up, or to stop trusting Homura, etc. If Homura was truly hurting Madoka across the timelines, each timeline would be contributing more and more to Madoka pushing Homura away. Instead, she dreams of her. She gets urges to trust her.
- Subnote that gaining information is not as well established as preserving information. We -know- she preserves information. Gaining information is -to my knowledge- an inference from the nature of her Canon dream. If the nature of the dream changed at all across the loops, we have gain as opposed to some subset of loss and equality, because the dream is of near-present Homura rather than moemura. So, the alternative to gain is that Madoka has been dreaming the same dream since before Homura had ever existed in anything like that state. I find that monumentally unlikely. Other Canon material -- Oriko Magica -- might contain more backup for this stuff. I've been relying on Aura who -has- read all that stuff, so there shouldn't be anything to -undermine- this in there.

(Everything after this is more or less a restatement of essay, I think)

The subsequent objective is to clarify Madoka's goals in the loops. That basically consists of quoting the things Madoka said in episode ten. Then we follow that by tying in Homura's magic as protecting Madoka from becoming a witch (time travel undoes the witchout as much as it undoes the wish), and emphasizing Madoka's desire for "them" (undefined, I prefer the interpretation of it referring to pretty much the entire cast but clearly it efers to at least Homura and Madoka) to not end up [dying to WPN with everyone Madoka loves dead too]. At that point we'll have essentially made the argument that Madoka doesn't want Homura to give up so far.

Then we either continue on to the how of reaching a resolution to the loops or not. That stuff is everything else surrounding madowishes and anomalies and Madoka basically being in a position to make an arbitrary number of wishes as long as Homura is there to prevent QB from tricking her into wasting them and from actually suffering consequences of them.

Given @Onmur's track record as of the last couple votes I'm increasingly inclined to trust the shit out of him for how slow to move on this. His last minute suggestion of asking if Homura needed a minute was incorporated by firn as a freebie because it was a good idea, and I think it helped.

Ehm. I reserve the right to call the catgirl currently writing this post an idiot tomorrow and retract stuff but I think this is essentially accurate. In terms of an actual vote I ain't doing that until tomorrow at least, but I felt like I would have been stifling discussion otherwise.
 
Disclaimer: this post slightly scatterbrained and should be evaluated as subordinate to the previous one I made.

Issue: Homura is completely willing to deny Madoka's agency in the name of "protecting her".

*Nods emphatically*

But, you'll note that her definition of what it means to protect Madoka is rooted, inevitably, in what (a) Madoka/s have told her. It's still rooted in what Madoka wants, it's just distorted by what Homura believes Madoka knows, what Madoka has actually told her, etc. Even in Rebellion she doesn't decide to tear down Madokami until after she hears a statement from Madoka herself, as distorted a statement as it was.

Homura's model of what it means to protect Madoka is based on things we can and will attempt to alter her perspective on.

Point is, we're here to re-frame what it means to protect Madoka successfully by reframing what it means to hurt her. I dont worry much about Homura's denial of Madoka's agency because the way I want to frame it is that, per Madoka's request that Homura change their fate, not carrying out the loops is a massive harm which is only justifiable if the loops are somehow a greater harm, and then the argument goes that since Madoka hasn't given up or pushed Homura away, she clearly doesn't believe that to be the case.
 
Ehm. I reserve the right to call the catgirl currently writing this post an idiot tomorrow and retract stuff but I think this is essentially accurate.
Yeah, you should not trust that Onmur dude, he's a total dumb.

Did you know he self gave himself the title 'Ace Shitposter'? Atrocious.

:V

Thanks for the vote of confidence, though.

For the record, I've been calm about this up until now, but the fact we're actually going into this attempt to change Homura's worldview, now that makes me feel uncertain.


What I can say right now is that we should be a pillar Homura use to support herself.

Each new piece of information will be a blow on Homura's psyche, and as far as I can see, she could react in two ways...

