Remove ads

Puella Magi Adfligo Systema

Reader mode
Onmur said:
[] (If Ono interrupts, let her rant and yell all she wants; continue after she's done) To Ono: You're using as much magic in one day as half a Magical Girl team in one week.
[] You know the Corruption build up messes with your mind, causes negative feelings; sadness, anger, depression.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
Between these two lines, perhaps something connecting seed Gem corruption to magic usage, just in case?
Onmur said:
[] Call me crazy, but I wished so that wouldn't happen. I'm not letting you kill yourself.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
Oddly worded... Perhaps "The whole point of my wish was to prevent magical girls from dying" or something? Emphasizing preventing people's soul gems from being corrupted isn't really what our wish was about, and everybody ( :V) doesn't wish for what they actually want, they wish for the tools for the job without stopping to think if they're the right ones.

[X] Onmur

Assuming that this bandwagon is going with the one I linked too, that is...
 
Last edited:
I would probably reword or strip that last line completely but yeah, I think it maybe better to resort to points, not phrasing this time.
 
Clearly the solution is to kneecap her and then threaten to nuke Tokyo. Failing that we should turn her soul gem into a cat. And I can't think of a third disastrously bad SV PMMM quest decision at the moment.
 
chocolote12 said:
Assuming that this bandwagon is going with the one I linked too, that is...
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
Muramasa said:
, I think it maybe better to resort to points, not phrasing this time.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
Ah... You're tearing me apart!

I'd like if somebody else would take te vote, since I'm about to go to sleep. I always miss the last hours of discussion/vote improvement.

Lordsservent said:
Become Rochelle?
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
Are you implying being Rochelle is a bad desicion?

.

Wait, @chocolote12, but there's no 'X's in those vote blocks.

I guess I'll try to reword (unword?) things so Firn can decide the exact wording.
 
Last edited:
Onmur said:
Ah... You're tearing me apart!

I'd like if somebody else would take te vote, since I'm about to go to sleep. I always miss the last hours of discussion/vote improvement.


Are you implying being Rochelle is a bad desicion?

.

Wait, @chocolote12, but there's no 'X's in those vote blocks.

I guess I'll try to reword (unword?) things so Firn can decide the exact wording.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
No, but she made so many of them, especially in a game run by a killer QM.(@Chibireaper)
 
[] Smile, thank Mami. If there's any possibility you can communicate her to let you handle things for a few minutes, without telepathy, now's the time. Otherwise, if Mami tries to intervene before Ono gets out of control, gently stop her.
[] Keep an eye on Ono's Gem.
[] If at any time Ono starts yelling or ranting, let her be, then continue:
-[] Tone: Confrontational. Prod,try to rile up Ono to get her to vent her anger on us. Possible points to bring up, unless given better targets:
-[] She's not scaring us away. (As Magical Girls), we fight far worse every day; today was particulary terrifying.
-[] We'd leave her alone any other time, that would be right, but she's practically commiting suicide. We can't let that happen.
-[] We simply want her to live; she doesn't need to help us if she doesn't want. Just stay alive and uncorrupted.

Vote being edited into this, unless there's objections.

Please, if there's objections, I want them. I feel kind of nervous when a vote I make without other people's input goes through. Mostly because I'm not good at this desicion-making thing outside my comfort zone.
 
Last edited:
One thing that does concern me is that if we're going for patience, well Mami isn't exactly a mindreader, so she may end up arguing with Megane in our stead thinking it's what we want.
 
Muramasa said:
One thing that does concern me is that if we're going for patience, well Mami isn't exactly a mindreader, so she may end up arguing with Megane in our stead thinking it's what we want.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
Sabrina and Mami have managed some outstanding non verbal communication at times. Would it be possible to get this idea across without telepathy?

Wow, timestop being a hindrance for once.

Ono: "Why... Did you just blatantly wink at her?"

Sabrina: *Sigh* "Subtle as a warhammer, I guess..."

Mami: *Heart beat accelerates* 'What did that mean?'
 
Last edited:
Onmur said:
Sabrina and Mami have managed some outstanding non verbal communication at times. Would it be possible to get this idea across without telepathy?

Wow, timestop being a hindrance for once.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...

