Well...

At least Homura trusts us still. Yay!

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Edit: On another note, no hidden text that I could see in my paranoid like look at in bbcode mode. I didn't go too deep at this time.
 
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[x]Then I'm asking you to trust me to be able to handle them. Please, Homura. You don't need to trust them. I understand why you don't, but her powers've been useful before. We can't just let her die if we can stop it.
-[x]I'm not just letting them loose, but I can't leave Oriko right now with her soul like this. It could kill her. One way or another, I need to fix this. The only real way I see to do that right now is for Oriko to come with me.
[x]I can encase their gems in reshaped grief. If anything happens to me and I lose control, they'd die. They couldn't even go outside of my grief range like that.
-[x]I can try and shut down their magic usage too. Would that be enough?
[x]If it isn't good enough for Homura, let Oriko and Kirika know. Suggest that you might need to take Oriko's gem with you, just for today.
 
I had to google what that is! *Sniffles*

Don't worry, I fully intended the person that was doing the snuggling in my post to be @Koko anyways, as the picture showed. So cute together when they aren't being tsundere at each other in 'discussions'.

I was saving this for the next 'discussion', but I can't wait!
There are not enough newspapers in the world. :(

Man. Rebellion was amazing for Sayaka. Freaking amazing.

 
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[x]Then I'm asking you to trust me to be able to handle them. Please, Homura. You don't need to trust them. I understand why you don't, but her powers've been useful before. We can't just let her die if we can stop it.
-[x]I'm not just letting them loose, but I can't leave Oriko right now with her soul like this. It could kill her. One way or another, I need to fix this. The only real way I see to do that right now is for Oriko to come with me.
[x]I can encase their gems in reshaped grief. If anything happens to me and I lose control, they'd die. They couldn't even go outside of my grief range like that.
-[x]I can try and shut down their magic usage too.
[x]If it isn't enough for Homura, let Oriko and Kirika know. Suggest that you might need to take Oriko's gem with you, just for today.
I'd like to add a little something at the start.

It's somewhat exaggerated, but you get the idea?

[] Of course you don't. You know, every time I visit here and don't trip a wire on the door, every hour that passes without me getting a knife in the back, every sip of tea that doesn't end with me poisoned... I'm happy. Happy that none of that happened, because they're always at the back of my mind, the doubts, the fear I might've been played for a fool, it's all there.
-[] But I still come here, I chat, I drink tea, I try to be a friend, because I think that's what is needed for everything to go right.
-[] Right now I think the best thing I could do, the one thing I need to try, is taking this stupid girl out for a walk. Just Oriko, really; Kirika can wait here.
-[] So I'm not asking you to trust them. But can you trust me to handle her?

Homura doesn't trust Oriko, we don't trust Oriko either, not all that much, anyway.

I don't think we ever put our paranoia feelings into words for Homura; if we're gonna ask her to trust us, we should share that much, how we really are actually somewhat scared that what Homura thinks will happen, actually'll happen.
 
Hmmm, we trust Oriko more than that and that seems a bit too...cynical and encouraging of Homura shadowruns. Acknowledging that we aren't blindly trusting Oriko again might be a good idea, but that draft goes too far for my taste.

Also, she'll take that as us wanting Oriko to be our friend blinding us to the danger.
 
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Can we summon a witchy-stuff lie detector? That seems like the sort of "small-tier" device that people underestimate the usefulness of. Then we could authoritively confirm that this is not a Dastardly Plan of Oriko's.
 
Okay so here's the highlight reel of everything wrong with your last post, Sereg.
1. Yeah, no, I'm pretty sure we can assume they have range limitations.

I don't. I've been wondering if Sakura's our opportunity for interplanetary travel.

2. Us needing to break the system doesn't mean Firn will hand the answers to our every problem to us on a silver platter the way you seem to expect him to.

I expect us to have the tools to actually break the system. Nothing we have so far can do that, so that means we haven't found all our tools yet.

3. No, a goal of "Save the universe" is silly as a bare minimum acceptable success. Save the planet however is not.

Then we've done infinitely worse than canon. We certainly haven't broken the system at all. Sorry, but that's not what we were promised.


We can't replicate Madokami's wish and nor should we given the ending of Rebellion. I'd say a planetary success is better than that kind of universal change.

Disagreed. (Again, Rebellion is impossible if it's not part of Madoka's plan)

The thing is the Child of Omelas bullshit is tied into it being Madoka which is because her potential at that point was far, far beyond ours. We might barely be in the same weight glass in terms of our witch but that shit's exponential.