One is to retract into herself, the other to become panicked, and demand answers at a rhytm she herself couldn't keep up with.

Either way, we need to reassure her, help her keep calm (for example, speak softly and slowly while still keeping up physical contact (which of course we have to because timestop (isn't that wonderful?))).

One thing that might not need mentioning is that we should move at Homura's own pace. If she retracts into herself, reassure her and give her time; if she asks, we need to not leave her hanging.

A problem would be if Homura were to actually become agitated to the point of demanding answers too quickly... but that's covered by proactively helping her calm down.
 
If the nature of the dream changed at all across the loops, we have gain as opposed to some subset of loss and equality, because the dream is of near-present Homura rather than moemura.

This doesn't necessarily follow. If Madoka consistently dreams of the immediately previous timelines Homura, for example, then that works out as equilibrium- Timeline N+1 Madoka isn't necessarily at all more informed about anything than Timeline N Madoka was.

There might be continuity, and I think your overall conclusion is mostly valid, but it doesn't have to be "gain", unless you're defining those terms differently then I am.
 
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Hm.

Homura, whose eyes go wide. "W-what?" she whispers, searching your face. "No, she- I don't want her to-"

She falls silent, squeezing her eyes shut.
So there's a quandary.

In Homura's mind, we're telling her she's failed her promise -by default, at that.

Not that this wasn't going to come up, but no matter what we do, we're gonna make Homura feel she's been making mistakes aaaaaall this time.

Which she was, but unlike her, we know it's not her fault.

If we could spin it, something we could do right now is promise Homura we believe things will work out, her Wish included, and that she will be able to keep Madoka safe. This would mean not addressing this point further until after we're done explaining The Catgirl Theory, reassurance aside.

Otherwise... there's a glaring problem in explaining Why This Isn't So Bad in that we'd basically enter a chain of observations and points where we tell Homura again and again What She Did Wrong. :/

I'd like to ask Homura if she would hear us out, trust us when we promise things can work out, and postpone address specific points until we're done with The Catgirl Theory.

If Homura will have it, it can work. If.

[Q] Call it The Catgirl Theory IC.
 
This doesn't necessarily follow. If Madoka consistently dreams of the immediately previous timelines Homura, then that works out as equilibrium- Timeline N+1 Madoka isn't necessarily at all more informed about anything than Timeline N Madoka was.

There might be continuity, and I think your overall conclusion is mostly valid, but it doesn't have to be "gain", unless you're defining those terms differently then I am.

Aura's general theory is that it's the "souls are multiversal" thing, but... I'm inclined to think that's actually not what's going on, because if that were the case I'd really expect to see the same phenomena in Mami, Sayaka, and Kyouko, but we kind of just don't.

No, I think Homura's magic and wish are clawing at their original implementation/purpose and trying to preserve what they can of Madoka when Homura goes back in time. That's my top theory at the moment. Runner up is that they're literally preserving a minimum amount of information for Madoka on purpose "to protect her from the horrors involved in the loops."

I don't intend to raise either of those theories with Homura. I think they open up the possibility that Madoka's continuity is a projection of Homura's wants/needs/etc, which is obviously something I see as absurd and unrealistic, but Homura is rather pessimistic.

And of course we can't (or at least really probably shouldn't) bring up that Homura can bring others back in time until and unless we enter a situation where we kind of really need that ability. Because she'll react with "... I literally failed everyone forever."

I actually am defining gain differently -- the sum total doesn't need to increase, she just needs to be able to derive and pass on new information. The net result is the same -- if Madoka was being hurt by Homura, you'd get a Madoka next loop who would draw further away from Homura and therefore end up with a worse opinion of her because everyone except Homura (and Doka) thinks Homura is a terrible person.

I think we can say with confidence that there has never been a Madoka who has been convinced that Homura is a bad person, who has pulled away from Homura, etc etc etc.