If Mami speaks up, put a hand on her shoulder and shake our head I guess. That's what we did with Homu at one point.
 
Agent Whiskers said:
... I really hope you guys know what you're doing. Purposefully enraging her can be a very big mistake if you don't handle it correctly.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
Yes. I think right now is the safest time for it, though. That and, Ono's composture is what always prevents us from knowing what she thinks, so...

Also, really think Ono needs to say some things, composture/social rules be damned.
 
Last edited:
[] Smile, thank Mami. If there's any possibility you can communicate her to let you handle things for a few minutes, without telepathy, now's the time. Otherwise, if Mami tries to intervene before Ono gets out of control, gently stop her.

Wordy as hell...
 
Yeah, I'm not liking that vote at all. The approach feels really wrong. And the last parts are the same old thing we've already been saying to her. I'll probably try and think of some alternate vote when I get back.
 
I don't have any better ideas. I see some problems with Ono possibly bringing up something we need to vote for in order to answer, since that would kind of destroy the point of 'let her rant, then continue', as would ignoring whatever she says and ranting back at her.

I kind of meant all of this:
-[] She's not scaring us away. (As Magical Girls), we fight far worse every day; today was particulary terrifying.
-[] We'd leave her alone any other time, that would be right, but she's practically commiting suicide. We can't let that happen.
-[] We simply want her to live; she doesn't need to help us if she doesn't want. Just stay alive and uncorrupted.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
to be possible things to bring up in order to keep Ono angry enough to keep yelling. Not really things we need to touch upon; it'd be better if Ono gives us better topics herself.

Also hope she doesn't bring up Kyubey, thought Kyubey might be impossible to not bring up at some point.
 
Sereg said:
[X] Smile at Mami, and nod in appreciation.
[X] If interrupted, allow her to finish, then continue.
[X] Ono, you have every right to to hate me and want me gone. But I cannot leave you alone when it'll kill you.
[X] It's time for you to learn how fragile we are.
[X] Give Mami your gem and ask her to leave with it and to allow Ono a chance to check my body. Then to return.
-[x] "I'll be fine as long as my Soul Gem is with you."
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
I like this approach, but we should first remove the grief ring from Ono (and the one from our own finger, for that matter), because the grief will likely dissipate into a cloud of caustic gas as soon as our control is removed. Something like this, perhaps:

[X] Smile at Mami, and nod in appreciation.
[X] If interrupted, allow her to finish, then continue.
[X] Ono, you have every right to to hate me and want me gone. But I cannot leave you alone when it'll kill you.
[X] It's time for you to learn how fragile we are.
[X] Remove the grief ring and the one from Ono, put them with the rest of the grief outside the building
[X] Give Mami your gem and ask her to leave with it and to allow Ono a chance to check my body. Then to return.
-[X] "I'll be fine as long as my Soul Gem is with you."

I'm not worried about the loose grief because it will probably just get frozen in timestop.
 
Last edited:
Here's the thing, though. Getting her to open up more about her issues and anger with us is a decent thing to try, I think. But randomly trying to stab the rage/anger button feels like a mistake. Remember the end goal is that we want her to actually listen to us.
 
Social is so exhausting, especially when you are not good at it, like I am.( Social is not too bad for me, but not something I am very good at)
 
Agent Whiskers said:
Here's the thing, though. Getting her to open up more about her issues and anger with us is a decent thing to try, I think. But randomly trying to stab the rage/anger button feels like a mistake. Remember the end goal is that we want her to actually listen to us.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
SynchronizedWritersBlock said:
I agree. We can talk about this with her without actively trying to rile her up.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
Did we get anything out of her outside the 'gaijin and her cronies' comment she made whiel angry? I want to know more, and trying to only help has resulted in her walling us off.

I want more clues as to how to do anything. It might a step back, but hopefull two steps... sideways and forward.

I intend for her to actually listen to anything we have to say, after she done being angry. I don't have a clue as to how we can get her to not be angry enough that she'll listen to us, other than having her ride out that anger until is dries up.

I hope you can come up with something better. I kind of don't want to, but I need to sleep. Good luck.
 
Reader mode
You must login or register to reply here.
Remove ads
Back
Top