Onmur
Archangel of Nutella.
I think this one was in the vote, too.
I'm thinking of alternative phrasings, brevity, and maybe mentioning a couple of things she should know.
[] That depends on you. Your body runs on magic now; more than food, water and rest, everything you do, even breathing, talking and walking, consumes magic. I'm certain that, besides me, the only source of magic for Magical Girls in this World, is Grief Seeds. (That's how Kyubey designed things)
-[] If you want to live on Grief Seeds, you'll need to get your own. Unless you've got a marketable skill, like 'healing any and every injury in minutes', that Magical Girls would pay their life and blood for, that means fighting Witches, which while usually might seem dumb, they also tend to have a lot more raw strenght and magical power than a Magical Girl, nevermind being able to control the enviroment they live in.
-[] *Sigh* I didn't wish to be liked. I wished partly so there could be an alternative to this. The Magical World is a cut-throat place where you can easily get killed or kicked out of your home city because there's not enough Witches and Grief Seeds to go around. The reason everybody in Sendai 'toed the line' was not because we won a fight, it was because I have an alternative, one where everybody can live together in peace. If you don't want to fight, that's fine with me. I wished so you would have that option.
[] So you have choices, but will always require a source of magic from now on, and for the rest of your life:
-[] Learn to fight to the point where you can risk your life every day and come out on top. We can help you with that, or we can see if we can find somebody else to help you: There's another couple of Magical Girls in this city. Either way, you shouldn't fight alone. That's suicide.
-[] If you've got a super special magical skill we don't know about, you could try selling that. Healers capable of restoring Magical Girls from a head and a few limbs without most of their organs, can get three or five Seeds for their trouble.
-[] Or you can use the fact that I wished so you don't need to do any of that, and can live your life mostly normally. I'd need to see you every day, and for you to nor give any Seeds to Kyubey. And yes, sometimes that means meeting at any hour of the night or day, because yes, I do tend to deal in life and death situations very often.
Well, I fail at brevity. But there's some things we can bring up?
Can we start laying the blame where it belongs?
I think we should mention there's MG who have another option.
Address this. Witches aren't just dumb monsters.
I frankly think Ono would be terrified at this.
A couple of updates ago, we were considering mentioning how we don't fight alone, but in a group, despite each MG on our side being fully capable of taking on Witches on their lonesome.