If we could spin it, something we could do right now is promise Homura we believe things will work out, her Wish included, and that she will be able to keep Madoka safe. This would mean not addressing this point further until after we're done explaining The Catgirl Theory, reassurance aside.

Otherwise... there's a glaring problem in explaining Why This Isn't So Bad in that we'd basically enter a chain of observations and points where we tell Homura again and again What She Did Wrong. :/

...

*points at the two lines that catgirl ended up removing from the end of last vote*

Remember those

That's what that was

If you think we should import something like them I'm gonna wish really hard that I hadn't removed those XD
 
...

*points at the two lines that catgirl ended up removing from the end of last vote*

Remember those

That's what that was

If you think we should import something like them I'm gonna wish really hard that I hadn't removed those XD
It's iffy, and would require total backpedalling if Homu said 'no'.

Abouto the other thing, though, remember Homu has been basically tying karma strings all over Madoka, so there's no necessity for any of the other girls to be getting oversoul info; just Madoka.

There literally are connections between this Madoka and the previous ones.

... Maybe we should ask Mami to try and see them with her Ribbon powers. >_>
 
Abouto the other thing, though, remember Homu has been basically tying karma strings all over Madoka, so there's no necessity for any of the other girls to be getting oversoul info; just Madoka.

There literally are connections between this Madoka and the previous ones.

Never understood how it worked that-- ah, right.

No, I don't think that clears my objection. Or at any rate, I don't understand how it does. I understand the karma stuff to be "the entire world depends on Madoka because of the time loops."

... Maybe we should ask Mami to try and see them with her Ribbon powers. >_>

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@AuraTwilight is it just me or is there a very real chance that that could work? Not exactly something we'd want to do, I don't feel like traumatizing Mami to hell and back, but...
 
[x] Goal: Homura needs a new viewpoint that has her being successful, that permits Madoka to have made a Wish, and that has the loops as a good outcome.
[x] Potentially useful specifics:
-[x] Keep making sure that this is helping Homura - physical emotional support, checking her understanding as you go, prompting her when a socratic dialog would do more good than harm, etc.
-[x] Provide supporting evidence: Madoka implicitly trusting Homura, asking if they've met before, etc.
-[x] Madoka's dreams aren't incredibly detailed, but they're enough that you think she's been making steady progress.
-[x] Homura succeeded. Madoka could have ended the loops - or worse - if Kyubey had tricked her into Wishing Bad, but Homura was there, and Homura protected Madoka until she could Wish Good.
-[x] You think this is what Madoka wanted when she asked Homura to keep her from being tricked.
-[x] Reiterate that everything will be okay.

Basically summarizing what I think I've read. I'm not too sure about my reading comprehension or understanding of the situation. I've attempted to make the vote stand alone to make it as easy as possible to understand and discuss: High-level long-term goals at the very start, and then give Brinapilot a selection of points that she might be able to use to move toward those goals. Phrase things in terms of giving Homura new viewpoints, rather than pushing her or anything, and provide some suggestions for mechanisms as a proposed specific.
 
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Aura's general theory is that it's the "souls are multiversal" thing, but... I'm inclined to think that's actually not what's going on, because if that were the case I'd really expect to see the same phenomena in Mami, Sayaka, and Kyouko, but we kind of just don't.

No, I think Homura's magic and wish are clawing at their original implementation/purpose and trying to preserve what they can of Madoka when Homura goes back in time. That's my top theory at the moment. Runner up is that they're literally preserving a minimum amount of information for Madoka on purpose "to protect her from the horrors involved in the loops."

I don't intend to raise either of those theories with Homura. I think they open up the possibility that Madoka's continuity is a projection of Homura's wants/needs/etc, which is obviously something I see as absurd and unrealistic, but Homura is rather pessimistic.

And of course we can't (or at least really probably shouldn't) bring up that Homura can bring others back in time until and unless we enter a situation where we kind of really need that ability. Because she'll react with "... I literally failed everyone forever."