It's also far beyond Homura's. Homura managed. We can too.

Go home. Win. Properly. Work from there. One step at a time.


The thing is as when talking bare minimum success, it's more like "global meguca community and happy Mumi" and less "UNIVERSE OR BUST".


Madoka wishing is not a safe approach to try, and I'm pretty sure that'd fall under "that's not how wishes work, you need to feel them"

Taking a pawn isn't a win. At all. Especially when your opponent has a guaranteed checkmate. Again, we've been going for better than canon. You apparently don't realise what a tall order that is. Canon Madoka broke the system in every Universe that ever existed, ever will exist and ever won't exist retroactively. We've been told we can do better.

We're not going to aim for that, but it's the minimum we can accept as not a BAD END.

It's an utterly horrible end. Again, that's not breaking the system.

It's been said already, but we need to start small and work up. Your goal vastly exceeds our current or future capabilities.

It doesn't exceed out future capabilities. If it did, the title would be different. And if it did, we'd be morally in the wrong to stop madoka from wishing.

I don't think anybody wants to _settle_ for saving Earth. Merely that for now, planning beyond that point is putting the cart before the horse.

Let's clean up our backyard first.

(Oh and maybe get Madoka to read some Asimov. Just as insurance.)

(Unrelated: magical time travel exists. That means we may eventually be able to emulate it. So, I wonder if we can figure out how to travel into the future and kill/control our own witch. [edit] Hm. After we figure out how to fix soul gems, anyways. Can't let Madoka be the only one with a witch-based paradox...)

I agree with you, but to e, it sounds like people are settling for Earth. If we don't even want to try get the ability to move on from that, we're doing so. If we have the ability to save the Universe, saving Earth should be easy, so let's find those abilities so we can save Earth and actually start our real mission. Remember that Madoka wanted us to fix everything. Madoka who explicitly included other Universes in her canon wish. She'd be incredibly disappointed with us.

Eh. I mean, saving the universe? That's a tall order, and would most likely require a wish. I'll settle for Sabrina's friends in a pinch, Mitakihara as a consolation, Earth as a stretch goal, meself.

Again. Madoka asked to fix everything and we've been promised to break the system. We've been told we can do it and if we can't we are morally obligated to get Madoka to wish.

2. The story quote suggests that Mami's surprised that we consider our range to be "only" 100 meters. We've never seen Mami outside of 100 meters,

Yes, we have. Rebellion.

and Ramiel and Kimiko seem like outliers. I seriously doubt every meguca but Sabrina has the magical equivalent of sniper rifles or that we're somehow crippled in that sense.

Akiko, Sakura, Moe ... there were several girls who showed evidence of greater range. And you're ignoring the most important piece of evidence. Mami had previously seen us move grief to 100 meters away, meaning that our ability to affect things 100 meters away is not the surprising thing.

We've seen that griefhax is basically reality warping. That doesn't mean we actually get knowledge so much as tell reality to temporarily do what we want, the same way it would in a barrier. It's not a useful way to try and win at everything/break the quest.

No. It's not breaking the quest. It's starting the quest. We have achieved basically nothing so far. When we were told we could utterly destroy the system more completely than Madokami. Anyone who thinks we can't do that is underestimating our abilities. The only reason we're currently being challenged is because we refuse to make use of our tools to begin the real challenge.

EDIT: Is staring the vote with:

[ ] Do you really have so little faith in my abilities

too heavy?
 
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Hmmm, we trust Oriko more than that and that seems a bit too...cynical and encouraging of Homura shadowruns. Acknowledging that we aren't blindly trusting Oriko again might be a good idea, but that draft goes too far for my taste.

Also, she'll take that as us wanting Oriko to be our friend blinding us to the danger.
It does need to be trimmed a lot. If I can:

[] First of all, thank you. That means a lot to me.
[] Second... Of course you don't. How can I expect you to, when I double guess myself every time I step in here?
-[] I'm just trying to do the best I can, trying to make thing right. And right now, I need to see if taking this idiot out for a walk will help stop her Soul from eating itself. Just Oriko, Kirika can wait.
-[] So, Homura, I'm not asking you to trust them. But can you trust me to handle her?
 
