We reaaaaaally need to sit down with Madoka soon and explain to her that she must never, EVER make a contract with Kyubey. We don't have to be very specific about it, so long as we do explicitly tell her that we are certain that, were she to ever do so, very, VERY bad things would happen to everyone.

And yes, all of those elements are crucial. If she thinks bad things will only happen to her, then her self-sacrificing tendencies will override that concern. If she think that there's a chance that bad things might not happen (if she chooses her wish carefully, or something), she might try anyway. And if she thinks that those facts might change some time later on, she might try to contract later on.

If she asks for specifics, simply tell her that it's better that she not know, and that it's not Sabrina's place to tell her. If she asks why she can't contract when everyone else (who is eligible) can, we can tell her that she's a very unique case, and we mean that with complete seriousness.

I know, it doesn't leave her in blissful ignorance anymore. But it does prevent a serious risk of her making a contract the moment our/Homura's back is turned or preoccupied by some crisis or other.
 
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Did we ever clue Junko in on magical girls? I like the idea of making Madoka the 'mental health officer' (although making it sound official like that doesn't sit right), but I also think the idea of getting some property to house the new immigrants has serious merit. If we could centralise the immigrants to a single location it'd make cleansing them a lot more managable, and Junko is a businesswoman, she probably has at least a basic idea about how to do it.

"Actually yeah, could you talk to your mom about how we could buy some property? Maybe a long-term arrangement with a hotel or an abandoned building or... Something. I don't think any of us would even know where to start with that." is something nice and concrete Madoka can help with.

As far as clueing Madoka in... Honestly, we're in a somewhat unique position here, because remember the very start of this quest? We actually could tell her what being a magical girl involves, because we could preface it with "Speaking as somebody who stepped into this life with full knowledge of the downsides, the only reason I contracted was because it was the only option I had to avoid literally bleeding to death right in front of you."

That might be worth pointing out to Homura, actually.
 
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Roxanne Lavoie had been a shy, stuttering, wreck. Roxanne was timid, and flinched whenever something startled her. And she hated it, hated herself, and desperately wanted to change. With her mother and father both intensely busy with their engineering work, and without any real friends, she'd taken solace in her books. In Dumas, and Verne, and from her mothers collection, Carrol and Lewis. So when a white rabbit had promised her Wonderland, she'd remembered a poem, about all the things she wasn't but wished she could be, and wished to be the captain of her soul.

In a very real way, that girl was dead now. Lavoie had carved out a territory for herself in the center of Toulouse, and shown all contenders why a girl who had edited her own emotions to be as hard and unyielding as she could manage was not a good enemy to face. Her fiefdom was small, she had no subordinates, and she hunted the occasional witch that wandered in more out of a sense of housekeeping than any sort of necessity - it had taken practice, but expelling the nauseating impurity that was grief from her soul was well within her powers. Instead, she refined her powers over souls, slowly getting a grasp on the ephemeral things that were the souls of others, and acted on commission to gain contacts and resources, all in the aims of solving a fairly large problem.

Most would have given in to despair, at learning the true source of witches. Most would have been stunned at the betrayal, when they learned of the Incubators true motives. Most would have been overwhelmed at the task of attempting to alter the Incubators system with but an infinitesimal speck of their power. Most also didn't have the ability to freely alter their emotional state at a whim, so Lavoie had discarded their reactions as inapplicable to her current situation and carried on.

At the present moment, however, she was in her apartment, mulling over a smaller problem, as she did routine soul maintenance. The issue, as always, was the shaky foundation. Since she had first altered her soul, years ago, her fine control and understanding had grown by leaps and bounds. But as long as she applied her new changes on top of her original, flawed, effort, she was doing nothing more than patching cracks. She glanced at her bookshelf, and the dust that covered it. All her attempts to recreate her love of reading had felt... fake. Artificial, more of an obsession than the natural, flowing desire she could vaguely remember. Similarly, trying to get over her crush on Claude, she'd over-corrected, and was now firmly asexual.

The obvious solution was to simply dissolve all her work and start again, properly this time. Unfortunately, she despised the idea of being that simpering excuse for a human being for even a moment, and even beyond that, having temporarily disabled her disdain, the fact was that the person Lavoie had been would not have taken her revelations about the magical girl system well at all. There was a very real risk that if she let go, she'd enter grief runaway before she could get a grip on herself and regain control. So instead she sat back in her antique armchair, and concentrated on patching the cracks.

Her silent contemplation of the soul was not to go by uninterrupted, however - as towards the end of the session, one of the phones on her table suddenly rang. She paused, making sure that the current state would hold, before opening the phone. "I've made it very clear not to interrupt me at this time. How urgent is this?"