I actually am defining gain differently -- the sum total doesn't need to increase, she just needs to be able to derive and pass on new information. The net result is the same -- if Madoka was being hurt by Homura, you'd get a Madoka next loop who would draw further away from Homura and therefore end up with a worse opinion of her because everyone except Homura (and Doka) thinks Homura is a terrible person.

I think we can say with confidence that there has never been a Madoka who has been convinced that Homura is a bad person, who has pulled away from Homura, etc etc etc.



...

*points at the two lines that catgirl ended up removing from the end of last vote*

Remember those

That's what that was

If you think we should import something like them I'm gonna wish really hard that I hadn't removed those XD

Re: your first spoiler, my Multiversal Souls idea addresses that discrepancy with "well, Homura's magic magnifies the effect with Homura due to the tied karma thing."

Never understood how it worked that-- ah, right.

No, I don't think that clears my objection. Or at any rate, I don't understand how it does. I understand the karma stuff to be "the entire world depends on Madoka because of the time loops."



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@AuraTwilight is it just me or is there a very real chance that that could work? Not exactly something we'd want to do, I don't feel like traumatizing Mami to hell and back, but...

Battle Pentagram confirms Mami can see karmic connections between people for shipteasing purposes, but it's a learned ability that Firn confirmed she hasn't trained up yet. No word on if it can see multiversal karma shittery, but Madoka SHOULD have assloads of strings on her since even Kyubey can sense that much.
 
Re: your first spoiler, my Multiversal Souls idea addresses that discrepancy with "well, Homura's magic magnifies the effect with Homura due to the tied karma thing."



Battle Pentagram confirms Mami can see karmic connections between people for shipteasing purposes, but it's a learned ability that Firn confirmed she hasn't trained up yet. No word on if it can see multiversal karma shittery, but Madoka SHOULD have assloads of strings on her since even Kyubey can sense that much.

And I will insist that those bindings will visualize in a refined and absolutely beautiful image to anyone with the wit to see them. Homura is quite the Girl Scout.

Redshirt Army said: ↑

This doesn't necessarily follow. If Madoka consistently dreams of the immediately previous timelines Homura, then that works out as equilibrium- Timeline N+1 Madoka isn't necessarily at all more informed about anything than Timeline N Madoka was.

There might be continuity, and I think your overall conclusion is mostly valid, but it doesn't have to be "gain", unless you're defining those terms differently then I am.
Aura's general theory is that it's the "souls are multiversal" thing, but... I'm inclined to think that's actually not what's going on, because if that were the case I'd really expect to see the same phenomena in Mami, Sayaka, and Kyouko, but we kind of just don't.

No, I think Homura's magic and wish are clawing at their original implementation/purpose and trying to preserve what they can of Madoka when Homura goes back in time. That's my top theory at the moment. Runner up is that they're literally preserving a minimum amount of information for Madoka on purpose "to protect her from the horrors involved in the loops."

I don't intend to raise either of those theories with Homura. I think they open up the possibility that Madoka's continuity is a projection of Homura's wants/needs/etc, which is obviously something I see as absurd and unrealistic, but Homura is rather pessimistic.

And of course we can't (or at least really probably shouldn't) bring up that Homura can bring others back in time until and unless we enter a situation where we kind of really need that ability. Because she'll react with "... I literally failed everyone forever."

I actually am defining gain differently -- the sum total doesn't need to increase, she just needs to be able to derive and pass on new information. The net result is the same -- if Madoka was being hurt by Homura, you'd get a Madoka next loop who would draw further away from Homura and therefore end up with a worse opinion of her because everyone except Homura (and Doka) thinks Homura is a terrible person.

I think we can say with confidence that there has never been a Madoka who has been convinced that Homura is a bad person, who has pulled away from Homura, etc etc etc.



...

*points at the two lines that catgirl ended up removing from the end of last vote*

Remember those

That's what that was

If you think we should import something like them I'm gonna wish really hard that I hadn't removed those XD

@Kaizuki , @AuraTwilight I am making problems faster than I solve them!!!!