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It does need to be trimmed a lot. If I can:

[] First of all, thank you. That means a lot to me.
[] Second... Of course you don't. How can I expect you to, when I double guess myself every time I step in here?
-[] I'm just trying to do the best I can, trying to make thing right. And right now, I need to see if taking this idiot out for a walk will help stop her Soul from eating itself. Just Oriko, Kirika can wait.
-[] So, Homura, I'm not asking you to trust them. But can you trust me to handle her?
Maybe...
[]...Thank you for that, Homura.
[]I can't trust her. I know that. But I'm asking you to trust me to be able to handle them. Please, Homura. Her powers've been useful before. We can't just let her die if we can stop it.

Maybe? Gah, probably going to edit it again later I guess or use an alternative wording.
 
Personally, I'm more thinking of swinging by their warehouse bolthole and grabbing that bedroll of theirs, then set them up in a portable cell or something while they're near anything Homura gets especially defensive about. Can't get into any mischief if they're catching up on lost sleep.
 
Personally, I'm more thinking of swinging by their warehouse bolthole and grabbing that bedroll of theirs, then set them up in a portable cell or something while they're near anything Homura gets especially defensive about. Can't get into any mischief if they're catching up on lost sleep.
The problem being that is still them not being in a fixed location...and Homura'd see that as bringing them anyway.
 
Taking a pawn isn't a win. At all. Especially when your opponent has a guaranteed checkmate. Again, we've been going for better than canon. You apparently don't realise what a tall order that is. Canon Madoka broke the system in every Universe that ever existed, ever will exist and ever won't exist retroactively. We've been told we can do better.
Canon Madoka conceded the real. She was something very much like dead and forgotten, as was everyone she might have helped.
Disagreed. (Again, Rebellion is impossible if it's not part of Madoka's plan)
Inadequate evidence for this assertion.
Again. Madoka asked to fix everything and we've been promised to break the system.
Overextrapolation from weak input.
We've been told we can do it and if we can't we are morally obligated to get Madoka to wish.
You consider yourself morally obligated.
I think that making any notable short-term sacrifices in pursuit of goals which may not be even theoretically within the bounds of any arbitrarily distant development of our powers is dumb.
I think that there's a world that needs us right here, that we actually have lots of reasons to give a shit about in particular, and most of the tools to win it. Or, at the very least, most of the tools to make the tools to win it.
I think that compromising this, in any way, to go after overwhelmingly less actionable, less plausible objectives would be foolish.
I think that an alternative with a long and storied history of murdering the entire planet isn't much of an alternative.
 
Whichever vote we go with should make it clear that we're not looking to ignore Homura, we're just trying to explain our reasoning. Remember how we apologized to Homura for continually steamrollering her, and said we weren't going to do it again? Let's make it clear that that's not what we're trying to do.
 
I'm doubting whether that's accurate.

So am I. Madokami did something so amazing, I find myself wondering what we could possibly do better, but we'v been promised we can, so I want to find out.


Canon Madoka conceded the real. She was something very much like dead and forgotten, as was everyone she might have helped.

Madokami was immortal and omnipresent, extremely happy that that she was with everyone all the time and every magical girl who died joined her in happiness and paradise. Madokami didn't consider there to be any sacrifice there. As for dead, Madokami explicitly told Sayaka that it was within her power to rewrite reality to save Sayaka by making sure that she never contracted but decided not to. Madokami's world is exactly the way she wants it and all of your "improvements" would be considered "worsenings" by her.

Inadequate evidence for this assertion.

Madokami canonically knows everything that will ever possibly happen, can control what will happen, can destroy the idea of witches from brains and can retroactively rewrite reality. She knew Rebellion would happen, could stop it retroactively and decided not to.

I think that making any notable short-term sacrifices in pursuit of goals which may not be even theoretically within the bounds of any arbitrarily distant development of our powers is dumb.
I think that there's a world that needs us right here, that we actually have lots of reasons to give a shit about in particular, and most of the tools to win it. Or, at the very least, most of the tools to make the tools to win it.
I think that compromising this, in any way, to go after overwhelmingly less actionable, less plausible objectives would be foolish.
I think that an alternative with a long and storied history of murdering the entire planet isn't much of an alternative.

We've seen Madokami's power. It isn't theoretical. It's actively demonstrated.
 
How meta can we get here?

It seems plausible to me that Madokami was intended to be omniscient and omnipotent, but when it came time for Rebellion Gen noticed that while this made for a great ending, it in fact made for a terrible sequel. In cases of self-contradiction, do we go by "TV series canon" or "last-seen canon"? Either way, I think there's enough uncertainty here that we can't say for certain if Madokami actually was/is/would have been all-knowing/all-powerful in the setting that this fic is in.
 
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