"Very urgent." Lavoie quickly switched her mental gears to English. "Something's up with Ashley. Said it's the biggest one she's ever seen, and it's on your list." Lavoie sat up straight. Ashley Williams had been a badly needed stroke of luck. Uncertain in the extreme, she'd asked to know what to wish for, and gained the ability to sense granted wishes at continental distances, along with the certainty that with a different wish, she could have saved her uncle and lived a safe, prosperous life. Fortuitously, she'd run into one of Lavoie's American allies shortly thereafter before she could self destruct, and she'd promised them a lifetime supply of personality alterations in exchange for keeping the girl alive and cleansed.

"Where? When? What was the wish?"

"Japan. Hard to be more specific, it was so powerful it smeared all over the map. She said she won't be able to give you exact numbers on new contractees in SE Asia for the month, it's still drowning them all out, even though it's at least ten days old."

Lavoie tapped her foot on the ground, more out of habit than any actual impatience. "The wish?"

"Get this. It's "------ ---- ---- ------! -------! --------------! ---------! ----------- -----!"

"... I don't speak Japanese, Roberts." Catherine had a bad habit of slipping into her wish given powers of "understanding people", which made her useful when somebody needed to play therapist or translator, but entirely obnoxious about sticking to the original language of a statement to "preserve nuance".

"Ah. You'll be missing context, but... She wished to control grief, all grief, explicitly including the grief of witches. And with that much potential..."

"We need her. Keep this quiet, I'll make preparations."

"Ahh, Inky says she's an unstable lunatic. Well, not in that many words, but... are you sure you want to strongarm somebody with that kind of power?"

"I will take the Incubators words under advisement, but no matter her powers, a well planned, patient approach once all pertinent information is acquired should meet with success. That is the the real lesson to be learned from the Incubator, in any case." Without ceremony, she flipped the phone shut, and walked over to the world map.

"To control grief... with that power, the system could finally be broken." She stared intently at Japan. "You're coming with me, willingly ... or not."
 
Nice. Interestingly, Roxanne would be more resistant to our powers than most. Not that we use them in a way that she'd be resistant to anyway.

Still, nice work.
 
Tentative plan.

[X] "Actually, Madoka, there are a couple of things..."
-[X] Avoid Homura's glare.
--[X] Explain to Madoka that, as magical girls, the group (Mami, Homura, and Sayaka) lead stressful lives and need to avoid darker emotions. Sure, things probably won't get bad really quickly, but it can happen, and it's a risk we don't want to expose our friends to.
---[X] Ask Madoka if she can keep an eye on the girls as a kind of "Mental Health Officer" to help keep their spirits up. It's not something a magical girl can safely do, because cheering people up can be draining by itself - you're sure she's felt as much, with as good at comforting people as she is. There's nobody better suited to the task - she can make Homura smile!
-[X] "Second, would your mom know how we could buy some property? I don't think any of us would even know where to start with that, but she might, and company coming would be a lot less complicated to deal with if they could stay in one place where they can all be cleansed in one go. Maybe someplace outside of town?"
--[X] To Homura: "I know, I know, but if we can keep them in one place it should be fairly painless to stay on top of any issues, and we could use the reinforcements against Walpurgisnacht."
---[X] "You know your mom best, Madoka, how do you think she'd take the whole magical girl thing?"
 
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Nice. Interestingly, Roxanne would be more resistant to our powers than most. Not that we use them in a way that she'd be resistant to anyway.

Still, nice work.

As I imagine her, Roxanne would be near-immune to any application of grief to her soul gem, and can control souls as a form of subtle and intense mind control at a fairly large distance. Her soul is unnaturally completely free of grief, and she simply cannot be coerced or intimidated.

With experience, she's also learned to sense souls in a wide range around her. Her preferred method of dealing with witches is to locate and snuff out their soul, instantly destroying them and causing the remaining grief to dissipate without forming a grief seed. She can do this to any being with a soul, including magical girls.

Of course...
I'm pretty sure that omake isn't going to be made canon.
 
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I'm pretty sure that omake isn't going to be made canon.

Well, yes. Fin plans things out too far ahead for us to be correct on such major details but it's a good bit of speculation (and who knows, maybe Firn will use some bits for stuff he hasn't decided yet)

Also, I like Imrix's modification to the plan. Seems safer.

EDIT: ^ Pretty scary.

It also makes me wonder if I should writeup some of the girls I've come up with who have some nasty powersets to deal with.