If we want or need to postulate a metaphysics of how Madoka is holding information from out of loop, there are some fun ways to go about it. I will release all limiters for the notion of common sense to make this argument.

My most generalized argument is that it isn't a side effect of Homura's Wish. In fact, it is a highly conservative reading of Homura's wish. Let's do some Ontology! If existences are 'indexable' by magic, each person and each version of a person are not the same. Homura is probably sliding, rather than reversing time. Otherwise, differences from before loop start would never exist. The Wish power is displaying parsimony, perhaps because Homura was not putting in enough Potential to re-structure the Universe with each loop. If she slides to an acceptably identical Universe, that's good enough - but only if she gets "her" Madoka. So by intending hard enough, Homura wished to redo her first meeting with Madoka. That Madoka right there. They are always in sync.

Mechanic One - Madoka is Homura's passenger during each slide. Homura is only partially reset by the Wish, her memories remain, as does her hoarding. Madoka is also reset, i.e. resurrected, but that may also be imperfect. The imperfection may be finely tuned, to prevent negative performance of Madoka but leave as much of her experience as possible. Trauma (her whole time as a Magical Girl in each loop?) is obviously being deleted. But maybe her unconscious is holding on to her own hopes for Salvation. Her request in loop three was an intense connection to Homura. Perhaps at that point, Madoka was struggling to focus on Homura, and that became Magic. A small amount of her memories of Homura can come through the reset. Memories that would result in a Madoka that Homura would not accept as the Madoka from loop one can't get through in conscious terms, because Wishes are absolute. Dreams and unremembered information are mostly underneath the filter, and they can slide forward with Madoka. But they cannot always be interpreted by Madoka when she comes to. Aaaand we can pull in John Carpenter's "Prince Of Darkness" for a Hollywood implementation that might be known to the author?

Mechanic Two - Relationship tension. Madoka has been gaining knowledge about Homura due to forging a belief into her soul. Some of their loop experiences were intense and resulted in emotional bonding at maximum strength. Much deeper than just memory. Identity is now involved. Since Madoka's original soul is being towed over to the next loop each time, her engrams come with her. She carries over-unity belief in Homura. The equations of causality run both ways for abstracts as this power level. Epistemology believes that knowledge is a mental state. It exists in one's mind. If a person doesn't believe that a particular thing exists then he cannot be knowledgeable about it. So if one believes in the existence of a particular thing at overunity probability, they might spontaneous gain information relevant to the existence of that thing.

Mechanic Three - Soul Control Radius Overlap. Souls have a geometric quality of size or area in higher dimensions. They both made their wishes in proximity? Incubators muck about with the soul WiFi when they upload a new Magical Girl. The process may be perfectly functional, but not literally perfect. For a one time use, no issues. Since Madoka has done this a hundred times, the repeated higher-dimensional contact with Homura adjacent to her is literally forming an entanglement between their souls. It is stable, and now has enough bandwidth to move small amounts of information very slowly. Since Homura isn't being receptive, she doesn't get a dream. Madoka happens to be in a state to receive at the start of loop, and later is not ready to receive, so they seem to stop.

But isn't this unfulfilling as a technical debate? What we need is an emotionally compelling argument that allows Madoka to silently answer the call of the one who is seeking her, or something to that effect.


::steam vents:: limiter reinstated
Of course, Homura might have been getting the easy ride while she was oblivious to the facts? Will Homura gets dreams from Madoka's past now that her resistance is lowered? I'm sure there must be a Nasuverse fanfic where this happens already? I just haven't seen it.

So far, it is simply "Homura aimed her wish at Madoka." After some number of trials, "Madoka made a wish that surrounds Homura." ["In" to "You"] Yin and Yang. A feedback state is initializing. We'd better get them to harmonize before the system gets unstable!



Or we could do this in pop music?
 
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Battle Pentagram confirms Mami can see karmic connections between people for shipteasing purposes

A karmic shipping chart...

