Highway 17 pt. 1
Damn it.

You didn't want to be right. You'd half-jokingly considered just writing off that Grief Seed as probably lost to enemy action already - and it is. Or maybe it is. You don't know for sure that the Clear Seed was taken. Kazumi just said Niko's things were taken, and she's still babbling at you-

You transform in the familiar blaze of light. Magic and adrenaline burn through your veins, scorching through the haze of sleep and leaving you alert and awake in that state of limpid, too-sharp clarity. You catch her fluttering hand. "Kazumi, slow down," you say in as firm a tone as you can manage. "Slow down. Breathe."

Mami hurries over to join you - you can all but feel the tension jolting through your body, an echo to the alarm singing with your blood. You release Kazumi's hand, your arm instead going around Mami's waist to pull her close. It's almost an automatic reaction at this point.

Kazumi shudders, but obeys, gulping convulsively and nodding. "Can you send us back?" she asks. "I'm sorry to cut the visit short, and I'm sorry it's in the middle of the night, but we need to get back and look after Niko."

"Of course. And I'll do you one better," you say. Your mind whirls with plans and ideas. "I'll bring my friends, and we'll help sort this out, if you want? I- I need to figure who can come, who's willing to come, but first, breathe? We can't panic, right?"

Kazumi nods, her expression already settling. You can't help but notice the way Umika and Kaoru take her hands, one each, and the way she clutches them tight.

"I'm going," Mami says.

"Let's figure out what's happening first," you say, managing a quick, worried smile for Mami. You take a moment to look over Umika and Kaoru. They don't look any less rumpled than Kazumi, clear worry shining through the haze of sleep. And if you look carefully, you can see the nearly imperceptible jaw motions that come with subvocalization.

You're taking charge again, you note distantly. You do that a lot, but here and now, you don't see anyone else stepping up to do it.

"You're on telepathy with Niko, right?" you ask. "Is she alright? Unhurt? Or- could you put us through?"

Kazumi nods sharply, expression firming as she meets your eyes. "Niko is fine," she says. "Dazed, but fine."

"-talking to Miss Sabrina right now," Umika's voice echoes inside your head, telepathic connection snapping into place mid-conversation to spin rapid-fire babble into your mind. You can feel Mami and Kazumi and Kaoru and Umika and four more girls you don't recognise. The rest of the Pleiades, you suppose.

"Calm down, Mirai," Kaoru pleads. "Niko's alright, and we're coming soon."

"I'm almost there," a new voice says. "Niko, keep Mirai calm?"

"Yes, of course," someone else says. You recognise Niko from the one time you'd spoken to her, but she sounds focused now. "Thanks, Saki."

"Just reached the lab." Another unfamiliar voice that turns soft and cajoling. "Mirai, sweetheart, could you let me through? I can't get through all the bears."

So by simple elimination, that last voice would be Satomi.

"I'll get her to let up," Niko promises.

"Girls, um, this is Sabrina," Kazumi says. "She needs to ask a few questions?"

"Er, yes. Hi everyone, I apologise for interrupting," you say. "Right, so, yes, I'll be sending Kazumi back soon. But I want to help you girls sort this out, so would you be alright if I bring some of my friends to help?"

"I'm OK with it," Kazumi adds in support.

"Then we're fine with it," Saki says. "What do you need to know, Miss Sabrina?"

"Alright... Niko, are you hurt? What actually happened?" you ask, only to be interrupted by a quiet wail.

"One moment," Satomi says, and drops from the call. Moments later, so too does that last presence - Mirai, then, who seems to be panicking rather too much.

"I'm fine," Niko says, a trace of annoyance creeping into her voice. "Whoever it was got the drop on me and knocked me out. It was something intangible and contactless. Whoever it was ransacked my lab, I don't know what was taken yet."

"And then Mirai found her during one of her check-ins," Saki adds, voice turning chiding. "Probably worried when you didn't come to sleep."

"I know," Niko says. "I know."

"So no one's seriously hurt. And this hasn't happened before, right?" you ask carefully. "Sorry. I know that might be a dumb question, but I need to check."

"Of course not," Saki says. "We're the strongest magical girls in town."

"... no, we haven't been robbed like this before," Niko says.

"Right. Do you know when that was?" you ask.

"About... must have been two hours ago," Niko says.

"Alright. Just to be clear, do you need us there immediately?" you ask.

"Yes, of course-"

"No, not immediately-"

"We need to go back!"

Saki's response overlaps with Niko's answer which overlaps with Kaoru's outburst and Kazumi staring pleadingly at you, followed by silence, and then-

"We're all together now," Niko says calmly. "As you say, Saki, we're the strongest magical girl team in the city."

"But half of us are away!" Saki protests. "Kazumi's away!"

"Yes, of course," Niko says. "We're together. We can hold for a bit even against a legion of Witches."