EDIT: Also, I forget. Can we speak French? I studied it for a term, but that was fifteen years ago and the first subject I ever failed as the grammar of Romance languages is difficult for me to grasp and I've forgotten most of it. Since becoming a teacher, I've reminded myself of a bit or my students, but that mostly consists of "Merci! Au revoir!"
 
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As I imagine her, Roxanne would be near-immune to any application of grief to her soul gem, and can control souls as a form of subtle and intense mind control at a fairly large distance. Her soul is unnaturally completely free of grief, and she simply cannot be coerced or intimidated.

With experience, she's also learned to sense souls in a wide range around her. Her preferred method of dealing with witches is to locate and snuff out their soul, instantly destroying them and causing the remaining grief to dissipate without forming a grief seed. She can do this to any being with a soul, including magical girls.

Of course...
But can she turn souls into cats?
 
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Yes. What I say is conjecture. What I don't get is how what I claim is conjecture, but what you claim isn't.

Well, I was admitting that I couldn't argue that particular point because it'd be conjecture for both of us.

Not having much emotional capacity is not the same as being completely emotionless.

It does in the bugs example. They're barely conscious at all.

We have lust because of genetic instinct. That's how the instinct operates. If the last step in the process doesn't work, then using the first step in the process as an explanation doesn't hold.

Instinct is why we have emotions. Instinct isn't an explanation unless you can come up with a way other than emotions for the instinct to operate. Actions happen because of three proximal causes:

1. Because we decide that it's a good idea

2. Because it's an emotional response

3. Because it's a reflex action as an automatic response to a stimulus that doesn't involve the brain at all.

Instinct is a less proximal cause, but for it to work it needs to be channeled through one of these three unless you can come up with a fourth proximal cause.

If we are emotionless, 2 isn't an option. I don't see how 1 would result in reproduction in a sexually reproducing species and sex is simply far too complicated an action for me to consider 3 a possibility.

All of this can be disregarded in a setting where souls exist, emotions are synonymous with magic, and humans are eldritch abominations waiting to be tapped by Incubators who dug too deep.

But he doesn't show that all the time, so there's no reason to believe that he finds wraiths any less surprising than Soul Gems.

Literally his entire Madokami-verse characterization is "Boy we don't understand why Soul Gems disappear, it'd be way more efficient if they didn't."

The difference is that I don't believe there is a negative energy radiation that can be fed on in the witchverse. I believe that they fed on humans directly and there is nothing in the atmosphere for them to feed on.

Sigh. It exists in Wraith-verse and we know grief exists in the atmosphere in Firn-verse.

Madokami said to Sayaka herself that she is fully capable of picking and choosing. She told Sayaka that she could have easily rewritten reality to save her life and decided not to.

She COULD have saved Sayaka by erasing the hope she created. The implication is that she's talking about making a different wish.

She also mind-whammies meguca (who still exist) right?

Yes, but Oriko Magica makes it clear that other Meguca are no problem for Kirika, and Sasa's mind control on non-witches is EXTREMELY shitty.

Also, I may be wrong (I really suck at working this stuff out) but your last few posts make you seem angry. I'm sorry if I have angered you.

I'm not angry, just sort of annoyed by pedantic nitpicking when the other person hasn't read the material I'm citing for my point.

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Having not read the Kazumi Manga - did they have grief seeds and barriers and whatnot from the beginning? Or did they have soul gems and witch out normally?

They have a Soul Gem that has points and shit like a Grief Seed, and once self-aware, Kazumi was capable of making barriers and shit, and her body started losing it's human facade.

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That seems to be quite strange in the limits. She can fuck with the Incubators' grief seed system and bring back the dead, but she can't heal violin dude's hand while keeping Sayaka alive/non-contracted (a much simpler task imo)? Doesn't mesh to me.

Makes sense. She changed one thing about causality but otherwise has no influence. As for bringing back the dead, technically she didn't do that; they were ghosts inside of a dream, cut off from the rest of the universe's cycle of karma.

It's also implied by Rebellion and Mami's EP12 comments that Madoka is entering Soul Gems and defeating unborn witches just like we saw.

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POST-UPDATE THINGS

Dammit Madoka, shut the fuck up and volunteer at a soup kitchen holy shit.

No wait, make her look into muggle shit like finding affordable or abandoned housings and shit. Tell her we'll pay for it, but she can help make arrangements.

I'm also in favor of telling Madoka what the fuuuuck is up, sans certain meta-bombs.

@Roxanne: We need to befriend this bitch pronto.