We can use this.

... Can we use this?

It'd be funny as hell if Kwijibo has no connections, and instead Sayaka is a nascent yuri harem protag.

This post was sponsored by Kaizuki. Sorta:

Sayaka glances up too. She snorts, and shakes her head. "It's not very good... it's a harem anime," she says. "They should just take the boy out."

"Ah... but if they took the boy out, then they can't do romance," Madoka says.

Sayaka shrugs. "The girls are more interesting, anyway. Could just pair them up."

IT'S SHITTY BUT I WROTE A CHRISTMAS OMAKE GUYS (on the up side it only took about an hour!)

Hey onmur write a better one plz




In the twenty-second century, there was only war.

How fucking ironic can you get, the blue-haired girl thought to herself as she paused amidst the carnage, pulled from the battle by the stray thought. She might have liked Warhammer, but she never wanted to live it.

Ugh, she could just see it now, saying that and then inevitably somebody -- probably Homura, she was like that -- would respond "be careful what you wish for," and then she'd -- then...

"I CAN'T BELIEVE I JUST DID THAT TO MYSELF!"

An identical blue-haired girl started and looked over at the scream of frustration, the torrent of lightning that had been pouring from her ceasing suddenly at the surprise, but merely shrugged and returned to her task. She was only a clone after all, and her job was to kill things, no matter if the original was telling herself shitty predictable jokes.

Letting her palm slide down her face, the blunette sighed and then rubbed her eyes. She'd been doing this too damn long. Holding back the forces of darkness -- Witches, Wraiths, whatever you wanted to call them: Sabrina insisted that it was a mix of both -- spilling from what had used to be Beijing was quite necessary and a full-time requirement, but her vacation (really, a setup where she was working eight hours a day seven days a week on the front lines, but that was a vacation) had been interrupted following the disaster at Cairo High-Karma Shift Inhibition, and she'd been tasked single-handedly to this hellhole since then in order to free up the four thousand or so meguca normally stationed here so that they could go do this same thing over in Egypt and also hunt down all the shit that had managed to flood out before a containment had been set up.

Back when the first breaches had started to open up, they'd been so very hopeful -- Mitakihara had just finished asserting itself over the Asian supercontinent on top of SEA and California, and then...

Well, according to Sabrina, what was going on was that the Incubators had decided to use their method of FTL travel to sort of link places on Earth to places that had equivalents of what Earth would've gotten if Madoka had contracted and then Witched out.

The results were Very Bad, and would've been worse if Mitakihara hadn't promptly put up a space elevator and started slagging parts of the planet from orbit with lasers run on gargantuan solar collectors. It'd been very, very slapdash at first -- oh, there were books out there that went on and on about how genius it had been, but it had started with Sabrina getting on her serious face and informing everyone that they were going to "nuke it from orbit," and then they'd all gone up in a timestop and just kind of thrown around everything they had to make the collectors as large as possible. The elevator itself had long been formalized and done over with steel and whatnot, but there were still giant panels of ribbons and vines and chains haphazardly lashed together acting to gobble down the sun's light (and cast the planet below into a twilight lit mainly by the moon) because they were much too large to replace.

Everyone had hoped that that would be the end of it, but when Sabrina had turned the Light on the Beijing breach, although it had indeed seared away the darkness there, it was observed that with every second that the power of the sun was fired through the breach its output only went up.

This was why Beijing was the worst of the lot, and it was why the planet was still mired in, well, Daemons.

So here she was, pulled away from her harem, being a big damn hero 24/7 for the foreseeable future. It was great, but it sucked lots.

Her only real consolation was that with Sabrina and Mami preoccupied trying to figure out what had happened at Cairo, surely she wasn't the only person who was missing-- oh who was she kidding, they were probably doing science in each others' laps.

Sayaka's melancholy was not improved by the weather. Although she had a fully climate-controlled bubble courtesy of enchanted gear, and despite the fact that the snow was pretty, all it really did was remind her that she wasn't going to be in Mitakihara to enjoy it.