"Sabrina, please," Kazumi says, clasping her hands, and you can read a touch of anger in Umika and Kaoru's eyes. "We- I need to be there for my girls."

"I-" you say, knuckling your forehead. You hold out a placating hand, and continue by telepathy. "OK, I put that badly, and I apologise, everyone. I am bringing Kazumi back to you. I wanted to know if we have time to sort out which of my friends are willing to go to Asunaro, or whether we need to leave immediately."

"There's- that's fine," Saki bites out. "Sooner is better."

"I'll go with you," Mami says, covering your hand with hers and squeezing gently. You smile softly at her, not answering for now - you have vague notions that she's already skipped school today, and shouldn't skip again. But that's an argument for later.

"Then one more question from me," you say. "And I'm sorry, but this is important to me. Niko, I know you can't do a full inventory right now, but can you tell if the Clear Seed was taken?"

"I'll check," Saki says. "Niko, where was it?"

You blow out a sharp breath. "I know you need to go back, Kazumi, Umika, Kaoru," you say. "But this - this I need to know, because I cannot have anyone abuse the Clear Seeds."

"I understand," Kazumi says, face pale but resolute.

"It's gone," Saki says.

Well.

Damn.

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I'm sorry for how long this took for such a short update. Busy week so far.

Also, I've decided in retrospect that this is where I start the next chapter: Highway 17. (Mostly because I feel like it would be too long if folded into the previous chapter, so I decided to flex a bit.)
 
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Mmm, you know, it's really unfortunate that dropping nukes on people isn't going to work. For one thing, y'all need to know who to nuke.

Well Homura's most useful here. Sayaka might be reasonable for extra firepower but she actually needs the sleep for school and there's no info on the situation that warrants her particular skillset.

A sleepy, 5-second threat assessment suggests that some kind of sensor-type magical girl would be useful for detecting and tracking the Mystery Assailant. Dunno if that's something Sayaka can do, but doesn't sound like it.
 
Well, it's not too surprising that the clear seed is gone. Even if they don't know what it is, I doubt someone willing to break in and steal stuff could resist a free grief seed.
 
Homura might be willing to go, especially after she's been filled in on the assorted nonsense that happens in Asunaro e.g. crazy clone girl with OP power that wants to kill everyone and now she has unlimited ammo.

Sayaka, on the other hand, would likely do her level best to throttle Sabrina through her brainmeats, and should be left alone.


That said, I imagine the Meta Talk is going to have to happen once we get Kazuni's crew back together.
 
Dunno if that's something Sayaka can do, but doesn't sound like it.
Maybe we could sneak into Masami and Hiroko's place and have her copy Hiroko's power without waking them up?

If not, clones are still good for searching.
Sayaka, on the other hand, would likely do her level best to throttle Sabrina through her brainmeats, and should be left alone.
Sayaka wants to be included. Sure, she wants a good night's sleep too, but I expect participation will win out in this case.
 
OK, so it's been two hours.

I definitely won't be pushing Homura to come along if she doesn't offer.

You can feel Mami and Kazumi and Kaoru and Umika and four more girls you don't recognise. The rest of the Pleiades, you suppose.
*Squints eyes*

Fiiiiiiiiiiiiirn... Shouldn't Niko kind of count as someone we recognize?

"I'm fine," Niko says, a trace of annoyance creeping into her voice. "Whoever it was got the drop on me and knocked me out. It was something intangible and contactless. Whoever it was ransacked my lab, I don't know what was taken yet."

"And then Mirai found her during one of her check-ins," Saki adds, voice turning chiding. "Probably worried when you didn't come to sleep."
Intangible and contactless? Niko herself has a power that stuns people, but I'm not sure it fits the description. Maybe some sort of mind magic?




[ ] Start moving towards the roof for take off.

[ ] Telepathically wake up everyone (Sayaka, Homura, Madoka, Hitomi, Oriko, Kirika).
-[ ] Briefly explain the emergency.
-[ ] You'll be asking for meguca volunteers.

[ ] Telepathy Homura: Ask her to use her power, pick up Sayaka and come over.
-[ ] Explain everything to them and Mami, in timestop.
-[ ] Ask to take either Homura or Kirika along, to counter the possible crazies you might have to fight.

[ ] Once timestop's done, confer with the pleiades while moving.
-[ ] Ask about their tracking measures.
-[ ] Ask that they stick together and wait for reinforcements.
-[ ] Ask Umika if her powers would help finding out exactly what happened?

[ ] Take off.
 
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@Redshirt Army

I mean, an "Empty Quiver" scenario refers to the theft of a functioning nuclear weapon. It seems like something of an over-exaggeration to call the loss of a clear seed analogous to handing a magical girl a nuclear weapon....
 
Rewording and waiting for vote discussion to happen. In thread : ) .