[x] "Actually, Madoka, there are a couple of things..."
-[x] Avoid Homura's glare.
--[x] Explain to Madoka that, as magical girls, the group (Mami, Homura, and Sayaka) need to avoid darker emotions, to avoid accumulating excess grief whenever you're not around. Sure, things probably won't get bad really quickly, but it can happen, and it's a risk we don't want to expose our friends to.
---[x] Ask Madoka if she can keep an eye on the girls as a kind of "Mental Health Officer" to help keep their spirits up. It's not something a magical girl can safely do, because cheering people up can be draining by itself - you're sure she's felt as much, with as good at comforting people as she is. There's nobody better suited to the task - she can make Homura smile!
----[x] Homura, shush, you saw it, it's no use denying it!
-[x] "Second, would your mom know how we could buy some property? I don't think any of us would even know where to start with that, but she might, and if we're going to be getting immigrants it would be a lot easier if they could stay in one place where they can all be cleansed in one go."
--[x] "You know your mom best Madoka, how do you think she'd take the whole magical girl thing?"
 
[x] "Actually, Madoka, there are a couple of things..."
-[x] Avoid Homura's glare.
--[x] Explain to Madoka that, as magical girls, the group (Mami, Homura, and Sayaka) need to avoid darker emotions, to avoid accumulating excess grief whenever you're not around. Sure, things probably won't get bad really quickly, but it can happen, and it's a risk we don't want to expose our friends to.
---[x] Ask Madoka if she can keep an eye on the girls as a kind of "Mental Health Officer" to help keep their spirits up. It's not something a magical girl can safely do, because cheering people up can be draining by itself - you're sure she's felt as much, with as good at comforting people as she is. There's nobody better suited to the task - she can make Homura smile!
----[x] Homura, shush, you saw it, it's no use denying it!
-[x] "Second, would your mom know how we could buy some property? I don't think any of us would even know where to start with that, but she might, and if we're going to be getting immigrants it would be a lot easier if they could stay in one place where they can all be cleansed in one go."
--[x] "You know your mom best Madoka, how do you think she'd take the whole magical girl thing?"
 
Also, I'm serious about clueing Madoka in. I think we should at least talk to Homura about it, maybe add a step to this plan that's just telepathy to her, "Need to talk later, got an idea that might help keep Madoka from contracting."

Ultimately, Madoka can be told that contracting is a bad idea and asked not to any amount of times, she's still going to feel the same pull Sayaka does. She wants to help, she has no self esteem in her own worth, and there's a contract sitting right in front of her, a big shiny sign blaring "Here Is The Power To Help." She needs to learn why it's a poisoned chalice, and a reminder that the girl whose choices were literally "Contract or Die" still considers it a raw deal is a good foundation to start the lesson from.
 
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Well, I was admitting that I couldn't argue that particular point because it'd be conjecture for both of us.

Ah. Then I misunderstood. Apologies.

It does in the bugs example. They're barely conscious at all.
I'd disagree with that, but I have a rather weird form of sentimentality that makes arguing over stuff like this relatively pointless.

All of this can be disregarded in a setting where souls exist, emotions are synonymous with magic, and humans are eldritch abominations waiting to be tapped by Incubators who dug too deep.

Souls already exist. The fact that nowadays, it's more popular to call them "personalities" doesn't change that.

Emotions aren't synonymous with magic. If they were, meguca wouldn't be the exclusive magic users. They're required for magic, but they're no more synonymous than oxygen is synonymous with fire.

Humans only turn into eldritch abominations because the Incubators made it that way.

And yes, none of this alters the statements I gave. One change in reality doesn't mean you can ignore the rest. It certainly doesn't mean you can throw away internal logic.


Literally his entire Madokami-verse characterization is "Boy we don't understand why Soul Gems disappear, it'd be way more efficient if they didn't."

Only in response to Homura's story. (Unless this comes up more in Wraith Arc? I enjoyed the first chapter a lot, so I'm going to try looking for it after this)


Sigh. It exists in Wraith-verse and we know grief exists in the atmosphere in Firn-verse.

Only because we put it there. (Or Madokami did, in the first case)


She COULD have saved Sayaka by erasing the hope she created. The implication is that she's talking about making a different wish.

Well, yes. I know. My point is that Madoka has more than one option.


Yes, but Oriko Magica makes it clear that other Meguca are no problem for Kirika, and Sasa's mind control on non-witches is EXTREMELY shitty.

That's not my point. My point is that the character would still exist.


I'm not angry, just sort of annoyed by pedantic nitpicking when the other person hasn't read the material I'm citing for my point.