But now, I must call you, my readers, close -- you see, this is not the end of our little story tonight. No. It is Christmas Day, and to leave a poor meguca in such sorry straits -- well, it would be a terrible injustice.

But you see, in the grim dark of the twenty-second century, not all is only war. And Sayaka had, perhaps reasonably -- I would not want a clock if I was to be killing Witches and Wraiths 24/7 -- lost track of time and forgotten something important.

So it was that at that moment, having just accidentally told herself a terrible joke, the clock around the world of the twenty-second century struck twelve, and not just any twelve but the twelve (at night) of Christmas Day.

And Sayaka found herself elsewhere.

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"You're Santa Claus." The accusation was pointed and blunt, the testimony of an unbeliever presented with an incredible reality.

Across from the accusing blunette stood the man himself -- a barrel chest, a snowy beard, and a serious look that should not have been upon Jolly Saint Nick. "Indeed I am," he confirmed, "and you are Sayaka Miki."

The look of frustration on the girl's face couldn't have been more clear. Santa wasn't real, and the Santa Association's existence didn't change that. Sure, people got presents every year on Christmas "from Santa," but that was as real as the -- as the Elves which supposedly made them and were clearly visible through the door of the room, hard at work sorting wrapped packages into large bags.

But Santa wasn't done. "You are Sayaka Miki," he continued, "and you are going to help me save Christmas this year."

What?

Why would Christmas need saving? The Santa Association was -- was...

"Oh fuck," breathed Sayaka, "it was in Cairo, wasn't it?"

The elderly man nodded. "The wish magic which powers Christmas each year is powerful, but nothing is immutable. One critical thing prevents me from simply retrieving the toys lost in Cairo: Santa Claus is to be received, not seen or heard or known to exist."

Seeing the blank look on the girl's face, a hand stroked a beard and a mouth curled in pensive thought. "Your friend Sabrina would describe it as conceptual bullshit: as I was wished to be, so must I be. One does not simply catch Santa Claus in the act."

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What followed was a tale that Sayaka would never relate to anyone, ever: it was publicly known that Sayaka Miki saved Christmas that year by diving into the Cairo breach time and again to retrieve the lost presents of the Santa Association, and then distributed them round' the world in a marathon night to make cloners jealous and teleporters feel claustrophobic. But nobody had seen her deliver the presents, and all of her friends were quite certain she hadn't had time to acquire the ones that she personally gave to them that Christmas. Nobody could explain why the breaches were closed, if only for that single day, why everyone got to return to their families for the celebrations.

Sabrina asked how she had done it -- but Sayaka's only response was that it had been the magic of Christmas.

But of course it was clear that Sayaka had done it -- after all, only she did not receive a present from "Santa Claus."

And nobody thought twice, not Mami, not Sabrina, not Hitomi or Kyouko or Kyousuke, no-one indeed considered, even as she kissed her harem each, that Sayaka's Christmas Present was to be at home, away from the breach.
 
Hijiri Kanna should have the same ability to see karmic ties that Mami does. It's more closely related to her Wish (connecting to others vs. connecting to life), as well, so it ought to be more readily available to her, if not a natural talent.

Thinking about it, Mami ought to have a lot of untapped potential as a healer, too.

EDIT: Expanding on this, shouldn't it be possible, hypothetically, for someone who can see the bonds of karmic fate to manipulate those bonds? With some guidance from, say, Riona and a fully-operational Oriko, it might actually be possible to defuse the potentialbomb by offloading the excess bonds (and potential) from Madoka, making her (and Kriemhild Gretchen) a significantly less appealing target for Kyubey.
 
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So, if Mami can see karmic bonds, and we're a walking "fuck you" to karmic destiny (as evidenced by our disrupting Oriko's visions, or our "strange" potential), what does Mami see when she looks at Sabrina?
 
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