[ ] Start moving towards the roof for take off.

[ ] Telepathically wake up everyone (Sayaka, Homura, Madoka, Hitomi, Oriko, Kirika).
-[ ] Briefly explain the emergency.
-[ ] You'll be asking for meguca volunteers.

[ ] Telepathy Homura: Ask her to use her power, pick up Sayaka and come over.
-[ ] Explain everything to them and Mami, in timestop.
-[ ] Ask to take either Homura or Kirika along, to counter the possible crazies you might have to fight.
--[ ] Alternatively... Sayaka with Kirika's power?

[ ] Once timestop's done, confer with the pleiades while moving.
-[ ] Ask about their tracking measures.
-[ ] Ask that they stick together and wait for reinforcements.
-[ ] Ask Umika if her powers would help finding out exactly what happened?

[ ] Take off.
 
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Woo, I'm actually around for an update. Just been catching up from where I last remember the thread being (rails, I think). The fluff to suffering ratios are as perfect as ever, and Nagisia is still the cutest. Rereading from the start has actually poked me into considering starting QMing again. PMMM/post-ending Bloodborne anyone? (Along with a few other things. RIP Red Soul Quest/Dragon Halfbreed Quest, you were too pure for this world.)

Getting back to the quest, yeah, I think we can all agree that crazy+OP+Unlimited Magic is a problem that needs to be solved stat. Finding her is going to be the biggest issue, I suspect, though we do have a hard counter to that if Homura is willing to use the anti-Oriko protocols again.

Clones are probably going to be very useful...hang on, have we ever checked if having the original cloner in the timestop means that the clones are in too, even if they aren't directly connected? It might be a stupid idea, but if all you need is connection, couldn't the magic wiring the clones up to the brain of the original count? It would be super OP, but I'm fairly sure that that ship has already sailed a long time ago when it comes to Sayaka.
 
Having near-infinite magic at your beck and call due to having a Clear Seed? I'd call that a nuke.

You'd have to be able to use the entire available magic in one go, and most magical girls have to use their magic in small chunks. It's certainly possible that the mystery assailant can unload an entire clear seed's worth of magic in one colossal shot, but it seems improbable to me.

But look, I'm just saying for the record that it seems like an over-exaggeration to me. It's not like I actually vote so...
 
You'd have to be able to use the entire available magic in one go, and most magical girls have to use their magic in small chunks.
Most megucas have to budget their magic due to a scarcity of grief seeds. Use too much magic, and have too little grief seeds, and you run the risk of filling up your gem. Having a clear seed, and therefore having a lot more room to throw your magic around, or otherwise abuse it, is what I would call a nuke. It doesn't have to be all at once, but it's a big advantage over those with regular grief seeds.
 
[ ] Contact Homura and Sayaka, wake them up and inform them Asunaro is in a crisis. You'd like to work out a plan with them and Mami using Homura's power.
-[ ] Ask Homura if she could please pick up Sayaka and come over.

[ ] Once in Timestop: Go over the situation in Asunaro as you understand it. Rehash metaknowledge and Oriko's foresight as needed to fill Sayaka in and refresh memories.
-[ ] You need to deal with this thouroughly. In addition to not leaving Mami's friends in a crisis, you can't let the precedent of people stealing Clear Seeds and getting away with it develop if you want to improve things for everyone.

[ ] Who's coming, who's staying to hold the fort?
-[ ] If Hijiri is behind this, you'd like at least one anti-mind control trump card to come along, be that Homura's timestop, or access to antimagic. Sayaka can copy it from Kirika.

[ ] Don't be too pushy, accept insights and opinions from the others, and respect both Sayaka's desire to contribute and Homura's wishes.

Dunno what the word count is, but the general idea of a timestop war council spanning the whole next update is probably the best move.
 
Most megucas have to budget their magic due to a scarcity of grief seeds. Use too much magic, and have too little grief seeds, and you run the risk of filling up your gem. Having a clear seed, and therefore having a lot more room to throw your magic around, or otherwise abuse it, is what I would call a nuke. It doesn't have to be all at once, but it's a big advantage over those with regular grief seeds.
Sure, but throughput still seems about the same. Mami hasn't started pulling out Giga Tiro Finales or anything.
 
She can, however, saturate an area with Tiro Finales if she wanted to, or otherwise fill an area with bullets, or use a flood of ribbons in some other creative manner. And keep doing that.

A Clear Seed is a near-infinite resource for one's magic. One can recognize how dangerous that is in the wrong hands.
 
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@Redshirt Army

I mean, an "Empty Quiver" scenario refers to the theft of a functioning nuclear weapon. It seems like something of an over-exaggeration to call the loss of a clear seed analogous to handing a magical girl a nuclear weapon....

You're right, it's not analogous: A Clear Seed is far more dangerous than a nuke in the wrong hands.
 
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