Apologies. I'm sorry for annoying you. I realise that I can be incredibly pedantic. Part of the reason is that I believe that a small difference in details can make a big difference. Also, I do want to read the material. (And this has encouraged me to try find it right now)

POST-UPDATE THINGS

Dammit Madoka, shut the fuck up and volunteer at a soup kitchen holy shit.

No wait, make her look into muggle shit like finding affordable or abandoned housings and shit. Tell her we'll pay for it, but she can help make arrangements.

I'm also in favor of telling Madoka what the fuuuuck is up, sans certain meta-bombs.

@Roxanne: We need to befriend this bitch pronto.

Agreed. I'm going to agree with the vote too.


[x] "Actually, Madoka, there are a couple of things..."
-[x] Avoid Homura's glare.
--[x] Explain to Madoka that, as magical girls, the group (Mami, Homura, and Sayaka) need to avoid darker emotions, to avoid accumulating excess grief whenever you're not around. Sure, things probably won't get bad really quickly, but it can happen, and it's a risk we don't want to expose our friends to.
---[x] Ask Madoka if she can keep an eye on the girls as a kind of "Mental Health Officer" to help keep their spirits up. It's not something a magical girl can safely do, because cheering people up can be draining by itself - you're sure she's felt as much, with as good at comforting people as she is. There's nobody better suited to the task - she can make Homura smile!
----[x] Homura, shush, you saw it, it's no use denying it!
-[x] "Second, would your mom know how we could buy some property? I don't think any of us would even know where to start with that, but she might, and if we're going to be getting immigrants it would be a lot easier if they could stay in one place where they can all be cleansed in one go."
--[x] "You know your mom best, Madoka, how do you think she'd take the whole magical girl thing?"

EDIT: Added a necessary comma out of habit from correcting over 400 students' punctuation over the past couple of weeks.

Also, I still say that we should tell Madoka that if she contracts, she'll destroy the world.
 
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If we want to keep Madoka from contracting, why don't we just tell her that her wish will destroy the world? It's not exactly untrue, and she already knows enough not to let Kyuubey convince her otherwise if we say so, though we should follow up with something like, "Don't try to use your wish to prevent that either. It would probably only make things worse in the long-run." If she asks how we know all of this we can just say something about it being connected to our powers (which is kinda the truth since Sabrina's subconscious meta-knowledge can be considered one of her 'powers').

Of course, now is not the time to try and permanently dissuade Madoka from contracting. She hasn't even said anything about becoming a Magical Girl. This was only in response to some discussion I saw about what we would do in that scenario. All we should be doing right now is making sure she feels like she's contributing something of value to the group. That should be enough to keep her from pulling a Sayaka for now. The big talk can come another time, preferably after we've diffused the dangers surrounding it (i.e. Homura blowing our brains out for revealing stuff to her waifu, Mami and Sayaka asking questions we aren't prepared to give answers to).
 
I suspect this would only result in her looking up wish-based legalese on the internet. There are websites for it.
That's what this was for:
"Don't try to use your wish to prevent that either. It would probably only make things worse in the long-run."
It shouldn't be that hard to convince her that attempting to game the system isn't worth it in real life, no matter how airtight people on the internet think your wish is.
 
Hah! Yeah. I'd suggested that before, Sasha. And I editted it in just above you.

I must admit though, I'd rather have Madoka looking up wish-based legalese than making an uninformed wish.

(Also, I would word it as her "enormous power would destroy the world") which may make her spend even longer before taking the plunge.
 
Are you talking about Sabrina herself or Mami here?

..........oh look someone else the two have in common!
... This is actually a really, really good point. Like, Sabrina can talk about the obvious downsides of being a magical girl, but Mami is a melancholic veteran who now has a vested interest in not seeing other girls Contract. I can think of nobody better suited to sit Madoka down and talk to her about how the daily life of a magical girl is not nearly so glamorous as Madoka is probably imagining.

By way of analogy, Madoka is considering signing up for the army because the recruiter has a solid pitch and the adverts make it look so cool. Mami is the grizzled veteran who can clue her in about things the recruiter would prefer you didn't know about. Things like IED's, shell shock, what it's like to see your buddies brains leaking out of their broken skull, and how much of your time you spend bored stiff in between brief bouts of bowel-loosening terror.
How the heck would we officially buy property?

Don't you guys think this is jumping the gun? Just a little bit?
Off the top of my head? Homura probably knows how to launder money. Rob the Yakuza some more, pass the funds to Junko and have her hold the property for us.

If she needs convincing we can, I dunno, pay her in timestop hours so she can do all her paperwork and take a nap in a subjective second to have more free time with her family or something.
 
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